(Apr. 10, 2023  1:52 PM)Bey100 Wrote: Beyblade Elemental Journey  Announcement:

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So I finally have gotten to a place where I feel comfortable doing two fanfics and feel like I can truly deliver on both  but Cyber Crush ain’t going no where so don’t worry. This will be a 26 episode series that will follow our main character. I will say that I have a schedule for how this will work. There will be a Beyblade Burst Cyber Crush episode then a Beyblade Elements episode so hopefully you get the idea.

Plot:

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Drake Kurgum is a 14 year old boy who wants to be the strongest blader ever and he plans to do that by the getting the four legendary Elemental beys. Fire Drago, Water Drago, Wind Drago, and Earth Drago. This begins a new adventure and world of Beyblade!

Characters:

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Drake Kurgum - Fire Drago. Blade. Burn  . Point 1A
Clouse Fritz - Cross Corvus. Clammer. Tip. Point 1S
Ben Beno - Fear Beelzebub. Fly. Danger. Point 2A
More characters will be revealed soon.

Episode Titles:

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1. Elemental Journey Begins!
Plot: Drake after being bullied at his school decides he will find the legendary elemental bey that was own by a legendary Blader many years ago. The Elemental Journey begins for Dark Kurgum!!!
2. The Heat Is On! Achieve Fire Drago!
Drake enters the dangerous temple to achieve his first Elemental Beyblade…. Fire Drago!
3. Clause Enters! Cross Corvus!
Clause after seeing Drake’s new bey Fire Drago Clause is inspired to make his own Elemental bey….. Cross Corvus! A wind stamina type!

System:

Spoiler (Click to View)

This isn’t apart of any Beyblade system or burst. This is a complete new Beyblade system and world (You can even say I made my own gen of Beyblade) so here’s how it works…
There’s 5 parts:
Core:
Basically the motif of the Beyblade which is very MFB designed.
Layer:
The main contact points of the Beyblade but this time very Plastic Gen inspired. The cool thing about the layer is you can do a Helios Hyperion gimmick where you take one half of the layer and do some crazy combinations by combining with te half of another beyblade. Story wise this will lead to cool Elemental combinations battles.
Ring:
This is basically the disk for Beyblade Elemental Journey but renamed.
Driver:
A very similar driver to burst beys even though not compatible (obviously).
Point:
This is kind of like the Quadrive/Ouadsrike idea for tips except better. Basically this is a mini attachment to the Beyblade’s top to change up it’s performance and story wise can combine Elements.
The Beyblades wouldn’t be able to Burst due to the fact I want to keep that unique for Burst System ( Sorry 🙂).
Here’s the new point system:
Stamina - 1 point
Ring Out - 2 points
Pretty simple right?

Character Contest Announcement:

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It will work like this….
Characters Name
Characters Age
Characters Personality 
Characters Backstory 
Characters Beyblade Name
Beyblade Core
Beyblade Layer
Beyblade Ring
Beyblade Driver
Beyblade Point (Naming scheme is similar to sparking chassis)
This contest will be lasting a bit longer so it begins today April 10th and ends May 8th so enter today!

That’s all the news! The series will start after Cyber Crush returns from it’s episode hiatus! 3..2..1..Let It Rip!!!

(Apr. 10, 2023  2:02 PM)DragonBeyblade! Wrote:

(Apr. 10, 2023  1:52 PM)Bey100 Wrote: Beyblade Elemental Journey  Announcement:

Spoiler (Click to View)

So I finally have gotten to a place where I feel comfortable doing two fanfics and feel like I can truly deliver on both  but Cyber Crush ain’t going no where so don’t worry. This will be a 26 episode series that will follow our main character. I will say that I have a schedule for how this will work. There will be a Beyblade Burst Cyber Crush episode then a Beyblade Elements episode so hopefully you get the idea.

Plot:

Spoiler (Click to View)

Drake Kurgum is a 14 year old boy who wants to be the strongest blader ever and he plans to do that by the getting the four legendary Elemental beys. Fire Drago, Water Drago, Wind Drago, and Earth Drago. This begins a new adventure and world of Beyblade!

Characters:

Spoiler (Click to View)

Drake Kurgum - Fire Drago. Blade. Burn  . Point 1A
Clouse Fritz - Cross Corvus. Clammer. Tip. Point 1S
Ben Beno - Fear Beelzebub. Fly. Danger. Point 2A
More characters will be revealed soon.

