RE: Lucha Burst fanfic thread (Something new is around the corner) - Hollowmind13 - Jan. 29, 2022
(Jan. 28, 2022 9:56 PM)Lucha Burst Wrote: (Jan. 28, 2022 9:14 AM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: .
I'd reccommend to make a character form, else people might not know what goes where. (Or to specify some info that you want)
Btw, nice system. I was planning on it i was just out of time and tired last night
Character Form:
Name:
Gender:
Age:
Hair Color:
Eye Color:
Height:
Weight:
Clothing:
Iconic Item(optional):
Special Features(scars, birthmarks, etc.)
Friendly reminder to put colors and designs into the character form please and thank you.
Bey Form:
Bey Name:
Type:
Color Scheme:
Chip:
Blade Base -
Cover:
Blade Body:
Soul Weight:
Rin Disc:
Disc Blade:
Driver:
friendly reminder to make sure to describe part shapes and colors to the best of your ability .
Sure, I’ll just... Ctrl C and V. About the element thing, I didn't get it that well so if I have to chose one maybe metal? idk
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Character:
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Quote: "..."
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Name: Hibiki Hisakawa
.
Gender: Female
.
Age: 15 (?)
.
Hair: Short-ish fluffy hair dyed light gray, natural color is dark brown
.
Eye Color: Gray
.
Height: 172 Cm
.
Weight: 59.6 Kg
.
Clothing: An assymetrical deep gray sweater above a white shirt. Gray shorts above black leggings. Gray running shoes. White Headphones around the neck (when not used). Silver fingerless gloves with one yellow button on each glove that adjusts the size.
.
Personality - Psychology: High common sense, Alert and Quick to judge.
Self-discipline: Sometimes makes errors in judgement and Unfocused
Lifestyle: Structured, Solitary and A perfectionist.
Social attitude: Tolerant and Shy
Honesty and Honour: Very loyal and Straight-forward.
Emotional Capacity: Warm and Understanding
.
More: She normally avoids getting close to people, but becomes attached to friends. When she is wearing music, she goes to her own world inside her head where she can sing said music.
.
Iconic Item(optional): White wireless headphones with a yellow clock-looking design on the left ear. (Trivia: Her favorite music genre is Alternative Rock)
.
Special Features: She is mute. She knows sign language, but rarely uses it since not many people know it so instead writes things down. .
Bey:
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Bey Name: Granite Horogium. Pendulum. Cog. Metal Wide metal
(Naming is right?)
Type: Defense
Color Scheme: The outer side of the blade is metal gray, the inner side is dark gray with white roman numbers resembling a clock. The outer side of said dark gray segment is blocky as a Cog, with 4 major points sticking out on each side and complementing the Core.
The Core is dark gray with the metal being silver. The center eye is yellow.
The Rin Disc is silver.
The Disc Frame is white.
The driver is white (transparent) and the metal is silver.
Chip: Horogium features a stylized pendulum clock as it's motif, it has four clock hands pointing North, South, East, and West with an eye in the center, as well as four other eyes between the hands. This pendulum clock motif is made out of metal. The Core features 6 weak teeth, making it unusable without Granite.
Blade Base (Fused Blade Body, Cover and Soul weight): Granite features a round perimeter with a small protrusion coming out from one side, it is one of the heaviest Blade Bases and it is heavier than some normal Blade Base + Soul Weight combos. This blade is slightly unbalanced by having more metal on one side, causing minor unbalance (see Basalt Horogium movement pattern as reference). It's small protrusion can work as a counter attack thanks to it's heavy weight.
This Blade also features a gimmick that the weight inside can shift with clicks, slightly (with horogium core) changing the balance each click. The closer it is to burst, more balanced it is. The less teeth the Core has, bigger is the change each click.
Rin Disc: Pendulum features a squarish design with one corner being heavier than the rest, this further increases the imbalance and makes it a little more noticeable.
Disc Blade: Cog features 8 blocky blades that slightly overlap Granite with semi free spin (free spin that makes little clicks). This disc blade is meant to work as a shield against upper attacks or any attack that hits on the lower part of the layer, but their lack of actual free spin makes them only absorb some of the attack power.
Driver: Metal Wide metal features a wide metal rounded on the edge. This tip have little to no defensive capacities but works perfectly as a stamina driver, with good LAD.
Combo overall: The heavy weight of the combo can easily counter the low friction of the driver, but it can be a weakness when angled as it will be harder to get up. The circular shape of the combo compensates for its weaker teeth. Cog decreases the combo LAD. .
Equipment:
Horogium is very heavy, so she has a special launcher that can handle it. It doesn't add much extra Shoot power on Horogium but would make any other bey go faster.
RE: Lucha Burst fanfic thread (Beyblade Burst: Ice Storm) - We do not care - Jan. 29, 2022
I really enjoy reading this fan fiction so im gonna enter my character
Character and bey
Name: Seth Hussein
Gender: Male
Age: 14
Hair Color: White
Eye Color: Grey (But the eyes will turn red with the white part becoming black like Phi's left eye when Seth uses his aura and special moves.)
Height: 170 cm
Weight: 58 kg
Clothing: Casual. Usually with a black hoodie and black shorts or a black T shirt and white shorts.
Personality: : Kind and sensitive but when he goes into battle he becomes cruel and sadistic at times wanting to destroy you. He also may act like he's friends or cool with you even though he doesn't because he doesn't trust people 100% because like in his own words "Never trust anyone too much, remember the devil was once an angel."
