Beyblade Burst SK Drive/Cyber Force - UnseenBurst - Aug. 07, 2021
Right after the events of Beyblade Burst Sparking after suffering from losing his Dad, Dax(sues) Akagami devotes himself to evil and Darkness but will a Burned Out Star stop him in his way or will he eventually become corrupted by Darkness from a point of no return and destroy the Blading World as the Legends know it.
Emotions are a big part in life, but what if we didn't have them? Well, Rensuke Kageyama, a rising Blader in the New Generation believes this and calls himself the Emotionless One. Will his life be one boring cycle or will he be able to find himself and surpass everybody in the World becoming the World Champion?
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Chapter 1
Beyblade Burst Yin Yang
Chapter 1
Twin Power, Twilight Asriel and Sol Anpao
Adrian: Break, now!
(A Beyblade bursts into fragments)
???: No way!
(??? falls to his knees)
Adrian: Wally, was it? Man, get a new Bey, cause your super weak.
Wally: No, I’ll make my Bey better than ever, and I’ll get revenge on you!
(Austin runs up to Adrian)
Austin: I can’t believe you broke his Bey!
Adrian: *Sighs* Typical naive Austin, you’ve gotta do what you’ve gotta do to win!
Austin: That’s not how Blading works, it’s about having fun!
Adrian: With that attitude, you’ll never become stronger!
Austin: I’ll prove you wrong!
Wally: I’ll train harder than ever, and defeat you too!
Austin: First Lucius will break you again!
~Back At Home~
Mom: So, how was battling today?
Austin: Mom, Adrian broke another Bey!
Adrian: Tattletale.
Mom: Adrian, what’ve--
Adrian: Whatever.
(Adrian walks away)
Austin: Why don’t you ever do anything about him?!
Mom: Austin, it’s not--
Austin: He’s hurting people and himself and you’re letting him do it!
Mom: *Sighs* You’ll understand one day.
(Mom walks away, Austin turns on the tv)
Hanami (On Tv): Our Wonder Boy, Valt Aoi leads with another point with that Spin Finish!
Honcho: Well, Valt, you’ve gotten way stronger, but I’m stronger!
Valt: Ha, In your dreams, Savior Valkyrie is gonna blast you out of the stadium!
Referee: Fourth battle!
Valt: I’m going to win this, no matter what!
Honcho: Cyclone Ragnaruk is going to win this battle!
Referee: Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Valt/Honcho: Go, Shoot!
(Valt and Honcho pull off powerfully explosive shoots)
Honcho: Go for the center, Ragnaruk!
Valt: Rush Shoot!
(Ragnaruk takes the center, Valkyrie hits Ragnaruk with a powerful flurry of attacks)
Hanami: Valt Aoi goes with his powerful special move, Rush Shoot!
Honcho: Ragnaruk! Double Wing Cyclone!!
(Ragnaruk creates a huge tornado)
Hanami: Roktavor takes the center and holds its ground!
Valt: Valkyrie!!
(Valt’s Resonance Aura flares up Valkyrie blazes out of the Bey)
Valt: True Shot Upper!!
(Valkyrie jumps and hits Ragnaruk with a powerful uppercut, Ragnaruk bursts)
Honcho: *Gasps*
Referee: It’s Savior Valkyrie, with a burst finish! Valt Aoi wins with a score of 4-1!
Hanami: Our Wonder Boy has--
(Austin turns off the Tv)
Austin: Man, the Valt’s super strong! Maybe, I and Adrian can make a system stronger than the DB System!
(Austin runs up to Adrian’s room and knocks on the door)
Adrian: Go away.
Austin: *Sighs* I have an idea that may have the power to beat Valt.
(Adrian opens the door)
Adrian: What’re you waiting for, let’s go!
~In The House Office~
Adrian: Alright, our Beyblade System is going to be heavy and--
Austin: No, we’re going to create a System where chassis get upgraded!
Adrian: listen! We’re doing what I say since I’m the strongest!!
Austin: Stop saying that all the time!!
Adrian/Austin: Fine, I’ll just make my own System!
(Austin and Adrian start working on their Beys)
Austin (Thoughts): My Bey will have the Yang System, it’ll be a five-bladed clockwise Balance Type, it’ll be able to switch from five-blade to ten-blade. ten-blade will increase defense!
