RE: UnseenBurst's Fanfictions (Beyblade Burst Yin Yang/TechnoX ongoing) - GenesisBlader - Sep. 05, 2021
(Sep. 03, 2021 1:30 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Chapter 19 is a long chapter but a good one.
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Beyblade Burst TechnoX
Chapter 19
The Space Venturer! Galactic Apollo!
(Honcho walks into Kris’ office sadly)
Kris: Rantaro? What’s going on?
Honcho: I’ve got some… news.
Kris: What is it?
Honcho: I won’t be able to participate with BC Sol for the league.
Kris: *Gasps* What happened?
Honcho: The Bombers need me for the tournament, I’m their coach so, I need to do this, I hope you understand.
Kris: Of course I understand, go out there and give it you're all!
Honcho: Thanks, I’m planning on it!!
(Me and Aleph barge in)
Me: You’re leaving BC Sol?!
Honcho: It’s nothing like that Lil bud, I’m just… not going to be able to participate in the tournament with you!
Aleph: But we need you, who else is gonna be our Third Member?
Honcho: I’m sure Kris has that all planned for you, but, I’m sorry, I won’t be able to compete, but now, you guys are the enemies so I’m expecting a great battle once our paths cross again!!
Me: I’ll beat you again any day!
Honcho: Ha! That’ll be a long wait, buddy!!
Aleph (Thoughts): Everyone’s getting stronger… What about me though? I’ve got to start training harder!!
(Hinote barges in the room)
Hinote: There you guys are, where were you?
Aleph: We were in here, talking to Kris and Honcho!
Hinote: Ok, anything interesting going on?
Me/Aleph: Honcho won’t be participating in the tournament with us.
Hinote: Excuse me?!
~Later That Day While Kris Is Doing Paperwork~
Kris: *Sighs* It’s a shame that Rantaro couldn’t join us.
(Kris’ phone starts ringing, Kris picks it up)
Kris: Hello?
???: Kris, I’ve got a hot lead on the Snake Pit project still being in progress, I think I saw Alexander going somewhere!!
Kris: You do? Where are you?!
???: I'm currently hot on his tail, but he's fast. I might lose him!
Kris: Stay on him no matter what, we can’t let the Requiem Project happen again!
???: I will-- I--- *Gasps*
Kris: What--
(Kris’ call gets cut off)
Kris: He’s in trouble, we’ve gotta help him!!
(Valt, Free, Sisco, Honcho and I barge in the room)
Valt: Kris, we heard you yell something! What’s going on?!
Kris: Asher, he’s in trouble!
All (Except Me): *Gasps* Asher’s in trouble?!
Me: Who’s Asher?
Honcho: Asher Suzuki, he’s a powerful Blader on BC Sol and even claimed the Legend’s Champion status! He’s currently looking for any suspicious Snake Pit project’s!
Sisco: Looks like the runt got in trouble and needs us to help him.
Me: Wasn’t the Snake Pit in Mexico? We’ll never make it there in time!
Free: There’s one way.
(A teenager in a purple jacket and black pants bursts through the door)
Wakiya: Wakiya Komurasaki in the building!!
Me/Valt/Honcho/Sisco: Wakiya?!
Waikya: That’s right, in the flesh!!
Kris: Wakiya, what’re you doing here?
Wakiya: I assumed Valt and Honcho were missing me so, they wanted me to visit, so, I did you a favor and came!!
Honcho: Admit it, you were missing us!
Wakiya: What gave you that idea?! I’m perfectly fine without you!!
Honcho: Sure, let’s pretend that’s the reason you came.
Wakiya: And lucky I did, sounds like you need my help to get to Mexico!
Valt: Awesome, we need to get to Mexico asap. Can you get us there in time?
Wakiya: Of course I can, they don’t call me the WBBA’s Commissioner for nothing!
Honcho: I’m pretty sure they do.
Wakiya: Grr!!
Me: Awesome, let’s get going.
Hinote: Not without us, you aren't!
(Hinote and Aleph walk in the room)
Me: Guys, you don’t need to come.
Aleph: We’re with you all the way! What do you say Kris? we promise we’ll help!
Kris: How can I say no? Let’s get going!
~In Wakiya’s Airplane Garage~
Wakiya: As you can see, we’ve got a whole collection of planes! But, we’ll be riding the fastest plane that I have!!
Me: *Gulps* Which one is it?
Wakiya: Roaring Tornado!!
(Wakiya points to a plane with flames on it and a cool design)
Valt: Woah, that looks super fun!!
Kris: Um… Wakiya, are you sure this is safe?
Wakiya: Of course it’s safe, I’ll be flying at full speed!!
Aleph: You’re not letting a Pilot take us?
Wakiya: I’ve had Two Weeks of lessons, I’ll be fine!
Sisco: And how are those going?
Wakiya: Just get on the plane!!
Me: Fine, fine.
(We all get on the plane, Wakiya gets in the Pilot seat, we all buckle up)
Wakiya: Did I mention we have a Plane Junkyard?
Honcho: Why would you have a Plane Junkyard?
Wakiya: For all the planes that couldn’t handle my amazing skills!
All: Wait what?! I want off!!
Wakiya: Too late!!
(Wakiya pulls the lever, the plane blasts off and goes at super-high speeds, The plane wobbles and spins around)
Honcho: Why did we trust you?!
Free: This is actually kinda fun.
Valt: Wee!!
Aleph: I think I’m going to be sick!!
Wakiya: Shall we kick it up a notch?
Me/Aleph/Hinote/Honcho/Sisco/Kris: No!!
Wakiya: I’ll take that as a yes!!
(Wakiya pulls the lever to maximum speeds, we start going hyper fast)
Me: Why are we doing this?!
Wakiya: I’m a great pilot, aren’t I?
All: No!!
Wakiya: Well, we’re in Mexico now!
Sisco: How are we going to stop?
Wakiya: I don’t know, the landing lessons were supposed to be today but I blew them off to come to BC Sol!
All: What?!
(Honcho points to a rock)
Honcho: If the wing hits the rock and we start spiraling on the ground we could get in the hangar without crashing!!
Me: Lean!!
(We all lean to the side, the plane’s wing slams into the rock, we start spiraling on the ground and enter safely in the hanger)
Wakiya: Unbelievable! You wrecked my very expensive plane!!
All: It was the plane or our lives!!
Wakiya: Whatever, let’s get going.
~In The Forest Entrance~
Me: I hope Asher’s alright.
Honcho: Asher’s a weird one but a tough one. If he is in trouble he’ll be able to get himself out of it.
Kris: Honcho's right, Asher’s capable of anything!
Wakiya: Let’s hope he’s capable of getting himself out of trouble.
~20 Minutes Later~
Me: We’ve been searching for twenty minutes, what if he’s not here?
Valt: I’m sure he’s here… somewhere.
Sisco: Maybe we should take a break.
Aleph: Asher could be in trouble, we need to help him!
Wakiya: As Kris said, Asher’s totally capable of taking care of himself, we could take a little break.
Kris: Um… I don’t know.
Hinote: We’ve gotta keep looking!
Sisco: It won’t hurt to take a little break!
Hinote/Aleph: Grr!!
Kris: I guess we’d have a better chance of finding Asher if we took a break.
Hinote: You can’t be serious, Asher could be in serious trouble and we’re just eating?!
Kris: I’ve known Asher for a good amount of time, he’ll be fine. But, if we don’t rest up right now, we could get lost.
Hinote: Grr!!!
Aleph: Hey, man. What Kris says makes sense, maybe we should rest up.
Hinote: How would you feel if you were lost and you knew nobody was looking for you!!
Me: Chill, Hinote--
Hinote: No, I’m going to find him with or without you!!
(Hinote runs off)
Me: Hinote, wait!!
(I run off after him)
Kris: *Gasps* Guys, you’ll get lost!
~Deep Inside The Forest~
(I chase after Hinote at full speed)
Me: Hinote, we can talk about this, just wait!!
Hinote: No!
(Hinote makes a turn, I slip on a rock and go in the opposite direction)
Me: Aah!!
(A mysterious person jumps out of the trees and stops me from hitting a tree)
Me: What happened? Is this--
???: Nah, you’re fine, luckily I saw you before you hit that tree!
Me: Thanks-- Asher Suzuki?!
Asher: Yup, it’s me! Now, what’re you doing deep inside a forest-like here?
Me: We were actually looking for you!
Asher: Why-- Ooh!!
Me: “Ooh” what?
Asher: You see, earlier I was talking to Kris and then the call got cut off, but that isn’t the whole situation.
Me: Spill the beans already!
Asher: So, right when I was about to tell her something, Evel, Hyde’s Beyblade Professor, saw me and launched his Bey at my phone which broke it and cut off the call.
Me: So, why didn’t you catch Evel?
Asher: I was right about to in till he used a Smoke Bomb and ran off, without a trace.
Me: So…
Asher: Yeah, Unova, I’m looking for Evel.
Me: How do you know my name?
Asher: I’ve been keeping up with BC Sol online, you’re getting pretty good!
Me: I could say the same about you!
(Asher holds up his Bey)
Asher: Why don’t we have a battle then?
Me: Woah! What’s that Bey called?!
Asher: It’s my partner, Galactic Apollo!
(Apollo glimmers in the light)
Me: Alright, let’s have a battle!
(Hinote runs over to us)
Hinote: *Gasps* You found him?!
Me: Yeah, we’re going to battle!
Hinote: Of course, anyways, I’ll be the referee!
Me: Before that, why’d you get so angry earlier?
Hinote: *Sighs* I’m one of Asher’s biggest fans.
Me/Asher: *Gasps*
Hinote: He was the one who inspired me to rise up and join BC Sol.
Asher: Awesome, I didn’t know I had fans!
Hinote: Yeah, so when we were taking a break instead of looking, I Kinda lost it.
Me: Yeah, sorry about that.
Hinote: It’s fine now! I wanna see an awesome battle!!
Me: But where are we going to battle?
Asher: Over here!
(Asher pushes some vines out of the way revealing a stadium)
Me/Hinote: Woah!!
Asher: Now, let’s get to battling!
~At The Stadium~
Hinote: Inspect your opponent’s Bey!
Me (Thoughts): Galactic Apollo, a crazy powerful Attack Type! It spins Clockwise, And has Four Blades! Two Huge Blades and Two Smaller ones. The Huge Ones can be used for powerful strikes to try and burst the opponent’s Bey, and the smaller ones have rubber on them and bound blades! The Driver is electric and a Dash Driver, it also has some metal on it, man, Asher’s a tough nut to crack.
Asher: I’ve been getting way stronger since my Legendary Tournament Win! So, don’t expect me to go easy on you!!
Me: Trust me, I won’t!
Hinote: Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Me/Asher: Go, Shoot!!
(I pull off a powerful Techno Shoot, Asher pulls off a wickedly powerful Techno Shoot)
Me: *Gasps*
Asher: Take ‘em out! Apollo!!
(Apollo speeds up and hits Ultravor rapidly with a barrage of powerful blows)
Me: Counter, Techno Shoot!!
(Ultravor speeds up and starts countering all of Apollo’s attacks)
Asher: Nice, you’ve got some skill!
Me: Heh! So do you!
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(Apollo starts gaining speed as it runs laps in the stadium)
Asher: We’re gonna win! Galactic Shoot!!
(Apollo starts hitting Ultravor rapidly with swift powerful attacks)
Me: It isn’t over yet! Ultravor!!
(My Resonance Aura flares up Ultravor blazes out of the Bey)
Me: Techno Discharge!!
(Ultravor slams into Apollo sending it flying in the air)
Asher: Apollo!!
(Asher’s Resonance Aura flares up Apollo blazes out of the Bey, Apollo starts glowing Rainbow, Apollo lands and starts speeding up)
Me: *Gasps* How did Apollo survive?!
Asher: It’s time to go all out!! Galactic Sonic Boom!!!
(Apollo slams into Ultravor at full power sending it flying in the air, a Rainbow Sonic Bomb gets sent all across the forest as Ultravor bursts)
Me: *Gasps*
Hinote: It’s Galactic Apollo with a Burst Finish! Asher Suzuki is the winner!!
~During Kris And The Gang’s Break~
Kris: Why aren’t they--
(A huge boom sound ouccers, everyone looks up to see a Rainbow Sonic Boom)
Sisco: I’m going to guess that’s where Asher is.
