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the legend of the beys- my other story- draft - Giraton - Apr. 04, 2011 hey guys i finally finished it. this story is before the lost blader events by about 2 years. it my get a little confusing but it was hard to write in the first place. Spoiler (Click to View) Spoiler (Click to View) Prologue: Since the beginning of time and space there were 3 beyblades, each with amazing powers that regulated the universe, Ultra L-drago, the bey of regulating time and the strongest of the 3, Earth Venus, regulated life and planets and could create life in all forms, and dark Libra, regulator of dark matter and make sure that dark and light, evil and good are kept in balance. Each together makes sure that the universe kept together and not distorts and destroys its self. The strongest, Ultra L-drago, was strongest due to experience, it gain the ability to time travel in the future and travel to the beginning of time to make sure the universe didn’t destroy its self in its early life. This is the story of how Ultra L-drago became so powerful. Spoiler (Click to View) Chapter 1: the tournament: Hello, the name is Blake Ritchie; I’m so excited for today. You see today is my first beyblade tournament, I woke up early, looked for my bey, lightning l-drago, and got ready for the day. I’m going in about 20 minutes, so I’ll explain how I got to this day. Ok so first, I see an ad for battle strikers, a spinning top game allot like beyblades, and I was an old pro at beyblades when they were out about 8 years ago, so when I was in prep. I decided to get battle strikers in hope to remind me of my beyblading years. I got one and went to its main website, found its best unofficial forum by the webmaster posting a blog with a link to it. Turns out it was link to the best ever beyblade forum, the W.B.O (stands for world beyblade organization). On that site there was a beyblade tournament for Australia, and that a new series of beyblades was out, so I bought one over e-bay, my Lightning L-drago, and anticipated for today. Ok I got to go now so I will see you guys at the tournament. (40 minutes later, at Lincoln park, Essendon, Victoria) Ahhhhh, I think I’m late, wait there is the park, ok guys I made it, good, turns out the host hasn’t started it because the most anticipated people haven’t come yet. Wow there is allot of people here, I never knew this many beybladers have been living in Victoria alone, these things aren’t even in Australia, well the new ones aren’t, they aren’t coming out till early next year, well that’s what the WBO says. I better start training; I haven’t battled in a proper stadium with my new bey yet. Ok, I.....lightning......there; ok my bey is on my string launcher and I’m ready to go. “3, 2, 1, LET IT RIPâ€, I call out as I pull the string in my launcher out until it forces me to stop. I’m kind of confused because my opponent said “GO SHOOT†instead of let it rip as the starting cry. Anyway, my bey is whizzing around the stadium while my opponent is just sitting there. I still don’t know allot about these new beyblades but I think my opponent is a defence type and I am a attack type, so mine whizzes around while my opponent just sits there. Ok so my opponent won by out spin, that means I stoped spinning within the stadium. Ok we can’t do another round as omega, the host, is about to sort the groups to battle in. Ok so I end up with the stamina stadium group, with a bunch of people with stamina beys, all I got is an attack type, the worst for this stadium. I’m going second to do all my battles, but I got the 3rd battle with the guy going first. Wish me luck. “3, 2, 1, GO SHOOT!†I didn’t say that, the judge, chaos blader (that’s his WBO user name). Yes, I hit the bey, shoot it got back to the centre, dang I was so close to winning, out spin this time, ok second round, whoops, miss launch to me. Ok try that again, “GO SHOOTâ€! WHAMO got him right out of the stadium. Round 3, ‘GO SHOOTâ€! Ok I think I lost this one, yep out spin again. The battle goes to my opponent, now just to wait till my next battle. (1 hour or 13 battles later) ok I have lost every battle yet, I only got one left. I’m differently not going to the finals. Well I may as well try and get one win out of this, at least my opponent is using an attack type. Ok here we go. “3, 2, 1, GO SHOOT!†ok decent start, both beys are chasing each other in a circle and mine is approaching faster behind my opponents bey. Come on, come on, hit it already. Oh this is getting tense; I’m pulling my launcher’s string in and out repetitively. What the hell???!!! My bey is glowing!!!! What the, ouch that’s blinding light. WHAT THE!? There is a giant yellow glowing dragon coming out of my glowing bey, I don’t know how to describe it any other way! This is so cool. Arggg, the light is getting stronger. “Zzzzzaaaappppp!†phew, that was cool, yet strange. I wonder what that was, wait a sec. My bey is still spinning, but my opponent’s bey is just lying in the dirt, shattered into 20 pieces. I won!? Ok can anybody explain what just happened!? “I can,†that was one of the beybladers in another group; he looked about 20 years old. So what was it? “it was a bey spirit, a beast inside a bey’s face bolt or metal wheel that can release amazing powers in battle, but only a few beys have that ability and they are not made by any brand, but takara tomy seams to package them.†So err, how do I control it err, I didn’t catch your name? “The name is Draucas, meet me at 2:30pm tomorrow at 25 Drion Street and ill teach you how to control it.†I don’t know if I should trust him or not, I haven’t even heard of that street, but the finals are on in a few minutes, so I better stay for that. I’ll see you guys tomorrow Spoiler (Click to View) Chapter 2: the legend: Ok the tournament was yesterday, the organizer, omega won, chaos blader, my group’s judge, came second and a new friend of mine, bestblader, came third. I’m at 25 Drion Street now so I did trust Draucas, a little bit. Turns out it was a ware house. The door is already open so I think he is there. Wow it’s really dark in here. Hey there is a small spot light in the centre of this place. Mmm, I wonder where Draucas is. Strange, there is a giant stadium where the spotlight shines on. “Ah you made it thought you wouldn’t come.†Arggg! Ok it’s draucas but I mean he just jumped out of nowhere. Hey don’t do that! “Sorry couldn’t resist.†Well let’s just get to the point ok. “Right, ok first I should tell you the legend.