RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - UnseenBurst - May. 27, 2021
(May. 27, 2021 4:30 PM)JCE_13 Wrote: @Strikegamerv6, sorry man! I've been really busy trying to finish my classes for the year and I haven't had time to read your whole fanfic. I promise I'll read Bionic Battle and this one very soon.
That's ok man I've been busy too!!! Also, I can land you a spot on this fanfic if you want. (Also no rush to read my fanfic it's not going anywhere also the Bionic Battles Finale is almost here!!!)
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - LegendJustice - May. 27, 2021
(May. 27, 2021 4:54 PM)Strikegamerv6 Wrote: (May. 27, 2021 4:30 PM)JCE_13 Wrote: @Strikegamerv6, sorry man! I've been really busy trying to finish my classes for the year and I haven't had time to read your whole fanfic. I promise I'll read Bionic Battle and this one very soon.
That's ok man I've been busy too!!! Also, I can land you a spot on this fanfic if you want. (Also no rush to read my fanfic it's not going anywhere also the Bionic Battles Finale is almost here!!!)
oh ok what chapter does it end?
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - UnseenBurst - May. 27, 2021
(May. 27, 2021 5:03 PM)JJustice Wrote: (May. 27, 2021 4:54 PM)Strikegamerv6 Wrote: That's ok man I've been busy too!!! Also, I can land you a spot on this fanfic if you want. (Also no rush to read my fanfic it's not going anywhere also the Bionic Battles Finale is almost here!!!)
oh ok what chapter does it end?
Can't really say for sure but I'm guessing around chapter 40
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - LegendJustice - May. 27, 2021
ok good to know
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - UnseenBurst - May. 28, 2021
Main Villan leaked!!!
Aiden Peregrin and his bey ------ Apocalypse (I am also doing a naming contest but if less than 1 person enter then I will come up with the name)
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - LegendJustice - May. 28, 2021
(May. 28, 2021 2:35 AM)Strikegamerv6 Wrote: Main Villan leaked!!!
Aiden Peregrin and his bey ------ Apocalypse (I am also doing a naming contest but if less than 1 person enter then I will come up with the name)
is he arthurs son or newphew?
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - UnseenBurst - May. 28, 2021
(May. 28, 2021 3:18 AM)JJustice Wrote: (May. 28, 2021 2:35 AM)Strikegamerv6 Wrote: Main Villan leaked!!!
Aiden Peregrin and his bey ------ Apocalypse (I am also doing a naming contest but if less than 1 person enter then I will come up with the name)
is he arthurs son or newphew?
Son
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - LegendJustice - May. 28, 2021
(May. 28, 2021 4:44 AM)Strikegamerv6 Wrote: (May. 28, 2021 3:18 AM)JJustice Wrote: is he arthurs son or newphew?
Son
ok thanks
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - UnseenBurst - May. 28, 2021
More info on the main villain!!! Name: Aiden Peregrin
Age: 16
Personality: Cruel loves breaking Beyblades and will do anything to break every bey to become the king of Beyblade.
Backstory: He lost his Dad Arthur Peregrin when he was 9 years old and before he left Aiden promised he would break every bey to become the king of Beyblade.
Bey: Warped Apocalypse Dynachi ring BL=Blaster Weight 8B disk BM (A bigger version of the 12 disks) and Ultimate Reboot'
Chapter 9 is finally out @Jjustice PinkRose hope you enjoy it!!
Beyblade Burst Dynachi
Chapter 9
The BattleShip Cruise Rides Again!!!!
(At the docks)
Valt: Alright, if the ship goes down you put on your life jackets okay?
Me: Valt, we’re going to be fine trust me!!
?????: Let’s do this!! I’m so excited!!
????: Calm down!!
Valt: Dante is that you?
Dante: Valt!?
(Dante runs up to Valt)
Me: Um who’s this?
Dante: I’m Dante Koryu!! A former beyblading legend!!
Brooke: *Gasps*
Valt: Who’s the guy running around the place!!
Dante: That’s Daniel, my son.
Daniel: Dad come on let’s go!!
Dante: Daniel say hi!!
Daniel: Valt Aoi!? Dad told me all about you!!
Valt: Please it’s nothing.
Daniel: I’m Daniel but you can call me Dan!!
Me/Adam/Ryuji: Hi!!
Brooke: Hey.
Daniel: Wow it’s Vlad Aoi!! The creator of the Dynachi system!!
Me: Um, yup that’s me!!
(Daniel’s face starts turning red and he gets super close)
Daniel: I hope we get to battle!!
Sebastian: Shu told me all about Dante!!!!
Me: You're a little close there buddy, I need some space!!
(Daniel backs up)
Daniel: Sorry, I get carried away a lot.
Valt: He reminded me of you Dante!!!
Dante: Really!?
(Valt Laughs)
(The cruise starts docking)
Valt: Alright guys be good!!
(Valt taps on Brooke)
Valt: Make sure they don’t get into any trouble.
(Valt smiles)
Brooke: Sure.
(We all get on the boat)
(The boat starts leaving and Valt waves goodbye)
Announcer: Alright everyone!! We are going all around the Northern Hemisphere on our Beyblade World Cruise!! This is a great opportunity to rank up!!
Me: This is awesome!!
Announcer: Let me introduce our bladers!! Also this is recorded all around the world!!!
Daniel: That’s it I’m calling it!! I’m winning this!!
(Daniel lifts Triumph Dragon in the air)
Announcer: Since you're so confident let’s start with you!!
Daniel: Alright!!
Announcer: We’ve got the blader who can’t keep his cool in the heat of battle Daniel Koryu!!!
Daniel: Get ready cause I’m coming in hot!!!
Announcer: We’ve got the blader that comes from richness, coolness and awesomeness!!! Ryuji Kiyama!!!
Ryuji: I’m winning this!!
Announcer: We have a blader that is BFFs with the darkness Brooke Daikokuten!!!
Brooke: Get ready to scream.
Announcer: We’ve got a blader that comes from the creepiest Island around he’s Lui Shirosgai’s son!!! Lloyd Shirosagi!!!!
Lloyd: Luinor’s gonna send you flying!!!
(Lloyd holds up Raid Luinor)
Announcer: We’ve got the name of fame!!! Jay Burns!!!
Jay: Alright!! This movie is going to have my name at the top of the credits!!!
(Brooke’s Thoughts): I get another chance at beating him!!!
Announcer: We’ve got our new Crismon fighter, the son of Shu Kurneai!!! Sebastian Kurnai!!!
Sebastian: I’m winning this thing!!!
Announcer: The second person to ever have a Dynachi bey Adam Kusaba!!!
Adam: Hold onto your hat because Ashindra’s gonna send you flying!!!
Announcer: We have the creator of the Dynachi system and he’s climbing through the rankings!!!! Vlad Aoi!!!
Vlad: Valiant Valtryek gonna send you flying!!!
Announcer: We’ve got the dark and cruel Aiden Peregrin!!!
Aiden: LISTEN UP!!!! ALL OF YOU WILL BE DESTROYED BY THE KING OF BEYBLADE!!!!!!!!!!!
(Everyone gasps)
Daniel: You're not gonna destroy us!!! Dante told me how he defeated your Dad and inferno!!! You’ll never take over beyblade!!!
Aiden: You’ll be the first to be crushed!!!
(Aiden holds up Prime Apocalypse)
Announcer: Oh no will Aiden try taking over beyblade like his father!?
(My thoughts): Ain’t gonna happen!!
Announcer: Until we get our other 3 bladers our match will be a 3 bey battle royal!!! And our first match will be Adam Kusaba Vs Ryuji kiyama Vs Brooke Daikokuten!!!
