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BeyBlade Story: The Big Bang Skies - Ifraid*Guardian - Nov. 26, 2011
Loganight walked down the street towards the local tavern.
There, He sat down with a gin and tonic, and watched the beyblade match on T.V.
It was some hot-shot with orange hair and a bandaged nose, against a group of young teenagers.
"Huh, he's pretty good...." Loganight said to himself,
" I think I found my challenge."
The next day at the tournament, Loganight signed in with his beys. He sat in the waiting room with his newest bey, the mysterious Gravity Destroyer.
" Time to put YOU to the test as well....."
Round 1 passed quickly with a tall dark skinned boy as the winner.
Round 2 was taken by a short blonde girl.
And finally round 3 was won by the boy with the bandaged nose.
Loganight swept through the 4th round with sucess, and moved on to the semi-finals.
Loganight's first opponet was the girl and her Grand Orso.
Loganight chose his signature and first bey, Thermal Virgo.
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LET IT RIPP!
Virgo snuck under Orso's tall spin track for an upper-kick, but Orso snapped its claws on Virgo's shoulders before she could deliver her attack. Orso effortlessly flung Virgo out of the stadium.
But Virgo just came down faster and harder.
Loganight glowed with a golden veil of light surrounding him.
" GO VIRGO! MAIDEN"S JUDGMENT!" Loganight yelled.
Virgo was surrounded by golden ribbons of holy aura, and her bey-spirit showed.
Orso steadied himself to catch the attack, and Virgo's heel dugg into it's chest.
Orso flew backwards, and into the air before shattering like glass.
Just then The Bandaged nose boy had won and looked over to him, nodding as if accepting a chalenge.
RE: BeyBlade Story: The Big Bang Skies - Nearr - Nov. 26, 2011
it's a good story just a little confusing at first,but after u read it again, u understand. i don't think i saw grammer mistakes so thats good.
RE: BeyBlade Story: The Big Bang Skies - Cygnus - Nov. 26, 2011
Try to rethink your plot. Add more to your chapter. Your grammar needs to be improved a lot.
RE: BeyBlade Story: The Big Bang Skies - Ifraid*Guardian - Nov. 27, 2011
Loganight looked his opponent in the eyes and set his Bey to the launcher.
The bandaged boy did the same.
"Pegasis! Let's do this buddy!" The boy said.
Loganight laughed cockily,
"You'll never beat me.... I'm the best!" Loganight replied.
" No way! Me and Pegasis are gonna kick your a@#!"
The announcer stepped up to his box.
"Is everybody ready?" He asked.
"YES!!!" The crowd replied eagerly.
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LET IT RIP!!!
Pegasis hit the stadium floor and began circling Loganight's mysterious black Bey.
Pegasis swooped in for an attack, but was thrown back.
"What is that thing?!" The boy asked puzzledly.
"GO! Gravity Perceus!"
The Mysterious Bey responded by zooming almost instantly to Pegasis, and striking.
Pegasis fell back, but then swooped forward in a rage.
But time and time again, it was sent flying back.
" URGGG..... I AM GINKA! I WILL NOT LOSE!" The boy said,
"GO PEGASIS! TIMES UP! USE BIG BANG TORNADO!"
Pegasis was sent skyward, and began to accumulate a mass of blue swirling light.
Ginka was covered in a similar ray of light.
Pegasis struck down from the heavens, but not before Gravity Destroyer could use its hidden ability.
"Gravity Perceus! Transform into Gravity Medusa! Call forth the power of the mighty gorgon from the depths of hell!"
Pegasis suddenly stopped spining in mid air and turned to stone.
"No Pegasis! You gotta snap outta it buddy!" Ginka screamed in a panic.
He looked at the ground and began to cry.
Pegasis lit up, and the stone began to crack.
"Go Pegasis! Big Bang Tornado!"
Pegasis came down hard, but was swept aside by a silver bey.
"What The-" Ginka began to say.
"I am Nemisis! This is my child of darkness, Destroyer! He will do my will through his blader, and the Big Bang Skies will be mine!" Said a huge shadowy man behind the silver Bey.
And with that, the quest for the Big Bang Skies began
RE: BeyBlade Story: The Big Bang Skies - Ifraid*Guardian - Dec. 11, 2011
Loganight stared in disbelief.
Had his Bey truely just summoned satin?
The mysterious figure continued to talk,
" Your Pegasis, it will show you the way. I will follow you to the ends of the earth, where I will steal the sword of the Sky. With it, I will overcome this small metal form, and destroy your world in the flesh."
And with that, it was gone.
Ginka turned around and ran, but suddenly looked back and shouted,
" Next time I'll win! So don't forget me ok?"
Loganight left through the oppisite door and walked to the train station.
He walked along the tracks untill he heard the train coming, and he stepped off the tracks.
He waited for an opened cart, then jumped aboard.
He rode the train all the way from Toronto to New York.
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After battling some weaker kids on the street, Loganight had enough points to enter the tourney he had heard about the day he got there.
He walked down the street into an alley way, only to be met by an unknown figure.
" So, youre good."
" Who are you..?"
" The one who's gonna end you kid!"
The figure removed his cloak.
He was a short kid in a karate outfit with a brown bowl cut.
He took out a launcher and his bey.
" Put it up Kid!"
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LET IT RIP!!!
Loganight launched the Bakushin Susanoo 90 WF that he had just bought at a local store.
Loganight noticed the boy's bey was an Evil Bull D125 RS.
