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WBO Co-Writing Service-You need it? We got it! - Sparta - May. 20, 2011
Some changes:
1. I'm changing the name to just a co-writing service, not Sparta's
2.. Requesters can specifically ask for a co-writer or just "surprise me" as they say.
Here's the staff:
1. Me
2. Bunnii
3. Beybladerpotter
4. SDC
WBO co-writing service! Here's how it works:
*Through a PM, send us an idea of what you intend to write for the next chapter and a link to your story. We will then read your story to get a good feel for the cast and setting, then write the chapter and send it to you via PM
*If any of us do write a chapter for you, please give us credit at the bottom of the post for doing so.
*Post any questions or comments about our services here.
RE: Sparta's Co-Writing Service - TITAN - May. 20, 2011
I highly recommend Sparta's Co-Writing Service! He co-writes my story, and apparently most people like it!
RE: Sparta's Co-Writing Service - Sparta - May. 21, 2011
(May. 20, 2011 8:56 PM)Titan Blader Wrote: I highly recommend Sparta's Co-Writing Service! He co-writes my story, and apparently most people like it!
Why, thank you
RE: Sparta's Co-Writing Service - Giraton - May. 21, 2011
tempting, i might ask for this when i get further into my story, the lost blader. anyway great idea, this could go far.
RE: Sparta's Co-Writing Service - Damon - May. 21, 2011
Ohhh I like the sound of this. When I actually write my story further I guess I could ask you to make a guest appearance chapter.
RE: Sparta's Co-Writing Service - Ga' - May. 21, 2011
Hmm, since I have an accelerated high school curriculum to deal with, meaning no time at all to actively write my story, I'll accept this! You've read my story I believe, just search "In All But Blood" in the search bar.
RE: Sparta's Co-Writing Service - Sparta - May. 21, 2011
(May. 21, 2011 3:55 AM)GaHooleone Wrote: Hmm, since I have an accelerated high school curriculum to deal with, meaning no time at all to actively write my story, I'll accept this! You've read my story I believe, just search "In All But Blood" in the search bar.
Yup. Just PM me if you need me.
And pikabattler and Damon thanks!!
RE: Sparta's Co-Writing Service - Sparta - May. 22, 2011
WOW! I didn't expect this many people to contact me so soon! Ok, I've decided to make a waiting list in the OP. It will say what chapter I'm currently working on, and others that are next in line. You may only ask for my services if the waiting list is 3 people or less.
RE: Sparta's Co-Writing Service - BeybladerPotter - May. 24, 2011
Pls. do mine! I'm currently busy because school is about to start here in the Philippines and especially because I'm a transfer student! Link is in my sig! Thanks in advance!
RE: Sparta's Co-Writing Service - Sparta - May. 24, 2011
(May. 24, 2011 5:29 AM)BeybladerPotter Wrote: Pls. do mine! I'm currently busy because school is about to start here in the Philippines and especially because I'm a transfer student! Link is in my sig! Thanks in advance!
Sorry, I'm out of room on the list. I'll put you on when it a spot clears up.
RE: Sparta's Co-Writing Service - Synth - May. 24, 2011
NOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
im to late!i should have been here earlier!
just put me in the waiting list....
RE: Sparta's Co-Writing Service - RowDog - May. 24, 2011
I should think that people would write their own story :\. I guess only if it's an emergency and they are on a schedule, but really I don't think people should use a co-writing service. Oh well, if it works for you guys and it's popular.
Good luck Sparta!
RE: Sparta's Co-Writing Service - Kavasiki - May. 24, 2011
(May. 24, 2011 12:34 PM)RowDog Wrote: I should think that people would write their own story :\. I guess only if it's an emergency and they are on a schedule, but really I don't think people should use a co-writing service.
I don't have English as my mother language which is clearly shown and getting help from someone that can correct and express situations better than me in text is a good thing to know.
Also getting other viewpoints also helps. If people don't like then you know what to do
RE: Sparta's Co-Writing Service - sonicsora123 - May. 24, 2011
maybe if my story starts to lag in quality or I just get really bored or busy i'll let you know
PS why dont you give us an example
RE: Sparta's Co-Writing Service - Sparta - May. 24, 2011
(May. 24, 2011 12:30 PM)quetzacoatl Wrote: NOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Sorry, it;'s full. I have a life, ya know :\
im to late!i should have been here earlier!
just put me in the waiting list....
(May. 24, 2011 7:19 PM)sonicsora123 Wrote: maybe if my story starts to lag in quality or I just get really bored or busy i'll let you knowWhat do you mean?
PS why dont you give us an example
RE: Sparta's Co-Writing Service - Ga' - May. 24, 2011
He means a random paragraph that you wrote to demonstrate your skills as a writer.
RE: Sparta's Co-Writing Service - Sparta - May. 24, 2011
(May. 24, 2011 10:40 PM)GaHooleone Wrote: He means a random paragraph that you wrote to demonstrate your skills as a writer.
Oh...he's never seen my writing? Umm....here, this is a good chapter I wrote for my 10th story put up (On fanfiction!)!
I woke up.
No, let me try this again, more specifically. I woke up in the lap of an amazingly beautiful girl. Wait, what?
