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Beyblade: Evolution [Not Accepting Characters ATM] - Tachimukai - Feb. 14, 2011
This is my new story. Enjoy!
This is set about 10 years after the happenings of Beyblade MFBE.
Beyblade Evolution!
Episode 1: The Exciting Beginning!
Kazemaru walked up the bridge. It was the bridge connecting North Sakusuko City with South Sakusuko City. Up head he heard a commotion of people.
"Go Shoot!" they all exclaimed, after laughing with enjoyment.
"Bladers..." Kazemaru said, to himself. He opened the case strapped onto his right arm. It cased his beyblade: Killer Unicorno D125B. He looked at it and the sun gleamed off its metal wheel.
He had a dark green jacket with the Unicorno Face Symbol on it. He wore dark trousers and wore a belt where he put his launcher in. He had a three segment launcher with beypointcard and a lightlauncher2.
He walked all the way to the stadium. He saw there a tall young man watching over the junior bladers. He had red hair and wore a bandana with a peculiar symbol on it.
"Uncle Ginga!" one of the junior bladers called. "How do I make my beyblade stronger?" he said in a cute way, showing the tall man his Clay Aquario 100D.
"Well, Aiko, you've perfected your launch technique and I think you are able to use the strong metal wheel 'Rock'." he said.
"Thanks Uncle Ginga!"
"So, who wants a hard battle?" Kazemaru said, drawing attention to himself, no-one had noticed him.
"ME!" all the juniors called.
"3...2...1...Go Shoot!" they all called. The first battle was Aiko - with his new Rock Aquario 100D - against Kazemaru.
"Your name is Kazemaru, you say?" Uncle Ginga said.
"And your name is Ginga Hagane? As in Pegasis and Ginga?"
"Yes indeed. I'm now 23 years old, and I teach youngsters how to blade."
"I'm only 12. I'm a travelling blader and I've just been in North Sakusuko City. Not an exciting place."
Unicorno was circling the stadium. Aquario was in the middle. "Hah! I have the stamina position! You can't touch me, Kazemaru!"
"My Unicorno is stronger than this!" Kazemaru called back. "Let's go Unicorno!" then Unicorno headed towards the edge of the stadium and soared through the air. It did a full circle and landed on Aquario.
"See, Aiko. This is the Gattyakki. Performed by only skilled bladers." Rock Aquario had lost too much valuable spin time.
"Alright, finishing move! Unicorno Double Horn Strike!" A perfect knockout and it was a stadium out.
"A win under my belt." Kazemaru said.
"Wow, you're pretty good." Uncle Ginga said.
"Thanks Mr Hagane!"
"Please, call me Ginga. Or you could call me your rival, since the next battle will be you against me!"
"Seriously!? Cool!"
"3...2...1...Go Shoot!"
But who will win this battle? Will Ginga carry the skills he had put to use a decade before? Or will our new character Kazemaru and Unicorno become victorious? And what beyblade exactly is Ginga using? Find out in Episode 2!
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So did you like it? Post your comments about it. The poll is for you to decide exactly what beyblade Ginga should use. Whatever you choose, even if it may be Pre-HWS Pegasis, I will always mold the story to fit the circumstances. The poll will timeout in three days, and that is when I will post the next episode. If nobody posts here or posts on the poll, I will not do episode 2 at that date.
RE: Beyblade: Evolution - Musica - Feb. 14, 2011
Ok well I think its pretty good but you need some improvement
RE: Beyblade: Evolution - Vulcan Blaze - Feb. 14, 2011
That was a great story! If you are accepting characters, here is one-
Name: Jomi Nikeria
Appearance: Blue sweatshirt with a badge that says WBBA on it. Underneath the jacket is a orange and yellow jersey that also says WBBA on it. He wears shorts that are made out of jersey. He wears blue,yellow, and orange cleats and green laces. The WBBA logo is sewed onto it. He has an brown skin tone, dark brown eyes, and black semi-long hair. Wears contacts.
