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project 4 (beystory) - ('.') - Mar. 05, 2011
Project 4
Prologue
Prologue
There I was standing outside of the stadium. I had lost. There he was standing at the other side of the stadium we where thinking the same thing, “ we met for a reason “ I did not know why but I feel like I was very close to him like he was my brother yet he was not. As he was walking away I said “I will meet you again and I will beat you !!!! “
do you like it ? + i need characters so pm me if you want to be in my story
i will try to update every day!!
RE: project 4 (beystory) - Boxy ID - Mar. 05, 2011
its good just add more on your next chapter
RE: project 4 (beystory) - ('.') - Mar. 05, 2011
btw this is just a test to see if people like my story + there will be more in next chapter
RE: project 4 (beystory) - ('.') - Mar. 06, 2011
Chapter 1: the unholy spirit
So little I had, so little I loved, but none more than my partner flame Leone. He was the first bey I ever got. We have won so many battles together and have never lost, but now he is gone and I will never see him again and it was all because of that man I meet at the tournament. Now I have to find a new partner, but just I started to cry a black light appeared in front of me and a bey appeared! I was in shock but just as I was about to run it began to speak and it said “don’t run. I will not hurt you. I have been sent to be your new partner.’’ “Who arre you?’’ I said sacredly “ that is up to you to chose my name’’ it said in a very deep voice . His fusion wheel look like flame but with retractable claws kinda the wings on evil. So I decided to call it magma and the energy ring look like Leone and Kerbix combined so I called it leoabix. The spin track was defiantly 125 but a mix of sw145,d125 and c145 so I called it whip claw 125. the performance tip looked like a wd but with an internal engine gear so that meant it was called Magma Leoabix WC125 BWD!!! But then I asked “why pick me?’’ then he replied “because I am the unholy spirit†“the unnnhhoollly spiirit†I said nervously
so what do u think?
RE: project 4 (beystory) - Kujikato - Mar. 06, 2011
very nice
RE: project 4 (beystory) - ('.') - Mar. 06, 2011
thx new chapter 2 more o
RE: project 4 (beystory) - Synth - Mar. 09, 2011
lol in the prologue you said ''prolog''this completely miss spelling,change that
btw nice story!!
RE: project 4 (beystory) - ('.') - Apr. 12, 2011
ok sorry i was busy (school) new chapter soon