Frantically, I sat up, taking in my surroundings. It looked like I was on a stuffy plane, the people stuffed in like sardines. But, wait. Planes don't travel on tracks…I was on a train, next to a cute girl with short, silky brown hair and two cuter yellow ribbons in her hair. And it was hot, so hot…I felt like I was going to die of a heat stoke, so I loosened my chafing collar. Sweat was pouring down my back like a river, and it looked like other people on this train were in no better condition than I. The outfit I was wearing…what was it? It looked like I had just come back from a wedding. I was wearing a white collared shirt with a pea green suit jacket chocking it to death like an anaconda. I loosened some buttons on that, too. The girl looked at me sideways, like I was some interesting circus animal. One of her eyes rose. "You ok?" She asked in a sweet tone. This girl…did I know her? No, wasn't ringing any bells. In fact, nothing at all was ringing any bells. How did I get on this train? Where was I? Who was this person? And then, something shocked me. I looked down at my hands like they were covered in hornets. My eyes widened in horror as a fatal question entered my mind.
Who was I?
RE: Sparta's Co-Writing Service - Sparta - May. 25, 2011
Finished Ga'Hooleones request, and adding Quetz on.
RE: Sparta's Co-Writing Service - RowDog - May. 25, 2011
(May. 24, 2011 6:03 PM)Kavasiki Wrote:But they should never write the story for you and they should be your ideas. An editor however would be really handy to go over your work fixing little mistakes and giving pointers, but not writing paragraphs for you.(May. 24, 2011 12:34 PM)RowDog Wrote: I should think that people would write their own story :\. I guess only if it's an emergency and they are on a schedule, but really I don't think people should use a co-writing service.
I don't have English as my mother language which is clearly shown and getting help from someone that can correct and express situations better than me in text is a good thing to know.
Also getting other viewpoints also helps. If people don't like then you know what to do
RE: Sparta's Co-Writing Service - RowDog - May. 25, 2011
Sorry made a double post so I tried to delete but couldn't so now I am forced to say something.
Actually I meant to say this but I might use this to go over each paragraph I and edit it before posting it for my bey story. This should be an editing service not co-writing.
RE: Sparta's Co-Writing Service - Ga' - May. 25, 2011
(May. 25, 2011 1:30 AM)Sparta Wrote: Finished Ga'Hooleones request, and adding Quetz on.
Thanks man, it's great! I can easily develop this. It should be done by Saturday with my revisions, tell me what you think!
RE: Sparta's Co-Writing Service - Sparta - May. 27, 2011
(May. 25, 2011 8:00 PM)GaHooleone Wrote:(May. 25, 2011 1:30 AM)Sparta Wrote: Finished Ga'Hooleones request, and adding Quetz on.
Thanks man, it's great! I can easily develop this. It should be done by Saturday with my revisions, tell me what you think!
Ok good. I was worried, because this was a completely new character I had to add on, and I didn't know what kind of personality you wanted for him. Sarcastic? Serious? Comical? I tried not to lock into one so you could have the option (Though I feel I made him very serious...).
RE: Sparta's Co-Writing Service - Sparta - May. 27, 2011
Just remembered that Hope wanted me to write HIS story as a full time co-writer, so I've taken him off the list. BP, your on and DV, your next.
RE: Sparta's Co-Writing Service - sonicsora123 - May. 28, 2011
(May. 24, 2011 11:58 PM)Sparta Wrote:(May. 24, 2011 10:40 PM)GaHooleone Wrote: He means a random paragraph that you wrote to demonstrate your skills as a writer.
Oh...he's never seen my writing? Umm....here, this is a good chapter I wrote for my 10th story put up (On fanfiction!)!
I woke up.
No, let me try this again, more specifically. I woke up in the lap of an amazingly beautiful girl. Wait, what?
Frantically, I sat up, taking in my surroundings. It looked like I was on a stuffy plane, the people stuffed in like sardines. But, wait. Planes don't travel on tracks…I was on a train, next to a cute girl with short, silky brown hair and two cuter yellow ribbons in her hair. And it was hot, so hot…I felt like I was going to die of a heat stoke, so I loosened my chafing collar. Sweat was pouring down my back like a river, and it looked like other people on this train were in no better condition than I. The outfit I was wearing…what was it? It looked like I had just come back from a wedding. I was wearing a white collared shirt with a pea green suit jacket chocking it to death like an anaconda. I loosened some buttons on that, too. The girl looked at me sideways, like I was some interesting circus animal. One of her eyes rose. "You ok?" She asked in a sweet tone. This girl…did I know her? No, wasn't ringing any bells. In fact, nothing at all was ringing any bells. How did I get on this train? Where was I? Who was this person? And then, something shocked me. I looked down at my hands like they were covered in hornets. My eyes widened in horror as a fatal question entered my mind.
Who was I?
*jaw drops*
Im soooooo glad I asked. I'll be doing my story solo though. I think, like a test, a story is a chance to show off what you can do, but unlike a test its hard to cheat in a story
RE: Sparta's Co-Writing Service - Giraton - May. 29, 2011
im going to ask for your services after my next chapter as it requires alot of area and character discription and im not that good at that.