Iconic item: Broken chains
Special Features: When Seth uses his aura his grey eyes with turn red with the white part of the eye turning black like Phi's left eye.
Bey Name: Chained Samael
Type: Left spin attack
Color Scheme: Black and red
Chip: (Samael) A left spinning red chip with a fallen angel wearing a black robe in the center.
Blade Base - (Chained)
Cover: The weight is pushed to the attack points.
Blade Body: A left spinning black blade with the fallen angels red wings extending to some of the blader. The blade as two strong metal attack points like Rage.
Soul Weight: (Balance) A red weight that is balanced and equal on the left and right side of the bey like Diabolos from gt.
Rin Disc: (Fallen) The disc is black and very heavy and is shaped like drake with it shaped so it lines up with Chained's contact points.
Disc Blade: (Crack) The blade is red and is shaped like the plastic part of 3A with it being shaped to line up with Chains contact points.
Driver: A black Xtreme' with red rubber.
RE: Lucha Burst fanfic thread (Something new is around the corner) - Lucha Burst - Jan. 31, 2022
(Jan. 29, 2022 12:54 AM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: (Jan. 28, 2022 9:56 PM)Lucha Burst Wrote: I was planning on it i was just out of time and tired last night
Character Form:
Name:
Gender:
Age:
Hair Color:
Eye Color:
Height:
Weight:
Clothing:
Iconic Item(optional):
Special Features(scars, birthmarks, etc.)
Friendly reminder to put colors and designs into the character form please and thank you.
Bey Form:
Bey Name:
Type:
Color Scheme:
Chip:
Blade Base -
Cover:
Blade Body:
Soul Weight:
Rin Disc:
Disc Blade:
Driver:
friendly reminder to make sure to describe part shapes and colors to the best of your ability .
Sure, I’ll just... Ctrl C and V. About the element thing, I didn't get it that well so if I have to chose one maybe metal? idk
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Character:
.
Quote: "..."
.
Name: Hibiki Hisakawa
.
Gender: Female
.
Age: 15 (?)
.
Hair: Short-ish fluffy hair dyed light gray, natural color is dark brown
.
Eye Color: Gray
.
Height: 172 Cm
.
Weight: 59.6 Kg
.
Clothing: An assymetrical deep gray sweater above a white shirt. Gray shorts above black leggings. Gray running shoes. White Headphones around the neck (when not used). Silver fingerless gloves with one yellow button on each glove that adjusts the size.
.
Personality - Psychology: High common sense, Alert and Quick to judge.
Self-discipline: Sometimes makes errors in judgement and Unfocused
Lifestyle: Structured, Solitary and A perfectionist.
Social attitude: Tolerant and Shy
Honesty and Honour: Very loyal and Straight-forward.
Emotional Capacity: Warm and Understanding
.
More: She normally avoids getting close to people, but becomes attached to friends. When she is wearing music, she goes to her own world inside her head where she can sing said music.
.
Iconic Item(optional): White wireless headphones with a yellow clock-looking design on the left ear. (Trivia: Her favorite music genre is Alternative Rock)
.
Special Features: She is mute. She knows sign language, but rarely uses it since not many people know it so instead writes things down. .
Bey:
.
Bey Name: Granite Horogium. Pendulum. Cog. Metal Wide metal
(Naming is right?)
Type: Defense
Color Scheme: The outer side of the blade is metal gray, the inner side is dark gray with white roman numbers resembling a clock. The outer side of said dark gray segment is blocky as a Cog, with 4 major points sticking out on each side and complementing the Core.
The Core is dark gray with the metal being silver. The center eye is yellow.
The Rin Disc is silver.
The Disc Frame is white.
The driver is white (transparent) and the metal is silver.
Chip: Horogium features a stylized pendulum clock as it's motif, it has four clock hands pointing North, South, East, and West with an eye in the center, as well as four other eyes between the hands. This pendulum clock motif is made out of metal. The Core features 6 weak teeth, making it unusable without Granite.
Blade Base (Fused Blade Body, Cover and Soul weight): Granite features a round perimeter with a small protrusion coming out from one side, it is one of the heaviest Blade Bases and it is heavier than some normal Blade Base + Soul Weight combos. This blade is slightly unbalanced by having more metal on one side, causing minor unbalance (see Basalt Horogium movement pattern as reference). It's small protrusion can work as a counter attack thanks to it's heavy weight.
This Blade also features a gimmick that the weight inside can shift with clicks, slightly (with horogium core) changing the balance each click. The closer it is to burst, more balanced it is. The less teeth the Core has, bigger is the change each click.
Rin Disc: Pendulum features a squarish design with one corner being heavier than the rest, this further increases the imbalance and makes it a little more noticeable.
Disc Blade: Cog features 8 blocky blades that slightly overlap Granite with semi free spin (free spin that makes little clicks). This disc blade is meant to work as a shield against upper attacks or any attack that hits on the lower part of the layer, but their lack of actual free spin makes them only absorb some of the attack power.
Driver: Metal Wide metal features a wide metal rounded on the edge. This tip have little to no defensive capacities but works perfectly as a stamina driver, with good LAD.
Combo overall: The heavy weight of the combo can easily counter the low friction of the driver, but it can be a weakness when angled as it will be harder to get up. The circular shape of the combo compensates for its weaker teeth. Cog decreases the combo LAD. .
