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RE: Samuel's Revenge!(A Beyblade story)Need a bey MODIFIER like Madoka TODAY!!!vote on poll!!!!!!NOT accepting bladers! - C-Dub - Jan. 17, 2011
Oh yeah he's good.He could match w/ the champ Ethan Nightly !!!!
RE: Samuel's Revenge!(A Beyblade story)Need a bey MODIFIER like Madoka TODAY!!!vote on poll!!!!!!NOT accepting bladers! - Bey_prodigy - Jan. 17, 2011
nice i can't wait for the next chapter
RE: Samuel's Revenge!(A Beyblade story)vote on poll!!!!!!NOT accepting bladers! - Light Yagami - Jan. 17, 2011
when is the next chapter
RE: Samuel's Revenge!(A Beyblade story)vote on poll!!!!!!NOT accepting bladers! - C-Dub - Jan. 17, 2011
after i do my hw! i'm gonna start it RIGHT NOW!!!Goin' dow n home work!
RE: Samuel's Revenge!(A Beyblade story)vote on poll!!!!!!NOT accepting bladers! - C-Dub - Jan. 17, 2011
Chapter 12 Part 1 of 4:Unhappy Reunion!Blackfire Serpenter vs. Cyber Libra!!!*Sam's match*
We all went to our locker rooms.I saw "Block A" and i knew this was mine.I looked at the schedule and my block would be finished first then Block B,C,D in that order.The first rounds were easy as the summer breeze.I got to the finals and so did Sayomi.Just thinking about that IDIOT made me mad!I had to channel my anger and not show my full strength until battle bladers."Hey Sammy get ready to lose!"A voice said.I knew that voice like a PB & J sandwich.It was Sayomi!I turned and looked at Sayomi and his face was still the same.Those merciless grey eyes that stinnkin' black hoodie w/ his bey's logo on it, and worst of all he's my cousin!My dad told me before I left for this journey."Why Sayomi?!?!?WHY did you do this to us!We're cousins!"I asked."Because no one loved me but the streets!I was all alone in the wild streets!I will avenge everyone of my teammates and myself for not becoming stronger!Times have changed Sam. And I will DESTROY YOU!!!" He said with tears of rage.I felt like a jerk and I wanted to destroy him just as much!"FINE COUS!I'LL BEAT YOU AND YOUR TEAMMATES!!!PREPARE YOURSELF FOR A BUTT-WHOOPIN'!!!!"I shouted at him not really meaning but 1/3 of it.After a few minutes of silence we heard something."Wil Sayomi and Samuel please come to the battlefield."said Blader MC.I looked at Sayomi one more time he was madder than the famous Ryuga!Sayomi steeped up and the whole croud booed exept his teammates.When i stepped up however the crowd went NUTS!One teenage girl lked me so much she jumped out of the bleachers to hug me.They called security and asked her to return to her seat.I blushed a little.Then I got serious and got set up for the countdown 3...2..1. LET IT RRRIIIPPP!!!"We all shouted.The two beys launched at each other at increadibly high speeds.I knew it wasn't gonna be crackers and tea!All you could hear is screeching,grinding of the beys, and more screeching."I don't wanna hurt you Sayomi, but it must be done to stop you!"I said.The beys kept hitting each other evenly matched it seemed.i knew my 2 special moves weren't going to help while were strong.All of a sudden both beys started a steady wobble it got worse by the second!I looked at our beys and Serpenter was in a black aura and Libra in a light green one."GET READY SAMUEL!!!SPECIAL MOVE:BLACKFIRE VENOM BLAST!!"He said confidently.Suddenly Serpenter fierciley hit libra.I could tell he was getting weaker."SPECIAL MOVE!