Honcho: C’mon, we’ve gotta follow it to the source!
(Honcho and the gang runoff)
~Back At The Stadium In The Forest~
Me: Apollo’s so powerful and fast… No matter what I did it’d just gain speed.
Asher: Don’t be too upset, you’re the first person I’ve battled that could almost match Apollo.
Me: Almost isn’t enough.
(Kris and the gang burst through the vines)
Kris: Amazing! You guys found him!
Valt: Asher, long time no see!
Asher: Yeah, it’s been a while, Valt!
Honcho: We’ve been worried sick, come out all the way here, and you’re completely fine?!
Asher: I know, Unova told me, let me tell you everything that happened.
(Asher explains what happened)
Kris: So, you lost Evel?
Asher: Yeah, but, I feel like I’m really getting close to catching them!
Honcho: So, what’s the stadium for?
Asher: Practice, I’ve gotta become wicked strong if I wanna defeat the Snake Pit Bladers!
Kris: Can I ask a favor of you?
Asher: Sure, what is it?
Kris: Would you be willing to join BC Sol in the tournament we’re joining soon?
All: *Gasps*
Kris: The Snake Pit isn’t going anywhere, you deserve a break.
Asher: As much as I want to keep looking, I guess Justin and Harry could handle it!
Honcho: Asher, you’re taking my spot so, you better lead them to victory!!
Valt: Nah, I’ll be doing that!
Honcho: Oh please, you’d lose your head if it wasn’t bolted on.
Kris: BC Sol is going through some changes, but, we’ll be able to win this tournament, no matter what!
All: Yeah!!
~On The Plane Ride Home~
Wakiya: Ugh. Why do we have to take this boring plane when I could have one of mine shipped here in a couple of days?
Honcho: Yeah, I’m never going to go on a plane where you’re the Pilot ever again.
Wakiya: Grr!! Why you!
Me: So, Asher, I’ve got a question for you.
Asher: Ask me anything except Math!
Me: How’d you become so strong in a short period of time, and what happened to Apollo when you Resonated with it?
Asher: That’s called Rainbow Blaze.
Me: “Rainbow Blaze?”
Asher: Yeah, I trained super hard with Apollo and Resonated with it a bunch, he’s always with me so I’m always checking in with him!
Me: So, you bonded with Apollo and trained to become stronger?
Asher: Exactly, and--
(I fall asleep)
Asher: Man, you’re going places.
~In My Dream~
Me: Ultravor, let’s become the strongest together!
Ultravor: We’ll become the strongest team in the world!
Me/Ultravor: We’ll surpass all the Legends!!
[b][i]I cannot put in words how much nostalgia was projected from this episode. Nice one! Asher's gotten pretty strong![/b][/i]
RE: UnseenBurst's Fanfictions (Beyblade Burst Yin Yang/TechnoX ongoing) - UnseenBurst - Sep. 05, 2021
Updated Product List (Note, this may spoil upcoming Beys)
September 26th
Customization Set (Comes with Atlantic Trident, Typhoon Pirate, Dire Aeneas, and Malicious Loki)
October 12th
Starter Regal Spriggan (Comes with an evolution gear and an evolution Layer for Asriel and Anpao)
October 26th
Booster Brutish Luinor
RE: UnseenBurst's Fanfictions (Beyblade Burst Yin Yang/TechnoX ongoing) - CelBeyBlade - Sep. 05, 2021
(Sep. 05, 2021 1:30 AM)CelBeyBlade Wrote: By the way who chose scorbunny and make him/her sweep half of Leon's team with Pyro Ball and double edge
Answer me please
RE: UnseenBurst's Fanfictions (Beyblade Burst Yin Yang/TechnoX ongoing) - UnseenBurst - Sep. 05, 2021
(Sep. 05, 2021 2:57 AM)CelBeyBlade Wrote: (Sep. 05, 2021 1:30 AM)CelBeyBlade Wrote: By the way who chose scorbunny and make him/her sweep half of Leon's team with Pyro Ball and double edge
Answer me please
This isn't the right thread to be talking about this in, try looking for a Pokemon Sword and Shield Thread.
I've edited the Product List, go check it out!
RE: Beyblade Burst Yin Yang - GenesisBlader - Sep. 05, 2021
(Aug. 18, 2021 7:07 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: 12) A Tag Battle Stereotype
13) Adrian Goes Nuts (XD)
14) World Champion(S)
15) Journey To Spain!
wow i wonder how much nuts he will go, like peanuts, coconuts, almond nuts...
RE: UnseenBurst's Fanfictions (Beyblade Burst Yin Yang/TechnoX ongoing) - UnseenBurst - Sep. 05, 2021
I know it's been a while since I've posted a chapter it's just that Chapter 22 is taking a super long time to write, but, it'll be ready by tomorrow evening
RE: UnseenBurst's Fanfictions (Beyblade Burst Yin Yang/TechnoX ongoing) - Hollowmind13 - Sep. 05, 2021
(Sep. 05, 2021 1:59 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Updated Product List (Note, this may spoil upcoming Beys)
September 26th
Customization Set (Comes with Atlantic Trident, Typhoon Pirate, Dire Aeneas, and Malicious Loki)
October 12th
Starter Regal Spriggan (Comes with an evolution gear and an evolution Layer for Asriel and Anpao)
October 26th
Booster Brutish Luinor
For one second I thought it was "British Luinor"
RE: UnseenBurst's Fanfictions (Beyblade Burst Yin Yang/TechnoX ongoing) - GhostFox - Sep. 05, 2021
(Sep. 05, 2021 8:15 AM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: (Sep. 05, 2021 1:59 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Updated Product List (Note, this may spoil upcoming Beys)
September 26th
Customization Set (Comes with Atlantic Trident, Typhoon Pirate, Dire Aeneas, and Malicious Loki)
October 12th
Starter Regal Spriggan (Comes with an evolution gear and an evolution Layer for Asriel and Anpao)
October 26th
Booster Brutish Luinor
For one second I thought it was "British Luinor" LOL SAME
When I was reading the products list I was like:
Ok... Customize set, Atlantic Trident, Typhoon Pirate, Dire Aeneas, Malicious Loki, that seems cool...
WAIT WHAT?!
AENEAS!!!!!!!!
OMG WHAT!
RE: UnseenBurst's Fanfictions (Beyblade Burst Yin Yang/TechnoX ongoing) - UnseenBurst - Sep. 06, 2021
Chapter 22 is finally out!
Beyblade Burst Yin Yang
Chapter 22
Ultimate Duo, Phebus Helios, and Kindle Hyperion!!
Bell: So, who wants to take me on next!
Hyuga: I wanna battle you!
Hikaru: No, I’m gonna battle him!
Bell: Relax, The Demon King will take you both on!
Adrian: What about me, I want a do-over!!
Bell: Be patient, The Demon King will crush when it’s your turn!
Adrian: Grr!!
Drone: First battle!
Hikaru: Hyuga, we’re going for Twin Break Impact right off the bat to drain Belial’s stamina so you can go in for the final strike and burst it.
Hyuga: Vroom boom kablam! I can work with that!!
Austin: I wonder how Hikaru and Hyuga’s strategy’s going to work?
Adrian: It won’t, if I can’t beat Bell then they can’t either.
Austin: They’re the Tag Team World Champions! Of course, they can handle it!!
Wally: Honestly, they’re all super powerful, it’ll be a clash for the ages!
Austin: Hey… Where’s Ren? He’s missing an incredible battle!
Wally: He still seems in shock about what happened.
Adrian: Serves him right.
Austin: Yeah, it was his fault you broke his cousin’s Bey.
Adrian: I did what I had to do to win, isn’t that what Blading’s about?
Wally: No… it’s--
Adrian: So, you’re telling me you want to lose every battle?
Wally: Of course not!
Adrian: Thanks for proving my point.
Austin/Wally: Grr!!
~In The Daikokuten Mansion’s Gym~
Ren: Go, Shoot!!
(Ren pulls off an incredibly powerful Techno Shoot, Ragnaruk immediately takes the center)
Ren: Even if you do have ADHD, what you did was unforgivable. So, my goal now is to stop you from breaking Beys… No matter what it takes!!
(Ragnaruk creates a huge fiery tornado)
Ren: That’s the stuff, Ragnaruk.
~Back In The Daikokuten Mansion Battle Room~
Drone: Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Bell/Hikaru/Hyuga: Go, Shoot!!
(Bell pulls off a wickedly powerful Eclipse Shoot, Hyuga and Hikaru pull off super powerful Sparking Shoots)
Hikaru: Go for broke, Helios!!
Hyuga: Slam into ‘em, Hyperion!
(Hyperion and Helios fling Belial back and forth hitting it with a barrage of attacks)
Bell: You can’t put The Demon King in a corner!
(Belial absorbs Helios’ spin and speeds off)
Hikaru: *Gasps* Our plan didn’t work!!
Hyuga: Don’t let it get away! Burning Strike!!
(Hyperion speeds up and slams into the Nexus’ disk, The Nexus’ Disk spins sending Hyperion flying into the wall)
Hyuga: You’ve gotta be kidding!
Bell: Belial’s a tank that can take any hit, so just try beating us!
Hikaru/Hyuga: We will!!
(Hyperion and Helios start clashing and creating sparks)
Hyuga/Hikaru: Twin Strike!!
Bell: Torpedo Bomber!!
(Belial speeds up and slams into Helios and Hyperion, Hyperion, Belial, and Helios get shot up in the air)
Hikaru: Now, Hyuga!!
Hyuga: Vroom, Vroom!!
(Hyperion and Helios start clashing in mid-air, Helios and Hyperion’s limit break activities)
Hyuga: Twin!
Hikaru: Break!
Hyuga/Hikaru: Impact!!
(Helios launches Hyperion at Belial at full power)
Bell: Nice, but you need to work on your aim!
(Belial barely dodges Hyperion, Hyperion slams into the stadium ground and bursts)
Hyuga/Hikaru: *Gasps*
(Belial and Helios land on the stadium floor and both speed up)
Hikaru: Zone Counter!!
Bell: Aah! Belial!!
(Bell’s Resonance Aura flares up Belial blazes out of the Bey)
Belial: Let’s go, Bell!
Bell: Torpedo Bomber!!!
(Belial slams into Helios at full power causing a huge explosion)
All: *Gasps*
Bell: The Demon King has won!
(Helios gets shot out of the smoke and bursts)
Hikaru: No way!
Drone: It's Torpedo Belial with a Burst Finish! Bell Daikokuten is the winner!!
Bell: *Laughs* The Demon King hasn’t lost a battle since his amazing evolution!!
(Hyuga looks at Hyperion)
Hyuga: *Gasps* What happened?!
Wally: Um… You lost… didn’t you get the memo.
Hikaru: *Gasps*
Austin: Are you guys seriously just noticing you lost?
(Hikaru and Hyuga hold up their Beys to show a huge crack on each one of them)
All: *Gasps*
(Everyone looks at Adrian)
Adrian: It wasn’t me… This time.
Hyuga: It must’ve happened when.
(Hyuga has a flashback)
Bell: Nice, but you need to work on your aim!
(Hyperion slams into the stadium floor and bursts, Hyuga ends the flashback)
Hikaru: Yeah, Helios took a lot of attacks too.
(Hyuga and Hikaru start tearing up and runoff)
Bell: Wow, I didn’t mean--
Valt: It wasn’t your fault, it was an accident, they happen.
Adrian: It’s time for you to step up to the plate and battle me, Bell Daikokuten!!
Bell: Is now really the time?
Adrian: You promised me a battle when you were down battling those two, and I’d assume “The Demon King” keeps his word!
Bell: Fine! I’ll battle you, but don’t cry when The Demon King crushes you!!
Adrian: You should be telling that to yourself.
~In The Daikokuten Mansion Hallways~
Hikaru: We couldn’t win and our Beys are damaged!!
Hyuga: I can’t go vroom anymore!!
(Hyuga and Hikaru start tearing up more, a huge spider comes out from the ground)
Hyuga: Hikaru… what’s that?!
Hikaru: I was going to ask you the same thing.
(The spider takes off his mask)
Jingemon: Hello, what seems to be bothering you?
Hyuga: Who are you?
Jingemon: A friend of Bell, anyways, what’s going on?
Hikaru: Our Beys… they’re severely damaged.
Hyuga: Yeah, we won’t be able to battle anymore.