†Ok, long, long time ago, there were beyblades everywhere, all over the world, this was a result of meteors falling all over the world, they weren’t big enough to do what the meteor that killed the dinosaurs did, but they did supply the material to create the first beyblades. The cast of metal and plastic like material from the meteors where just right to create the beys. But little did people know the power the beys from these meteors. They allowed the beys to control beasts, beasts of legendary power. The powerfullest were from Egypt, including the legendary lightning L-drago, created by a stray lightning bolt that hit it. The metal turned to lightning metal, where only a bey with the legendary L-drago face bolt could control without blowing up. The gods of Egypt called it a god bey because it contained the power of Reshep, the lightning god.†Ok how do you know all this? “Good question, but the answer is a bit out there for you humans, I AM THE GOD RESHEP!†WHAT THE HECK! He transformed into well, a lightning god, miniaturized to human size so it wouldn’t break the building. Err wh wha what, oh. ‘‘thud’’ (hour later) Ok yes I fainted, I mean I saw an Egyptian god, you don’t get that every day. Ok, what are you here for? “Well you know how I said a lightning l-drago was the strongest earth bey?†Well you didn’t say it like that exactly but yea. “Well you have it in your pocket.†I feel like fainting again. What!? “Your bey is the strongest legendary bey ever, and your ancestor was its original controller.†Really!? Ok so again how do I control it? “You can’t, not yet; L-drago has to allow you. It allowed you to release it partly then but full control is currently impossible.†Ok so how do I control it’s partly release power whatever thing. “Pull your launchers string twice when you see L-drago give you a sign that it’s ready. “You will know when the time comes.†Ok I have no idea what he means by that but I’ll take his word. “Ok now I got something to ask you, there is a war going on, and I need you to help defeat our enemies.†Ok I’m going to faint again, err. “Don’t faint again.†Sorry this is just too much to take, I’m talking to an Egyptian god about him wanting me to go to war.†Yea well it’s a beyblade war, or enemies use legendary dark god beys to heighten their strength. They are called the dark gods, evil sides of ourselves. Their leader is dark Ra, which according to destiny you are supposed to beat.†Ok so how do I do that? “You must gain full control over yours and L-Drago’s beyspirit, and then use its full power to defeat Dark Ra.†Ok I’m in; I always wanted to say I saved the world. “Not only the world, the universe.†Spoiler (Click to View) Chapter 3: the war begins: Ok, a week has passed since I talked with Reshep, the god. I haven’t seen any signs of that war of the god’s thing. Since then I have been training with bestblader, after he saw the dragon he has been begging to see it again. No luck yet. On the WBO, the site is busy with talk about the dragon, 3 videos of it have gone viral and it even hit the news. I tried to keep my profile low so I made sure nobody would know my address, and those that did didn’t tell anybody. I got pm after pm after pm on every site I’m on. I’m going to train with bestblader again now. Ok were almost at the park, there he is. Hey! “Hey, get over here!†There is somebody standing with him, but I have a strangely bad feeling about him. Well he got a stadium up and everything so I may as well go there. Who is your friend? Man that sounded better in my head. “Kirk, nice to meet you†oh he is putting out his hand, may as well shake it. Hurrrrrr, that was strange and disturbing, when I shook his hand I felt like darkness was trying to take over me, but couldn’t. Blake Ritchie, now bestblader, ready to train? â€Yea, Kirk is here to help, ill battle you first then he will.†Ok ill go with that, but I’m saying let it rip. I’m more used to that and go shoot just makes me confused. “Ok, just get ready.†Ok bey on the launcher and ready to go, now for the countdown. 3, 2, 1, LET IT RIP! Ok battle commentary description on, L-drago moves in circles around the badly launched stamina type, it just moving around in a flower pattern so L-drago can easily hit it. Wham, l-drago whams into my opponent, my opponent hit’s the stadium wall, lucky for him. He reaches the centre, my l-drago just spinning round and round. This isn’t going to end soon. Ok l-drago is really low on spin now, it’s almost touching my opponent’s bey, witch despite being a stamina type, is slowing down slower than mine, but mine is losing spin faster. Oh a collision, this takes allot out of both beys, hey, my bey is gaining speed, its spin stealing, a rare move that can only happen if the beys are spinning opposite to each other, creating a gear like motion between both beys. This is getting tense. Hey, my bey’s face bolt shined a bit. I think it was L-drago saying it’s ready, like what Reshep said. Too late, my opponent lost all its spin. Hey, what’s the name of that bey again blader? “Flame Pegasis 145S, basic stamina type.†Ok, Kirk’s turn. “Ok, I brang my own special bey I made myself, Razor River 115B.†Cool, defence type? “Nice guess, it is a defence type.†Countdown time. 3, 2, 1, LET IT RIP! Wow, Razor looks so cool when it’s spinning. It’s fending off my bey pretty well, I’m hitting it repeatedly and it’s not budging at all, its one tough bey. It’s just repelling L-drago every time. Hey, L-drago’s face bolt shined again, it wants to finish things off now. Time to rev it up a notch. Ok I pulled the string twice. Yes! The bey is glowing. Hey, the bey is giving off electricity. Mmm, let’s call it, lightning tackle. Wham, the bey slammed into razor, razor hit the stadium wall but only just survived. “Hey, where is the dragon?†blader read my mind, I didn’t see the dragon that time, or well, maybe it was just a onetime thing. “Finally, Lightning L-drago, I have been looking for it everywhere,†what the, Kirk said that in a very dark voice, almost like... A DARK GOD! YOU’RE A DARK GOD! I was right; at that instant he turned into a black god like thing that seemed to control water. “Ha, I’m surprised you took so long to figure that out, I thought Reshep got to you first. My real name is Dark Khnemu!†Neat disguise, where can I get one. I just had to crack a joke the. Hey, that’s what teenage heroes do. “Well, this stadium is a bit small for legendary beys to battle, let’s change to something bigger. We were suddenly in a dark dimension, where a big hole was in a shape of a bey stadium. Our beys were still battling in it, like it was the same stadium as before. Ok, that’s cool. “So is this, LV 1 ATTACK, RAZOR RIVER WHIP!