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BEYBLADE BURST BANG)(and BEYBLADE BURST BLOX) - Carma___bigbang - Dec. 12, 2021
Chapter one-A new legacy
[at the crystal palace]
???- wade bring me my bey this instant!
Wade-yes king platinum (say more terrified than ever)
King platinum-now battle me.
Wade-I will king platinum (bows)
Both-321 go shoot
(Wyvron burst instantly)
King-get out of my sight disgrace.
Wade- don’t hurt me or my bey (runs away)
[at the boat]
hex-it’s finished my bang bey I call it? What to call it? (Stares at it) I got it glitched hero
???-can I see it
Hex-sure sis
Zoey -let’s see how it does against complete zero (gets in launch form)
hex-that would be a interesting (gets in launch form)
Uncle-I’ll ref
Both- 3 2 1 go shoot
(Zero lands and takes off for the center ,hero hits it away from the center ,zero lands on the edge of the stadium)
(Hero’s tip revenge scraps the rubber ring and, creates a tornado, zero falls into the trap)
Zoey-(crosses arms) complete wing
(Zero flys out of the tornado and ,gets two wing blades glowing white)
hex-(smirks) that tornado isn’t the only trick I have up my sleeve
Hex thinks- the bang system has metal contact points if I combine those with my Glitch pulse I’ll get a clean hit.
(Hero gets sent flying from the complete wing, and makes contact with the wall metal blades act as a rebound)
(Zero in the center spins around the free spinning disk, hero smashes with all there strength into zero)
hex- no more time to play around rahhhhhhhh Glitch pulse!!!!!!!
Zoey-right back at you complete wing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
(Zero burst and, hero has five more rotations)
hex-gg
Zoey-gg
Uncle-were here Spain the home of bc sol
hex and Zoey-wow
RE: BEYBLADE BURST BANG - Carma___bigbang - Dec. 14, 2021
Chapter two-bc sol watch out:
Uncle-this is it Spain the home of bc sol
Hex and Zoey-wow its so cool
[At Spain]
Valt- come on free battle me
Free-no
Valt-fine!
Free-have you heard about the new kid who’s trying out
Valt-oh yeah I heard he has a bang bey his name is gen
Free-his sister is going to the raging bulls
[at the boat]
hex-Bye sis see you in later
Zoey-see you in later
(Runs to bc sol)
Valt-is that him I mean he has messy blonde hair with a green tip he’s wear a black and yellow jacket probably him hehe.
Free-I’m going inside
Valt-ok I’ll meet the new kid
Hex mind-omg that’s valt
(Valt waves)
(Hex waves back)
Valt-Nice to meet you hex
Hex-nice to meet you valt aoi
Valt-let’s have a battle (shows gaurdian Valtryek)
hex-wow looks amazing it’s so round but has three sharp blades
Both-321 go shoot
(Hero goes to the center metal blades pop outwards) (Valtryek hits one time and burst hero)
hex-wha
Valt-good try
Hex-let’s go
Valt-ok
Ref-hex is here the battle will start
hex-what?