Jingemon: I know how you can fix your Beys!
Hyuga/Hikaru: Really?!
Jingemon: Yeah, unless you don’t want to.
Hikaru: Of course, thanks a lot!
Jingemon: No problem, just promise me you’ll be more careful.
Hyuga/Hikaru: We will!
(Hyuga and Hikaru follow Jingemon to the Workroom)
~In The Daikokuten Mansion Battle Room~
Drone: First battle!!
Bell: The Demon King won’t be going easy on you, I’ll crush you with my ultimate Demon Strength!!
Adrian: I’ll be defeating you here, then I’m coming for the World Champion spot!!
(Adrian looks at Valt)
Bell: You won’t be defeating The Ultimate Demon King!!
(Adrian’s Dark Resonance Aura flares up, his eyes turn purple and glow through his hair)
Valt (Thoughts): He’s at it again.
Possessed Adrian: I’ll crush you into pieces!!
Bell: I won’t let you, The Demon King never loses!
Drone: Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Adrian/Bell: Go, Shoot!!
(Adrian and Bell pull off super powerful Eclipse Shoots)
Bell: True Venture Shoot!!
(Belial speeds up and hits Asriel with a powerful barrage of attacks)
Possessed Adrian: Counter, Twilight Shoot!!
(Asriel counters the attacks with more powerful blows, Belial gets sent flying into the wall)
Bell: Go, Belial!!
(Belial bounces off the wall and speeds up)
Possessed Adrian: Say goodbye! Twilight Blight!!!
Bell: Torpedo Bomber!!
(Belial and Asriel hit each other with powerful blows sending each other across the stadium)
Possessed Adrian: You’re done! Asriel!!
(Adrian’s Resonance bursts up into flames, Asriel blazes out of the Bey)
Bell: The Demon King is unbeatable! Belial!!
(Bell’s Resonance Aura flares up Belial blazes out of the Bey)
Bell: Torpedo Venture Flash!!
Me: Twilight Flight!!
(Asriel speeds up and slams into Belial on the rim, Belial gets sent flying in the air)
Bell: Torpedo Bomber!!
(Belial crashes down on Asriel causing a huge explosion)
Possessed Adrian: *Roars*
(A huge purple light comes out on Adrian, Adrian roars loudly)
Adrian (Thoughts): Why does this hurt so much?!
(Asriel gets sent flying out of the smoke and bursts)
Asriel: *Roars Loudly*
(Adrian passes out)
~In The Daikokuten Mansion Workroom~
Jingemon: This is the Workroom!
Hyuga: Woah, this looks awesome!
Hikaru: Yeah, thanks so much!
Jingemon: No problem, just beat my grandson for me!
Hyuga/Hikaru: Bell Daikokuten is your nephew?!
(Jingemon walks away laughing)
Hyuga: He’s strange.
Hikaru: We’ve gotta work on our Beys!
Hyuga: Yeah! My Bey has gotta attack way harder, I wanna become the strongest Blader in the world!
Hikaru: Yeah, I do too. I’ve got a perfect idea of how to do it!
Hyuga: Really? You’ve gotta tell me!
Hikaru: We’ve got to evolve the Limit Break System!
Hyuga: Yeah, Hyperion’s Blades are gonna go boom out and increase the attack power!!
Hikaru: Exactly, My New Helios will be able to transform into a Ten-Bladed Balance Type and parry each and every attack!
Hyuga: Yeah, and Twin Strike will be more powerful than ever!
Hyuga/Hikaru: We’ll become the strongest Team In The World! Now, let’s start!!
~In The Daikokuten Mansion Battle Room~
Adrian: *Groans*
Austin: You’re awake! Yay!!
(Adrian pushes Austin out of the way and walks up to Bell)
Bell: So, you lost to The Demon King, didn’t you say you were going to win?!
Adrian: Grr!!
(Ren walks in the room with a determined face)
Ren: Adrian, I challenge you to a battle!!
All: *Gasps*
Adrian: I’ll crush you like I did Ransou, are you sure you wanna battle me?!
(Adrian’s Dark Resonance Aura flares up, A dark shadow of Asriel looks at Ren with piercing purple eyes)
Ren: *Gulps* I’m ready to battle you, no matter what!
Possessed Adrian: You’ve better been training hard, cause I’m here to crush you!!
Drone: First Battle!!
Bell: I wonder who will win, Adrian or Ren?
Austin: Of course Adrian’s gonna win, he’s super strong!!
Wally: I honestly don’t know, they’re both powerful Bladers so, it could go either way.
Possessed Adrian: Bring me your best or I’ll crush you on the dot!
Ren: Oh trust me, I’m giving it my all mate!
(Ren puts Ragnaruk in Heavy Mode)
Drone: Ready? Set!
All: 3! 21 1!
Ren/Adrian: Go, Shoot!!
(Ren and Adrian pull off powerful Eclipse Shoots)
Ren: It’s time to go all out! Super Surging Tempest!!
(Ragnaruk creates a huge cyclone and slams into Asriel sending it flying)
Possessed Adrian: We’re not giving up! Twilight Shoot!!
Ren: Take the center and hold it down!!
(Ragnaruk takes the center, Ragnaruk’s cyclone keeps getting bigger, Ragnaruk blocks Asriel’s attacks)
Austin: What’s Ragnaruk doing?!
Valt: Ragnaruk’s taking all the air insight to make its Cyclone larger, knocking Ragnaruk out of the stadium will be almost impossible!
Possessed Adrian: Twilight Wing!!
Ren: I’d like to see you try! Thundering Cloud Burst!!
(Ragnaruk creates a wind barrier blocking Asriel’s attack)
Possessed Adrian: *Gasps*
Ren: Ragnaruk!!
(Ren’s Resonance Aura flares up Ragnaruk blazes out of the Bey)
Ren: Blazing Mach Tornado!!
(Ragnaruk speeds out of the center and creates a tornado following it, Ragnaruk slams into Asriel, Asriel bursts)
Adrian: *Gasps*
(Adrian falls to the ground)
Drone: It’s Squall Ragnaruk with a Burst Finish! Rentaro Kiyama is the winner!!
Ren: I-- I won?! Alright!!
(Adrian picks up Asriel’s parts and looks at Ren with a ticked off face, Adrian’s eyes glow)
Ren: *Gasps*
(Adrian starts walking away)
Austin: Where are you--
Adrian: That’s none of your business!!
(Adrian walks through the door and leaves)
Austin: *Gasps*
Valt (Thoughts): He’s starting to corrupt.
~In The Daikokuten Mansion Workroom While Hyuga and Hikaru Work~
Hyuga: Hyperion, I’ll make you go kablam super hard!!
(Hyuga gets pulled into a white void)
Hyperion: Hyuga.
Hyuga: Hyperion! Don’t worry, with this evolution we’ll be able to kablam as hard as we want! We’ll be invincible!!
Hyperion: Yes, we’ll become the strongest in the world and attack with all we’ve got!
Hyperion/Hyuga: Vroom boom bang!!
(Hyuga gets pulled out of the white void)
Hikaru: Helios, we’ll be the ultimate duo and have the best balance you could ever see!
(Helios glows as Hikaru gets pulled into the white void)
Helios: Hikaru, we’ll have the ultimate offense and a balanced Defense! We’ll be unbeatable!!
Hikaru: Yeah, we’ll prove who’s boss!!
(Hikaru gets pulled out of the white void, Hikaru and Hyuga continue to put the finishing touches on their Beys)
Hikaru/Hyuga: It’s finally done!!
(Hikaru and Hyuga smile at each other as they hold up their Beys)
Hikaru: Phoebus Helios!
Hyuga: Kindle Hyperion!
Hyuga/Hikaru: We’ll become the Strongest Bladers in the world!!
~In The Daikokuten Mansion Hallways~
Adrian: I’m on a serious losing streak, grr!!
(Adrian starts punching the wall)
Jingemon: Please don’t do that, you’ll wreck the wall.
Adrian: *Gasps* Sorry.
Jingemon: No problem! What’s getting you so riled up?
Adrian: *Sighs* You wouldn’t understand.
Jingemon: I promise I’ll understand.
Adrian: *Sighs* It’s frustrating, I’m losing to everyone and I hate it!!
(Adrian’s Dark Resonance Aura flares up, Adrian’s eyes glow purple)
Possessed Adrian: I’ve got to win… no matter what!!
Jingemon: *Gasps*
Possessed Adrian: How do I get stronger, I’ll do whatever it takes!
(Jingemon looks at the rubber on Asriel)
Jingemon: Looks like you upgraded your Beys, just like Bell did.
(Adrian’s Resonance Aura cools down)
Adrian: Yeah, I upgraded it so it could take on the power of Fafnir.
Jingemon: So, why don’t you upgrade it again?
Adrian: How would I upgrade it?
Jingemon: Asriel’s an Attack Type so the best thing to do is to try and increase its Attack and Speed, then Asriel will show its true power.
Adrian: Then I’ll have to upgrade Asriel!
(Adrian runs off)
Jingemon: Adrian Saito, will you be able to defeat The Demon King?
~In The Daikokuten Mansion Battle Room~
Austin: Sol Spark!
Bell: Venture Shoot!!
(Belial and Anpao speed up and slam into each other, Anpao Bursts)
Austin: *Gasps*
Bell: *Laughs* The Demon King is unbeatable!
Hikaru: I don’t think so!
All: *Gasps*
Hyuga: Yeah, we’re here for a rematch!
(Hyuga and Hikaru hold up there Beys)
Bell: So, you’ve evolved your Beys!
Hyuga: Yeah, Kindle Hyperion is coming at you with full force!
Hikaru: Phoebus Helios is going to take you down!
Bell: Interesting… Austin! You’ll be my Tag Partner, we’ll crush these two in a blink of an eye!
Austin: *Gasps* You wanna battle with me?!
Bell: Of course, The Demon King needs a strong partner if he wants to defeat Legends!
Austin: Alright, we’re taking you down!
Drone: First battle! Inspect your opponent’s Bey!!
Austin (Thoughts): Kindle Hyperion, a Clockwise Spinning Attack Type! Looks like it’s a Yang Bey with a Dash Chassis! Looks like when Hyperion takes enough damage its four blades extend increasing its Attack Power! 1A’ balances out the Blades so it can Attack hard without being knocked off balance. Its driver Xceed’+X’ has a plate that adds weight and makes Hyperion go faster! Man, Hyuga’s Bey is no pushover!
Bell (Thoughts): Phoebus Helios, a Counterclockwise Spinning Balance Type! It has Five Blades to balance out the Bey. Looks like when it takes enough damage it transforms into a Ten-Bladed Bey! Its disk balances out the weight making Helios way stronger! The Driver Zone’+Z’ has a metal chip on it just like Hyperion making it heavier and able to counter attacks way better! Hikaru, Hyuga, do you really think you can pose a challenge against The Demon King?!
Austin (Thoughts): I’ll be taking them on with my super Attacks!
(Austin puts Anpao in Attack Mode)
Hikaru: We’re taking you down!
Hyuga: Yeah, we’ll show you how powerful we can be!
Bell: *Laughs* If you think you can pose a challenge against The Demon King you're mistaken!!
Drone: Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Hikaru/Hyuga/Bell/Austin: Go, Shoot!!
(Bell, Austin, Hikaru, and Hyuga pull off powerful Eclipse Shoots)
Hyuga/Hikaru: Go!!
(Hyperion and Helios start clashing and lean to the ground creating sparks)
Hyuga/Hikaru: True Twin Strike!!
(Helios and Hyperion speed up creating sparks behind them)
Bell: True Venture Shoot!!
Austin: Go, Sol Spark!
(Anpao and Belial speed up and slam into Hyperion and Helios, Hyperion, Helios, Belial, and Anpao get separated)
Bell: Take ‘em down! Belial!!
(Belial hits Helios with a barrage of attacks, Helios endures each and every one)
Bell: *Gasps*
Hikaru: You’ll have to do better than that if you wanna defeat me!
Hyuga: Zoom boom bang!!
Austin: One more time! Sol Spark!!
(Anpao and Hyperion hit each other with a ferocious barrage of attacks, Hyperion starts hitting Anpao harder)
Austin: *Gasps* Hang in there, Anpao!!
Hikaru: It’s time for our counterattack!
(Helios speeds up and starts hitting Belial with powerful strikes)
Hikaru: Zone Counter!!