Episode Titles:

Spoiler (Click to View)

1. Elemental Journey Begins!
Plot: Drake after being bullied at his school decides he will find the legendary elemental bey that was own by a legendary Blader many years ago. The Elemental Journey begins for Dark Kurgum!!!
2. The Heat Is On! Achieve Fire Drago!
Drake enters the dangerous temple to achieve his first Elemental Beyblade…. Fire Drago!
3. Clause Enters! Cross Corvus!
Clause after seeing Drake’s new bey Fire Drago Clause is inspired to make his own Elemental bey….. Cross Corvus! A wind stamina type!

System:

Spoiler (Click to View)

This isn’t apart of any Beyblade system or burst. This is a complete new Beyblade system and world (You can even say I made my own gen of Beyblade) so here’s how it works…
There’s 5 parts:
Core:
Basically the motif of the Beyblade which is very MFB designed.
Layer:
The main contact points of the Beyblade but this time very Plastic Gen inspired. The cool thing about the layer is you can do a Helios Hyperion gimmick where you take one half of the layer and do some crazy combinations by combining with te half of another beyblade. Story wise this will lead to cool Elemental combinations battles.
Ring:
This is basically the disk for Beyblade Elemental Journey but renamed.
Driver:
A very similar driver to burst beys even though not compatible (obviously).
Point:
This is kind of like the Quadrive/Ouadsrike idea for tips except better. Basically this is a mini attachment to the Beyblade’s top to change up it’s performance and story wise can combine Elements.
The Beyblades wouldn’t be able to Burst due to the fact I want to keep that unique for Burst System ( Sorry 🙂).
Here’s the new point system:
Stamina - 1 point
Ring Out - 2 points
Pretty simple right?

Character Contest Announcement:

Spoiler (Click to View)

It will work like this….
Characters Name
Characters Age
Characters Personality 
Characters Backstory 
Characters Beyblade Name
Beyblade Core
Beyblade Layer
Beyblade Ring
Beyblade Driver
Beyblade Point (Naming scheme is similar to sparking chassis)
This contest will be lasting a bit longer so it begins today April 10th and ends May 8th so enter today!

That’s all the news! The series will start after Cyber Crush returns from it’s episode hiatus! 3..2..1..Let It Rip!!!

Ok seems pretty cool

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Wow you liked it in less than 1 minute that i sent.

(Apr. 10, 2023  2:05 PM)Bey100 Wrote:

(Apr. 10, 2023  2:02 PM)DragonBeyblade! Wrote: Ok seems pretty cool

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Wow you liked it in less than 1 minute that i sent.

Think of this series being my own type of Gen 4 overall it’s pretty cool.

(Apr. 10, 2023  2:07 PM)DragonBeyblade! Wrote:

(Apr. 10, 2023  2:05 PM)Bey100 Wrote: Think of this series being my own type of Gen 4 overall it’s pretty cool.

Yeah when will you think of starting the series? May?

(Apr. 10, 2023  2:11 PM)Bey100 Wrote:

(Apr. 10, 2023  2:07 PM)DragonBeyblade! Wrote: Yeah when will you think of starting the series? May?

I would say the earliest is probably mid- May since I want to get episode 22 of Cyber Crush out first before starting this series so yeah May pretty much.
The goal is to finish this series (Might have a second season) by the end of the summer (since it’s only 26 episodes) and get through most of Cyber Crush so around the fall time Cyber Crush will end and I can begin rather Cyber Crush season 2 or I may take a break till next year to do a new Beyblade fanfic. We’ll just have to wait and see.

(Apr. 10, 2023  2:13 PM)DragonBeyblade! Wrote:

(Apr. 10, 2023  2:11 PM)Bey100 Wrote: I would say the earliest is probably mid- May since I want to get episode 22 of Cyber Crush out first before starting this series so yeah May pretty much.
The goal is to finish this series (Might have a second season) by the end of the summer (since it’s only 26 episodes) and get through most of Cyber Crush so around the fall time Cyber Crush will end and I can begin rather Cyber Crush season 2 or I may take a break till next year to do a new Beyblade fanfic. We’ll just have to wait and see.

Ohh ok sure

(Apr. 10, 2023  2:15 PM)Bey100 Wrote:

(Apr. 10, 2023  2:13 PM)DragonBeyblade! Wrote: Ohh ok sure

You can join the character contest for Elemental Journey if you want.

(Apr. 10, 2023  2:22 PM)DragonBeyblade! Wrote:

(Apr. 10, 2023  2:15 PM)Bey100 Wrote: You can join the character contest for Elemental Journey if you want.