Ref-the battle to join bc sol
hex-oh ok
Kole-your going down
hex- watch your mouth
Both-321 go shoot
(Krises shoots down and hits hero right at the wall)
hex-(smirks) glitched rebound
(Metal pushes krises away krises loses a lot of spin in the center, hero goes in a circle speeding up every time)
(Krises jumps and while jumping up and down goes right for hero)( speeds up and does the thing Arthur did and doesn’t let him land aka go around the stadium and hit him around the air)
Hex-end this glitch pulse (hands glow purple hair spikes up gets a single horn and wings)
Kole-end it before he does overbite crunch
(Krises burst)
hex-(crosses arms)you were a hard obstacle
Ref-hex is a official member of bc sol
Valt-you did it
Silas- oi kid battle me
hex-sure
RE: BEYBLADE BURST BANG - CelBeyBlade - Dec. 15, 2021
Carma___bigbang I think people will like the fanfic if you use the first post explaining the system, charcters, episode list and story
also dont use words like gg
RE: BEYBLADE BURST BANG - Carma___bigbang - Dec. 15, 2021
OYes Kk I’ll explain the system now
Bang System,future characters, story line, and future beys-
1-the bang system has 5 parts the core, layer, disk, tip and flip
2-the flip is a part that changes your makes your clicks harder but your bey loses spin more faster
3-the system works that every bey has its own gimmick
Future characters oc and canon-
Hyde
Zane
Phi
Corey
Tiff
Gwyn
Beck
Vex
Gorge
Arthur
Shu
Xander
William
Kyle
Zack the sunrise
Boa
Hyuga
Hikaru
Lui
Lain
Honcho
Dante
Aiga will be tied for champion so is valt so no champion until one beats the other
Corona
Hell
bell
Pearl
Valt
Platinum king(aka krime)
Storyline- hex and his sister part ways after a epic battle so he will him and his friends beat the platinum king
Episode list-
Episode one- a new legacy
Episode 2-bc sol watch out
Episode 3- the platinum kings true power
Episode four-Silas is back, meet karma satan
Episode 5- the kings returned , beyond Achilles
Episode six-no mercy,war ginx
Episode seven-platinum king vs free de la Hoya
Episode 8- shu is back with crimson spry zen
Episode 9-power on furious Lui nor
Episode 10-tournament time all out royal
Episode 11- Zane glacier zombie vs karma satan
Future beys-
Despair hades
Glacier zombie
Immortal Phoenix
Celestial claw
Reality titan
Big Bang genesis
Parallel beast
Extinction venues
War ginx
Major apocalypse
Crimson spry zen
Magical regulas
Fang x Cali bur
Flow warrior
Danger kerbeus
Equal jaguar
Zau-drillion Zeus
Screech bahumat
Bomb kukalkan
Alpha Helios ( blue ver of alpha)
Alpha Hyperion (red version of alpha)
Furious Lui nor
Rewind Lucifer
Soar ragnuruk
Uprising dragon
Beyond Achilles
Virtual Change
Reward hellburn
Nexus ragnurak
Spin Belial
Gaurdian Valtryek
Punishment koko
RE: BEYBLADE BURST BANG - Carma___bigbang - Dec. 15, 2021
Episodes 3-the platinum kings power
[at the raging bulls]
Shu- astral spry zen its time we battle platinum
Spryzen- shu I agree
[crystal palace]
Plat- punishment whip
Random kid-what how
Plat-get out of my sight at once
Shu- oi platinum
Plat-it’s shu
Shu- so have you improved
Plat-yes former teacher
Shu- show me
Plat-I’d be delighted
Both-321 go shoot
(Spryzen takes the center koko hits it out of the center)
Shu- nice work but it’s time to end this astral slash
Plat-amateur (smirks) blades bush forward punishment gaurd
(Spryzen hits over and over again)(koko doesn’t budge)
Shu-you have evolved
Plat-(giggles)
Shu-what are you up to
Plat-you’ll see
(Koko moves out of the center and pushes Spryzen around the hyper ring)(Spryzen get pushedagainst the wall) (and rings out)
Plat-one point next round I’ll make sure to destroy your bey
Shu-you can try
Both-321 go shoot!
(Spryzen goes in attack mode and smacks koko in a triangle like phi) (koko gets faster and stronger the blades extend out he hits Spryzen on the perfect spot and hits the wall with a burst of energy)
Plat k-(smirks and crosses arms) punishment force
shu-astral slash (Spryzen rises)
(Spryzen and koko collide and electricity flys everywhere)(double burst a other a other and a other again again)
Koko- shu if i don’t break your bey this round I will quit BEYBLADE
Shu-bet
Both-321 go shoot
(They hit each other five times then go opposite ways hit the wall and go back down to collide)(Spryzen gets sent sky high and does the thing were he changes modes mid battle)(koko hits wall and goes down)
(Spryzen goes to hit him koko dodges just barely making contact)(koko does the triangle thing)
Plat k-destroy him triangle of legends
Shu-what Is this
(Spryzen gets squished but hits koko away)(koko hits Spryzen against the wall and Spryzen cracks)
Plat k- end this koko (eyes turn red gets one horn wings and sharp claws like hex) punishment impacttttttttttttt!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
(spryzen breaks)
Plat k- weakling (walks away)
[shu’s work shop]
Shu-behold world Galactic Spryzen)
hex-Silas I’m ready
Silas-good
Both- 321 go shoot!