(Helios leans on its driver and speeds up, Helios starts hitting Belial harder)
Bell: Grr!
Hyuga: Kindle Strike!!
(Hyperion speeds up and slams into Anpao causing it to wobble)
Austin: *Gasps*’
Hikaru: Helios!
Hyuga: Hyperion!
(Hikaru and Hyuga’s Resonance Aura’s flare-up Helios and Hyperion blaze out of the Beys, Helios slams into Belial, Hyperion slams into Anpao)
Helios: Phoebus Limit Destroyer!!
Hyuga: Kindling Limit Destroyer!!
(Helios and Hyperion’s Limit Destroyer Gimmick activates, Belial and Anpao get sent flying into each other and both burst)
Bell/Austin: *Gasps*
Drone: Kindle Hyperion and Phoebus Helios are the winners!!
(Hikaru and Hyuga fist bump)
Hikaru/Hyuga: Yeah! We’re invincible!!
Bell: *Laughs* Looks like The Demon King’s luck shaved off on you, you should be happy!
Hyuga: Um… ok.
(Austin starts tearing up)
Bell: *Gasps*
Valt: Austin… Are you ok?
Austin: I’m… I’m fine.
(Austin runs away)
~In The Daikokuten Mansion Hallways~
Austin: I… I couldn’t win. Maybe Adrian’s right, maybe I am just holding people back.
Jingemon: Is that really true?
Austin: *Gasps*
Jingemon: You just need to get stronger, you’re not holding anyone back.
Austin: I’ve practiced so hard but I’m not improving.
Jingemon: Then maybe it’s time for an upgrade.
Austin: *Gasps* “An upgrade?”
Jingemon: Yup, that’s how you can get stronger!
(Jingemon walks away laughing, Anpao starts glowing)
Austin: *Gasps*
(Austin gets pulled into a white void)
Austin: Anpao, is that you?
Anpao: Yes, it’s me!
Austin: I’m sorry I’m holding us back.
Anpao: You’re not holding me back, didn’t you hear what he said? We just need to get stronger!
Austin: You’re right, I’ll become super strong!
Anpao: Good, we’ll surpass Adrian and Asriel!!
Austin: We will!
(Austin gets pulled out of the white void)
Austin: Let’s evolve, Anpao!
~In The Daikokuten Mansion Workroom~
(Austin runs into the workroom)
Austin: Alright, let’s-- *Gasps*
(Austin looks at Adrian creating a design for Asriel’s Driver Chip)
Adrian: What do you want?
Austin: I’m creating a new Layer for Anpao!
(Adrian kicks a seat towards Austin)
Adrian: Better get working. And stay out of my way.
Austin: You’ve got it!
(Adrian and Austin start working on their upgrades)
~1 Hour Later~
Adrian/Austin: It’s finally done!
Austin: Anpao’s New Layer! Singe Anpao!!
Adrian: Asriel’s driver’s been upgraded to increase its speed and attack power!
Adrian: With this, I’ll crush the Blading Legends!
Austin: Yeah, I’ll become way stronger!
Adrian (Thoughts): Watch out Valt, I’m coming to crush you after I finish off The Demon King and the Ashi Brothers!
RE: UnseenBurst's Fanfictions (Beyblade Burst Yin Yang/TechnoX ongoing) - GenesisBlader - Sep. 06, 2021
(Sep. 06, 2021 1:51 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Chapter 22 is finally out!
Beyblade Burst Yin Yang
Chapter 22
Ultimate Duo, Phebus Helios, and Kindle Hyperion!!
Bell: So, who wants to take me on next!
Hyuga: I wanna battle you!
Hikaru: No, I’m gonna battle him!
Bell: Relax, The Demon King will take you both on!
Adrian: What about me, I want a do-over!!
Bell: Be patient, The Demon King will crush when it’s your turn!
Adrian: Grr!!
Drone: First battle!
Hikaru: Hyuga, we’re going for Twin Break Impact right off the bat to drain Belial’s stamina so you can go in for the final strike and burst it.
Hyuga: Vroom boom kablam! I can work with that!!
Austin: I wonder how Hikaru and Hyuga’s strategy’s going to work?
Adrian: It won’t, if I can’t beat Bell then they can’t either.
Austin: They’re the Tag Team World Champions! Of course, they can handle it!!
Wally: Honestly, they’re all super powerful, it’ll be a clash for the ages!
Austin: Hey… Where’s Ren? He’s missing an incredible battle!
Wally: He still seems in shock about what happened.
Adrian: Serves him right.
Austin: Yeah, it was his fault you broke his cousin’s Bey.
Adrian: I did what I had to do to win, isn’t that what Blading’s about?
Wally: No… it’s--
Adrian: So, you’re telling me you want to lose every battle?
Wally: Of course not!
Adrian: Thanks for proving my point.
Austin/Wally: Grr!!
~In The Daikokuten Mansion’s Gym~
Ren: Go, Shoot!!
(Ren pulls off an incredibly powerful Techno Shoot, Ragnaruk immediately takes the center)
Ren: Even if you do have ADHD, what you did was unforgivable. So, my goal now is to stop you from breaking Beys… No matter what it takes!!
(Ragnaruk creates a huge fiery tornado)
Ren: That’s the stuff, Ragnaruk.
~Back In The Daikokuten Mansion Battle Room~
Drone: Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Bell/Hikaru/Hyuga: Go, Shoot!!
(Bell pulls off a wickedly powerful Eclipse Shoot, Hyuga and Hikaru pull off super powerful Sparking Shoots)
Hikaru: Go for broke, Helios!!
Hyuga: Slam into ‘em, Hyperion!
(Hyperion and Helios fling Belial back and forth hitting it with a barrage of attacks)
Bell: You can’t put The Demon King in a corner!
(Belial absorbs Helios’ spin and speeds off)
Hikaru: *Gasps* Our plan didn’t work!!
Hyuga: Don’t let it get away! Burning Strike!!
(Hyperion speeds up and slams into the Nexus’ disk, The Nexus’ Disk spins sending Hyperion flying into the wall)
Hyuga: You’ve gotta be kidding!
Bell: Belial’s a tank that can take any hit, so just try beating us!
Hikaru/Hyuga: We will!!
(Hyperion and Helios start clashing and creating sparks)
Hyuga/Hikaru: Twin Strike!!
Bell: Torpedo Bomber!!
(Belial speeds up and slams into Helios and Hyperion, Hyperion, Belial, and Helios get shot up in the air)
Hikaru: Now, Hyuga!!
Hyuga: Vroom, Vroom!!
(Hyperion and Helios start clashing in mid-air, Helios and Hyperion’s limit break activities)
Hyuga: Twin!
Hikaru: Break!
Hyuga/Hikaru: Impact!!
(Helios launches Hyperion at Belial at full power)
Bell: Nice, but you need to work on your aim!
(Belial barely dodges Hyperion, Hyperion slams into the stadium ground and bursts)
Hyuga/Hikaru: *Gasps*
(Belial and Helios land on the stadium floor and both speed up)
Hikaru: Zone Counter!!
Bell: Aah! Belial!!
(Bell’s Resonance Aura flares up Belial blazes out of the Bey)
Belial: Let’s go, Bell!
Bell: Torpedo Bomber!!!
(Belial slams into Helios at full power causing a huge explosion)
All: *Gasps*
Bell: The Demon King has won!
(Helios gets shot out of the smoke and bursts)
Hikaru: No way!
Drone: It's Torpedo Belial with a Burst Finish! Bell Daikokuten is the winner!!
Bell: *Laughs* The Demon King hasn’t lost a battle since his amazing evolution!!
(Hyuga looks at Hyperion)
Hyuga: *Gasps* What happened?!
Wally: Um… You lost… didn’t you get the memo.
Hikaru: *Gasps*
Austin: Are you guys seriously just noticing you lost?
(Hikaru and Hyuga hold up their Beys to show a huge crack on each one of them)
All: *Gasps*
(Everyone looks at Adrian)
Adrian: It wasn’t me… This time.
Hyuga: It must’ve happened when.
(Hyuga has a flashback)
Bell: Nice, but you need to work on your aim!
(Hyperion slams into the stadium floor and bursts, Hyuga ends the flashback)
Hikaru: Yeah, Helios took a lot of attacks too.
(Hyuga and Hikaru start tearing up and runoff)
Bell: Wow, I didn’t mean--
Valt: It wasn’t your fault, it was an accident, they happen.
Adrian: It’s time for you to step up to the plate and battle me, Bell Daikokuten!!
Bell: Is now really the time?
Adrian: You promised me a battle when you were down battling those two, and I’d assume “The Demon King” keeps his word!
Bell: Fine! I’ll battle you, but don’t cry when The Demon King crushes you!!
Adrian: You should be telling that to yourself.
~In The Daikokuten Mansion Hallways~
Hikaru: We couldn’t win and our Beys are damaged!!
Hyuga: I can’t go vroom anymore!!
(Hyuga and Hikaru start tearing up more, a huge spider comes out from the ground)
Hyuga: Hikaru… what’s that?!
Hikaru: I was going to ask you the same thing.
(The spider takes off his mask)
Jingemon: Hello, what seems to be bothering you?
Hyuga: Who are you?
Jingemon: A friend of Bell, anyways, what’s going on?
Hikaru: Our Beys… they’re severely damaged.
Hyuga: Yeah, we won’t be able to battle anymore.
Jingemon: I know how you can fix your Beys!
Hyuga/Hikaru: Really?!
Jingemon: Yeah, unless you don’t want to.
Hikaru: Of course, thanks a lot!
Jingemon: No problem, just promise me you’ll be more careful.
Hyuga/Hikaru: We will!
(Hyuga and Hikaru follow Jingemon to the Workroom)
~In The Daikokuten Mansion Battle Room~
Drone: First battle!!
Bell: The Demon King won’t be going easy on you, I’ll crush you with my ultimate Demon Strength!!
Adrian: I’ll be defeating you here, then I’m coming for the World Champion spot!!
(Adrian looks at Valt)
Bell: You won’t be defeating The Ultimate Demon King!!
(Adrian’s Dark Resonance Aura flares up, his eyes turn purple and glow through his hair)
Valt (Thoughts): He’s at it again.
Possessed Adrian: I’ll crush you into pieces!!
Bell: I won’t let you, The Demon King never loses!
Drone: Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Adrian/Bell: Go, Shoot!!
(Adrian and Bell pull off super powerful Eclipse Shoots)
Bell: True Venture Shoot!!
(Belial speeds up and hits Asriel with a powerful barrage of attacks)
Possessed Adrian: Counter, Twilight Shoot!!
(Asriel counters the attacks with more powerful blows, Belial gets sent flying into the wall)
Bell: Go, Belial!!
(Belial bounces off the wall and speeds up)
Possessed Adrian: Say goodbye! Twilight Blight!!!
Bell: Torpedo Bomber!!
(Belial and Asriel hit each other with powerful blows sending each other across the stadium)
Possessed Adrian: You’re done! Asriel!!
(Adrian’s Resonance bursts up into flames, Asriel blazes out of the Bey)
Bell: The Demon King is unbeatable! Belial!!
(Bell’s Resonance Aura flares up Belial blazes out of the Bey)
Bell: Torpedo Venture Flash!!
Me: Twilight Flight!!
(Asriel speeds up and slams into Belial on the rim, Belial gets sent flying in the air)
Bell: Torpedo Bomber!!
(Belial crashes down on Asriel causing a huge explosion)
Possessed Adrian: *Roars*
(A huge purple light comes out on Adrian, Adrian roars loudly)
Adrian (Thoughts): Why does this hurt so much?!
(Asriel gets sent flying out of the smoke and bursts)
Asriel: *Roars Loudly*
(Adrian passes out)
~In The Daikokuten Mansion Workroom~
Jingemon: This is the Workroom!
Hyuga: Woah, this looks awesome!
Hikaru: Yeah, thanks so much!
Jingemon: No problem, just beat my grandson for me!
Hyuga/Hikaru: Bell Daikokuten is your nephew?!
(Jingemon walks away laughing)
Hyuga: He’s strange.
Hikaru: We’ve gotta work on our Beys!
Hyuga: Yeah! My Bey has gotta attack way harder, I wanna become the strongest Blader in the world!
Hikaru: Yeah, I do too. I’ve got a perfect idea of how to do it!
