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BB-114 VariAres D:D Draft - BeybladeStation - Aug. 13, 2011 Quote Wrote:Face: Ares Pics: Links (Click to View) Did this all on my own, combos from VariAres/me thread CHECKLIST!: ✓Spelling, Grammar, Wording ✓Weights ✓Descriptions of each part ✓Customizations ✓Other Versions ✓Pictures [DONE!] RE: BB-114 VariAres D:D Draft - BeyCenter - Aug. 13, 2011 Nice, nothing really needed to be added actually. Amazing job. RE: BB-114 VariAres D:D Draft - BeybladeStation - Aug. 13, 2011 Hm, thanks. I'm hoping Kei can put this up immediately because I've been working actually for a while now. I've found almost probably all spelling, grammar, or wording mistakes. BTW, I will be taking pics. RE: BB-114 VariAres D:D Draft - Kai-V - Aug. 13, 2011 Hm, as I told you in a reply to your private message, there is also a blue version, and both are CoroCoro exclusives which are extremely rare. RE: BB-114 VariAres D:D Draft - BeybladeStation - Aug. 13, 2011 I need to know the name, I searched and couldn't find. Let me see once more with different keywords. It is called Blue Phantom ver. from the thread RE: BB-114 VariAres D:D Draft - Kai-V - Aug. 13, 2011 I searched "blue" in the VariAres topic and I found it ... Furthermore, even without the name, you could have changed the "(WBBA Exclusive)", since that is false. RE: BB-114 VariAres D:D Draft - BeybladeStation - Aug. 13, 2011 It is from CoroCoro, then? RE: BB-114 VariAres D:D Draft - Kai-V - Aug. 13, 2011 Yes, as I have told you. Both versions are. RE: BB-114 VariAres D:D Draft - BeybladeStation - Aug. 13, 2011 Thank You, Kai-V. Not too important, but should I change 'G' to 'Grams'? RE: BB-114 VariAres D:D Draft - RustyXD - Aug. 13, 2011 Look through the articles on bey-wiki , you should really search for this stuff. Also this is just a suggestion , why not add Basalt Cancer D: D as a combo for D: D? RE: BB-114 VariAres D:D Draft - Shabalabadoo - Aug. 13, 2011 Able to produce recoil? It makes it sound like that is a benefit... RE: BB-114 VariAres D:D Draft - BeybladeStation - Aug. 13, 2011 It actually is, somewhat... Thanks Rusty for that. RE: BB-114 VariAres D:D Draft - Shabalabadoo - Aug. 13, 2011 How? A negative reaction is good? I made a recoil draft that's a few threads down, probably be best if you read it. RE: BB-114 VariAres D:D Draft - BeybladeStation - Aug. 13, 2011 I did read that, but it is best to also know that with MF-H and RF, you can keep recoil tamed and not fight against you. Surely, it is a bad thing, but if its producing results in given combinations it is not. RE: BB-114 VariAres D:D Draft - Whatzzer - Aug. 13, 2011 A little bit update on D ![]() RE: BB-114 VariAres D:D Draft - DynaZord - Aug. 13, 2011 I think when he wrote 'homes' he meant to write 'hones'. RE: BB-114 VariAres D:D Draft - BeybladeStation - Aug. 13, 2011 I'll look over tomorrow it's midnight here. RE: BB-114 VariAres D:D Draft - Shabalabadoo - Aug. 13, 2011 (Aug. 13, 2011 6:11 AM)BeyBladestation Wrote: I did read that, but it is best to also know that with MF-H and RF, you can keep recoil tamed and not fight against you. Surely, it is a bad thing, but if its producing results in given combinations it is not. Whether it can be tamed or not, saying 'able to produce recoil' is misleading and incorrect, because in saying 'able' it makes it seem like a good thing, which recoil is not, even if it can be 'tamed'. RE: BB-114 VariAres D:D Draft - Whatzzer - Aug. 13, 2011 Able to produce recoil does sound wrong.It should be :-It produces recoil RE: BB-114 VariAres D:D Draft - Nocto - Aug. 13, 2011 I'd personally reword the metal wheel section. I made a quick draft to help you out. Quote:VariAres is the second (metal) wheel released with the ability to spin in both directions. It features three major protrusions, each of them divided into two wings facing opposite directions. Between each protusions is a built-in PC frame which retracts at high rotational velocity (Attack Mode) and emerge at low rotational velocity (Defense Mode). Your call if you want to use it, though. RE: BB-114 VariAres D:D Draft - Janstarblast - Aug. 13, 2011 (Aug. 13, 2011 5:18 AM)BeyBladestation Wrote: Thank You, Kai-V. I think yes. Or, you may just change it to 'g'. As G means Gravitational Constant as far as I know. But as you said, not very important... RE: BB-114 VariAres D:D Draft - BeybladeStation - Aug. 13, 2011 Ok Shabalbadoo. Notch I will look over that. Notco. Please notice there were two mistakes in your edit, one being multiPle PC Frames. RE: BB-114 VariAres D:D Draft - Nocto - Aug. 13, 2011 Technically, there's three parts working independently of the other. http://www.youtube.com/user/AkirasDaddy#p/u/14/UqFxD2B3Ynw Calling them all PC frame might no be entirely appropriate, but if you want to talk about mistakes: Quote:VariAres is the second Wheel that can spin Both directions. VariAres is a thick and heavy wheel. With three outward protrusions, it produces massive recoil. It has a rough design with many wide edges, each creating small gaps to the next. VariAres is only one Metal Wheel including two parts, built in is a light PC Frame. The PC Frame allows VariAres to transform from Attack Mode to Defense Mode. When first shot, VariAres's PC Frame will push in, which will be locked into place with the structure of springs inside the mechanism Not only is this a bad sentence, the spring is actually used to push the frame back into Defense Mode. After, when VariAres has received much contact Not necessarily true, the PC Frame will push out, as it will be changing to Defense Mode. Due to the recoil produced by Attack Mode, though, it is a risky Beyblade to use. It has an excessive amount of recoil, which can lead into bad balance. But, it still has exceptionally well Attack capabilities, if the recoil can be tamed informal, in this case. RE: BB-114 VariAres D:D Draft - BeybladeStation - Aug. 13, 2011 Thanks for the help. RE: BB-114 VariAres D:D Draft - Mr. N - Aug. 13, 2011 You should use Kerbecs on Basalt D:D. I only used Cancer since I didn't have a second Kerbecs. Otherwise, this is pretty good. |