RE: Beyblade Burst: Mystical - beansworth - Feb. 26, 2022
(Feb. 26, 2022 5:27 AM)Carma___bigbang Wrote: War will like Himawari because he likes a strong woman and she beats him in all there battles Makes sense.
RE: Beyblade Burst: Mystical - beansworth - Feb. 27, 2022
Alright Imma post chapter 30 now.
Chapter 30: Redemption! Raven's Seeking Eye!
Chapter 30: Redemption! Raven’s Seeking Eye!
{Valkyrie and Warrior kept clashing, and sparks began flying.}
{Then Warrior shot out of the stadium and burst, War watched and felt defeated, while Van smirked and called.}
Van(Evil): “Alright together! Dark Sync + Calamity Sword!”
{Van and Valkyrie entered Dark Sync, and shot to the center, and knocked Clotho Moirai and Knight out of the stadium.}
Van waited to hear his victory, but looked and saw Knight fly back down to the stadium floor.
Kanaki(Irritated): “Don’t think we’re giving up, easy! Gale Force!”
{Knight hit Valkyrie and hit it into the stadium floor, and Valkyrie flew into the air, and Van grit his teeth.}
Van(Sync): “Change of plans, Valkyrie! Calamity Sword!”
{Valkyrie began diving down towards Knight, and hit it into the floor, knocking it out the stadium wall.}
Kanaki(Nervous): “Come on, hold steady! Gust Sync!”
Kanaki and Knight synced up, and Knight swung his sword and the air flows changed.
{Knight dropped from the wall, and hit the floor on an angle, and drift on Valor’s side, and shot to the center.}
Kanaki(Sync): “Now, Up-Force Tempest!”
Van(Sync): “I don’t lose! Calamity Upper!”
{The two beys collided and Valkyrie hit Knight, on a slight angle and burst it.}
{Valkyrie sped up, and launched out of the stadium and Van caught it and walked away.}
Everyone watched as he walked away, his cape flew and they soon followed and it was Round 3.
Payne, Baki, Obito and Annie all walked to the stadium and readied their beys.
Payne(Excited): “Hey Baki, which one of our defense beys will succeed?”
Baki didn’t respond to Payne, as he didn’t like Payne.
Annie looked at Obito, her face cold, and Obito’s one open eye pierced her heart.
Obito(Cold): “I remember you. Your part of the triplets that I used to know.”
Annie then remembered her old friend, he had two different eye colors, one was red and the other was purple, it was very rare and he was bullied for it.
{Flashback to Obito and the Triplet’s Past.}
Obito(Young+Crying): “Please stop! Those rocks hurt!”
Three boys kept throwing rocks at Obito, many other 5th graders watched and snickered.
Boy 1(Laughing): “Come on, Freak!”
Boy 2(Snickering): “I bet you his parents hate him, and left him!”
Boy 3(Laughing): “Bet!”
Obito kept crying, his right side had 6 scars that let to his eye. His side with the purple was usually covered by a eyepatch due to purple eyes being associated to a royal family.
Then Boy 1 ran up, and kicked Obito, he fell over and began shaking as the boy had a plastic knife, he inched to closer to Obito’s face.
Obito(Terrified): “Please don’t!”
Obito yelled, his tears over flowing and he was shaking uncontrollably, then Annie ran forward and kicked the boy in his gut, he lost his breath and fell down.
Cleo and Lilia followed and stood with Annie.
Annie(Pissed): “You guys think it’s fun to bully him, because he has two eye colors?”
Cleo(Angry): “What a bunch of idiots!”
Lilia put her hand to Obito, he looked up and Lilia saw his tear covered face, she helped him up and let him to the nurse and Annie and Cleo followed.
Obito sat down and Nurse began cleaning up his wounds. The nurse called the principal and the Triplets told him everything, he called Obito’s parents and a Therapist.
Obito’s father and mother ran inside and hugged Obito, and hugged them back and Obito’s father, Madara turned to the Triplets.
Madara(Thankful): “Thank you girls so very much! Please if there is anything the Zen’in family can do to repay your family, I’m all ears.”
Lilia(Happy): “Oh no, no! We don’t need anything, it wasn’t right what was happening to Obito.”
Annie(Calm): “Actually there is one thing.”
Madara(Thankful): “What is it?”
Annie smiled and looked to Obito, who was calming down.
Annie(Calm): “Could we hang out together?”
Madara: “Of course!”
Then from that day on, Obito and the girls would hang out after school and go on adventures in the local woods, then one day Obito’s family moved and Annie never heard of him again, until he jumped from the building, breaking his bones.
Then she wondered if he had lived, and now she had proof.
{Present}
Annie looked at Obito, his short black hair was held up by his mask’s strap. He wore a long trench coat, but then he threw it off, revealing black pants and a black shirt, with black gauntlets.
Obito(Serious): “Let’s go, weaklings.”
Annie put Atropos Moirai onto her launcher and Payne and Baki did the same.
All: “3! 2! 1! Go Shoot!”
{Orion, Atropos Moirai, Bahamut and Phoenix hit the stadium floor and Bahamut and Phoenix began barraging each other for center, while Orion circled the outer ridge.}
Annie looked at Orion, and called.
Annie(Calm): “Alright Moirai! Wave Burst!”
{Moirai hit the edge of Wave and shot to Orion, and Obito clenched his fists.}
Obito(Serious): “It’s a shame, that you want to lose so soon! Orion!”
