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RE: A story im working on - Sparta - Jul. 20, 2011
PLZ! PLZ BROH I WAN MAKE A CHAR RECUEST AND RIGHT YAH STRY 4 U!
Enough kidding. On to the meat:
1. A lot of dialogue. Descriptions, transitions! Where they at?!
2. This story moves way too fast. Slow. It. Down. And. Take. Your. Time...
RE: A story im working on - Fang - Jul. 20, 2011
O.o Okay uh Sparta is it okay to be confused? How are you gonna right my story and 2. uh character request and 3. Uh i think its pretty details (other then the fact idc how my work ends up sometimes O.o lol)