Ryuji/Brooke/Adam: *Gasps*
Announcer: Looks like a club showdown can’t wait to see how it goes down!!! The Second battle will be Sebastian Kurenai Vs Jay Burns Vs Vlad Aoi!!!
(My Thoughts): Sebastian, I’m taking you down!!!
Announcer: Our final match will be Daniel Koryu Vs Aiden Peregrin Vs Lloyd Shirosagi!!!!
Lloyd: I’m gonna show the world how powerful I am!!!
Announcer: Let’s start with our first battle!!!
(A stadium comes up from the ground)
Everyone: *Gasps*
Announcer: This is the sky high stadium!!! It has rails connected to the ramp and there’s a slope on the ramp so you can get some serious air time!!! Let’s get to the battle now!!!
(At the stadium)
Ryuji: I’m winning this hands down!!!
Adam: You wish!!!
Brooke: Quit the chit chat and let’s get started.
(Brooke puts Belrix’s weight from the bottom to the top)
Drone: First battle!!! Ready set!!!
Everyone: 3 2 1 Let it rip!!!
Adam: Ashindra take the center!!!
Ryuj: Not before me you won’t!!!
Announcer: Uh oh!! Things are about to get ugly!! As they both fight for the center!!!
(Ashinda and Roktavor hit each other out of the center)
Adam: Ashindra!!!!
Ryuji: Roktavor!!!
(Ryuji and Adam flare up with Resonance Aura)
Adam: Atomic Counter!!!!
Ryuji: Berserker Wing Attack!!!
Brooke: Belarix!!!
(Brooke flares up with resonance)
Announcer: Belarix rides the ramp up to the slope and is flying above Ashindra and Roktavor!!!!
Brooke: Detonate Bomber!!!!
(Belarix forces Roktavor and Ashindra into the ground, Ashindra and Roktavor burst)
Ryuji/Adam: What!?
Drone: It’s Detonate Belarix with a burst finish. Brooke Daikokuten wins!!!
Announcer: Belarix comes out of who knows where and bursts Roktavor and Ashindra!!!
(Brooke picks up Belarix and walks away)
Ryuji/Adam: Are you kidding me!!!
Announcer: After that unexpected battle!! We’re entering the second battle royal let’s get started!!!
Sebastian: Ready to lose again!!
Me: I’m not losing!!
(I flare up with Resonance Aura)
(Sebastian flares up with Resonance Aura)
Jay: Friends!! Let’s not be so serious because I’m obviously winning!!!
Drone: First battle!!! Ready set!!!
Everyone: 3 2 1 Let it rip!!!
(Jinnus takes the center)
Sebastian: Upper Launch!!!
Me: Rush Launch!!!
(The reboot tip stick comes out)
Announcer: Valtryek and Spryzen hit Jinnus from all sides!!! Jinnus is in a pinch!!!
Sebastian: Counter Break!!!
(Spryzen knocks Jinnus out)
Jay: Already!?
Announcer: Jnnius is out of there!!!! It’s Valtryek Vs Spryzen!!!
Sebastian: Spryzen!!!!
(Sebastian flares up with Resonance Aura)
Me: Let’s do it, Valtryek!!!!
(I flare up with Resonance Aura)
Me/Sebastian: Go!!!
Announcer: Valtryek and Spryzen are exchanging powerful blows to each other!!!
Sebastian: Now!!!
(Spryzen send Valtryek flying into the wall)
Announcer: Valtryek has hit the wall hard!!! Is it over!?
Me: Valiant Spring Winged Launch!!!!
(Valtyrek speeds up and knocks Spryzen out)
Drone: It’s Valiant Valtryek with a ring out finish. Vlad Aoi wins!!!
Announcer: Wow!! Vlad Aoi just turned a big hit into a big counterstrike and won the battle!!!
Me: Yes!!!
Sebastian: Grr!!
(Jay’s Thoughts): How dare they humiliate me like that!!! I will defeat both of you one day!!!
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - LegendJustice - May. 28, 2021
(May. 28, 2021 4:44 PM)Strikegamerv6 Wrote: More info on the main villain!!! Name: Aiden Peregrin
Age: 16
Personality: Cruel loves breaking Beyblades and will do anything to break every bey to become the king of Beyblade.
Backstory: He lost his Dad Arthur Peregrin when he was 9 years old and before he left Aiden promised he would break every bey to become the king of Beyblade.
Bey: Warped Apocalypse Dynachi ring BL=Blaster Weight 8B disk BM (A bigger version of the 12 disks) and Ultimate Reboot'
Chapter 9 is finally out @Jjustice PinkRose hope you enjoy it!!
Beyblade Burst Dynachi
Chapter 9
The BattleShip Cruise Rides Again!!!!
(At the docks)
Valt: Alright, if the ship goes down you put on your life jackets okay?
Me: Valt, we’re going to be fine trust me!!
?????: Let’s do this!! I’m so excited!!
????: Calm down!!
Valt: Dante is that you?
Dante: Valt!?
(Dante runs up to Valt)
Me: Um who’s this?
Dante: I’m Dante Koryu!! A former beyblading legend!!
Brooke: *Gasps*
Valt: Who’s the guy running around the place!!
Dante: That’s Daniel, my son.
Daniel: Dad come on let’s go!!
Dante: Daniel say hi!!
Daniel: Valt Aoi!? Dad told me all about you!!
Valt: Please it’s nothing.
Daniel: I’m Daniel but you can call me Dan!!
Me/Adam/Ryuji: Hi!!
Brooke: Hey.
Daniel: Wow it’s Vlad Aoi!! The creator of the Dynachi system!!
Me: Um, yup that’s me!!
(Daniel’s face starts turning red and he gets super close)
Daniel: I hope we get to battle!!
Sebastian: Shu told me all about Dante!!!!
Me: You're a little close there buddy, I need some space!!
(Daniel backs up)
Daniel: Sorry, I get carried away a lot.
Valt: He reminded me of you Dante!!!
Dante: Really!?
(Valt Laughs)
(The cruise starts docking)
Valt: Alright guys be good!!
(Valt taps on Brooke)
Valt: Make sure they don’t get into any trouble.
(Valt smiles)
Brooke: Sure.
(We all get on the boat)
(The boat starts leaving and Valt waves goodbye)
Announcer: Alright everyone!! We are going all around the Northern Hemisphere on our Beyblade World Cruise!! This is a great opportunity to rank up!!
Me: This is awesome!!
Announcer: Let me introduce our bladers!! Also this is recorded all around the world!!!
Daniel: That’s it I’m calling it!! I’m winning this!!
(Daniel lifts Triumph Dragon in the air)
Announcer: Since you're so confident let’s start with you!!
Daniel: Alright!!
Announcer: We’ve got the blader who can’t keep his cool in the heat of battle Daniel Koryu!!!
Daniel: Get ready cause I’m coming in hot!!!
Announcer: We’ve got the blader that comes from richness, coolness and awesomeness!!! Ryuji Kiyama!!!
Ryuji: I’m winning this!!
Announcer: We have a blader that is BFFs with the darkness Brooke Daikokuten!!!
Brooke: Get ready to scream.
Announcer: We’ve got a blader that comes from the creepiest Island around he’s Lui Shirosgai’s son!!! Lloyd Shirosagi!!!!
Lloyd: Luinor’s gonna send you flying!!!
(Lloyd holds up Raid Luinor)
Announcer: We’ve got the name of fame!!! Jay Burns!!!
Jay: Alright!! This movie is going to have my name at the top of the credits!!!
(Brooke’s Thoughts): I get another chance at beating him!!!
Announcer: We’ve got our new Crismon fighter, the son of Shu Kurneai!!! Sebastian Kurnai!!!