UPERSONIC INFERNO GUNNER!" I shouted.Libra pushed away Serpenter and started firing it's waves.They were REALLY evective and Sayomi knew this.I forgot his special move was still hapining and Serpenter turned into a venom fireball.So my waves had little efeect now!Luckily it broke out of the venom!"DARK MOVE!"Sayomi smirked.My heart sank."BLACKFIRE VACUUM SPIKE SMASH!!"Sayomi shouted.Serpenter stood in the middle of the stadium and created a vacuum like a blackhole!"LIBRAAAA!!!"I shouted.Sayomi's bey splited into a million spikes somehow and suck Libra in and attacked it!"GRRRRRRRRRR!!SPECIAL MOVE!!INFERNO GUARDIAN!!"I screeched.A slimmer of light came out of the darkness...It was Libra,but it was and wasn't his special move!I knew what it was...EVOLUTION!!Libra evolved!Suddenly the whitish-greenich light dissapeared and so did the darkness!Serpenter and Libra were still sanding!"Whoa!"I said in amazement,shock, and scardiness.I saw Libra it had a new fusion wheel,a clear White energy ring,spin track, and performence tip!It was Infinity Libra F100 MPS!I looked at Sayomi and he looked as stunned as ever!I took the opprutunity."NEW SPECIAL MOVE!!!!INFINITE LOCKDOWN ASSAULT!!"I shouted w/ all my beyspirit!Libra vibrated so fast it turned invisible and attacked fiercly and after about 30 seconds of attacking Libra jumped in the sky taking Serpenter with it .I then said."Lockdown."with a smirk on my face and Libra used its new performance tip Metal Pop Spike and slammed the spike inside the inside space of the spintrack to create a dome of light that Serpenter couldn't escape and Libra kept consistantly ramming it.Keep in mind all of that was in mid-air.Then I stopped it and Libra slammed Serpenter to the ground and made a huge exsplosion.After the smoke cleared my LIbra was still spinnin'!It was all over after that!"The winner is Samuel Hasame!Congrats you get 5,000 beypoints Sam!"Blader MC announced."In your face Sayomi!"I said.Libra came in my hand and I kicked Sayomi in the ribs when nobody was looking.I put his bey in his and while he was laying on the gound after the explosion.And with that I walked away with a new bey, a new confidence, some more bey points, and a new path!"Your time is up Sayomi!"I thought as I went into the bleachers near my friends. TO BE CONTINUED!!!!RATE COMMENT AND VOTE!!!
RE: Samuel's Revenge!(A Beyblade story)vote on poll!!!!!!NOT accepting bladers! - Sparx000 - Jan. 17, 2011
realy cool!say, when is my charecter gonna be in it?also you said on one page he was good, but on another you said he was a villan.
keep writing!
RE: Samuel's Revenge!(A Beyblade story)vote on poll!!!!!!NOT accepting bladers! - C-Dub - Jan. 17, 2011
Your character will show up in Part 4! Destrution Centipede vs. Comet Dranzer!Ray Gill!
RE: Samuel's Revenge!(A Beyblade story)vote on poll!!!!!!NOT accepting bladers! - Light Yagami - Jan. 17, 2011
when will my charcter be in it.also i am writing a new chapter so any changes to your bey that you want to post it on my story plz.AND AWESOME CHAPTER
RE: Samuel's Revenge!(A Beyblade story)vote on poll!!!!!!NOT accepting bladers! - C-Dub - Jan. 17, 2011
Oh yea i tricked u!Will=Bad guy!!JP=Good Guy
Darkangel urs is gonna be on the nxt chaptah
RE: Samuel's Revenge!(A Beyblade story)vote on poll!!!!!!NOT accepting bladers! - Light Yagami - Jan. 17, 2011
who me or ray gill
RE: Samuel's Revenge!(A Beyblade story)vote on poll!!!!!!NOT accepting bladers! - C-Dub - Jan. 17, 2011
Kevin will be on the nxt chapter and Ray Gill's character on Part 4!and Ray gill
RE: Samuel's Revenge!(A Beyblade story)vote on poll!!!!!!NOT accepting bladers! - Bey_prodigy - Jan. 18, 2011
yeah bring on the next chapter
RE: Samuel's Revenge!(A Beyblade story)vote on poll!!!!!!NOT accepting bladers! - Sparx000 - Jan. 18, 2011
Thank you!
RE: Samuel's Revenge!(A Beyblade story)vote on poll!!!!!!NOT accepting bladers! - C-Dub - Jan. 19, 2011
K here it is~Chapter 12 Part 2 of 4:Round 2( or Block 2!) Shooting Star Pegasis vs. Rock Aries!*Kevins Match*
