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RE: Beyblade Burst Zero - Sir Saitama - Apr. 09, 2019
Chapter 12 - Final Battle! Pegasus vs Revenge Part 1!
Spoiler (Click to View)
Last time on Beyblade Burst Zero! Paris and the crew start training, when they are suddenly approached by Daigo’s brother, Ryota!
“I’m ready,” said Paris, glancing down at Pegasus.
He scanned the crowd and to his right was the BeyClub.
“Paris! Paris! Paris!” They chanted his name.
Roan chuckled. “Well, it looks like the crowd really does like you.”
Paris grinned, “I’m just excited to battle you today.”
“First Battle!” The referee announced. “This is a three point match!”
“Ready, set!” Roan and Paris held their launchers out.
“Three!”
“Two!”
“One!”
“Let it rip!” Both bladers cried in unison.
The two attack types zoomed through the stadium, loudly booming.
“Go, finish him!” They said together, as Smash Revenge and Immortal Pegasus collided, a massive explosion following.
Revenge quickly overpowered Pegasus as it was knocked back. Smash Revenge chased after it at incredible speeds.
“Now!” Roan called out, his hair sparkling under the spotlight. “Upper Smash Break!”
Paris gulped. He expected Roan to pull of some kind of move, but not something as farfetched at this.
Smash Revenge drilled into Pegasus and slammed it into the stadium, warping through the outer area and repeating the process.
Pegasus quickly lost a click and as a result, it flung into the air.
“Not on my watch! Immortal Starblast Attack!” Paris yelled.
Pegasus’ avatar appeared as its horn fired a cosmic beam. Immortal Pegasus flew down, crushing through Smash Revenge.
Roan gasped, as Revenge was pushed back. Both beys continued to warp around each other, waiting for the other to make their move.
“I’ll win this!” Paris exclaimed. “Immortal Stormbringer!”
Paris used its cosmic maelstrom, as a barrier appeared around Smash Revenge, trapping it.
Pegasus fired a string of chain attacks, as Revenge attempted to escape.
“End of the line, ‘champ! Smash Counter!” Roan’s voice echoed through the halls.
Smash Counter instantly clashed with Immortal Stormbringer as Revenge glowed up, breaking free from the vortex.
“What?” Paris said, surprisedly.
“That’s not all!” Roan grinned. Revenge’s Smash Counter, in addition to cancelling Immortal Stormbringer, penetrated through Pegasus.
Immortal Pegasus was thrown off track but still proceeded to bolt at full speed.
“Immortal Slash!” Paris roared.
“Super Revenge Slash!” Roan thundered.
Both beys lit up with a whip forming around the bey’s side, slashing furiously at each other.
Pegasus was unable to cope with Revenge’s intensity as it landed onto the stadium wall and burst, shooting through the air.
The attack-type’s three pieces landed into Paris’ hand.
“That’s a Burst Finish! Two points to Smash Revenge! The score is now 2-0!” The referee declared.
The BeyClub weren’t in a good mood. Suddenly, Aiga leapt out of his seat and his voice exploded,
“COME ON PARIS! YOU CAN DO IT!”
Paris, confused, turned behind him only to see Aiga chant his name.
“Paris!” He said, melodically as eventually, the entire BeyClub joined in.
Soon enough, half of the hundreds of viewers were cheering for him.
Paris rubbed his eyes, and smiled.
“Alright, Roan! That’s not all I have, and I’m about to show you in the next battle!”
Roan burst with joy. “No holding back this time, ‘kay? You can do better than this.”
Paris nodded, glancing down at Pegasus. “And I’ll do it with you too.”
The referee pulled his hand, calling the second battle.
“Ready, set!” Paris held his launcher with all his strength, the power of Pegasus flowing through his hands.
“Three!”
“Two!”
“One!” Paris leapt into the air.
“Let it rip!”
Immortal Pegasus instantly swung its feathers into Smash Revenge, drawing the first clash of the battle.
“Come on! Supernova Shoot!” Paris shouted, as Pegasus ravaged through Revenge, knocking it into the outer ring of the arena.
Roan laughed. “You’ll have to try harder! Now, Smash Counter!”
Paris embraced the unexpected, like Charles said to do.
Smash Revenge tilted on its driver and shot through Pegasus, piercing through its layer.
“No! Hold on Pegasus! Paris cried.
Immortal Pegasus was effortlessly tossed into the air, and at a miraculous speed, it spiralled downward.
“Immortal Starblast Attack!” Paris commanded.
Pegasus blasted through Smash Revenge.
“Finish him! Immortal Slash!”
Roan wagged his finger. “Don’t forget! Super Revenge Slash!”
Both attack types hacked through each other, as light expelled from the stadium, flinging both beys into the air.
“I know you can do it,” Aiga muttered under his breath. Suddenly, Revenge touched the floor of the stadium first, landing at Roan’s feet.
“One point to Immortal Pegasus for an Over Finish! The score is now 2-1!” The referee announced.
A brief moment after, Pegasus landed at Paris’ feet.
Paris collected Pegasus and raised it to the air.
“Alright! We did it! We did it!”
Roan grinned, “Congratulations. You’ve gotten stronger from the first day you challenged Valt Aoi. But don’t start celebrating now.”
“Huh?” Paris asked.
“Because this is only the beginning,” Roan said.
“I’m ready,” said Paris, glancing down at Pegasus.
He scanned the crowd and to his right was the BeyClub.
“Paris! Paris! Paris!” They chanted his name.
Roan chuckled. “Well, it looks like the crowd really does like you.”
Paris grinned, “I’m just excited to battle you today.”
“First Battle!” The referee announced. “This is a three point match!”
“Ready, set!” Roan and Paris held their launchers out.
“Three!”
“Two!”
“One!”
“Let it rip!” Both bladers cried in unison.
The two attack types zoomed through the stadium, loudly booming.
“Go, finish him!” They said together, as Smash Revenge and Immortal Pegasus collided, a massive explosion following.
Revenge quickly overpowered Pegasus as it was knocked back. Smash Revenge chased after it at incredible speeds.
“Now!” Roan called out, his hair sparkling under the spotlight. “Upper Smash Break!”
Paris gulped. He expected Roan to pull of some kind of move, but not something as farfetched at this.
Smash Revenge drilled into Pegasus and slammed it into the stadium, warping through the outer area and repeating the process.
Pegasus quickly lost a click and as a result, it flung into the air.
“Not on my watch! Immortal Starblast Attack!” Paris yelled.
Pegasus’ avatar appeared as its horn fired a cosmic beam. Immortal Pegasus flew down, crushing through Smash Revenge.
Roan gasped, as Revenge was pushed back. Both beys continued to warp around each other, waiting for the other to make their move.
“I’ll win this!” Paris exclaimed. “Immortal Stormbringer!”
Paris used its cosmic maelstrom, as a barrier appeared around Smash Revenge, trapping it.
Pegasus fired a string of chain attacks, as Revenge attempted to escape.
“End of the line, ‘champ! Smash Counter!” Roan’s voice echoed through the halls.
Smash Counter instantly clashed with Immortal Stormbringer as Revenge glowed up, breaking free from the vortex.
“What?” Paris said, surprisedly.
“That’s not all!” Roan grinned. Revenge’s Smash Counter, in addition to cancelling Immortal Stormbringer, penetrated through Pegasus.
Immortal Pegasus was thrown off track but still proceeded to bolt at full speed.
“Immortal Slash!” Paris roared.
“Super Revenge Slash!” Roan thundered.
Both beys lit up with a whip forming around the bey’s side, slashing furiously at each other.
Pegasus was unable to cope with Revenge’s intensity as it landed onto the stadium wall and burst, shooting through the air.
The attack-type’s three pieces landed into Paris’ hand.
“That’s a Burst Finish! Two points to Smash Revenge! The score is now 2-0!” The referee declared.
The BeyClub weren’t in a good mood. Suddenly, Aiga leapt out of his seat and his voice exploded,
“COME ON PARIS! YOU CAN DO IT!”
Paris, confused, turned behind him only to see Aiga chant his name.
“Paris!” He said, melodically as eventually, the entire BeyClub joined in.
Soon enough, half of the hundreds of viewers were cheering for him.
Paris rubbed his eyes, and smiled.
“Alright, Roan! That’s not all I have, and I’m about to show you in the next battle!”