Alright uh is there any like format I should use to post my character

(Apr. 10, 2023  4:42 PM)Bey100 Wrote: Beyblade Elemental Journey Products Listings (1):

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April
BE 01- Fire Drago Starter
BE 02- Cross Corvus Starter
BE 03-  Fear Beelzebub Starter
BE 04- Elemental Battle Set
BE 05- Elemental Tracker
BE 06- Elemental Launcher Right
BE 07- Elemental Launcher Left
BE 08- Elemental Decker Set
May
BE 09- Water Drago Booster
June
BE 10- Neutral Niddhog Booster

More listings coming soon!

(Apr. 10, 2023  6:03 PM)DragonBeyblade! Wrote:

(Apr. 10, 2023  4:42 PM)Bey100 Wrote: Beyblade Elemental Journey Products Listings (1):

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April
BE 01- Fire Drago Starter
BE 02- Cross Corvus Starter
BE 03-  Fear Beelzebub Starter
BE 04- Elemental Battle Set
BE 05- Elemental Tracker
BE 06- Elemental Launcher Right
BE 07- Elemental Launcher Left
BE 08- Elemental Decker Set
May
BE 09- Water Drago Booster
June
BE 10- Neutral Niddhog Booster

More listings coming soon!

Looks like water drago coming earlier then expected…

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Maybe once elemental or cyber finishes you can like hire someone to make manga chapter and thinking longterm, if this fanfic blows up then release them as books and start making beys related to this or hire someone. That'd be pretty cool.

(Apr. 10, 2023  8:34 PM)Bey100 Wrote: Beyblade Elemental Journey Products Listings (2):

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July
BE- 11 Wind Drago Booster
August
BE- 12 Earth Drago Booster
September
BE- 13 Perfect Pangolin Starter
October
BE- 14 Combination Drago Starter
November
BE- 15 RBV 1 (Filler)

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(Apr. 10, 2023  6:03 PM)DragonBeyblade! Wrote: Looks like water drago coming earlier then expected…

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Maybe once elemental or cyber finishes you can like hire someone to make manga chapter and thinking longterm, if this fanfic blows up then release them as books and start making beys related to this or hire someone. That'd be pretty cool.

It would be pretty cool but this is  more just for fun and plus with all the copywright stuff with TT it would be pretty hard to do that nonetheless cool idea.

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Considering I am not going to school today I have a surprise....
Beyblade Elemental Journey Episode 1:
The Elemental Journey Begins!

Spoiler (Click to View)

There's a shot of a boy on the floor crying

Then there's a shot of a big dude laughing

???: What's wrong?

Kids around the boy laugh

???: What's wrong with you Buck!?

Buck: Oh nothing just that you're an absolute loser. Drake Kurgum! Your the weakest blader in the school!

Drake stands up and punches Buck

Kids get their phones out while teachers come and break up the fight

A few hours later...

Drake enters his home and when he walks in he sees his father

Drake's Dad: Drake is it true you got in a fight today?

Drake: Uh.....

Drake's Dad: Drake how many times have I told you to not get into fights!?

Drake: But dad Buck pushed me to the ground and called me a weak blader! What did you expect me to do!?

Drake's Dad shakes his head

Drake's Dad then sighs

Drake's Dad: Look I get where you're coming from you want to be the best blader ever but not all dreams come true....

Drake looks down

Drake: I understand.

Drake's Dad smiles

Drake's Dad: Thank you. Now go take a shower.

Drake: I will....

The next day....

There's a shot of Drake and his friend Clause sitting in his room playing video games from Drake's computer

Drake looks sad

Clause: Are you okay Drake?

Drake: No... my dad just doesn't understand how much I love blading! It's my goal to become the strongest blader ever! But how can I do that when kids at school bully me!?

Clause: Man, don't listen to them! You will become the strongest blader in the world just be patient.

Drake: I guess.

Clause then smiles suspiciously

Drake eyes widen

Drake: Oh no... what do you have planned?

Clause then quickly types on Drake's computer

Drake: Hey!

Clause then shows Drake a screen from the site Bey Facts

Drake: Really?

Clause: Legends says that many years ago there was a legendary blader who created a legendary Beyblade called Drago!

Drake: Hmmm....

Clause: They say there was four elements of Drago.... Fire, water, wind, and earth!

Drake: Aw great this is Avatar all over again!

Clause: It is in a hidden temple not to far from hear! Maybe we should steal the beys!

Drake: My lord and savior who am I friends with? Are you insane we can't steal!

Clause: Technically we can after all.... you would have a super powerful bey....

Drake: ….

Clause: Common any kid would do it!

Drake: I hate peer pressure.... fine!

Clause: Yes!

We then cut to night time where Drake and Clause are standing in front of a big pyramid looking temple

Drake: It's real?

Clause nods

Drake and Clause walk into the temple

Drake: How in all my years of living in this city have I never recognized this?

