RE: BEYBLADE Burst Spirit - Dash Driver - Jul. 07, 2019
(Jul. 05, 2019 7:08 PM)CheetoBlader Wrote: (Jul. 05, 2019 6:36 PM)Dash Driver Wrote: I'll search it up.
Wait did I make him?
No. Ok then.
Well who made him then?
RE: BEYBLADE Burst Spirit - Dt20000 - Jul. 07, 2019
add all the chapters to the first post
RE: BEYBLADE Burst Spirit - CheetoBlader - Jul. 07, 2019
(Jul. 07, 2019 5:03 AM)Dt20000 Wrote: add all the chapters to the first post I’ll do it when I get 5+ chapters.
(Jul. 07, 2019 1:51 AM)Dash Driver Wrote: (Jul. 05, 2019 7:08 PM)CheetoBlader Wrote: No. Ok then.
Well who made him then? Me.
RE: BEYBLADE Burst Spirit - Dash Driver - Jul. 07, 2019
Ok... I'll have to look at some other people's stories then.
Is it Roan?
It’s Roan and his beyblade is Revenge.
Is Roan’s last name Jamieson?
I got this info from Sir Saitama’s awesome story Beyblade Burst Zero.
RE: BEYBLADE Burst Spirit - Suoh sadboii - Jul. 07, 2019
It's definitely Roan. I perfectly remember his description and it matches.
RE: BEYBLADE Burst Spirit - Dash Driver - Jul. 08, 2019
(Jul. 07, 2019 11:20 PM)Suoh sadboii Wrote: It's definitely Roan. I perfectly remember his description and it matches. I like your username.
RE: BEYBLADE Burst Spirit - #Fafnir - Jul. 08, 2019
Can't wait for next chapter!
RE: BEYBLADE Burst Spirit - CheetoBlader - Jul. 08, 2019
Chapter 4: The Really Long Speech About Grouping.
”Roan Jamieson and I run the camp!” The campers went wild. “These are the staff members!” Roan pointed towards the side of the stage and called up someone. “Please welcome our Unranked Squad leader, Mark Denpert!” Mark walked to the microphone and started talking and smiling.
“I can’t wait to train all of my Unranked Bladers! Mark said with an annoying level of joy (in Reagan’s opinion). “And remember kids, having fun is what’s most important!”
Reagan started to pull out her Nerf gun so Harold pushed it back into it’s holster. “He’s so annoying! Let me shoot him with my Nerf Gun!” People around Reagan looked at her and moved away from her.
“Our Low Ranked Squad Leader is Levra Raftad!” Roan said while having the microphone be snatched out of his hand.
“You maggots are gonna be in tip top shape when I’m done with you!” This gave all of the low ranked bladers, like Rantara, goosebumps.
“Our Average Ranked Squad leader is Yugoa Hajamiko!” Roan said while stepping back from the microphone.
“I guess I’m here. Hi.” The crowd was silent for a second then started cheering.
“Our Skilled Ranked leader is Nika Aoi!” Roan said letting Nika take the microphone.
‘I’ll make sure to train you all to best my bro, Valt!” Nika said.
All of the sudden from the audience, a boy with blue, spiky hair called out “What about your other bro? The one with the same age as you!”
“Shut up, Toko! This is my small speech!” Nika said walking off to the side of the stage.
“And our Top Ranked Bladers will be lead by me and Colin Uchiha!” Roan invited Colin up to the stage.
“Good luck, bladers!” Colin said.
“Now bladers! Go to the maze find your cabins! You must work with your group!”
…To Be Continued
Sorry for the short/boring chapter, I wanted to post today and went to the tournament and down south today and got back and had little time. At least I kept my word :).
RE: BEYBLADE Burst Spirit - #Fafnir - Jul. 08, 2019
(Jul. 08, 2019 5:01 AM)CheetoBlader Wrote: Chapter 4: The Really Long Speech About Grouping.
”Roan Jamieson and I run the camp!” The campers went wild. “These are the staff members!” Roan pointed towards the side of the stage and called up someone. “Please welcome our Unranked Squad leader, Mark Denpert!” Mark walked to the microphone and started talking and smiling.
“I can’t wait to train all of my Unranked Bladers! Mark said with an annoying level of joy (in Reagan’s opinion). “And remember kids, having fun is what’s most important!”
Reagan started to pull out her Nerf gun so Harold pushed it back into it’s holster. “He’s so annoying! Let me shoot him with my Nerf Gun!” People around Reagan looked at her and moved away from her.
“Our Average Ranked Squad leader is Yugoa Hajamiko!” Roan said while stepping back from the microphone.
