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Daniel's Journey - Flamegiraffe - Jan. 17, 2011
Chapter 1 The Darkness Dragoon Goooooooooooooooooooooooo rock pegasus!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Enemy: That rock pegasus is no match for my earthquake Constrictor special move earthquake attack. A huge pit is under rock pegasus and Rock Pegasus falls into it and it with rock pegasus in it the ground shakes and shakes and finally rock pegasus stops spinning and is destroyed.Daniel: You destroyed my beyblade. Enemy: It was too weak to even be a beyblade. Daniel: Why can't there be any good beyblades? Then he trips over something, he gets up and sees a darkness dragoon!
He pick it up and it says "For Daniel". He runs home and opens it to see 5 parts. First he picks up the facebolt that has a picture of a black dragoon with wings.Second he picks up the energy ring a purple and black circle with stripes that look like sharp nails. Third he picks up the wheel a metal wheel with 4 curved claws.
The spin track is a black transparent propeller with tiny little spikes.
Nothing special about the tip just a metal flat.
he builds the top and realizes he can participate in the tournament and be recognized as a professional beyblader. To get started he gets a old pot and puts the beyblade on the launcher and yells "Three, Two, One, Let It Rip!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Darkness dragoon falls of the launcher and goes in the pot at a very fast speed. "Oh yeah," he says as he picks his beyblade from the stadium, "I just need to practice until the tournament starts and I will win that tournament. After that he trains a little more and says Let It Rip!!!!!! I will need characters so please tell me ideas.
RE: Daniel's Journey - Ga' - Jan. 17, 2011
uhhh... a bit sudden, try to use more transitions.
very short too. This story is okay, try to develop your writing skills a bit more.
RE: Daniel's Journey - Flamegiraffe - Jan. 18, 2011
Chapter 2 More, and more training.
Daniel: Why doesn't my Darkness dragoon get any stronger? I pull the string as hard as I can and the beyblade just spins around the pot for 30 seconds and stops. Maybe I should see my friend Brian. So he goes to Brian's house KNOCK, Knock. Ethan: Hey Daniel what's up? Daniel: I need help beyblading, I let it rip in a pot and it goes around for 30 seconds. Ethan: Don't worry I'll help you come on you know you have your own stadium. They go in his backyard beyblade. Ethan: I'll finish you off in one move special move burn giraffe burning fire attack! burn Giraffe is covered in fire and hits dragoon in the air. Daniel: Special move dark shredding tornado and attacks burn giraffe r145 wd out of the stadium. Ethan: I lost. Daniel: Now can you help me become a better beyblader? Ethan: Your already ready the tournament is tommorow. Daniel: Well I will meet you tommorow at the tournament. When Daniel is home he sees his Dad injured because his mom died a long time ago. Daniel: Dad what happened to you? His dad is talking with is final breath. Dad: This person just came and asked me where Darkness Dragoon was and if I didn't tell he will kill me. Daniel: Why didn't you tell him? Dad: You are a chosen one and here take this key. It opens a door that has enough food and water for a lifetime and a stadium. You must beat him at the tournament and stop his evil ways now go and save yourself. His dad dies. So Daniel goes to the room and trains for the tournament. Daniel: I will stop that evil person and avenge my father Darkness Dragoon lets defeat that evil person and Daniel heard a noise that sounded like lets do it. I am taking request for characters
RE: Daniel's Journey - Dread★Shooter - Jan. 19, 2011
Name:
Ryo Kusanagi
Age: 15 Years old
Bey: Tremor amaterasu CH85RLF (Tremor Looks like hell but have more smash ability. CH85 Is able to switch between 85 And 120. RLF Is a left spinning version of R2F.
Special Move: Purgatory Blast: Bey circles the stadium at an insanely fast speed, than hits the opponent.
Infinity Circuit: Makes an infinity pattern on the stadium then releases a blast inside infinity pattern.
God Matrix: more information later...
Bio: Read The thread "some kind of blading story"
Looks: Black Spiked Hair With Red highlights.
RE: Daniel's Journey - Flamegiraffe - Jan. 19, 2011
I'll use Ryo in the next chapter which will be tommorow kk Tnkp
RE: Daniel's Journey - Minidona - Jan. 19, 2011
Name: Briel
Beblade: Green Libra 100 WB ( Green Is like rock but bigger and green ) The bey is all green.
Special Move: Green Tornado. Libra makes a green tornado turning all things green and blowing the opponent bey away.
Look: He is obssesed with green. Green hair (hair is like ginka's), Green T shirt, Green jeans, Green shoes, Green skin.
He is a very strong blader and wants to get even stronger. He play all the time but when is time to get serius he get serius. And he is very very smart. He is good
Story:
Briel is 13 year old. From little he is beyblading. His bey was flame libra. When he was 6 there was a big explotion in his town and his fathers die. Since then he have been around the world beyblading and getting strong. In a town Green Libra felt from the sky hit him in the head. Flame libra disapered. When trainign with the very powerfull Green Libra 100WB the bey caused an explotion that turn him green.
Since then he uses his clothes all green.
RE: Daniel's Journey - Flamegiraffe - Jan. 19, 2011
Thanks brielyranger for the request he will be in the gang if you want that.
RE: Daniel's Journey - Light Yagami - Jan. 19, 2011
name:kevin hagata
bio:a nice,caring,and protective(of his friends but excepically of his bey he will not even let someone touch it) 12 year old boy who's bey contains a terrifing power(it a good power but it is very terrifying because it is so strong)he wears black jeans,black shirt with a pegasis symbol HE IS A GOOD GUY
bey:shooting star pegasis(the second clear wheel version)aw85r2f
special move:shooting star overdrive
the bey goes around the oppenent in a circle and gets covered in a black energy that has little specks of sliver that looks like stars and the track gets covered in black fire and hits them six times from all sides but on the 6th hit my bey hits the spin track and send them flying upward then pegasis jumps up smashs them down to the ground and then pegasis goes straghit down and the metal wheel and track hits the face bolt
.aw85 stands for attack wings 85 so its pretty much uw145(killer beafowls track) except the track height is lowered and the sides of the have spikes on them also it is made of metal.also the wings on the track come right to the end of the metal wheel and on my command and during my special move the wings get covered with black fire .the metal wheel is pretty much vulcan except each of the wings has 3 slighty curved spikes and in bewteen the spaces of the spikes about 3 millimeters below that space are slighty curved spikes that are set the exact oppsite way.lastly during battle pegasis can swich from left spin to right spin.
beyblade bio:has tremdously super amazing smash attack and aw85 shreds anything that touchs it(except for me and my friends)
um can kevins bey evolve into eclipse pegasis cw(cresent wing)85sr2f(super right rubber flat). the info is below . the metal wheel was my previous shooting star wheel except at the bottom of the wheel at each wing it had a cresent moon shape.the cresent moon shape also had very small spikes on it.i decided to call this new metal wheel eclipse.the track was the same as my previous track aw85 except instead of 3 wings it had 5.the performence tip was a regular r2f except 2 time wider(meaning that it had 2 time more traction so therefore two times more attack power.here is what the special moves do.eclipse bringer-pegasis starts spinning faster and faster then it sends a black aura towards the sun.this created an eclipse. pegasis gets its spin healed and got 2 time stonger(so 4 times stornger than shooting star pegasis)this move affects all allies beys as well.eclipse galaxy overdrive-it starts out the same way as my old special move except the black and sliver aura had a red outline.but when it smashs the bey down instead of fly starghit down and hitting it.it formed 100 copys of it self and the cresent moon shape on the metal wheel came of and hit the oppent.then the 100 copy all crashed down on the bey