Inside the temple are beautiful  statues

Clause: Woah....

Then Drake and Clause see a mini slide that goes down into the dark

Clause: Um... will this be safe?

Drake: Only one way to find out...

Drake goes down the slide and Clause quickly follows

Drake and Clause both go speeding down the slide

Drake: Ahhh!

Both Drake and Clause get to the bottom of the slide then Clause throws up

Drake: Bro what the heck!?

Drake then turns his head to see four statues representing the four elements and four Beyblades underneath them

Clause: Hurry and get the beys!

Drake rushes to each statue and gets all the four beys

Drake: Got' em!

Clause: Yay....

Drake: Kind of surprised there wasn't better security...

Then out of nowhere a big rocky Beyblade spins to Drake and Clause

Drake jaw drops

Clause: I suggest less talking and more running.

Then we cut to Drake and Clause running quickly to the outside

Drake: Hurry!

Drake and Clause then get outside safely and the entrance to the temple closes

Drake and Clause pant a lot

Clause: Is it crazy we almost died by just trying to get Beyblade's?

Drake: What do you think?

Drake holds all the four Drago beys

Drake: Fire, water, wind, and earth.... pretty cool.

All the Dragos glow

Clause: What do you say for me getting you the elemental beys?

Clause smiles

Drake gives Clause a Pikachu face

Drake: I say this.

Drake smacks Clause

We cut to Drake entering his house

There's a shot of Drake's Dad looking angry

Drake's Dad: Where have you been! I was so worried!

Drake: Hey dad! Don't worry I just went to the bey workshop!

Drake's Dad: Really?....

Drake: Yes....

Drake's Dad makes a serious face

Drake starts to sweat as he smiles sheepishly

Drake's Dad: Okay.

Drake's Dad walks off

Drake: Whew.

Drake wipes his sweat off his head

The next day...

Clause and Drake look at the Drago bey's

Clause: Don't look like there apart of the burst system.

Drake: Yeah kind of reminds of those older Plastic and Metal gen beys.

Clause: Well Plastic beys died off after everyone jumped on the Metal beys, but then the Metal beys were banned for being to dangerous, so the used Burst beys and we've been sticking with that ever since.

Drake: So what's up with these Elemental beys?

Clause: From my research these Elemental beys were created by the legendary blader who doesn't have a name... the legendary blader wanted to pitch these beys to the WBBA but I guess the WBBA didn't trust it or didn't think the beys were fun enough because they went with the burst system instead.

Drake: Well these definitely don't burst.

Clause: Yup.

Drake: How about the system?

Clause: The system contains 5 parts.... the core, layer, ring, driver, and point.

Drake: Give me more detail.

Clause: The core is basically the motif of the bey. The layer is the main contact points of the bey, it basically has the Helios and Hyperion gimmick of the layer splitting to connect with other beys. 

Drake: What's up with the ring?

Clause: The ring is like the disk of the bey. The driver normal but the point is like a driver attachment. Overall pretty cool system.

Drake: Seemed like the WBBA took some parts of this system and implemented it into burst.

Clause: Seems so.

Drake: How about the points? Like you know KO, ring outs...?

Clause: I think a stamina finish is 1 and a knock out is 2 points.

Drake: Not bad. 

Drake looks down

Drake: Feel bad for this legendary blader guy... he wanted to bring a new era into Beyblade.

Clause: WBBA has their reason for things and times change. Tyson retired from blading after the  Plastic era ended. Ginga got into the helicopter crash after Metal beys were banned. Even rumor says it Burst is on it's way out and people are looking to the future with Beyblade X or whatever it's called. Does changes suck? Sometimes yeah! But does it mean it's the end of the world? Absolutely not!

Drake: I guess your right...

Clause smiles

Clause: How 'bout we try these bey's out?

Drake smiles

Drake picks up Fire Drago

Drake: Let's start with this one.

Fire Drago then begins to glow

Drake: My Elemental Journey begins!
To be continued...
Next Episode: Achieve The Heat! Fire Drago!
3..2..1..let It Rip!

Hope you enjoyed the first episode! Give me your thoughts on it!
This will also be the last episode for my fanfics for a while so don't expect any new fanfic episode until at earliest early May.

(Apr. 11, 2023  3:11 PM)Hollowmind13 Wrote:

(Apr. 10, 2023  8:34 PM)Bey100 Wrote: Beyblade Elemental Journey Products Listings (2):

Spoiler (Click to View)

July
BE- 11 Wind Drago Booster
August
BE- 12 Earth Drago Booster
September
BE- 13 Perfect Pangolin Starter
October
BE- 14 Combination Drago Starter
November
BE- 15 RBV 1 (Filler)

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It would be pretty cool but this is  more just for fun and plus with all the copywright stuff with TT it would be pretty hard to do that nonetheless cool idea.

