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the beyblade super story - Hytyjin - Aug. 15, 2011
i will be taking character requests and pm me if u see any errors also tell me if i did good or not i can take critisim im only 12
RE: the beyblade super story - KCPJ - Aug. 15, 2011
Good,good,there are a couple places needing capitilization.
RE: the beyblade super story - LeoneFreak - Aug. 16, 2011
Cool story!
RE: the beyblade super story - TenshouTsubasa - Aug. 16, 2011
Hmmm......Much improvement needed
RE: the beyblade super story - Minho - Aug. 16, 2011
right... super... needs a lot of work but otherwise.. pretty average Mary Sue!
RE: the beyblade super story - CyberBlader27 - Aug. 16, 2011
(Aug. 16, 2011 7:26 AM)Bunnii2165 Wrote: right... super... needs a lot of work but otherwise.. pretty average Mary Sue!This.