Roan burst with joy. “No holding back this time, ‘kay? You can do better than this.”
Paris nodded, glancing down at Pegasus. “And I’ll do it with you too.”
The referee pulled his hand, calling the second battle.
“Ready, set!” Paris held his launcher with all his strength, the power of Pegasus flowing through his hands.
“Three!”
“Two!”
“One!” Paris leapt into the air.
“Let it rip!”
Immortal Pegasus instantly swung its feathers into Smash Revenge, drawing the first clash of the battle.
“Come on! Supernova Shoot!” Paris shouted, as Pegasus ravaged through Revenge, knocking it into the outer ring of the arena.
Roan laughed. “You’ll have to try harder! Now, Smash Counter!”
Paris embraced the unexpected, like Charles said to do.
Smash Revenge tilted on its driver and shot through Pegasus, piercing through its layer.
“No! Hold on Pegasus! Paris cried.
Immortal Pegasus was effortlessly tossed into the air, and at a miraculous speed, it spiralled downward.
“Immortal Starblast Attack!” Paris commanded.
Pegasus blasted through Smash Revenge.
“Finish him! Immortal Slash!”
Roan wagged his finger. “Don’t forget! Super Revenge Slash!”
Both attack types hacked through each other, as light expelled from the stadium, flinging both beys into the air.
“I know you can do it,” Aiga muttered under his breath. Suddenly, Revenge touched the floor of the stadium first, landing at Roan’s feet.
“One point to Immortal Pegasus for an Over Finish! The score is now 2-1!” The referee announced.
A brief moment after, Pegasus landed at Paris’ feet.
Paris collected Pegasus and raised it to the air.
“Alright! We did it! We did it!”
Roan grinned, “Congratulations. You’ve gotten stronger from the first day you challenged Valt Aoi. But don’t start celebrating now.”
“Huh?” Paris asked.
“Because this is only the beginning,” Roan said.
RE: Beyblade Burst Zero - Sir Saitama - Apr. 12, 2019
Chapter 13 - Final Battle! Pegasus vs Revenge Part 2!
Spoiler (Click to View)
Last time on Beyblade Burst Zero! Paris is off to a shaky start with Roan and loses two points! After giving it his all and earning a point, the intensity is rising!
Paris closed his eyes and stepped back.
“What’s he doing?” Taiki asked.
The boy stopped once he was at the exiting ramp, and allowed Pegasus’ power to flow into his hands once more.
“I’m ready,” he said, with a confident voice.
“You better be, because I’m not holding back any longer,” Roan responded, truthfully.
The referee placed his hand and called for the third battle.
“Ready, set!”
“Three!” Paris sprinted toward the stadium.
“Two!” He rocketed into the air, his legs like springs.
“One!” The boy spun around like a mini-tornado.
“Let it rip!” The two bladers cried in unison.
Smash Revenge and Immortal Pegasus mimicked each others movements as they surged through the stadium.
“Go now Pegasus! Take him down!” Paris called, as Pegasus was about to chop through Revenge, its feathers narrowly missed.
“What?” Paris gasped, as Pegasus dived through the center of the stadium.
Toko observed his tablet, as the BeyClub leaned in, crowding around him.
“Smash Revenge’s height was too tall for Pegasus,” the blue-haired boy informed.
Roan smiled, “Show your strength Revenge! Upper Smash Break!”
It loomed on the spot and gradually built momentum, charging right through Pegasus.
The attack-type bey hit the wall and rebounded at a greater speed than its original.
“Don’t give up! Supernova Shoot!” Paris cried. Pegasus shot into the middle of the arena and clashed with Revenge.
Replicating the first battle, Immortal Pegasus was flung into the air.
“Not on my watch! Immortal Starblast Attack!”
Pegasus skydived, aiming for Smash Revenge, however it quickly pulled back, the attacking bey slamming into the wall.
Pegasus expended a great amount of stamina and wobbled, heading for the middle of the stadium.
Roan projected his voice loudly, “Full power! Super Revenge Slash!”
An intimidating beam of red light formed on the bey, as it ran the saber through Pegasus.
“Let’s show him our full power! Immortal Slash!” Paris yelled.
Pegasus’ avatar appeared, shooting a cosmic beam from its horn.
Immortal Pegasus drove its feathers into Smash Revenge as the two powerhouses dueled.
Pegasus seemed to have the upper hand as it withstood Revenge’s attacks for longer than it should’ve.
Roan’s eyes shook with worry.
“No, I can’t lose like this!”
His hair suddenly flicked upward, as he shouted, “I won’t lose! My goal is to become the best blader in the world! And I’ll accomplish it!”
The amount of sincerity in Roan’s voice made Paris realise the tougher opponents lurking out there. Perhaps a few were scattered around the crowd.
Revenge suddenly overpowered Pegasus, sending it into the air as it lost two clicks.
“Hold on, buddy!” Paris said.
The BeyClub were held to their seats as it was unclear who was going to emerge victorious. Revenge seemed to be running out of stamina.
Pegasus and Revenge dived in for another clash, as dust quickly filled the stadium.
As soon as the coast was clear, Smash Revenge spun unstably whilst Pegasus spun smoothly.
Immortal Pegasus proceeded toward Revenge, as fast as the bey could.
“End this, Pegasus!"
Those were the last three words from Paris as the stadium shook, Pegasus jabbing its feathers into Smash Revenge.
Both attack types were knocked back, as Pegasus dived in for a second round.
“Now! End this Revenge!”
“Let’s win this, Pegasus!”
Pegasus couldn’t handle the pressure any longer, as Revenge surged forward for one final attack.
“Your time is up, Paris,” Roan said, “Now! Smash Counter!”
With such electrifying force, Revenge ruthlessly launched Pegasus into the air and the following was not what anybody expected.
Immortal Pegasus hurtled downward but Revenge pushed forward and glowed.
“It’s all over! Triple Smash Brave!” Roan roared.
Pegasus fell onto Revenge’s scorching layer and tossed upward, separating into three parts.
Immortal Pegasus’ layer, disc and driver fell at poor Paris’ feet.
“Two points to Smash Revenge for a Burst Finish! The score is now 4-1; Roan Jamison wins!”
Paris fell to his knees as pearls of tears rolled down his cheeks.
Roan, sympathetically, walked over to his opponent and offered his hand.
“You pushed me to my limits. And that’s something I respect. Let’s battle again sometime, yeah?” Roan smiled.
Paris wiped the tears from his eyes and returned to his normal, cheerful self.
“Yeah!” He exclaimed.
On the journey back home, nobody had said a word until Taiki broke the silence.
“What a battle,” he said.
“Yeah! It was so awesome! I can’t wait to battle him again!” Paris replied.
Taiki glanced over, staring.
“Why are you so cheerful all the time?”
Paris grinned,” ‘Cuz there’s no reason to be sad. I know Roan’s a strong blader, and I wonder who else is out there.”
Paris closed his eyes and stepped back.
“What’s he doing?” Taiki asked.
The boy stopped once he was at the exiting ramp, and allowed Pegasus’ power to flow into his hands once more.
“I’m ready,” he said, with a confident voice.
“You better be, because I’m not holding back any longer,” Roan responded, truthfully.
The referee placed his hand and called for the third battle.
“Ready, set!”
“Three!” Paris sprinted toward the stadium.
“Two!” He rocketed into the air, his legs like springs.
“One!” The boy spun around like a mini-tornado.
“Let it rip!” The two bladers cried in unison.
Smash Revenge and Immortal Pegasus mimicked each others movements as they surged through the stadium.
“Go now Pegasus! Take him down!” Paris called, as Pegasus was about to chop through Revenge, its feathers narrowly missed.
“What?” Paris gasped, as Pegasus dived through the center of the stadium.
Toko observed his tablet, as the BeyClub leaned in, crowding around him.
“Smash Revenge’s height was too tall for Pegasus,” the blue-haired boy informed.
Roan smiled, “Show your strength Revenge! Upper Smash Break!”
It loomed on the spot and gradually built momentum, charging right through Pegasus.
The attack-type bey hit the wall and rebounded at a greater speed than its original.
“Don’t give up! Supernova Shoot!” Paris cried. Pegasus shot into the middle of the arena and clashed with Revenge.
Replicating the first battle, Immortal Pegasus was flung into the air.