†Cool, a whip of water is coming out of Razor River in such a motion that if a bey was to hit it would be flung right out of the stadium. Oh carp, it’s trying to do that to L-drago. Think, think, think, aha, L-drago is ready again, it’s face bolt shined again. I have a feeling it’s stronger than before, ok let’s do this. LIGHTNING L-DRAGO, LIGHTNING BLITS ATTACK! L-drago charged up with all the energy it had and went into a frenzy of attacks. It hit Razor’s whip and the whip disintegrated, splashing on the stadium. L-drago whammed into Razor several times, and passed on a bit of electricity into the water from the whip and on Razor. The attack finished with L-drago going to the edge of the stadium but the damage to Razor wasn’t done. The electricity in the water was still active, so razor tried to attack me but touched the water. The electricity fried Razor into a deep fried beyblade, and broke apart. The battle was over and went to me. Hey, the dark world is disappearing. Dark Khnemu was in agony, looks like because he lost, his boss wasn’t happy. “No no, not now, give me ano.... arghhhhhhhh!†wow, a dark ball of energy is enshrouding him, and he is disappearing in it. Poof, he is gone, and so is the ball. Ha ha, blader is shocked .Poof, he is gone, and so is the ball. Ha ha, blader is shocked. “What was that?†he has no idea what happened, and he saw the whole thing. Let’s just say I have the most unusual job any 11 year old has ever gotten. Spoiler (Click to View) Chapter 4: another one bites the dust: GOOOOOO! L-drago, LIGHTNING BAZOOKA. L-drago spins into a vortex and a great big electrical ball formed inside the vortex and launched at my opponent, a dark god’s bey called Beetle Striker. Wham! The ball shocked the bey and flew it out of the stadium. Another one bites the dust. Sorry I better explain what happened since the battle with dark Khnemu. Since then, there have been 3 other dark god attacks, in one month; I’ll give you the list: Dark Ihy, Dark Imhotep and who I just defeated, Dark Khepera. All ended up the same way as Khnemu, enshrouded in a dark ball and taken away. This is starting to get fun. I have gotten up to a third attack and found out it’s some sort of level system for the attacks, level 1 is the weakest, meant to weaken the opponent or make the opponent’s attack fail. Level 2 is a bit more interesting, can knock out or destroy the opponent, but has very low defence capabilities and can be stopped by a level 1 attack, level 3 however is cool. It summons the beast inside for an attack that can block any attack and do serious damage to the opponent at the same time. I haven’t seen an attack more powerful than level 3, but I have a feeling there is. Ok I’m pretty much done here so I better go and have dinner, it’s almost 7. (The next day) err, man that was some good sleep, hey, what are you doing here, get out. Slam. Man, give a boy some privacy. Ok, sorry but I have to get dressed, that plus my pyjamas shouldn’t be seen by anybody else. Ok ill just cook some toast and leave, I got a telepathic call from Reshep last night telling to go to the warehouse again, at least it’s at walking distance, but only just, I get tired every time. Don’t worry, I have gotten a call like this before so I know it’s not a trap, though the first time I thought it was. Ha ha, I shot L-drago at Reshep’s head thinking he was a dark god. He knew it was going to happen, turns out I was meant to. Ha destiny comes up with some strange stuff. ‘Pop’, toasts done. Vegemite and let’s go, wait, you don’t know what vegemite is, oh right, you’re from overseas. Ha don’t worry; you don’t need to know what it is. Come on, we have a long walk ahead. (One long walk later) Hello, hello, hello, hello, ha love that echo, echo, echo, echo. “Don’t worry I’m here.†I wonder why Reshep’s voice doesn’t echo, echo. Well let’s get to business, you are going to run into your first dark goddess, aka a girl dark god, and she is pretty darn good. Ok, who is she, she, she? Ok that’s starting to get annoying, annoying, annoying.†Her name is Dark Isis, the goddess of dark magic. She is third in command of the dark gods.†Ok so you are here to tell me how to defeat her, her? All destiny says is that you must reach the level 4 attack, the second strongest known to god attack level. What!? There is a level 5 attack!? Hey no echo, echo, echo. ‘Spoke too soon, anyway, she should come today, I just don’t know...†“WHEN?†who was that, it sounded like a woman. Oh of course, the dark goddess, dess, dess. Yep, just as I thought, there she is, a black robe wearing women floating in the air. “Your, feeble spell will not stop me from finding the boy Reshep.†“Isis, how did you find us?†“L-drago gives out a unique energy signature that I can easily track; your spell just blocks the boy’s energy, not the bey’s.†“Blake, get back, I’ll fight her.†“You and I both know I will only be defeated by the boy, and even then, nobody knows if he will win or not.†“I’ll take my chances.†3, 2, 1, GO SHOOT! Both Iris and Reshep’s bey are clashing in the air. There is a flash of light and dark energy between the dark and light beys. Bang! Whooooo, oomph. Oh I feel dizzy. (1 minute later) oh, ouch, huh? I fainted, must have been that explosion. What!? The battle is over, and Reshep is on the floor. He lost!? Hey what’s that glowing in Isis hand, hey it’s her beyblade and it’s full of something, like energy. There is Reshep’s on the floor; it’s glowing but only faintly. It’s like I can see energy in the beys. Looking at my L-drago I can see the same glow. I can see bey energy! Ok, you’re going down Isis. “Ha, a god fell at my hand, how do you expect to beat me?†With my Lightning L-drago, my skill and my bey spirit, you will lose Isis. LET IT RIP! L-drago is heading straight towards Isis. “Go shoot.†She has launched her bey right into mine; I can see the bey’s energy rise and lower. Mine is taking more than it’s loosing. I can see it. Seems like L-drago is meant to take as much energy as it can get due to its spin stealing affect, it tries to take the energy as well from the opponent. It’s almost ready for an attack. A spark of the face bolt and he is ready to go. LV 1 ATTACK, LIGHTNING TACKLE! Just the same as the last time you saw me use this, L-drago gained speed and charged up with electric energy and charged towards Isis’s bey. Wham, Isis bey is flying through the air. It’ landed up right but all most landed upside down. I can see that it was ready to attack, this able to see bey energy thing is cool and helpful. Here it comes. “LEVEL 1 ATTACK, DARK STAR BLASTER!