Equipment:
Horogium is very heavy, so she has a special launcher that can handle it. It doesn't add much extra Shoot power on Horogium but would make any other bey go faster. Question regarding the Pendulum Disc, can the unblance be alligned with the layer to balance it or is it always unbalanced no matter how it is aligned?
the "Elemental" Powers of Tornado beys are as follows and every bey in a specific Element will have certain special moves unless specified otherwise.
Air:
Air Raid: Using the stadiums aerodynamics the bey direct a gust of wind at the opponent.
Air Shield: Using the enhanced wind currents it has it will use the wind flow around it as a shield to protect itself from attacks
Omega Drain: When facing a bey of opposite spin it pushes wind at it, creating a lot of resistance and drain the opponents stamina. Metal:
Iron Spin - The Bey will spin in one spot on the stadium that is close to the stadium wall.
Final Strike - Using its weight to its advantage it will attack with its weight dealing heavy damage Water:
Typhoon - the bey will ride up the stadium and dive back down ontop of the opponent landing in a precise spot smashing the beys layer into the stadium floor causing it to fly out of the stadium
Low Tide - A Bey will use its natural movements to absorb incoming attacks
High Tide - The Bey will use another beys attack to increase the power of its counter attack Fire:
Incinerator - Using the slope of the stadium the beyblade pushes its self out to the outer wall and then smashes back down into the bey with extreme speed.
Inferno Ride - The bey will assume the center and spin on an axis deflecting damage by driving its blades into the bottom of the opponents layers. Wood/Leaf:
Poison Ivy smash - the beyblade will smash into the bey in such a way that is becomes unbalanced and loses stamina.
Log Drive - The Beyblade will move around the stadium unpredictably crashing into the wall and using that to fling itself into the opponent
Leaf Razor - The Beyblade will crash into the stadium wall the impact causing it to jump ontop of the wall and it will spin there around the stadium, or in a single spot waiting for the opponent to lose stamina before smashing back down with a strong attack from above
Beyblade Burst: Ice Storm Chapter #1
"Elemental Power"
*20 years after the events of DB*
Kori(Reading a newspaper): Elemental beys are the new craze! With Crazy powers and legendary abilities. For the first time in 20 years beyblade is on the surge with many new bladers and future legends rising! Could you be the next Valt Aoi? or the Next Dantye Koryu? There are 5 elements as of current but bey scientists say that further research is needed as there may be more!
Grand: Awesome!
*He'd snatch the paper from him*
Kori: Hey!
Grand: Says here that the Elemental 6 are gonna be visiting here soon
*Loud helicopter noises could be heard*
Kori: I think that's them
*The back of the helicopter would open as 6 people would walk out*
Kori: They seem...so uninspired, so weak.
Grand: They're the top bladers in the world man!
*They would aproach Kori & Grand*
Kori(confused): Hello?
???: My name is Vashon I'm the Leader of the Elemental 6
Grand(looking at the golden gauntlet on Vashon's arm): Is that Klaw Valravn? The FIrst Tornado system bey and the second elemental bey!
Vashon: You know me?
*Vashon would chuckle*
Grand: Yeah, I've seen all your battles!
Vashon: Maybe you can be like me one day!
Kori: Why are you so cheerful, its honestly annoying!
Vashon: And who are you?
Kori: Kori Arashi, the top talent in this area!
Vashon: Well if your so great then pick any of us to battle and prove yourself!
Kori: Alright! I choose you!
*He would point at a Tall Muscular Guy*
???: Names Hendrix by the way.
Kori: Well Hendrix you got yourself a battle.
*Hendrix would show off his bey*
Hendirx: I'll save you some time, Arrow Hercules, A Stamina type in the Tornado System with a Earth element, it has 2 sets of bows that move outwards when it is has a lot of stamina, the bow is divided into two portions, inner and outer, the outer stays out until about three quarters of the battle and the inner goes in about half way through the battle.
*He'd turn the beyblade so you could see the driver*
Hendrix: A Sharp POM tip with a small hole in the middle for speed. A ring similar to eternal sits around it on the base, further up you see two tabs that lock the free spin while its spinning at high speeds and unlock the free spin as it slows down as well as pushes a small metal tip into the hole in the drivers tip for increased stamina. The driver has a weak spring but makes up for this with a rubber ring in the top that uses friction to increase burst resistance
*He'd take the bey apart and show off the disc*
Hendrix: The Synergy disc features a rounded shape with 4 metal tabs that move outwards as the bey spins and back in as it slows down. The Disc Blade features a round shape with 4 indents that have metal and 4 small bumps that have rubber.
Hendrix: Understood? now you know my entire bey
*Kori Wuuld pull out his bey*
Kori: Meet Ultimate Spriggan Karma Xtreme' 9
Hendrix: a DB bey? this will be over fast.
Kori & Hendrix: 3... 2... 1.. Let it rip!
*Both beys would land in the stadium, Hercules taking the center and Spriggan speeding around the stadium really fast*
Hendrix: How is it so fast!
Kori: End it Early! Limitless Potential!
*Ultimate spriggan would smash into Hercules, Hercules rolling off the attack easily*
Hendrix: Arrow Strike!
*The two arrow like points on Hercules would glow white as they smashed into Ultimate Spriggan causing the ultimate blade to shatter*
Kori(shocked): Such power!
Hendrix: I- I- I'm sorry i dint mean to break it.
Kori: I don't care its fine. I want one of those!
Vashon: You'll have to prove your worthy of one!
RE: Lucha Burst fanfic thread (Something new is around the corner) - Hollowmind13 - Feb. 01, 2022
(Jan. 31, 2022 7:10 PM)Lucha Burst Wrote: (Jan. 29, 2022 12:54 AM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: .