Hyuga: Really? You’ve gotta tell me!
Hikaru: We’ve got to evolve the Limit Break System!
Hyuga: Yeah, Hyperion’s Blades are gonna go boom out and increase the attack power!!
Hikaru: Exactly, My New Helios will be able to transform into a Ten-Bladed Balance Type and parry each and every attack!
Hyuga: Yeah, and Twin Strike will be more powerful than ever!
Hyuga/Hikaru: We’ll become the strongest Team In The World! Now, let’s start!!
~In The Daikokuten Mansion Battle Room~
Adrian: *Groans*
Austin: You’re awake! Yay!!
(Adrian pushes Austin out of the way and walks up to Bell)
Bell: So, you lost to The Demon King, didn’t you say you were going to win?!
Adrian: Grr!!
(Ren walks in the room with a determined face)
Ren: Adrian, I challenge you to a battle!!
All: *Gasps*
Adrian: I’ll crush you like I did Ransou, are you sure you wanna battle me?!
(Adrian’s Dark Resonance Aura flares up, A dark shadow of Asriel looks at Ren with piercing purple eyes)
Ren: *Gulps* I’m ready to battle you, no matter what!
Possessed Adrian: You’ve better been training hard, cause I’m here to crush you!!
Drone: First Battle!!
Bell: I wonder who will win, Adrian or Ren?
Austin: Of course Adrian’s gonna win, he’s super strong!!
Wally: I honestly don’t know, they’re both powerful Bladers so, it could go either way.
Possessed Adrian: Bring me your best or I’ll crush you on the dot!
Ren: Oh trust me, I’m giving it my all mate!
(Ren puts Ragnaruk in Heavy Mode)
Drone: Ready? Set!
All: 3! 21 1!
Ren/Adrian: Go, Shoot!!
(Ren and Adrian pull off powerful Eclipse Shoots)
Ren: It’s time to go all out! Super Surging Tempest!!
(Ragnaruk creates a huge cyclone and slams into Asriel sending it flying)
Possessed Adrian: We’re not giving up! Twilight Shoot!!
Ren: Take the center and hold it down!!
(Ragnaruk takes the center, Ragnaruk’s cyclone keeps getting bigger, Ragnaruk blocks Asriel’s attacks)
Austin: What’s Ragnaruk doing?!
Valt: Ragnaruk’s taking all the air insight to make its Cyclone larger, knocking Ragnaruk out of the stadium will be almost impossible!
Possessed Adrian: Twilight Wing!!
Ren: I’d like to see you try! Thundering Cloud Burst!!
(Ragnaruk creates a wind barrier blocking Asriel’s attack)
Possessed Adrian: *Gasps*
Ren: Ragnaruk!!
(Ren’s Resonance Aura flares up Ragnaruk blazes out of the Bey)
Ren: Blazing Mach Tornado!!
(Ragnaruk speeds out of the center and creates a tornado following it, Ragnaruk slams into Asriel, Asriel bursts)
Adrian: *Gasps*
(Adrian falls to the ground)
Drone: It’s Squall Ragnaruk with a Burst Finish! Rentaro Kiyama is the winner!!
Ren: I-- I won?! Alright!!
(Adrian picks up Asriel’s parts and looks at Ren with a ticked off face, Adrian’s eyes glow)
Ren: *Gasps*
(Adrian starts walking away)
Austin: Where are you--
Adrian: That’s none of your business!!
(Adrian walks through the door and leaves)
Austin: *Gasps*
Valt (Thoughts): He’s starting to corrupt.
~In The Daikokuten Mansion Workroom While Hyuga and Hikaru Work~
Hyuga: Hyperion, I’ll make you go kablam super hard!!
(Hyuga gets pulled into a white void)
Hyperion: Hyuga.
Hyuga: Hyperion! Don’t worry, with this evolution we’ll be able to kablam as hard as we want! We’ll be invincible!!
Hyperion: Yes, we’ll become the strongest in the world and attack with all we’ve got!
Hyperion/Hyuga: Vroom boom bang!!
(Hyuga gets pulled out of the white void)
Hikaru: Helios, we’ll be the ultimate duo and have the best balance you could ever see!
(Helios glows as Hikaru gets pulled into the white void)
Helios: Hikaru, we’ll have the ultimate offense and a balanced Defense! We’ll be unbeatable!!
Hikaru: Yeah, we’ll prove who’s boss!!
(Hikaru gets pulled out of the white void, Hikaru and Hyuga continue to put the finishing touches on their Beys)
Hikaru/Hyuga: It’s finally done!!
(Hikaru and Hyuga smile at each other as they hold up their Beys)
Hikaru: Phoebus Helios!
Hyuga: Kindle Hyperion!
Hyuga/Hikaru: We’ll become the Strongest Bladers in the world!!
~In The Daikokuten Mansion Hallways~
Adrian: I’m on a serious losing streak, grr!!
(Adrian starts punching the wall)
Jingemon: Please don’t do that, you’ll wreck the wall.
Adrian: *Gasps* Sorry.
Jingemon: No problem! What’s getting you so riled up?
Adrian: *Sighs* You wouldn’t understand.
Jingemon: I promise I’ll understand.
Adrian: *Sighs* It’s frustrating, I’m losing to everyone and I hate it!!
(Adrian’s Dark Resonance Aura flares up, Adrian’s eyes glow purple)
Possessed Adrian: I’ve got to win… no matter what!!
Jingemon: *Gasps*
Possessed Adrian: How do I get stronger, I’ll do whatever it takes!
(Jingemon looks at the rubber on Asriel)
Jingemon: Looks like you upgraded your Beys, just like Bell did.
(Adrian’s Resonance Aura cools down)
Adrian: Yeah, I upgraded it so it could take on the power of Fafnir.
Jingemon: So, why don’t you upgrade it again?
Adrian: How would I upgrade it?
Jingemon: Asriel’s an Attack Type so the best thing to do is to try and increase its Attack and Speed, then Asriel will show its true power.
Adrian: Then I’ll have to upgrade Asriel!
(Adrian runs off)
Jingemon: Adrian Saito, will you be able to defeat The Demon King?
~In The Daikokuten Mansion Battle Room~
Austin: Sol Spark!
Bell: Venture Shoot!!
(Belial and Anpao speed up and slam into each other, Anpao Bursts)
Austin: *Gasps*
Bell: *Laughs* The Demon King is unbeatable!
Hikaru: I don’t think so!
All: *Gasps*
Hyuga: Yeah, we’re here for a rematch!
(Hyuga and Hikaru hold up there Beys)
Bell: So, you’ve evolved your Beys!
Hyuga: Yeah, Kindle Hyperion is coming at you with full force!
Hikaru: Phoebus Helios is going to take you down!
Bell: Interesting… Austin! You’ll be my Tag Partner, we’ll crush these two in a blink of an eye!
Austin: *Gasps* You wanna battle with me?!
Bell: Of course, The Demon King needs a strong partner if he wants to defeat Legends!
Austin: Alright, we’re taking you down!
Drone: First battle! Inspect your opponent’s Bey!!
Austin (Thoughts): Kindle Hyperion, a Clockwise Spinning Attack Type! Looks like it’s a Yang Bey with a Dash Chassis! Looks like when Hyperion takes enough damage its four blades extend increasing its Attack Power! 1A’ balances out the Blades so it can Attack hard without being knocked off balance. Its driver Xceed’+X’ has a plate that adds weight and makes Hyperion go faster! Man, Hyuga’s Bey is no pushover!
Bell (Thoughts): Phoebus Helios, a Counterclockwise Spinning Balance Type! It has Five Blades to balance out the Bey. Looks like when it takes enough damage it transforms into a Ten-Bladed Bey! Its disk balances out the weight making Helios way stronger! The Driver Zone’+Z’ has a metal chip on it just like Hyperion making it heavier and able to counter attacks way better! Hikaru, Hyuga, do you really think you can pose a challenge against The Demon King?!
Austin (Thoughts): I’ll be taking them on with my super Attacks!
(Austin puts Anpao in Attack Mode)
Hikaru: We’re taking you down!
Hyuga: Yeah, we’ll show you how powerful we can be!
Bell: *Laughs* If you think you can pose a challenge against The Demon King you're mistaken!!
Drone: Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Hikaru/Hyuga/Bell/Austin: Go, Shoot!!
(Bell, Austin, Hikaru, and Hyuga pull off powerful Eclipse Shoots)
Hyuga/Hikaru: Go!!
(Hyperion and Helios start clashing and lean to the ground creating sparks)
Hyuga/Hikaru: True Twin Strike!!
(Helios and Hyperion speed up creating sparks behind them)
Bell: True Venture Shoot!!
Austin: Go, Sol Spark!
(Anpao and Belial speed up and slam into Hyperion and Helios, Hyperion, Helios, Belial, and Anpao get separated)
Bell: Take ‘em down! Belial!!
(Belial hits Helios with a barrage of attacks, Helios endures each and every one)
Bell: *Gasps*
Hikaru: You’ll have to do better than that if you wanna defeat me!
Hyuga: Zoom boom bang!!
Austin: One more time! Sol Spark!!
(Anpao and Hyperion hit each other with a ferocious barrage of attacks, Hyperion starts hitting Anpao harder)
Austin: *Gasps* Hang in there, Anpao!!
Hikaru: It’s time for our counterattack!
(Helios speeds up and starts hitting Belial with powerful strikes)
Hikaru: Zone Counter!!
(Helios leans on its driver and speeds up, Helios starts hitting Belial harder)
Bell: Grr!
Hyuga: Kindle Strike!!
(Hyperion speeds up and slams into Anpao causing it to wobble)
Austin: *Gasps*’
Hikaru: Helios!
Hyuga: Hyperion!
(Hikaru and Hyuga’s Resonance Aura’s flare-up Helios and Hyperion blaze out of the Beys, Helios slams into Belial, Hyperion slams into Anpao)
Helios: Phoebus Limit Destroyer!!
Hyuga: Kindling Limit Destroyer!!
(Helios and Hyperion’s Limit Destroyer Gimmick activates, Belial and Anpao get sent flying into each other and both burst)
Bell/Austin: *Gasps*
Drone: Kindle Hyperion and Phoebus Helios are the winners!!
(Hikaru and Hyuga fist bump)
Hikaru/Hyuga: Yeah! We’re invincible!!
Bell: *Laughs* Looks like The Demon King’s luck shaved off on you, you should be happy!
Hyuga: Um… ok.
(Austin starts tearing up)
Bell: *Gasps*
Valt: Austin… Are you ok?
Austin: I’m… I’m fine.
(Austin runs away)
~In The Daikokuten Mansion Hallways~
Austin: I… I couldn’t win. Maybe Adrian’s right, maybe I am just holding people back.
Jingemon: Is that really true?
Austin: *Gasps*
Jingemon: You just need to get stronger, you’re not holding anyone back.
Austin: I’ve practiced so hard but I’m not improving.
Jingemon: Then maybe it’s time for an upgrade.
Austin: *Gasps* “An upgrade?”
Jingemon: Yup, that’s how you can get stronger!
(Jingemon walks away laughing, Anpao starts glowing)
Austin: *Gasps*
(Austin gets pulled into a white void)
Austin: Anpao, is that you?
Anpao: Yes, it’s me!
Austin: I’m sorry I’m holding us back.
Anpao: You’re not holding me back, didn’t you hear what he said? We just need to get stronger!
Austin: You’re right, I’ll become super strong!
Anpao: Good, we’ll surpass Adrian and Asriel!!
Austin: We will!
(Austin gets pulled out of the white void)
Austin: Let’s evolve, Anpao!
~In The Daikokuten Mansion Workroom~
(Austin runs into the workroom)
Austin: Alright, let’s-- *Gasps*
(Austin looks at Adrian creating a design for Asriel’s Driver Chip)
Adrian: What do you want?
Austin: I’m creating a new Layer for Anpao!
(Adrian kicks a seat towards Austin)
Adrian: Better get working. And stay out of my way.
Austin: You’ve got it!
(Adrian and Austin start working on their upgrades)
~1 Hour Later~
Adrian/Austin: It’s finally done!
Austin: Anpao’s New Layer! Singe Anpao!!
Adrian: Asriel’s driver’s been upgraded to increase its speed and attack power!
Adrian: With this, I’ll crush the Blading Legends!
Austin: Yeah, I’ll become way stronger!