---

Considering I am not going to school today I have a surprise....
Beyblade Elemental Journey Episode 1:
The Elemental Journey Begins!

Spoiler (Click to View)

There's a shot of a boy on the floor crying

Then there's a shot of a big dude laughing

???: What's wrong?

Kids around the boy laugh

???: What's wrong with you Buck!?

Buck: Oh nothing just that you're an absolute loser. Drake Kurgum! Your the weakest blader in the school!

Drake stands up and punches Buck

Kids get their phones out while teachers come and break up the fight

A few hours later...

Drake enters his home and when he walks in he sees his father

Drake's Dad: Drake is it true you got in a fight today?

Drake: Uh.....

Drake's Dad: Drake how many times have I told you to not get into fights!?

Drake: But dad Buck pushed me to the ground and called me a weak blader! What did you expect me to do!?

Drake's Dad shakes his head

Drake's Dad then sighs

Drake's Dad: Look I get where you're coming from you want to be the best blader ever but not all dreams come true....

Drake looks down

Drake: I understand.

Drake's Dad smiles

Drake's Dad: Thank you. Now go take a shower.

Drake: I will....

The next day....

There's a shot of Drake and his friend Clause sitting in his room playing video games from Drake's computer

Drake looks sad

Clause: Are you okay Drake?

Drake: No... my dad just doesn't understand how much I love blading! It's my goal to become the strongest blader ever! But how can I do that when kids at school bully me!?

Clause: Man, don't listen to them! You will become the strongest blader in the world just be patient.

Drake: I guess.

Clause then smiles suspiciously

Drake eyes widen

Drake: Oh no... what do you have planned?

Clause then quickly types on Drake's computer

Drake: Hey!

Clause then shows Drake a screen from the site Bey Facts

Drake: Really?

Clause: Legends says that many years ago there was a legendary blader who created a legendary Beyblade called Drago!

Drake: Hmmm....

Clause: They say there was four elements of Drago.... Fire, water, wind, and earth!

Drake: Aw great this is Avatar all over again!

Clause: It is in a hidden temple not to far from hear! Maybe we should steal the beys!

Drake: My lord and savior who am I friends with? Are you insane we can't steal!

Clause: Technically we can after all.... you would have a super powerful bey....

Drake: ….

Clause: Common any kid would do it!

Drake: I hate peer pressure.... fine!

Clause: Yes!

We then cut to night time where Drake and Clause are standing in front of a big pyramid looking temple

Drake: It's real?

Clause nods

Drake and Clause walk into the temple

Drake: How in all my years of living in this city have I never recognized this?

Inside the temple are beautiful  statues

Clause: Woah....

Then Drake and Clause see a mini slide that goes down into the dark

Clause: Um... will this be safe?

Drake: Only one way to find out...

Drake goes down the slide and Clause quickly follows

Drake and Clause both go speeding down the slide

Drake: Ahhh!

Both Drake and Clause get to the bottom of the slide then Clause throws up

Drake: Bro what the heck!?

Drake then turns his head to see four statues representing the four elements and four Beyblades underneath them

Clause: Hurry and get the beys!

Drake rushes to each statue and gets all the four beys

Drake: Got' em!

Clause: Yay....

Drake: Kind of surprised there wasn't better security...

Then out of nowhere a big rocky Beyblade spins to Drake and Clause

Drake jaw drops

Clause: I suggest less talking and more running.

Then we cut to Drake and Clause running quickly to the outside

Drake: Hurry!

Drake and Clause then get outside safely and the entrance to the temple closes

Drake and Clause pant a lot

Clause: Is it crazy we almost died by just trying to get Beyblade's?

Drake: What do you think?

Drake holds all the four Drago beys

Drake: Fire, water, wind, and earth.... pretty cool.

All the Dragos glow

Clause: What do you say for me getting you the elemental beys?

Clause smiles

Drake gives Clause a Pikachu face

Drake: I say this.

Drake smacks Clause

We cut to Drake entering his house

There's a shot of Drake's Dad looking angry

Drake's Dad: Where have you been! I was so worried!

Drake: Hey dad! Don't worry I just went to the bey workshop!

Drake's Dad: Really?....

Drake: Yes....

Drake's Dad makes a serious face

Drake starts to sweat as he smiles sheepishly

Drake's Dad: Okay.

Drake's Dad walks off

Drake: Whew.

Drake wipes his sweat off his head

The next day...