Sebastian: I’m winning this thing!!!
Announcer: The second person to ever have a Dynachi bey Adam Kusaba!!!
Adam: Hold onto your hat because Ashindra’s gonna send you flying!!!
Announcer: We have the creator of the Dynachi system and he’s climbing through the rankings!!!! Vlad Aoi!!!
Vlad: Valiant Valtryek gonna send you flying!!!
Announcer: We’ve got the dark and cruel Aiden Peregrin!!!
Aiden: LISTEN UP!!!! ALL OF YOU WILL BE DESTROYED BY THE KING OF BEYBLADE!!!!!!!!!!!
(Everyone gasps)
Daniel: You're not gonna destroy us!!! Dante told me how he defeated your Dad and inferno!!! You’ll never take over beyblade!!!
Aiden: You’ll be the first to be crushed!!!
(Aiden holds up Prime Apocalypse)
Announcer: Oh no will Aiden try taking over beyblade like his father!?
(My thoughts): Ain’t gonna happen!!
Announcer: Until we get our other 3 bladers our match will be a 3 bey battle royal!!! And our first match will be Adam Kusaba Vs Ryuji kiyama Vs Brooke Daikokuten!!!
Ryuji/Brooke/Adam: *Gasps*
Announcer: Looks like a club showdown can’t wait to see how it goes down!!! The Second battle will be Sebastian Kurenai Vs Jay Burns Vs Vlad Aoi!!!
(My Thoughts): Sebastian, I’m taking you down!!!
Announcer: Our final match will be Daniel Koryu Vs Aiden Peregrin Vs Lloyd Shirosagi!!!!
Lloyd: I’m gonna show the world how powerful I am!!!
Announcer: Let’s start with our first battle!!!
(A stadium comes up from the ground)
Everyone: *Gasps*
Announcer: This is the sky high stadium!!! It has rails connected to the ramp and there’s a slope on the ramp so you can get some serious air time!!! Let’s get to the battle now!!!
(At the stadium)
Ryuji: I’m winning this hands down!!!
Adam: You wish!!!
Brooke: Quit the chit chat and let’s get started.
(Brooke puts Belrix’s weight from the bottom to the top)
Drone: First battle!!! Ready set!!!
Everyone: 3 2 1 Let it rip!!!
Adam: Ashindra take the center!!!
Ryuj: Not before me you won’t!!!
Announcer: Uh oh!! Things are about to get ugly!! As they both fight for the center!!!
(Ashinda and Roktavor hit each other out of the center)
Adam: Ashindra!!!!
Ryuji: Roktavor!!!
(Ryuji and Adam flare up with Resonance Aura)
Adam: Atomic Counter!!!!
Ryuji: Berserker Wing Attack!!!
Brooke: Belarix!!!
(Brooke flares up with resonance)
Announcer: Belarix rides the ramp up to the slope and is flying above Ashindra and Roktavor!!!!
Brooke: Detonate Bomber!!!!
(Belarix forces Roktavor and Ashindra into the ground, Ashindra and Roktavor burst)
Ryuji/Adam: What!?
Drone: It’s Detonate Belarix with a burst finish. Brooke Daikokuten wins!!!
Announcer: Belarix comes out of who knows where and bursts Roktavor and Ashindra!!!
(Brooke picks up Belarix and walks away)
Ryuji/Adam: Are you kidding me!!!
Announcer: After that unexpected battle!! We’re entering the second battle royal let’s get started!!!
Sebastian: Ready to lose again!!
Me: I’m not losing!!
(I flare up with Resonance Aura)
(Sebastian flares up with Resonance Aura)
Jay: Friends!! Let’s not be so serious because I’m obviously winning!!!
Drone: First battle!!! Ready set!!!
Everyone: 3 2 1 Let it rip!!!
(Jinnus takes the center)
Sebastian: Upper Launch!!!
Me: Rush Launch!!!
(The reboot tip stick comes out)
Announcer: Valtryek and Spryzen hit Jinnus from all sides!!! Jinnus is in a pinch!!!
Sebastian: Counter Break!!!
(Spryzen knocks Jinnus out)
Jay: Already!?
Announcer: Jnnius is out of there!!!! It’s Valtryek Vs Spryzen!!!
Sebastian: Spryzen!!!!
(Sebastian flares up with Resonance Aura)
Me: Let’s do it, Valtryek!!!!
(I flare up with Resonance Aura)
Me/Sebastian: Go!!!
Announcer: Valtryek and Spryzen are exchanging powerful blows to each other!!!
Sebastian: Now!!!
(Spryzen send Valtryek flying into the wall)
Announcer: Valtryek has hit the wall hard!!! Is it over!?
Me: Valiant Spring Winged Launch!!!!
(Valtyrek speeds up and knocks Spryzen out)
Drone: It’s Valiant Valtryek with a ring out finish. Vlad Aoi wins!!!
Announcer: Wow!! Vlad Aoi just turned a big hit into a big counterstrike and won the battle!!!
Me: Yes!!!
Sebastian: Grr!!
(Jay’s Thoughts): How dare they humiliate me like that!!! I will defeat both of you one day!!!
Poor Jay
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - UnseenBurst - May. 28, 2021
(May. 28, 2021 10:01 PM)JJustice Wrote: (May. 28, 2021 4:44 PM)Strikegamerv6 Wrote: More info on the main villain!!! Name: Aiden Peregrin
Age: 16
Personality: Cruel loves breaking Beyblades and will do anything to break every bey to become the king of Beyblade.
Backstory: He lost his Dad Arthur Peregrin when he was 9 years old and before he left Aiden promised he would break every bey to become the king of Beyblade.
Bey: Warped Apocalypse Dynachi ring BL=Blaster Weight 8B disk BM (A bigger version of the 12 disks) and Ultimate Reboot'
Chapter 9 is finally out @Jjustice PinkRose hope you enjoy it!!
Beyblade Burst Dynachi
Chapter 9
The BattleShip Cruise Rides Again!!!!
(At the docks)
Valt: Alright, if the ship goes down you put on your life jackets okay?
Me: Valt, we’re going to be fine trust me!!
?????: Let’s do this!! I’m so excited!!
????: Calm down!!
Valt: Dante is that you?
Dante: Valt!?
(Dante runs up to Valt)
Me: Um who’s this?
Dante: I’m Dante Koryu!! A former beyblading legend!!
Brooke: *Gasps*
Valt: Who’s the guy running around the place!!
Dante: That’s Daniel, my son.
Daniel: Dad come on let’s go!!
Dante: Daniel say hi!!
Daniel: Valt Aoi!? Dad told me all about you!!
Valt: Please it’s nothing.
Daniel: I’m Daniel but you can call me Dan!!
Me/Adam/Ryuji: Hi!!
Brooke: Hey.
Daniel: Wow it’s Vlad Aoi!! The creator of the Dynachi system!!
Me: Um, yup that’s me!!
(Daniel’s face starts turning red and he gets super close)
Daniel: I hope we get to battle!!
Sebastian: Shu told me all about Dante!!!!
Me: You're a little close there buddy, I need some space!!
(Daniel backs up)
Daniel: Sorry, I get carried away a lot.
Valt: He reminded me of you Dante!!!
Dante: Really!?
(Valt Laughs)
(The cruise starts docking)
Valt: Alright guys be good!!
(Valt taps on Brooke)
Valt: Make sure they don’t get into any trouble.
(Valt smiles)
Brooke: Sure.
(We all get on the boat)
(The boat starts leaving and Valt waves goodbye)
Announcer: Alright everyone!! We are going all around the Northern Hemisphere on our Beyblade World Cruise!! This is a great opportunity to rank up!!
