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In Weal and Woe - Roan - Jan. 25, 2011
You know the deal... I should probably just make one individual thread for these since I've been posting so many of them lately, but eh... Threads disappear so quickly in this forum! I think the Your Creations forum gets more posts than any of the other General boards.
ANYWAY... Comments, critiques, etc. always appreciated!
"In Weal and Woe"
Please don't stir; I don't wish to wake from this dream
Wherein everything lies peaceful and still
Frozen among the silence sewn at the seams
By the power of my unwavering will
Drifting upon an ethereal thread
Locked away in an impregnable place
Adorned with the words that never need be said
For they are swimming freely across my face
And as we entwine, becoming one in weal
The levee will begin to ebb and crumble
Until I fall bare before you and I feel
At once liberated; free and humble
The veil between reality and dreams
Upon waking has been abruptly distinguished
And despite the grateful tears I shed in streams
I know our love will never be extinguished
RE: In Weal and Woe - Nano - Jan. 25, 2011
I really liked it! 100 out of 10! Nice job Roan.
RE: In Weal and Woe - abhicherath - Jan. 25, 2011
wow roan u rock i'll be putting up a poem in a few hours be sure to check it out as well