Orion’s avatar awakened, and he grabbed his staff and summoned many stars.
Obito(Serious): “Now time for our Sync! Planetary Sync!”
Obito and Orion synced up, and hit Atropos Moirai and the two began clashing.
Annie(Angry): “I won’t lose to you, Obito! Unbeknownst Strike!”
Obito(Sync): “You’re annoying like the rest of them! Zodiac Slash!”
{The two beys hit each with their special moves, and launched out of the stadium. And the only beys that remained were Phoenix and Bahamut.}
{Phoenix drift on it’s Tire Driver, and Bahamut drift of Atomic’s outer ridge.}
Payne(Excited): “Phoenix, don’t give in! Our flames will consume Bahamut! Everburn Crash!”
Baki(Serious): “Bahamut, we will show Boa, how powerful we’ve become! Dynamic Crush!”
{The two beys collided, and Bahamut hit Phoenix out and won.}
Machine: “Dynamic Bahamut with an Over Finish, Baki Alcazaba wins the match, earning two stars!”
Baki grabbed Bahamut and smiled and walked to Keith, Barry, Lucy and Irene who were waiting for him.
Payne walked away to his fellow team members, while Obito met Annie on the side, Cleo and Lilia stood with him.
Lilia(Concerned): “Obito, are you truly under that mask?”
Cleo(Scared): “If you are, why did you jump from the building?”
Annie(Reminiscent): “Did you forget our promise!”
Obito turned to the girls and his eye pierced them all.
Obito(Serious): “Obito Zen’in is dead, and I am the superior Obito. Emotions do not cover my mind, I only have my mask and master Van.”
Annie punched him and she had tears in her eyes, he turned away and walked to Van.
Annie(Mind): “To think he forgot our promise! He was my best friend, and then he left, before I said anything, he didn’t even say goodbye.”
Obito’s mind then remembered the girls and he gripped his head,
Obito(Mad): “Memories from before are, useless!”
Van saw and walked away, and Round 4 began with Lucy, Irene, Lilia and Bridgette.
Lucy grabbed her new Loki, and gripped it tightly, and then looked to the stadium.
She held Loki a little higher and looked at his new driver: Ruin. Ruin’s ability has a Core Driver and Driver Attachment. There were four attachments, one was a Rubber Sharp for Attack. Then there was a Metal Ball for Defense, a attachment with a Free Spinning Metal Plate with a bearing. And finally, a Metal Sharp surrounded by Super soft rubber.
Lucy gripped Loki harder, and put it on her launcher, and from up higher in the top deck, someone stood watching Lucy.
Valt(Sincere): “So your watching your daughter?”
Shu turned to Valt, and said.
Shu(Calm): “Yeah, I wanted to make sure she was okay.”
Valt turned away and began walking, when Shu asked.
Shu(Confused): “Valt, do you have any clue how to have your kid feel comfortable around you again?”
Valt turned to Shu and asked,
Valt(Confused): “What do you mean?”
Shu: “Well, ever since our hunt for Cutthroat, I wasn’t home nearly as much as you, and Lucy grew to despise me, but eventually we got on neutral terms. But I want her to be happy again.”
Valt smiled and looked at his friend, who he always thought was one step ahead of him, but now Shu needed his help.
Valt(Sincere): “The answer is simple. Just talk with her.”
Shu: “Alright, thanks Valt. I’m going to try my best to get back on good terms with her.”
Then as Shu walked out he saw Van, standing there and Van spoke up.
Van(Cold): “I figured out that Lucy is your daughter. How could the mighty Shu Kurenai have such a weak daughter?”
Shu grit his teeth when he heard Van speak and his scar glew red as he called.
Shu(Angry): “Don’t ever say that about her! She’s strong. You shattered her bey, so me and Legacy Spriggan will defeat you!”
Van’s eyes glew and he grabbed Calamity Valkyrie,
Van(Cold): “Alright then, I bet you won’t score more then a Over Finish.”
Shu(Angry): “Make your bets, but I’ll shatter that bet!”
Before the two could battle, the Yacht stopped, and alarms sounded.
Keith looked to Valt and asked,
Keith(Scared): “Valt, what the hell is going on!?”
Valt: “Those alarms mean an unregistered person has gotten into the Yacht.”
In the hallway was a person within a leather outfit, with a hunting mask on, their face couldn’t be seen.
Valt, Keith, Baki and Barry ran into the hall and saw them in the hall.
Barry(Nervous): “Who are you!?”
???: “I’m Brooklyn Hayes, and I heard about this Yacht Battle Cruise, and I wanted to join.”
Barry calmed a bit down, and Valt said.
Valt: “Alright then Brooklyn, let’s get you registered.”
Brooklyn followed Barry as they walked up the stairs, and the alarms quieted down.
Then the boys returned to the watching area for Lucy’s battle.
Keith(Curious): “So who’re you guys betting is going to win? I’m personally betting Irene will win.”
Barry(Excited): “Of course, the boyfriend would say his girlfriend. I’d personally bet, that Bridgette will win.”
Baki(Calm): “I think Lucy will win, she’s powerful and special.”
Barry: “Oh! Someone’s got a crush!”
Keith laughed and looked at Baki.
Baki blushed and quickly said,
Baki(Embarrassed): “No! I don’t like Lucy that way!”
At the moment, 6 bladers called out together.