RE: BEYBLADE BURST BANG - Carma___bigbang - Dec. 16, 2021
Episode 4: Silas is back, meet karma satan
Both-321 go shoot
(Satan goes straight for the center hero does a flower pattern launch)
Silas-karma Break !
hex- rahh Glitch pulse!
(Hex crashes into satan and burst)
hex-...wha-wha hero burst
Silas-Hah I thought you would do better
[at the training room]
hex-let it rip let it rip let it rippppp
News-there are new launches legends are performing gunshot launches
hex-let’s see is valt is able to do one
Valt-silas you have a bang bey let’s battle
Silas-your on but let’s make it a title match
Valt- if you win you are tied with aigas power and won’t be the champion anyway
Silas-i don’t care just battle Me
Valt-I except
[the bang arena]
Silas-valt I’m going to burst you first round (adjust flip to hardest clicks)
Valt-you can try (adjusters flip to medium)
hex-this will be a epic battle
(Free walks up to gen)
Free-sup
hex- watching the battle WAIT YOUR FREE DE LA HOYA
Free-yup (sits down)
Silas & valt-321 go shoot!! (Both perform gunshot launches)
(Valtryek unleashes a fury of strikes)(satan takes every hit like a boss)
Silas- haaaah now satan karma sphere! (big spheres turn free spin)
Valt- (makes a sword like In sparking) bound gaurdian slash!
(They collide with pure force)(flash back of there first battle happens)(Valtryek burst)v
Ref-2 points awarded to Silas and satan
Valt-good job Silas
Silas-let’s replay that battle
Valt- sure like I’ll let that happen (corrupts a bit)
Corrupted valt- destroy all Valtryek
Silas,free,shu,hex,Aiga,ashi bros,Lui,Dante,???-this seems bad
Silas and c valt-321 go shoot (both perform gunshot launches
(Valtryek smacks satan out of the center and starts circling the center)(universe scraps the hyper ring and does a complete circle ,activates free spin mode)
(Valtryek smashes satan against the wall bursting in into disarming the whole bey even the chip)
Silas-grr I’ll get you now
Valt- (flip makes the clicks the hardest) I’m ready
Both-321 go shoot (valt preforms a machine Gun launch)
(Valtryek goes out of control smacking satan around the whole stadium)
C valt- now bang fluxxx
Silas-huh what is this
(Valtryek glows blue blades glow golden and turn rebound mode satan try’s and try’s to get to center but gets sent the other side of the stadium over and over again)(valt makes a sword again)
(Valtryek smashes Satan again and starts to loses spin)
Silas-yes wait
C valt-(smirks) ultimate reboot dash
(Valtryek smashes with 5% power into satan)(satan burst)
Valt-I’m gonna win
Silas-try
Both-321 go shoot (satan lands and circles Valtryek)(Valtryek hits Satan but can’t get out)
C valt 6%-I’ll end you now ultra reboot!
Silas 100 %-rahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh karma sphere!
(Valtryek and Satan send each other flying to the wall)(they land and take off for center)(Valtryek wobbles)
(Satan takes the center)
C valt-end this RUSH LAUNCH!!!
Silas- Satan SATURN BREAK!!