“Not on my watch! Immortal Starblast Attack!”
Pegasus skydived, aiming for Smash Revenge, however it quickly pulled back, the attacking bey slamming into the wall.
Pegasus expended a great amount of stamina and wobbled, heading for the middle of the stadium.
Roan projected his voice loudly, “Full power! Super Revenge Slash!”
An intimidating beam of red light formed on the bey, as it ran the saber through Pegasus.
“Let’s show him our full power! Immortal Slash!” Paris yelled.
Pegasus’ avatar appeared, shooting a cosmic beam from its horn.
Immortal Pegasus drove its feathers into Smash Revenge as the two powerhouses dueled.
Pegasus seemed to have the upper hand as it withstood Revenge’s attacks for longer than it should’ve.
Roan’s eyes shook with worry.
“No, I can’t lose like this!”
His hair suddenly flicked upward, as he shouted, “I won’t lose! My goal is to become the best blader in the world! And I’ll accomplish it!”
The amount of sincerity in Roan’s voice made Paris realise the tougher opponents lurking out there. Perhaps a few were scattered around the crowd.
Revenge suddenly overpowered Pegasus, sending it into the air as it lost two clicks.
“Hold on, buddy!” Paris said.
The BeyClub were held to their seats as it was unclear who was going to emerge victorious. Revenge seemed to be running out of stamina.
Pegasus and Revenge dived in for another clash, as dust quickly filled the stadium.
As soon as the coast was clear, Smash Revenge spun unstably whilst Pegasus spun smoothly.
Immortal Pegasus proceeded toward Revenge, as fast as the bey could.
“End this, Pegasus!"
Those were the last three words from Paris as the stadium shook, Pegasus jabbing its feathers into Smash Revenge.
Both attack types were knocked back, as Pegasus dived in for a second round.
“Now! End this Revenge!”
“Let’s win this, Pegasus!”
Pegasus couldn’t handle the pressure any longer, as Revenge surged forward for one final attack.
“Your time is up, Paris,” Roan said, “Now! Smash Counter!”
With such electrifying force, Revenge ruthlessly launched Pegasus into the air and the following was not what anybody expected.
Immortal Pegasus hurtled downward but Revenge pushed forward and glowed.
“It’s all over! Triple Smash Brave!” Roan roared.
Pegasus fell onto Revenge’s scorching layer and tossed upward, separating into three parts.
Immortal Pegasus’ layer, disc and driver fell at poor Paris’ feet.
“Two points to Smash Revenge for a Burst Finish! The score is now 4-1; Roan Jamison wins!”
Paris fell to his knees as pearls of tears rolled down his cheeks.
Roan, sympathetically, walked over to his opponent and offered his hand.
“You pushed me to my limits. And that’s something I respect. Let’s battle again sometime, yeah?” Roan smiled.
Paris wiped the tears from his eyes and returned to his normal, cheerful self.
“Yeah!” He exclaimed.
On the journey back home, nobody had said a word until Taiki broke the silence.
“What a battle,” he said.
“Yeah! It was so awesome! I can’t wait to battle him again!” Paris replied.
Taiki glanced over, staring.
“Why are you so cheerful all the time?”
Paris grinned,” ‘Cuz there’s no reason to be sad. I know Roan’s a strong blader, and I wonder who else is out there.”
RE: Beyblade Burst Zero - Fusion core - Apr. 12, 2019
The story was simply epic .
RE: Beyblade Burst Zero - Sir Saitama - Apr. 21, 2019
Chapter 14 - The Dark Dragon Rises!
Spoiler (Click to View)
Last time on Beyblade Burst Zero! Paris gives it his all, but loses to Roan’s trump card - Triple Smash Brave!
“Let it rip!” Paris and Charles cried in unison.
Ultra Centurion warped around the center of the stadium, and changed its angle, heading toward Pegasus.
“Ultra Revival!” Charles exclaimed as Centurion pummeled Immortal Pegasus, bursting it instantly.
“Oh man!” Paris quickly re-assembled his bey. “Up for a second battle?”
Ryota, Taiki and Aiga all hovered around Toko’s tablet.
“Uh, guys. You might want to check this out,” Toko frowned.
A clip automatically started playing, as Hanami spoke into a microphone,
“Ladies and gentlemen! It’s been confirmed that Roan and Daniel will have a battle! Any words from you, Daniel?”
Daniel soon appeared onto a black background, with some pretty terrifying noises in the far distance. The only thing visible was his gleaming eyes.
“Roan, prepare to be crushed.”
“And Roan, any words you’d like to share?” Hanami asked.
Roan nodded. “I’m going to walk away victorious.”
"The tension sure is rising! Stay turned as the battle will commence tonight!” Hanami announced.
Toko turned off his device.
“I reckon Roan’s going to use Triple Smash Brave again,” Aiga predicted.
“Yeah, but will it be enough for Demolish Break?” Taiki responded.
Paris looked down at Pegasus.
“We’ll see.”
A few hours later, the highly anticipated battle was about to begin.
“Welcome ladies and gentlemen! We have a battle between some of Japan’s strongest bladers! In our red corner, we have one of our Z5, Roan Jamieson!”
Roan, as usual, waved to the crowd as the lights dimmed, the spotlight fixing on him.
“And going against him is Daniel Aziel!” Hanami introduced excitedly.
The doors opened on Daniel’s side, however nobody initially appeared, before large thumping noises were present.
Daniel appeared and marched toward the stadium.
“What’s the spotlight for? Weakest blader?” He chuckled.
Roan curled his fingers around his launcher.
“I’ll let my bey do the talking.”
“Ready, set!”
“Three!”
“Two!”
“One!”
“Let it rip!”
Smash Revenge and Havoc Daemon shot at each other at full speeds.
“Super Revenge Slash!” Daniel commanded.
Revenge sunk its blade into one of Daemon’s wings, tossing it into the air.
Havoc Daemon hurtled toward Daniel’s unconcerned face, as he shouted,
“Go! Rebirth Dive!”
Daemon glided swiftly mid-air and shot into the stadium wall, rebounding off and zooming toward Revenge.
“Dodge it, Revenge!” Roan yelled as the attack-type surged through the stadium, barely missing Daemon’s attack.
“Luck seems to favor you,” Daniel clenched his fists. “But you won’t get so lucky this time. Demolish Break!”
Roan roared, “Upper Smash Break!”
The two attack-types swirled around each other, eventually breaking their orbits as they slammed into each other.
Daemon was knocked back and tilted on its Demolish driver, rushing back at a greater speed.
“What?” Roan gasped.
“Look at that!” Hanami stated the obvious. “Havoc Daemon makes a solid recovery!”
Daniel chuckled. “Lights out! Rebound Uppercut!”
His booming voice was projected so loudly it echoed through the entire building.
One of Daemon’s four wings lit up as it whipped Revenge into the air. It shot right out of the stadium.
“One point to Havoc Daemon for an Over Finish! The score is now 1-0!” The referee announced.
Roan retrieved Revenge.
“Roan!” Paris exclaimed. “Win this!”
The Z5 member gasped as Paris nodded. “Don’t give up!”
Roan grinned as he inserted his bey into the launcher.
“Playtime’s over. The real fight begins now.”
Hey everyone! Sir Saitama here. Sorry if the chapter wasn’t good and sorry I haven’t posted in a while.
In saying that, I’m announcing a spin-off series, but to give back to the community, I’m letting you decide:
1) Who should it be about?
2) Should I post it on another thread or keep it here?
“Let it rip!” Paris and Charles cried in unison.
Ultra Centurion warped around the center of the stadium, and changed its angle, heading toward Pegasus.
“Ultra Revival!” Charles exclaimed as Centurion pummeled Immortal Pegasus, bursting it instantly.
“Oh man!” Paris quickly re-assembled his bey. “Up for a second battle?”
Ryota, Taiki and Aiga all hovered around Toko’s tablet.
“Uh, guys. You might want to check this out,” Toko frowned.
A clip automatically started playing, as Hanami spoke into a microphone,
“Ladies and gentlemen! It’s been confirmed that Roan and Daniel will have a battle! Any words from you, Daniel?”
Daniel soon appeared onto a black background, with some pretty terrifying noises in the far distance. The only thing visible was his gleaming eyes.
“Roan, prepare to be crushed.”