All: “3! 2! 1! Go Shoot!”
As Van pulled his ripcord, his String Launcher broke and Shu put all his power into his shoot.
Shu and Van are battling and the four girls have a battle, then Himawari, Izuku and Daishi.
RE: Beyblade Burst: Mystical - Carma___bigbang - Feb. 27, 2022
All I can say is wow
RE: Beyblade Burst: Mystical - PikaBeyblade - Feb. 27, 2022
(Feb. 24, 2022 7:06 PM)beansworth Wrote: Oh yeah, I forgot to mention how Obito doesn't care for the Zen'in Family and instead refers to himself as Obito Uchiha. He a diehard Naruto fan or something
Also what are Annie, Cleo, Lilia, and Bridgette’s last names also I saw an edit removing a character named Gabi and what was her last name
Also no requests but will my character be on the half that has more stars or less stars in this cruise arc
RE: Beyblade Burst: Mystical - beansworth - Feb. 28, 2022
(Feb. 27, 2022 11:33 PM)PikaBeyblade Wrote: (Feb. 24, 2022 7:06 PM)beansworth Wrote: Oh yeah, I forgot to mention how Obito doesn't care for the Zen'in Family and instead refers to himself as Obito Uchiha. He a diehard Naruto fan or something
Also what are Annie, Cleo, Lilia, and Bridgette’s last names also I saw an edit removing a character named Gabi and what was her last name
Also no requests but will my character be on the half that has more stars or less stars in this cruise arc Nah, I just gave him that because right now, I'm really into Naruto.
Annie, Cleo and Lilia are all sisters and their last name is Miller. Their all Americans.
Right now, I think I'll have Barry on the more stars side, but that may change later but right now, he'll be on the more half.
RE: Beyblade Burst: Mystical - PikaBeyblade - Feb. 28, 2022
Also the name Keith Shadis sounds like it’s from AOT
Probably the commander of the Trainee Corps
RE: Beyblade Burst: Mystical - beansworth - Feb. 28, 2022
(Feb. 28, 2022 1:56 AM)PikaBeyblade Wrote: Also the name Keith Shadis sounds like it’s from AOT
Probably the commander of the Trainee Corps Yeah, I got his last name from the AOT. And I had no clue his first name was also from AOT.
RE: Beyblade Burst: Mystical - PikaBeyblade - Feb. 28, 2022
Yeah actually the character with the last name Shadis’s first name is actually Keith
RE: Beyblade Burst: Mystical - beansworth - Feb. 28, 2022
(Feb. 28, 2022 2:19 AM)PikaBeyblade Wrote: Yeah actually the character with the last name Shadis’s first name is actually Keith Now that's mega dumb luck.
RE: Beyblade Burst: Mystical - DJCAT8608 - Feb. 28, 2022
finally Shu gets to kick Van's a-
Van will be rickrolled
RE: Beyblade Burst: Mystical - PikaBeyblade - Mar. 01, 2022
(Feb. 28, 2022 4:48 AM)beansworth Wrote: (Feb. 28, 2022 2:19 AM)PikaBeyblade Wrote: Yeah actually the character with the last name Shadis’s first name is actually Keith Now that's mega dumb luck.
I know right
RE: Beyblade Burst: Mystical - beansworth - Mar. 01, 2022
Next chapter already! Chapter 31! And with this chapter, we pass the halfway mark of Mystical, so if you can guess that means, there are 60 chapters in total for Mystical.
Chapter 31: Van V.S Shu! Mischievous Sync!
{Spriggan and Valkyrie hit the stadium floor, and Spriggan took center. While Valkyrie rushed around the outer ridge.}
Van: “Now, Calamity Shoot!”
{Valkyrie began barraging Spriggan, and Shu called out while his scar glew red.}
Shu(Confident): “Now, Spriggan! Legacy Spin!”
{Valkyrie hit Spriggan’s rubber axes, and Spriggan began absorbing Valkyrie’s spin.}
Van(Irritated): “Shu Kurenai! You’re so annoying with all your dumb modes!”
Shu(Calm): “Oh come on, Van. Maybe you’d be better if you used the correct sync. Now, Spriggan! Legacy Sync!”
Shu and Spriggan entered sync, and his aura changed massively.
{Valkyrie kept barraging Spriggan, and eventually went to the outer ridge, low on spin.}
Van(Angry): “Are you kidding me!?”
Shu(Sync): “You lose here.”
Van grit his teeth and clenched his fists, and then Rush’s tip retracted.
{Rush’s Tip retracted and the soft rubber hit the floor, Valkyrie sped up for the center}
Van(Angry): “Now, Calamity Rush!”
{Calamity Valkyrie rushed to Spriggan for it’s last attack and Shu was surprised, but changed his plans quickly.}
Shu(Sync): “Alright then. Now, Spriggan! Legacy Upper!”
{Valkyrie and Spriggan collided. Valkyrie was launched into the air and hit the ground.}
Shu chuckled
Shu(Calm): “If you wish to defeat me and Spriggan, train for another 18 years."
Van clenched his fist harder, and turned away, with Calamity Valkyrie in hand.
[in the stadium]
{Loki, Ifrit, Lachesis Moirai and Banshee hit the stadium floor, Banshee took center, and Moirai, Ifrit and Loki all began barraging each other.}
Irene(Confident): “Alright, Ifrit! Wave Shoot!”
Lucy(Calm): “Loki, together again! Ruin Shoot!”