King platinum-valt has the finest power I must take it
Valt-(reboots rubber scrapes) this is the end Silas
Silas-I’m becoming champion!!!,
(They launch each other up they start colliding in the air)(electricity and explosions happen)
Valt c 6%-6% whip (makes sword and bey glows again)bang flux)
(Satan shatters into 78 pieces)
Silas-what the heck
Valt-oh I won yay
Silas-satan has been broke
Hex-what’s wrong with valt ugh it’s nothing
Zoey- (FaceTime)I’ve gotten into the raging bulls
(At same time)
hex- (FaceTime) I’ve gotten into bc sol
Both-laugh
Hex-sis I’m worried something’s wrong with valt
RE: BEYBLADE BURST BANG - Carma___bigbang - Dec. 17, 2021
Episode 5-the kings return beyond Achilles, the spin king vortex faf nir
Zoey-(FaceTime)see you later
Hex-bye
[Bc sol entrance]
???-this is it bc sol
Valt-Aiga so good to see you how’s toko and nika
Aiga-good so I came here to see you free Silas and the new kid
Valt-there all asleep but wanna battle till they wake up
Aiga-sure but I’m worried
Valt-what about
Aiga-your resonance is corrupting
Valt-what no no no it can’t be your joking let’s get to battleing
Aiga-b-but-
Valt-battle me
Aiga-fine (shows beyond Achilles)
Valt-(shows gaurdian Valtryek)
[at the stadium free uses]
Both-321 go shoot
(Achilles hits the wall and hits Valtryek right to the other side of the stadium)
Achilles-come on aiga let’s push through and help valt through this
(Achilles and Valtryek hit each other over and over again in. Circle)
Valt- come on Valtryek (starts to corrupt)end this battle !!! Gaurdian sword
Aiga-Achilles help valt!!!!!! Beyond dive
(Achilles scraps the ground and rotate making Achilles jump and land on top of Valtryek bursting it)
Free- oi Silas
Silas-you hear aigas here
Hex-Aiga!!!!!!! omg he’s my ideal (runs outside)
Free- wanna battle?
Silas-yes my bey has been revived
Free-meet vortex faf nir
Both-321 go shoot
(Faf nir takes the center away from Satan)
Silas-satan universal crash (blades turn free spin)
(Faf nir decides to take the impact and takes it very well satan keeps hitting over and over again)
(Satan starts glowing)
Free-vortex flux
(Satan takes the hit for five seconds)
Free-(blades get more rubber and Satan burst)
Aiga-so hex And valt have you heard of the platinum king
hex-I’ve heard nothing
Valt-I’ve heard he broke astral Spryzen and dread hades
[at the dock]
All-bye free good luck beating the platinum king
Free-bye guys he need the luck
???-so I sense amazing bladers around here but one unique blader
Plat k-free I’ll be waiting here for you (grins)
I’m hosting character contest woo wooo I’m excepting 5 ocs so all of you good luck and I’ll pick five who will appear later
RE: BEYBLADE BURST BANG - Carma___bigbang - Dec. 18, 2021
Gen was renamed as well as glitch
Episode 6 no mercy, war ginx
[at his dorm]
Hex-hero let’s make a new move hero valt, Aiga,drum,ashi bros can talk to there beys
(Hero glows)
Hex-hero? (Gets sucked into a wormhole) help help helpppp
Hero-hex I agree about the new move
Hex-hero (flys to hero and gives him a hug)
Hero-hex it’s time for me to go I’ll be helping as much as I can
Hex-bye let’s talk soon
[at the training room]
Hex- Let it rip!!!
(Hero swoops down and goes, crazy everywhere does what the thing Arthur did then the metal blades appear and he adds more force and hits harder and harder)
???-321 go shoot (launches upside down)
(Bey crashes ontop of Hero and burst Hero)
Hex-who are you
George-I’m George this is my bey war ginx
Hex-oh but you ruined me trying to make a new move
George-oh I’m so sorry
Hex-it’s fine
George-can I help
Hex-sure
Both- 321 go shoot
(Ginx goes in a little circle , hero smashes into it and gets repealed keeps smashing over and over)
Hex thinks- mabey I could use the wall for my new move
(Ginx exits the circle and the war blade detaches from the BEYBLADE and starts spinning by itself)
Hex- (Hero hits the wall over and over again) glitched rebirth!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (metal blades work in sync with the special move)(gets horn wings and turns demon like)
(Ginx gets rung out of the stadium)
George-good job ( gets in launch form)
Hex-let’s finish the battle (gets in launch form)
Both-321 go shoot (Ginx does a circle again and it’s like the battle is put on repeat)(ginx does the unexpected And let’s hero do the hardest hit)
(Both Gimmicks activate ginx jumps up)
(Hex does the Arthur thing)
Hex-glitch pulse!
