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Dranzer MS Article Attempt (Feedback Wanted!) - Sparta - Feb. 18, 2011 AR: Spiral Upper WD: Circle Balance RC: Manual Change Core <- Ignore these, this was just to help me reference. Can't believe Beywiki didn't have DZMS! Had to attempt. With out further a-due, here I go: Quote:Bit Protector (BP): Dranzer Emblem As you can see, I'm getting ready to write my final draft, so keep that feedback a'comin! RE: Dranzer MS Article Attempt (Feedback Wanted!) - X1 - Feb. 19, 2011 Wiki Shows Dranzer MS is limited to Sysops ... Good Try. RE: Dranzer MS Article Attempt (Feedback Wanted!) - Ultra - Feb. 19, 2011 ^Please don't comment if you have no idea what you're talking about... That message just means that there isn't an article on that blade yet. I Think the article is pretty good on the whole but the overall section needs to be changed a lot. RE: Dranzer MS Article Attempt (Feedback Wanted!) - X1 - Feb. 19, 2011 (Feb. 19, 2011 10:15 AM)Ultrablader Wrote: ^Please don't comment if you have no idea what you're talking about... That message just means that there isn't an article on that blade yet. I Think the article is pretty good on the whole but the overall section needs to be changed a lot. I said first attempt but I liked it so I commented. RE: Dranzer MS Article Attempt (Feedback Wanted!) - Sparta - Feb. 19, 2011 (Feb. 19, 2011 10:15 AM)Ultrablader Wrote: ^Please don't comment if you have no idea what you're talking about... That message just means that there isn't an article on that blade yet. I Think the article is pretty good on the whole but the overall section needs to be changed a lot. Thank you for the advice! I'll change it right now! RE: Dranzer MS Article Attempt (Feedback Wanted!) - Ultra - Feb. 19, 2011 (Feb. 18, 2011 10:07 PM)Sparta Wrote: However, DZMS is now a rare beyblade, so for collectors it might be a worthy purchase. Other than that, DZMS just doesn't have any other uses. Take out this bit and replace it with: Dranzer MS should only be purchased for collection purposes. RE: Dranzer MS Article Attempt (Feedback Wanted!) - BeyPhilosopher - Feb. 19, 2011 You did not expand and elaborate on how the mode change works, what you have to do to change the modes, etc. The wording is also not that good and also informal for Beywiki, and the AR section should be expanded. Also, more friction increases speed, it doesn't decrease speed, as to why rubber gets worn down so quickly. RE: Dranzer MS Article Attempt (Feedback Wanted!) - Shabalabadoo - Feb. 19, 2011 (Feb. 19, 2011 8:25 PM)Sequoia Wrote: Also, more friction increases speed, it doesn't decrease speed, as to why rubber gets worn down so quickly. traction increases speed. Friction is what wears down rubber bottoms. Friction decreases spin time. Metal flat is an example. It still has traction and surface area to move like an attack bottom, but has little friction which makes it spin longer than most attack bottoms. RE: Dranzer MS Article Attempt (Feedback Wanted!) - Sparta - Feb. 19, 2011 (Feb. 19, 2011 8:25 PM)Sequoia Wrote: You did not expand and elaborate on how the mode change works, what you have to do to change the modes, etc. The wording is also not that good and also informal for Beywiki, and the AR section should be expanded. Ok......thanks for the tip I will fix my article..... but wait, like SSJ Fisherman said friction doesn't increase speed, it slows stuff down. It resists motion (thank you 8th grade science class!) RE: Dranzer MS Article Attempt (Feedback Wanted!) - LeonTempest - Feb. 20, 2011 You need to write in the present tense, not the past. i will look at it more in depth later. im a littoe sick today and I dont feel well. RE: Dranzer MS Article Attempt (Feedback Wanted!) - Sparta - Feb. 20, 2011 (Feb. 20, 2011 2:26 PM)LeonTempestXIII Wrote: You need to write in the present tense, not the past. i will look at it more in depth later. im a littoe sick today and I dont feel well.Sorry to hear that. Hope you feel better. And not sure if that's right....I'll check other beywiki articles and see. EDIT: You're right. I've fixed my article (though I doubt it will be accepted because Kai-V was here and warned me. She did not accept the article ) RE: Dranzer MS Article Attempt (Feedback Wanted!) - LeonTempest - Feb. 20, 2011 well thank you =D definatly an improvment. contact wiki mod Kei