The Journey-Wolves with Powers Story - Giga-Impact - Nov. 18, 2011
Summary
In the far future, after humans die out, animals take over. But the waste we left has mutated the animals, but mainly Wolves. They have grown strange fur patterns, gained powers beyond belief, and formed their own language. As more and more wolves begin to change, they meet and start packs. They would live in peace, if it weren't for the Rouges. Rouges are wolves who's minds have been mutated, and have gone mad. They love killing others for fun. They must be stopped, and they will be stopped by the mutated ones.
Rebel-Male, His fur is black with blue stripes, His eyes are blue, His power is water control.
Twist-Male, His fur is white with a black spiral on his side, His eyes are green, His power is telepathy.
Lyra-Female, Her fur is grey with white spots, Her eyes are grey, Her power is plant growth.
Iris-Her fur is black with red, blood like splotches, Her eyes are red, Her power is invisibility.
Three wolf pups are born, each in different packs. Their names are Rebel, Twist, and Lyra. They are the first of their kind, wolves with powers. At birth, they were like everyone else. After about 2 months, their powers and fur patterns began to form. They were exiled, left for dead because of this, but they survived. About six months later, they had almost mastered their powers, excelling in them. They encountered one another in the center of a forest, at the exact same time. Rebel and Lyra snarled at each other, but Twist stood silent, observing them both."I'm guessing you both have powers? He asked."Yes, I control Plant Growth." Lyra answered, sitting down."I control Water." Rebel said, observant of the others."Interesting, I have Telepathy." Twist said, smiling at them both. The Trio finished the meeting, introducing one another. They later decided to search for others like them, hoping not to be the only ones.
The Trio had wandered far and wide, searching, hoping there were others like them, but they had been unsuccessful. They had searched for three months now, and they were all one year old now. They had completely and thoroughly mastered their powers, learning new abilities. Over time they had grown closer. They finally reached the end of the Wolves' territory, and turned back to head for the forest. After about a week of traveling, they arrived. "It's good to be back." Lyra said, looking around. "Yeah...." Twist said, thinking. Rebel was silent, as always, viewing the area. They sat down to rest, eating a badger they had caught earlier. Twist heard some rustling in the bushes. He walked over, and used his telepathy to look through the bushes. "Hello?" He said, walking closer. Suddenly, a wolf appeared and pinned him to the ground. "Hello there, Twist." The She-Wolf
Said, smirking. Twist reversed the pin, and asked "How do you know my name?"
"Get off of me, and I'll explain." She said, struggling and glaring at him. He got off of her obediently, then she said "The name is Iris, and I have powers like yours. I'm from the same pack as you, that's how I know your name." Twist gasped, then said "Follow me." They walked back to camp. At first, Rebel and Lyra growled when they saw Iris. Twist explained, and they calmed. "So it's alright if I join you?" Iris asked, hopeful. The Trio nodded in agreement. Iris thanked them, and they were off again. The Four travelled further into the forest, and set up camp for the night. Lyra and Twist went hunting, and caught a small Doe. They brought it back to camp, and each wolf got their share then ate. Rebel and Iris have their thanks. They later went to sleep, little did they know the danger they were to encounter the next day.
RE: The Journey-Wolves with Powers Story - Raigeko13 - Nov. 18, 2011
Well it's prologue so I guess it can be short. Looks interesting. Grammars good for the most part. In the 7th Sentence take out the first word "After" and it'll look better as well. Bending water? Sound a bit too much like Avatar if you ask me..
RE: The Journey-Wolves with Powers Story - Giga-Impact - Nov. 18, 2011
Fixed, thanks for the critique.
RE: The Journey-Wolves with Powers Story - XXaron - Nov. 19, 2011
Hm.
Different story... I quite like the idea of it.
I wonder how chapter 1 will turn out!
I'll read more of this.
RE: The Journey-Wolves with Powers Story - Giga-Impact - Nov. 19, 2011
Chapter 1 added, Chapter 2 will be added next Monday/Tuesday.
RE: The Journey-Wolves with Powers Story - Clefairy - Nov. 19, 2011
Good story. You spelled hoping wrong, you added an E to it. But I like it so far. Please continue it.
RE: The Journey-Wolves with Powers Story - Giga-Impact - Nov. 19, 2011
Fixed, Thanks. And don't worry, I will.
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