Adrian (Thoughts): Watch out Valt, I’m coming to crush you after I finish off The Demon King and the Ashi Brothers! bro UB im so close to calling Austin a sussy baka right now.
anyway nice episode and ren's gotten WAY stronger!
RE: UnseenBurst's Fanfictions (Beyblade Burst Yin Yang/TechnoX ongoing) - UnseenBurst - Sep. 06, 2021
Beyblade Burst Yin Yang Chapter 23 will be called: Roaring Storm, Facing The Legends!
Beyblade Burst TechnoX Chapter 20 will be called: The Legendary Team League!
RE: UnseenBurst's Fanfictions (Beyblade Burst Yin Yang/TechnoX ongoing) - GenesisBlader - Sep. 06, 2021
(Sep. 06, 2021 2:36 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Beyblade Burst Yin Yang Chapter 23 will be called: Roaring Storm, Facing The Legends!
Beyblade Burst TechnoX Chapter 20 will be called: The Legendary Team League!
wow i cant believe that yinyang is further episode wise than technoX and technoX started first
RE: UnseenBurst's Fanfictions (Beyblade Burst Yin Yang/TechnoX ongoing) - Hollowmind13 - Sep. 06, 2021
(Sep. 06, 2021 1:51 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Chapter 22 is finally out!
Beyblade Burst Yin Yang
Chapter 22
Ultimate Duo, Phebus Helios, and Kindle Hyperion!!
Bell: So, who wants to take me on next!
Hyuga: I wanna battle you!
Hikaru: No, I’m gonna battle him!
Bell: Relax, The Demon King will take you both on!
Adrian: What about me, I want a do-over!!
Bell: Be patient, The Demon King will crush when it’s your turn!
Adrian: Grr!!
Drone: First battle!
Hikaru: Hyuga, we’re going for Twin Break Impact right off the bat to drain Belial’s stamina so you can go in for the final strike and burst it.
Hyuga: Vroom boom kablam! I can work with that!!
Austin: I wonder how Hikaru and Hyuga’s strategy’s going to work?
Adrian: It won’t, if I can’t beat Bell then they can’t either.
Austin: They’re the Tag Team World Champions! Of course, they can handle it!!
Wally: Honestly, they’re all super powerful, it’ll be a clash for the ages!
Austin: Hey… Where’s Ren? He’s missing an incredible battle!
Wally: He still seems in shock about what happened.
Adrian: Serves him right.
Austin: Yeah, it was his fault you broke his cousin’s Bey.
Adrian: I did what I had to do to win, isn’t that what Blading’s about?
Wally: No… it’s--
Adrian: So, you’re telling me you want to lose every battle?
Wally: Of course not!
Adrian: Thanks for proving my point.
Austin/Wally: Grr!!
~In The Daikokuten Mansion’s Gym~
Ren: Go, Shoot!!
(Ren pulls off an incredibly powerful Techno Shoot, Ragnaruk immediately takes the center)
Ren: Even if you do have ADHD, what you did was unforgivable. So, my goal now is to stop you from breaking Beys… No matter what it takes!!
(Ragnaruk creates a huge fiery tornado)
Ren: That’s the stuff, Ragnaruk.
~Back In The Daikokuten Mansion Battle Room~
Drone: Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Bell/Hikaru/Hyuga: Go, Shoot!!
(Bell pulls off a wickedly powerful Eclipse Shoot, Hyuga and Hikaru pull off super powerful Sparking Shoots)
Hikaru: Go for broke, Helios!!
Hyuga: Slam into ‘em, Hyperion!
(Hyperion and Helios fling Belial back and forth hitting it with a barrage of attacks)
Bell: You can’t put The Demon King in a corner!
(Belial absorbs Helios’ spin and speeds off)
Hikaru: *Gasps* Our plan didn’t work!!
Hyuga: Don’t let it get away! Burning Strike!!
(Hyperion speeds up and slams into the Nexus’ disk, The Nexus’ Disk spins sending Hyperion flying into the wall)
Hyuga: You’ve gotta be kidding!
Bell: Belial’s a tank that can take any hit, so just try beating us!
Hikaru/Hyuga: We will!!
(Hyperion and Helios start clashing and creating sparks)
Hyuga/Hikaru: Twin Strike!!
Bell: Torpedo Bomber!!
(Belial speeds up and slams into Helios and Hyperion, Hyperion, Belial, and Helios get shot up in the air)
Hikaru: Now, Hyuga!!
Hyuga: Vroom, Vroom!!
(Hyperion and Helios start clashing in mid-air, Helios and Hyperion’s limit break activities)
Hyuga: Twin!
Hikaru: Break!
Hyuga/Hikaru: Impact!!
(Helios launches Hyperion at Belial at full power)
Bell: Nice, but you need to work on your aim!
(Belial barely dodges Hyperion, Hyperion slams into the stadium ground and bursts)
Hyuga/Hikaru: *Gasps*
(Belial and Helios land on the stadium floor and both speed up)
Hikaru: Zone Counter!!
Bell: Aah! Belial!!
(Bell’s Resonance Aura flares up Belial blazes out of the Bey)
Belial: Let’s go, Bell!
Bell: Torpedo Bomber!!!
(Belial slams into Helios at full power causing a huge explosion)
All: *Gasps*
Bell: The Demon King has won!
(Helios gets shot out of the smoke and bursts)
Hikaru: No way!
Drone: It's Torpedo Belial with a Burst Finish! Bell Daikokuten is the winner!!
Bell: *Laughs* The Demon King hasn’t lost a battle since his amazing evolution!!
(Hyuga looks at Hyperion)
Hyuga: *Gasps* What happened?!
Wally: Um… You lost… didn’t you get the memo.
Hikaru: *Gasps*
Austin: Are you guys seriously just noticing you lost?
(Hikaru and Hyuga hold up their Beys to show a huge crack on each one of them)
All: *Gasps*
(Everyone looks at Adrian)
Adrian: It wasn’t me… This time.
Hyuga: It must’ve happened when.
(Hyuga has a flashback)
Bell: Nice, but you need to work on your aim!
(Hyperion slams into the stadium floor and bursts, Hyuga ends the flashback)
Hikaru: Yeah, Helios took a lot of attacks too.
(Hyuga and Hikaru start tearing up and runoff)
Bell: Wow, I didn’t mean--
Valt: It wasn’t your fault, it was an accident, they happen.
Adrian: It’s time for you to step up to the plate and battle me, Bell Daikokuten!!
Bell: Is now really the time?
Adrian: You promised me a battle when you were down battling those two, and I’d assume “The Demon King” keeps his word!
Bell: Fine! I’ll battle you, but don’t cry when The Demon King crushes you!!
Adrian: You should be telling that to yourself.
~In The Daikokuten Mansion Hallways~
Hikaru: We couldn’t win and our Beys are damaged!!
Hyuga: I can’t go vroom anymore!!
(Hyuga and Hikaru start tearing up more, a huge spider comes out from the ground)
Hyuga: Hikaru… what’s that?!
Hikaru: I was going to ask you the same thing.
(The spider takes off his mask)
Jingemon: Hello, what seems to be bothering you?
Hyuga: Who are you?
Jingemon: A friend of Bell, anyways, what’s going on?
Hikaru: Our Beys… they’re severely damaged.
Hyuga: Yeah, we won’t be able to battle anymore.
Jingemon: I know how you can fix your Beys!
Hyuga/Hikaru: Really?!
Jingemon: Yeah, unless you don’t want to.
Hikaru: Of course, thanks a lot!
Jingemon: No problem, just promise me you’ll be more careful.
Hyuga/Hikaru: We will!
(Hyuga and Hikaru follow Jingemon to the Workroom)
~In The Daikokuten Mansion Battle Room~
Drone: First battle!!
Bell: The Demon King won’t be going easy on you, I’ll crush you with my ultimate Demon Strength!!
Adrian: I’ll be defeating you here, then I’m coming for the World Champion spot!!
(Adrian looks at Valt)
Bell: You won’t be defeating The Ultimate Demon King!!
(Adrian’s Dark Resonance Aura flares up, his eyes turn purple and glow through his hair)
Valt (Thoughts): He’s at it again.
Possessed Adrian: I’ll crush you into pieces!!
Bell: I won’t let you, The Demon King never loses!
Drone: Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Adrian/Bell: Go, Shoot!!
(Adrian and Bell pull off super powerful Eclipse Shoots)
Bell: True Venture Shoot!!
(Belial speeds up and hits Asriel with a powerful barrage of attacks)
Possessed Adrian: Counter, Twilight Shoot!!
(Asriel counters the attacks with more powerful blows, Belial gets sent flying into the wall)
Bell: Go, Belial!!
(Belial bounces off the wall and speeds up)
Possessed Adrian: Say goodbye! Twilight Blight!!!
Bell: Torpedo Bomber!!
(Belial and Asriel hit each other with powerful blows sending each other across the stadium)
Possessed Adrian: You’re done! Asriel!!
(Adrian’s Resonance bursts up into flames, Asriel blazes out of the Bey)
Bell: The Demon King is unbeatable! Belial!!
(Bell’s Resonance Aura flares up Belial blazes out of the Bey)
Bell: Torpedo Venture Flash!!
Me: Twilight Flight!!
(Asriel speeds up and slams into Belial on the rim, Belial gets sent flying in the air)
Bell: Torpedo Bomber!!
(Belial crashes down on Asriel causing a huge explosion)
Possessed Adrian: *Roars*
(A huge purple light comes out on Adrian, Adrian roars loudly)
Adrian (Thoughts): Why does this hurt so much?!
(Asriel gets sent flying out of the smoke and bursts)
Asriel: *Roars Loudly*
(Adrian passes out)
~In The Daikokuten Mansion Workroom~
Jingemon: This is the Workroom!
Hyuga: Woah, this looks awesome!
Hikaru: Yeah, thanks so much!
Jingemon: No problem, just beat my grandson for me!
Hyuga/Hikaru: Bell Daikokuten is your nephew?!
(Jingemon walks away laughing)
Hyuga: He’s strange.
Hikaru: We’ve gotta work on our Beys!
Hyuga: Yeah! My Bey has gotta attack way harder, I wanna become the strongest Blader in the world!
Hikaru: Yeah, I do too. I’ve got a perfect idea of how to do it!
Hyuga: Really? You’ve gotta tell me!
Hikaru: We’ve got to evolve the Limit Break System!
Hyuga: Yeah, Hyperion’s Blades are gonna go boom out and increase the attack power!!
Hikaru: Exactly, My New Helios will be able to transform into a Ten-Bladed Balance Type and parry each and every attack!
Hyuga: Yeah, and Twin Strike will be more powerful than ever!
Hyuga/Hikaru: We’ll become the strongest Team In The World! Now, let’s start!!
~In The Daikokuten Mansion Battle Room~
Adrian: *Groans*
Austin: You’re awake! Yay!!
(Adrian pushes Austin out of the way and walks up to Bell)
Bell: So, you lost to The Demon King, didn’t you say you were going to win?!
Adrian: Grr!!
(Ren walks in the room with a determined face)
Ren: Adrian, I challenge you to a battle!!
All: *Gasps*
Adrian: I’ll crush you like I did Ransou, are you sure you wanna battle me?!
(Adrian’s Dark Resonance Aura flares up, A dark shadow of Asriel looks at Ren with piercing purple eyes)
Ren: *Gulps* I’m ready to battle you, no matter what!
Possessed Adrian: You’ve better been training hard, cause I’m here to crush you!!
Drone: First Battle!!
Bell: I wonder who will win, Adrian or Ren?
Austin: Of course Adrian’s gonna win, he’s super strong!!
Wally: I honestly don’t know, they’re both powerful Bladers so, it could go either way.
Possessed Adrian: Bring me your best or I’ll crush you on the dot!
Ren: Oh trust me, I’m giving it my all mate!
(Ren puts Ragnaruk in Heavy Mode)
Drone: Ready? Set!
All: 3! 21 1!
Ren/Adrian: Go, Shoot!!
(Ren and Adrian pull off powerful Eclipse Shoots)
Ren: It’s time to go all out! Super Surging Tempest!!
(Ragnaruk creates a huge cyclone and slams into Asriel sending it flying)
Possessed Adrian: We’re not giving up! Twilight Shoot!!
Ren: Take the center and hold it down!!