Clause and Drake look at the Drago bey's

Clause: Don't look like there apart of the burst system.

Drake: Yeah kind of reminds of those older Plastic and Metal gen beys.

Clause: Well Plastic beys died off after everyone jumped on the Metal beys, but then the Metal beys were banned for being to dangerous, so the used Burst beys and we've been sticking with that ever since.

Drake: So what's up with these Elemental beys?

Clause: From my research these Elemental beys were created by the legendary blader who doesn't have a name... the legendary blader wanted to pitch these beys to the WBBA but I guess the WBBA didn't trust it or didn't think the beys were fun enough because they went with the burst system instead.

Drake: Well these definitely don't burst.

Clause: Yup.

Drake: How about the system?

Clause: The system contains 5 parts.... the core, layer, ring, driver, and point.

Drake: Give me more detail.

Clause: The core is basically the motif of the bey. The layer is the main contact points of the bey, it basically has the Helios and Hyperion gimmick of the layer splitting to connect with other beys. 

Drake: What's up with the ring?

Clause: The ring is like the disk of the bey. The driver normal but the point is like a driver attachment. Overall pretty cool system.

Drake: Seemed like the WBBA took some parts of this system and implemented it into burst.

Clause: Seems so.

Drake: How about the points? Like you know KO, ring outs...?

Clause: I think a stamina finish is 1 and a knock out is 2 points.

Drake: Not bad. 

Drake looks down

Drake: Feel bad for this legendary blader guy... he wanted to bring a new era into Beyblade.

Clause: WBBA has their reason for things and times change. Tyson retired from blading after the  Plastic era ended. Ginga got into the helicopter crash after Metal beys were banned. Even rumor says it Burst is on it's way out and people are looking to the future with Beyblade X or whatever it's called. Does changes suck? Sometimes yeah! But does it mean it's the end of the world? Absolutely not!

Drake: I guess your right...

Clause smiles

Clause: How 'bout we try these bey's out?

Drake smiles

Drake picks up Fire Drago

Drake: Let's start with this one.

Fire Drago then begins to glow

Drake: My Elemental Journey begins!
To be continued...
Next Episode: Achieve The Heat! Fire Drago!
3..2..1..let It Rip!

Hope you enjoyed the first episode! Give me your thoughts on it!
This will also be the last episode for my fanfics for a while so don't expect any new fanfic episode until at earliest early May.

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The writing sounds a bit off.
The temple thing is weird. The way it is just there and they are the first ones to go there and Clause just knows there is a hidden temple... It doesn't add up.
This fic seems to center around more fantasy/action movie-ish stuff, which is fine.
The characters seem interesting, and the interactions between Drake and Clause look promising. I bet Buck will be either the antagonist or a rival that will become friends with Drake.

(Apr. 10, 2023  8:34 PM)Bey100 Wrote: Beyblade Elemental Journey Products Listings (2):

Spoiler (Click to View)

July
BE- 11 Wind Drago Booster
August
BE- 12 Earth Drago Booster
September
BE- 13 Perfect Pangolin Starter
October
BE- 14 Combination Drago Starter
November
BE- 15 RBV 1 (Filler)

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(Apr. 10, 2023  6:03 PM)DragonBeyblade! Wrote: Looks like water drago coming earlier then expected…

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Maybe once elemental or cyber finishes you can like hire someone to make manga chapter and thinking longterm, if this fanfic blows up then release them as books and start making beys related to this or hire someone. That'd be pretty cool.

It would be pretty cool but this is  more just for fun and plus with all the copywright stuff with TT it would be pretty hard to do that nonetheless cool idea.

---

Considering I am not going to school today I have a surprise....
Beyblade Elemental Journey Episode 1:
The Elemental Journey Begins!

Spoiler (Click to View)

There's a shot of a boy on the floor crying

Then there's a shot of a big dude laughing

???: What's wrong?

Kids around the boy laugh

???: What's wrong with you Buck!?

Buck: Oh nothing just that you're an absolute loser. Drake Kurgum! Your the weakest blader in the school!

Drake stands up and punches Buck

Kids get their phones out while teachers come and break up the fight

A few hours later...

Drake enters his home and when he walks in he sees his father

Drake's Dad: Drake is it true you got in a fight today?

Drake: Uh.....

Drake's Dad: Drake how many times have I told you to not get into fights!?

Drake: But dad Buck pushed me to the ground and called me a weak blader! What did you expect me to do!?

Drake's Dad shakes his head

Drake's Dad then sighs

Drake's Dad: Look I get where you're coming from you want to be the best blader ever but not all dreams come true....