Adrian (Thoughts): My Bey will have the Yin System, it’ll be a three-bladed counterclockwise attack type, the blades will have to be sharp and have rubber on them. With the sharp blades will be able to burst any Bey, no matter what!
~1 Hour Later~
Austin/Adrian: It’s done!
Adrian: Twilight Asriel!
Austin: Sol Anpao!
Adrian: I’ll defeat every Beyblade in my path!
Austin: I even created a new launcher!
Adrian: What does it do?
Austin: When you shoot hard enough, little stars will come out!
Adrian: Weird, but I don’t have a problem with it, let’s go battle!
Austin: You read my mind!
~At The Park~
Wally: I challenge you guys to a rematch, with my new Dynamite Ragnaruk!
(Wally holds up Dynamite Ragnaruk)
Austin: I’m going first!
Adrian: Whatever. First battle!
Wally: I’m going to defeat you!
Austin: Anpao isn’t going to win!
(Austin puts Anpao in Attack Mode)
Adrian: Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Austin/Wally: Go, Shoot!
(Wally pulls off an explosive shoot)
Austin: *Gasps*
Adrian: Looks like your shoot needs work.
Wally: Go, Dynamite Ragnaruk!
(Dynamite Ragnaruk speeds around the stadium)
Austin: Sol Spark!
(Anpao speeds up and slams into Dynamite Ragnaruk, Dynamite Ragnaruk gets sent flying)
Wally: *Gasps*
Austin: One more strike!
(Anpao slams into Dynamite Ragnaruk, Dynamite Ragnaruk bursts)
Wally: *Gasps*
Adrian: It’s Sol Anpao with a burst finish! Austin is the winner.
Austin: Yes! We did it, Anpao!
Wally: You got lucky, let’s--
Adrian: Oh no, you’re battling me, unless you’re scared.
Wally: Bring it on!
Austin: Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Adrian/Wally: Go, Shoot!
(Adrian pulls off an Eclipse Shoot)
Austin: *Gasps*
Adrian: Twilight Shoot!
(Asriel hits Dynamite Ragnaruk with a powerful barrage of attacks)
Wally: Hang in there!
Adrian: Don’t let it through!!
(My eyes turn bright purple)
Austin: *Gasps*
Corrupt Adrian: Asriel!!
(Adrian’s Resonance Aura flares up Asriel blazes out of the Bey)
Austin: Adrian, no.
Corrupt Adrian: Twilight Blight!!
(Asriel speeds up and slams into Dynamite Ragnaruk, Dynamite Ragnaruk starts cracking then bursts into fragments)
Wally: *Gasps* No!
Corrupt Adrian: Yes!!
Austin: It’s Twilight Asriel with a burst finish! Adrian Saito is the winner!
Adrian: Yes, I won, again!
(Wally falls to his knees)
Wally: I lost… again.
Adrian: Like I said last time, try getting stronger before messing with me!
Austin (Thoughts): Adrian, what’re you doing?
RE: Beyblade Burst Yin Yang - Lucha Burst - Aug. 07, 2021
Interesting, dual main characters, (hyuga and hikaru 2.0)
Also, cool name
RE: Beyblade Burst Yin Yang - Hollowmind13 - Aug. 07, 2021
(Aug. 07, 2021 9:08 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: 1 Year after the events of Beyblade Burst DB, Two Twin Brothers set out to become the strongest Bladers in the world, one brother full of darkness, and the other, full of light, they both repel each other, but, they both have the same goals and dreams, will they be able to become the strongest, or will their differences pull them apart. I've got a schedule planned to keep track of these fanfictions on my other ones!
Chapter 1
Beyblade Burst Yin Yang
Chapter 1
Twin Power, Twilight Asriel and Sol Anpao
Adrian: Break, now!
(A Beyblade bursts into fragments)
???: No way!
(??? falls to his knees)
Adrian: Wally, was it? Man, get a new Bey, cause your super weak.
Wally: No, I’ll make my Bey better than ever, and I’ll get revenge on you!
(Austin runs up to Adrian)
Austin: I can’t believe you broke his Bey!
Adrian: *Sighs* Typical naive Austin, you’ve gotta do what you’ve gotta do to win!
Austin: That’s not how Blading works, it’s about having fun!
Adrian: With that attitude, you’ll never become stronger!
