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Draciel V article - Kei can you have a look ? - Poseidon - Aug. 12, 2011 AR: Ten Spike Ten spike has an army green colour scheme. It has 10 flat shaped protrusions which when hit give off a lot of a recoil which knocks the beyblade off balance. As such following the trend of other Draciel attack rings it has no use in any competitive combo. WD: 10 Balance See 10 Balance SG: Neo Right SG (North Core Version) See Neo Right SG (North Core Version) BB: Viper Metal Ball Base Unlike the previous Draciels this doesn’t provide the same level of defense for multiple reasons. One of the most important is height. Towards the bottoms of the base, where the metal balls are held, there is an increase in height. Due to there is low attackers hit this area most, because of this, it is knocked off balance very easily and KO’s itself or sometimes can even get KO ed out of the stadium. The case on SG metal ball base would be that simply it would get knocked slightly. Another vital problem is weight distribution. Because of the position of the metal balls, the effect is neglected. Furthermore fortress base can hold a bearing core ver.2 which provides much more defense where as this can’t.In terms of pure defence, SG metal ball base is much better and is much harder to both KO and knock off balance. Other Versions Draciel V (Light Blue) RB12 Overall: Easily the most useless of the useless of the Draciel series as all of it's signiture parts have no uses, the only reason for buying this would be for the 10 Balance and the Neo right casings which can be obtained from other more useful beys. This should only be purchased for collection. RE: Draciel V article - Serotonin - Aug. 12, 2011 Few pointers: All Attack Rings are designed in a circular shape, so that doesn't make much sense. You haven't really addressed why it's useless. The Base section is alright in terms of content, but as with your other article, worded very oddly. I guess we could help you reword it soon, though. RE: Draciel V article - Ultra - Aug. 12, 2011 (Aug. 12, 2011 1:46 PM)poseidon Wrote: AR: Ten Spike RE: Draciel V article - Poseidon - Aug. 12, 2011 why draciel f lol i want to make the face that you can put a bearing core ver 2, which now that i got a new wolbrog 2 is i think better than draciel s but yeah draciel s is proberly better, like i said im focussing on pure defence RE: Draciel V article - Ultra - Aug. 12, 2011 Contradicting much? Draciel S is pure defence more than Bearing core 2. Anyway I think it would be better to compare Draciel V's base to Draciel S' since Draciel S is the best and most useful of the draciels for defence. RE: Draciel V article - LeonTempest - Aug. 12, 2011 Quote:the most useless of the useless of the Draciel series Just a small error that caught my eye. I have noticed that alot of your wording and sentence structure tends to be somewhat awkward. For the most part, all the information you have listed is correct, but serioulsy consider re-examing it a few times after we get the remaining information on the draft. Otherwise, your Driger V and Driger V articles are fine and with enough work, could possibly be approved by Kei. I look foward to that time. RE: Draciel V article - Ultra - Aug. 12, 2011 oops that was my fault. You gonna use my AR section too? RE: Draciel V article - Poseidon - Aug. 12, 2011 yeah never realise it was edited RE: Draciel V article - Poseidon - Oct. 09, 2011 (Oct. 09, 2011 8:30 PM)Poseidon Wrote: Yo can someone have a look at this please, i understand MFB is priority, but still, can you try give some help ? What the quote says, *Puppy eyes* ? RE: Draciel V article - Galaxy - Oct. 09, 2011 I've read it this morning,and it's quite good. The only thing i'add is a Combo section; i think it's extremely important,even if components's been outclassed :] RE: Draciel V article - Ultra - Oct. 09, 2011 If the blade is horrible and has no uses then there's no point putting a combo. Also you should state that the Blue Draciel comes from RB12. I think this is pretty much done since there's nothing more to write. RE: Draciel V article - Kei can you have a look ? - th!nk - Nov. 15, 2011 You need to discuss the bases gimmicks more. Even if it fails to achieve the signature draciel base effect to any useful degree, you need to discuss what it tries to do to fully explain how it miserably fails at this. The lack of any mention of the somewhat free moving metal ball tip(albeit less than fortress base, no oil, magnetic rod for sg connection etc). Oh, and nothing about that draciel f wolborg 2 thing should be mentioned, it's honestly not very useful. Ultrablader is right, draciel s is by far the best draciel, especially for pure defense. Though fortress base is slightly more comparable due to it's free rolling tip, draciel s is the bey to compare to. You could, if you wish to give this admittedly foul bey a real in depth look, examine the effects of sg core choice, as magnecore sg's mean the base reverts to "defense mode" much faster. Honestly it's still terrible with both sg types but it could be mentioned. RE: Draciel V article - Kei can you have a look ? - Ultra - Jul. 23, 2012 Quote:{{Beybox RE: Draciel V article - Kei can you have a look ? - LeonTempest - Jul. 24, 2012 Quote:Unlike the Draciel beyblades previous The wording