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my story - abhicherath - Jan. 23, 2011
hey guys i'll post a chapter every day except when my internet stops working.
chapter1
the beginning
my name is felivan and i live in garada,it is a peaceful little village where sages often come to meditate,we also play a lot with beyblades,i own a fang l-drago, which i found on the peak of mount god,i am the only person who dares to climb mount god as only the chosen one can go,and that one is me.
today there was a tournament in our village ,there was a max power launcher 3 as the first prize and it could be used for both left and right spinning beys,which was great because till now i was using a little left string launcher and my friends were all using power launchers, second prize was an angle automatic 2, which could auto angle your beys for full power.there was no 3rd prize.
when i went to the tournament,i discovered that my first battle was against darat,the official bey leader of our village,i was like"oh drat what am i supposed to do", but i battled anyway...
the end of this chapter,next time the battle between darat and felivan.
RE: my story - the hms master - Jan. 23, 2011
cool
RE: my story - abhicherath - Jan. 23, 2011
thanks and oh i'm taking requests
RE: my story - NitroNeo - Jan. 23, 2011
Nice story , but there are areas for improvement as when i read this it just clicked it is a story mixture of Gingas childhood & Rays past hm.. make it a bit different
RE: my story - abhicherath - Jan. 23, 2011
listen dude its totally different just wait for the next chapter
spoiler:tragedy alert and evil hero
RE: my story - abhicherath - Jan. 24, 2011
sorry for the bump anyways here is the next chapter
chapter 2
the unknown power
DJ:and know for the first battle between darat and felivan,lemme hear the cheers
crowd:darat,darat
DJ:darat's bey is the infamous screw sagittario and felivan will battle with his fang l-drago
DJ:now for the battle 3,2,1
felivan:let it rip
darat:let it rip
the beys collided in mid air but both fell back into the stadium.
DJ:what do we have here, looks like a mid air clash,this is one exciting battle
the beys collided again and again,but sagittario seemed to be winning,felivan was in panic and he did something he had never done before,he used l-drago's special move.
felivan:go l-drago special move ultimate fang slash
l-drago's metal wheel suddenly enlarged and started to glow with black energy, felivan too had a black aura around him
felivan:hahahhaha,i am unbeatable,go l-draaagooo
l-drago smacked sagittario and threw it out of the stadium
DJ:wow that was quick,oh no what...
felivan faints, the WBBA crew give him some medicine and he is soon awake again
felivan:what about the tournament
darat:its over,kid you realize that that was black energy you were using there,don't do it again,don't let l-drago's black energy corrupt your soul..
felivan:shut up loser,l_drago's not bad that was merely the colour black..
darat:you don't understand
a black aura surrounds felivan
darat:no stop!!
felivan:you say bad things about l-drago you get your soul sucked out of you.hahhahahahhaha
darat's face pales...
felivan draws in darat's soul and kills him,the WBBA squad who had been watching silently ..fled.