†That attack doesn’t sound good. Ok it’s throwing little explosive dark stars at my bey. L-drago is barely dodging them. Strangely, L-drago is gaining power from some of them as they pass by. Oh carp, one hit L-drago. His power is through the roof but the damage is significant. Time to bring out the big guns, LEVEL 2 ATTACK, LIGHTNING BAZOOKA! You have seen this before, L- drago jumps in the air, turn to its side and create a vortex that generates a ball of lightning and throws it at my opponent. That is exactly what happened. Isis bey is now toast. Wha? It didn’t take a scratch; it’s spinning slower but not a scratch. “Shocked? I designed my bey to withstand your more powerful attacks; it still affects spin speed but it doesn’t turn into French fries every time you use your lighting bazooka. Grr, this will be tricky. Ok new plan, I have to reach level 4, just like what Reshep said, which means I’m going to use my level 3 attack to block her level 2. How I’m going to do that exactly I don’t know I never tried defending on purpose before. Well I better try anyway. Go L-drago, nock her bey into submission! L-drago is zooming through to wham into Isis’s bey. Goooooo! Wipe her out! Wham, wham, wham goes L-drago into Isis’s bey. It’s not goner stop till I have enough energy. Woo, there was an explosion that knocked out both beys, I don’t know why it happened but both beys look charge and ready to use their attacks. “LEVEL 2 ATTACK, STAR BREAKER MAGIC BLAST!†Ok she is doing her attack, now for my counter attack. LEVEL 3 ATTACK, LIGHTNING DRAGON DEFFENDER BLAST! Isis’s bey is preparing to launch some space looking blast, while L-drago is summoning a dragon to use a blast to defend her attack if my theory is correct. Bang, there goes Isis’s attack, Rrraaawwww! Bang! Their goes L-drago’s attack; they are evenly matched as the beams hit each other. Wow, the energy being emitted from each bey is amazing! BOOM! That explosion sent everybody back, a shockwave is probably moving throughout the city, causing an earthquake like shake. The beys are still spinning, they are determined to win, and so were me and Isis. Time to get to level 4, attack L-drago! “Same to you magic diminisher, go get him! Ah, so that’s the name of her bey. The beys are classing to the death, which ever wins gains power, whoever loses is out of the war and, if I lose, the war goes to the dark gods. This is the biggest battle yet for the war. The bey’s energy is so wild I can’t see them so well. Go L-drago, go! Finally, the face bolt shined again. LEVEL 4 ATTACK, GO!!!!! L-drago is glowing more brightly than ever before, I summoning, wow a fully colour, fully armoured dragon. RAWRRRRRRRRRRRRR, IM AM L-DRAGO!!!!!!!!!! That was the dragon; the dragon is L-drago! This is the coolest thing in the entire universe, but Isis doesn’t look like she thinks the same thing, she looks terrified of the thing. L-drago is about to wham its fist into diminisher. This is the end. Bang!!!!!!! L-drago has defeated Magic Diminisher; he has pulverised it into the ground. “No, no, this can’t be, the dragon was awakened, it has been awakened! No master Ra, please don’t get rid of me, nooooooooooo.†She is gone in the black ball of energy. Another one bites the dust. Spoiler (Click to View) Chapter 5: the legend of ultra L-drago: Ok it has been yet another week of smashing dark gods since I fought Dark Isis. As the harder the gods get the more the weaker ones came to try and avenge them, failing themselves. This is starting to get boring. Well now I got to go to the new meeting place to meet up with Reshep, he was ok but weak; he was helped by the other gods. We are almost there, and we are in a plane by the way. We are heading to Egypt, where the gods have the most power than any other place on earth. We are coming on with the landing now. ‘Skid, skid, screeeech!’ ‘hello, this is your attendant speaking, please move to your nearest exit in an orderly fashion and thanks for flying air Egypt,†there is another attendant speaking in Egyptian, probably the same thing the first one said. This airport is huge! Despite that you can’t walk anywhere without bumping into 20 different people, except for the food area; people steer clear of that unless you are eating. The radio is full of some interesting songs, all in Egyptian of course, but since this place is full of tourist, I don’t think anybody except the workers can understand it. I better get to the meeting place. There is a bus looking this but I got nothing to pay for it, looks like I’m walking, I am here with somebody but it’s a god in disguise so he doesn’t have any money either, nor can he drive. “Follow me Blake, time to take the secret route to our location’. Ok this guy’s name is Bes; he is the dwarf god of music and warfare, he is also a great navigator through the modern world. He has led me to an ally in the middle of Cairo. And we are here why? “This is a teleportation chamber, I just input a bit of power here and...†ZAP! Woo that was strange, err where are we? “Welcome, to the pyramids of Giza!†Wow, these look even cooler than the pictures! “Well let’s go, follow me to the chamber of gods.†we are actually in a pyramid! I always wanted to go to Egypt and I’m going into a pyramid with a god in Egypt. We are now standing in front of a wall of hieroglyphics and Bes is tapping a bunch of symbols in such an order and with such speed no human could ever remember the combination. Suddenly, the wall moved aside to a portal. Oh no not another portal, I hate portals. “Ha ha, tell me about it, it’s the only thing that makes gods sick.†Oh here we go. whaaaaaaaaaaaaa! Oomph, I really do hate portals. Where are we now? First I was in Australia then in Egypt inside of a pyramid now where somewhere else. “This is the chamber of gods, a sanctuary in the centre of the universe; everything started here, even 2 of the legendary beys. It’s also where all 3 of the legendary beys reside.†Legendary beys? What are those? “Ah, ill answer that one.†It was Reshep! Hey you are alright!†Yea but still weak, I can’t battle till I’m fully healed, any way about the legendary beys. You see, in the beginning, there were only 4 beings, Ra and three ultimately powerful beyblades. Each bey control 1 or more aspect of the universe, they were Earth Venus, which controlled life and creation of planets and stars, Dark Libra, who kept balance over matter and antimatter, feelings and good and evil, and finally Ultra L-drago, which created the other 2 beys and regulated time and space. Ra had the power to create life as long as Earth Venus would allow it. Ra was the lower version of Earth Venus, but created all gods as of those today. This was the start of the universe, but how did Ultra L-drago come into being? The answer is that it is your Lightning L-drago, evolved to its ultimate form and travelled back in time to the creation of the universe to create the beys and being of the universe.†Wait, I hold the beyblade that helped create the universe!? “Not yet, but you are meant to evolve it in this war, before Dark Ra creates the final beyblade of destruction in a dark star.