Drake looks down

Drake: I understand.

Drake's Dad smiles

Drake's Dad: Thank you. Now go take a shower.

Drake: I will....

The next day....

There's a shot of Drake and his friend Clause sitting in his room playing video games from Drake's computer

Drake looks sad

Clause: Are you okay Drake?

Drake: No... my dad just doesn't understand how much I love blading! It's my goal to become the strongest blader ever! But how can I do that when kids at school bully me!?

Clause: Man, don't listen to them! You will become the strongest blader in the world just be patient.

Drake: I guess.

Clause then smiles suspiciously

Drake eyes widen

Drake: Oh no... what do you have planned?

Clause then quickly types on Drake's computer

Drake: Hey!

Clause then shows Drake a screen from the site Bey Facts

Drake: Really?

Clause: Legends says that many years ago there was a legendary blader who created a legendary Beyblade called Drago!

Drake: Hmmm....

Clause: They say there was four elements of Drago.... Fire, water, wind, and earth!

Drake: Aw great this is Avatar all over again!

Clause: It is in a hidden temple not to far from hear! Maybe we should steal the beys!

Drake: My lord and savior who am I friends with? Are you insane we can't steal!

Clause: Technically we can after all.... you would have a super powerful bey....

Drake: ….

Clause: Common any kid would do it!

Drake: I hate peer pressure.... fine!

Clause: Yes!

We then cut to night time where Drake and Clause are standing in front of a big pyramid looking temple

Drake: It's real?

Clause nods

Drake and Clause walk into the temple

Drake: How in all my years of living in this city have I never recognized this?

Inside the temple are beautiful  statues

Clause: Woah....

Then Drake and Clause see a mini slide that goes down into the dark

Clause: Um... will this be safe?

Drake: Only one way to find out...

Drake goes down the slide and Clause quickly follows

Drake and Clause both go speeding down the slide

Drake: Ahhh!

Both Drake and Clause get to the bottom of the slide then Clause throws up

Drake: Bro what the heck!?

Drake then turns his head to see four statues representing the four elements and four Beyblades underneath them

Clause: Hurry and get the beys!

Drake rushes to each statue and gets all the four beys

Drake: Got' em!

Clause: Yay....

Drake: Kind of surprised there wasn't better security...

Then out of nowhere a big rocky Beyblade spins to Drake and Clause

Drake jaw drops

Clause: I suggest less talking and more running.

Then we cut to Drake and Clause running quickly to the outside

Drake: Hurry!

Drake and Clause then get outside safely and the entrance to the temple closes

Drake and Clause pant a lot

Clause: Is it crazy we almost died by just trying to get Beyblade's?

Drake: What do you think?

Drake holds all the four Drago beys

Drake: Fire, water, wind, and earth.... pretty cool.

All the Dragos glow

Clause: What do you say for me getting you the elemental beys?

Clause smiles

Drake gives Clause a Pikachu face

Drake: I say this.

Drake smacks Clause

We cut to Drake entering his house

There's a shot of Drake's Dad looking angry

Drake's Dad: Where have you been! I was so worried!

Drake: Hey dad! Don't worry I just went to the bey workshop!

Drake's Dad: Really?....

Drake: Yes....

Drake's Dad makes a serious face

Drake starts to sweat as he smiles sheepishly

Drake's Dad: Okay.

Drake's Dad walks off

Drake: Whew.

Drake wipes his sweat off his head

The next day...

Clause and Drake look at the Drago bey's

Clause: Don't look like there apart of the burst system.

Drake: Yeah kind of reminds of those older Plastic and Metal gen beys.

Clause: Well Plastic beys died off after everyone jumped on the Metal beys, but then the Metal beys were banned for being to dangerous, so the used Burst beys and we've been sticking with that ever since.

Drake: So what's up with these Elemental beys?

Clause: From my research these Elemental beys were created by the legendary blader who doesn't have a name... the legendary blader wanted to pitch these beys to the WBBA but I guess the WBBA didn't trust it or didn't think the beys were fun enough because they went with the burst system instead.

Drake: Well these definitely don't burst.

Clause: Yup.

Drake: How about the system?

Clause: The system contains 5 parts.... the core, layer, ring, driver, and point.

Drake: Give me more detail.

Clause: The core is basically the motif of the bey. The layer is the main contact points of the bey, it basically has the Helios and Hyperion gimmick of the layer splitting to connect with other beys. 

Drake: What's up with the ring?

Clause: The ring is like the disk of the bey. The driver normal but the point is like a driver attachment. Overall pretty cool system.

Drake: Seemed like the WBBA took some parts of this system and implemented it into burst.