Sure, I’ll just... Ctrl C and V. About the element thing, I didn't get it that well so if I have to chose one maybe metal? idk
.
Character:
.
Quote: "..."
.
Name: Hibiki Hisakawa
.
Gender: Female
.
Age: 15 (?)
.
Hair: Short-ish fluffy hair dyed light gray, natural color is dark brown
.
Eye Color: Gray
.
Height: 172 Cm
.
Weight: 59.6 Kg
.
Clothing: An assymetrical deep gray sweater above a white shirt. Gray shorts above black leggings. Gray running shoes. White Headphones around the neck (when not used). Silver fingerless gloves with one yellow button on each glove that adjusts the size.
.
Personality - Psychology: High common sense, Alert and Quick to judge.
Self-discipline: Sometimes makes errors in judgement and Unfocused
Lifestyle: Structured, Solitary and A perfectionist.
Social attitude: Tolerant and Shy
Honesty and Honour: Very loyal and Straight-forward.
Emotional Capacity: Warm and Understanding
.
More: She normally avoids getting close to people, but becomes attached to friends. When she is wearing music, she goes to her own world inside her head where she can sing said music.
.
Iconic Item(optional): White wireless headphones with a yellow clock-looking design on the left ear. (Trivia: Her favorite music genre is Alternative Rock)
.
Special Features: She is mute. She knows sign language, but rarely uses it since not many people know it so instead writes things down. .
Bey:
.
Bey Name: Granite Horogium. Pendulum. Cog. Metal Wide metal
(Naming is right?)
Type: Defense
Color Scheme: The outer side of the blade is metal gray, the inner side is dark gray with white roman numbers resembling a clock. The outer side of said dark gray segment is blocky as a Cog, with 4 major points sticking out on each side and complementing the Core.
The Core is dark gray with the metal being silver. The center eye is yellow.
The Rin Disc is silver.
The Disc Frame is white.
The driver is white (transparent) and the metal is silver.
Chip: Horogium features a stylized pendulum clock as it's motif, it has four clock hands pointing North, South, East, and West with an eye in the center, as well as four other eyes between the hands. This pendulum clock motif is made out of metal. The Core features 6 weak teeth, making it unusable without Granite.
Blade Base (Fused Blade Body, Cover and Soul weight): Granite features a round perimeter with a small protrusion coming out from one side, it is one of the heaviest Blade Bases and it is heavier than some normal Blade Base + Soul Weight combos. This blade is slightly unbalanced by having more metal on one side, causing minor unbalance (see Basalt Horogium movement pattern as reference). It's small protrusion can work as a counter attack thanks to it's heavy weight.
This Blade also features a gimmick that the weight inside can shift with clicks, slightly (with horogium core) changing the balance each click. The closer it is to burst, more balanced it is. The less teeth the Core has, bigger is the change each click.
Rin Disc: Pendulum features a squarish design with one corner being heavier than the rest, this further increases the imbalance and makes it a little more noticeable.
Disc Blade: Cog features 8 blocky blades that slightly overlap Granite with semi free spin (free spin that makes little clicks). This disc blade is meant to work as a shield against upper attacks or any attack that hits on the lower part of the layer, but their lack of actual free spin makes them only absorb some of the attack power.
Driver: Metal Wide metal features a wide metal rounded on the edge. This tip have little to no defensive capacities but works perfectly as a stamina driver, with good LAD.
Combo overall: The heavy weight of the combo can easily counter the low friction of the driver, but it can be a weakness when angled as it will be harder to get up. The circular shape of the combo compensates for its weaker teeth. Cog decreases the combo LAD. .
Equipment:
Horogium is very heavy, so she has a special launcher that can handle it. It doesn't add much extra Shoot power on Horogium but would make any other bey go faster. Question regarding the Pendulum Disc, can the unblance be alligned with the layer to balance it or is it always unbalanced no matter how it is aligned?
the "Elemental" Powers of Tornado beys are as follows and every bey in a specific Element will have certain special moves unless specified otherwise.
Air:
Air Raid: Using the stadiums aerodynamics the bey direct a gust of wind at the opponent.
Air Shield: Using the enhanced wind currents it has it will use the wind flow around it as a shield to protect itself from attacks
Omega Drain: When facing a bey of opposite spin it pushes wind at it, creating a lot of resistance and drain the opponents stamina. Metal:
Iron Spin - The Bey will spin in one spot on the stadium that is close to the stadium wall.
Final Strike - Using its weight to its advantage it will attack with its weight dealing heavy damage Water:
Typhoon - the bey will ride up the stadium and dive back down ontop of the opponent landing in a precise spot smashing the beys layer into the stadium floor causing it to fly out of the stadium
Low Tide - A Bey will use its natural movements to absorb incoming attacks
High Tide - The Bey will use another beys attack to increase the power of its counter attack Fire:
Incinerator - Using the slope of the stadium the beyblade pushes its self out to the outer wall and then smashes back down into the bey with extreme speed.
Inferno Ride - The bey will assume the center and spin on an axis deflecting damage by driving its blades into the bottom of the opponents layers. Wood/Leaf:
Poison Ivy smash - the beyblade will smash into the bey in such a way that is becomes unbalanced and loses stamina.