Lilia(Excited): “Moirai, let's measure their fate, Rush Shoot!”
{Moirai and Banshee collided, while Loki and Ifrit battled for the center.}
Lucy(Calm): “I’ll beat you, Irene! I have the superior balance bey!”
Irene(Confident): “That’s what you think. Ifrit! Blazing Sync!”
{Ifrit hit Loki into the air, and Loki hit the stadium floor, with the rubber on it’s Attack Attachment, and shot towards Ifrit.}
Lilia(Excited): “Wow, your Banshee is so cool!”
Bridgette(Cold): “I don’t need your snarky comments on my bey.”
{Banshee kept spinning in the center, it’s round blades deflecting all the attacks from Moirai.}
Lilia: "Ok then, I tried being nice..."
{Moirai goes up the stadium slope and speeds up by the ridge}
Lucy(Nervous): “We’ll win, now go, Loki!”
Irene(Confident): “Prepare to lose! Erupting Claws!”
{The two balance beys collided and neither blader was giving in, but Lucy wasn’t feeling her normal self, as she would’ve entered her sync with Loki, but she couldn’t due to her and Loki’s connection fading.}
???: “Lucy! It’s time!”
Lucy(Confused): “Wait, who’s that!?”
???(blank): “Who else could it be? Loki, the god of mischief!”
{Lucy turned around and saw Loki floating there, looking completely upgraded, with his Ruin Spear in his left hand and his shield in his right hand.}
Lucy then teared up and little and called,
Lucy(Overjoyed): “Loki! Your back!”
Loki raised his spear and put it under Lucy’s feet and she stood on it, looking into Loki’s eyes.
Loki: “I’m indeed back, and our connection will never break again! (I hope) Now let’s go and enter in Sync!”
Lucy clenched her fists, and she became one with Loki.
Lucy(Confident): “Ha! Now, Mischievous Sync!”
Lucy’s aura changed and filled the entire room, and Shu called from the seating area.
Shu(Proud): “Now, Lucy! Show them the power of the Kurenai’s! You and Loki are the best in the world!”
{Lucy looked up to her father, who she had forgotten about for years, and was always angry with due to his work and not being there. She clenched her fists and called to Loki.}
Lucy(Sync): “Alright Loki, let’s take some inspiration from Dad! Counter Break!”
{Loki shot from the outer ridge, and the duel with Ifrit, and darted towards the center with Banshee and Moirai were battling.}
Bridgette(Cold): “Alright then, Banshee. Keening Grief!”
Lilia(Excited): “(perfect) ... But it ends here! Fate Smash!"
{Loki and Banshee began crashing in the center as Moirai came crashing down, hitting Ifrit onto the middle and bursting itself}
Irene(surprised): "Wha- Hey!"
{Ifrit hit both beys, sending Banshee out of the stadium.}
Bridgette(annoyed): "Hey! Why did you do that?"
{Lilia made a smile with her tongue sticking out}
Irene(Confident): “Hey, our duel isn’t over yet! Eruption Impact!”
Lucy stomped her left foot, and yelled out.
Lucy(Sync): “Loki! Havoc Spear!”
{Loki and Ifrit hit each other, and Ifrit roared out and slashed it’s claws at Loki, and Loki defended against it’s claws with his shield.}
{Then Loki gripped his spear harder, and pierced Ifrit with his spear.}
Ifrit launched out of the stadium, and Loki began to do laps around the outer ridge, while the machine called out.
Machine: “Havoc Loki with an Over Finish, Lucy Kurenai gets two stars.”
Lucy looked and saw Shu waving, calling out.
Shu(Proud): “That’s my daughter, Lucy! She’s the strongest around!”
Valt smiled and turned on the microphone,
Valt(On Mic): “Alright everyone! Meet up on the Yacht’s deck for two announcements!”
Everyone listened and walked up to the deck, and Valt, Shu and Free stood there.
Free walked forward and began speaking.
Free(Calm): “Alright bladers, today we have three new bladers joining us. Welcome, Daishi Kurayami, Himawari Akichiyo and finally, Izuku Suzuki, they all will be joining us.”
Then a shorter girl, a normal height boy and a tall boy all walked onto the deck. The girl had blue hair that reached her neck, and the one boy had maroon-like hair that was somewhat short, and the last boy had long black hair, that covered his right eye.
Free(Calm): “The girl is Himawari, the boy with maroon-like hair is Izuku and the black-haired boy is Daishi. And there are other bladers joining soon.”
Valt(Excited): “Now the Yacht Battle Cruise enters the Rising Action, and the battles will be more intense
Shu(Confident): “Alright, then! Battle 1- Keith, Daishi, Payne and Gabi!”
Keith looked at Daishi, who pulled a hair tie from his pocket, and tied his hair back. Payne chuckled and Gabi grabbed Gaia and smiled.
All of them walked to the on deck stadium, and Valt walked over and acted as the Ref.
Valt: “Alright bladers! This will be a Last One Standing match, whoever wins gets two stars!”
{All of the bladers got ready to launch, and Keith did his launch style, while Payne did his as well. Gabi did a handstand and flipped forward, jumped up and grabbed her string. Daishi pushed his right leg to the side, and put his right hand on the ground, and grabbed his string, and pulled it, the sting going far enough to look like the moon.}
Keith looked at Daishi, and saw a black and red bey, and it hit the floor.
