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The Journey-Wolves with Powers Story - Giga-Impact - Nov. 18, 2011

Summary
In the far future, after humans die out, animals take over. But the waste we left has mutated the animals, but mainly Wolves. They have grown strange fur patterns, gained powers beyond belief, and formed their own language. As more and more wolves begin to change, they meet and start packs. They would live in peace, if it weren't for the Rouges. Rouges are wolves who's minds have been mutated, and have gone mad. They love killing others for fun. They must be stopped, and they will be stopped by the mutated ones.

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RE: The Journey-Wolves with Powers Story - Raigeko13 - Nov. 18, 2011

Well it's prologue so I guess it can be short. Looks interesting. Grammars good for the most part. In the 7th Sentence take out the first word "After" and it'll look better as well. Bending water? Sound a bit too much like Avatar if you ask me..


RE: The Journey-Wolves with Powers Story - Giga-Impact - Nov. 18, 2011

Fixed, thanks for the critique.


RE: The Journey-Wolves with Powers Story - XXaron - Nov. 19, 2011

Hm.
Different story... I quite like the idea of it.
I wonder how chapter 1 will turn out!
I'll read more of this.


RE: The Journey-Wolves with Powers Story - Giga-Impact - Nov. 19, 2011

Chapter 1 added, Chapter 2 will be added next Monday/Tuesday.


RE: The Journey-Wolves with Powers Story - Clefairy - Nov. 19, 2011

Good story. You spelled hoping wrong, you added an E to it. But I like it so far. Please continue it.


RE: The Journey-Wolves with Powers Story - Giga-Impact - Nov. 19, 2011

Fixed, Thanks. And don't worry, I will.