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Some kind of blading story (Vote On Poll!!) (Accepting Character Requests!) - Dread★Shooter - Jan. 19, 2011
PROLOGUE
In a future where the world is ruled by Beyblading...
There was a legendary bey who was so powerful, it had to be sealed.
Then one day, a boy opened its Seal and released it into the world!!
CHAPTER ONE
My name is Ryo Kusanagi. Im 10 years old and my family are all into blading Until That one day... My brother, Ryo Tajime, went missing. My dad thought somebody kidnapped him out of jealousy. Since then, Beyblading was forbidden in our house.
A year has passed since that fateful day, and we were celebrating my 11th birthday.
When suddenly...
CRRASSH!!
Dad: What The **** Was That??!!
From what i can see, a thief entered our house. I closed my eyes because i was too scared. When i opened my eyes, my dad was already kept hostage by the thief.
Me: Noooooo!!! Why does this have to happen to me! *sob* *sob*
Thief: This is a robbery! give me all your money!!
Me: O-okay....
Before i could give him the wallet, my dad shouted.
Dad: Kyo!! Open the present! Open it now!!
I looked left and saw the present dad gave me, i ran into it then i ripped the box out.
I was shocked there was a Beyblade inside it.
Me: Maybe with this....
Dad: Launch It NOW!!
Me: Urk.. Three, Two, One, Go Shooot!!!
The bey spin around the house at an insanely fast speed. And before i know it, The thief was already hit by the bey and escaped.
Thief: Heh, pretty good. Here's a present from me, Boy!
The thief threw a knife onto my dad. It stabbed him in his back.
Me; D..Dad? Dad? Dad?! Noooo!!!
Dad: *pant* *pant* Heh.. I'm a alright son. Now listen to my last words...
Me: Huh?
Dad: 2 Years from now, Go to the tournament, you.. will... find... your destiny there.....
My dad died and i Screamed in grief to the heavens.
Me: *sob* *sob* O-Okay Dad. I'll be the strongest blader in the world!!!
CHAPTER ONE END
RE: Some kind of blading story (Vote On Poll!!) (Accepting Character Requests!) - Minidona - Jan. 19, 2011
Name: Briel
Beblade: Green Libra 100 WB ( Green Is like rock but bigger and green ) The bey is all green.
Special Move: Green Tornado. Libra makes a green tornado turning all things green and blowing the opponent bey away.
Look: He is obssesed with green. Green hair (hair is like ginka's), Green T shirt, Green jeans, Green shoes, Green skin.
He is a very strong blader and wants to get even stronger. He play all the time but when is time to get serius he get serius. And he is very very smart. He is good
Story:
Briel is 13 year old. From little he is beyblading. His bey was flame libra. When he was 6 there was a big explotion in his town and his fathers die. Since then he have been around the world beyblading and getting strong. In a town Green Libra felt from the sky hit him in the head. Flame libra disapered. When trainign with the very powerfull Green Libra 100WB the bey caused an explotion that turn him green.
Since then he uses his clothes all green.
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RE: Some kind of blading story (Vote On Poll!!) (Accepting Character Requests!) - Dread★Shooter - Jan. 19, 2011
KK He's In
Green Skin?
RE: Some kind of blading story (Vote On Poll!!) (Accepting Character Requests!) - Flamegiraffe - Jan. 19, 2011
I will make a character request if you make one on my thread Daniel's Journey.
I keep my words so here it is
Name: Blake Sigaiee
beyblade: Electric Lacerta you can make his track and tip whatever you want
special move electric dash lacerta gets all sparky and hits the opposing beyblade
side: good
look: wears a yellow jacket does not zip and a orange undershirt has spiky blonde hair
RE: Some kind of blading story (Vote On Poll!!) (Accepting Character Requests!) - howdodelete - Jan. 19, 2011
I like chapter one.I wanna hear more.
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Name:Reiki Hiwazara
Age:11
Clothes:A gray t-shirt with the Aries symbol on it,A gray and white hoodie,black jeans with a chain,a belt that holds his launcher grip and bey,black hair,a WBBA cap,glasses,and white and black slip on shoes.
Bey
arth Aries DF145WDSpecial Move:Iron Ram Attack,the bey turns into solid steel and hits the opponent out of the stadium.
Side:Good
RE: Some kind of blading story (Vote On Poll!!) (Accepting Character Requests!) - Dread★Shooter - Jan. 19, 2011
Chapter II will be up Later today.
I need a bad guy to continue, could somebody post one???
RE: Some kind of blading story (Vote On Poll!!) (Accepting Character Requests!) - Odin - Jan. 19, 2011
May I make a critique of the story? I cannot help but think that this story reads like the script of a movie. Also, where did the thief get the knife? And how did his dad know about a tournament that would transpire in two years. Sorry, I'm not trying to be a troll or anything like that, but I wanted to make a suggestion. Anyway, here's a character who is evil:
Alias: Syren
Gender: Female
Bey: Rage Syren GB145SD
Bio: Member of the "Syren Corp," an evil group of bladers who destroy opposing beyblades and take the metal wheels.
Appearance: Short, white hair with red eyes, wears camoflauge (did I spell that right?) cargo pants, black T-shirt with a skull on it, and combat boots.
RE: Some kind of blading story (Vote On Poll!!) (Accepting Character Requests!) - Dread★Shooter - Jan. 19, 2011
Thanks for the critique, and your character is in
CHAPTER II: The Qualifiers
Me: Huh, its been two years already since dad passed away... i think he told me to do something today, but i cant remember....
*flashback*
Dad: 2 Years from now, Go to the tournament, you.. will... find... your destiny there.....
*flashback ends*
Me: Oh, i forgot about that tournament.