Log Drive - The Beyblade will move around the stadium unpredictably crashing into the wall and using that to fling itself into the opponent
Leaf Razor - The Beyblade will crash into the stadium wall the impact causing it to jump ontop of the wall and it will spin there around the stadium, or in a single spot waiting for the opponent to lose stamina before smashing back down with a strong attack from above
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I thought you would just skip that detail lo. Yes, putting Pendulum in a way makes it somewhay more balanced than in the other, although not that much since it doesn't align with the shifting weight in any way.
But either way there is still some unbalance.
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As for elements, Metal fits quite well IMO.
RE: Lucha Burst fanfic thread (Beyblade Burst: Ice Storm) - We do not care - Feb. 01, 2022
(Jan. 31, 2022 7:10 PM)Lucha Burst Wrote: (Jan. 29, 2022 12:54 AM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: .
Sure, I’ll just... Ctrl C and V. About the element thing, I didn't get it that well so if I have to chose one maybe metal? idk
.
Character:
.
Quote: "..."
.
Name: Hibiki Hisakawa
.
Gender: Female
.
Age: 15 (?)
.
Hair: Short-ish fluffy hair dyed light gray, natural color is dark brown
.
Eye Color: Gray
.
Height: 172 Cm
.
Weight: 59.6 Kg
.
Clothing: An assymetrical deep gray sweater above a white shirt. Gray shorts above black leggings. Gray running shoes. White Headphones around the neck (when not used). Silver fingerless gloves with one yellow button on each glove that adjusts the size.
.
Personality - Psychology: High common sense, Alert and Quick to judge.
Self-discipline: Sometimes makes errors in judgement and Unfocused
Lifestyle: Structured, Solitary and A perfectionist.
Social attitude: Tolerant and Shy
Honesty and Honour: Very loyal and Straight-forward.
Emotional Capacity: Warm and Understanding
.
More: She normally avoids getting close to people, but becomes attached to friends. When she is wearing music, she goes to her own world inside her head where she can sing said music.
.
Iconic Item(optional): White wireless headphones with a yellow clock-looking design on the left ear. (Trivia: Her favorite music genre is Alternative Rock)
.
Special Features: She is mute. She knows sign language, but rarely uses it since not many people know it so instead writes things down. .
Bey:
.
Bey Name: Granite Horogium. Pendulum. Cog. Metal Wide metal
(Naming is right?)
Type: Defense
Color Scheme: The outer side of the blade is metal gray, the inner side is dark gray with white roman numbers resembling a clock. The outer side of said dark gray segment is blocky as a Cog, with 4 major points sticking out on each side and complementing the Core.
The Core is dark gray with the metal being silver. The center eye is yellow.
The Rin Disc is silver.
The Disc Frame is white.
The driver is white (transparent) and the metal is silver.
Chip: Horogium features a stylized pendulum clock as it's motif, it has four clock hands pointing North, South, East, and West with an eye in the center, as well as four other eyes between the hands. This pendulum clock motif is made out of metal. The Core features 6 weak teeth, making it unusable without Granite.
Blade Base (Fused Blade Body, Cover and Soul weight): Granite features a round perimeter with a small protrusion coming out from one side, it is one of the heaviest Blade Bases and it is heavier than some normal Blade Base + Soul Weight combos. This blade is slightly unbalanced by having more metal on one side, causing minor unbalance (see Basalt Horogium movement pattern as reference). It's small protrusion can work as a counter attack thanks to it's heavy weight.
This Blade also features a gimmick that the weight inside can shift with clicks, slightly (with horogium core) changing the balance each click. The closer it is to burst, more balanced it is. The less teeth the Core has, bigger is the change each click.
Rin Disc: Pendulum features a squarish design with one corner being heavier than the rest, this further increases the imbalance and makes it a little more noticeable.
Disc Blade: Cog features 8 blocky blades that slightly overlap Granite with semi free spin (free spin that makes little clicks). This disc blade is meant to work as a shield against upper attacks or any attack that hits on the lower part of the layer, but their lack of actual free spin makes them only absorb some of the attack power.
Driver: Metal Wide metal features a wide metal rounded on the edge. This tip have little to no defensive capacities but works perfectly as a stamina driver, with good LAD.
Combo overall: The heavy weight of the combo can easily counter the low friction of the driver, but it can be a weakness when angled as it will be harder to get up. The circular shape of the combo compensates for its weaker teeth. Cog decreases the combo LAD. .
Equipment:
Horogium is very heavy, so she has a special launcher that can handle it. It doesn't add much extra Shoot power on Horogium but would make any other bey go faster. Question regarding the Pendulum Disc, can the unblance be alligned with the layer to balance it or is it always unbalanced no matter how it is aligned?
the "Elemental" Powers of Tornado beys are as follows and every bey in a specific Element will have certain special moves unless specified otherwise.
Air:
Air Raid: Using the stadiums aerodynamics the bey direct a gust of wind at the opponent.
Air Shield: Using the enhanced wind currents it has it will use the wind flow around it as a shield to protect itself from attacks
Omega Drain: When facing a bey of opposite spin it pushes wind at it, creating a lot of resistance and drain the opponents stamina. Metal:
Iron Spin - The Bey will spin in one spot on the stadium that is close to the stadium wall.
Final Strike - Using its weight to its advantage it will attack with its weight dealing heavy damage Water:
Typhoon - the bey will ride up the stadium and dive back down ontop of the opponent landing in a precise spot smashing the beys layer into the stadium floor causing it to fly out of the stadium
Low Tide - A Bey will use its natural movements to absorb incoming attacks
High Tide - The Bey will use another beys attack to increase the power of its counter attack Fire:
Incinerator - Using the slope of the stadium the beyblade pushes its self out to the outer wall and then smashes back down into the bey with extreme speed.