†Ra is currently dormant in your own sun because when he defeated Dark Ra the first time he lost most of his power and had to go into recharge mode. You are now our only hope at defeating Dark Ra, so you must get Lightning L-drago to evolve into ultra L-drago.†So how do I do that? “You must battle the only minion Dark Ra has that isn’t a dark god, Seth; he was revived from the dead by Dark Ra to help on his side of the war. You defeat him, your bey will be on the verge of evolution, in which then you can battle with Dark Ra himself.†Ok, will do, but how do I find him. “Don’t go looking for him; he will only lead you to a location where he will never lose. You must wait till he finds you. Spoiler (Click to View) Chapter 6: the worst is yet to come: Ha, you guys just keep coming and coming but I keep on hammering you and hammering you guys. I’m up against another dark god loser. I don’t know why they even try now, I just keep thrashing them. LET IT RIP! L-drago, let’s rev it up with LIGHTNING TACKEL! Wham, there goes another Dark God, I wonder where they go when they lose. Anyway, I got a chance to see the new DS today, the dark gods gave me and my family to go to the E3 convention in Paris today and we are already at Paris. Well, let’s go get my parents and go to E3. Wow this place is packed, all the video games of the future are here, and oh there it is! The 3DS, the ultimate gaming system, the first hand held system to use 3D effects. Hey what the, where is everybody going? What the, there are dragons coming out of the 3DS systems, this isn’t 3D I’m talking about, but real life dragons the size of the whole building. “LET IT RIP!!!!!†Wow there is like a whole army of beybladers in super high teck suits launching beyblades at the dragons. I’m going to join in. LET IT RIP! L-drago, LIGHTNING STRIKE DELTA! L-drago is fully charged and taking down the dragons one by one, those other guys are in awe of my bey just defeating the dragons without a sweat. There is obviously a Dark god behind this. Strange, L-drago seems to be absorbing the dragons. OK, WHO IS BEHIND THIS ATTACK, SHOW YOURSELF! “HA HA HA HA, THE WORST IS YET TO COME, BLAKE RITCHIE! I AM SETH, AND I WILL DISTROY YOU, YOU JUST WAIT. HA HA HA HA. Ok that’s just corny. He said the worst is yet to come... for him. “Who are you, taking our mission?†Who are you, the beyblade tactical police unit? “we are the organization, originally built to defend against beyblade arsonist but we have recently been working on incidents related to beyblade energy, it wasn’t you who summoned the dragons are you? No, I just took them down, they were summoned by err, sorry that confidential information. “spill, we have authorisation to know every secret in the world.†It confidential to the whole universe, i tell you and the being who are the secret will have to eliminate you, that and you won’t believe me. “I’m not scared of whatever threat you tell me, just tell me the secret!†ok, the Egyptian gods told me to battle is a war against the Dark Egyptian god and those dragons were from a traitor god trying to kill me and get my Lighting L-drago, now do you believe me? “What kind of ridiculous things have you been thinking? Of cause I don’t believe you.†“But I do.†Who is that? “Michal, boss, what are you doing here?†“I heard there were dragons here so I came. This boy is telling the truth, the Egyptian gods are real, didn’t you hear that announcement made out of thin air to this boy, and the guy’s name is Seth, an Egyptian god who became annoyed of his brother and killed him.†Wow you did your research. “So, he could have set up the whole thing. I don’t trust him.†“You are not the boss of me; I’m the boss of you. We have been following him for some time now and we have seen the Gods and Dark Gods ourselves. I highly believe him.†Hey, you have been following me? Why? “when one of our camera’s spotted your bey summon a dragon, we decided to spy on you for a bit, then we saw Reshep and I decided we should try and recruit you, but first help you, which is why we have been looking for beyblade energy spikes.†Oh, ok, well I’m guessing that guy means what he says so there is going to be something, something big. “Well then we better get you suited up.†Wait i get to wear the cool gear these guys are wearing, cool! “Well then follow me†ok then, I’m following him. Another warehouse in this big adventure in my life, it looks exactly like the ware house I used to talk to Reshep in, only without the stadium. Michal is butting a bey in a hole in the ground, looks like it was cut out for a bey to be placed in it. “WELCOME, MICHAL, THIS BEY ACTIVATES GROUP PODS, HOW MANY PEOPLE WOULD YOU LIKE TO TAKE WITH YOU?â€This was some computer voice coming from something, pretty cool. “17, that’s the bey ranger army and a guest.†“THANK YOU, 18 PODS WILL NOW ARIVE SHORTLY, THANK FOR YOUR PATENCE MICHAL AND GUESTS.†Ok now there are 18 pods that seem like elevators for 1 person each. I think I’m supposed to get in them. Ok the door is closing and wooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo, err, man that’s dizzying, wow, look at this place, oh right you can’t. It looks like some futuristic shopping centre or office building from a sci-fi film. There are the rest of the guys, Michal and the ranger army guys. “Guys, you know where to go, Blake follow me.†So I’m following Michal, he is taking me somewhere but I don’t know where. “This is my European office, my main office is in Japan.†Ha, thought you weren’t used to English. “You noticed my accent, not many do.†Well you are very good at it but I can see you struggle with it. “Well, just prepare for a rough ride.†Oh carp, not a 2 person version of those tube elevators. Spoiler (Click to View) Chapter 7: the organisation and the gods: Wow, this is like the coolest office ever! “No, my Japan office is the coolest office ever, this is nothing compared that that one.†Ha, nothing could compare to this, he has his own desk, a monitor connected to every camera they have around Europe, and a giant monitor at the back of the room connected to a satellite feed of little red dots. Hey what are those dots, Michal? “They are people, people connected to the beyblade arsonist organisation. They have been very slow recently, probably because every time they search for a legendary bey, a Dark god attacks them and takes the bey, probably so nobody can defeat them with it. Because of this, we have been working on the war case.†Ok, so you are going to try and help us? “Try, but we will need to meet up with a god to power our gear to a level able to beat the dark gods, can you organise this?†“No need to ask him, you’re not the only one who is spying on people.†Hey, it’s the goddess Nut, master of air; she is also a master of the art of ninja and of disguise and makes every other god’s disguises. “All you had to do was say the word.