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RE: The Blader's spirit - [LUCKY]Eight - Apr. 06, 2012
Why do you always say Matthew E. just call him Matthew......
RE: The Blader's spirit - nationsbeyblade - Apr. 06, 2012
because there are two matthews
RE: The Blader's spirit - XXaron - Apr. 06, 2012
The first one is the main character's friend, while the second one, Matthew E. is the main character's cousin who lives in Bermuda.
It cuts down on confusion as to who is talking...
Which I support.
RE: The Blader's spirit - nationsbeyblade - Apr. 07, 2012
now no more character request I MEAN IT THIS TIME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
RE: The Blader's spirit - nationsbeyblade - Apr. 16, 2012
new chapter up guys
RE: The Blader's spirit - TakasuMouce - Apr. 18, 2012
I have a question:
How come you don't put the chapters in spoilers? It would make the story easier to navigate though instead of scrolling down so far to find the chapter someone would have liked to view.
RE: The Blader's spirit - Damaged - Apr. 18, 2012
this story has potincial
RE: The Blader's spirit - Duck - Apr. 18, 2012
I don't like the story because it's boring, and the characters have no character.
This thread is full of SPAM! I might have to report it! No kidding!
RE: The Blader's spirit - nationsbeyblade - Apr. 18, 2012
(Apr. 18, 2012 6:07 AM)Fakirs Duck Wrote: I don't like the story because it's boring, and the characters have no character.dont please i worked so hard on this and i want to see it through to the end
This thread is full of SPAM! I might have to report it! No kidding!
(Apr. 18, 2012 12:36 AM)Takasu Wrote: I have a question:well the thing is....................................i dont know how
How come you don't put the chapters in spoilers? It would make the story easier to navigate though instead of scrolling down so far to find the chapter someone would have liked to view.
RE: The Blader's spirit - XXaron - Apr. 18, 2012
Oh man, I can't belive I forgot to tell you that nations XD
It's simply [ spoiler ] story [/ spoiler] without the spaces in the []'s.
It should become this:
Spoiler (Click to View)
RE: The Blader's spirit - nationsbeyblade - Apr. 18, 2012
thank you i will change it
RE: The Blader's spirit - Duck - Apr. 20, 2012
(Apr. 18, 2012 7:16 AM)nationsbeyblade Wrote:(Apr. 18, 2012 6:07 AM)Fakirs Duck Wrote: I don't like the story because it's boring, and the characters have no character.dont please i worked so hard on this and i want to see it through to the end
This thread is full of SPAM! I might have to report it! No kidding!
(Apr. 18, 2012 12:36 AM)Takasu Wrote: I have a question:well the thing is....................................i dont know how
How come you don't put the chapters in spoilers? It would make the story easier to navigate though instead of scrolling down so far to find the chapter someone would have liked to view.
Alright... I'll give you another chance... I understand how hard you worked...
RE: The Blader's spirit - nationsbeyblade - Apr. 26, 2012
thank you i will learn from my mistakes and not spam
RE: The Blader's spirit - nationsbeyblade - Apr. 30, 2012
new chapter up guys enjoy!
RE: The Blader's spirit - sarabscientist - May. 01, 2012
Nice one!
RE: The Blader's spirit - nationsbeyblade - May. 03, 2012
thanks
RE: The Blader's spirit - Luck - May. 07, 2012
EPIC STORY XD
RE: The Blader's spirit - nationsbeyblade - May. 07, 2012
thanks luck
RE: The Blader's spirit - NPB - May. 07, 2012
Can i be on it?
And my name is NPB then! Remember it!
Bey is Ray Sagittario D125 SF.
Personality: Happy and likes running.
RE: The Blader's spirit - nationsbeyblade - May. 13, 2012
new chapter up BOOOYA!!!
RE: The Blader's spirit - nationsbeyblade - May. 14, 2012
chapter 21 up
enjoy it!
RE: The Blader's spirit - Septentrione - May. 14, 2012
It's like Nations and Luck are just spamming this thread. Don't worry, you'll learn.
Anyway, you need some help, huh? I recommend you go to The Writer's Handbook and Stairs on Becoming A Better Writer for help and stuff. It will improve your grammar and spelling and other very important things a story should have.
Now, I recommend that you put in more description and not only dialogue. I mean, talking's all good but there should be a part in where you describe the environment and problem of the Protagonist and his pals. Now on to, character. Character development is critical for a story, so to start the development is personalities. Work on those and you'll do well. Also, please please please, put punctuation and capital letters. With these too, your on the steady road to become a better writer.
RE: The Blader's spirit - nationsbeyblade - May. 14, 2012
3 more chapters uploaded
im feeling in a writing mood
RE: The Blader's spirit - nationsbeyblade - Jun. 12, 2012
new chapter up (finnaly)
RE: The Blader's spirit - nationsbeyblade - Jun. 14, 2012
i will upload more soon