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Duality - Roan - Jan. 15, 2011
"Duality"
Hush now; let my white wings sing you to sleep
Detach; there's nothing but the two of us here
And in your fevered dreams you and I will reap
The person you kept locked away in fear
As you stumble down the dark, blackened hall
Into the depths of your malleable mind
Your pale, feeble hands reach out for the walls
Whose comfort you now cannot seem to find
But there she lays, radiant among the dark;
Suddenly the room is filled with bright light
Her gentle voice crawling toward you; hark
So that the both of you may at once take flight
Upon my frayed, tattered and molting wings
On a voyage toward the blistering sun
Whose rays will fuse two separate beings
Light and dark; coalescing into one
RE: Duality - |Joe| - Jan. 15, 2011
You're really good at poetry Roan, what happened to your blog for it? It says it doesn't exist anymore.
RE: Duality - Roan - Jan. 15, 2011
Woops! LOL
I actually changed the URL for the blog and I forgot to change the link in my signature.
The new address is:
http://ryansbigbookofpoetry.blogspot.com
And thank you!
RE: Duality - |Joe| - Jan. 15, 2011
Haha ok I'll have to read more of your stuff. My parents say i used to be good at writing but to be honest I can't even remember when I even wrote
RE: Duality - Nano - Jan. 15, 2011
Wow... That's very good stuff. I think you did well (like always). I kind of get the point of it.
RE: Duality - Temporal - Jan. 15, 2011
I don't know anyone who can write this well, except for maybe Night. You just might be better than him.
RE: Duality - Furious - Jan. 15, 2011
Very nice. The rest of your poetry is nice also.
RE: Duality - Roan - Jan. 15, 2011
Thanks for the compliments guys.
RE: Duality - The Fire Wyrm - Jan. 15, 2011
Great poem.It kinda made me cry. Like just a little or...yeah.......BTW Im kinda scared to post this..*shiver*
RE: Duality - Roan - Jan. 15, 2011
Why do you think it made you cry?
Also, why would you be scared to post that? lol
RE: Duality - The Fire Wyrm - Jan. 15, 2011
(Jan. 15, 2011 5:26 PM)Roan Wrote: Why do you think it made you cry?All poems do that to me.(I really don't know why.)
Also, why would you be scared to post that? lol
And last time i posted in your poem thread, I got a moderator notice
