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The Boy named Angelo....(not a beyblade story!) - Synth - Jul. 06, 2011

hello, everyone! this is my first, non-beyblade story! I want you guys to help me get this story going!so, let's start!


Chapter 1…
To be continued…


RE: The Boy named Angelo....(not a beyblade story!) - Sparta - Jul. 06, 2011

This reminds me of minecraft Joyful_2

Good story, actually. Nice flow and good word choice. I recommend you slow down and describe things a bit more. Also, I want to get a feel for this character, so character development should be on your brain, too.


RE: The Boy named Angelo....(not a beyblade story!) - Synth - Jul. 07, 2011

expect some creepers in the story... no kidding Tongue_out

well thank you. next chapter will be posted soon enough