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WBO Official Writing Battle: NooDoo Soup wins! Another 5-0... - Temporal - Jul. 24, 2011

Okay, same rules as usual.
Entry One
Entry 2
Okay, the rules are simple
First to Five votes wins.
Voting lasts until July 26th
Participants may NOT vote
Try to Elaborate, please.
Okay, let's get this thing underway!


RE: WBO Official Writing Battle: Round 1, BurnBlader vs. NooDoo Soup! - Sparta - Jul. 24, 2011

Entry 2 had a dark ending, but it was definitely a great change. Besides, whoever the author was did a great job of describing the average life of teens Joyful_2

Entry 2.


RE: WBO Official Writing Battle: Round 1, BurnBlader vs. NooDoo Soup! - KCPJ - Jul. 24, 2011

Both are good,but Entry 2 is more interesting with lot of description.Entry 2


RE: WBO Official Writing Battle: Round 1, BurnBlader vs. NooDoo Soup! - Temporal - Jul. 24, 2011

I'd agree, but I don't think I'm allowed to vote... Ah, well. 0-2, Entry 2.


RE: WBO Official Writing Battle: Round 1, BurnBlader vs. NooDoo Soup! - SwiftShadow - Jul. 25, 2011

I like the way that the author of entry 2 described the characters life and really let us understand the character. I also really liked the ending of it. I vote for entry 2!


RE: WBO Official Writing Battle: Round 1, BurnBlader vs. NooDoo Soup! - CyberBlader27 - Jul. 25, 2011

Entry 2.


RE: WBO Official Writing Battle: Round 1, BurnBlader vs. NooDoo Soup! - TenshouTsubasa - Jul. 25, 2011

Entry 2.
Entry 2 leaves a clue behind, and thus become interesting.


RE: WBO Official Writing Battle: Round 1, BurnBlader vs. NooDoo Soup! - Temporal - Jul. 25, 2011

Game. Entry 2 wins. Entry two was...NooDoo Soup! Congratulations! Now, go vote on Katsuya and my battle, it's been dead for a while now.


RE: WBO Official Writing Battle: NooDoo Soup wins! Another 5-0... - Cygnus - Jul. 25, 2011

Well done NooDoo Soup. Congratulations.