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Spartan Poetry! - Sparta - May. 04, 2011
I'll bet you didn't know it, but I'm also a poet!
All joking aside, I'll post all of my poetry on this thread.
Spartan Poetry (Click to View)
Please comment and rate on my poetry!
RE: Spartan Poetry! - PattyCakeChamp! - May. 04, 2011
Great Poem ! I am going to make a thread like this ! You have inspired me...
RE: Spartan Poetry! - PattyCakeChamp! - May. 04, 2011
Great Poem ! I am going to make a thread like this ! You have inspired me...
RE: Spartan Poetry! - TITAN - May. 04, 2011
Epic! I dabble in poetry and I'm okay I guess, but yours blew mine out of the water!
RE: Spartan Poetry! - Sparta - May. 05, 2011
(May. 04, 2011 10:47 PM)PattyCakeChamp! Wrote: Great Poem ! I am going to make a thread like this ! You have inspired me...
(May. 04, 2011 10:48 PM)Titan Blader Wrote: Epic! I dabble in poetry and I'm okay I guess, but yours blew mine out of the water!
Cool, thank you!
To warn you all though: Poetry is not something you brainstorm. Good poerty happens when a random thought pops into mind (It's easy for me, because I have ADD and ADHD, which basically means random thoughts are always popping on in!). Don't expect me to update this like routine. Sorry...
RE: Spartan Poetry! - AxBlader - May. 05, 2011
Dude that is some of the BEST work I have EVER seen!
Keep writing, it'll get you somewhere.
RE: Spartan Poetry! - Sparta - May. 05, 2011
(May. 05, 2011 3:26 AM)AxBlader Wrote: Dude that is some of the BEST work I have EVER seen!Haha coincidently I want to be an author when I grow up. This is good right?
Keep writing, it'll get you somewhere.
Oh and btw for those who dont know what add is It stands for attantion defici- oh look, a
Mailbox....
Yah, it gives you 0% attention span. So as you can well imagine, school is a drag..
Anyways, to get back on topic, I just had a thought bubble for a great poem idea while typing this post. I may make anothet poem!!
RE: Spartan Poetry! - Sparta - May. 05, 2011
Guess what? I was sitting there, in preforming arts, bored out of my bazoodles, when suddenly, I remembered the battle of Sparta. Then, I was magically inspired to write a poem about it! It'll be up in a minute!
EDIT: Alas, the deed is done! Please read, rate, and comment on my poetry!
RE: Spartan Poetry! - Janstarblast - May. 06, 2011
That's the worst thing you have done, Sparta. Don't ever become an author......
I am speaking from an author's point of view. You'll actually ruin their business! Also, I do not write poems, but yes, I do sing some made up songs at times. Each and every word, just pops out and I make it a part of my song!
RE: Spartan Poetry! - Ryuk - May. 06, 2011
Your poem "Hell's Flame" is better then the tide poem. There should be some sort of "rhyme scheme" in it, unless you wrote it in "free verse." Don't take me wrong, I really do like your "Hell's Flame" poem.
RE: Spartan Poetry! - Sparta - May. 06, 2011
(May. 06, 2011 5:11 PM)Janstarblast Wrote: That's the worst thing you have done, Sparta. Don't ever become an author......
Was that sarstic? if so thankls. if not then ok....
RE: Spartan Poetry! - PattyCakeChamp! - May. 06, 2011
He was saying you were so good you would ruin other authors lives !!!
RE: Spartan Poetry! - TITAN - May. 06, 2011
(May. 05, 2011 12:36 AM)Sparta Wrote:Same here. But seriously, you should be published or something! I'm published, but it's just a book of poems written by kids across the country. But you should have your own book!(May. 04, 2011 10:47 PM)PattyCakeChamp! Wrote: Great Poem ! I am going to make a thread like this ! You have inspired me...
(May. 04, 2011 10:48 PM)Titan Blader Wrote: Epic! I dabble in poetry and I'm okay I guess, but yours blew mine out of the water!
Cool, thank you!
To warn you all though: Poetry is not something you brainstorm. Good poerty happens when a random thought pops into mind (It's easy for me, because I have ADD and ADHD, which basically means random thoughts are always popping on in!). Don't expect me to update this like routine. Sorry...
RE: Spartan Poetry! - Sparta - May. 06, 2011
(May. 06, 2011 6:43 PM)Titan Blader Wrote:(May. 05, 2011 12:36 AM)Sparta Wrote:Same here. But seriously, you should be published or something! I'm published, but it's just a book of poems written by kids across the country. But you should have your own book!(May. 04, 2011 10:47 PM)PattyCakeChamp! Wrote: Great Poem ! I am going to make a thread like this ! You have inspired me...
(May. 04, 2011 10:48 PM)Titan Blader Wrote: Epic! I dabble in poetry and I'm okay I guess, but yours blew mine out of the water!
Cool, thank you!
To warn you all though: Poetry is not something you brainstorm. Good poerty happens when a random thought pops into mind (It's easy for me, because I have ADD and ADHD, which basically means random thoughts are always popping on in!). Don't expect me to update this like routine. Sorry...
Haha thanks guys!
RE: Spartan Poetry! - Janstarblast - May. 07, 2011
Nah, that was not sarcastic at all! Awesome poetry dude! Why don't you start publishing them right away? Future William Wordsworth!
RE: Spartan Poetry! - TITAN - May. 07, 2011
New one reminds me of 'Charge of the Light Brigade'. It was good.
RE: Spartan Poetry! - Sparta - May. 07, 2011
(May. 07, 2011 2:27 PM)Janstarblast Wrote: Nah, that was not sarcastic at all! Awesome poetry dude! Why don't you start publishing them right away? Future William Wordsworth!Haha TY
(May. 07, 2011 2:36 PM)Titan Blader Wrote: New one reminds me of 'Charge of the Light Brigade'. It was good.
Me too. After I wrote it I looked at it and was like "This looks familiar..."
Yah, guess I subconsciously found inspiration. Go Alfred Lord Tennyson!
RE: Spartan Poetry! - Sparta - May. 18, 2011
Hey guys! New poem up! Worst one yet, but please review and rate anyways! TY!!!
RE: Spartan Poetry! - Xlr8 - May. 18, 2011
wow ur poems r truely awesome
RE: Spartan Poetry! - Sparta - May. 18, 2011
(May. 18, 2011 12:33 PM)bladeruler Wrote: wow ur poems r truely awesome
Why thank you
RE: Spartan Poetry! - Sparta - May. 20, 2011
Good news! I have asked Roan to review my poetry! Yaaaaaayy!
RE: Spartan Poetry! - Sparta - May. 24, 2011
Unfortunately, I have to write a poem for school about fireworks
I mean, how can I find inspiration in fireworks?"Green fireworks burst into bloom, like flowers of the springtime,
but spring was over, and it was summers' time to rule" Ok, well that sucked. Anyways, let's hope the poem I write is a lot better than that...
RE: Spartan Poetry! - Sparta - Jun. 05, 2011
Alright, I wrote the dang fireworks poem. And a second poem, for that matter. Both will be posted shortly.
RE: Spartan Poetry! - Light Yagami - Jun. 05, 2011
awesome poetry sparta
RE: Spartan Poetry! - Sparta - Jun. 05, 2011
(Jun. 05, 2011 9:17 PM)Light Yagami Wrote: awesome poetry sparta
haha thanks. The fireworks one was hard to make because I couldn't find any inspiration.