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Maria - Evan - Sep. 17, 2008
Maria was 24
She didn't have much
So her father threw out the door
Cigarettes and alcohol
it's all she can afford
her favorites are menthol
She's throwing it away
so believe when I say
I wouldn't have it any other way
Maria my dear
I'll lend you my ear
Maria was 34
She didn't have much
So she was threw her life out the door
Popping pills and cannabis
it's all she ever does
her favorites are menthol
and she's throwing it away
so believe when I say
I wouldn't have it any other way
Maria my dear
I'll lend you my ear
Maria was 44
She didn't have much
So she threw herself out the door
Suicide and failed attempts
bleeding wrists and broken hearts
her favorite's still menthol
and She's thrown it away
and believe when I say
I wish there was another way
Maria my dear
I can't lend you my ear
I wish you would've said what you wanna say
[solo]
Maria was 44
she didn't have much
so she threw her life out the door
Suicide and a deadbeat life
it's all she could afford
her favorites were menthol
© Jordan James/Evan Hilton/Drake Brown/Brandon Antwiler
It's for the band, we've done a few demos of it ^^
RE: Maria - Bey Brad - Sep. 17, 2008
The rhyme scheme and rhythm is awkward, the lyrics are pretty cliched and there's some grammar errors ...
RE: Maria - G - Sep. 17, 2008
Reminds me of Runaway Love by Luda.
RE: Maria - Evan - Sep. 17, 2008
(Sep. 17, 2008 12:29 AM)Bey Brad Wrote: The rhyme scheme and rhythm is awkward, the lyrics are pretty cliched and there's some grammar errors ...
The grammar errors were fixed, but I couldn't find the file. Jordan, my singer, knows the song by heart so we really don't need to have it saved. We'll be uploading the final demo this weekend. I'll post a link when we get it done.