Austin: I’ll prove you wrong!
Wally: I’ll train harder than ever, and defeat you too!
Austin: First Lucius will break you again!
~Back At Home~
Mom: So, how was battling today?
Austin: Mom, Adrian broke another Bey!
Adrian: Tattletale.
Mom: Adrian, what’ve--
Adrian: Whatever.
(Adrian walks away)
Austin: Why don’t you ever do anything about him?!
Mom: Austin, it’s not--
Austin: He’s hurting people and himself and you’re letting him do it!
Mom: *Sighs* You’ll understand one day.
(Mom walks away, Austin turns on the tv)
Hanami (On Tv): Our Wonder Boy, Valt Aoi leads with another point with that Spin Finish!
Honcho: Well, Valt, you’ve gotten way stronger, but I’m stronger!
Valt: Ha, In your dreams, Savior Valkyrie is gonna blast you out of the stadium!
Referee: Fourth battle!
Valt: I’m going to win this, no matter what!
Honcho: Cyclone Ragnaruk is going to win this battle!
Referee: Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Valt/Honcho: Go, Shoot!
(Valt and Honcho pull off powerfully explosive shoots)
Honcho: Go for the center, Ragnaruk!
Valt: Rush Shoot!
(Ragnaruk takes the center, Valkyrie hits Ragnaruk with a powerful flurry of attacks)
Hanami: Valt Aoi goes with his powerful special move, Rush Shoot!
Honcho: Ragnaruk! Double Wing Cyclone!!
(Ragnaruk creates a huge tornado)
Hanami: Roktavor takes the center and holds its ground!
Valt: Valkyrie!!
(Valt’s Resonance Aura flares up Valkyrie blazes out of the Bey)
Valt: True Shot Upper!!
(Valkyrie jumps and hits Ragnaruk with a powerful uppercut, Ragnaruk bursts)
Honcho: *Gasps*
Referee: It’s Savior Valkyrie, with a burst finish! Valt Aoi wins with a score of 4-1!
Hanami: Our Wonder Boy has--
(Austin turns off the Tv)
Austin: Man, the Valt’s super strong! Maybe, I and Adrian can make a system stronger than the DB System!
(Austin runs up to Adrian’s room and knocks on the door)
Adrian: Go away.
Austin: *Sighs* I have an idea that may have the power to beat Valt.
(Adrian opens the door)
Adrian: What’re you waiting for, let’s go!
~In The House Office~
Adrian: Alright, our Beyblade System is going to be heavy and--
Austin: No, we’re going to create a System where chassis get upgraded!
Adrian: listen! We’re doing what I say since I’m the strongest!!
Austin: Stop saying that all the time!!
Adrian/Austin: Fine, I’ll just make my own System!
(Austin and Adrian start working on their Beys)
Austin (Thoughts): My Bey will have the Yang System, it’ll be a five-bladed clockwise Balance Type, it’ll be able to switch from five-blade to ten-blade. ten-blade will increase defense!
Adrian (Thoughts): My Bey will have the Yin System, it’ll be a three-bladed counterclockwise attack type, the blades will have to be sharp and have rubber on them. With the sharp blades will be able to burst any Bey, no matter what!
~1 Hour Later~
Austin/Adrian: It’s done!
Adrian: Twilight Asriel!
Austin: Sol Anpao!
Adrian: I’ll defeat every Beyblade in my path!
Austin: I even created a new launcher!
Adrian: What does it do?
Austin: When you shoot hard enough, little stars will come out!
Adrian: Weird, but I don’t have a problem with it, let’s go battle!
Austin: You read my mind!
~At The Park~
Wally: I challenge you guys to a rematch, with my new Dynamite Ragnaruk!
(Wally holds up Dynamite Ragnaruk)
Austin: I’m going first!
Adrian: Whatever. First battle!
Wally: I’m going to defeat you!
Austin: Anpao isn’t going to win!
(Austin puts Anpao in Attack Mode)
Adrian: Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Austin/Wally: Go, Shoot!
(Wally pulls off an explosive shoot)
Austin: *Gasps*
Adrian: Looks like your shoot needs work.
Wally: Go, Dynamite Ragnaruk!
(Dynamite Ragnaruk speeds around the stadium)
Austin: Sol Spark!