“And Roan, any words you’d like to share?” Hanami asked.
Roan nodded. “I’m going to walk away victorious.”
"The tension sure is rising! Stay turned as the battle will commence tonight!” Hanami announced.
Toko turned off his device.
“I reckon Roan’s going to use Triple Smash Brave again,” Aiga predicted.
“Yeah, but will it be enough for Demolish Break?” Taiki responded.
Paris looked down at Pegasus.
“We’ll see.”
A few hours later, the highly anticipated battle was about to begin.
“Welcome ladies and gentlemen! We have a battle between some of Japan’s strongest bladers! In our red corner, we have one of our Z5, Roan Jamieson!”
Roan, as usual, waved to the crowd as the lights dimmed, the spotlight fixing on him.
“And going against him is Daniel Aziel!” Hanami introduced excitedly.
The doors opened on Daniel’s side, however nobody initially appeared, before large thumping noises were present.
Daniel appeared and marched toward the stadium.
“What’s the spotlight for? Weakest blader?” He chuckled.
Roan curled his fingers around his launcher.
“I’ll let my bey do the talking.”
“Ready, set!”
“Three!”
“Two!”
“One!”
“Let it rip!”
Smash Revenge and Havoc Daemon shot at each other at full speeds.
“Super Revenge Slash!” Daniel commanded.
Revenge sunk its blade into one of Daemon’s wings, tossing it into the air.
Havoc Daemon hurtled toward Daniel’s unconcerned face, as he shouted,
“Go! Rebirth Dive!”
Daemon glided swiftly mid-air and shot into the stadium wall, rebounding off and zooming toward Revenge.
“Dodge it, Revenge!” Roan yelled as the attack-type surged through the stadium, barely missing Daemon’s attack.
“Luck seems to favor you,” Daniel clenched his fists. “But you won’t get so lucky this time. Demolish Break!”
Roan roared, “Upper Smash Break!”
The two attack-types swirled around each other, eventually breaking their orbits as they slammed into each other.
Daemon was knocked back and tilted on its Demolish driver, rushing back at a greater speed.
“What?” Roan gasped.
“Look at that!” Hanami stated the obvious. “Havoc Daemon makes a solid recovery!”
Daniel chuckled. “Lights out! Rebound Uppercut!”
His booming voice was projected so loudly it echoed through the entire building.
One of Daemon’s four wings lit up as it whipped Revenge into the air. It shot right out of the stadium.
“One point to Havoc Daemon for an Over Finish! The score is now 1-0!” The referee announced.
Roan retrieved Revenge.
“Roan!” Paris exclaimed. “Win this!”
The Z5 member gasped as Paris nodded. “Don’t give up!”
Roan grinned as he inserted his bey into the launcher.
“Playtime’s over. The real fight begins now.”
Hey everyone! Sir Saitama here. Sorry if the chapter wasn’t good and sorry I haven’t posted in a while.
In saying that, I’m announcing a spin-off series, but to give back to the community, I’m letting you decide:
1) Who should it be about?
2) Should I post it on another thread or keep it here?
RE: Beyblade Burst Zero - CheetoBlader - Apr. 21, 2019
(Apr. 21, 2019 8:42 AM)Sir Saitama Wrote: Chapter 14 - The Dark Dragon Rises!Nice chapter! Bad luck Daniel! :P
Spoiler (Click to View)Last time on Beyblade Burst Zero! Paris gives it his all, but loses to Roan’s trump card - Triple Smash Brave!
“Let it rip!” Paris and Charles cried in unison.
Ultra Centurion warped around the center of the stadium, and changed its angle, heading toward Pegasus.
“Ultra Revival!” Charles exclaimed as Centurion pummeled Immortal Pegasus, bursting it instantly.
“Oh man!” Paris quickly re-assembled his bey. “Up for a second battle?”
Ryota, Taiki and Aiga all hovered around Toko’s tablet.
“Uh, guys. You might want to check this out,” Toko frowned.
A clip automatically started playing, as Hanami spoke into a microphone,
“Ladies and gentlemen! It’s been confirmed that Roan and Daniel will have a battle! Any words from you, Daniel?”
Daniel soon appeared onto a black background, with some pretty terrifying noises in the far distance. The only thing visible was his gleaming eyes.
“Roan, prepare to be crushed.”
“And Roan, any words you’d like to share?” Hanami asked.
Roan nodded. “I’m going to walk away victorious.”
"The tension sure is rising! Stay turned as the battle will commence tonight!” Hanami announced.
Toko turned off his device.
“I reckon Roan’s going to use Triple Smash Brave again,” Aiga predicted.
“Yeah, but will it be enough for Demolish Break?” Taiki responded.
Paris looked down at Pegasus.
“We’ll see.”
A few hours later, the highly anticipated battle was about to begin.
“Welcome ladies and gentlemen! We have a battle between some of Japan’s strongest bladers! In our red corner, we have one of our Z5, Roan Jamieson!”
Roan, as usual, waved to the crowd as the lights dimmed, the spotlight fixing on him.
“And going against him is Daniel Aziel!” Hanami introduced excitedly.
The doors opened on Daniel’s side, however nobody initially appeared, before large thumping noises were present.
Daniel appeared and marched toward the stadium.
“What’s the spotlight for? Weakest blader?” He chuckled.
Roan curled his fingers around his launcher.
“I’ll let my bey do the talking.”
“Ready, set!”
“Three!”
“Two!”
“One!”
“Let it rip!”
Smash Revenge and Havoc Daemon shot at each other at full speeds.
“Super Revenge Slash!” Daniel commanded.
Revenge sunk its blade into one of Daemon’s wings, tossing it into the air.
Havoc Daemon hurtled toward Daniel’s unconcerned face, as he shouted,
“Go! Rebirth Dive!”
Daemon glided swiftly mid-air and shot into the stadium wall, rebounding off and zooming toward Revenge.
“Dodge it, Revenge!” Roan yelled as the attack-type surged through the stadium, barely missing Daemon’s attack.
“Luck seems to favor you,” Daniel clenched his fists. “But you won’t get so lucky this time. Demolish Break!”
Roan roared, “Upper Smash Break!”
The two attack-types swirled around each other, eventually breaking their orbits as they slammed into each other.
Daemon was knocked back and tilted on its Demolish driver, rushing back at a greater speed.
“What?” Roan gasped.
“Look at that!” Hanami stated the obvious. “Havoc Daemon makes a solid recovery!”
Daniel chuckled. “Lights out! Rebound Uppercut!”
His booming voice was projected so loudly it echoed through the entire building.
One of Daemon’s four wings lit up as it whipped Revenge into the air. It shot right out of the stadium.
“One point to Havoc Daemon for an Over Finish! The score is now 1-0!” The referee announced.
Roan retrieved Revenge.
“Roan!” Paris exclaimed. “Win this!”
The Z5 member gasped as Paris nodded. “Don’t give up!”
Roan grinned as he inserted his bey into the launcher.
“Playtime’s over. The real fight begins now.”
Hey everyone! Sir Saitama here. Sorry if the chapter wasn’t good and sorry I haven’t posted in a while.
In saying that, I’m announcing a spin-off series, but to give back to the community, I’m letting you decide:
1) Who should it be about?
2) Should I post it on another thread or keep it here?
Make it about Christina Kuroda! (Her birthday is tomorrow same as Earth Day.)
Another thread!
RE: Beyblade Burst Zero - Sir Saitama - Apr. 21, 2019
(Apr. 21, 2019 9:56 AM)CheetoBlader Wrote:(Apr. 21, 2019 8:42 AM)Sir Saitama Wrote: Chapter 14 - The Dark Dragon Rises!Nice chapter! Bad luck Daniel!
Spoiler (Click to View)Last time on Beyblade Burst Zero! Paris gives it his all, but loses to Roan’s trump card - Triple Smash Brave!
“Let it rip!” Paris and Charles cried in unison.
Ultra Centurion warped around the center of the stadium, and changed its angle, heading toward Pegasus.
“Ultra Revival!” Charles exclaimed as Centurion pummeled Immortal Pegasus, bursting it instantly.
“Oh man!” Paris quickly re-assembled his bey. “Up for a second battle?”
Ryota, Taiki and Aiga all hovered around Toko’s tablet.
“Uh, guys. You might want to check this out,” Toko frowned.