It was a strange combo, and Loganight wondered how he expected to win.
"This is over! Susanoo! Use your special move!"
Susanoo didnt move.
" I said, Use Your Special Move!!!"
It just circled around.
The boy sent his Bull after Susanoo, but Susanoo just circled around it as it hit.
"What the hell is going on here? You cheated or sum'thin' mist- I mean Kid!"
The boy was fustrated that his Bey didnt land it's hit.
" Susanoo! Listen to me! I need you to fight, please! Or your spirit will be destroyed! Along with my dream... so please! FIGHT FOR ME!"
A huge wirlwind grew around the bey, and Loganight began to glow with a red wind that surrounded him.
" Go! Susanoo! I believe in you!"
A huge wirlwind swept Bakushin Susanoo into the air.
They saw a red flash, and then Susanoo, the god of the Summer's storm falling down from his heavenly palace.
The Bey fell onto the suddenly still Evil Bull, and then there was an explosion.
The smoke cleared, and the boy's bey was dead stop in the center as Bakushin Susanoo circled around it.
" Try Me."
RE: BeyBlade Story: The Big Bang Skies - Ifraid*Guardian - Jan. 21, 2012
Loganight grabbed his bey.
It's spin trach changed!
Loganight pocketed his Bakushin Susanow T125 WF before heading over to the kid.
" Good match dude, keep practicing!"
The boy just threw his cloak on, and ran off into the darkness.
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It was the day of the tourney.
Loganight had bought new clothes and gear the night before, and was ready to fight.
He blew through the preliminaries with Bakushin Susanow.
His opponent in the semi-finals was a young man named Akira.
Loganight planned to try Perseus again, though he wasn't sure what would happen.
The reff flew up onto the stage and threw his coat to the crowd.
" Ya'll ready?"
" Yea!"
" Then what are we waitin' for?"
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Akira's Omega Dragonis hit the stadium floor and flew into the sky.
Gravity Perseus swooped into the center.
Dragonis began to fall, and switched into assault mode.
Perseus slid out from under it, and Dragonis landed hard. Before it could turn inpursuit of Perseus, it was side-swiped by a mass of darkness. Perseus zoomed around the stadium, swooping in and out of the middle. Dragonis finnaly gotta hold of its self, and flung its self at Perseus. After interupting it's attack, Omega Dragonis began to circle in close, trapping Perseus in it's binding attack.
" Go, superb serpent's bind....." Wispered Akira.
The bey glowed a bright blueish-green, then soomed back and forth around the arena.
" Perseus!"
Gravity Perseus was baraged with thousands of slashes from Dragonis's four claws.
Gravity Perseus tried to move, but Dragonis simply flung it back into the center.
Loganight looked carefully at Dragonis as it attacked, and seemed to forget his bey was being attacked.
" Hey! Get in there and fight"
" Stop daydreamin'!"
The crowd screemed at him.
" I got it..." Loganight muttered,
" Perseus! When he attacks, he switches modes a split second before he hits! When he opens his jaws, slash with your sword!"
Perseus nodded, and when Dragonis came in the speedy rush mode, Perseus was not tricked.
As soon as Omega Dragonis changed into his assault mode, Gravity Perseus withdrew Excalibur, and ripped through it's savage jaw.
Dragonis stumbled, and wobbled violently as it tried to move its metal frame, but failed.
Stuck in assault mode, it tried striking.
But Perseus withdrew the head of the gorgon Medusa, and reversed its spin.
Medusa opened her deadly eyes, and the vicious Dragonis turned to stone, and came to a complete stop.
Akira shook Loganight's hand, and wispered in his ear,
" We'll meet again."
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Loganight clicked his Light Launcher into his grip, and attached his Bey Pointer.
He tightened Susanow, and stepped out into the lobby.
He followed the signs to the final stadium for the tourney.
He stepped up onto the platform, and met his opponent face to face.
He was a dirty-blonde haired boy with red glasses and braces.
Loganight put Bakushin Susanow to his launcher, and his opponent did the same with his bey and String launcher.
Loganight realised his opponent would have more launch power than him, but then came up with an idea.
If he could reverse Susanow's wirlwinds, he could take spin from his opponent!
The announcer stepped up to his platform.
" Let's ripp it bey boys and girls!"
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RE: BeyBlade Story: The Big Bang Skies - Ifraid*Guardian - Feb. 26, 2012
Loganight launched with blinding speed and force.
His opponent was caught offgaurd, and had a weak launch.
"GO! Reverse your spin Susanow!"
Susanow rode the wall, then suddenly stopped and began spinning to the left!
The boy's bey was Midnight Cetus CH120 CS.
Cetus stook Susanow's attack, and also reversed its spin.
Susanow was sent flying!
" Pull yourself back!"
Susanow propelled its self at the stadium, shaking the whole place quite a bit.
Cetus lightly wobbled, then zoomed to attack.
" My cetus is the king of the sea! A powerful whale with a mighty horn that can survive any storm!"
Cetus blew through Susanow's winds, and sent it straight up.
Cetus then followed in hot pursuit, and turned right above susanow, changing its spin and hight.
" The clock has struck midnight!"
Cetus curved like the cresent moon, and smashed into Susanow.
They plummeted to the ground, and when the smoke cleared, Susanow was dug deep into the stadium floor, and cetus was circling the stadium.
RE: BeyBlade Story: The Big Bang Skies - Blitzy - Feb. 26, 2012
nice story but i noticed a few grammar mistakes