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The Four Friends and The Wind Argots - Non-BeyBlade Story - Cygnus - Aug. 30, 2011

I wrote this a year ago. Anyone like it? If anyone likes this, I have the second "Novel" ready to post.

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RE: The Four Friends and The Wind Argots - Non-BeyBlade Story - Sparta - Aug. 30, 2011

Woah, woah, woah. Sloooooooooow down there, partner. You skipped to that whole argot piece way to fast. Try and do some other things first before getting to that.


RE: The Four Friends and The Wind Argots - Non-BeyBlade Story - Cygnus - Aug. 30, 2011

I wrote it a year ago, so I wasn' that good then. I wouldn't mind though if you were to edit it.


RE: The Four Friends and The Wind Argots - Non-BeyBlade Story - Sparta - Aug. 30, 2011

(Aug. 30, 2011  12:44 PM)BurnBlader Wrote: I wrote it a year ago, so I wasn' that good then. I wouldn't mind though if you were to edit it.

Oh, this one instead of the other for ABC editing? Or would you like me to do both?


RE: The Four Friends and The Wind Argots - Non-BeyBlade Story - Viral - Aug. 30, 2011

I agree with Sparta you did skip the whole argot piece wayyyy too fast try to make it slow paced not fast


RE: The Four Friends and The Wind Argots - Non-BeyBlade Story - Cygnus - Aug. 30, 2011

I still want you to do the other. I would like the other one done before you do this, but if it's too much to do both, you can just do the one on ABC Editing.


RE: The Four Friends and The Wind Argots - Non-BeyBlade Story - RowDog - Aug. 30, 2011

(Aug. 30, 2011  12:44 PM)BurnBlader Wrote: so I wasn' that good then.
If it wasn't that good then why did you bother posting it? If the author doesn't believe their story no one else will. There is no point in sharing something unless you are proud of it.



RE: The Four Friends and The Wind Argots - Non-BeyBlade Story - Cygnus - Aug. 30, 2011

I said I wasn't that good. I still like the story.