Inferno Ride - The bey will assume the center and spin on an axis deflecting damage by driving its blades into the bottom of the opponents layers. Wood/Leaf:
Poison Ivy smash - the beyblade will smash into the bey in such a way that is becomes unbalanced and loses stamina.
Log Drive - The Beyblade will move around the stadium unpredictably crashing into the wall and using that to fling itself into the opponent
Leaf Razor - The Beyblade will crash into the stadium wall the impact causing it to jump ontop of the wall and it will spin there around the stadium, or in a single spot waiting for the opponent to lose stamina before smashing back down with a strong attack from above
Beyblade Burst: Ice Storm Chapter #1
"Elemental Power"
*20 years after the events of DB*
Kori(Reading a newspaper): Elemental beys are the new craze! With Crazy powers and legendary abilities. For the first time in 20 years beyblade is on the surge with many new bladers and future legends rising! Could you be the next Valt Aoi? or the Next Dantye Koryu? There are 5 elements as of current but bey scientists say that further research is needed as there may be more!
Grand: Awesome!
*He'd snatch the paper from him*
Kori: Hey!
Grand: Says here that the Elemental 6 are gonna be visiting here soon
*Loud helicopter noises could be heard*
Kori: I think that's them
*The back of the helicopter would open as 6 people would walk out*
Kori: They seem...so uninspired, so weak.
Grand: They're the top bladers in the world man!
*They would aproach Kori & Grand*
Kori(confused): Hello?
???: My name is Vashon I'm the Leader of the Elemental 6
Grand(looking at the golden gauntlet on Vashon's arm): Is that Klaw Valravn? The FIrst Tornado system bey and the second elemental bey!
Vashon: You know me?
*Vashon would chuckle*
Grand: Yeah, I've seen all your battles!
Vashon: Maybe you can be like me one day!
Kori: Why are you so cheerful, its honestly annoying!
Vashon: And who are you?
Kori: Kori Arashi, the top talent in this area!
Vashon: Well if your so great then pick any of us to battle and prove yourself!
Kori: Alright! I choose you!
*He would point at a Tall Muscular Guy*
???: Names Hendrix by the way.
Kori: Well Hendrix you got yourself a battle.
*Hendrix would show off his bey*
Hendirx: I'll save you some time, Arrow Hercules, A Stamina type in the Tornado System with a Earth element, it has 2 sets of bows that move outwards when it is has a lot of stamina, the bow is divided into two portions, inner and outer, the outer stays out until about three quarters of the battle and the inner goes in about half way through the battle.
*He'd turn the beyblade so you could see the driver*
Hendrix: A Sharp POM tip with a small hole in the middle for speed. A ring similar to eternal sits around it on the base, further up you see two tabs that lock the free spin while its spinning at high speeds and unlock the free spin as it slows down as well as pushes a small metal tip into the hole in the drivers tip for increased stamina. The driver has a weak spring but makes up for this with a rubber ring in the top that uses friction to increase burst resistance
*He'd take the bey apart and show off the disc*
Hendrix: The Synergy disc features a rounded shape with 4 metal tabs that move outwards as the bey spins and back in as it slows down. The Disc Blade features a round shape with 4 indents that have metal and 4 small bumps that have rubber.
Hendrix: Understood? now you know my entire bey
*Kori Wuuld pull out his bey*
Kori: Meet Ultimate Spriggan Karma Xtreme' 9
Hendrix: a DB bey? this will be over fast.
Kori & Hendrix: 3... 2... 1.. Let it rip!
*Both beys would land in the stadium, Hercules taking the center and Spriggan speeding around the stadium really fast*
Hendrix: How is it so fast!
Kori: End it Early! Limitless Potential!
*Ultimate spriggan would smash into Hercules, Hercules rolling off the attack easily*
Hendrix: Arrow Strike!
*The two arrow like points on Hercules would glow white as they smashed into Ultimate Spriggan causing the ultimate blade to shatter*
Kori(shocked): Such power!
Hendrix: I- I- I'm sorry i dint mean to break it.
Kori: I don't care its fine. I want one of those!
Vashon: You'll have to prove your worthy of one! I would like my bey to be a fire type if that's ok
RE: Lucha Burst fanfic thread (Beyblade Burst: Ice Storm) - Lucha Burst - Feb. 07, 2022
Beyblade Burst: Ice Storm Chapter #2
"A Worthy Blader"
Vashon: You'll have to prove your a worthy of one!
Grand: I wanna try to!
Kori: Let's do this!
~Evolutionary 6 Training center~
Vashon: Okay, Let's try the bot challenge! Behind you is every single release in the Dynamite Battle system, pick parts wisely to defeat the 50 bot beys.
Kori(thoughts): Out of 50 majority would be right, so id need a bey who can last that long and attack against same spin or out last it at least
Grand: Done! Ultimate Belial2 0 Nexus+S extreme
Kori: Okay my bey is done as well! Vanish Bahamut 0 Over Atomic'
Vashon: Very well best of luck to the both of you, now to the stadiums. roll a dice get a stadium!
*Grand would pick the dice up and roll them*
Grand: 4! Hope that's good.
*Kori would roll the dice*
Kori: 6, ill win either way!
Vashon: Stadium four! The Counter stadium designed for massive counter attacks, the walls are coated in rubber and there are several damage rails!
Grand: Heck yeah!