here is a bit funky if you ask me, and the AR section overall needs a bit more detail, however there is not much else to say about it; anything else would just be fluff really. Now unless I misunderstood, there can be no more than 2 balls legally allowed in Draciel F's base anyway now, so I don't think it matters if Draciel V's can be taken apart or not now. Honestly though, I really think I am misunderstanding something about that whole bizz... RE: Draciel V article - Kei can you have a look ? - th!nk - Jul. 24, 2012 (Jul. 23, 2012 9:10 PM)Ultra Wrote:Quote:{{Beybox Quite nicely done! I'd consider the AR a Metallic Dark Green, army green is a more olive shade. You need to describe the shape of the AR more, what it is supposed to represent. We all also need to stop using "give off" in terms of recoil - produce is probably more appropriate, as "give off" sounds like they radiate it or something. As for what leon said, though I can see what you're doing there it does still sound a bit odd. I mentioned earlier in the thread that I think the effects of an MG core vs others on the metal balls might be worth examining and explaining. I still think this is a good idea, but I'll leave that ball in your court. In terms of the tip, it may be better to state that it is similar to draciel f's sg, but without the lubrication provided by an oil reservoir, the metal ball of Draciel V has much greater friction with its surrounds, including the metal pole which connects to the SG. My wording could use some work but yeah. The shape of the base also produces recoil making it very weak to low smash attackers (grip base for example). The shape isn't really notched IMO, it has protrusions. In terms of uselessness, Draciel V is probably slightly more useful than Draciel G (10 Balance/Casings and an MG core vs 10 Wide). It's a horrible beyblade but yeah. RE: Draciel V article - Kei can you have a look ? - Ultra - Jul. 24, 2012 Okay yeah they're not notches then. I kinda doubt that MG Cores would have any proper effect on the metal balls but i'll look at it later. Anyway i'll look at this properly tomorrow. RE: Draciel V article - Kei can you have a look ? - th!nk - Jul. 24, 2012 Before mine broke, using an MG Core made the balls stick to the pole, though they would likely detach at high rpm's, they'd probably move back to the pole at a higher rpm than they would with a non magnetic sg. RE: Draciel V article - Kei can you have a look ? - Ultra - Jul. 24, 2012 Okay cool. Like I said i'll look it tomorrow. RE: Draciel V article - Kei can you have a look ? - Poseidon - Aug. 06, 2014 So this is ready to go up (2 years later haha) RE: Draciel V article - Kei can you have a look ? - Kai-V - Aug. 07, 2014 (Jul. 23, 2012 9:10 PM)Ultra Wrote:Quote:{{Beybox Also, Ultra had said two years ago that he would look into that MagneCore issue "tomorrow", so that has not been resolved yet and th!nk did seem it needed to be mentioned somewhat. RE: Draciel V article - Kei can you have a look ? - Ultra - Aug. 07, 2014 Tbh the magnecore issue wasn't a real issue. It was basically saying to look into what effect using the two different magnecores (north and south) would have on the beyblade but I seriously doubt there would be any significant difference at all. Still i'll look over it. RE: Draciel V article - Kei can you have a look ? - Ultra - Aug. 07, 2014 Sorry for the double post but a few things need to be figured out. Here is the rewritten bit that Kai-V pointed out: Firstly the shaft containing the tip and metal balls is too long which means the base is high up, making it easy to knock off balance. Like it says there is a long bit of plastic which contains the tip (the metal ball) and above this there are the two metal balls opposite each other. However should this whole section be called the tip or should it be called a shaft or something else? In the draft Kai-V just posted above it says "There are two metal balls in the tip opposite each other" however I wouldn't consider the long shaft which contains the two metal balls to be the tip since they are placed a reasonably distance above the tip so uh yeah. RE: Draciel V article - Kei can you have a look ? - Kai-V - Aug. 07, 2014 OK, can you just replace or correct those two things in the revised version I posted above ? RE: Draciel V article - Kei can you have a look ? - Neo - Aug. 08, 2014 (Aug. 07, 2014 11:07 AM)Ultra Wrote: Tbh the magnecore issue wasn't a real issue. It was basically saying to look into what effect using the two different magnecores (north and south) would have on the beyblade but I seriously doubt there would be any significant difference at all. Still i'll look over it. Besides the MG stadium, the shaft's polarity changes according to your MG Core. The balls always will stick to the Metal Shaft. And the ball tip won't roll as easily. RE: Draciel V article - Kei can you have a look ? - Kai-V - Aug. 08, 2014 (Aug. 08, 2014 3:02 AM)Neo Wrote:(Aug. 07, 2014 11:07 AM)Ultra Wrote: Tbh the magnecore issue wasn't a real issue. It was basically saying to look into what effect using the two different magnecores (north and south) would have on the beyblade but I seriously doubt there would be any significant difference at all. Still i'll look over it. Do you want to add that to the draft ? Just quote my latest revision and edit it directly. |