(HeroDoes a tornado ginx falls into it and uses the wind from the tornado to his advantage)
(Ginx has a bunch of spin)(and fly’s out of the tornado)
(Satan crashes in and starts to take on both of them)
Hex-no one ruins this battle glitch rebirth!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (Hero smashes right into satan and burst satan)
Silas-kid you’ve evolved but you used your special on me
George-now grand warfare
(Giant explosion)(Hero burst)
(??? Walks in bro were are you
George -hey pearl
Pearl-who’s this
George-my new friend
Hex-POV- she’s pretty
Pearl-POV-he’s cute
[at the crystal palace]
Free-I’m here
Plat k-good
Both-321,go shoot
RE: BEYBLADE BURST BANG - Carma___bigbang - Dec. 20, 2021
Character contest tell me all about the oc well who who
RE: BEYBLADE BURST BANG - Carma___bigbang - Dec. 22, 2021
Episode 7 koko vs faf nir
(Fafnir goes for a slow mo burst)
Plat king-I know your trick
(Koko avoids fafnir )
Free-what it can’t be he’s smarter than i thought
(Faf nir stops spinning)
Plat king-your power is useless against me
Plat king-I know already next round I predict a burst
Free-get ready for your prediction
Both-321 go shoot!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
(Faf nir takes the center koko let’s fafnir take his spin)
(Kokos blades push out and in out And in )
(Plat kings mask cracks)
[dream world]
Fafnir flys at koko) (koko grabs his scythe and jumps up slashing a huge hole in Fafnirs wing )(fafnir crashes into the ground)
(Koko smashes on fafnir)
[real world]
(Koko smashes fafnir to the wall but the rubber rebound softens the impact)
[dream world]
(Fafnir gets up and starts to go super fast )(nothing break)(koko rolls backwards)
(Faf nir starts slashing koko)(kokos second pair of arms upper cuts fafnir and fafnir fades away)
[real word]
Plat king-punishment battleground !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Free-nothing break!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
(Massive explosion)
(Fafnir gets sent sky high and breaks)
Shu-bc sol
RE: BEYBLADE BURST BANG - Carma___bigbang - Dec. 28, 2021
Episode 8-the raging gang(new name)
Zoey-shu-kun I’m gonna see my brother correct
Shu-yup
Illya- so valts here so is aiga right
Silas-shu sup
Zoey-who’s that
Shu-I don’t remember
Silas-WHAT WE WERE LITERALLY IN THE SAME TOURNAMENT TWO TIMES!!!!!!!!!!!!
Shu-doesn’t ring a bell
Random kid-hey shu
Shu-hi Alex
Silas-oh come on you know the random kid not me ok then battle me
Shu- sure
Both- three two one go shoot!!(spryzen hits satomb to the wall)
(Spryzen smacks satomb against the hyper ring two times)
(Spryzen taps it barely)
Shu- fine end this COUNTER BREAK
Silas-Saturn brea.....
(Satomb burst)
(They walk in)
Hex-(sweats) come on hero (burst at same time with ginx)
Pearl-hex let me help here’s some water
Hex-thank you (drinks) hey pearl
Pearl-yes ?
Hex-wanna train with us?
Pearl-sure
All-321 go shoot!!!!!!!!!!!!
(Cyclone Valtryek lands and wobbles)(Ginx swoops down and burst Valtryek)
Hex-hold up(puts hands on pearls and keeps them steady)now rip
(Valtryek does a amazing launch )
(Pearl faints and turns red)
Hex- wake up (Holds)
Pearl POV-help
Zoey-so hex she your girlfriend
Hex-(blushes) no
Zoey and George -I ship it
Shu and illya- Zoey you wanna 3 vs 3 them
Zoey-sure
Everyone-321 go shoot!!!!!