Personality: Very clever, and sneaky, but does not use his sneakiness in his battle strategy. Instead he watches carefully what moves his opponent uses and counters it. He is kind to his friend but loves to play pranks on everybody, including them.
Beyblade and Launcher: Launcher grip is a 3 segment launcher that is green. It also has a WBBA logo on it. His actual launcher is a string launcher that is green with a blue string. He has a golden pointer and angle compass. His beyblade is Decagon Lynx 230MB. The Decagon wheel is in the shape of a decagon. Lynx wheel looks like a big explosion.
Special Moves: Ultimate Solar Blast- Creates a big solar ray that strikes the opponent. Inferno Flame Ball- bey turns into a giant flame ball and attacks the opponent. Aerial Power Strike- bey jumps into the air and attacks opponents bey with great power.
RE: Beyblade: Evolution - Light Yagami - Feb. 14, 2011
the story pretty good
RE: Beyblade: Evolution - EarthEagle2813 - Feb. 15, 2011
great story i like how you put characters from the show into your story
RE: Beyblade: Evolution - Tachimukai - Feb. 15, 2011
(Feb. 14, 2011 11:53 PM)masamuneunicorn Wrote: That was a great story! If you are accepting characters, here is one-
Name: Jomi Nikeria
Appearance: Blue sweatshirt with a badge that says WBBA on it. Underneath the jacket is a orange and yellow jersey that also says WBBA on it. He wears shorts that are made out of jersey. He wears blue,yellow, and orange cleats and green laces. The WBBA logo is sewed onto it. He has an brown skin tone, dark brown eyes, and black semi-long hair. Wears contacts.
Personality: Very clever, and sneaky, but does not use his sneakiness in his battle strategy. Instead he watches carefully what moves his opponent uses and counters it. He is kind to his friend but loves to play pranks on everybody, including them.
Beyblade and Launcher: Launcher grip is a 3 segment launcher that is green. It also has a WBBA logo on it. His actual launcher is a string launcher that is green with a blue string. He has a golden pointer and angle compass. His beyblade is Decagon Lynx 230MB. The Decagon wheel is in the shape of a decagon. Lynx wheel looks like a big explosion.
Special Moves: Ultimate Solar Blast- Creates a big solar ray that strikes the opponent. Inferno Flame Ball- bey turns into a giant flame ball and attacks the opponent. Aerial Power Strike- bey jumps into the air and attacks opponents bey with great power.
Accepted. I guess the MB bottom is Metal Ball? Well, it can't be Muffin Broom can itXD!
This person will become another main character. Jomi will appear in Episode 3.
Here are a the first three character bios!
So far, most votes for Older Ginga's bey is Big Bang Pegasis. One person voted for Pre-HWS Pegasis. Nobody voted for Storm Pegasis and two votes for Ginga still keeping his Galaxy Pegasis.
Name:Kazemaru Katashiko
Age: 12
Beyblade and Launcher: Killer Unicorno D125B - LightLauncher2 and BeyPointCard on Green 3-Seg Launcher.
Description: He has blue spiky hair and wears a green jacket. On his jacket he wears the Unicorno symbol. He has black trousers with lightning bolt symbol. He has a very friendly personality, and despite his happy-go-lucky attitude, he is a very serious and skilled blader.
Name: Ginga Hagane
Age: 23
Beyblade and Launcher: Bey Unknown right now - YOU DECIDE on poll! Launcher - Blue 3-Seg Launcher with Blue Beylauncher and BeyPointCard.
Description: Once a legendary blader, always a legendary blader! This older Ginga Hagane is very tall, with the same firey hair and blue bandana. He now carries a Junior Beybladers Class, where he teaches young bladers the ins and outs of blading. He also carries around a black briefcase which holds his beyblade, his launcher, and a load of spare parts. He is now very interested in Bey Mechanics.
Name: Aiko Takashi
Age: 9
Beyblade and Launcher: Rock Aquario 100D, BeyPointer on a LightLauncher1.
Description: He has red t-shirt and yellow shorts. His hair is brown and wavy on his head. Under the wing of Ginga - whom he calls Uncle Ginga - he learns to become a great blader, maybe even part of the Japan Team...?