(Ragnaruk takes the center, Ragnaruk’s cyclone keeps getting bigger, Ragnaruk blocks Asriel’s attacks)
Austin: What’s Ragnaruk doing?!
Valt: Ragnaruk’s taking all the air insight to make its Cyclone larger, knocking Ragnaruk out of the stadium will be almost impossible!
Possessed Adrian: Twilight Wing!!
Ren: I’d like to see you try! Thundering Cloud Burst!!
(Ragnaruk creates a wind barrier blocking Asriel’s attack)
Possessed Adrian: *Gasps*
Ren: Ragnaruk!!
(Ren’s Resonance Aura flares up Ragnaruk blazes out of the Bey)
Ren: Blazing Mach Tornado!!
(Ragnaruk speeds out of the center and creates a tornado following it, Ragnaruk slams into Asriel, Asriel bursts)
Adrian: *Gasps*
(Adrian falls to the ground)
Drone: It’s Squall Ragnaruk with a Burst Finish! Rentaro Kiyama is the winner!!
Ren: I-- I won?! Alright!!
(Adrian picks up Asriel’s parts and looks at Ren with a ticked off face, Adrian’s eyes glow)
Ren: *Gasps*
(Adrian starts walking away)
Austin: Where are you--
Adrian: That’s none of your business!!
(Adrian walks through the door and leaves)
Austin: *Gasps*
Valt (Thoughts): He’s starting to corrupt.
~In The Daikokuten Mansion Workroom While Hyuga and Hikaru Work~
Hyuga: Hyperion, I’ll make you go kablam super hard!!
(Hyuga gets pulled into a white void)
Hyperion: Hyuga.
Hyuga: Hyperion! Don’t worry, with this evolution we’ll be able to kablam as hard as we want! We’ll be invincible!!
Hyperion: Yes, we’ll become the strongest in the world and attack with all we’ve got!
Hyperion/Hyuga: Vroom boom bang!!
(Hyuga gets pulled out of the white void)
Hikaru: Helios, we’ll be the ultimate duo and have the best balance you could ever see!
(Helios glows as Hikaru gets pulled into the white void)
Helios: Hikaru, we’ll have the ultimate offense and a balanced Defense! We’ll be unbeatable!!
Hikaru: Yeah, we’ll prove who’s boss!!
(Hikaru gets pulled out of the white void, Hikaru and Hyuga continue to put the finishing touches on their Beys)
Hikaru/Hyuga: It’s finally done!!
(Hikaru and Hyuga smile at each other as they hold up their Beys)
Hikaru: Phoebus Helios!
Hyuga: Kindle Hyperion!
Hyuga/Hikaru: We’ll become the Strongest Bladers in the world!!
~In The Daikokuten Mansion Hallways~
Adrian: I’m on a serious losing streak, grr!!
(Adrian starts punching the wall)
Jingemon: Please don’t do that, you’ll wreck the wall.
Adrian: *Gasps* Sorry.
Jingemon: No problem! What’s getting you so riled up?
Adrian: *Sighs* You wouldn’t understand.
Jingemon: I promise I’ll understand.
Adrian: *Sighs* It’s frustrating, I’m losing to everyone and I hate it!!
(Adrian’s Dark Resonance Aura flares up, Adrian’s eyes glow purple)
Possessed Adrian: I’ve got to win… no matter what!!
Jingemon: *Gasps*
Possessed Adrian: How do I get stronger, I’ll do whatever it takes!
(Jingemon looks at the rubber on Asriel)
Jingemon: Looks like you upgraded your Beys, just like Bell did.
(Adrian’s Resonance Aura cools down)
Adrian: Yeah, I upgraded it so it could take on the power of Fafnir.
Jingemon: So, why don’t you upgrade it again?
Adrian: How would I upgrade it?
Jingemon: Asriel’s an Attack Type so the best thing to do is to try and increase its Attack and Speed, then Asriel will show its true power.
Adrian: Then I’ll have to upgrade Asriel!
(Adrian runs off)
Jingemon: Adrian Saito, will you be able to defeat The Demon King?
~In The Daikokuten Mansion Battle Room~
Austin: Sol Spark!
Bell: Venture Shoot!!
(Belial and Anpao speed up and slam into each other, Anpao Bursts)
Austin: *Gasps*
Bell: *Laughs* The Demon King is unbeatable!
Hikaru: I don’t think so!
All: *Gasps*
Hyuga: Yeah, we’re here for a rematch!
(Hyuga and Hikaru hold up there Beys)
Bell: So, you’ve evolved your Beys!
Hyuga: Yeah, Kindle Hyperion is coming at you with full force!
Hikaru: Phoebus Helios is going to take you down!
Bell: Interesting… Austin! You’ll be my Tag Partner, we’ll crush these two in a blink of an eye!
Austin: *Gasps* You wanna battle with me?!
Bell: Of course, The Demon King needs a strong partner if he wants to defeat Legends!
Austin: Alright, we’re taking you down!
Drone: First battle! Inspect your opponent’s Bey!!
Austin (Thoughts): Kindle Hyperion, a Clockwise Spinning Attack Type! Looks like it’s a Yang Bey with a Dash Chassis! Looks like when Hyperion takes enough damage its four blades extend increasing its Attack Power! 1A’ balances out the Blades so it can Attack hard without being knocked off balance. Its driver Xceed’+X’ has a plate that adds weight and makes Hyperion go faster! Man, Hyuga’s Bey is no pushover!
Bell (Thoughts): Phoebus Helios, a Counterclockwise Spinning Balance Type! It has Five Blades to balance out the Bey. Looks like when it takes enough damage it transforms into a Ten-Bladed Bey! Its disk balances out the weight making Helios way stronger! The Driver Zone’+Z’ has a metal chip on it just like Hyperion making it heavier and able to counter attacks way better! Hikaru, Hyuga, do you really think you can pose a challenge against The Demon King?!
Austin (Thoughts): I’ll be taking them on with my super Attacks!
(Austin puts Anpao in Attack Mode)
Hikaru: We’re taking you down!
Hyuga: Yeah, we’ll show you how powerful we can be!
Bell: *Laughs* If you think you can pose a challenge against The Demon King you're mistaken!!
Drone: Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Hikaru/Hyuga/Bell/Austin: Go, Shoot!!
(Bell, Austin, Hikaru, and Hyuga pull off powerful Eclipse Shoots)
Hyuga/Hikaru: Go!!
(Hyperion and Helios start clashing and lean to the ground creating sparks)
Hyuga/Hikaru: True Twin Strike!!
(Helios and Hyperion speed up creating sparks behind them)
Bell: True Venture Shoot!!
Austin: Go, Sol Spark!
(Anpao and Belial speed up and slam into Hyperion and Helios, Hyperion, Helios, Belial, and Anpao get separated)
Bell: Take ‘em down! Belial!!
(Belial hits Helios with a barrage of attacks, Helios endures each and every one)
Bell: *Gasps*
Hikaru: You’ll have to do better than that if you wanna defeat me!
Hyuga: Zoom boom bang!!
Austin: One more time! Sol Spark!!
(Anpao and Hyperion hit each other with a ferocious barrage of attacks, Hyperion starts hitting Anpao harder)
Austin: *Gasps* Hang in there, Anpao!!
Hikaru: It’s time for our counterattack!
(Helios speeds up and starts hitting Belial with powerful strikes)
Hikaru: Zone Counter!!
(Helios leans on its driver and speeds up, Helios starts hitting Belial harder)
Bell: Grr!
Hyuga: Kindle Strike!!
(Hyperion speeds up and slams into Anpao causing it to wobble)
Austin: *Gasps*’
Hikaru: Helios!
Hyuga: Hyperion!
(Hikaru and Hyuga’s Resonance Aura’s flare-up Helios and Hyperion blaze out of the Beys, Helios slams into Belial, Hyperion slams into Anpao)
Helios: Phoebus Limit Destroyer!!
Hyuga: Kindling Limit Destroyer!!
(Helios and Hyperion’s Limit Destroyer Gimmick activates, Belial and Anpao get sent flying into each other and both burst)
Bell/Austin: *Gasps*
Drone: Kindle Hyperion and Phoebus Helios are the winners!!
(Hikaru and Hyuga fist bump)
Hikaru/Hyuga: Yeah! We’re invincible!!
Bell: *Laughs* Looks like The Demon King’s luck shaved off on you, you should be happy!
Hyuga: Um… ok.
(Austin starts tearing up)
Bell: *Gasps*
Valt: Austin… Are you ok?
Austin: I’m… I’m fine.
(Austin runs away)
~In The Daikokuten Mansion Hallways~
Austin: I… I couldn’t win. Maybe Adrian’s right, maybe I am just holding people back.
Jingemon: Is that really true?
Austin: *Gasps*
Jingemon: You just need to get stronger, you’re not holding anyone back.
Austin: I’ve practiced so hard but I’m not improving.
Jingemon: Then maybe it’s time for an upgrade.
Austin: *Gasps* “An upgrade?”
Jingemon: Yup, that’s how you can get stronger!
(Jingemon walks away laughing, Anpao starts glowing)
Austin: *Gasps*
(Austin gets pulled into a white void)
Austin: Anpao, is that you?
Anpao: Yes, it’s me!
Austin: I’m sorry I’m holding us back.
Anpao: You’re not holding me back, didn’t you hear what he said? We just need to get stronger!
Austin: You’re right, I’ll become super strong!
Anpao: Good, we’ll surpass Adrian and Asriel!!
Austin: We will!
(Austin gets pulled out of the white void)
Austin: Let’s evolve, Anpao!
~In The Daikokuten Mansion Workroom~
(Austin runs into the workroom)
Austin: Alright, let’s-- *Gasps*
(Austin looks at Adrian creating a design for Asriel’s Driver Chip)
Adrian: What do you want?
Austin: I’m creating a new Layer for Anpao!
(Adrian kicks a seat towards Austin)
Adrian: Better get working. And stay out of my way.
Austin: You’ve got it!
(Adrian and Austin start working on their upgrades)
~1 Hour Later~
Adrian/Austin: It’s finally done!
Austin: Anpao’s New Layer! Singe Anpao!!
Adrian: Asriel’s driver’s been upgraded to increase its speed and attack power!
Adrian: With this, I’ll crush the Blading Legends!
Austin: Yeah, I’ll become way stronger!
Adrian (Thoughts): Watch out Valt, I’m coming to crush you after I finish off The Demon King and the Ashi Brothers!
"Ultimate Duo, Phebus Helios, and Kindle Hyperion!!"
I think you meant Phoebus. Anyways, nice chapter.
RE: UnseenBurst's Fanfictions (Beyblade Burst Yin Yang/TechnoX ongoing) - UnseenBurst - Sep. 06, 2021
Yall gonna be screaming at me when I tell you this. I deleted Beyblade Burst TechnoX off my google drive on purpose. Before you start screaming at me I actually have a good explanation, Beyblade Burst TechnoX was a Beyblade fanfic about Teams, so, BC Sol was going to face off with Legendary Blader's teams, but the more I thought of it the more this plot didn't make sense, it had many holes in it and making a team for every Legendary Blader would be Impossible, so, I decided to give up TechnoX because it would be impossible to keep writing it. I'm sorry to all who liked TechnoX but it would be impossible to keep going. I give my deepest apologies. Down below I made a little paragraph of how I wanted the series to go, so please check it out.
Oliver was going to become evil and try taking over the Blading World with his own team of shadow Bladers that had every one of BC Sol's main team's Beyblade's except for Valt's. Unova and BC Sol were going to battle in the team league and lose because Oliver's Orthus broke Unova's Ultravor, Unova would go onto evolve his Bey and There would be another tournament that BC Sol was going to enter, Unova was determined to win. In this new tournament, Unova and the gang kinda had a rocky start but eventually got their grove back and go onto defeat all the legends teams, Unova would be crowned BC Sol's new Captian and they'd go onto the Semi-Finals to face The Bombers, it would be a very close match but in the end, Unova barely took the win and BC Sol advanced to the finals. The Finals would be BC Sol Vs The Snake Pit and after a long-fought battle, Unova would enter his Ultimate Resonance and defeat Oliver for good. Oliver would come back to good and rejoin BC Sol, Alexander and Evel would be arrested by the cops for forcing children to do their dirty work. Then, Unova became the strongest Blader on BC Sol and would always have BC Sol's back. A couple of years later when Unova's 17 Kris would give him the honor of becoming BC Sol's new owner, Unova accepts and BC Sol became the strongest team in the world [The End]
I'll be announcing my next Fanfiction soon.
