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RE: Poison Serpent SW145SD Article Rough Draft [WAITING TO BE APPROVED!!] - HorogiumX - Mar. 07, 2011
(Mar. 07, 2011 4:15 AM)Bey-Heart Wrote:Oops, I reworded it and I must of accidentally put eighteen instead of fifteen.(Mar. 06, 2011 11:30 PM)L-Drago rules Wrote: I edited a few things.Where did you get "Eighteen Spikes" from? The Poison Metal Wheel only has fifteen spikes. Are you blind?
RE: Poison Serpent SW145SD Article Rough Draft [WAITING TO BE APPROVED!!] - Wizard - Mar. 08, 2011
Bump again...
Ok. Now I think it's ready to be published...
RE: Poison Serpent SW145SD Article Rough Draft [WAITING TO BE APPROVED!!] - HorogiumX - Mar. 08, 2011
In the SW145 part clockwise is not hyphenated.
RE: Poison Serpent SW145SD Article Rough Draft [WAITING TO BE APPROVED!!] - Wizard - Mar. 08, 2011
Bump
RE: Poison Serpent SW145SD Article Rough Draft [WAITING TO BE APPROVED!!] - HorogiumX - Mar. 08, 2011
Counterclockwise is one word.
RE: Poison Serpent SW145SD Article Rough Draft [WAITING TO BE APPROVED!!] - Mr. N - Mar. 08, 2011
I think that instead of Burn Bull 145SD, you should put Burn Bull AD145SD.
RE: Poison Serpent SW145SD Article Rough Draft [WAITING TO BE APPROVED!!] - Wizard - Mar. 08, 2011
Bump
Fixed.
RE: Poison Serpent SW145SD Article Rough Draft [WAITING TO BE APPROVED!!] - Ga' - Mar. 10, 2011
Couldn't it be Burn mold 1-2/Earth mold 1?
RE: Poison Serpent SW145SD Article Rough Draft [WAITING TO BE APPROVED!!] - abhicherath - Mar. 11, 2011
this should go up...definitely ad ga i dunno 'bout that maybe i s'pose
RE: Poison Serpent SW145SD Article Rough Draft [WAITING TO BE APPROVED!!] - Wizard - Mar. 11, 2011
Bump
I changed it to DF145 instead of AD145. Since DF145 is on the top-tiers list.
RE: Poison Serpent SW145SD Article Rough Draft [WAITING TO BE APPROVED!!] - Ga' - Mar. 12, 2011
The outdated top-tiers list, you mean?
RE: Poison Serpent SW145SD Article Rough Draft [WAITING TO BE APPROVED!!] - Wizard - Mar. 12, 2011
(Mar. 12, 2011 2:45 PM)GaHooleone Wrote: The outdated top-tiers list, you mean?Yeah... I haven't looked at the testing for AD145, did it outclass DF145? I wasn't expecting that to happen...
RE: Poison Serpent SW145SD Article Rough Draft [WAITING TO BE APPROVED!!] - J' - Mar. 12, 2011
(Mar. 12, 2011 7:56 PM)Bey-Heart Wrote:(Mar. 12, 2011 2:45 PM)GaHooleone Wrote: The outdated top-tiers list, you mean?Yeah... I haven't looked at the testing for AD145, did it outclass DF145? I wasn't expecting that to happen...
Both AD145 and 145 outclass DF145, iirc
RE: Poison Serpent SW145SD Article Rough Draft [WAITING TO BE APPROVED!!] - Ga' - Mar. 12, 2011
It goes like this: AD145>145>DF145. The wings on DF145 make it more unbalanced compared to the 'circular' 145 and actually circular AD145.
RE: Poison Serpent SW145SD Article Rough Draft [WAITING TO BE APPROVED!!] - Wizard - Mar. 12, 2011
Bump
Fixed. And I also added that in the SW145 section.
RE: Poison Serpent SW145SD Article Rough Draft [WAITING TO BE APPROVED!!] - BurningPoison - Mar. 27, 2011
Just to say my Poison Serpent SW145 SD beat my friend's Dark Eagle t125 WD (my friend usually beats me with that combo) quite easily and i think your under estimatung serpent's true power.
RE: Poison Serpent SW145SD Article Rough Draft [WAITING TO BE APPROVED!!] - Kai-V - Mar. 27, 2011
(Mar. 27, 2011 5:59 AM)BurningPoison Wrote: Just to say my Poison Serpent SW145 SD beat my friend's Dark Eagle t125 WD (my friend usually beats me with that combo) quite easily and i think your under estimatung serpent's true power.
That is because Dark Eagle T125WD is an awful combination, and you use Hasbro BeyStadiums. Before you act as if we were totally going over something important, read around, you need to learn several things first.
RE: Poison Serpent SW145SD Article Rough Draft [WAITING TO BE APPROVED!!] - Wizard - Apr. 03, 2011
After waiting, and waiting, and more waiting for an approval, I think this Draft is finally finished. Could a Committee Member please read through this and tell me if it is ready or not? In my opinion, it's ready...
RE: Poison Serpent SW145SD Article Rough Draft [WAITING TO BE APPROVED!!] - BeybladeStation - Apr. 03, 2011
Well after reading this much times, (60), I find no flaw OTHER than this:
Quote:Bottom: Semi-Defense
Weight: 0.5 grams
SD is of the "Defense" series of bottoms. It's the smallest of SD, D, and WD
You should change it to:
It's the smallest of Defense Series Performance Tips.
RE: Poison Serpent SW145SD Article Rough Draft [WAITING TO BE APPROVED!!] - Shabalabadoo - Apr. 04, 2011
Blamé moi for that, ahah.
How about:
"SD is the smallest of the "Defense" series of Bottoms.
And take out the first sentence
RE: Poison Serpent SW145SD Article Rough Draft [WAITING TO BE APPROVED!!] - Wizard - Apr. 04, 2011
Bump
Thanks for pointing that out. I can't believe I didn't notice that before.
I edited it a bit. I used the Edit that SSJ suggested, but I also took out a bit of the second sentence so it would make sense.
Ok, now it's finished.
RE: Poison Serpent SW145SD Article Rough Draft [WAITING TO BE APPROVED!!] - HorogiumX - Apr. 04, 2011
AD145 sucks for defense.
RE: Poison Serpent SW145SD Article Rough Draft [WAITING TO BE APPROVED!!] - BeybladeStation - Apr. 04, 2011
Ok, so I see how this draft is done and I contacted Kei. Yes, I actually did and he responded by saying that he is very busy, which he really is.
He did say though that he will get to this Draft as soon as possible.
So, it could even take months for that. So Bey-Heart hold on tight because it will take some time. Since I analyzed this, I see that there are NO mistakes. I suggest that you could get this thread locked, prerhaps?
But ya, you could improve this:
Quote:Defense would be AD145, GB145, BD145, R145 or 230.
Also add H145 at the end, it does have some capabilities.
RE: Poison Serpent SW145SD Article Rough Draft [WAITING TO BE APPROVED!!] - HorogiumX - Apr. 04, 2011
Also, add Dekailo's combo, LLD SW145MF.
RE: Poison Serpent SW145SD Article Rough Draft [WAITING TO BE APPROVED!!] - Wizard - Apr. 04, 2011
(Apr. 04, 2011 9:03 PM)BeyBladestation Wrote: But ya, you could improve this:Any suggestions? I haven't been keeping up to date with the TT Metagame lately. I spent to much time focused on the Hasbro Metagame.
Quote:Defense would be AD145, GB145, BD145, R145 or 230.
Also add H145 at the end, it does have some capabilities.
Since when? Even ED145 would be better than H145.