{Kratos, Gaia, Phoenix and Daishi’s bey hit the floor, and Phoenix took center, while Gaia spun steadily around Phoenix, while Kratos sped around the outer ridge, and Daishi called out.}
Daishi(Cold): “This will be fast. Diabolos, Wither Shoot!”
{Diabolos, hit the wall and shot towards Phoenix but Kratos hit Diabolos, launching it up.}
Payne: "Thanks for the save I guess"
{Gabi was staring at Payne}
Payne: "What do you want?"
Gabi: "Oh, nothing. Just a little unusual to see you thanking Keith. Also..."
{Gabi whispers something to Payne, and he agrees}
Keith(Confident): “I’ll be winning!”
{Diabolos flew down to Kratos. Kratos hit Diabolos and it seemly burst.}
Keith: "Ha! Easy you said?"
Daishi(still neutral): "Yes... Easy"
{Diabolos lands on the stadium with a smaller bey that looked like it was half of its driver}
Keith(Confused): “Exactly what is that driver!?”
Daishi’s eyes glew
Daishi(Cold): “Like I'd tell you”
Keith clenched his fist
Keith: "It will be harder than I thought"
RE: Beyblade Burst: Mystical - DJCAT8608 - Mar. 01, 2022
new chapter pog
RE: Beyblade Burst: Mystical - Scorponok - Mar. 01, 2022
Will Shane be on the battleship cruise? If you don’t want to say because spoilers, that’s fine. ADHD just makes me impatient.
RE: Beyblade Burst: Mystical - beansworth - Mar. 01, 2022
(Mar. 01, 2022 8:00 PM)Scorponok Wrote: Will Shane be on the battleship cruise? If you don’t want to say because spoilers, that’s fine. ADHD just makes me impatient. I'm still deciding, because right now I have an even amount of bladers, but who can say will be on there and won't.
RE: Beyblade Burst: Mystical - PikaBeyblade - Mar. 02, 2022
(Mar. 01, 2022 8:00 PM)Scorponok Wrote: Will Shane be on the battleship cruise? If you don’t want to say because spoilers, that’s fine. ADHD just makes me impatient.
Same I also have ADHD
And Aspergers
Question. Who is Gabi?
RE: Beyblade Burst: Mystical - beansworth - Mar. 02, 2022
(Mar. 02, 2022 12:16 AM)PikaBeyblade Wrote: (Mar. 01, 2022 8:00 PM)Scorponok Wrote: Will Shane be on the battleship cruise? If you don’t want to say because spoilers, that’s fine. ADHD just makes me impatient.
Same I also have ADHD
And Aspergers
Question. Who is Gabi? Who is Gabi? Good question, she's a Blader who took off in power in Germany, where she eventually became the top blader. She takes inspiration from Earth, and loves the outdoors, which is why she created Matriach Gaia.
RE: Beyblade Burst: Mystical - DJCAT8608 - Mar. 02, 2022
I have ADHD aswell (also me waiting for DJ CAT to show up to see how he does in the story)
RE: Beyblade Burst: Mystical - PikaBeyblade - Mar. 02, 2022
(Mar. 02, 2022 1:16 AM)beansworth Wrote: (Mar. 02, 2022 12:16 AM)PikaBeyblade Wrote: Same I also have ADHD
And Aspergers
Question. Who is Gabi? Who is Gabi? Good question, she's a Blader who took off in power in Germany, where she eventually became the top blader. She takes inspiration from Earth, and loves the outdoors, which is why she created Matriach Gaia.
Also what is her last name, I’m assuming it’s Braun because u like anime
RE: Beyblade Burst: Mystical - beansworth - Mar. 02, 2022
(Mar. 02, 2022 3:09 AM)PikaBeyblade Wrote: (Mar. 02, 2022 1:16 AM)beansworth Wrote: Who is Gabi? Good question, she's a Blader who took off in power in Germany, where she eventually became the top blader. She takes inspiration from Earth, and loves the outdoors, which is why she created Matriach Gaia.
Also what is her last name, I’m assuming it’s Braun because u like anime Nah, it's actually Zoe, which is still a AoT reference to Hange Zoe.
RE: Beyblade Burst: Mystical - beansworth - Mar. 02, 2022
Okay, so I needed to make a heads up for when Van and Obito battle, in their fight that's coming up, it could get somewhat graphic as in, the bladers will have some blood and Obito might go crazy, with his mask off.
RE: Beyblade Burst: Mystical - DJCAT8608 - Mar. 02, 2022
*insert thumbs up*
RE: Beyblade Burst: Mystical - PikaBeyblade - Mar. 02, 2022
(Mar. 02, 2022 3:45 AM)beansworth Wrote: (Mar. 02, 2022 3:09 AM)PikaBeyblade Wrote: Also what is her last name, I’m assuming it’s Braun because u like anime Nah, it's actually Zoe, which is still a AoT reference to Hange Zoe.
Lots of references to anime here
RE: Beyblade Burst: Mystical - UnseenBurst - Mar. 03, 2022
(Mar. 01, 2022 6:24 PM)beansworth Wrote: Next chapter already! Chapter 31! And with this chapter, we pass the halfway mark of Mystical, so if you can guess that means, there are 60 chapters in total for Mystical.
Chapter 31: Van V.S Shu! Mischievous Sync!