†“Didn’t know you were here, how long have you been spying on us?†“Since you started being interested in ancient beyblades. I will help you gain the needed power to fight the dark gods, but I will need every legendary bey you have to do it.†“Done, Blake, you can get your armour on, just place your bey in the socket over there and you will have an elevator send you to the armoury.†Well I got used to the elevators on the last ride, so I should be good on this one. Well that ride wasn’t terrible, I must be getting used to it. Well this place is pretty much empty. Ok so I put on this gear. Mmm ok a laser point controller for precision control on bey’s, won’t work with my bey and I don’t need it, ok communicator and portable radar, ok ill need that, beyblade energy shield, good enough, could use some protection, ok what else is there, oh a wrist computer, cool I always wanted one of these. Ok that looks like everything I need, now what do I do now, let’s try the elevator and see where it takes me. Hey I’m back in the office, guess it was only programmed with 2 locations. Hey where is Nut? “She left already; she gave me what we needed already.†Well you guys work fast. Ready to go? “Yea, we got the information and power needed and we got it working, now just to test it, try this thing.†He is handing me something, it’s some sort of gun. What’s this? “It’s a digital bey launcher, we research digital bey design but we haven’t gone far though so we only have 1 metal wheel. You are going to be the first to test the new, dark god repelling, cyber bey.†What metal wheel is it? “This is the funny part, seams the only metal wheel we can get is the cyber wheel.†Ha, that is funny; the only cyber metal wheel is the cyber metal wheel. “Well we are working on the lightning and storm wheels and we are very close to the dark wheel to be a success.†“Sir, we have another spike in beyblade energy, it’s at the Eiffel tower!†that is somebody on the monitor. “This is serious, get the whole beyblade ranger army, this could be the most important and biggest battle we have ever done, oh and this boy will lead them, he has experience with the probable source. Give out all experimental cyber bey launchers with the new data, this may be our toughest battle yet! Let’s go Blake, this could be the final battle.†No, the final battle is against Dark Ra, this is just Seth, but I must face them both alone, you guys fend off any monster he throws and any other dark god, I must fight Seth alone. “ok, i will give those orders, you must get to the tower, I’m programming your profile now, get to the pod and get ready for one of the biggest battles of your life.†This isn’t a boring game anymore, this is probably the second biggest battle I will face, and I have to do it alone. Spoiler (Click to View) Chapter 8: Seth attacks What the heck is Seth doing! THERE IS THIS GIANT CHIMERA ON THE EIFFEL TOWER! I can’t beat that alone, I must find Seth. HA HA HA HA, so you came, I knew you would, you heroic humans are always there at the disasters! Now prepare to die! Seth is standing right under the tower; the ranger army should be here soon to deal with chimera, time to beat Seth and evolve L-drago. This is the battle that will decide whether I beat Dark Ra or not. Let’s go Seth, LET IT RIP!!!!!!!!! L-drago, LIGHTNING DELTA STRIKE! Just as the last time i used this move L-drago is heading straight for Seth. GO, CHAOS ELIMINATOR, USE ARMAGEDON! Seth’s bey is huge; it’s almost twice the size of a normal bey, and its glowing black to use its attack. Wham, both beys have collided, each cancelling their attacks, mine in action and his before it happens. This is already a big battle. Grr, I’m going to win, no matter what, I have to win. GO L-DRAGO, FINNISH HIM NOW! “GO CHAOS, YOU ARE THE ULTIMATE BEY, GO STOMP HIM INTO THE NETHER WORLD.†WHAM, WHAM, WHAM, WHAM, THERE IS NO STOP TO THE BATTLE, WHAM, WHAM, WHAM, WHAM. LET’S GO L-DRAGO, LIGHTNING BAZOOKA! “JUDGEMENT OF CHAOS!†L-drago is forming a vortex; Chaos is forming a bunch of black gem like shards around it. L-drago is creating the electric ball, Chaos looks is about to fire the gems. BANG, the ball is fired, SLISH, the gems are launched. KABOOM, they have run into each other. No one is going to win at this rate. WHAM, WHAM, WHAM, WHAM, WHAM, WHAM, THIS IS TO CLOSE TO KNOW WHO IS WINNING. The bey’s are ready for level 3. GO, DRAGON EMPEROR’S CLAWS OF DOOM! “CHAOS DEAMON OF AMMUT!†the dragon is coming out of Lightning L-drago now, and so is this strange crocodile, daemon thing out of Chaos Eliminator. They are fighting in some form of wrestling, reminds me of Steve Irwin. They are even in strength, no one is winning. Wait, what was a crocodile’s weakness, right its opening is stronger than its closing. L-DRAGO, KEEP THE JAW SHUT. The dragon is grabbing the demon by the jaw and keeping it shut. GOOD NOW TAKE IT DOWN! WHAM! The ground was shocked by the landing of the dragon and crocodile demon, whoa the chimera is falling, prepare for a shock. BAAM! “NOOOOOOO, MY BUTIFULL CREATION, MY BEY! YOU WILL PAY FOR THIS.†The dragon and demon are gone and it was now clear who was winning, chaos was really slow but L-drago is spinning at the speed of sound. NOW L-DRAGO, FINISH HIM OFF!!!! L-drago is charging towards Chaos to provide the final attack. Wham!!!!!! What!? Chaos is still spinning, GO AGAIN L-DRAGO! WHAM! AGAIN, HIT IT AGAIN! WHAM! HE IS ALMOST OUT! HIT HIM AGAIN! WHAM! AGAIN AGAIN AGAIN, HIT IT AGAIN! WHAM! THIS THING JUST WON’T STOP SPINNING. I have enough to do a level4 attack, I can see that chaos can’t do an attack, the energy has frozen. LEVEL 4 ATTACK, L-DRAGO’S SUMMONING!!!!!!!!! L-drago is now coming out to finish the job, this is the end. “HA HA HA HA, DO YOU KNOW THE REASON WHY I CONTINUE TO BATTLE!? I have been waiting for you to summon L-drago, so I can summon AMMUT!†oh man, a full copy of that crocodile demon thing is coming out of chaos! L-DRAGO, SAME AS LAST TIME, CLOSE THE JAW AND FINNISH IT! It’s doing just that, this is a battle to the finish. Both beasts are struggling to fight each other, each are even in strength. GO L-DRAGO, GO! “AMMUT, DONT FAIL ME NOW!†L-drago is having trouble. BANG!!!! Yes it took Ammut down. I won no wait Chaos is still spinning. LIGHTNING L-DRAGO, FINNISH HIM! WHAT THE, L-DRAGO IS GLOWING, IT’S DOING ANOTHER ATTACK!!!!!!! The beyblade is becoming the dragon! It’s now fully formed and it’s thrusting its fist at CHAOS! WHAM! Finally, Chaos has stopped; it’s crushed into a million pieces. The dragon is forming back into a bey. Its back as a bey, and glowing, IT’S EVOLVING! L-DRAGO IS EVOLVING! All my battling has come to this moment; I have obtained ULTRA L-DRAGO!!!!! Spoiler (Click to View) Chapter 9: THE FINNAL BATTLE! Seth is being enveloped in a ball of light; this is probably the gods taking custody of him. Now what do I do? What the, wooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo, I really hate portttttttttaaaaaaaaaallllllllllssssssss!!!!! Thud, I really hate portals, now where am I, it’s really dark, but purple for some strange reason. “HA HA ha ha ha ha, so you finally beat all of my minions, well I just finished my perfect bey.