"Yes,Sam, you won your match"I said to Sam as he came to take my seat."Yeah now it's time for your Block Kevin!"Samuel said to me."Don't worry Samuel this is gonna be a breeze!!"I said confidently as I went to the locker room.I'm going to face this guy named "Bryce" with his Rock Aries like the cool Hyoma.I saw him in the locker room getting ready.He looked tough alright.Anyway, Nagato fixed up and did maintnence on my bey Shooting Star Pegasis,but we call it Star Pegasis for short. He looked at me with pink colored eyes.Don't get me wrong he still looked tough to beat though.When he looked at me he held up his Aries.Something was different about his Aries though.His Aries had the Black Energy ring not the usual pink one.The Spin track and performence tip were pitch black too.I kept thinking about how tough this guy is.I sweeped through the rounds with ease until the final one.Luckily though we could have a 1-hour break.The first thing I did was rush to Nagato.I asked him to do a maintenence on Pegasis.He did it took exactly 59 minutes too.What a lucky break.I speed walked to the locker room.When I got there I only got like 30 seconds to relax.Then a voice blasted,"OK blade fans get ready for the next battle that will determine the winner of Block B!Kevin with Shooting Star Pegasis vs. Bryce with Rock Aries!"Blader MC announced.I walked up to my spot and tried to shake his hand but he just smirked.We got set up and ready to launch."3.....2....1.... LET I RIP!!"We all shouted."Special Move!!Tri-Launch!"Bryce shouted.He jumped ten feet in the air and ripped it.Instantly there were three Aries's formed in a triangle."Wha-What is this?!?!?"I asked surprisingly."My special move is when i launch!"Bryce said confidently."Whoa what a surpise twist!A special move in the beginning of the match!"Blader MC said.Everything turned black around me.All i heard was "EEEEEEEKKKKKK!!".I looked down and all threen of the Aries's attacked in circles around Pegasis.I knew Pegasis couldn't stand much more."Special Move!!Shooting Star Overdrive!!"I shouted.Pegasis with a spark of power pushed away the bey's like it was saying "Back OFF!!".Finally it turned into 1 Aries."Whew!" i said wiping the sweat off my forehead.I almost forgot about my special move.Pegasis got surrounded in little sparks of black fire whil circiling Aries.Then it shot toward Aries to strike 6 times and on the 6th time it hit the ED145 and sent it FLYING but I knew it didn't do much damage."Game...Set..Match!"I said confidently."Hey Kevin the match isn't over yet!"Bryce said to me.I turned and there was Aries wobbling a little and so was Pegasis."Grrrrrrrr!"I thought angrily."Dark Move!!"Bryce said EXACTLY like Sayomi.I knew I was in trouble."ARIES SPIN DIEMENSIONS!!" Bryce said.Aries's spin track got 5 times it's normal size!It flew to Pegasis and smacked it with it's ginourmous spin track!!Amd everytime it turned a noise grew louder and more anoying and m head felt like it was going to pop!"STOP IT!STOP IT NOOOWWW!!"I shouted at Bryce."Then give up Kevie!"Bryce said in an mocking voice.He crossed the line with that word!"DON'T CALL ME THAT NAAAMMMMEE!!!!"I said angrily.My rage was building rapidly with a Red Aura glowing around me AND Pegasis.Aries glowed with a black aura and so did Bryce.Byce was soaking my negative energy!!!I snapped out of it by slapping myself.A blinding light was all I saw.When it cleared we were both standing.My bey had evolved too!It looked like a new Ring,Track,and Performence Tip!I called it Eclipse Pegasis cw85 SRR2F!I was sooo glad!!The cw stood for creswnt wing and it has 3 wings on the track!"SPECIAL MOVE !!!! ECLIPSE BRINGER!!"I said.Pegasis jumped at the sun and made an eclipse incresing it's spin by 2 and it's power by for because of the tip boost!After that it was JUST like Pegasis Storm Bringer of the famous Ginga!I had another one but I didn't want to show off!*KABOOOOSSSHH!!*When the dust cleared my NEW pegasis was STILL spinnin'!"1 AWESOME match!!Congrats Kevin with 5,000 beypoints!"Blader MC announced.Yeah!I thought.I walked to the stands for a good rest!The score was Time Dynasty=2 Equinox=ZIP!Your time is UP...Bryce!
TO be continued
U know what to do!
RE: Samuel's Revenge!(A Beyblade story)vote on poll!!!!!!NOT accepting bladers! - Light Yagami - Jan. 19, 2011
awesome(yaaaaaaaayyyyyyy kevin woot)
RE: Samuel's Revenge!(A Beyblade story#1)vote on poll!!!!!!NOT accepting bladers! - Bey_prodigy - Jan. 19, 2011
which blader is next to battle
RE: Samuel's Revenge!(A Beyblade story#1)vote on poll!!!!!!NOT accepting bladers! - C-Dub - Jan. 19, 2011
JP and someone then Ethan and a mystery character
RE: Samuel's Revenge!(A Beyblade story#1)vote on poll!!!!!!NOT accepting bladers! - Bey_prodigy - Jan. 19, 2011
Nice can't wait. Make it awesome.
RE: Samuel's Revenge!(A Beyblade story#1)vote on poll!!!!!!NOT accepting bladers! - Sparx000 - Jan. 19, 2011
pure awesomeness!
RE: Samuel's Revenge!(A Beyblade story#1)vote on poll!!!!!!NOT accepting bladers! - Bey_prodigy - Jan. 20, 2011
waiting for the next chapter. Can't wait
RE: Samuel's Revenge!(A Beyblade story#1)vote on poll!!!!!!NOT accepting bladers! - Sparx000 - Jan. 20, 2011
when is the next chapter??!!
RE: Samuel's Revenge!(A Beyblade story#1)vote on poll!!!!!!NOT accepting bladers! - C-Dub - Jan. 22, 2011
Sorry my mom banned me 4 a while!