Me: This is awesome!!
Announcer: Let me introduce our bladers!! Also this is recorded all around the world!!!
Daniel: That’s it I’m calling it!! I’m winning this!!
(Daniel lifts Triumph Dragon in the air)
Announcer: Since you're so confident let’s start with you!!
Daniel: Alright!!
Announcer: We’ve got the blader who can’t keep his cool in the heat of battle Daniel Koryu!!!
Daniel: Get ready cause I’m coming in hot!!!
Announcer: We’ve got the blader that comes from richness, coolness and awesomeness!!! Ryuji Kiyama!!!
Ryuji: I’m winning this!!
Announcer: We have a blader that is BFFs with the darkness Brooke Daikokuten!!!
Brooke: Get ready to scream.
Announcer: We’ve got a blader that comes from the creepiest Island around he’s Lui Shirosgai’s son!!! Lloyd Shirosagi!!!!
Lloyd: Luinor’s gonna send you flying!!!
(Lloyd holds up Raid Luinor)
Announcer: We’ve got the name of fame!!! Jay Burns!!!
Jay: Alright!! This movie is going to have my name at the top of the credits!!!
(Brooke’s Thoughts): I get another chance at beating him!!!
Announcer: We’ve got our new Crismon fighter, the son of Shu Kurneai!!! Sebastian Kurnai!!!
Sebastian: I’m winning this thing!!!
Announcer: The second person to ever have a Dynachi bey Adam Kusaba!!!
Adam: Hold onto your hat because Ashindra’s gonna send you flying!!!
Announcer: We have the creator of the Dynachi system and he’s climbing through the rankings!!!! Vlad Aoi!!!
Vlad: Valiant Valtryek gonna send you flying!!!
Announcer: We’ve got the dark and cruel Aiden Peregrin!!!
Aiden: LISTEN UP!!!! ALL OF YOU WILL BE DESTROYED BY THE KING OF BEYBLADE!!!!!!!!!!!
(Everyone gasps)
Daniel: You're not gonna destroy us!!! Dante told me how he defeated your Dad and inferno!!! You’ll never take over beyblade!!!
Aiden: You’ll be the first to be crushed!!!
(Aiden holds up Prime Apocalypse)
Announcer: Oh no will Aiden try taking over beyblade like his father!?
(My thoughts): Ain’t gonna happen!!
Announcer: Until we get our other 3 bladers our match will be a 3 bey battle royal!!! And our first match will be Adam Kusaba Vs Ryuji kiyama Vs Brooke Daikokuten!!!
Ryuji/Brooke/Adam: *Gasps*
Announcer: Looks like a club showdown can’t wait to see how it goes down!!! The Second battle will be Sebastian Kurenai Vs Jay Burns Vs Vlad Aoi!!!
(My Thoughts): Sebastian, I’m taking you down!!!
Announcer: Our final match will be Daniel Koryu Vs Aiden Peregrin Vs Lloyd Shirosagi!!!!
Lloyd: I’m gonna show the world how powerful I am!!!
Announcer: Let’s start with our first battle!!!
(A stadium comes up from the ground)
Everyone: *Gasps*
Announcer: This is the sky high stadium!!! It has rails connected to the ramp and there’s a slope on the ramp so you can get some serious air time!!! Let’s get to the battle now!!!
(At the stadium)
Ryuji: I’m winning this hands down!!!
Adam: You wish!!!
Brooke: Quit the chit chat and let’s get started.
(Brooke puts Belrix’s weight from the bottom to the top)
Drone: First battle!!! Ready set!!!
Everyone: 3 2 1 Let it rip!!!
Adam: Ashindra take the center!!!
Ryuj: Not before me you won’t!!!
Announcer: Uh oh!! Things are about to get ugly!! As they both fight for the center!!!
(Ashinda and Roktavor hit each other out of the center)
Adam: Ashindra!!!!
Ryuji: Roktavor!!!
(Ryuji and Adam flare up with Resonance Aura)
Adam: Atomic Counter!!!!
Ryuji: Berserker Wing Attack!!!
Brooke: Belarix!!!
(Brooke flares up with resonance)
Announcer: Belarix rides the ramp up to the slope and is flying above Ashindra and Roktavor!!!!
Brooke: Detonate Bomber!!!!
(Belarix forces Roktavor and Ashindra into the ground, Ashindra and Roktavor burst)
Ryuji/Adam: What!?
Drone: It’s Detonate Belarix with a burst finish. Brooke Daikokuten wins!!!
Announcer: Belarix comes out of who knows where and bursts Roktavor and Ashindra!!!
(Brooke picks up Belarix and walks away)
Ryuji/Adam: Are you kidding me!!!
Announcer: After that unexpected battle!! We’re entering the second battle royal let’s get started!!!
Sebastian: Ready to lose again!!
Me: I’m not losing!!
(I flare up with Resonance Aura)
(Sebastian flares up with Resonance Aura)
Jay: Friends!! Let’s not be so serious because I’m obviously winning!!!
Drone: First battle!!! Ready set!!!
Everyone: 3 2 1 Let it rip!!!
(Jinnus takes the center)
Sebastian: Upper Launch!!!
Me: Rush Launch!!!
(The reboot tip stick comes out)
Announcer: Valtryek and Spryzen hit Jinnus from all sides!!! Jinnus is in a pinch!!!
Sebastian: Counter Break!!!
(Spryzen knocks Jinnus out)
Jay: Already!?
Announcer: Jnnius is out of there!!!! It’s Valtryek Vs Spryzen!!!
Sebastian: Spryzen!!!!
(Sebastian flares up with Resonance Aura)
Me: Let’s do it, Valtryek!!!!
(I flare up with Resonance Aura)
Me/Sebastian: Go!!!
Announcer: Valtryek and Spryzen are exchanging powerful blows to each other!!!
Sebastian: Now!!!
(Spryzen send Valtryek flying into the wall)
Announcer: Valtryek has hit the wall hard!!! Is it over!?
Me: Valiant Spring Winged Launch!!!!
(Valtyrek speeds up and knocks Spryzen out)
Drone: It’s Valiant Valtryek with a ring out finish. Vlad Aoi wins!!!
Announcer: Wow!! Vlad Aoi just turned a big hit into a big counterstrike and won the battle!!!
Me: Yes!!!
Sebastian: Grr!!
(Jay’s Thoughts): How dare they humiliate me like that!!! I will defeat both of you one day!!!
Poor Jay
Sorry I had to do him dirty it's just plot 
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - Exahertz - May. 29, 2021
(May. 21, 2021 4:17 AM)Strikegamerv6 Wrote: Hey Guys!!! I'm making this fanfic called Beyblade Burst Dynachi!!! Which will feature all of you!!! These are the rules to be in it!!! 1. You must fill out the registration it is short. 2. You cannot make a bey you need to use a Beyblade from S1-S7 3. You cannot have an antagonist Bey 4. Your character has to be related to the original owner of the bey. 5. You can only make new drivers and disks. 6. Have fun and tell me if you want any changes!!! These are the things you need for your registration. @Jjustice was the first register.
Name:
Bey Name:
Age:
Personality:
What you look like (Optional):
Bey Moves:
If you wanna be in say me and fill this out
Me
Name: Bakr Shakadera, Cousins
Bey Name: Bayonet Xcalibur Bayonet Quick Dash
Age: 14
Personality: easily aggravated, weird. likes history, a nerd
What I look like: Black hair, Glasses, tall, dark brown skin,
Bey Moves: Infantry Rush, Encirclement, Final Strike, Siege (activates when launched)
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - UnseenBurst - May. 29, 2021
(May. 29, 2021 9:28 PM)Exahertz Wrote: (May. 21, 2021 4:17 AM)Strikegamerv6 Wrote: Hey Guys!!! I'm making this fanfic called Beyblade Burst Dynachi!!! Which will feature all of you!!! These are the rules to be in it!!! 1. You must fill out the registration it is short. 2. You cannot make a bey you need to use a Beyblade from S1-S7 3. You cannot have an antagonist Bey 4. Your character has to be related to the original owner of the bey. 5. You can only make new drivers and disks. 6. Have fun and tell me if you want any changes!!! These are the things you need for your registration. @Jjustice was the first register.