(Valtryek preforms a flower pattern)(zero moves in a line then hits the wall and the wings come out)(they collide)
(Ginx and Spryzen collide and Ginx gets sent right towards the wall then blades de attach)(Spryzen black parts get sharper)
( magmatic ifrit hits Spryzen)(they go down to hit Ginx from both sides ginx blade gets hit wrong and goes flying at Valtryek they burst)
Shu-let’s go
(They all circle hero)
Illya- raging
Zoey-king
Shu-strike
Hex inner demon-(makes tornado) end all
Hex-inner angel-NO hex push through
Hex-(awakens) come on let’s do this hero
(Everyone flys out of the tornado )
Shu- PLANETARY CRUX BOOST (starts glowing in a circle)
Illya- magmatic crash (crashes ontop of hero)
Zoey- complete wing (upper attacks)
(Hero takes the hits for a bit)
Hex-rahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh glitched vibration !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
(HERO BURST)
Shu-good game
[at the boat]
???-here I come
RE: BEYBLADE BURST BANG - Arsenal - Dec. 28, 2021
(Dec. 20, 2021 6:07 PM)Carma___bigbang Wrote: Character contest tell me all about the oc well who who
What's the rules?
RE: BEYBLADE BURST BANG - Carma___bigbang - Dec. 29, 2021
I’m picking 5 ocs /Tell me these-
Hair color and style-
Eye Color-
Jewelry-skip if has none
Clothing style-
Personality-
Marking-(like aigas A)
Friends-(if friends with everyone say all)
Team-(platinum king or hex)
Idol-
BEYBLADE info now-
Bey name-
Core info -
Bang ring info and gimmick-
Flip info-
Disk info-
Tip info-
Bey type-
Moves-
Special moves-
Final move-
RE: BEYBLADE BURST BANG - Carma___bigbang - Dec. 30, 2021
Pls make ocs 🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺
RE: BEYBLADE BURST BANG - Dame Dolla - Dec. 30, 2021
Hair color and style- He has black hair with a fade haircut
Eye Color- brown
Jewelry-A gold watch and a gold cross chain
Clothing style-casual
Personality-He's arrogant and makes fun of people because of his fame as a blader and his successful rapping career. But he's loyal to his loved ones and the team he's on.
Marking-None
Friends-His home dog CJ from his hometown in Oakland
Team-Idk whatever I guess the evil team is because he could be like a good antagonist since he's arrogant and makes fun of people.
Bey name- Trailblazing Chronos
Core info -Chronos (A left spinning gold ring with a golden version of Damian who looks to be connected to a clock since the avatar looks to be made out of metal and has a clock on its left shoulder.)
Bang ring- Trailblazing( A gold left spinning ring like Rage who has two main metal attack points that cause mega damage. Instead of it being dragon heads though it's the bey avatars golden fists.)
Disk info- Dolla (A purple disc that's shaped like 3A and Metsu and is supposed to line up with Trailblazing's attack points to cause more damage.)
Tip info- Xtreme'(A gold Xtreme' with purple rubber)
Bey type- Attack
Moves- Dame Time (Damian starts taping his wrist and with the power from his gold and purple aura and the boost from the energy of his fans it causes Chronos to somehow speed up.)
Special moves-Trailblazing Slam (The Trailblazing blade attack points glow purple but instead of Chronos going out of control it just slams into its opponent with a strong impact.)
Final move-Logo Lillard (The Trailblazing blade glows purple causing Chrono's attacks to be super strong but due to its power Chronos becomes unstable causing the attack points to also slam into the stadium walls and floor though when the move finishes a picture of Damian's face is carved into the stadium.)
(If I win and you wanna make more moves for him you can I just came up with these off the top of my head.)
RE: BEYBLADE BURST BANG - beansworth - Dec. 31, 2021
Dai Uchiha
His hair is long in length and it’s deep black.
He has teal eyes.
One earring in his right ear, the ring is gold.
He wears a tank top that is white, and wears a long jacket that is black, on the top of the jacket, if zipped up completely, the top of the jacket covers the bottom half of Dai’s face. He wears black pants and grey Adidas Shoes.
Dai out of battle is very kind, and helps people out, in battle he gets serious and excited. Anyone who is evil or a jerk, Dai hates and swears he will beat in battle.
No markings.
He would be friends with Valt, Hex, Zoey, Shu and surprisingly Free
Works with Hex, wanting to take King Platinum down.
His idol is Valt and Lui, his bey is an attack type like Valkyrie and a dragon like Longinus.