for mpre suggestions on what to do here. im not very familiar with this praticular bey why she warned you I have no clue... RE: Dranzer MS Article Attempt (Feedback Wanted!) - Kai-V - Feb. 20, 2011 I warned you because all you had writen originally was "ok.................." which is obviously SPAM. Someone was supposed to explain it to you as well because they asked me why you had been warned ... How does that mean that I did not accept this article when I clearly warned you for one post which was not the opening post ? RE: Dranzer MS Article Attempt (Feedback Wanted!) - Sparta - Feb. 21, 2011 (Feb. 20, 2011 10:26 PM)Kai-V Wrote: I warned you because all you had writen originally was "ok.................." which is obviously SPAM. Someone was supposed to explain it to you as well because they asked me why you had been warned ... How does that mean that I did not accept this article when I clearly warned you for one post which was not the opening post ? No no sorry my point was you visited the article and you didn't accept it. IDK jumped the gun I guess. RE: Dranzer MS Article Attempt (Feedback Wanted!) - BeyPhilosopher - Feb. 21, 2011 Bit Protector (BP): Dranzer Emblem The Bit-Protector of this beyblade is the Dranzer Emblem. It is the first mold version of Bit-Protectors. Attack Ring (AR): Spiral Upper The Dranzer MS Attack Ring, Spiral Upper, is an intriguing AR. Like many other Attack Rings from the past series of Dranzer beyblades, Spiral Upper features two "Dranzer Heads". Though, this time around, the Dranzer Heads feature multiple protrusions, and are meant for smash attack in left-spin and right-spin. The Metal Frame has two, small slopes that are meant for upper attack. The protrusions, however, are adjacent, thus forming a fairly compact AR. The versatility of Spiral Upper is overshadowed by its performance, which is very mediocre. The protrusions cause massive recoil, and don't supply very strong smash. The somewhat compactness is drastically hindered by the recoil caused by the spikes. Like said above, the slopes on the Metal Frame are quite short in comparison to other Upper Attack type Attack Rings, such as Circle Upper, thus making the Upper Attack relatively weak. Another obvious problem is that Upper must be in the same direction as the opposing bey, and the lack of any useful left-spin combos negates the use Upper Attack for this AR. Use In Attack Customization While easily outclassed by other parts such as Circle or Samurai Upper, Spiral Upper can best be used in the following combo: AR: Spiral Upper (Dranzer MS) WD: Circle Wide RC: Grip Flat Core (Ultimate Mode)(Dragoon MS UV) Despite the amazingly fast yet uncontrollable nature of Grip Flat Core (Ultimate Mode), it is necessary for this combo to have the fastest moving bottom available in order to put Spiral Upper's somewhat decent smash to its fullest potential. Switching to left-spin is necessary for the Upper Attack to work. Weight Disk (WD): Circle Balance See Circle Balance Running Core (RC): Manual Change Core Like many other numerous Dranzer blade bases in the Plastic Generation, Manual Change Core is a balance type Running Core, that has two modes: Survival and Attack. You can change between the two modes by pulling up or pushing down the tabs on the side of the RC. A sharp tip appears while the tabs are down. When the tabs are up, the tip is retracted, making a hole flat bottom, that is more vulnerable to knock outs, as it has less surface area with the stadium floor. This also causes the RC to self KO more, as it has less of a grip to the stadium floor. The Survival mode, just like the Attack mode, has many problems as well. Because the tabs are pushed down, the height of the RC is quite tall, thus increasing its chances of being destabilized and getting knocked off balance more than any other sharp tip. IMPORTANT: Mold Variations When Hasbro distributed its version of Dranzer MS, there was a mold difference with the running core. While the Takara version of the RC featured a rod that slowly progressed twice into a smaller rod at the base as to why it is so tall, Hasbro tried to fix this issue by making the Running Core's tabs slide down or up only once, in an attempt to create a smaller RC. While this makes it move faster, this decreases its overall spin time significantly. Overall Dranzer MS is full of balance parts that