(Anpao speeds up and slams into Dynamite Ragnaruk, Dynamite Ragnaruk gets sent flying)
Wally: *Gasps*
Austin: One more strike!
(Anpao slams into Dynamite Ragnaruk, Dynamite Ragnaruk bursts)
Wally: *Gasps*
Adrian: It’s Sol Anpao with a burst finish! Austin is the winner.
Austin: Yes! We did it, Anpao!
Wally: You got lucky, let’s--
Adrian: Oh no, you’re battling me, unless you’re scared.
Wally: Bring it on!
Austin: Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Adrian/Wally: Go, Shoot!
(Adrian pulls off an Eclipse Shoot)
Austin: *Gasps*
Adrian: Twilight Shoot!
(Asriel hits Dynamite Ragnaruk with a powerful barrage of attacks)
Wally: Hang in there!
Adrian: Don’t let it through!!
(My eyes turn bright purple)
Austin: *Gasps*
Corrupt Adrian: Asriel!!
(Adrian’s Resonance Aura flares up Asriel blazes out of the Bey)
Austin: Adrian, no.
Corrupt Adrian: Twilight Blight!!
(Asriel speeds up and slams into Dynamite Ragnaruk, Dynamite Ragnaruk starts cracking then bursts into fragments)
Wally: *Gasps* No!
Corrupt Adrian: Yes!!
Austin: It’s Twilight Asriel with a burst finish! Adrian Saito is the winner!
Adrian: Yes, I won, again!
(Wally falls to his knees)
Wally: I lost… again.
Adrian: Like I said last time, try getting stronger before messing with me!
Austin (Thoughts): Adrian, what’re you doing?
A schedule, more organized than me already.
Anyways let's see how it goes
RE: Beyblade Burst Yin Yang - CheetoBlader - Aug. 07, 2021
This just sounds like Sparking but with Lain replacing Hikaru.
It’s quite rushed and cramped. Perhaps put more detail into it.
RE: Beyblade Burst Yin Yang - UnseenBurst - Aug. 07, 2021
(Aug. 07, 2021 9:55 PM)CheetoBlader Wrote: This just sounds like Sparking but with Lain replacing Hikaru.
It’s quite rushed and cramped. Perhaps put more detail into it.
Ok, I'll try it, I really appreciate your feedback! Also, have fun at your event 
RE: Beyblade Burst Yin Yang - CheetoBlader - Aug. 07, 2021
(Aug. 07, 2021 9:58 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: (Aug. 07, 2021 9:55 PM)CheetoBlader Wrote: This just sounds like Sparking but with Lain replacing Hikaru.
It’s quite rushed and cramped. Perhaps put more detail into it.
Ok, I'll try it, I really appreciate your feedback! Also, have fun at your event
Oh we already finished.
But thanks anyways, I’ll pop back in here every once in a while to see how it’s going
RE: Beyblade Burst Yin Yang - LegendJustice - Aug. 07, 2021
Nice! I look forward to it!
RE: Beyblade Burst Yin Yang - LJ-Blader - Aug. 07, 2021
Cool, would be nice if you explained the systems. Also it does seem rushed, especially the battles. (I have the same problem…)
RE: Beyblade Burst Yin Yang - GenesisBlader - Aug. 07, 2021
this was a great introductory episode
it does seem a bit rushed but everyone makes mistakes (especially me)
other than that, nice job!!
RE: Beyblade Burst Yin Yang - UnseenBurst - Aug. 07, 2021
Yang System
Basically an upgraded version of the sparking system, it has chassis,' but, these are dash Chasiss' the whole Chassis is metal except the main contact points, for example, the 2A Chassis would all be metal except the 3 huge blades, the main contact points are rubber, the Yang Chip is basically the Sparking Chip but a bit wider. The Yang Blade is basically a Dynamite Blade.
In the center, it has a weight like the GT Weights but the center is like a Sparking core but, the outside of the center core (The middle of the weight) is metal and the rest of the center core is plastic. it has an armor basically like the DB armor when it's on the bottom of the layer. Yin beys are usually very heavy.
RE: Beyblade Burst Yin Yang - GenesisBlader - Aug. 07, 2021
(Aug. 07, 2021 11:01 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Yang System
Basically an upgraded version of the sparking system, it has chassis,' but, these are dash Chasiss' the whole Chassis is metal except the main contact points, for example, the 2A Chassis would all be metal except the 3 huge blades, the main contact points are rubber, the Yang Chip is basically the Sparking Chip but a bit wider. The Yang Blade is basically a Dynamite Blade.