Razor Drake Slide Metal Evolution Darted
Drake features 3 strong locks that are like Guilty Longinus and Promience Phoenix’s locks that aren’t affected by metal lock drivers.
Razor-It’s a four sided attack Bang Ring, the blades shapes are like Savior Valkyrie’s Blades. It’s gimmick is hard rubber on the ends of the blades, that helps with attack power.
Slide-The disc is very similar to Tapered, except no gap.
Metal Evolution-Evolution with a metal cap, that’s it.
Darted-This flips is the same shape as Razor, it helps the locks with two metal burst stoppers.
Attack Type
Razor Upper-With the Razor Ring, Drake hits the opponent’s bey and launches it into the air.
Razor Impulse-After shooting off the Metal Evolution Driver, Drake hits the opponent’s bey.
Razor Slash-Drake hits the opponent’s bey and clicks it multiple times.
Final move- True Razor Slash-Drake hits the opponent into a long barrage, and then hits it into the air, finally hitting the bey and bursting it.
RE: BEYBLADE BURST BANG - Carma___bigbang - Dec. 31, 2021
(Dec. 30, 2021 11:18 PM)Dame Dolla Wrote: Hair color and style- He has black hair with a fade haircut
Eye Color- brown
Jewelry-A gold watch and a gold cross chain
Clothing style-casual
Personality-He's arrogant and makes fun of people because of his fame as a blader and his successful rapping career. But he's loyal to his loved ones and the team he's on.
Marking-None
Friends-His home dog CJ from his hometown in Oakland
Team-Idk whatever I guess the evil team is because he could be like a good antagonist since he's arrogant and makes fun of people.
Bey name- Trailblazing Chronos
Core info -Chronos (A left spinning gold ring with a golden version of Damian who looks to be connected to a clock since the avatar looks to be made out of metal and has a clock on its left shoulder.)
Bang ring- Trailblazing( A gold left spinning ring like Rage who has two main metal attack points that cause mega damage. Instead of it being dragon heads though it's the bey avatars golden fists.)
Disk info- Dolla (A purple disc that's shaped like 3A and Metsu and is supposed to line up with Trailblazing's attack points to cause more damage.)
Tip info- Xtreme'(A gold Xtreme' with purple rubber)
Bey type- Attack
Moves- Dame Time (Damian starts taping his wrist and with the power from his gold and purple aura and the boost from the energy of his fans it causes Chronos to somehow speed up.)
Special moves-Trailblazing Slam (The Trailblazing blade attack points glow purple but instead of Chronos going out of control it just slams into its opponent with a strong impact.)
Final move-Logo Lillard (The Trailblazing blade glows purple causing Chrono's attacks to be super strong but due to its power Chronos becomes unstable causing the attack points to also slam into the stadium walls and floor though when the move finishes a picture of Damian's face is carved into the stadium.)
(If I win and you wanna make more moves for him you can I just came up with these off the top of my head.)
I really like it but I’ll think about it when more come out
Same for you beansworth
RE: BEYBLADE BURST BANG - Hollowmind13 - Dec. 31, 2021
The flip idea is nice, adding better clicks but more IWD, which in turn makes you lose spin faster. Very cool.
Let's see how my character turned out:
Spoiler (Click to View)
For those that saw Amaterasu, this character was meant to have a connection with the Amaterasu owner.
RE: BEYBLADE BURST BANG - Carma___bigbang - Dec. 31, 2021
I like the ocs so far
Episode nine-power on furious Lui nor
[master room in bc sol]
Free-Kristina Lui is coming
Kristina-yes free
[bc sol training room]
(Door breaks open)
LUI - someone battle me(hair flames grow even bigger)
Everyone-I’ll do it
Lui-I’ll take you all on
Everyone-three two one go shoot
(Lui nor falls along with the other beys)(every bey burst In one shot)
All-how
Lui-that’s power
Valt-yo Lui
Lui-hey valt
[at park]
Silas-satan go Saturn break!
(Satan darts everywhere)
Hex-(gets smacked around) *smirks* and makes tornado* glitch whirlwind!!!