{Spriggan and Valkyrie hit the stadium floor, and Spriggan took center. While Valkyrie rushed around the outer ridge.}
Van: “Now, Calamity Shoot!”
{Valkyrie began barraging Spriggan, and Shu called out while his scar glew red.}
Shu(Confident): “Now, Spriggan! Legacy Spin!”
{Valkyrie hit Spriggan’s rubber axes, and Spriggan began absorbing Valkyrie’s spin.}
Van(Irritated): “Shu Kurenai! You’re so annoying with all your dumb modes!”
Shu(Calm): “Oh come on, Van. Maybe you’d be better if you used the correct sync. Now, Spriggan! Legacy Sync!”
Shu and Spriggan entered sync, and his aura changed massively.
{Valkyrie kept barraging Spriggan, and eventually went to the outer ridge, low on spin.}
Van(Angry): “Are you kidding me!?”
Shu(Sync): “You lose here.”
Van grit his teeth and clenched his fists, and then Rush’s tip retracted.
{Rush’s Tip retracted and the soft rubber hit the floor, Valkyrie sped up for the center}
Van(Angry): “Now, Calamity Rush!”
{Calamity Valkyrie rushed to Spriggan for it’s last attack and Shu was surprised, but changed his plans quickly.}
Shu(Sync): “Alright then. Now, Spriggan! Legacy Upper!”
{Valkyrie and Spriggan collided. Valkyrie was launched into the air and hit the ground.}
Shu chuckled
Shu(Calm): “If you wish to defeat me and Spriggan, train for another 18 years."
Van clenched his fist harder, and turned away, with Calamity Valkyrie in hand.
[in the stadium]
{Loki, Ifrit, Lachesis Moirai and Banshee hit the stadium floor, Banshee took center, and Moirai, Ifrit and Loki all began barraging each other.}
Irene(Confident): “Alright, Ifrit! Wave Shoot!”
Lucy(Calm): “Loki, together again! Ruin Shoot!”
Lilia(Excited): “Moirai, let's measure their fate, Rush Shoot!”
{Moirai and Banshee collided, while Loki and Ifrit battled for the center.}
Lucy(Calm): “I’ll beat you, Irene! I have the superior balance bey!”
Irene(Confident): “That’s what you think. Ifrit! Blazing Sync!”
{Ifrit hit Loki into the air, and Loki hit the stadium floor, with the rubber on it’s Attack Attachment, and shot towards Ifrit.}
Lilia(Excited): “Wow, your Banshee is so cool!”
Bridgette(Cold): “I don’t need your snarky comments on my bey.”
{Banshee kept spinning in the center, it’s round blades deflecting all the attacks from Moirai.}
Lilia: "Ok then, I tried being nice..."
{Moirai goes up the stadium slope and speeds up by the ridge}
Lucy(Nervous): “We’ll win, now go, Loki!”
Irene(Confident): “Prepare to lose! Erupting Claws!”
{The two balance beys collided and neither blader was giving in, but Lucy wasn’t feeling her normal self, as she would’ve entered her sync with Loki, but she couldn’t due to her and Loki’s connection fading.}
???: “Lucy! It’s time!”
Lucy(Confused): “Wait, who’s that!?”
???(blank): “Who else could it be? Loki, the god of mischief!”
{Lucy turned around and saw Loki floating there, looking completely upgraded, with his Ruin Spear in his left hand and his shield in his right hand.}
Lucy then teared up and little and called,
Lucy(Overjoyed): “Loki! Your back!”
Loki raised his spear and put it under Lucy’s feet and she stood on it, looking into Loki’s eyes.
Loki: “I’m indeed back, and our connection will never break again! (I hope) Now let’s go and enter in Sync!”
Lucy clenched her fists, and she became one with Loki.
Lucy(Confident): “Ha! Now, Mischievous Sync!”
Lucy’s aura changed and filled the entire room, and Shu called from the seating area.
Shu(Proud): “Now, Lucy! Show them the power of the Kurenai’s! You and Loki are the best in the world!”
{Lucy looked up to her father, who she had forgotten about for years, and was always angry with due to his work and not being there. She clenched her fists and called to Loki.}
Lucy(Sync): “Alright Loki, let’s take some inspiration from Dad! Counter Break!”
{Loki shot from the outer ridge, and the duel with Ifrit, and darted towards the center with Banshee and Moirai were battling.}
Bridgette(Cold): “Alright then, Banshee. Keening Grief!”
Lilia(Excited): “(perfect) ... But it ends here! Fate Smash!"
{Loki and Banshee began crashing in the center as Moirai came crashing down, hitting Ifrit onto the middle and bursting itself}
Irene(surprised): "Wha- Hey!"
{Ifrit hit both beys, sending Banshee out of the stadium.}
Bridgette(annoyed): "Hey! Why did you do that?"
{Lilia made a smile with her tongue sticking out}
Irene(Confident): “Hey, our duel isn’t over yet! Eruption Impact!”
Lucy stomped her left foot, and yelled out.
Lucy(Sync): “Loki! Havoc Spear!”
{Loki and Ifrit hit each other, and Ifrit roared out and slashed it’s claws at Loki, and Loki defended against it’s claws with his shield.}
{Then Loki gripped his spear harder, and pierced Ifrit with his spear.}
Ifrit launched out of the stadium, and Loki began to do laps around the outer ridge, while the machine called out.
Machine: “Havoc Loki with an Over Finish, Lucy Kurenai gets two stars.”
