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Brandon's Story - BrandonW. - Jan. 20, 2011
Here's the first chapter,before I begin,I'm only in grade 7 so yeah... I might not use proper grammar at times,though I try to do so.
Sorry it's so short,and ill be taking Character and Bey ideas,please PM them,and please MAKE THEM NEAT,or I'm not going to accept them at all
Chapter One
"Hiroshi and The Sun"
Hello,you might be wondering who I am,my name is Hiroshi,Hiro for short
,I have a great passion for beyblading,even though my clothes may seem ragged,I'm not what you expect.You see,I'm what you call a traveling blader,I travel the world in search of my greatest rival.I only have one person with me well,not really a human,a spirit,well my bey,Poseidon.[HEY YOU!]
"Huh?" I blurted out as someone pulled my elbow.
"HEY!You were on the T.V.!I saw you,you have one of the highest beypoints I've ever seen!" said a little boy with a puffy jacket.
When he glared at me,I saw true bey-spirit which I haven't felt in a long time,I let out a grin,when he offered me a bey battle.
"Me and my bey,Ra!"His glistening gold beys face showed Ra,the sun god of Egypt.
"Alright give it your best shot!"I yelled joyfully.
"Cmon! 3!"
"I'm ready! 2"
"ONE!Let it rip!!!"
As our beys touched sparks flew right by, it reminded me about my days as a child,he is quite a good challenger,one of the strongest I've seen in quite awhile.
We both unleashed out beys,a great power came shooting out,the light was almost blinding,and I saw it,a phoenix,the god of the sun,Ra.
Stream Poseidon HP85CWF
Stream: 8,3 horned tridents around a metal wheel
Poseidon: 2 blue wings in the shape of a wave
HP85: Harpoon a free spiningtrack with 2 spear-tips on a ring
CWF: Coat Wide Flat CS with wide flat instead of sharp
Ignite Ra F145SL
Ignite: 5 golden wings in a upper slope position
Ra: A yellow flaming wheel
F145: Flare has a gimmick to re-balance a bey when it is tipped over
SL: Slide,sort of a wide ball but has a metal tip in the middle,it makes the upper slopes work in a defensive combo
RE: Brandon's Story - Minidona - Jan. 20, 2011
hi good story and.... can i be in your story.
Character:
Name: Briel
Bey: Green Libra 100WB ( Green is like rock but bigger and green)
Description: He is like 14. He is a very strong blader and wants to get much stronger. Libra comes from the sky and sice Briel found it he wears all green: Green jacket, green pants, greenshoes, green hair, green skin.
Special move: Green tornado. The bey makes a green tornado making all things green and then blow the opponent bey away.
thats all
RE: Brandon's Story - BrandonW. - Jan. 21, 2011
(Jan. 20, 2011 12:11 PM)brielyranger Wrote: hi good story and.... can i be in your story.Hi briely,I'm glad that you have contributed to my story,I was thinking no one would like it. XD
Character:
Name: Briel
Bey: Green Libra 100WB ( Green is like rock but bigger and green)
Description: He is like 14. He is a very strong blader and wants to get much stronger. Libra comes from the sky and sice Briel found it he wears all green: Green jacket, green pants, greenshoes, green hair, green skin.
Special move: Green tornado. The bey makes a green tornado making all things green and then blow the opponent bey away.
thats all
By the way,you can make up your own tracks and stuff if you want,just give a quick description
well,if you have any more ideas PM me