Vashon: Stadium 6, The booster stadium, the middle spins counter clockwise allowing for interesting movements. and the outer ridge changes spins when beys impact it!
*Kori and Grand would launch into the stadium*
Kori: Take the center! Go now longinus!
*Longinus would push towards the center the free spin of Atomic' slowly pushing into the free spinning ring, finally reaching the middle the bey would gain immense speed*
Grand: True Ultimate Upper!
Vashon: there blowing right threw the beys, Kori is using the stadiums spinning ring to fuel his bey and using Vanish claw to destroy every bey in his path, no bey stands a chance of surviving such a mega charged Vanish claw, plus the free spin on the driver maintains stability and holds it steady even when attacked.
Hendrix: Grand is using the unique shapes of the stadium as well as the upper blades of ultimate to smash attack beys into the wall and deal a final blow to destroy them, a three hit tactic that no bey can survive in such stadium.
Vashon: Okay we've seen enough.
Kori: theres still 20 beys left tho.
Vashon: you've proved yourself worthy
~A loud crash can be heard behind them~
Vashon: What was that?
???: Hello Vashon.
Vashon: Hello Dalomo
Dalomo: Prepare for defeat! Potent Diabolos will destroy you once and for all!
Grand: No... That can't be... A fusion element core.
Kori: Okay but what does that mean?
Dalomo: Are you stupid? it fuses all the elements into one so my bey has all of the elemental moves and powers.
Grand: theres only three known in the world, Dalomo has one, shon has the other and the others location is unknown.
*Kori would nudge Grand*
Kori: Look at the potent blade, It has 4 blades, two of which are upper blade and a large flat one, but look at the bottom, metal! it has metal and rubber on the upper blades.
Dalomo: the entire blade is metal coated in a plastic, the bye has three modes, Potent mode which your looking at, rush mode which the long blade pushes forward for more attack and Arch mode which the long blade shifts back, I am unbeatable with my new evolution.
Vashon: No, your very beatable, your still weak.
~local news station report~
News reporter: The Elemental 6 Training center is undergoing repair as the building got part of its outer wall destroyed by known other then Dalomo, who will stop this sinister blader? In related news, Vashon will be stepping down from his position as Elemental 6 leader in which he has decided to create a tournament for the new spot. Bladers around the world can enter but only one will win.
News Reporter 2: In other news the newly established beyblade Hall of fame will induct the following bladers as the first hall of famers, Valt Aoi, Shu Kurenai, Lui shirosagi, Free De La Hoya, Aiga Akabane, Xander Shakedera, Phi, and Gwyn Reynolds. More to come in the future.
~At the home of Grand & Kori~
Kori: Okay, you have ideas and I have artistic skills, lets blueprint some designs and get them made with vashon tomorrow!
Grand: My bey is gonna be Iron Gallu, a attack type with aspescts of juker, hades, and Xcalibur. But how to make that?
RE: Lucha Burst fanfic thread (Beyblade Burst: Ice Storm) - Hollowmind13 - Feb. 08, 2022
probably unpopular opinion: I felt lost twice while reading it (I read cp1 because I haven't seen it before lo)
Of course there is some lack of expression and I suppose both Kori and Grand are the protags, like Hyuga and Hikaru.
The full explanation of the parts does feel nice but explaining your entire bey before a battle is not a smart move, especially if you're a top blader. And idk why the top 6 bladers would care to help them unless they had to/were paid to/they know them from before and wanted to repay a favor idk. But to be fair it wasn’t revealed yet I guess.
I suppose the sudden news report is to hide the battle? Like, it happened but we don't know what happened, right?
Also, the amount of sheer exposition is just, wow.
The setting does look great tho, and the whole new blading world thing.
RE: Lucha Burst fanfic thread (Beyblade Burst: Ice Storm) - Lucha Burst - Feb. 08, 2022
(Feb. 08, 2022 9:00 AM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: probably unpopular opinion: I felt lost twice while reading it (I read cp1 because I haven't seen it before lo)
Of course there is some lack of expression and I suppose both Kori and Grand are the protags, like Hyuga and Hikaru.
The full explanation of the parts does feel nice but explaining your entire bey before a battle is not a smart move, especially if you're a top blader. And idk why the top 6 bladers would care to help them unless they had to/were paid to/they know them from before and wanted to repay a favor idk. But to be fair it wasn’t revealed yet I guess.
I suppose the sudden news report is to hide the battle? Like, it happened but we don't know what happened, right?
Also, the amount of sheer exposition is just, wow.
The setting does look great tho, and the whole new blading world thing.
Okay first, I'll work on the lack of expression in the next episodes. wasn't really focused on that but suppose i should be it is important to a story after all, Second, Kori is the Portag and Grand is like a secondary character like Ranzo or similar. as the story progresses this will be more apparent.
third,Hendrix confidence is a little bit extreme so the full part explanation is just pure ego and kind of showing that his technique alone is superior to knowing how his bey works if that makes sense. your right tho it isn't smart, that was the point.
fourth, Later in the series we'll understand why they are helping them, there is a reason behind it.
fifth, The News report was kind of meant to do that in a way, but also to hide Dalomo until later in the series.
sixth, (One short google search later) i'm not sure if thats a good thing but thanks I try.
and finally, thanks I tried to set up a nice setting.
