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Tag Team Writing Tourney Round 1! Team 4 Vs. Team 3! - Sparta - Sep. 26, 2011

Gooooooo!


Random Fact of the thread: Most of the people who entered are damn good writers Uncertain.

Vote!!
Entry 1: 3
Entry 2: 0


RE: Tag Team Writing Tourney Round 1! Team 4 Vs. Team 3! - NoodooSoup - Sep. 26, 2011

Ermm, I think you accidentally posted the wrong version of my entry Uncertain The newest version has a little more to it.


RE: Tag Team Writing Tourney Round 1! Team 4 Vs. Team 3! - TITAN - Sep. 26, 2011

They're both pretty good, but only one can win. Entry 1 had no noticeable flaws, and a promising plot. Entry 2, on the other hand, has a plot almost as good as 1, and it doesn't have paragraphs, which doesn't go over too well with me. So, my vote goes to Entry 1!


RE: Tag Team Writing Tourney Round 1! Team 4 Vs. Team 3! - NoodooSoup - Sep. 26, 2011

More people should vote on this... Just sayin'


RE: Tag Team Writing Tourney Round 1! Team 4 Vs. Team 3! - NoodooSoup - Sep. 27, 2011

Our opponents entry is really good Tongue_out

Good entry, you guys.


RE: Tag Team Writing Tourney Round 1! Team 4 Vs. Team 3! - Temporal - Sep. 27, 2011

Urgh. Lack of paragraphs in Entry Two. Sparta is right, both are great, but One gets it here. Neat, effective, and good all around. If I had a suggestion: Some of the sentences are redundant. Try to fix that.


RE: Tag Team Writing Tourney Round 1! Team 4 Vs. Team 3! - NoodooSoup - Sep. 27, 2011

You guys have to keep voting, or this won't end Unhappy


RE: Tag Team Writing Tourney Round 1! Team 4 Vs. Team 3! - Ripple - Sep. 27, 2011

The Idea on entry 1 is great, and so is 2, but my vote would have to be.....Entry 1! Both were totally awesome, but the lack of paragraphs and way the entry flowed due to the format knocked my head little on Entry 2. But great job, Both Teams 3 and 4! You both crushed our entry......Unhappy Carp.

Shock


RE: Tag Team Writing Tourney Round 1! Team 4 Vs. Team 3! - NoodooSoup - Sep. 30, 2011

Hey, you guys should vote on this... Just sayin' Tongue_out

Need to get this round done.


RE: Tag Team Writing Tourney Round 1! Team 4 Vs. Team 3! - Sparta - Sep. 30, 2011

Am I allowed to vote? If so, it would be my honor to cast my vote for entry 1. The characters the author described are so vivid and real; I can already tell the type of guy he is. Furthermore, the flow was great and they did not change topics too fast. They spent enough time carefully describing each scene before moving on.


RE: Tag Team Writing Tourney Round 1! Team 4 Vs. Team 3! - NoodooSoup - Sep. 30, 2011

You voted in previous tourneys, I don't see a problem with it. But if my opponent doesn't want to count your vote, then so be it.


RE: Tag Team Writing Tourney Round 1! Team 4 Vs. Team 3! - Cygnus - Sep. 30, 2011

No, I'm fine with it. I'm sure SDamonCronous is as well.


RE: Tag Team Writing Tourney Round 1! Team 4 Vs. Team 3! - Temporal - Sep. 30, 2011

4-0, One leads. Eh, I say that the deadline is tonight, with this having lasted the week now.


RE: Tag Team Writing Tourney Round 1! Team 4 Vs. Team 3! - Sparta - Sep. 30, 2011

I agree, since I might be going to the football game tonight I'll make it 7:00 eastern time (So it's 5:56 now).


RE: Tag Team Writing Tourney Round 1! Team 4 Vs. Team 3! - S.D.C - Oct. 01, 2011

Yeah, I'm fine with Sparta voting.
Damn my laziness with paragraphs...


RE: Tag Team Writing Tourney Round 1! Team 4 Vs. Team 3! - Sparta - Oct. 01, 2011

Well, deadline way past so entry 1 will take this battle. Congratulations to team Noodoo and his partner for advancing in the winners bracket! Don't worry SDC and Áú®@, you're still in this.


RE: Tag Team Writing Tourney Round 1! Team 4 Vs. Team 3! - NoodooSoup - Oct. 01, 2011

Yay, we won Joyful_3 My partner is Mr. N by the way.

Good job though, SDC and Aura! I liked your entry.


RE: Tag Team Writing Tourney Round 1! Team 4 Vs. Team 3! - S.D.C - Oct. 01, 2011

Congrats to you to NoodooSoup and Mr N, your entry was great. I guess I shoudl have been less lazy with those paragraphs Unhappy