ironically, are all meant for multiple uses, but fail to meet up to expectations. Dranzer MS should only be bought for collection purposes. RE: Dranzer MS Article Attempt (Feedback Wanted!) - Sparta - Feb. 21, 2011 (Feb. 21, 2011 2:03 AM)Sequoia Wrote: Bit Protector (BP): Dranzer Emblem........wait where was the edit? RE: Dranzer MS Article Attempt (Feedback Wanted!) - Kai-V - Feb. 21, 2011 Kei is the Beywiki Director. Moreover, I really do not know much about the old series : all my knowledge is in Metal Fight Beyblade, generally. RE: Dranzer MS Article Attempt (Feedback Wanted!) - Sparta - Feb. 21, 2011 (Feb. 21, 2011 2:52 AM)Kai-V Wrote: Kei is the Beywiki Director. Moreover, I really do not know much about the old series : all my knowledge is in Metal Fight Beyblade, generally. Gotcha. Well, I PM'd Kei, so.... RE: Dranzer MS Article Attempt (Feedback Wanted!) - BeyPhilosopher - Feb. 21, 2011 Yikes, I edited my article draft already. RE: Dranzer MS Article Attempt (Feedback Wanted!) - Sparta - Feb. 21, 2011 (Feb. 21, 2011 5:32 AM)Sequoia Wrote: Yikes, I edited my article draft already. Are you giving me advice for my article? Or arre you writing your own?? Because it looksalot like the latter .... RE: Dranzer MS Article Attempt (Feedback Wanted!) - xXKaiouyaXx - Feb. 21, 2011 Why don't you stick to the beywiki famous beyblade fail slogan: There is little or no reason to buy this bey, aside from collection purposes. It sounds a lot better, that said, this article has very little depth to any of the statements made, such as how the two modes work, and there are multiple grammar issues. In the RC section for example, it's called a whole flat. The term I think your looking for is "hole flat" RE: Dranzer MS Article Attempt (Feedback Wanted!) - BeyPhilosopher - Feb. 21, 2011 (Feb. 21, 2011 6:56 PM)xXKaiouyaXx Wrote: Why don't you stick to the beywiki famous beyblade fail slogan: There is little or no reason to buy this bey, aside from collection purposes. It sounds a lot better, that said, this article has very little depth to any of the statements made, such as how the two modes work, and there are multiple grammar issues. In the RC section for example, it's called a whole flat. The term I think your looking for is "hole flat" That's why I created my own draft, sort of, to fix the errors. RE: Dranzer MS Article Attempt (Feedback Wanted!) - Sparta - Feb. 22, 2011 (Feb. 21, 2011 8:57 PM)Sequoia Wrote:(Feb. 21, 2011 6:56 PM)xXKaiouyaXx Wrote: Why don't you stick to the beywiki famous beyblade fail slogan: There is little or no reason to buy this bey, aside from collection purposes. It sounds a lot better, that said, this article has very little depth to any of the statements made, such as how the two modes work, and there are multiple grammar issues. In the RC section for example, it's called a whole flat. The term I think your looking for is "hole flat" Gotcha. Why thank you! RE: Dranzer MS Article Attempt (Feedback Wanted!) - BeyPhilosopher - Feb. 22, 2011 (Feb. 22, 2011 12:57 AM)Sparta Wrote:(Feb. 21, 2011 8:57 PM)Sequoia Wrote:(Feb. 21, 2011 6:56 PM)xXKaiouyaXx Wrote: Why don't you stick to the beywiki famous beyblade fail slogan: There is little or no reason to buy this bey, aside from collection purposes. It sounds a lot better, that said, this article has very little depth to any of the statements made, such as how the two modes work, and there are multiple grammar issues. In the RC section for example, it's called a whole flat. The term I think your looking for is "hole flat" Ya welcome. I'll give ya credit. RE: Dranzer MS Article Attempt (Feedback Wanted!) - Sparta - Feb. 22, 2011 (Feb. 22, 2011 12:59 AM)Sequoia Wrote:Ok. Well, I made numerous changes, combining some of your edits and some edits of my own. I think now it's really good! Maybe it will even make it to BeyWiki!(Feb. 22, 2011 12:57 AM)Sparta Wrote:(Feb. 21, 2011 8:57 PM)Sequoia Wrote:(Feb. 21, 2011 6:56 PM)xXKaiouyaXx Wrote: Why don't you stick to the beywiki famous beyblade fail slogan: There is little or no reason to buy this bey, aside from collection purposes. It sounds a lot better, that said, this article has very little depth to any of the statements made, such as how the two modes work, and there are multiple grammar issues. In the RC section for example, it's called a whole flat. The term I think your looking for is "hole flat" |