Lucy looked and saw Shu waving, calling out.
Shu(Proud): “That’s my daughter, Lucy! She’s the strongest around!”
Valt smiled and turned on the microphone,
Valt(On Mic): “Alright everyone! Meet up on the Yacht’s deck for two announcements!”
Everyone listened and walked up to the deck, and Valt, Shu and Free stood there.
Free walked forward and began speaking.
Free(Calm): “Alright bladers, today we have three new bladers joining us. Welcome, Daishi Kurayami, Himawari Akichiyo and finally, Izuku Suzuki, they all will be joining us.”
Then a shorter girl, a normal height boy and a tall boy all walked onto the deck. The girl had blue hair that reached her neck, and the one boy had maroon-like hair that was somewhat short, and the last boy had long black hair, that covered his right eye.
Free(Calm): “The girl is Himawari, the boy with maroon-like hair is Izuku and the black-haired boy is Daishi. And there are other bladers joining soon.”
Valt(Excited): “Now the Yacht Battle Cruise enters the Rising Action, and the battles will be more intense
Shu(Confident): “Alright, then! Battle 1- Keith, Daishi, Payne and Gabi!”
Keith looked at Daishi, who pulled a hair tie from his pocket, and tied his hair back. Payne chuckled and Gabi grabbed Gaia and smiled.
All of them walked to the on deck stadium, and Valt walked over and acted as the Ref.
Valt: “Alright bladers! This will be a Last One Standing match, whoever wins gets two stars!”
{All of the bladers got ready to launch, and Keith did his launch style, while Payne did his as well. Gabi did a handstand and flipped forward, jumped up and grabbed her string. Daishi pushed his right leg to the side, and put his right hand on the ground, and grabbed his string, and pulled it, the sting going far enough to look like the moon.}
Keith looked at Daishi, and saw a black and red bey, and it hit the floor.
{Kratos, Gaia, Phoenix and Daishi’s bey hit the floor, and Phoenix took center, while Gaia spun steadily around Phoenix, while Kratos sped around the outer ridge, and Daishi called out.}
Daishi(Cold): “This will be fast. Diabolos, Wither Shoot!”
{Diabolos, hit the wall and shot towards Phoenix but Kratos hit Diabolos, launching it up.}
Payne: "Thanks for the save I guess"
{Gabi was staring at Payne}
Payne: "What do you want?"
Gabi: "Oh, nothing. Just a little unusual to see you thanking Keith. Also..."
{Gabi whispers something to Payne, and he agrees}
Keith(Confident): “I’ll be winning!”
{Diabolos flew down to Kratos. Kratos hit Diabolos and it seemly burst.}
Keith: "Ha! Easy you said?"
Daishi(still neutral): "Yes... Easy"
{Diabolos lands on the stadium with a smaller bey that looked like it was half of its driver}
Keith(Confused): “Exactly what is that driver!?”
Daishi’s eyes glew
Daishi(Cold): “Like I'd tell you”
Keith clenched his fist
Keith: "It will be harder than I thought"
Izuku Midoryia?! Anyways I’m excited to see how Izuku and the other newer characters develop. I wonder who will win the Battle Royal? Anyways you’re doing a good job with the fanfic and I’m excited to see how you improve and how you do on this fanfic in the future! 
RE: Beyblade Burst: Mystical - beansworth - Mar. 04, 2022
Chapter time! Yay! 32
Chapter 32: Delta’s Successor! Wither Slash!
{Diabolos and it’s mini-bey spun around the outer ridge, and the mini-bey turned around and went straight towards Diabolos.}
Valt, watched and remembered back with Delta, and his Venom Diabolos, and how he would use the Bullet Driver and win his matches.
Keith(Nervous): “Isn’t that going to make you lose!?”
Daishi(Cold): “Now’s the time. Cannon Break!”
{The Mini-Bey collided with Diabolos’ Below Disc, and hit it, and it shot towards the center, where Phoenix was.}
Payne(Angry): “What is that!? Phoenix, now!”
{Phoenix’s avatar awakened and, Payne synchronized with it.}
Payne: “Now, Phoenix! Crimson Flame Sync!”
{Then the Mini-Bey hit Phoenix, and the two began colliding, and Gaia drift on the edge of the Moment Driver.}
Gabi(Excited): “Gaia, Moment Crush!”
{Gaia drift and went to the center and hit the Mini-Bey, shooting it into the wall.}
Keith(Irritated): “You two are working together? Come on!?”
{Then Diabolos hit Kratos, and pushed it’s Bound Blade back, and Keith called.}
Keith(Excited): “Now, Mythical Bound!”
{Kratos hit Diabolos and launched it away, Diabolos hit the close wall, and Gabi called.}
Gabi: “Let’s go, Gaia! Matriach Smash!”
Payne(Excited): “Phoenix! Everburn Counter!”
{Both beys, drift and shot towards Keith, and he grit his teeth, calling.}
Keith(Irritated): “Why is everyone out for me!? Kratos! God Sync!”
{Keith and Kratos entered their sync, and Diabolos, Phoenix and Gaia, and went for Kratos.}
Daishi(Cold): “Alright, Diabolos! Wither Slash!”
{All the beys hit Kratos, and everyone was calling out, Valt and the other legends watched the battle, and saw how powerful the new generation was.}
{Then Gaia and Phoenix were launched out, and Diabolos hit the stadium wall, out of stamina and on it’s final lock. Kratos was also low on stamina.}
Valt(Curious): “Who’s gonna win, it’s close!”