Name:
Bey Name:
Age:
Personality:
What you look like (Optional):
Bey Moves:
If you wanna be in say me and fill this out
Me
Name: Bakr Aoi, Cousins
Bey Name: Brave Valkyrie Bayonet Quick Dash
Age: 14
Personality: easily aggravated, weird. likes history, a nerd
What I look like: Black hair, Glasses, tall, dark brown skin,
Bey Moves: Infantry Rush, Encirclement, Final Strike, Siege (activates when launched)
Sorry you need to have an original bey for example like Vanish Fafnir then it evolves into a Dynachi bey or something like that (Beys that are taken are Spryzen/Spriggan Valkryie/Valtryek Ashura/Ashindra Ragnarok/Roktavor Belial/Belarix Jinnus, and Dragon)
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - Dragon Blader Z - May. 30, 2021
(May. 21, 2021 4:17 AM)Strikegamerv6 Wrote: Hey Guys!!! I'm making this fanfic called Beyblade Burst Dynachi!!! Which will feature all of you!!! These are the rules to be in it!!! 1. You must fill out the registration it is short. 2. You cannot make a bey you need to use a Beyblade from S1-S7 3. You cannot have an antagonist Bey 4. Your character has to be related to the original owner of the bey. 5. You can only make new drivers and disks. 6. Have fun and tell me if you want any changes!!! These are the things you need for your registration. @Jjustice was the first register.
Name:
Bey Name:
Age:
Personality:
What you look like (Optional):
Bey Moves:
If you wanna be in say me and fill this out
@Jjustice can you please move your registration here thanks :)
Name: Zafary the Star
Bey Name: Nexus Zeus
Age: 16
Personality: Like (Daikokuten Bell) but my character's really nice to his friends and Shu.
What Zafary looks like: Zafary wears a red shirt with a black jacket that Shu likes
Bey Moves: Nexus Shoot, Counter Dive, Nexus Rebellion, Nexus Slash, Counter Abilities, and Ultra Counter Slash
@Strikegamerv6 When chapter am I coming and I filled this out
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - LegendJustice - May. 30, 2021
(May. 30, 2021 12:27 PM)Dragon Blader Z Wrote: (May. 21, 2021 4:17 AM)Strikegamerv6 Wrote: Hey Guys!!! I'm making this fanfic called Beyblade Burst Dynachi!!! Which will feature all of you!!! These are the rules to be in it!!! 1. You must fill out the registration it is short. 2. You cannot make a bey you need to use a Beyblade from S1-S7 3. You cannot have an antagonist Bey 4. Your character has to be related to the original owner of the bey. 5. You can only make new drivers and disks. 6. Have fun and tell me if you want any changes!!! These are the things you need for your registration. @Jjustice was the first register.
Name:
Bey Name:
Age:
Personality:
What you look like (Optional):
Bey Moves:
If you wanna be in say me and fill this out
@Jjustice can you please move your registration here thanks 
Name: Saber Kurenai
Bey Name: Nexus Spriggan
Age: 16
Personality: Like (Daikokuten Bell) but my character's really nice to his friends and Shu.
What Saber looks like: Saber wears a red shirt with a black jacket that Raion likes
Bey Moves: Nexus Shoot, Counter Dive, Nexus Rebellion, Nexus Slash, Counter Abilities, and Ultra Counter Slash
@Strikegamerv6 When chapter am I coming and I filled this out
Strike already made this son sabastion kurenai and it has to be a hey through 1-6
Sorry if I sound mean
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - Exahertz - May. 30, 2021
(May. 29, 2021 10:07 PM)Strikegamerv6 Wrote: Sorry you need to have an original bey for example like Vanish Fafnir then it evolves into a Dynachi bey or something like that (Beys that are taken are Spryzen/Spriggan Valkryie/Valtryek Ashura/Ashindra Ragnarok/Roktavor Belial/Belarix Jinnus, and Dragon)
I fixed it
Name: Xerxes Shakadera, Cousins
Bey Name: Bayonet Xcalibur Unify Quick Dash
Age: 14
Personality: easily aggravated, weird. likes history, a nerd
What I look like: Black hair, Glasses, tall, dark brown skin,
Bey Moves: Infantry Rush, Encirclement, Final Strike, Siege (activates when launched)
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - UnseenBurst - May. 31, 2021
(May. 30, 2021 3:09 PM)Exahertz Wrote: (May. 29, 2021 10:07 PM)Strikegamerv6 Wrote: Sorry you need to have an original bey for example like Vanish Fafnir then it evolves into a Dynachi bey or something like that (Beys that are taken are Spryzen/Spriggan Valkryie/Valtryek Ashura/Ashindra Ragnarok/Roktavor Belial/Belarix Jinnus, and Dragon)
I fixed it
Name: Bakr Shakadera, Cousins
Bey Name: Bayonet Xcalibur Unify Quick Dash
Age: 14
Personality: easily aggravated, weird. likes history, a nerd
What I look like: Black hair, Glasses, tall, dark brown skin,
Bey Moves: Infantry Rush, Encirclement, Final Strike, Siege (activates when launched)
Name needs to start with an X
Chapter 10 Name/Summary Rise To Victory Royal Dragon!!! After a humiliating loss, Daniel asks Vlad if he can help evolve Dragon into a Dynachi bey!!
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - Dragon Blader Z - May. 31, 2021
(May. 30, 2021 2:57 PM)JJustice Wrote: (May. 30, 2021 12:27 PM)Dragon Blader Z Wrote: Name: Saber Kurenai
Bey Name: Nexus Spriggan
Age: 16
Personality: Like (Daikokuten Bell) but my character's really nice to his friends and Shu.
What Saber looks like: Saber wears a red shirt with a black jacket that Raion likes
Bey Moves: Nexus Shoot, Counter Dive, Nexus Rebellion, Nexus Slash, Counter Abilities, and Ultra Counter Slash
@Strikegamerv6 When chapter am I coming and I filled this out
Strike already made this son sabastion kurenai and it has to be a hey through 1-6
Sorry if I sound mean
I updated my post
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - LegendJustice - May. 31, 2021
(May. 31, 2021 1:42 AM)Dragon Blader Z Wrote: (May. 30, 2021 2:57 PM)JJustice Wrote: Strike already made this son sabastion kurenai and it has to be a hey through 1-6
Sorry if I sound mean
I updated my post
Dude strike made a character named Adam kusaba
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - UnseenBurst - May. 31, 2021
(May. 31, 2021 1:42 AM)Dragon Blader Z Wrote: (May. 30, 2021 2:57 PM)JJustice Wrote: Strike already made this son sabastion kurenai and it has to be a hey through 1-6
Sorry if I sound mean
I updated my post
Ashindra, Valkryie, Ragnurok, Belial, Jinnus, Longinus, Dragon, Apocalypse, Spriggan, and Xcalibur, are taken
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - Exahertz - May. 31, 2021
(May. 31, 2021 12:45 AM)Strikegamerv6 Wrote: (May. 30, 2021 3:09 PM)Exahertz Wrote: I fixed it
Name: Bakr Shakadera, Cousins
Bey Name: Bayonet Xcalibur Unify Quick Dash
Age: 14
Personality: easily aggravated, weird. likes history, a nerd
What I look like: Black hair, Glasses, tall, dark brown skin,
Bey Moves: Infantry Rush, Encirclement, Final Strike, Siege (activates when launched)
Name needs to start with an X
Chapter 10 Name/Summary Rise To Victory Royal Dragon!!! After a humiliating loss, Daniel asks Vlad if he can help evolve Dragon into a Dynachi bey!!
