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The Heated Adventure - HorogiumX - May. 17, 2011
My 3rd story. I'm not quitting The Armageddon this time so I will write both stories.
Chapter 1: The Beginning
I'm Ryan. I live in Japan but I am an exchange student from America. I moved in about a month ago and I hated it ever since. I have a hard time fitting in at school and anywhere else public. The only relief I have from all that stress is: Beyblade. I play at the local WBBA stadium. I may have only been a mediocre player, but it was fun for me. But one day, everything changed. I was walking in the streets until I was stopped by a large bump in the ground. It slowly grew larger until it reached full size. I looked like a mountain. I then looked closer. It wasn't a mountain, it was... a volcano. I heard a deep rumbling noise as the floor shook. Everyone ran as the rumbling got louder and louder. Then the volcano erupted as the lava started flowing out. I launched my Ray Bull 100RF at the volcano as the metal started clashing with the rock. "Special Move, Ray Horn!" I yelled. Bull started digging deeper into the rock until the volcano exploded. Bull flew back at me in a million pieces. Before I could be upset about my Bey, a large glow came from the spot where the volcano started. I went closer and picked up what was inside, a Bey. It was Magma Fornax MB145RB.
I need characters!
Here is the outline for you to fill out:
Name:
Age:
Gender:
Bey:
Special Move(s)/Dark Move(s)
Good or Bad:
Personality:
The Character's Position in the Story:
RE: The Heated Adventure - 4D - May. 17, 2011
Amazing dude,keep it up!!
P.s. Remember your contest??the userbar contest?
RE: The Heated Adventure - HorogiumX - May. 17, 2011
(May. 17, 2011 6:04 PM)4D Wrote: Amazing dude,keep it up!!Thanks!
P.s. Remember your contest??the userbar contest?
P.S. Yeah, but if your asking why nobody ever used the userbars it's because the team never really took off lol.
RE: The Heated Adventure - RAW - May. 17, 2011
Well I can't really give constructive critism seeing on how the liabrary pc freezes if I type too much/fast.
But overall it is good.
RE: The Heated Adventure - HorogiumX - May. 17, 2011
Character Bio:
Name: Ryan
Age: 14
Gender: Boy
Bey: Magma Fornax MB145RB
Face: A wood fire. Color: Orange
CW: Flames that circle around like waves. Color: Orange
MW: Spike that form a rough "X" shape. Color: Red
Track: (Metal Ball) A 145 track with a metal ball and a ring that the ball rolls around from centrifugal force. Color: Orange
Bottom: (Rubber Ball) Color: Orange with red rubber
Special Move(s): ???
Good or Bad: Good
Personality: Friendly, kind, helpful to his friends
The Character's Position in the Story: Main Character
Chapter 2: The Test
I launched my new Bey. It made a crater in the ground. I knew that this Bey was strong. I rushed to the WBBA stadium and tried it out in a match. My opponent was a blader named Hibiki. His blade was Sound Lyra ST145EWD. "3! 2! 1! Go shoot!" we yelled. "Attack Fornax!" I yelled. "Stay firm, Lyra!" he yelled. Fornax attacked Lyra and knocked it back but Lyra sent shockwaves at Fornax, knocking it up in the air. Fornax landed on the wall and came back down on fire. Lyra's String 145 track started vibrating and created an invisible wall of sound. Fornax pushed it and ground it into the wall. The wall broke, releasing shockwaves and pushing Fornax back. "Special Move, Vibration Lift!" he yelled. Fornax was lifted by parts of stadium lifting from the vibrations sent by the EWD bottom of Lyra. Fornax was now spinning on a piece of the stadium lifted up in the air. "Fornax! Special Move, Lava Tornado!" I yelled. Fornax started spurting lava until it all erupted in a scorching hot tornado. The tornado then exploded. I looked over at Lyra and saw it stopped. Fornax was spinning in the center of the wreckage, still on fire. I had won.
RE: The Heated Adventure - bbgoldflame - May. 17, 2011
Name: Hinaka
Age: 16
Gender: Female
Bey: Eternity Pardus E120RF
Face: A leopard Colour: Purple
Special Move(s)/Dark Move(s): Shining Oblivion, Trascendental Slash
Good or Bad: Good
Personality: Extroverted, strong-willed, always looks out for her friends, feels guilt when she's not to blame, clumsy, caring, cautious, empathetic, good listener, worries too much.
The Character's Position in the Story: Part of the main cast
RE: The Heated Adventure - TwiztidBlader - May. 18, 2011
Name:Andrew Tratogami
Age:12 1/2
Gender: Male
Bey: Vulcan Pegasis 85XF
Special Move:Vulcan Wing Smash(Strong KO hit)
Good or bad:Good
Personality
xciteable and funny and looks out for his friendsPosition: part of main cast. raised in america resides in japan
RE: The Heated Adventure - Bleik - May. 18, 2011
Name: Zios ( Just Zios )
Age: 14
Gender: Male
Bey: Chaos Rhino 95CS
Special Move: Chaos Time Distortion
Bad
Mysterious. Not much is known about him.