A clip automatically started playing, as Hanami spoke into a microphone,
“Ladies and gentlemen! It’s been confirmed that Roan and Daniel will have a battle! Any words from you, Daniel?”
Daniel soon appeared onto a black background, with some pretty terrifying noises in the far distance. The only thing visible was his gleaming eyes.
“Roan, prepare to be crushed.”
“And Roan, any words you’d like to share?” Hanami asked.
Roan nodded. “I’m going to walk away victorious.”
"The tension sure is rising! Stay turned as the battle will commence tonight!” Hanami announced.
Toko turned off his device.
“I reckon Roan’s going to use Triple Smash Brave again,” Aiga predicted.
“Yeah, but will it be enough for Demolish Break?” Taiki responded.
Paris looked down at Pegasus.
“We’ll see.”
A few hours later, the highly anticipated battle was about to begin.
“Welcome ladies and gentlemen! We have a battle between some of Japan’s strongest bladers! In our red corner, we have one of our Z5, Roan Jamieson!”
Roan, as usual, waved to the crowd as the lights dimmed, the spotlight fixing on him.
“And going against him is Daniel Aziel!” Hanami introduced excitedly.
The doors opened on Daniel’s side, however nobody initially appeared, before large thumping noises were present.
Daniel appeared and marched toward the stadium.
“What’s the spotlight for? Weakest blader?” He chuckled.
Roan curled his fingers around his launcher.
“I’ll let my bey do the talking.”
“Ready, set!”
“Three!”
“Two!”
“One!”
“Let it rip!”
Smash Revenge and Havoc Daemon shot at each other at full speeds.
“Super Revenge Slash!” Daniel commanded.
Revenge sunk its blade into one of Daemon’s wings, tossing it into the air.
Havoc Daemon hurtled toward Daniel’s unconcerned face, as he shouted,
“Go! Rebirth Dive!”
Daemon glided swiftly mid-air and shot into the stadium wall, rebounding off and zooming toward Revenge.
“Dodge it, Revenge!” Roan yelled as the attack-type surged through the stadium, barely missing Daemon’s attack.
“Luck seems to favor you,” Daniel clenched his fists. “But you won’t get so lucky this time. Demolish Break!”
Roan roared, “Upper Smash Break!”
The two attack-types swirled around each other, eventually breaking their orbits as they slammed into each other.
Daemon was knocked back and tilted on its Demolish driver, rushing back at a greater speed.
“What?” Roan gasped.
“Look at that!” Hanami stated the obvious. “Havoc Daemon makes a solid recovery!”
Daniel chuckled. “Lights out! Rebound Uppercut!”
His booming voice was projected so loudly it echoed through the entire building.
One of Daemon’s four wings lit up as it whipped Revenge into the air. It shot right out of the stadium.
“One point to Havoc Daemon for an Over Finish! The score is now 1-0!” The referee announced.
Roan retrieved Revenge.
“Roan!” Paris exclaimed. “Win this!”
The Z5 member gasped as Paris nodded. “Don’t give up!”
Roan grinned as he inserted his bey into the launcher.
“Playtime’s over. The real fight begins now.”
Hey everyone! Sir Saitama here. Sorry if the chapter wasn’t good and sorry I haven’t posted in a while.
In saying that, I’m announcing a spin-off series, but to give back to the community, I’m letting you decide:
1) Who should it be about?
2) Should I post it on another thread or keep it here?
Make it about Christina Kuroda! (Her birthday is tomorrow same as Earth Day.)
Another thread!
Thanks for always supporting my story.
I really appreciate it. Writing about Christina seems fun, c: It’s always great to expand a writing universe!
RE: Beyblade Burst Zero - Fusion core - Apr. 21, 2019
(Apr. 21, 2019 8:42 AM)Sir Saitama Wrote: Chapter 14 - The Dark Dragon Rises!
Spoiler (Click to View)Last time on Beyblade Burst Zero! Paris gives it his all, but loses to Roan’s trump card - Triple Smash Brave!
“Let it rip!” Paris and Charles cried in unison.
Ultra Centurion warped around the center of the stadium, and changed its angle, heading toward Pegasus.
“Ultra Revival!” Charles exclaimed as Centurion pummeled Immortal Pegasus, bursting it instantly.
“Oh man!” Paris quickly re-assembled his bey. “Up for a second battle?”
Ryota, Taiki and Aiga all hovered around Toko’s tablet.
“Uh, guys. You might want to check this out,” Toko frowned.
A clip automatically started playing, as Hanami spoke into a microphone,
“Ladies and gentlemen! It’s been confirmed that Roan and Daniel will have a battle! Any words from you, Daniel?”
Daniel soon appeared onto a black background, with some pretty terrifying noises in the far distance. The only thing visible was his gleaming eyes.
“Roan, prepare to be crushed.”
“And Roan, any words you’d like to share?” Hanami asked.
Roan nodded. “I’m going to walk away victorious.”
"The tension sure is rising! Stay turned as the battle will commence tonight!” Hanami announced.
Toko turned off his device.
“I reckon Roan’s going to use Triple Smash Brave again,” Aiga predicted.
“Yeah, but will it be enough for Demolish Break?” Taiki responded.
Paris looked down at Pegasus.
“We’ll see.”
A few hours later, the highly anticipated battle was about to begin.
“Welcome ladies and gentlemen! We have a battle between some of Japan’s strongest bladers! In our red corner, we have one of our Z5, Roan Jamieson!”
Roan, as usual, waved to the crowd as the lights dimmed, the spotlight fixing on him.
“And going against him is Daniel Aziel!” Hanami introduced excitedly.
The doors opened on Daniel’s side, however nobody initially appeared, before large thumping noises were present.
Daniel appeared and marched toward the stadium.
“What’s the spotlight for? Weakest blader?” He chuckled.
Roan curled his fingers around his launcher.
“I’ll let my bey do the talking.”
“Ready, set!”
“Three!”
“Two!”
“One!”
“Let it rip!”
Smash Revenge and Havoc Daemon shot at each other at full speeds.
“Super Revenge Slash!” Daniel commanded.
Revenge sunk its blade into one of Daemon’s wings, tossing it into the air.
Havoc Daemon hurtled toward Daniel’s unconcerned face, as he shouted,
“Go! Rebirth Dive!”
Daemon glided swiftly mid-air and shot into the stadium wall, rebounding off and zooming toward Revenge.
“Dodge it, Revenge!” Roan yelled as the attack-type surged through the stadium, barely missing Daemon’s attack.
“Luck seems to favor you,” Daniel clenched his fists. “But you won’t get so lucky this time. Demolish Break!”
Roan roared, “Upper Smash Break!”
The two attack-types swirled around each other, eventually breaking their orbits as they slammed into each other.
Daemon was knocked back and tilted on its Demolish driver, rushing back at a greater speed.
“What?” Roan gasped.
“Look at that!” Hanami stated the obvious. “Havoc Daemon makes a solid recovery!”
Daniel chuckled. “Lights out! Rebound Uppercut!”
His booming voice was projected so loudly it echoed through the entire building.
One of Daemon’s four wings lit up as it whipped Revenge into the air. It shot right out of the stadium.
“One point to Havoc Daemon for an Over Finish! The score is now 1-0!” The referee announced.
Roan retrieved Revenge.
“Roan!” Paris exclaimed. “Win this!”
The Z5 member gasped as Paris nodded. “Don’t give up!”
Roan grinned as he inserted his bey into the launcher.
“Playtime’s over. The real fight begins now.”
Hey everyone! Sir Saitama here. Sorry if the chapter wasn’t good and sorry I haven’t posted in a while.
In saying that, I’m announcing a spin-off series, but to give back to the community, I’m letting you decide:
1) Who should it be about?
2) Should I post it on another thread or keep it here?
It can be about anyone . But kindly post it here in this thread . I do not want another thread for that . No need to create a separate spin off series . You can very well accommodate a story about another character in zero . It will enrich its storyline too . I do not want another story and another spin off series . A good series is the one which describes many stories and also keeping itself on track . That is where turbo had failed . It focussed only on aiga . If you do really want to make your zero series epic then you MUST include stories of other characters or other incidents in it too . Believe me , it will enrich the content of your story .
BTW sorry for the long post .