“I guess I’m here. Hi.” The crowd was silent for a second then started cheering.
“Our Skilled Ranked leader is Nika Aoi!” Roan said letting Nika take the microphone.
‘I’ll make sure to train you all to best my bro, Valt!” Nika said.
All of the sudden from the audience, a boy with blue, spiky hair called out “What about your other bro? The one with the same age as you!”
“Shut up, Toko! This is my small speech!” Nika said walking off to the side of the stage.
“And our Top Ranked Bladers will be lead by me and Colin Uchiha!” Roan invited Colin up to the stage.
“Good luck, bladers!” Colin said.
“Now bladers! Go to the maze find your cabins! You must work with your group!”
…To Be Continued
Sorry for the short/boring chapter, I wanted to post today and went to the tournament and down south today and got back and had little time. At least I kept my word .
Edited post.
RE: BEYBLADE Burst Spirit - CheetoBlader - Jul. 08, 2019
(Jul. 08, 2019 5:06 AM)#Fafnir Wrote: (Jul. 08, 2019 5:01 AM)CheetoBlader Wrote: Chapter 4: The Really Long Speech About Grouping.
”Roan Jamieson and I run the camp!” The campers went wild. “These are the staff members!” Roan pointed towards the side of the stage and called up someone. “Please welcome our Unranked Squad leader, Mark Denpert!” Mark walked to the microphone and started talking and smiling.
“I can’t wait to train all of my Unranked Bladers! Mark said with an annoying level of joy (in Reagan’s opinion). “And remember kids, having fun is what’s most important!”
Reagan started to pull out her Nerf gun so Harold pushed it back into it’s holster. “He’s so annoying! Let me shoot him with my Nerf Gun!” People around Reagan looked at her and moved away from her.
“Our Average Ranked Squad leader is Yugoa Hajamiko!” Roan said while stepping back from the microphone.
“I guess I’m here. Hi.” The crowd was silent for a second then started cheering.
“Our Skilled Ranked leader is Nika Aoi!” Roan said letting Nika take the microphone.
‘I’ll make sure to train you all to best my bro, Valt!” Nika said.
All of the sudden from the audience, a boy with blue, spiky hair called out “What about your other bro? The one with the same age as you!”
“Shut up, Toko! This is my small speech!” Nika said walking off to the side of the stage.
“And our Top Ranked Bladers will be lead by me and Colin Uchiha!” Roan invited Colin up to the stage.
“Good luck, bladers!” Colin said.
“Now bladers! Go to the maze find your cabins! You must work with your group!”
…To Be Continued
Sorry for the short/boring chapter, I wanted to post today and went to the tournament and down south today and got back and had little time. At least I kept my word .
A hint for my story and a little bit of a back story: Colin Uchiha, the Great Great grandson of Sasuke Uchiha(From Naruto) inherits the Sharingan. If you want to know more, PM me. Great chapter CheetoBlader!
You sure it wasn’t boring?
RE: BEYBLADE Burst Spirit - #Fafnir - Jul. 08, 2019
(Jul. 08, 2019 5:14 AM)CheetoBlader Wrote: (Jul. 08, 2019 5:06 AM)#Fafnir Wrote: A hint for my story and a little bit of a back story: Colin Uchiha, the Great Great grandson of Sasuke Uchiha(From Naruto) inherits the Sharingan. If you want to know more, PM me. Great chapter CheetoBlader!
You sure it wasn’t boring?
Not to me!
RE: BEYBLADE Burst Spirit - CheetoBlader - Jul. 08, 2019
(Jul. 08, 2019 5:15 AM)#Fafnir Wrote: (Jul. 08, 2019 5:14 AM)CheetoBlader Wrote: You sure it wasn’t boring?
Not to me! *nods head slowly* Interesting… very interesting.
RE: BEYBLADE Burst Spirit - #Fafnir - Jul. 08, 2019
I love the part about the Nerf gun!
RE: BEYBLADE Burst Spirit - Dt20000 - Jul. 08, 2019
(Jul. 08, 2019 5:16 AM)CheetoBlader Wrote: (Jul. 08, 2019 5:15 AM)#Fafnir Wrote: Not to me! *nods head slowly* Interesting… very interesting.
Me: *walks over from someplace far away and punches you across the face* No.
RE: BEYBLADE Burst Spirit - CheetoBlader - Jul. 08, 2019
(Jul. 08, 2019 5:19 AM)Dt20000 Wrote: (Jul. 08, 2019 5:16 AM)CheetoBlader Wrote: *nods head slowly* Interesting… very interesting.