In the center, it has a weight like the GT Weights but the center is like a Sparking core but, the outside of the center core (The middle of the weight) is metal and the rest of the center core is plastic. it has an armor basically like the DB armor when it's on the bottom of the layer. Yin beys are usually very heavy.
this system is awesome!! im looking forward to future episodes as well!!
RE: Beyblade Burst Yin Yang - LegendJustice - Aug. 07, 2021
2 Systems???? Dang! you know Adrian I used to be just like you--- I've said to much.... Great chapter!
RE: Beyblade Burst Yin Yang - UnseenBurst - Aug. 07, 2021
Forgot to mention Wally's last name Yeah, I know, it's pretty obvious what Bey he's gonna own soon.
RE: Beyblade Burst Yin Yang - LegendJustice - Aug. 07, 2021
Ah, Wyvern?
RE: Beyblade Burst Yin Yang - Hollowmind13 - Aug. 07, 2021
(Aug. 07, 2021 11:17 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: Ah, Wyvern? I can't recognise the surname but since he has a "W" name, probably yes
RE: Beyblade Burst Yin Yang - LegendJustice - Aug. 07, 2021
(Aug. 07, 2021 11:19 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: (Aug. 07, 2021 11:17 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: Ah, Wyvern? I can't recognise the surname but since he has a "W" name, probably yes
His last same is the Japanese version of Wakiyas Dub last name
RE: Beyblade Burst Yin Yang - LJ-Blader - Aug. 07, 2021
Huh Character contest? Please… I want an excuse to make a ton and yang bey.
RE: Beyblade Burst Yin Yang - GenesisBlader - Aug. 08, 2021
i cant wait for a new wyvern evolution! (if we get one)!
RE: Beyblade Burst Yin Yang - UnseenBurst - Aug. 08, 2021
You guys probably think Adrian's a heartless Anti Hero but actually, fun fact; Adrian cares about his little brother Austin more than anything in the world, he'd give his life for him, you'll see more of this in later chapters.
RE: Beyblade Burst Yin Yang - GenesisBlader - Aug. 08, 2021
(Aug. 08, 2021 12:05 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote: You guys probably think Adrian's a heartless Anti Hero but actually, fun fact; Adrian cares about his little brother Austin more than anything in the world, he'd give his life for him, you'll see more of this in later chapters.
i wish my siblings acted like that
RE: Beyblade Burst Yin Yang - Hollowmind13 - Aug. 08, 2021
(Aug. 08, 2021 12:07 AM)GenesisBlader Wrote: (Aug. 08, 2021 12:05 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote: You guys probably think Adrian's a heartless Anti Hero but actually, fun fact; Adrian cares about his little brother Austin more than anything in the world, he'd give his life for him, you'll see more of this in later chapters.
i wish my siblings acted like that You're not alone Adrian looks like an older brother, seems heartless but actually cares about people.
RE: Beyblade Burst Yin Yang - UnseenBurst - Aug. 08, 2021
(Aug. 08, 2021 12:10 AM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: (Aug. 08, 2021 12:07 AM)GenesisBlader Wrote: i wish my siblings acted like that You're not alone Adrian looks like an older brother, seems heartless but actually cares about people.
Adrian's 5 Minutes Older then Austin, by some how, Adrian's growing taller.
RE: Beyblade Burst Yin Yang - LegendJustice - Aug. 08, 2021
(Aug. 08, 2021 12:23 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote: (Aug. 08, 2021 12:10 AM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: You're not alone Adrian looks like an older brother, seems heartless but actually cares about people.
Adrian's 5 Minutes Older then Austin, by some how, Adrian's growing taller.
After reading how Adrien can be rude I don’t want a twin anymore but I do want a cousin the
At looks like me tho….
RE: Beyblade Burst Yin Yang - GenesisBlader - Aug. 08, 2021
Would you like for me to make you a theme song?
RE: Beyblade Burst Yin Yang - UnseenBurst - Aug. 08, 2021
(Aug. 08, 2021 12:51 AM)GenesisBlader Wrote: Would you like for me to make you a theme song?
Yes please, I'd very much like that.
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