RE: Beyblade Burst Zero - Sir Saitama - Apr. 21, 2019
Chapter 15 - The God of Revenge’s Last Stand!
Spoiler (Click to View)
Last time on Beyblade Burst Zero! Roan and Daniel go head to head, however the dark dragon won the first round!
“Daniel!” Roan shouted. “Let’s do this!”
Daniel smirked. “That’s more like it.”
The referee called for the second battle.
“Ready, set!”
“Three!”
“Two!”
“One!
“Let it rip!”
Smash Revenge zoomed around the stadium at incredible speeds.
“Look at it go!” Paris was in awe.
Havoc Daemon performed a flower-pattern movement, and instantly drilled through Revenge.
Smash Revenge rolled into the wall, but rebounded at an even greater speed.
“You can run, but you can’t hide forever!” Daniel grinned. “Go, Daemon!”
Revenge and Daemon pressed into each other, clashing like there was no tomorrow.
“Now’s our chance! Smash Counter!” Roan exclaimed.
Revenge tilted on its driver, becoming more streamline as it bashed Havoc Daemon.
“Tear him to pieces! Demolish Break!”
Roan gasped in shock as Daemon paused, compressing into its retractable driver.
Smash Revenge jolted away, however Havoc Daemon was right on its tail.
“Running so soon? I thought you said it’s just beginning,” Daniel smirked.
Eventually, Havoc Daemon hit Smash Revenge, knocking it away. The dark dragon rushed in for a second round, however Roan had enough.
“End this Revenge! Upper Smash Break!”
An aura rose from Revenge as its speed increased. The bey torpedoed through the center of the stadium.
“That’s not all! How’d you like this? Super Revenge Slash!” Roan added.
A saber of light formed on one of Revenge’s blades, as it sliced through Havoc Daemon.
Daemon was tossed into the air, but Daniel laughed.
“I’ll give you some credit.” Havoc Daemon appeared to be exiting the arena. “But the rest goes to me. Now! Rebirth Dive!”
Daemon’s avatar appeared, a dark dragon with wings bursting with energy.
The bey smoothly fired, changing its route as it aimed for Revenge’s layer.
“Uh oh,” Paris thought. “Not good.”
Roan thought the same.
Daemon wasn’t stopping, however. It was a few seconds, ten maximum, from attacking.
Roan boomed, “No chance! Triple Smash Brave!”
Aiga turned to Charles, “I told you so.”
Revenge lit up luminously as Daniel widened his eyes.
Havoc Daemon wasn’t stopping, and this time, it was a good thing. The two attack types came into contact, as Daemon hurtled toward Daniel’s face at an insanely fast speed.
“Burst him!” Roan cried, as Havoc Daemon split apart. The crowd immediately cheered, some chanting Roan’s name, some waving posters.
The referee pointed to the Z5 member.
“Two points to Smash Revenge for a Burst Finish. The score is now 2-1.”
Paris smiled and shot Roan a look.
“I said I was going to walk away victorious,” Roan said.
Daniel growled. “It’s not over. Have your pathetic celebration or whatever, but you haven’t won.”
His eyes gleamed.
“And nor will you ever.”
“Daniel!” Roan shouted. “Let’s do this!”
Daniel smirked. “That’s more like it.”
The referee called for the second battle.
“Ready, set!”
“Three!”
“Two!”
“One!
“Let it rip!”
Smash Revenge zoomed around the stadium at incredible speeds.
“Look at it go!” Paris was in awe.
Havoc Daemon performed a flower-pattern movement, and instantly drilled through Revenge.
Smash Revenge rolled into the wall, but rebounded at an even greater speed.
“You can run, but you can’t hide forever!” Daniel grinned. “Go, Daemon!”
Revenge and Daemon pressed into each other, clashing like there was no tomorrow.
“Now’s our chance! Smash Counter!” Roan exclaimed.
Revenge tilted on its driver, becoming more streamline as it bashed Havoc Daemon.
“Tear him to pieces! Demolish Break!”
Roan gasped in shock as Daemon paused, compressing into its retractable driver.
Smash Revenge jolted away, however Havoc Daemon was right on its tail.
“Running so soon? I thought you said it’s just beginning,” Daniel smirked.
Eventually, Havoc Daemon hit Smash Revenge, knocking it away. The dark dragon rushed in for a second round, however Roan had enough.
“End this Revenge! Upper Smash Break!”
An aura rose from Revenge as its speed increased. The bey torpedoed through the center of the stadium.
“That’s not all! How’d you like this? Super Revenge Slash!” Roan added.
A saber of light formed on one of Revenge’s blades, as it sliced through Havoc Daemon.
Daemon was tossed into the air, but Daniel laughed.
“I’ll give you some credit.” Havoc Daemon appeared to be exiting the arena. “But the rest goes to me. Now! Rebirth Dive!”
Daemon’s avatar appeared, a dark dragon with wings bursting with energy.
The bey smoothly fired, changing its route as it aimed for Revenge’s layer.
“Uh oh,” Paris thought. “Not good.”
Roan thought the same.
Daemon wasn’t stopping, however. It was a few seconds, ten maximum, from attacking.
Roan boomed, “No chance! Triple Smash Brave!”
Aiga turned to Charles, “I told you so.”
Revenge lit up luminously as Daniel widened his eyes.
Havoc Daemon wasn’t stopping, and this time, it was a good thing. The two attack types came into contact, as Daemon hurtled toward Daniel’s face at an insanely fast speed.
“Burst him!” Roan cried, as Havoc Daemon split apart. The crowd immediately cheered, some chanting Roan’s name, some waving posters.
The referee pointed to the Z5 member.
“Two points to Smash Revenge for a Burst Finish. The score is now 2-1.”
Paris smiled and shot Roan a look.
“I said I was going to walk away victorious,” Roan said.
Daniel growled. “It’s not over. Have your pathetic celebration or whatever, but you haven’t won.”
His eyes gleamed.
“And nor will you ever.”
RE: Beyblade Burst Zero - Dt20000 - Apr. 21, 2019
(Apr. 21, 2019 9:31 PM)Sir Saitama Wrote: Chapter 2 - Fight Together! Immortal Starblast Attack!
Spoiler (Click to View)Last time on Beyblade Burst Zero! Paris makes his debut and challenges Valt Aoi! Even after winning, he sees something in Paris!
Pegasus glinted back, responding. Paris recalled the day that his father, Gingka, handed over Pegasus’ legacy to him. He wondered what the bey had experienced in his life.
Boredly tossing Pegasus into the air, it suddenly slipped, bouncing onto the luscious green grass. It spilled into a small pond nearby, before being thrown back. Paris immediately caught it.
“What kind of pond throws things?” He questioned.
The pond began bubbling, before a jagged ponytail emerged. Then slowly, a boy with a red A marking on his face revealed himself.
“I’m pretty sure I’m a kid, not a pond,” Aiga remarked as the two burst out laughing.
“I’m-“
“Paris Hagane. Yeah, Valt told me you were coming. Nice to meet ‘ya. It’s getting dark soon, so let’s head to my place.”
Not before long, the two arrived at the Crimson Nova’s house. Paris couldn’t help but feel impressed by the statues that were scattered around the place.
There was one in particular that he’d taken an interest to.
“You like this one?” Aiga smiled. “This one’s Achilles, one of the strongest heroes in Greek Mythology!”
Before Aiga could say any more, his dad, Taiga Akaba greeted the two.
“Hey, Aiga. Oh, I see you’ve brought a friend.”
Aiga nodded. “This is Paris Hagane. He’s the son of the legendary blader Gingka!”
You could obviously tell from Taiga’s facial expression that he knew Gingka.
“Ah, how’s he doing? I haven’t talked to him in a while.”
“Me neither,” Paris replied. “He’s doing great though.”
The sun began to set behind the horizon. Taiga headed to the barn.
“Now,” Aiga smirked. “Let’s start your training!”
The two walked into the shed, where a large stadium was conveniently placed.
“Alright, Paris. Now, the key to winning a Beybattle is a good offense,” Aiga instructed.
“That I can do,” Paris responded, “My Immortal Pegasus is an Attack Type.”
Aiga stood on one end of the stadium. He held his launcher like a shield.
“You’re also gonna want to use a launch style,” Aiga added. “The harder you launch, the faster your bey will go.”