Me: *walks over from someplace far away and punches you across the face* No.
Why?
RE: BEYBLADE Burst Spirit - #Fafnir - Jul. 08, 2019
(Jul. 08, 2019 5:19 AM)Dt20000 Wrote: (Jul. 08, 2019 5:16 AM)CheetoBlader Wrote: *nods head slowly* Interesting… very interesting.
Me: *walks over from someplace far away and punches you across the face* No.
Me: *That wasn't very nice*
RE: BEYBLADE Burst Spirit - Dash Driver - Jul. 09, 2019
(Jul. 08, 2019 5:01 AM)CheetoBlader Wrote: Chapter 4: The Really Long Speech About Grouping.
”Roan Jamieson and I run the camp!” The campers went wild. “These are the staff members!” Roan pointed towards the side of the stage and called up someone. “Please welcome our Unranked Squad leader, Mark Denpert!” Mark walked to the microphone and started talking and smiling.
“I can’t wait to train all of my Unranked Bladers! Mark said with an annoying level of joy (in Reagan’s opinion). “And remember kids, having fun is what’s most important!”
Reagan started to pull out her Nerf gun so Harold pushed it back into it’s holster. “He’s so annoying! Let me shoot him with my Nerf Gun!” People around Reagan looked at her and moved away from her.
“Our Average Ranked Squad leader is Yugoa Hajamiko!” Roan said while stepping back from the microphone.
“I guess I’m here. Hi.” The crowd was silent for a second then started cheering.
“Our Skilled Ranked leader is Nika Aoi!” Roan said letting Nika take the microphone.
‘I’ll make sure to train you all to best my bro, Valt!” Nika said.
All of the sudden from the audience, a boy with blue, spiky hair called out “What about your other bro? The one with the same age as you!”
“Shut up, Toko! This is my small speech!” Nika said walking off to the side of the stage.
“And our Top Ranked Bladers will be lead by me and Colin Uchiha!” Roan invited Colin up to the stage.
“Good luck, bladers!” Colin said.
“Now bladers! Go to the maze find your cabins! You must work with your group!”
…To Be Continued
Sorry for the short/boring chapter, I wanted to post today and went to the tournament and down south today and got back and had little time. At least I kept my word . Ooooh, awesome chapter! And no, it wasn't boring.
RE: BEYBLADE Burst Spirit - CheetoBlader - Jul. 10, 2019
Lol, guys, sorry for some bad grammar in the latest chapter. I made it when I was tired. (I woke up at 6:30 AM, went to the tournament at 11:20, got back at 2:30 PM, went to Southern VA, came back at like 7, played outside, got inside at like 9, relaxed, made chapter.) :)
RE: BEYBLADE Burst Spirit - Dt20000 - Jul. 10, 2019
What did your post say before you edited it.
RE: BEYBLADE Burst Spirit - CheetoBlader - Jul. 10, 2019
(Jul. 10, 2019 4:57 AM)Dt20000 Wrote: What did your post say before you edited it.
The post right before yours? Those were tags that didn’t work.
RE: BEYBLADE Burst Spirit - Dt20000 - Jul. 10, 2019
(Jul. 10, 2019 2:10 PM)CheetoBlader Wrote: (Jul. 10, 2019 4:57 AM)Dt20000 Wrote: What did your post say before you edited it.
The post right before yours? Those were tags that didn’t work.
Oh, because I got an alert saying I was mentioned in that post
RE: BEYBLADE Burst Spirit - CheetoBlader - Jul. 10, 2019
(Jul. 10, 2019 6:02 PM)Dt20000 Wrote: (Jul. 10, 2019 2:10 PM)CheetoBlader Wrote: The post right before yours? Those were tags that didn’t work.
Oh, because I got an alert saying I was mentioned in that post Yeah. Your tag worked. The others… not so much.
RE: BEYBLADE Burst Spirit - Dt20000 - Aug. 08, 2019
WHERE IS CHAPTER FIVE
RE: BEYBLADE Burst Spirit - CheetoBlader - Aug. 08, 2019
(Aug. 08, 2019 5:28 PM)Dt20000 Wrote: WHERE IS CHAPTER FIVE
I’ll try to get it out by the 14th.
RE: BEYBLADE Burst Spirit - Dt20000 - Aug. 08, 2019
(Aug. 08, 2019 5:36 PM)CheetoBlader Wrote: (Aug. 08, 2019 5:28 PM)Dt20000 Wrote: WHERE IS CHAPTER FIVE
I’ll try to get it out by the 14th.
But the Fourteenth is the first day of school!
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