Position: Kind of a main baddie like Ryuga.
RE: The Heated Adventure - Xlr8 - May. 18, 2011
it's the one of the most awesomest stories i have ever read
RE: The Heated Adventure - Blink. - May. 18, 2011
Name:Max
Age: 12
Gender:male
Bey: Vulcan lynx 90 r2f
Special Move(s) raging destruction claw
Good or Bad:good
Personality: Very clam unless someone talks about his bey
The Character's Position in the Story: hopefully a main char, if not side char
RE: The Heated Adventure - Awesome One - May. 18, 2011
Name: Slate
Gender:Boy
Age: 12
Bey: Hyper Aquario
Dark Move: Dark Destruction
Good/Bad: Bad
Personality:Quiet and doesn't do anything unless it is very important or he is needed
Position: One of main bad guys
RE: The Heated Adventure - sonicsora123 - May. 19, 2011
Name: The Spirit (of Beypark)
Age: said to be millions of years old
Gender: ???
Bey: Shadow Phantom
Special Move(s)/Dark Move(s): Dark move- Gleaming Ghost
Good or Bad: Neutral
Personality: Scary, mysterious, ancient, ghostly only comes out at night
The Character's Position in the Story: to battle both good and evil to overthrow the human race. king of an army. he interrupts a major battle at beypark between ryan and the main bad guy
hope this helps
RE: The Heated Adventure - HorogiumX - May. 19, 2011
I have all the characters I need now, thanks! Next chapter hopefully up today.
RE: The Heated Adventure - Sparx000 - May. 19, 2011
Name:Vauts Reena
Age: 18
Gender:Boy
Bey
warm Vespid S(ting)110 H(over)Dark Move(s)
anic attack:The opponent's bey goes out of control and catches on fire, then explodes.Good or Bad:Bad to the bone baby...
Personality:Cruel and insane, delights in other's fear and terror
The Character's Position in the Story:Main character
RE: The Heated Adventure - HorogiumX - May. 19, 2011
@Mizuchi Reiji
(May. 19, 2011 8:39 AM)HorogiumX Wrote: I have all the characters I need now, thanks!Request again if you want in about 5-10 chapters, thanks.
RE: The Heated Adventure - HorogiumX - May. 21, 2011
I grabbed Fornax and I walked out of the stadium. I then suddenly saw a helicopter hovering above me. I launched Fornax and the helicopter exploded. The parts crashed on to the ground but a small, metal cube flew toward me in perfect condition. A man then popped up in a hologram form out of the cube and gave a message. "Hello team. If you are seeing this it means that you crashed. Please report back to the new HQ. If you are unfamiliar with the new HQ, the address is:" he said. Then the address popped up on the hologram. I followed the address to an old warehouse. Inside, it was mainly empty with a few broken computers and control systems. "Intruder!" I heard someone yell. Two bladers came out. "I'm Zios. This is Slate." said Zios. "Chaos Rhino 95CS and Hyper Aquario 105F are our beys. Battle us." We set our beys on their launchers and we yelled "3! 2! 1! Go shoot!" Rhino smashed into Fornax knocking it into Aquario which shot Fornax into a wall. These bladers were a perfect team. "Go, Aquario!" yelled Slate. Aquario clashed with Fornax and then backed up and delivered a devastating blow to Fornax. I didn't have time for this. I had to end this quickly. "Fornax, Special Move... Magma Release!" I yelled. Fornax shot out magma and knocked Aquario and Rhino into the walls. "I won. Tell me what's going on or I'll battle you again. And if I have to... I'll actually try to win this this time."
RE: The Heated Adventure - Bleik - May. 23, 2011
Thank you for including my character
RE: The Heated Adventure - dman12 - May. 23, 2011
Name:zac sakse
Age: 13
Gender:boy
Bey:infinite gargoyle ads(attack/defence/stamina170 rubber triangle flat
Special Move(s)/Dark Move(s) stone grinder it corners the for into a wall and crushes it (you can change it if you need to)
Good or Bad:good
Personality: crazy and goofy but when the time comes to battle he never gives up and becomes more focused
The Character's Position in the Story: an ally of ryans
RE: The Heated Adventure - Awesome One - May. 24, 2011
Thanks for putting in slate
RE: The Heated Adventure - Sparta - May. 25, 2011
I hope I don't sound rude, but did you get that volcano thing in chapter 1 from my bey story? I had the exact same thing happen...
RE: The Heated Adventure - HorogiumX - May. 25, 2011
(May. 25, 2011 12:04 AM)Sparta Wrote: I hope I don't sound rude, but did you get that volcano thing in chapter 1 from my bey story? I had the exact same thing happen...Sorry total coincidence lol.
RE: The Heated Adventure - Awesome One - May. 25, 2011
THIS STORY IS AWESOME