†Someone or something is coming close, it must be Dark Ra! “You see I needed you to defeat all my minions, or I wouldn’t gain the power to create my bey, Strange Star.†It is Dark Ra, I can see him clearly now. Well we finally meet, Dark Ra. You look well. “ha, I will have the last laugh after this battle, my bey gains energy 10 times as fast as the normal bey.†Well mine steals energy, and seeing that it just evolved, it should steal energy 10 times faster. “we will see about that, STAR OF DARKNESS, GIVE ME YOUR POWER AND CREATE THE ULTIMATE STADIUM FOR OUR BATTLE!†whoa, the place is changing, so that’s where we are, we are in a star made of dark mater, a strange star, or dark star if you want to call it that. Ra has the power of the sun and other stars, dark Ra has the power of dark stars! Whoa, looks like it almost down, there is a swilling pit in which looks like a bey stadium. “I am the host so here are the rules, any bey that isn’t destroyed is still in play, this is a fight to the finish. Also, anything that is interfering with the beys are not allowed from either, this is a beyblade battle, not a ‘how much can you disrupt another’s bey comp. And finally, whoever wins gets their terms, if you win, your bey will become the galaxy bey and you will have saved the universe, but if I win, I take over your sun, destroy this universe and create a new one of dark beings that follow my orders, and eliminate any freedom seekers that arise. Is that good rules?†perfect rules, this is the final battle for the universe, the prize is ok, the rules are fine, I don’t really care. “Good because I plan to win, but fairly, otherwise the nature of the bey’s wont allow me to take your power to take over the universe.†Well you’re an evil god but a fair god, if you weren’t planning to destroy the universe you would make a good leader, now let’s get to it. “3, 2, 1, GOOOOOO SHOOOOOT!†That’s the first time I said that but this is the final battle, I would rather do it properly than normally. The bey’s are running around the stadium to try and beat the other one in speed to defeat my opponent, now I know why his bey is able to gain power 10 times faster, he has a left spin bey! He designed his bey to take energy to gain it, he didn’t realize that it won’t work with mine, but neither will mine be able to steal energy. Ultra is gaining on Strange, now Strange is gaining on Ultra, now the other way around again. Our speed is so even to each other but both can’t keep its speed consistent. Yes, Ultra is now closer than ever. “STRANGE, SPIN SWITCH NOW!†Spin switch? Oh no, Ultra, get out of there! “TOO LATE!†ARR, strange changed spin direction and whammed into Ultra L-drago. carp, how am I supposed to beat a bey that can change spin direction? Wait, L-drago gained heaps of energy in that attack, that’s it. When he changes spin he becomes venerable to spin steal, and he can’t spin steal because he is in attack mode. This means I can take his energy and win! “L-DRAGO, ATTACK AGAIN!†yes it’s happening again, round in circles the beys go and mine is faster. “AGAIN? YOU DONT KNOW WHEN TO QUIT!†here we go, he is almost ready to spin change. “NOW, SPIN CHANGE!†WHAM! Again, L-drago is hit by strange and L-drago is spun to the centre with more energy. One more should do it, and I just noticed, every time strange spin a change, his energy is decreased seams it takes energy to spin change. “1 MORE TIME L-DRAGO, ATTACK!†Yet again, the 2 beys are following each other, only mine is not so fast anymore, L-drago is the same speed as Strange. Damit, he won’t spin change unless I’m close enough. “COME ON L-DRAGO, GO FASTER!†That must have gotten to it because it’s going a little bit faster; it will take some time to catch up to Strange Star. “Ha, you really are trying hard, you won’t win. Your bey is trying too hard to spin faster it won’t be able to change spin. In that case, CHANGE SPIN STRANGE!†Yes, its changing spin, this will allow me to strike another attack. WHAM! L-drago is in the centre with power to give 3 level 1 attacks. GO, DELTA LIGHTNING STRIKE! Waa? Ultra L-drago is doing a different attack. It’s charging with rainbow energy, now it’s charging at Strange Star. KA-BOOM! L-drago blew up strange with the rainbow energy, but strange survived with its power to the minimum but its spin to the max. It’s change spin direction when it collided and in those conditions it could steal spin, but not power. Seams the rainbow energy is ultra powerful against the dark powered bey. “HA HA, YOU GAINED ENERGY FROM ME WHEN I CHANGED SPIN, THAT’S WHY YOU TRIED SO HARD TO GET ME TO ATTACK, WELL YOU ARNT GOING TO BEAT ME WHEN I USE MY ATTACK, DARK STAR NEBULAR ATTACK!!!!!! Hu? Hey, why isn’t Strange doing anything?†That attack of mine wiped out your energy Ra, you can’t perform an attack. You have totally underestimated me, just like the rest of the dark gods. You think your power is too strong to beat. Well you are wrong, the power of darkness is as limited as the power of light, each side of the boundary is even, and everyone has a light and dark side, everyone has a choice, everyone can be a hero or a villain, except you, you are a dark side, the gods are the light side. You, the dark gods and the gods are incomplete beings, as such you will never defeat a complete being who has just as much power as you, because I can choose, you cannot. “Touching speech, too bad it’s the biggest lie I have heard for years, and I’m the biggest liar in the whole universe. You are an insignificant worm that cannot beat the king of dark gods with a puny “bey of legendâ€, the destruction of the universe will commence and you may have stopped my attack but there is more than 1 way to gain power. DARK STAR THAT CREATED THIS BEY OF DOOM, GIVE ALL YOUR POWER TO THE BEYBLADE AND HELP IT DISTROY THE PUNY INSECT BEFORE ME!†The star is being sucked into the bey, leaving only an oxygen ball, the stadium and the floor I am standing on left, dark Ra is just floating there. The bey must have taken the energy from the star because it is full of dark energy. It can do an attack, but I think it can only do 1. “TIME TO SEE WHAT YOU ARE REALY MADE OF! MY BEY HAS ENOUGH POWER FROM THE STAR TO PERFORM A LEVEL 4 ATTACK IN ONE GO!