Reiki: Yo, What's up Ryo?
Me: Huh, its you again, Reiki.
Reiki: What are you doing?
Me: Just cleaning up my house.
Reiki: How about a beybattle?
Me: When, now?
Reiki: Yeah, here and now.
Me: Alright then.
I rushed back to my room, then came back with my bey.
Me: *pant* *pant* I'm ready.
Reiki: Alright! Lets battle!
Me: 3!
Reiki:2!
Both:1!
Goooo Shoooooot!!!
Me: Go Tremor Amaterasu! Thunder Break!!
A Giant Lightning Appeared And Striked Reiki's Bey, Earth Aries DF145WD
Reiki: Heh, Pretty good! But now its my turn!
Me: show me what you've got!
Both beys begin to circle the stadium at opposite directions. Then They Make contact, the force of the crash launched both beys out of the stadium.
Both: Oh No!
Me: It's not over yet! Blazing Shot!
A large stream of flame was lunched towards the stadium from midair
Reiki: Whoooa! That one's big! But my Aries is more agile than what you think!
Aries dodged the flames with amazing speed. None of the flames hit it.
Reiki: Aries! Iron Ram attack!!!
Reiki's bey hit my midair bey smashing it out of the stadium.
Reiki: Heh, i win!
Me: That Was a fun battle!
Not long after, Briel and blake appeared.
Briel: Hey Ryo! have you forgotten about the tournament? It's Today!
Blake: Yeah! were gonna be late if you dont hurry up.
Me: Okay, gimme a minute to get changed.
Soon enough, I was ready, and my team headed for the tournament
Me: Dad, I'm going to find my destiny!
RE: Some kind of blading story (Vote On Poll!!) (Accepting Character Requests!) - Flamegiraffe - Jan. 24, 2011
Great chapter and whatever you want track and tip to be.
RE: Some kind of blading story (Vote On Poll!!) (Accepting Character Requests!) - Kujikato - Feb. 23, 2011
Name: Izuma Inzori
BeyBlade: starts with: Silent Ninja MSBSCH85RHF/RS, final form is: Silent Samurai MKSCH85 WRHF/RWD
BeyBlade description:
Face: A shuriken in the middle, between two kantanas and the writing SAMURAI for Silent Samurai and NINJA for Silent Ninja (color: all decals black on silver background)
Silent: think of Lightning with the multi hit mode (renamed Rapid Strike mode) as thick shurikens, and upper mode (renamed Slice mode) as a kantana (color: un-painted)
Samurai: think of Kerbecs + L-Drago I with the 'rings' as shurikens and the dragon heads as kantanas (color; silver)
Ninja: same as Samurai except that the dragon heads are shaped like kunai (color: silver)
MKSCH85: Metal Kantana Spring Change Height 8.5mm – 11.0mm, same as MSBSCH85 except that the Shuriken Blade is changed with 4 kantanas (color: translucent silver for the plastic, un-painted metal for the “bladesâ€)
MSBSCH85: Metal Shuriken Blade Spring Change Height 8.5mm-11mm, think of CH120 with an external shell resembling a shuriken made of metal, when lose, MSBSCH85 can bounce due to the spring within the core of MSBSCH85.
RHF/RS: Rubber Hole Flat / Rubber Sharp (can change during combat at Izuma’s command)
WRHF/RWD: Wide Rubber Hole Flat / Rubber Wide Defense (can change during combat at Izuma’s command (color: translucent silver for plastic, black for the rubber))
Super attacks:
Level 1: “Silent death,†Silent Samurai disappears and hits opponent with a million kunai and shuriken and kantanas
Level 2: “100 Slices of The Samurais’’,†the Metal Shuriken shell on MSBSCH85 swells and smashes the opponent’s bey 100 times, on the 99th time, Silent Ninja halts and circles the stadium 10 times, cheating a black hurricane that flips the opposing bey out of the stadium with a insanely powerful smash from Silent Samurai.
Level X: “Infinite Blade†Samurai appears and slices at the opponent’s bey with such speed and power that the opposing bey instantly stops and flies out of the stadium 10 meters away, breaking it in half. (Last resort, can only be used three times in a year!)
BeyBlade Type: Attack/Defense
Spin Direction: Left
Character bio: Boy, wears Black Armani Exchange T-Shirt with black GUESS jeans and a silver cloak with black flames (cloak is based on Minato from NARUTO) clothes all the time, helpful and cool, classmates are jealous of him. When he promises something, you can guarantee that he will keep it unless it has anything to do with murder or theft.
Age: 12 years as of February 27, 2011
RE: Some kind of blading story (Vote On Poll!!) (Accepting Character Requests!) - Tachimukai - Feb. 23, 2011
Pretty good. It is a script right?
Well anyway here's a character!
Name: Kazemaru Katashiko
Age: 12
Beyblade: Pisces D125BS and Pisces 90XF
Description: He is a very confusing guy. He switches between two egos, one good and one evil. When he is not evil, he is probably the most friendly guy everyone knows. He usually uses a very defensive style of blading with his Pisces D125BS, but sometimes - very awkwardly and very suddenly - his eyes turn a sinister colour. This is when his attitude changes and he becomes ruthless in his blading. This switch always occurs in a beyblade match, or when he is training. When he suddenly changes in a battle, his Pisces D125BS suddenly glows dark blue and changes into a very offensive Pisces 90XF. Basically when he is good he is on defense and when he is evil he is on offense. But one day, in a beyblade battle (maybe in that tournament) he is defeated by his opponent and thus his evil alter ego and Pisces 90XF is destroyed. Then he forever becomes good and uses his Pisces D125BS with no changing.
One Special Thing About Him: He enjoys soccer a lot.