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the wave - abhicherath - Jan. 23, 2011
i am a wave travelling undaunted across oceans
know the ocean and its floor
only to one day clash with the shore
the shore's a mighty warrior
and not one wave has passed that barrier
but yet i enjoy the journey that leads to certain death
for death i do not forever fret
death shall be when it shall
why then,poison life with its miserable crawl
the sun shines,the moon glows
i move in the direction in which the tide flows
at its mercy i live
and at its command i shall give;
my life with that of hundreds besides
while the moon glows or the sun shines
-abhishek cherath
im eleven years old so this is kinda surprising,b'coz its kinda sad.and short
RE: the wave - Ga' - Jan. 23, 2011
It's pretty good. You could chat with Roan about poetry, and pick up some tips.
RE: the wave - ƛnubis - Jan. 23, 2011
i like it it is a very good poem
RE: the wave - abhicherath - Jan. 24, 2011
thanks and ga'hooleone i will when i can catch him online, last time i was too nervous, him being a mod and all
thanks and i will ga'hooleone when i can catch him online, last time i was too nervous him being a mod and all
RE: the wave - Janstarblast - Mar. 12, 2011
A very good poem abhi!!!!!
RE: the wave - ThunderHockey#1 - Mar. 17, 2011
That is a very good poem.