†Oh carp, this isn’t going to be good, wait I still have energy to do my attack which means if I am skilful enough I should be able to stop his attack for a bit longer. “NOW STRANGE STAR, PERFORM YOUR ULTIMATE ATTACK, DARK HOLE DEMON OF AKMAN RA!†NOW ULTRA L-DRAGO, LEVEL 2 ATTACK, ULTRA DRAGON CLAWS OF FURY! L-drago is forming rainbow energy claws out of 3 parts of its self. The claws are made of one third of the bey each! Strange is creating a huge amount of dark energy around it, it’s now or never, NOW L-DRAGO, ATTACK NOW! The claws are flying towards the black ball that was once Strange Star. Slice, slice, slice, the claws hit the black ball and took allot of energy, but not enough to stop the attack, seams I only delayed it. The claws are forming back to L-drago. Wow, it stole enough energy to perform another attack! LEVEL 3 ATTACK, DRAGON OF LEGEND PUNCH! Ultra L-drago in rainbow energy form is coming out of the bey, its only difference to Lightning L-drago is that it’s bigger and stronger looking. It’s throwing a punch at the black ball which has gotten bigger, about the size of a basket ball. WHAM! Again it took energy but couldn’t stop it. I have enough to do my level 4 attack; I won’t be able to stop Ra’s attack before it happens so I may as well fight it. ULTRA L-DRAGO, BEYBLADE OF BEGINNING ARIZE FOR THE FINNAL FIGHT, BEGGINIG DRAGON AWAKENING! L-drago is now a yellow ball growing the same speed as Strange, this will probably be the final attack both of us are going to perform. Strange has just summoned its beast, it’s a sphinx of darkness with the ability to create dark holes. My bey just summoned its beast; Ultra L-drago is a dragon on its hind legs, platinum armour plating all around it and a staff that allows it to travel through time and mend and bend space. These 2 deities are fighting it all out in such a battle I can’t describe with human words. This is a battle to the death, and I’m losing. NOOOOOO, L-DRAGO IS DEFFEATED! The sphinx created a dark hole that defeated L-drago, but I’m still spinning at a good spin level. Strange is calling its beast back. We are both now spinning at a good pace; I gained too much spin in the last attacks so my spin is as good as his, time for a classic beyblade battle. “HOW COULD YOUR BEY SURVIVE!?†Simple, my other attacks got me at such a high speed that when you beat me, lowered me to about the same spin as you. This is now just a normal, non magical battle between tw, hey what’s going on!? L-drago is glowing, it’s got one more attack left in it, it wants to win no matter what, and it knows Strange Star can’t do another attack. THIS IS ULTRA L-DRAGO BEING SUMMONED, NO CREATED! “I AM ULTRA L-DRAGO, THE BEYBLADE THAT CREATED THE UNIVERSE! IN MY CURENT LIFE I HAVE NOT DONE IT YET, BUT FOR YOU, I HAVE DONE IT TOO LONG AGO TO MEASURE IN HUMAN OR GOD TIME!†wow! This is the being that created, sorry, will create the universe I am controlling, it’s standing before my eyes! “DARK RA, YOUR REIGHN OF TERROR IS OVER, ALL THE GODS WILL BECOME COMPLETE EXCEPT RA, AS YOU WILL BE DISTROIED AND BECAUSE RA CHOOSED TO DISCONNECT HIM TO YOU! STRANGE STAR, BEGONE FROM THIS EXSISTANCE!†crunch, L-drago stepped on Strange Star so now it is in a million pieces. “YOU HAVE LOST; YOUR POWER IS GONE, NOW YOU WILL BE DISTROIED!†L-drago is blasting a rainbow colour beam at Dark Ra. “NEVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YOU WILL NEVER RID OF ME COPLETELY, NEVER! ARRRRRR!†BANG! He blew up, he is gone. The universe is saved; I can’t believe it’s over. Spoiler (Click to View)
Chapter 10: the end of an adventure: Ok so it’s been a week since I saved the universe with Ultra L-drago. The whole “clean up†process has been hard. The gods needed to be reunited with their dark counter parts so they could be complete, the public needed to be assured the monsters were gone, ultra l-drago needed to be sent back in time and the organization needed to train their new member, me. I’m going to speak with Michal now. Hey, Reshep is here, fully powered and complete, he is also in his human form. “We have been talking and decided to give you a present, as ultra l-drago has been sent back in time to keep the universe in check, me and Reshep would like to give you this god powered Meteo L-drago, found by us a month ago.†Cool, now I can get to work here. “Yes, and thanks for helping us beat the dark gods, we can’t thank you enough.†No sweat, I can help you anytime you need it, just say the word. “Well Blake, we have your first assignment as part of the organization, we have a boy we would like you to investigate on and his name is Damian Coondez, also known as Dracoon. We don’t plan to intervene with his life for another 2 years but we would like you to check on him. He is in Japan so you will have to travel there by pod.†Ok, I’ll spy on the kid. “Good, I will meet you there.†Well guys that’s, the end of this story, I hope to see you again someday. This was the most crazy and most amazing thing I have done in my life, I will never forget it. My life will never be the same but I will never regret it. The end Edit: hey, those who have found this is proberbly through my new link in "the lost blader" topic. note that this needs to be fixed so please note all spelling mistakes and i will fix them in my next edit. do nothing but spelling and grammer mistakes as im working on structure, i do not need tips in the structure, ill be using the same kind as the lost blader, cause i have to keep the present, first-person structure. im also working on story number 3, the legend of the beys: bey of time so keep an eye out for the first few chapters soon. RE: the legend of the beys- my other story- draft - Soopah - Apr. 05, 2011 Honestly, I really like the lost blader more..but this was an interesting read! RE: the legend of the beys- my other story- draft - Giraton - Apr. 05, 2011 this was just realy a fill in for the lost bladers behind story, i have a story idea for in between both this story and lost blader. RE: the legend of the beys- my other story- draft - Soopah - Apr. 05, 2011 I know, you told me before that you were making a story based off you(i'll presume your real name is Blake). As I told you, i'll be making a story as well, er, well based off 3 of the many characters i've already given you permission to use RE: the legend of the beys- my other story- draft - Giraton - Apr. 06, 2011 interesting, you are making a story. oh and 5% of this story is based on true events, the rest is completely made up. RE: the legend of the beys- my other story- draft - Kujikato - Apr. 07, 2011 DELETED POST RE: the legend of the beys- my other story- draft - Soopah - Apr. 07, 2011 (Apr. 07, 2011 7:01 AM)Dracovianauis Wrote: can u put me in he's already done with this story RE: the legend of the beys- my other story- draft - Kujikato - Apr. 07, 2011 shoot, sorry didnt notice |