RE: UnseenBurst's Fanfictions (Beyblade Burst Yin Yang/TechnoX ongoing) - GenesisBlader - Sep. 06, 2021
(Sep. 06, 2021 5:19 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Yall gonna be screaming at me when I tell you this. I deleted Beyblade Burst TechnoX off my google drive on purpose. Before you start screaming at me I actually have a good explanation, Beyblade Burst TechnoX was a Beyblade fanfic about Teams, so, BC Sol was going to face off with Legendary Blader's teams, but the more I thought of it the more this plot didn't make sense, it had many holes in it and making a team for every Legendary Blader would be Impossible, so, I decided to give up TechnoX because it would be impossible to keep writing it. I'm sorry to all who liked TechnoX but it would be impossible to keep going. I give my deepest apologies. Down below I made a little paragraph of how I wanted the series to go, so please check it out.
Oliver was going to become evil and try taking over the Blading World with his own team of shadow Bladers that had every one of BC Sol's main team's Beyblade's except for Valt's. Unova and BC Sol were going to battle in the team league and lose because Oliver's Orthus broke Unova's Ultravor, Unova would go onto evolve his Bey and There would be another tournament that BC Sol was going to enter, Unova was determined to win. In this new tournament, Unova and the gang kinda had a rocky start but eventually got their grove back and go onto defeat all the legends teams, Unova would be crowned BC Sol's new Captian and they'd go onto the Semi-Finals to face The Bombers, it would be a very close match but in the end, Unova barely took the win and BC Sol advanced to the finals. The Finals would be BC Sol Vs The Snake Pit and after a long-fought battle, Unova would enter his Ultimate Resonance and defeat Oliver for good. Oliver would come back to good and rejoin BC Sol, Alexander and Evel would be arrested by the cops for forcing children to do their dirty work. Then, Unova became the strongest Blader on BC Sol and would always have BC Sol's back. A couple of years later when Unova's 17 Kris would give him the honor of becoming BC Sol's new owner, Unova accepts and BC Sol became the strongest team in the world [The End]
I'll be announcing my next Fanfiction soon. NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
well rest in peace technoX, WELCOME MYSTIC CLASH!
RE: UnseenBurst's Fanfictions (Beyblade Burst Yin Yang/Mystic Clash ongoing) - UnseenBurst - Sep. 06, 2021
Beyblade Burst Mystic Clash Preview!
(Valt walks into a Beigoma Acadamy)
Me: Valt Aoi is here?!
???: Nah, you're too weak to battle him!
(I start working on my Bey)
Me: I'm not too weak to take on Valt! You'll see!!
(Valkyrie and My Bey start clashing causing a huge explosion)
Valt: End this!
Me: Vulcan!!
Me: Next time on Beyblade Burst Mystic Clash, New Revolution, Mystic Vulcan!
3! 2! 1! Go, Shoot!!
Main Character: Victor Homura
RE: UnseenBurst's Fanfictions (Beyblade Burst Yin Yang/Mystic Clash ongoing) - GenesisBlader - Sep. 06, 2021
(Sep. 06, 2021 5:46 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Beyblade Burst Mystic Clash Preview!
(Valt walks into a Beigoma Acadamy)
Me: Valt Aoi is here?!
???: Nah, you're too weak to battle him!
(I start working on my Bey)
Me: I'm not too weak to take on Valt! You'll see!!
(Valkyrie and My Bey start clashing causing a huge explosion)
Valt: End this!
Me: Vulcan!!
Me: Next time on Beyblade Burst Mystic Clash, New Revolution, Mystic Vulcan!
3! 2! 1! Go, Shoot!!
Main Character: Victor Homura OML THIS ALREADY SOUNDS SO LIT!!!! I CAN'T WAITTTTTT
no seriously i cannot wait can you release the first episode soon? (jk)
literally vulcan is a roman god of volcanoes and the destructive property of them lol
RE: UnseenBurst's Fanfictions (Beyblade Burst Yin Yang/TechnoX ongoing) - LegendJustice - Sep. 06, 2021
(Sep. 06, 2021 5:19 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Yall gonna be screaming at me when I tell you this. I deleted Beyblade Burst TechnoX off my google drive on purpose. Before you start screaming at me I actually have a good explanation, Beyblade Burst TechnoX was a Beyblade fanfic about Teams, so, BC Sol was going to face off with Legendary Blader's teams, but the more I thought of it the more this plot didn't make sense, it had many holes in it and making a team for every Legendary Blader would be Impossible, so, I decided to give up TechnoX because it would be impossible to keep writing it. I'm sorry to all who liked TechnoX but it would be impossible to keep going. I give my deepest apologies. Down below I made a little paragraph of how I wanted the series to go, so please check it out.
Oliver was going to become evil and try taking over the Blading World with his own team of shadow Bladers that had every one of BC Sol's main team's Beyblade's except for Valt's. Unova and BC Sol were going to battle in the team league and lose because Oliver's Orthus broke Unova's Ultravor, Unova would go onto evolve his Bey and There would be another tournament that BC Sol was going to enter, Unova was determined to win. In this new tournament, Unova and the gang kinda had a rocky start but eventually got their grove back and go onto defeat all the legends teams, Unova would be crowned BC Sol's new Captian and they'd go onto the Semi-Finals to face The Bombers, it would be a very close match but in the end, Unova barely took the win and BC Sol advanced to the finals. The Finals would be BC Sol Vs The Snake Pit and after a long-fought battle, Unova would enter his Ultimate Resonance and defeat Oliver for good. Oliver would come back to good and rejoin BC Sol, Alexander and Evel would be arrested by the cops for forcing children to do their dirty work. Then, Unova became the strongest Blader on BC Sol and would always have BC Sol's back. A couple of years later when Unova's 17 Kris would give him the honor of becoming BC Sol's new owner, Unova accepts and BC Sol became the strongest team in the world [The End]
I'll be announcing my next Fanfiction soon.
Well, It's your decision so I support it!
(Sep. 06, 2021 5:46 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Beyblade Burst Mystic Clash Preview!
(Valt walks into a Beigoma Acadamy)
Me: Valt Aoi is here?!
???: Nah, you're too weak to battle him!
(I start working on my Bey)
Me: I'm not too weak to take on Valt! You'll see!!
(Valkyrie and My Bey start clashing causing a huge explosion)
Valt: End this!
Me: Vulcan!!
Me: Next time on Beyblade Burst Mystic Clash, New Revolution, Mystic Vulcan!
3! 2! 1! Go, Shoot!!
Main Character: Victor Homura
Mystic Clash? cool! I'll be following!
RE: UnseenBurst's Fanfictions (Beyblade Burst Yin Yang/Mystic Clash ongoing) - UnseenBurst - Sep. 06, 2021
Mystic System
Mystic Core (A Beyblade's Motif)
'Weight (An upgraded version of the Weights from GT)
Mystic Ring (Where the Attacks make contact basically a combination of Sparking Rings and GT Rings)
Disk
Driver
RE: UnseenBurst's Fanfictions (Beyblade Burst Yin Yang/Mystic Clash ongoing) - GenesisBlader - Sep. 06, 2021
(Sep. 06, 2021 7:34 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Mystic System
Mystic Core (A Beyblade's Motif)
'Weight (An upgraded version of the Weights from GT)
Mystic Ring (Where the Attacks make contact basically a combination of Sparking Rings and GT Rings)
Disk
Driver fascinating...
also will there be a character contest? if so ima be ready
RE: UnseenBurst's Fanfictions (Beyblade Burst Yin Yang/Mystic Clash ongoing) - LJ-Blader - Sep. 06, 2021
Character Contest!!!!! Please…
RE: UnseenBurst's Fanfictions (Beyblade Burst Yin Yang/Mystic Clash ongoing) - Hollowmind13 - Sep. 06, 2021
(Sep. 06, 2021 7:37 PM)GenesisBlader Wrote: (Sep. 06, 2021 7:34 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Mystic System
Mystic Core (A Beyblade's Motif)
'Weight (An upgraded version of the Weights from GT)
Mystic Ring (Where the Attacks make contact basically a combination of Sparking Rings and GT Rings)
Disk
Driver fascinating...
also will there be a character contest? if so ima be ready
If there's going to be one, I don't think I should try. (at least on Unseen's fics (for now) )
RE: UnseenBurst's Fanfictions (Beyblade Burst Yin Yang/Mystic Clash ongoing) - GenesisBlader - Sep. 06, 2021
(Sep. 06, 2021 5:46 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Beyblade Burst Mystic Clash Preview!
(Valt walks into a Beigoma Acadamy)
Me: Valt Aoi is here?!
???: Nah, you're too weak to battle him!
(I start working on my Bey)
Me: I'm not too weak to take on Valt! You'll see!!
(Valkyrie and My Bey start clashing causing a huge explosion)
Valt: End this!
Me: Vulcan!!
Me: Next time on Beyblade Burst Mystic Clash, New Revolution, Mystic Vulcan!
3! 2! 1! Go, Shoot!!
Main Character: Victor Homura
i wonder who's victor's rival gonna be... HmHmhMMhmHMhmM
RE: UnseenBurst's Fanfictions (Beyblade Burst Yin Yang/Mystic Clash ongoing) - UnseenBurst - Sep. 06, 2021
Character Contest going on right now! Enter your characters for Beyblade Burst Mystic Clash!
LJ-Blader
RE: UnseenBurst's Fanfictions (Beyblade Burst Yin Yang/Mystic Clash ongoing) - LegendJustice - Sep. 06, 2021
Name: Kane Usami
Height: 5'6'
Age: 13
Nationality: Japan
Personality: He has been a blader for a long time, between you and me he has been one for 4 years even tho Valt has been one for 6 years but anyway Kane sometimes like to think about himself but that doesn't make him selfish if he sees an old lady on the street he instantly goes and helps he or her! But around other people, he can be let's say much he once ACCIDENTALLY punched a kid in his kindergarten.
Appearance: Kane where's a Red jacket with a white shirt under it
The white shirt says "King" and black Jeans with black shoes that light up, he has Crimson hair with Ruby eyes, white skin, and has a Ruby-shamed birthmark on his right arm and where's one glove on his left hand.
Beyblade: King Kitsune 00 Expand Destroy Dash
King Kitsune:
Forge Disc- like other odd-numbered Core Discs, is an asymmetrical, elliptical disc that can facilitate a Disc Frame. 00 is one of the heaviest Discs, outclassing 0 by 1 gram, and has an ideal weight distribution for all Combinations. Its high Outward Weight Distribution (OWD) grants it not only the highest Stamina potential out of all other Core Discs, but its weight grants it high Attack and Defense potential. With the use of Disc Frames, 00 can be used to great effect in any Combination. While the weight can increase the risk of Bursts, the weight of most SwitchStrike/God Layers and Cho-Z Layers can compensate
Expand - Information will be added here later
Performance Tip - Destroy' features an eight-pointed star tip, akin to Jaggy, under a free-spinning plate that sits at a standard height.
Due to the tip's shape and diameter, Destroy' will create an aggressive movement pattern equivalent to Jaggy with the same moderately controllable movement pattern and speed.
What sets Destroy' apart from Jaggy is the free-spinning plate that is meant to stabilize a Beyblade if it is knocked off balance by creating a second point of contact with only minimal Stamina loss due to its free-spinning nature. Unlike other Tips with similar gimmicks such as Cycle and Guard, the low placement of Destroy''s plate ensures that lock up does not occur, meaning that Destroy''s gimmick works as intended. Destroy' features an eight-pointed star tip, akin to Jaggy, under a free-spinning plate that sits at a standard height.
Due to the tip's shape and diameter, Destroy' will create an aggressive movement pattern equivalent to Jaggy with the same moderately controllable movement pattern and speed.
What sets Destroy' apart from Jaggy is the free-spinning plate that is meant to stabilize a Beyblade if it is knocked off balance by creating a second point of contact with only minimal Stamina loss due to its free-spinning nature. Unlike other Tips with similar gimmicks such as Cycle and Guard, the low placement of Destroy''s plate ensures that lock up does not occur, meaning that Destroy''s gimmick works as intended.
Activities: Sports, Blading, Writing.
Hope this makes it!
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