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Ga's story: In All But Blood - Ga' - Jan. 20, 2011

Chapter 1: The Infant Stage (Click to View)



RE: Ga's story: In All But Blood/DragonHeart - Light Yagami - Jan. 20, 2011

this looks very intresting.


RE: Ga's story: In All But Blood/DragonHeart - Ga' - Jan. 20, 2011

(Jan. 20, 2011  1:55 PM)darkangelkaieru Wrote: this looks very intresting.

Thank you! It gets much better, believe me.


RE: Ga's story: In All But Blood/DragonHeart - Amaterasu - Jan. 20, 2011

i like it. and why does this part remind me of my story?
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RE: Ga's story: In All But Blood/DragonHeart - Ga' - Jan. 21, 2011

(Jan. 20, 2011  11:12 PM)Ra Wrote: i like it. and why does this part remind me of my story?
title Wrote:Ga's story:

Because my nickname is Ga? I didn't even see the resemblance until you pointed it out. lol XD . What a coincidence.


RE: Ga's story: In All But Blood/DragonHeart - Ga' - Jan. 21, 2011

Chapter 1 part 2 will be coming up very soon!! Hopefully today/tomorrow!

EDIT: I'm sorry, those who are actually bothering to read this, but this is Midterm week, and I've been cracking down on my subjects for my midterms. I'm also a bit low on creativity. I have the general gist of the plot, but putting in filler dialogue is difficult...


RE: Ga's story: In All But Blood/DragonHeart - Ga' - Jan. 24, 2011

I'm almost done typing up the second part, and part 2 chapter 1 will most likely be up today! yeah!


RE: Ga's story: In All But Blood/DragonHeart - Ga' - Jan. 24, 2011

Part 2 of Chapter 1 is up! It's really good! Please! This story needs more readers! And I've added a poll too!


RE: Ga's story: In All But Blood/DragonHeart - Light Yagami - Jan. 25, 2011

i love this story its amazing it should be turned into a book i LLLLOOOOOOVVVVVVVVVVVEEEEE IIIIITTTTTTTT


RE: Ga's story: In All But Blood/DragonHeart - Ga' - Jan. 25, 2011

Thanks! I'm hoping to do that actually!


RE: Ga's story: In All But Blood/DragonHeart - Light Yagami - Jan. 25, 2011

well you should because it is AWESOME.i am now the number 1 fan of this story
you story is now 5 stars


RE: Ga's story: In All But Blood/DragonHeart - Ga' - Jan. 25, 2011

Thanks! I appreciate it. It takes time to think up the other stuff that builds the plot.


RE: Ga's story: In All But Blood/DragonHeart - aries blader - Jan. 27, 2011

This story i the most epic thing i've ever read! (And i think mine are good) ;O;


RE: Ga's story: In All But Blood/DragonHeart - Ga' - Jan. 27, 2011

Thank you! I really appreciate the high ratings people! I just want more readers, is all. And can you vote in my poll? Thanks!


RE: Ga's story: In All But Blood/DragonHeart - Kavasiki - Jan. 29, 2011

Entertaning indeed. You can really describe the environment so it's easy to imagen and I don't even get lost Tongue_out


RE: Ga's story: In All But Blood/DragonHeart - Ga' - Jan. 29, 2011

(Jan. 29, 2011  12:40 AM)Kavasiki Wrote: Entertaning indeed. You can really describe the environment so it's easy to imagen and I don't even get lost Tongue_out

I was trying to describe it using imagery to "paint a picture" in the readers' heads. And how do you get lost? You mean with the location switching, by my bolded headlines?


RE: Ga's story: In All But Blood/DragonHeart - Ga' - Jan. 29, 2011

I have finally got ideas for Part 3, ending Chapter 1! I'm writing it now! It should be up within the week.


RE: Ga's story: In All But Blood/DragonHeart - Amaterasu - Jan. 30, 2011

Tip:never put a like it poll or jaems will always put the worst


RE: Ga's story: In All But Blood/DragonHeart - Ga' - Feb. 01, 2011

I added a small part of chapter 3 into part 2 because I misplaced it. It's the last part before the scene switches to the human medical center with Angela dying.


RE: Ga's story: In All But Blood/DragonHeart - Sparta - Feb. 01, 2011

What a great story! I will be checking back here often for updates.


RE: Ga's story: In All But Blood/DragonHeart - iMtehAwesome - Feb. 02, 2011

Very Good =D


RE: Ga's story: In All But Blood/DragonHeart - LordCepheusIII - Feb. 08, 2011

This is a good story. XD


RE: Ga's story: In All But Blood/DragonHeart - Zepharo - Feb. 08, 2011

wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Its kinda good but it needs more effect to make it shine or fly like a hawk!!!!!!!1


RE: Ga's story: In All But Blood/DragonHeart - The Fire Wyrm - Feb. 08, 2011

Pretty good for an earthbound.


RE: Ga's story: In All But Blood/DragonHeart - Ga' - Feb. 08, 2011

^Hah. I can appreciate that.
(Kai-V's got me too! Tongue_out_wink)