I fixed it again
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - UnseenBurst - Jun. 01, 2021
(May. 30, 2021 3:09 PM)Exahertz Wrote: (May. 29, 2021 10:07 PM)Strikegamerv6 Wrote: Sorry you need to have an original bey for example like Vanish Fafnir then it evolves into a Dynachi bey or something like that (Beys that are taken are Spryzen/Spriggan Valkryie/Valtryek Ashura/Ashindra Ragnarok/Roktavor Belial/Belarix Jinnus, and Dragon)
I fixed it
Name: Xerxes Shakadera, Cousins
Bey Name: Bayonet Xcalibur Unify Quick Dash
Age: 14
Personality: easily aggravated, weird. likes history, a nerd
What I look like: Black hair, Glasses, tall, dark brown skin,
Bey Moves: Infantry Rush, Encirclement, Final Strike, Siege (activates when launched)
Alright Ima change up the moveset a bit but ur in
Rankings so far
Lloyd: 60
Sebastian: 61
Jay: 99
Brooke: 110
Vlad: 160
Ryuji: 162
Adam: 200
Name: Daniel Koryu
Age: 10
Bey Name: Triumph Dragon 1A Charge Metal Royal Dragon Dynachi gear UR Sting upgraded Charge Metal'
Personality: The wild kid who loves having fun and when hurt (emotionally) gets really sensitive he looks up to his Dad Dante Koryu and plans to be just like him
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - LegendJustice - Jun. 01, 2021
(Jun. 01, 2021 3:28 PM)Strikegamerv6 Wrote: (May. 30, 2021 3:09 PM)Exahertz Wrote: I fixed it
Name: Xerxes Shakadera, Cousins
Bey Name: Bayonet Xcalibur Unify Quick Dash
Age: 14
Personality: easily aggravated, weird. likes history, a nerd
What I look like: Black hair, Glasses, tall, dark brown skin,
Bey Moves: Infantry Rush, Encirclement, Final Strike, Siege (activates when launched)
Alright Ima change up the moveset a bit but ur in
Rankings so far
Lloyd: 60
Sebastian: 61
Jay: 99
Brooke: 110
Vlad: 160
Ryuji: 162
Adam: 200
Name: Daniel Koryu
Age: 10
Bey Name: Triumph Dragon 1A Charge Metal Royal Dragon Dynachi gear UR Sting upgraded Charge Metal'
Personality: The wild kid who loves having fun and when hurt (emotionally) gets really sensitive he looks up to his Dad Dante Koryu and plans to be just like him
Chapter 10 is out!!
Beyblade Burst Dynachi
Chapter 10
Rise to Victory Royal Dragon!!!
Daniel: I can’t wait to take this Aiden guy down!
Me: You do you bro.
Daniel: Dragon is winning this!
(Daniel goes out to the stage)
Announcer: Hello Bladers! Today we’re going to be doing a battle between attack types! Daniel Koryu Vs Aiden Peregrin Vs Lloyd Shirosagi!
Daniel: I’m showing you what beyblade is all about!
Aiden: Beyblade is my kingdom and I will not let you overthrow me.
Lloyd: I’m beating both of you!
Drone: First battle! Ready set!
Everyone: 3! 2! 1! Let it rip!
(Daniel and Lloyd pull off lightning launches)
Announcer: We’ve got some sweet Lightning Launches right outta the gate how will this end!
Lloyd: Tear it apart Luinor!
Announcer: Luinor heads straight for Apocalypse!
Aiden: Omega Blast!!
(Luinor bursts)
Lloyd: *Gasps*
Announcer: What devastating power! Luinor just burst in one hit!
Daniel: Dragon Launch!!
Aiden: Useless.
Announcer: Dragon is making strong attacks but Apocalypse is taking them like a champ!!
Daniel: It’s time you burst! Dragon!!
(Daniel flares up with Resonance Aura)
(Dragon hits the wall and it’s wings get locked out)
Daniel: Triumph Break!!
Announcer: Dragon makes a strong hit!!
(Apocalypse glows red and speeds up)
Everyone: *Gasps*
(My thoughts): It didn’t burst!?
Daniel: What the!?
Aiden: Apocalypse!!
(Aiden flares up with Dark Resonance Aura)
Aiden: Be destroyed!! Final Blast!!
(Apocalypse hits Dragon hard, Dragon bursts and it’s layer explodes into into small fragments)
Daniel: Dragon no!!
Drone: It’s Prime Apocalypse with a burst finish! Aiden Peregrin wins with a burst finish!
Announcer: Dragon has been destroyed. It’s only small pieces now.
(A tiny fragment of Dragon lands under Aiden’s foot, Aiden stomps on it)
Announcer: With a sad ending we will have to say goodbye to everyone and have a nice rest of your day.
(The lights go off)
(Daniel stays on the ground in shock)
Daniel: Dragon…
(A tear slips down Daniel’s face)
Daniel: WHY!!!
(Brooke walk up to him in the shadows)
Brooke: Are you gonna let him get away with it.
Daniel: *Gasps* No, not ever!
Brooke: Then come with me.
(Brooke drags Daniel into my dorm)
Me: Hey! What’s the dealio!
Brooke: He needs your help.
(Brooke walks away)
Daniel: I wanna fix Dragon. Can you help me with that?
Me: Of course I can!!
(Daniel wipes a tear off his face)
Daniel: Let’s do it!!
(I pull out the Dynachi System Blueprints)
Daniel: You keep that on you?
Me: I keep it for situations just like this.
Daniel: Cool!!
Me: Anyways, tell me what you want Dragon’s evolution to be about!!
Daniel: I want Dragon to bounce off of stuff and be able to get wicked attacks!!
(Daniel puts the fragments of dragon next to me)
Me: I’m sure I can incorporate that!!
(I start typing super fast)
Daniel: You're a fast typer!
Me: Just a talent.
(I pull up an Image on the screen)
Daniel: I love it, let's get working!!
(Daniel starts working on the bey)
Me: Sharper angle on the blade!!
Daniel: Ok!
(30 minutes later)
Me: Alright, the 3D printer will do the finishing touches!
(Daniel’s stomach growls)
Daniel: Sorry!!
Me: No problem, let's go get a snack!!
(In the kitchen)
Me: Hello!!
???: Hello kids!! What would you like!!
Daniel: Some churros please!!
???: On it!!
Me: So how are you doing!!
???: Good, Thanks for asking!!
Daniel: We haven’t caught your name yet.
Ange: I’m Ange! The cook for BC Sol!!
Me: Nice to meet you Ange!!
(Ange gives us our Churros)
Daniel: Thanks!!
(We run back to the workshop)
(At the workshops)
Aiden: I will not let Dynachi beys stop me from taking over beyblade.
(Aiden walks quietly into the workshop)
Aiden: So that means I will have to make a Dynachi bey.
(Aiden takes the Blueprints and runs off)
(We get back to the workshop)
Me: Hey where’s the blueprints!!
Dante: Maybe under the desk!
Me: I already checked there! Oh well I have a backup.
Dante: Dang, you really are prepared!!
Me: We don’t need it. Dragon’s finished!!
Daniel: Aw Yeah!! Royal Dragon is ready to rock!!