“Right. Launch, fast, bey,” Paris lunged, with one knee in front of the other.
Aiga rummaged through his pockets and pulled out his bey, Cho Z Achilles.
“Let’s see what you got!” Aiga exclaimed.
“Ready, set!”
“Three!”
“Two!”
“One!”
Aiga sprinted and leapt into the air, twirling around.
“Let it rip!”
Both Achilles and Pegasus circled around the stadium, smashing into each other endlessly.
“Achilles!” Aiga cried, “Super Z Defense!”
A shield formed around Achilles, as Pegasus’ attacks were useless.
“Now, Immortal Pegasus! Let’s end this!” Paris roared.
Pegasus dealt a chain of attacks to Achilles, as its shield disappeared.
“That was only the beginning!” Aiga grinned. “Super Z Upper!”
Achilles’ beast emerged from the bey, resembling the statue that Paris spotted earlier. Cho Z Achilles scooped Pegasus, uppercutting it, thus flinging it into the air. Within three seconds, it exploded.
Paris gasped, “No way!”
He quickly reassembled Immortal Pegasus.
“Come on Aiga! Let’s battle again! This time I’ll win!”
Aiga suppressed a smile,
“I thought you’d never ask.”
“Let it rip!”
The wings on Achilles popped out, exactly like what happened with Valkyrie.
“You have a Burst Stopper too?” The amber-haired boy questioned.
Achilles began in Attack Mode, as the two beys crazily swarmed each other with endless attacks.
“Let’s make this battle short!” Aiga exclaimed, leaping into the air, dragging his fist down. “Super Z Buster!”
Achilles pursued Pegasus in the center of the stadium, where it channeled its energy into a single attack, launching it into the air.
“Not so fast! Fly, Pegasus!” Paris commanded, as a divine, white horse dived down in unison with its bey.
“That’s not all!” Paris added, “Go now! Let’s win together Pegasus!”
Immortal Pegasus performed a flower-pattern attack on Achilles, rushing it. Suddenly, Cho Z Achilles was flung into the air. Aiga almost seemed surprised, but nevertheless, he had a trick up his sleeve.
“You’re not going to win against me this easily! Go, Super Z Dive!”
Cho Z Achilles tilted slightly, and shot down like an arrow, drilling into Immortal Pegasus, bursting it almost instantly.
Collapsing to the floor, Paris panted heavily. Aiga walked over to the boy, and offered his hand, helping him up.
“I don’t normally say this, but uh, you did good. Say, why don’t we give Pegasus a little gift?”
“What do you mean by that?” Paris questioned, only to get a mischievous grin as a response.
On the other side of the room, lay an old computer you’d find from the 1990’s. Aiga loaded the old piece of plastic up, before drawing a diagram of what looked like a frame.
“What do you think?” Aiga presented, as the image rendered. The frame had a hexagonal design, with small protrusions sticking out on each side.
“Awesome!” Paris complimented. Shortly after, Aiga pulled a sheet of plastic from the cupboard and carved the shape neatly.
Paris carefully placed the new frame on Pegasus. Now it looked complete - the layer had three thick wings which you could twist and adjust the modes.
The disc, 00’ was an enhanced version of 00, except it was heavier. The frame, Galaxy, featured a bulky hexagonal design with protrusions on each corner.
Last but not least was the driver, Omega. Like Jolt, it had a star-shaped design but featured a thicker and taller rubber, making the Beyblade more streamline.
“Now Pegasus looks complete,” Paris said. “Hey Aiga, let’s battle again!”
“Challenge accepted.”
Thanks to the Galaxy frame, Pegasus felt much heavier. Paris lunged as usual, preparing to launch.
“Three!”
“Two!”
“One!”
“Let it rip!”
Cho-Z Achilles was set in stamina mode, as it spun in the centre of the stadium. Immortal Pegasus dived down and diced Achilles with a single blow, flinging it into the air.
“Now! Super Z Dive!” Aiga commanded, as Achilles darted down. If it landed on Pegasus, he’d surely win.
“Come on, Pegasus! Dodge him!” Paris instructed. Immortal Pegasus slid to the right, dodging Achilles’ attack.
Achilles, retreating to the centre of the stadium, had Pegasus in hot pursuit as it blew a string of barrage attacks, leaving Achilles no chance to escape.
“Nice try, but you won’t defeat me!” Aiga said with certainty in his voice, a tinge of determination. “Achilles! Super Z Slash!”
The two-blades on Cho-Z Achilles lit up as it ran through Immortal Pegasus, flinging it into the air.
“This isn’t over!” Paris thundered. “Now, Immortal Starblast Attack!”
Aiga’s jaw almost fell to the floor.
“What did he say?”
Suddenly, Pegasus’ bit beast appeared, a divine-looking Pegasus.
Immortal Pegasus fell downward, charging at blinding speeds as the bey glowed a vibrant blue.
“Now Achilles! Super Z Upper!” Aiga bellowed, as Pegasus landed onto Cho-Z Achilles. Achilles managed to wriggle Pegasus off and rocket it into the air.
Just as both bladers expected Pegasus to burst for the third time, it flew into the wall, and rebounded perfectly off, charging at a ridiculous speed toward Achilles.
“Go now, Pegasus! Let’s take him down!” Paris cried.
Cho-Z Achilles and Pegasus were both swept away by the wind. It looked as if they tied.
“One point to Immortal Pegasus for a Ring Out Finish.” A voice declared at the door.
It was none other than Aiga’s dad, Taiga. The Crimson Nova, picking up Achilles, smiled.
“Looks like my amazing teaching payed off,” he boasted, as they both shared a laugh.
In the early morning, the birds chirped melodically. As Paris readjusted his backpack, Aiga and Taiga stood at the top of the hill, waving him goodbye.
“Thanks again, Aiga,” Paris smiled.
“Nah, don’t mention it. It was nothing.”
Soon after, Taiga and Aiga were out of sight. This was probably a signal for Paris to go.
As he trotted down the path, the boy glanced at his phone, receiving a notification. It read, “Calling all bladers! The WBBA is hosting the annual district tournaments, which will happen all over Japan!"
“District tournament..?” Paris cluelessly repeated. “Well then, count me in!”
Um...
RE: Beyblade Burst Zero - BurningSands - Apr. 21, 2019
(Apr. 21, 2019 10:18 PM)Dt20000 Wrote:(Apr. 21, 2019 9:31 PM)Sir Saitama Wrote: Chapter 2 - Fight Together! Immortal Starblast Attack!
Spoiler (Click to View)Last time on Beyblade Burst Zero! Paris makes his debut and challenges Valt Aoi! Even after winning, he sees something in Paris!
Pegasus glinted back, responding. Paris recalled the day that his father, Gingka, handed over Pegasus’ legacy to him. He wondered what the bey had experienced in his life.
Boredly tossing Pegasus into the air, it suddenly slipped, bouncing onto the luscious green grass. It spilled into a small pond nearby, before being thrown back. Paris immediately caught it.
“What kind of pond throws things?” He questioned.
The pond began bubbling, before a jagged ponytail emerged. Then slowly, a boy with a red A marking on his face revealed himself.
“I’m pretty sure I’m a kid, not a pond,” Aiga remarked as the two burst out laughing.
“I’m-“
“Paris Hagane. Yeah, Valt told me you were coming. Nice to meet ‘ya. It’s getting dark soon, so let’s head to my place.”
Not before long, the two arrived at the Crimson Nova’s house. Paris couldn’t help but feel impressed by the statues that were scattered around the place.
There was one in particular that he’d taken an interest to.
“You like this one?” Aiga smiled. “This one’s Achilles, one of the strongest heroes in Greek Mythology!”
Before Aiga could say any more, his dad, Taiga Akaba greeted the two.
“Hey, Aiga. Oh, I see you’ve brought a friend.”
Aiga nodded. “This is Paris Hagane. He’s the son of the legendary blader Gingka!”
You could obviously tell from Taiga’s facial expression that he knew Gingka.
“Ah, how’s he doing? I haven’t talked to him in a while.”
“Me neither,” Paris replied. “He’s doing great though.”
The sun began to set behind the horizon. Taiga headed to the barn.
“Now,” Aiga smirked. “Let’s start your training!”
The two walked into the shed, where a large stadium was conveniently placed.
“Alright, Paris. Now, the key to winning a Beybattle is a good offense,” Aiga instructed.
