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RE: Killer Beafowl UW145EWD Rough Draft - Electric - Jun. 16, 2011 (Jun. 16, 2011 5:58 PM)♥ Wrote: I actually think EWD is comparable to WD in terms of Stamina, but I don't have necessary testing to reinforce this. In my opinion, it's a really useful part with great Life After Death capabilities, but that's just me.I'll wait for other members to chip in to the Life After Death capabilities part before I put it into the article ? WD gets really similar results against WD, only, it goes off balance, I think I should make that part clearer. I had "wing" when I first typed it, then, I felt it was too repetitive and informal, and annex was what I got at. I've got a few more, how about Supplement or Claws ? I reworded the UW145 and EWD, I hope it's now better, but I didn't change the word annex yet. RE: Killer Beafowl UW145EWD Rough Draft - RustyXD - Jun. 17, 2011 Yeah just thought i would mention my opinion but I think EWD is very useful in the life after death way . I think EWD does really well with basalt actually because the extra weight does help it from KO'ing , But anyway nice job electric seems pretty good to me RE: Killer Beafowl UW145EWD Rough Draft - Electric - Jun. 17, 2011 I just saw something, and I have no tests to back it up. But, When you get a mint EWD the WD stretch in which the ES lies, the circular line is smooth, if you use it, it gets rougher. For it's Life After Death capibilities to function properly the circle needs to be mint, and smooth. Also, should I add the Life after death part in or wait a bit ? If I have to add it now, can anyone give me a little template on adding it, I'm scared I'll screw it up. RE: Killer Beafowl UW145EWD Rough Draft - Ga' - Jun. 17, 2011 Perhaps you should mention that UW145 has use in MF Lightning L Drago UW145RF? As a sub for SW145, since both line up quite nicely with Lightning's contact points, and have shown to contain exceptional attack. RE: Killer Beafowl UW145EWD Rough Draft - Electric - Jun. 17, 2011 (Jun. 17, 2011 1:51 PM)GaHooleone Wrote: Perhaps you should mention that UW145 has use in MF Lightning L Drago UW145RF? As a sub for SW145, since both line up quite nicely with Lightning's contact points, and have shown to contain exceptional attack. Is that for sure ? Because, I think UW145 will kill it's Spin Velocity. RE: Killer Beafowl UW145EWD Rough Draft - Ga' - Jun. 17, 2011 No, I'm sure. I've used this. UW145 in defense mode. It provides a lot of smash when combined w/ Lightning. Works on the same principle as SW145, ask Deikailo about that if you wish. I have a Killer Beafowl, so I'm not making this up either. RE: Killer Beafowl UW145EWD Rough Draft - Electric - Jun. 17, 2011 (Jun. 17, 2011 2:55 PM)GaHooleone Wrote: No, I'm sure. I've used this. UW145 in defense mode. It provides a lot of smash when combined w/ Lightning. Works on the same principle as SW145, ask Deikailo about that if you wish. I have a Killer Beafowl, so I'm not making this up either. Yeah, I just did a few personal rounds and it looked like it had good Smash. I believe you. RE: Killer Beafowl UW145EWD Rough Draft - Janstarblast - Jun. 17, 2011 Well, great article, Electric! Quite Well Done! Now, may I suggest a few things? 1. Well, quite minor, but the last sentence in the Killer Section has a misspelled 'performs' word. 2. I see no requirement of including the height for the UW145 section, as no other article has it.. Still, I don't know what others think of it. 3. When you say that UW145 is wide, the way you compare it to BD145 is not alright, IMO... You see, its a fact that BD145 is the widest track ATM, so if you say that 'UW145 is wide, but not as wide as BD145', it sounds....odd. To improve it, I think you can change the sentence to something similar- UW145 is a wide track, and just slightly smaller than the widest track, BD145. Hope these suggestions are useful! I know nothing about Killer Beafowl, and I didn't even care to research more. So, this is all I can do. But yes, when I saw the results of BeyDays, there were many winning combos using the part- EWD. I would love to see some of those members here, so that we could get more info. RE: Killer Beafowl UW145EWD Rough Draft - Electric - Jun. 17, 2011 (Jun. 17, 2011 3:54 PM)Janstarblast Wrote: Well, great article, Electric! Quite Well Done! Now, may I suggest a few things?Fixed Thank You ! So, I took it off, Fixed, thanks. Since BD145 is the widest, I found it most reasonable to compare UW145 to BD145. And, what you recommended is the exact same is what I said, with different words. Thanks for chipping in anyway ! RE: Killer Beafowl UW145EWD Rough Draft - Janstarblast - Jun. 17, 2011 (Jun. 17, 2011 4:02 PM)Electric Wrote:(Jun. 17, 2011 3:54 PM)Janstarblast Wrote: Well, great article, Electric! Quite Well Done! Now, may I suggest a few things?Fixed Thank You ! Well, I do get your point. Well, I had 2 reasons to change the sentence- 1. It feels weird if a word is used twice. You see- 'UW145 is a wide track, but not as wide as BD145.' Here, wide is used twice. 2. There are a million people who are still unaware that BD145 is the widest track. So, by changing the sentence to the one I suggested, it satisfies both the points above. RE: Killer Beafowl UW145EWD Rough Draft - Electric - Jun. 17, 2011 (Jun. 17, 2011 4:09 PM)Janstarblast Wrote: Well, I do get your point. Well, I had 2 reasons to change the sentence- Well, now that you put it that way, it does seem right, the same word repeated in a sentence doesn't sound official. Fixed ! RE: Killer Beafowl UW145EWD Rough Draft - Serotonin - Jun. 22, 2011 (Mar. 10, 2011 2:17 PM)Electric Wrote:Quote:Face: Beafowl --- Notes:
RE: Killer Beafowl UW145EWD Rough Draft - bumpyfelon - Jun. 23, 2011 Shouldn't you mention the similarities between UW145 and SW145? they have the same "H" locking piece, and they are very similar in shape and size (width.) RE: Killer Beafowl UW145EWD Rough Draft - Electric - Jun. 23, 2011 ♥, Woah, you redid the whole article. The UW145 section which I had up back then was really inaccurate, I could not describe it well for some reason, and my grammar and vocabulary is definitely not as good as yours, I'll switch the one I have up there with you're re-written version. Also, to the weights part, I just released I had put 0.14 grams, when it came up as 1.4 grams. When I noted the weights down, on paper, I made the decimal point to small, I didn't notice it. Anyway, I added you're weights up there. Thanks a lot. Meteo L-Alchemy, I guess not, comparing it a lot would make the article seem very im-professional, I guess it should stay un-compared with SW145. But they do have some similarities. RE: Killer Beafowl UW145EWD Rough Draft - Serotonin - Jun. 23, 2011 Ah, yeah, I feel bad. I was thinking that might've been the reason why the weights were so out, haha. It was a really solid foundation to work on, though. We'll wait a bit to see if any other members have anything to add, then it can go up on Beywiki. :] RE: Killer Beafowl UW145EWD Rough Draft - Ga' - Jun. 23, 2011 For UW145, in attack mode, the wings are angled upward (using the contact points as a reference for up/down), while in defense mode, the wings are angled down. EWD is great at low spin velocities, however, like most eternal bottoms (not sure about EDS yet, Kronos just came out), it does get destabilized rather easily, making it lose often this way. That is pretty much the bottom's only downfall. RE: Killer Beafowl UW145EWD Rough Draft - Kei - Jun. 24, 2011 Article looks great! Just be sure to add a note at the start stating that it was the prize for RBV6. (Jun. 23, 2011 7:59 PM)GaHooleone Wrote: For UW145, in attack mode, the wings are angled upward (using the contact points as a reference for up/down), while in defense mode, the wings are angled down. Yeah, ♥, try to work this into the UW145 description somehow. It is a bit awkward right now, as you pointed out. "Rounded edges" is definitely not a phrase I would expect to see in a description of UW145 lol. Also, regarding the EWD description: ♥ Wrote:EWD is primarily a Stamina Bottom, and although it is a superior Defense Bottom choice to many of other Defense series Bottoms, it should generally be avoided for Defense type customisations. I don't think it should be implied at all that EWD is an option for Defense. It's even worse than WD (and WD shouldn't be suggested) with the sharp tip it has, I'm sure. RE: Killer Beafowl UW145EWD Rough Draft - Electric - Jun. 24, 2011 I did some editing to the article, with the help of ♥, Ga'Hooleone and Kei. Thanks a lot. How's the article now ? RE: Killer Beafowl UW145EWD Rough Draft - Serotonin - Jun. 24, 2011 (Jun. 24, 2011 9:15 AM)Kei Wrote:(Jun. 23, 2011 7:59 PM)GaHooleone Wrote: For UW145, in attack mode, the wings are angled upward (using the contact points as a reference for up/down), while in defense mode, the wings are angled down. I would, but I don't understand "upwards" and "downwards", because it depends on how you're looking at them. Ga'Hooleone, if you can help a bit here, haha ... ? (Jun. 24, 2011 9:15 AM)Kei Wrote: Also, regarding the EWD description: Electric, regarding this: I don't think it's necessary to mention that it doesn't work for Attack, either, haha. Quote:Bottom: Eternal Wide Defense RE: Killer Beafowl UW145EWD Rough Draft - Electric - Jun. 24, 2011 (Jun. 24, 2011 2:05 PM)♥ Wrote: Electric, regarding this: I don't think it's necessary to mention that it doesn't work for Attack, either, haha. Alright, I'll take off that part. RE: Killer Beafowl UW145EWD Rough Draft - Ga' - Jun. 24, 2011 (Jun. 24, 2011 2:05 PM)♥ Wrote:(Jun. 24, 2011 9:15 AM)Kei Wrote:(Jun. 23, 2011 7:59 PM)GaHooleone Wrote: For UW145, in attack mode, the wings are angled upward (using the contact points as a reference for up/down), while in defense mode, the wings are angled down. How about: In Attack mode, the wings are angled upwards and point clockwise, while in Defense mode, the wings are angled down and point counter-clockwise? Not sure, it is a very awkward sentence. RE: Killer Beafowl UW145EWD Rough Draft - Electric - Jun. 25, 2011 (Jun. 24, 2011 4:41 PM)GaHooleone Wrote: How about: In Attack mode, the wings are angled upwards and point clockwise, while in Defense mode, the wings are angled down and point counter-clockwise? Not sure, it is a very awkward sentence. Actually, they way I worded it in the article, makes sense and doesn't depend on the way you look at it. Right ? RE: Killer Beafowl UW145EWD Rough Draft - Electric - Oct. 09, 2011 I really hate to double post, but I want to get this going. This needs a lot of updates now, I edited the EWD bit, after using it a bit throughout the tournaments. Can anyone suggest something ? RE: Killer Beafowl UW145EWD Rough Draft - Dan - Oct. 10, 2011 I'd say the entire bey in negligible unless UW145 has some amazing use. WD fares just fine against EWD and it is much easier to get. There is little point unless you have a large collection already. RE: Killer Beafowl UW145EWD Rough Draft - RustyXD - Oct. 10, 2011 Well I think EWD is a worthwhile part , it works really well with Basalt but I do agree with you Dan you don't need it. Maybe something like if you have staple parts you should get this bey or something along those lines. |