(Satan burst)
Hex-(smiles) I beat a legend
Silas-wow he beat me
[back with Lui]
Shu- Lui you wanna battle
Lui-nah I’m gonna battle the new kids
(Hex ,George, pearl and Zoey walk in)
Lui -I challenge all of you
The group-sure
All-321 go shoot!!
(Lui performs a gunshot launch)(Valtryek swarms Luinor goes in for a hit )(Luinor avoids it and pushes it around from the back)
(Hero hits Luinor away from Valtryek)(Luinor hits ginx)(ginx blades detach and luinors metal blades reveal)(Zero hits Luinor and pushes it against the wall but hits the metal blade and get sent down)
Lui-burst all of the furious upper!!!
(Lui nor gets hit from every way)(Luinor gets sent flying towards Lui)(Lui catches Luinor) (then every bey left burst)
Lui- round two
All-321 go shoot
(Valtryek hits ginx)(ginx avoids and both go down to hit Luinor)(hero and Luinor and colliding in the center)(Valtryek and ginx hit from every direction)(Luinor metals blades grow so does his hair)(then all the gimmicks activate)(Luinor sends hero out of the stadium)(Luinor goes to hit Valtryek)(ginx takes the hit instead and burst)
George-pearl as your big brother it’s my job to protect you
Pearl-it’s my turn now(Flares up)
[future]
Pearl-go phantom fallen echo dive
(Luinor burst)
[present]
(Valtryek hits Luinor flying but burst then Luinor hits the wall and lands back)
Lui-hey you guys are strong
[at tourney]
Hanami-hello everyone Are you ready to rise to the top
Dai-I sure am
????-I’ll beat you first
Creator -who cares but I’m winning (I changed damians name to match cronos)
Seth- I’m gonna meet my rival I know it
Tatsuya-(doesn’t have a care in the world)
Pls rate series so far
RE: BEYBLADE BURST BANG - Carma___bigbang - Jan. 01, 2022
Happy New Years everyone
RE: BEYBLADE BURST BANG - We do not care - Jan. 01, 2022
Seth Krueger
Hair color - White
Eye Color- Grey (When he uses his aura the white parts become black with the eye color becoming red)
Jewelry-skip if has none
Clothing style- Switches between casual and formal
Personality- Kind and sensitive but when he goes into battle he becomes cruel and sadistic at times wanting to destroy you.
Friends- All
Idol- Shu Kurenai
Bey name- Chained Samael Drake Xtreme'
Core info - Samael (A left spinning core with the avatar being a fallen angel.)
Bang ring info and gimmick- Chained (A left spinning black ring with red wings with two strong metal attack points like rage Longinus.)
Disk info- Drake (A red drake)
Tip info- Xtreme' (A black Xtreme' with red rubber)
Bey type- Attack
Moves- Chained Upper (The metal attack points on Chained glow red and do a strong upper attack like Raging Upper.)
Special moves- Chained Vortex (Samael keeps slamming into the apposing bey while Samael goes around in a circle basically like Dead Gravity.)
Final move- Fallen Angel (Samael hits the side of the stadium causing Samael to fly in the air and with all Samael's power Samael dives down and slams into the apposing bey using the metal attack points to either burst or break the apposing bey.)
RE: BEYBLADE BURST BANG - Carma___bigbang - Jan. 01, 2022
If we don’t have enough for 16 people I might choose extra so there’s still a chance if the spots are full
RE: BEYBLADE BURST BANG - Carma___bigbang - Jan. 04, 2022
Spoiler for episode ten
(Everyone launches)
(Achilles and Valtryek send each other flying back and clash again the Genesis and dragon hit each other in an circle)(Satan and Ragnurok collide in the center)(Samael burst both Ragnurok and Satan) (zombie goes and hits zero)(fafnirs new tip blank scraps and Chronos burst faf nir)(drake and Spryzen collide then ???hits belial out then the platinum king takes center)
That’s a spoiler I’ll be leading of from this Until I have all the ocs
RE: BEYBLADE BURST BANG - Carma___bigbang - Jan. 06, 2022
Anymore ocs?
RE: BEYBLADE BURST BANG - Carma___bigbang - Jan. 08, 2022
Is this really all the ocs I expected more than five but whatever The vote ends two days