RE: Beyblade: Evolution [Accepting Characters] - Kadoya - Feb. 15, 2011
hope this helps
Name:Axel
Bey: Velocity Axelblaze F135I
Look
avatar).Bey Description: the Velocity wheel is Grey and is shaped like Fire in the outside and some rays near the middle in the inside. The clear wheel is Black and is a Flame. F135I(Fireblaze 135 ) is a Red 135 with 12 Flames on it . I(Indistructible) is a WHIRLFIRE. The facebolt is red with a Black blaze best and Flames behind. Is a very powerfull bey, and one of the strongest. Is so strong that even Ryuga thinks he may lose and gets worried, the bey has a way to strike fear in opponents and will crush beys.
Special Move: Eruption Fireblaze. Flames appear in the stadium and then Velocity Axelblaze Makes a giant Fireblaze . The blaze in his track get bigger.
Mirrored world:Axelblaze attacks from all directions but the real one is in the air, after all hit the other bey the real bey charges down for a final attack!
He is a good guy!
RE: Beyblade: Evolution [Accepting Characters] - Synth - Feb. 15, 2011
Here's one for ya!
Name:lily naga
gender:girl
bey:great phoenix ph145rf(punching,rubber flat)
special:great fireworks(bey starts to glow,then shoots out tons of flame and its wheel)
side good
RE: Beyblade: Evolution [Accepting Characters] - Tachimukai - Feb. 15, 2011
Shuya your character is accepted.
CyberPegasis98 your character is also accepted.
These bladers, along with the previous masamuneunicorn's character will all be part of the China Team. There will be a International Tournament in this story, if you haven't already guessed.
So far Big Bang Pegasis is winning!
RE: Beyblade: Evolution [Accepting Characters] - Vulcan Blaze - Feb. 15, 2011
(Feb. 15, 2011 4:41 PM)Kazemaru Wrote: Shuya your character is accepted.Hey, can my guy be the team's captain?
CyberPegasis98 your character is also accepted.
These bladers, along with the previous masamuneunicorn's character will all be part of the China Team. There will be a International Tournament in this story, if you haven't already guessed.
So far Big Bang Pegasis is winning!
RE: Beyblade: Evolution [Accepting Characters] - Glad Hatter - Feb. 15, 2011
I'm bored so here's one character.
Name: Jackson
Gender: is obviously male
Bey: Lunar Raven (or Corus) AGBD 145 (Armor Gravity Bowl Defense) WSD (Wide Semi Defense).
Special attacks:Lunar barrage, which is when Lunar Raven's speed increases rotation and glows black to give the illusion of it disappearing and then it starts it's attack run by making a figure 8 then switching to a flower pattern while attacking viciously. Solar Eclipse, when lunar raven moves to the middle of the stadium and then emits waves of energy out in walls to defend itself while pushing the opponent away from itself. Lunar eclipse, is when the lunar raven (usually after solar eclipse) Is in the center and balances out to unleash significantly smaller waves of energy and waits for the opponent to attack. once the the enemy is near enough it emits a strong series of energy waves under itself to launch itself into the air with the opposing bey and then making a quick flip it smashes the opposing bey into the stadium floor using it's tip.
sorry for the long details on the three special attacks.
Character personality: He is good tempered, good humored, and a team player. He only uses his ultimate special attack (lunar barrage) when he has to. He is also a masamune wanna be. (like sora is with ginga)
Country: USA
Team: Genesis Bladers.
RE: Beyblade: Evolution [Accepting Characters] - Tachimukai - Feb. 15, 2011
(Feb. 15, 2011 9:18 PM)masamuneunicorn Wrote:(Feb. 15, 2011 4:41 PM)Kazemaru Wrote: Shuya your character is accepted.Hey, can my guy be the team's captain?
CyberPegasis98 your character is also accepted.
These bladers, along with the previous masamuneunicorn's character will all be part of the China Team. There will be a International Tournament in this story, if you haven't already guessed.
So far Big Bang Pegasis is winning!
Sure, why not?