RE: Lucha Burst fanfic thread (Beyblade Burst: Ice Storm) - Hollowmind13 - Feb. 08, 2022
(Feb. 08, 2022 6:54 PM)Lucha Burst Wrote: (Feb. 08, 2022 9:00 AM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: probably unpopular opinion: I felt lost twice while reading it (I read cp1 because I haven't seen it before lo)
Of course there is some lack of expression and I suppose both Kori and Grand are the protags, like Hyuga and Hikaru.
The full explanation of the parts does feel nice but explaining your entire bey before a battle is not a smart move, especially if you're a top blader. And idk why the top 6 bladers would care to help them unless they had to/were paid to/they know them from before and wanted to repay a favor idk. But to be fair it wasn’t revealed yet I guess.
I suppose the sudden news report is to hide the battle? Like, it happened but we don't know what happened, right?
Also, the amount of sheer exposition is just, wow.
The setting does look great tho, and the whole new blading world thing.
Okay first, I'll work on the lack of expression in the next episodes. wasn't really focused on that but suppose i should be it is important to a story after all, Second, Kori is the Portag and Grand is like a secondary character like Ranzo or similar. as the story progresses this will be more apparent.
third,Hendrix confidence is a little bit extreme so the full part explanation is just pure ego and kind of showing that his technique alone is superior to knowing how his bey works if that makes sense. your right tho it isn't smart, that was the point.
fourth, Later in the series we'll understand why they are helping them, there is a reason behind it.
fifth, The News report was kind of meant to do that in a way, but also to hide Dalomo until later in the series.
sixth, (One short google search later) i'm not sure if thats a good thing but thanks I try.
and finally, thanks I tried to set up a nice setting. .
Exposition is when you expose lore and/or details through anything with the purpose to do so. When the big6 arrived, they started "spitting" lore on us, like how there is 5 types of elements, the full auto explanation of the entire combo (which i get now why happened), The introduction of the fusion ones and how they have all and that there's only three. You know, they revealed a lot of world building in a short amount of time.
Don't get it wrong, exposition can be good, but a large amount of it in a short amount of time can be bad. For instance, the fusion beys knowledge could be hidden from us and the protags until sometime later. We could be introduced to the Earth element alone (he would mention other 4, but wouldn't elaborate)
Also, I’ll PM you in a bit if you don't mind.
RE: Lucha Burst fanfic thread (Beyblade Burst: Ice Storm) - xros - Feb. 08, 2022
(Jul. 30, 2021 11:08 PM)Lucha Burst Wrote: Welcome to beyblade Bursrt: Ice Storm! New beys with "elemental" powers have appeared around the world, with some of the best bladers replicating the system, Young Kori Arashi is the first to make one of these "tornado" beys. with an overlooming darkness(The Ice Storm) devouring the beyblade world, Kori Arashi must get stronger fast! But he quickly learns this is no easy task. Kori will face many challenges, from injury to broken beys, Kori will face it all, will Kori Overtake the Ice King or will the Ice Storm take over beyblade forever?
Main Character: Kori Arashi
System:
Tornado system
Chip - A sparking like chip with 2 teeth on it, holds the layer together and has the motif.
Blade Base - The Blade Base is divided into two parts the "Blade body" which houses the other two teeth of the bey and the main gimmick and blades and such. and the "cover" which holds the weight in
Soul Weight - Similar to a fusion of a db armor and a GT weight, it is sandwiched between the Blade body and cover of the blade base.
Rin Disc - A average disc with 4 nexus like prongs so that the Disc Blades can attatch
Disc Blades - Plastic pieces that attach to Rin Discs via 4 indents akin to S-Gear
Driver - Average driver.
For the Duration of the FanFic you can submit a character/bey at any time, please use detail or else I have no choice but to ignore the entry as i can not play the character/bey right or at all.
What a coincidence! I was just thinking about adding 'Elemental' beys to my fan-fic, guess that's taken.
RE: Lucha Burst fanfic thread (Beyblade Burst: Ice Storm) - Lucha Burst - Feb. 08, 2022
(Feb. 08, 2022 7:24 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: (Feb. 08, 2022 6:54 PM)Lucha Burst Wrote: Okay first, I'll work on the lack of expression in the next episodes. wasn't really focused on that but suppose i should be it is important to a story after all, Second, Kori is the Portag and Grand is like a secondary character like Ranzo or similar. as the story progresses this will be more apparent.
third,Hendrix confidence is a little bit extreme so the full part explanation is just pure ego and kind of showing that his technique alone is superior to knowing how his bey works if that makes sense. your right tho it isn't smart, that was the point.
fourth, Later in the series we'll understand why they are helping them, there is a reason behind it.
fifth, The News report was kind of meant to do that in a way, but also to hide Dalomo until later in the series.
sixth, (One short google search later) i'm not sure if thats a good thing but thanks I try.
and finally, thanks I tried to set up a nice setting. .
Exposition is when you expose lore and/or details through anything with the purpose to do so. When the big6 arrived, they started "spitting" lore on us, like how there is 5 types of elements, the full auto explanation of the entire combo (which i get now why happened), The introduction of the fusion ones and how they have all and that there's only three. You know, they revealed a lot of world building in a short amount of time.
Don't get it wrong, exposition can be good, but a large amount of it in a short amount of time can be bad. For instance, the fusion beys knowledge could be hidden from us and the protags until sometime later. We could be introduced to the Earth element alone (he would mention other 4, but wouldn't elaborate)
Also, I’ll PM you in a bit if you don't mind.
feel free to pm me i dont mind
RE: Lucha Burst fanfic thread (Beyblade Burst: Ice Storm) - Lucha Burst - Feb. 15, 2022
New chapter tonight
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