Wings of Spirit-Spirit "Star" Hayabusa - Anchor - Apr. 24, 2012
Main Character: Spirit "Star" Hayabusa
Theme Song: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0A74FXTFLUQ
Spirit "Star Hayabusa: He's a 12-13 year old boy with dark brown long-ish hair ,and tan skin. He is about 5 feet tall and wears Black Skinny jeans with his blader gear on a belt. He wears shoes that are black with a bit of white and red on them. He wears a shirt like this,but open and with a white undershirt;He wears a red tie with it too. He is calm and laid-back but has a short temper. He loves beyblade and will battle anyone,weak or strong,and hes always commited to being the best.
This is a Beyblade story about Spirit "Star" Hayabusa.
Chapter 1 pirit,The Blader of the Falcons!:
Guy 1: "You think he's dead?"
Guy 2: "Who cares, he's just another kid getting eaten up by the desert,just leave em' to rot."
Spirit got up. "What happened?" "Where am I?" "I'm starving,I need some chow." He dropped to the ground again,yet again,he was unconscious.Shovels hitting the ground hard,those were the sounds Spirit woke up to again. He was still in the desert when he saw two guys digging holes,one of the holes looking like a beystadium. He searched his pocket to find his beyblade,Flash Horuseus CH120R2F,He placed it on his launcher and shouted "Let It Rip!!!!"Horuseus flew out
of the launcher and hit the beystadium with a bang and surprised the two diggers. "What the hell was that?!?" said Guy 2 as Horuseus was circling the stadium.
"You have any food?" asked Spirit curiously.
"Yeah,we do,but we are not giving it to you." Guy 1 said.
"Well,I have money,$50,is it a deal?" Spirit asked with a smirk on his face.
"Yeah,its a deal!" Guy 2 said.
As Guy 2 was about to hand over the bag of food to Spirit,Spirit muttered"Horuseus",BOOM! An explosion had occurred,Spirit walking out of the smoke holding the bag of food and $50 in his hands.
"Nice one,Horuseus" Spirit Said as he picked up Horuseus and bit into an apple.
Spirit eventually found his way out of the desert and found himself in a city that was beautiful. "Shinobi City,It's beautiful!" He said in awe as he walking into the glorious city. There were bladers all over battling on the streets and eventually he found a place fit for his skill level,"THE WBBA SHINOBI CITY BEY-DOME" he read out loud,the sign itself was amazing looking,he wondered what the inside would look like,so he entered. Beyblades clashing,Screaming and shouting,sparks flying, explosions caused by beys,Spirit knew this place was a good Bey-dome. "I wonder if these bladers are any good,back home all the bladers are strong,these guys don't seem too bad" Spirit thought to himself. And then he saw it,he saw it,a blader beating 8 other bladers at once,defeating everyone with one hit,he knew this blader was talented,and he knew he could beat him. "Ready for this Horuseus?" He muttered. He approached the blader.
RE: Wings of Spirit-Spirit "Star" Hayabusa - Duck - Apr. 24, 2012
Oh my! This story has GREAT potential! It has a few grammatical mistakes, but still, this is one of the best Beyblade stories I've read! Please keep writing! I can't wait to read more!
RE: Wings of Spirit-Spirit "Star" Hayabusa - Anchor - Apr. 24, 2012
(Apr. 24, 2012 5:03 AM)Fakirs Duck Wrote: Oh my! This story has GREAT potential! It has a few grammatical mistakes, but still, this is one of the best Beyblade stories I've read! Please keep writing! I can't wait to read more!
Thanks,you want a character? I'll give you the chance to make one if you'd like.
RE: Wings of Spirit-Spirit "Star" Hayabusa - Anchor - Apr. 26, 2012
Updated the OP!
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