RE: Samuel's Revenge!(A Beyblade story#1)vote on poll!!!!!!NOT accepting bladers! - Sparta - Jan. 22, 2011
Wow, awesome!! Is my battle coming up soon?
RE: Samuel's Revenge!(A Beyblade story#1)vote on poll!!!!!!NOT accepting bladers! - Bey_prodigy - Jan. 22, 2011
Okay just write it when ever, but plz try to write it soon
RE: Samuel's Revenge!(A Beyblade story#1)vote on poll!!!!!!NOT accepting bladers! - C-Dub - Jan. 23, 2011
Chapter 12 Part 3 of 4!JP with Solar Driger TC145 HF vs. JC with Meteo L-Drago 100 HF!*JP's point of view*
I was so glad that Kevin won!Then i realized that I was next!"Nice Win man!"Said Samuel."Thanks guys!I really appreciate it!Now JP you better win dude."Kevin said.I just nodded."What's wrong?"Asked Jeff curiously."Oh Me?!?!?!?N-Nothing."I said.I felt kinda bad about not telling them yet."Hey Nagato can you do maintanence on my bey Solar Driger C145 HF?"I asked Nagato.He looked like a pretty good bey fixer to me."Sure JP!"Nagato awnsered."Thanks time Buzz LightYear man!"I said ecstaticly.After about ten to fifteen minutes he finished."Ok JP!You're bey Solar Driger is 100%!And by the way your bey's spin track should be called TC145!It looks nothing like Sagittario's C145 AT ALL!!"Nagato said like Albert Einstein."Ok fair enough for m- WHOA Nagato my bey looks BEAST!I OWE you one!"I said."Ok get ready folks the Block C contestants are getting ready to go to the locker room!"Blader MC announced."Bye guys! see you on the battle field!"I said dashing to the locker room."You have to tell them sooner or later JP!Just tell when the battle starts!"I thought.I breezed through the rounds all the way to the Finals just like Kevin and Samuel."Ok beyblade fans get your shields on because this is going to be ONE heated battle!JP verses JC and it's yet another exiting match hopefully."Blader MC announced."And what do ya know it's another Time Dynasty vs. B-Killas match!"Blader MC said.We walked up to the places and got set up to launch.I noticed something odd about his L-Drago.THREE things to be exact.The fusion wheel,the energy ring, and the color was Gold and the wheel was red."Your going down brother!"I said."No, your going down brother!"JC Yelped back."What are you talking abou JP?!?!?!?!?"Jeff asked loudly from the stands.I sighed and put my launcher by my side."Yeah me and JC are BROTHERS everyone!"I announced."His real name is-"I was interrupted."My real name is John Phillips!I changed my name to John Coldstone."He said to finish my sentence."Now that you know I want to battle even more John!"I said turning to him and raising my launcher once more."Now that they know I can't be guilty anymore!"I thought happily."3 2 1!!!LET IT RRRIIIPPP!!!!"We shouted.My bey and his bey crashed into each other like two sumo's locked in combat!We stared each other smack in the eye."Come on Driger you can do more than that!"I said to Driger."Foolish brother you don't think you can beat L-Drago in a head on attack do you!?!?!!?!Go L-Drago!!"He shouted.His bey started to have an purple aura like Ryuga's L-Drago!Suddenly I felt all full of darkness inside I knew it was L-Drago's "Dark Power"."GGGGGRRRR no way!!Not GRR NOW!!"I said with my spirit in my heart.Driger started to attack and L-Drago was being pushed back little by little.Finnaly L-Drago saored in the air.I gimmaced."Don't laugh now brother it still isn't over."He said to me."SPECIAL MMOOVVEEE!!!DRAGON EMPOROR SOARING SLASH STRIKE!!"JC shouted.All of a sudden a huge beam came from L-Drago straight on top of Solar Driger!"NOOOO!!!SPECIAL MOVEE!!!SOLAR ASSAULT RING!!!"I shouted really hard.I then saw Driger's claws trying to come out.I quickly realized what it was signaling me to do."Tilt Driger!!"I said like i was giving it permission.He tilted and let the beam come on his trank but it dissapeared as soon as Driger's T(iger)C(laws)145 touched it!It tilted back regularly and began it's special move.It gathered some energy to boosts spin and in 5 secounds it started zooming around L-Drago making flames!Light green flames on the stadium like in storm bringer.Then it blasted at L-Drago and flung it up about 25 feet in the air and slammed it down to the center of the Earth!"It looks like the winner of this Block is...... JP!!!!!!!Congrats you won 5,000 beypoints."Blader MC announced.I saw JC crying and I had Driger get L-Drago and give it to my bro."Good luck bro."I whispered in his ear helping him up.After that he ran to his team and so did I.Only with a victory!Your time is UP brother!!Time Dynasty=3 Equinox=0!
Ya know what 2 do!