{Diabolos then slowed down, and Kratos was still spinning and Valt called out.}
Valt: “Mythical Kratos, with a Spin Finish, Keith Shadis is the winner! He earns two stars!”
Keith clenched his fist and called,
Keith(Excited): “Hell yeah! I still got it!”
The other three all walked away, and the next battle was announced.
Shu: “Alright the next battle is Irene, Obito, Yuito and War. Prepare for battle.”
The bladers walked to the stadium and readied their beys and launches.
All: “3! 2! 1! Go Shoot!”
{Ifrit, Orion, Yaoguai and Warrior hit the stadium floor and Ifrit took center.}
Irene(Confident): “Ifrit, we won’t lose! Eruption Zone!”
{Yaogaui drift on the rubber of the Aggression Driver, and shot towards Ifrit.}
Yuito(Courageous): “Now, Ghastly Shoot!”
{Yaogaui began barraging Ifrit, and Orion and Warrior shot towards each other.}
War(Confident): “Now, Forceful Shoot!”
Obito(Cold): “This battle is ours, Constellation Shoot.”
{Warrior and Orion collided and both bladers looked at each other, and Obito’s red eye pierced War’s spirit, but he wouldn’t submit.}
War(Confident): “Now, Warrior, together we’re the best! Eternal Sync!”
{Warrior’s avatar appeared, and he swung his sword at Orion’s avatar!}
Obito clenched his fist and veins could be seen appearing on his fists.
Obito(Pissed): “You’re pissing me off, War! Constellation Sync!”
{Orion’s avatar appeared, and his star cloak danced with the stars, he gripped his staff and swung it.}
{The two avatars began battling, Warrior swung his sword at Orion, who would block every swing with his staff.}
Obito slammed his foot into the floor, and yelled out.
Obito(Sync): “I’m ending every thing here! Zodiac Splitter!”
War(Sync): “Warrior, hold up! Immortal Saber!”
{The two beys hit each other, and no one could see who was winning!}
Obito(Sync): “Orion, hold steady! We are the best, Ragh!”
{Then Warrior shot into the stadium war, and burst! War’s face changed and he gasped, then called.}
War(Sad): “No, Warrior! We were doing so good!”
{Ifrit, then countered Yaoguai and it shot away from Ifrit, and got into the way of the rampaging Orion.}
Obito saw Yaoguai, and powered up with Orion and grit his teeth, his only visible eye became corrupt with power.
Obito(Sync): “Now, once again! Zodiac Splitter!”
{Then Orion hit Yaoguai, and shot it straight into the air, and then blitzed down to Ifrit.}
{Yaoguai then burst and Yuito called,}
Yuito(Shattered): “No, Yaoguai! I thought finally we could compete with them!”
Yaoguai(Frightened): “Yuito, something is wrong!”
Yuito was shocked by the fact, this was him and Yaoguai’s first talk, but also the fact, Yaoguai was frightened.
Yuito(Concerned): “What is it, Yaoguai?”
Yaoguai(Concerned): “I think Orion’s done something to me, it feels like he’s---”
{Then Yuito looked forward, and saw Yaoguai, and the Layer shattered into 7 different pieces.}
Yuito then yelled out,
Yuito(Mad): “No, Yaoguai! No!!”
Obito looked at Yuito and said,
Obito(Cold): “That’s what happens to the weak bladers.”
Yuito grit his teeth and clenched his fists.
Then Annie, and her sisters ran forward and yelled at Obito,
Annie(Mad): “Obito! What have you become!?”
Obito looked at her, and he grit his teeth while saying,
Obito(Mad): “I’ve become a different, stronger man.”
{Then Orion shot to the center, and hit Ifrit, but it didn’t burst instantly.}
Irene(Angry): “I’m tired of you, and Van breaking beys! Me and Ifrit will beat you, Eruption Upper!”
Obito’s hands tightened and his veins showed, then he called.
Obito(Angry): “And I’ve had enough of you, bugs that get in the way! Zodiac Slash!”
{Orion hit Ifrit, and Ifrit launched out of the stadium, and Shu called,}
Shu: “Zodiac Orion with a Over Finish, two stars are awarded to Obito Uchiha.”
Obito grabbed Orion, and walked away, but Annie and Lilia grabbed his jacket, and Annie said,
Annie(Angry): “Your not getting away that easy, Obito!
Obito(Mad): “I’ll break you, Annie.”
He then slapped their arms off and exited the battle area.
Free walked forward, and called.
Free: “Well that was something, and now begins our new battle style. You’ll are be put onto duos and battle. Tomorrow, will be A Groups Battles.”
Then Valt pressed the button and everyone’s names were randomly spun, and the Machine called out Group A’s Bladers.
Machine: “Round 1: Keith and Izuku Versus Daishi and Annie. This match will give three stars to the winning team.”
Keith and Izuku looked to each other, and Izuku gave Keith, a smile and Keith thought to himself.
Keith(Mind): “Guess this guy, is friendly and will help me out!”
Daishi slumped off the wall, and walked to his room.
Keith looked to everyone’s ratings and saw that barely anyone had any stars, and he was one of the few with stars.
He exited the Blading Area, and walked to his room and grabbed his dinner, and began to watch blading matches from the past, to hone his skills to win against Daishi and Annie.
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