Me: Wanna test it!!
Daniel: You wanna battle me!
Me: Of course Dan we’re friends!!
Daniel: Awesome!!
Me: Let’s inspect each other's beys!!
Daniel: Alright!!
(My thoughts): Royal Dragon is a heavy attack type. I wouldn't be surprised if he sent me flying. It has bound blades but it looks like when it takes enough damage the bound blades become locked. Taking this thing down won’t be easy!!
Daniel: Alright, let’s get started!!
Me/Daniel: 3! 2! 1! Let it rip!!
Me: Rush Launch!!
Daniel: Dragon Launch!!
(Dragon and Valtryek swing at each other with a barrage of attacks)
Me: Go!!
(The Reboot tip stick comes out)
Daniel: Royal Recoil!!
(Valtryek gets sent flying)
Me: We’re not done yet!!
(Valtryek hits the wall and stays in)
Me: Valtryek!!
(I flare up with Resonance Aura)
Me: Valiant Spring Attack!!
(Dragon and Valtryek start clashing)
(Dragon starts clicking)
Daniel: It’s time!!
(Dragon’s bound blades stick out locked)
Daniel: Royal Break!!
(Huge Explosion happens)
Daniel: Go! Rise! Give it your all!!
(Valtryek gets sent flying and bursts)
Me: *Gasps*
(Valtryek’s parts hit the ground)
Daniel: We won!!
(Daniel jumps in the air with excitement)
Me: Good Game Daniel!!
Daniel: Thanks you did awesome too!!
(In Jay’s room)
Jay: Let it rip!!
(Jay’s Thoughts): I will not lose again!! My fans are counting on me!!
Dude nice chapter
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - UnseenBurst - Jun. 01, 2021
(Jun. 01, 2021 7:21 PM)JJustice Wrote: (Jun. 01, 2021 3:28 PM)Strikegamerv6 Wrote: Alright Ima change up the moveset a bit but ur in
Rankings so far
Lloyd: 60
Sebastian: 61
Jay: 99
Brooke: 110
Vlad: 160
Ryuji: 162
Adam: 200
Name: Daniel Koryu
Age: 10
Bey Name: Triumph Dragon 1A Charge Metal Royal Dragon Dynachi gear UR Sting upgraded Charge Metal'
Personality: The wild kid who loves having fun and when hurt (emotionally) gets really sensitive he looks up to his Dad Dante Koryu and plans to be just like him
Chapter 10 is out!!
Beyblade Burst Dynachi
Chapter 10
Rise to Victory Royal Dragon!!!
Daniel: I can’t wait to take this Aiden guy down!
Me: You do you bro.
Daniel: Dragon is winning this!
(Daniel goes out to the stage)
Announcer: Hello Bladers! Today we’re going to be doing a battle between attack types! Daniel Koryu Vs Aiden Peregrin Vs Lloyd Shirosagi!
Daniel: I’m showing you what beyblade is all about!
Aiden: Beyblade is my kingdom and I will not let you overthrow me.
Lloyd: I’m beating both of you!
Drone: First battle! Ready set!
Everyone: 3! 2! 1! Let it rip!
(Daniel and Lloyd pull off lightning launches)
Announcer: We’ve got some sweet Lightning Launches right outta the gate how will this end!
Lloyd: Tear it apart Luinor!
Announcer: Luinor heads straight for Apocalypse!
Aiden: Omega Blast!!
(Luinor bursts)
Lloyd: *Gasps*
Announcer: What devastating power! Luinor just burst in one hit!
Daniel: Dragon Launch!!
Aiden: Useless.
Announcer: Dragon is making strong attacks but Apocalypse is taking them like a champ!!
Daniel: It’s time you burst! Dragon!!
(Daniel flares up with Resonance Aura)
(Dragon hits the wall and it’s wings get locked out)
Daniel: Triumph Break!!
Announcer: Dragon makes a strong hit!!
(Apocalypse glows red and speeds up)
Everyone: *Gasps*
(My thoughts): It didn’t burst!?
Daniel: What the!?
Aiden: Apocalypse!!
(Aiden flares up with Dark Resonance Aura)
Aiden: Be destroyed!! Final Blast!!
(Apocalypse hits Dragon hard, Dragon bursts and it’s layer explodes into into small fragments)
Daniel: Dragon no!!
Drone: It’s Prime Apocalypse with a burst finish! Aiden Peregrin wins with a burst finish!
Announcer: Dragon has been destroyed. It’s only small pieces now.
(A tiny fragment of Dragon lands under Aiden’s foot, Aiden stomps on it)
Announcer: With a sad ending we will have to say goodbye to everyone and have a nice rest of your day.
(The lights go off)
(Daniel stays on the ground in shock)
Daniel: Dragon…
(A tear slips down Daniel’s face)
Daniel: WHY!!!
(Brooke walk up to him in the shadows)
Brooke: Are you gonna let him get away with it.
Daniel: *Gasps* No, not ever!
Brooke: Then come with me.
(Brooke drags Daniel into my dorm)
Me: Hey! What’s the dealio!
Brooke: He needs your help.
(Brooke walks away)
Daniel: I wanna fix Dragon. Can you help me with that?
Me: Of course I can!!
(Daniel wipes a tear off his face)
Daniel: Let’s do it!!
(I pull out the Dynachi System Blueprints)
Daniel: You keep that on you?
Me: I keep it for situations just like this.
Daniel: Cool!!
Me: Anyways, tell me what you want Dragon’s evolution to be about!!
Daniel: I want Dragon to bounce off of stuff and be able to get wicked attacks!!
(Daniel puts the fragments of dragon next to me)
Me: I’m sure I can incorporate that!!
(I start typing super fast)
Daniel: You're a fast typer!
Me: Just a talent.
(I pull up an Image on the screen)
Daniel: I love it, let's get working!!
(Daniel starts working on the bey)
Me: Sharper angle on the blade!!
Daniel: Ok!
(30 minutes later)
Me: Alright, the 3D printer will do the finishing touches!
(Daniel’s stomach growls)
Daniel: Sorry!!
Me: No problem, let's go get a snack!!
(In the kitchen)
Me: Hello!!
???: Hello kids!! What would you like!!
Daniel: Some churros please!!
???: On it!!
Me: So how are you doing!!
???: Good, Thanks for asking!!
Daniel: We haven’t caught your name yet.
Ange: I’m Ange! The cook for BC Sol!!
Me: Nice to meet you Ange!!
(Ange gives us our Churros)
Daniel: Thanks!!
(We run back to the workshop)
(At the workshops)
Aiden: I will not let Dynachi beys stop me from taking over beyblade.
(Aiden walks quietly into the workshop)
Aiden: So that means I will have to make a Dynachi bey.
(Aiden takes the Blueprints and runs off)
(We get back to the workshop)
Me: Hey where’s the blueprints!!
Dante: Maybe under the desk!
Me: I already checked there! Oh well I have a backup.
Dante: Dang, you really are prepared!!
Me: We don’t need it. Dragon’s finished!!
Daniel: Aw Yeah!! Royal Dragon is ready to rock!!
Me: Wanna test it!!
Daniel: You wanna battle me!
Me: Of course Dan we’re friends!!
Daniel: Awesome!!
Me: Let’s inspect each other's beys!!
Daniel: Alright!!
(My thoughts): Royal Dragon is a heavy attack type. I wouldn't be surprised if he sent me flying. It has bound blades but it looks like when it takes enough damage the bound blades become locked. Taking this thing down won’t be easy!!
Daniel: Alright, let’s get started!!
Me/Daniel: 3! 2! 1! Let it rip!!
Me: Rush Launch!!
Daniel: Dragon Launch!!