Clause: Seems so.

Drake: How about the points? Like you know KO, ring outs...?

Clause: I think a stamina finish is 1 and a knock out is 2 points.

Drake: Not bad. 

Drake looks down

Drake: Feel bad for this legendary blader guy... he wanted to bring a new era into Beyblade.

Clause: WBBA has their reason for things and times change. Tyson retired from blading after the  Plastic era ended. Ginga got into the helicopter crash after Metal beys were banned. Even rumor says it Burst is on it's way out and people are looking to the future with Beyblade X or whatever it's called. Does changes suck? Sometimes yeah! But does it mean it's the end of the world? Absolutely not!

Drake: I guess your right...

Clause smiles

Clause: How 'bout we try these bey's out?

Drake smiles

Drake picks up Fire Drago

Drake: Let's start with this one.

Fire Drago then begins to glow

Drake: My Elemental Journey begins!
To be continued...
Next Episode: Achieve The Heat! Fire Drago!
3..2..1..let It Rip!

Hope you enjoyed the first episode! Give me your thoughts on it!
This will also be the last episode for my fanfics for a while so don't expect any new fanfic episode until at earliest early May.

(Apr. 10, 2023  3:36 PM)DragonBeyblade! Wrote: I don’t know if being the cousin of Shu ruins this but here goes:

Spoiler (Click to View)

Name: Yuki Kurenai

Age: 19

Personality: Try’s to act calm and collected but when he is revealed to his favourite sport (Beyblade) he is the opposite of his cousin Shu.

Backstory: Used to battle with Shu (he is friends with valt too, Shu introduced him) in Japan when he was little but then his parents moved house to London and separated him with Shu. Nonetheless he continued his passion for Beyblade but was bullied in his new school for liking it. He eventually stopped playing Beyblade. After hearing of Shu’s success in Beyblading and hearing of a new system he decided to make his own bey.

Beyblade name: Ice Spriggan

Core: Spriggan

Layer: Counter

Ring: Ice (crystallised kinda look)

Driver: Swerve

Point: 4F

Probably not supposed to add this but whatever:
Basically his catchphrase is ‘Freeze’ because when a Beyblade attacks him the swerve driver swerved around it REALLY fast not letting it move in any particular direction as it gets slower and slower and he yells “Freeze”. One of the very few ways to get out of this is by sheer force, so maybe a character can channel his strength and break out. So it basically looks like the bey is mysteriously getting blocked as it’s trying to move, draining its stamina. Since a stamina finish is 1 point you can make some exciting drama/comebacks as it’s not over yet for your story.

I hope I win because I put a lot of time and effort into this.

(Apr. 12, 2023  11:54 AM)DragonBeyblade! Wrote:

(Apr. 10, 2023  3:36 PM)DragonBeyblade! Wrote: I don’t know if being the cousin of Shu ruins this but here goes:

Spoiler (Click to View)

Name: Yuki Kurenai

Age: 19

Personality: Try’s to act calm and collected but when he is revealed to his favourite sport (Beyblade) he is the opposite of his cousin Shu.

Backstory: Used to battle with Shu (he is friends with valt too, Shu introduced him) in Japan when he was little but then his parents moved house to London and separated him with Shu. Nonetheless he continued his passion for Beyblade but was bullied in his new school for liking it. He eventually stopped playing Beyblade. After hearing of Shu’s success in Beyblading and hearing of a new system he decided to make his own bey.

Beyblade name: Ice Spriggan

Core: Spriggan

Layer: Counter

Ring: Ice (crystallised kinda look)

Driver: Swerve

Point: 4F

Probably not supposed to add this but whatever:
Basically his catchphrase is ‘Freeze’ because when a Beyblade attacks him the swerve driver swerved around it REALLY fast not letting it move in any particular direction as it gets slower and slower and he yells “Freeze”. One of the very few ways to get out of this is by sheer force, so maybe a character can channel his strength and break out. So it basically looks like the bey is mysteriously getting blocked as it’s trying to move, draining its stamina. Since a stamina finish is 1 point you can make some exciting drama/comebacks as it’s not over yet for your story.

I hope I win because I put a lot of time and effort into this.

...I just realised that its in a new world so shu wouldn't be in here. Oh well, it can be like a alternative universe shu I guess????

(Apr. 12, 2023  1:34 PM)Bey100 Wrote:

(Apr. 12, 2023  11:54 AM)DragonBeyblade! Wrote: ...I just realised that its in a new world so shu wouldn't be in here. Oh well, it can be like a alternative universe shu I guess????

Actually it is in the same world as plastic,metal, and burst are all canon in this universe take place all in this universe.