(Dragon and Valtryek swing at each other with a barrage of attacks)
Me: Go!!
(The Reboot tip stick comes out)
Daniel: Royal Recoil!!
(Valtryek gets sent flying)
Me: We’re not done yet!!
(Valtryek hits the wall and stays in)
Me: Valtryek!!
(I flare up with Resonance Aura)
Me: Valiant Spring Attack!!
(Dragon and Valtryek start clashing)
(Dragon starts clicking)
Daniel: It’s time!!
(Dragon’s bound blades stick out locked)
Daniel: Royal Break!!
(Huge Explosion happens)
Daniel: Go! Rise! Give it your all!!
(Valtryek gets sent flying and bursts)
Me: *Gasps*
(Valtryek’s parts hit the ground)
Daniel: We won!!
(Daniel jumps in the air with excitement)
Me: Good Game Daniel!!
Daniel: Thanks you did awesome too!!
(In Jay’s room)
Jay: Let it rip!!
(Jay’s Thoughts): I will not lose again!! My fans are counting on me!!
Dude nice chapter
Thx Ima repost because of issues
Chapter 10 is out!!
Beyblade Burst Dynachi
Chapter 10
Rise to Victory Royal Dragon!!!
Daniel: I can’t wait to take this Aiden guy down!
Me: You do you bro.
Daniel: Dragon is winning this!
(Daniel goes out to the stage)
Announcer: Hello Bladers! Today we’re going to be doing a battle between attack types! Daniel Koryu Vs Aiden Peregrin Vs Lloyd Shirosagi!
Daniel: I’m showing you what beyblade is all about!
Aiden: Beyblade is my kingdom and I will not let you overthrow me.
Lloyd: I’m beating both of you!
Drone: First battle! Ready set!
Everyone: 3! 2! 1! Let it rip!
(Daniel and Lloyd pull off lightning launches)
Announcer: We’ve got some sweet Lightning Launches right outta the gate how will this end!
Lloyd: Tear it apart Luinor!
Announcer: Luinor heads straight for Apocalypse!
Aiden: Omega Blast!!
(Luinor bursts)
Lloyd: *Gasps*
Announcer: What devastating power! Luinor just burst in one hit!
Daniel: Dragon Launch!!
Aiden: Useless.
Announcer: Dragon is making strong attacks but Apocalypse is taking them like a champ!!
Daniel: It’s time you burst! Dragon!!
(Daniel flares up with Resonance Aura)
(Dragon hits the wall and it’s wings get locked out)
Daniel: Triumph Break!!
Announcer: Dragon makes a strong hit!!
(Apocalypse glows red and speeds up)
Everyone: *Gasps*
(My thoughts): It didn’t burst!?
Daniel: What the!?
Aiden: Apocalypse!!
(Aiden flares up with Dark Resonance Aura)
Aiden: Be destroyed!! Final Blast!!
(Apocalypse hits Dragon hard, Dragon bursts and it’s layer explodes into into small fragments)
Daniel: Dragon no!!
Drone: It’s Prime Apocalypse with a burst finish! Aiden Peregrin wins with a burst finish!
Announcer: Dragon has been destroyed. It’s only small pieces now.
(A tiny fragment of Dragon lands under Aiden’s foot, Aiden stomps on it)
Announcer: With a sad ending we will have to say goodbye to everyone and have a nice rest of your day.
(The lights go off)
(Daniel stays on the ground in shock)
Daniel: Dragon…
(A tear slips down Daniel’s face)
Daniel: WHY!!!
(Brooke walk up to him in the shadows)
Brooke: Are you gonna let him get away with it.
Daniel: *Gasps* No, not ever!
Brooke: Then come with me.
(Brooke drags Daniel into my dorm)
Me: Hey! What’s the dealio!
Brooke: He needs your help.
(Brooke walks away)
Daniel: I wanna fix Dragon. Can you help me with that?
Me: Of course I can!!
(Daniel wipes a tear off his face)
Daniel: Let’s do it!!
(I pull out the Dynachi System Blueprints)
Daniel: You keep that on you?
Me: I keep it for situations just like this.
Daniel: Cool!!
Me: Anyways, tell me what you want Dragon’s evolution to be about!!
Daniel: I want Dragon to bounce off of stuff and be able to get wicked attacks!!
(Daniel puts the fragments of dragon next to me)
Me: I’m sure I can incorporate that!!
(I start typing super fast)
Daniel: You're a fast typer!
Me: Just a talent.
(I pull up an Image on the screen)
Daniel: I love it, let's get working!!
(Daniel starts working on the bey)
Me: Sharper angle on the blade!!
Daniel: Ok!
(30 minutes later)
Me: Alright, the 3D printer will do the finishing touches!
(Daniel’s stomach growls)
Daniel: Sorry!!
Me: No problem, let's go get a snack!!
(In the kitchen)
Me: Hello!!
???: Hello kids!! What would you like!!
Daniel: Some churros please!!
???: On it!!
Me: So how are you doing!!
???: Good, Thanks for asking!!
Daniel: We haven’t caught your name yet.
Ange: I’m Ange! The cook for BC Sol!!
Me: Nice to meet you Ange!!
(Ange gives us our Churros)
Daniel: Thanks!!
(We run back to the workshop)
(At the workshops)
Aiden: I will not let Dynachi beys stop me from taking over beyblade.
(Aiden walks quietly into the workshop)
Aiden: So that means I will have to make a Dynachi bey.
(Aiden takes the Blueprints and runs off)
(We get back to the workshop)
Me: Hey where’s the blueprints!!
Dante: Maybe under the desk!
Me: I already checked there! Oh well I have a backup.
Dante: Dang, you really are prepared!!
Me: We don’t need it. Dragon’s finished!!
Daniel: Aw Yeah!! Royal Dragon is ready to rock!!
Me: Wanna test it!!
Daniel: You wanna battle me!
Me: Of course Dan we’re friends!!
Daniel: Awesome!!
Me: Let’s inspect each other's beys!!
Daniel: Alright!!
(My thoughts): Royal Dragon is a heavy attack type. I wouldn't be surprised if he sent me flying. It has bound blades but it looks like when it takes enough damage the bound blades become locked. Taking this thing down won’t be easy!!
Daniel: Alright, let’s get started!!
Me/Daniel: 3! 2! 1! Let it rip!!
Me: Rush Launch!!
Daniel: Dragon Launch!!
(Dragon and Valtryek swing at each other with a barrage of attacks)
Me: Go!!
(The Reboot tip stick comes out)
Daniel: Royal Recoil!!
(Valtryek gets sent flying)
Me: We’re not done yet!!
(Valtryek hits the wall and stays in)
Me: Valtryek!!
(I flare up with Resonance Aura)
Me: Valiant Spring Attack!!
(Dragon and Valtryek start clashing)
(Dragon starts clicking)
Daniel: It’s time!!
(Dragon’s bound blades stick out locked)
Daniel: Royal Break!!
(Huge Explosion happens)
Daniel: Go! Rise! Give it your all!!
(Valtryek gets sent flying and bursts)
Me: *Gasps*
(Valtryek’s parts hit the ground)
Daniel: We won!!
(Daniel jumps in the air with excitement)
Me: Good Game Daniel!!
Daniel: Thanks you did awesome too!!
(In Jay’s room)
Jay: Let it rip!!
(Jay’s Thoughts): I will not lose again!! My fans are counting on me!!
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - LegendJustice - Jun. 01, 2021
(Jun. 01, 2021 7:22 PM)Strikegamerv6 Wrote: (Jun. 01, 2021 7:21 PM)JJustice Wrote: Dude nice chapter
Thx Ima repost because of issues
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