“That I can do,” Paris responded, “My Immortal Pegasus is an Attack Type.”
Aiga stood on one end of the stadium. He held his launcher like a shield.
“You’re also gonna want to use a launch style,” Aiga added. “The harder you launch, the faster your bey will go.”
“Right. Launch, fast, bey,” Paris lunged, with one knee in front of the other.
Aiga rummaged through his pockets and pulled out his bey, Cho Z Achilles.
“Let’s see what you got!” Aiga exclaimed.
“Ready, set!”
“Three!”
“Two!”
“One!”
Aiga sprinted and leapt into the air, twirling around.
“Let it rip!”
Both Achilles and Pegasus circled around the stadium, smashing into each other endlessly.
“Achilles!” Aiga cried, “Super Z Defense!”
A shield formed around Achilles, as Pegasus’ attacks were useless.
“Now, Immortal Pegasus! Let’s end this!” Paris roared.
Pegasus dealt a chain of attacks to Achilles, as its shield disappeared.
“That was only the beginning!” Aiga grinned. “Super Z Upper!”
Achilles’ beast emerged from the bey, resembling the statue that Paris spotted earlier. Cho Z Achilles scooped Pegasus, uppercutting it, thus flinging it into the air. Within three seconds, it exploded.
Paris gasped, “No way!”
He quickly reassembled Immortal Pegasus.
“Come on Aiga! Let’s battle again! This time I’ll win!”
Aiga suppressed a smile,
“I thought you’d never ask.”
“Let it rip!”
The wings on Achilles popped out, exactly like what happened with Valkyrie.
“You have a Burst Stopper too?” The amber-haired boy questioned.
Achilles began in Attack Mode, as the two beys crazily swarmed each other with endless attacks.
“Let’s make this battle short!” Aiga exclaimed, leaping into the air, dragging his fist down. “Super Z Buster!”
Achilles pursued Pegasus in the center of the stadium, where it channeled its energy into a single attack, launching it into the air.
“Not so fast! Fly, Pegasus!” Paris commanded, as a divine, white horse dived down in unison with its bey.
“That’s not all!” Paris added, “Go now! Let’s win together Pegasus!”
Immortal Pegasus performed a flower-pattern attack on Achilles, rushing it. Suddenly, Cho Z Achilles was flung into the air. Aiga almost seemed surprised, but nevertheless, he had a trick up his sleeve.
“You’re not going to win against me this easily! Go, Super Z Dive!”
Cho Z Achilles tilted slightly, and shot down like an arrow, drilling into Immortal Pegasus, bursting it almost instantly.
Collapsing to the floor, Paris panted heavily. Aiga walked over to the boy, and offered his hand, helping him up.
“I don’t normally say this, but uh, you did good. Say, why don’t we give Pegasus a little gift?”
“What do you mean by that?” Paris questioned, only to get a mischievous grin as a response.
On the other side of the room, lay an old computer you’d find from the 1990’s. Aiga loaded the old piece of plastic up, before drawing a diagram of what looked like a frame.
“What do you think?” Aiga presented, as the image rendered. The frame had a hexagonal design, with small protrusions sticking out on each side.
“Awesome!” Paris complimented. Shortly after, Aiga pulled a sheet of plastic from the cupboard and carved the shape neatly.
Paris carefully placed the new frame on Pegasus. Now it looked complete - the layer had three thick wings which you could twist and adjust the modes.
The disc, 00’ was an enhanced version of 00, except it was heavier. The frame, Galaxy, featured a bulky hexagonal design with protrusions on each corner.
Last but not least was the driver, Omega. Like Jolt, it had a star-shaped design but featured a thicker and taller rubber, making the Beyblade more streamline.
“Now Pegasus looks complete,” Paris said. “Hey Aiga, let’s battle again!”
“Challenge accepted.”
Thanks to the Galaxy frame, Pegasus felt much heavier. Paris lunged as usual, preparing to launch.
“Three!”
“Two!”
“One!”
“Let it rip!”
Cho-Z Achilles was set in stamina mode, as it spun in the centre of the stadium. Immortal Pegasus dived down and diced Achilles with a single blow, flinging it into the air.
“Now! Super Z Dive!” Aiga commanded, as Achilles darted down. If it landed on Pegasus, he’d surely win.
“Come on, Pegasus! Dodge him!” Paris instructed. Immortal Pegasus slid to the right, dodging Achilles’ attack.
Achilles, retreating to the centre of the stadium, had Pegasus in hot pursuit as it blew a string of barrage attacks, leaving Achilles no chance to escape.
“Nice try, but you won’t defeat me!” Aiga said with certainty in his voice, a tinge of determination. “Achilles! Super Z Slash!”
The two-blades on Cho-Z Achilles lit up as it ran through Immortal Pegasus, flinging it into the air.
“This isn’t over!” Paris thundered. “Now, Immortal Starblast Attack!”
Aiga’s jaw almost fell to the floor.
“What did he say?”
Suddenly, Pegasus’ bit beast appeared, a divine-looking Pegasus.
Immortal Pegasus fell downward, charging at blinding speeds as the bey glowed a vibrant blue.
“Now Achilles! Super Z Upper!” Aiga bellowed, as Pegasus landed onto Cho-Z Achilles. Achilles managed to wriggle Pegasus off and rocket it into the air.
Just as both bladers expected Pegasus to burst for the third time, it flew into the wall, and rebounded perfectly off, charging at a ridiculous speed toward Achilles.
“Go now, Pegasus! Let’s take him down!” Paris cried.
Cho-Z Achilles and Pegasus were both swept away by the wind. It looked as if they tied.
“One point to Immortal Pegasus for a Ring Out Finish.” A voice declared at the door.
It was none other than Aiga’s dad, Taiga. The Crimson Nova, picking up Achilles, smiled.
“Looks like my amazing teaching payed off,” he boasted, as they both shared a laugh.
In the early morning, the birds chirped melodically. As Paris readjusted his backpack, Aiga and Taiga stood at the top of the hill, waving him goodbye.
“Thanks again, Aiga,” Paris smiled.
“Nah, don’t mention it. It was nothing.”
Soon after, Taiga and Aiga were out of sight. This was probably a signal for Paris to go.
As he trotted down the path, the boy glanced at his phone, receiving a notification. It read, “Calling all bladers! The WBBA is hosting the annual district tournaments, which will happen all over Japan!"
“District tournament..?” Paris cluelessly repeated. “Well then, count me in!”
Um...
I dont know if its just me, but the chapter number is confusing me. Not sure if you see it
RE: Beyblade Burst Zero - Sir Saitama - Apr. 21, 2019
(Apr. 21, 2019 10:32 PM)XSabxManiacX Wrote:(Apr. 21, 2019 10:18 PM)Dt20000 Wrote: Um...
I dont know if its just me, but the chapter number is confusing me. Not sure if you see it
Sorry. I had to re-post it to put it on the front page, because the spoiler thingy wouldn’t show up. I replaced it with Chapter 15 just now.
RE: Beyblade Burst Zero - BurningSands - Apr. 21, 2019
Roan won!! Wooo!!
RE: Beyblade Burst Zero - Sir Saitama - Apr. 21, 2019
(Apr. 21, 2019 10:56 PM)XSabxManiacX Wrote: Roan won!! Wooo!!
He won the second battle c:
RE: Beyblade Burst Zero - Dt20000 - Apr. 21, 2019
(Apr. 21, 2019 11:08 PM)Sir Saitama Wrote:(Apr. 21, 2019 10:56 PM)XSabxManiacX Wrote: Roan won!! Wooo!!
He won the second battle c:
Wait, where is chapters 5-15 in the OP?
RE: Beyblade Burst Zero - Sir Saitama - Apr. 22, 2019
(Apr. 21, 2019 11:19 PM)Dt20000 Wrote:(Apr. 21, 2019 11:08 PM)Sir Saitama Wrote: He won the second battle c:
Wait, where is chapters 5-15 in the OP?
Yeah, I’ll add them now
RE: Beyblade Burst Zero - Fusion core - Apr. 22, 2019
@[Sir Saitama] I must say that there is something about your stories that makes them so great . That only few others have here . Many others had made there own series . But I was seeing that only a handful survive till now . The best part of your stories are that you make the characters come alive .
RE: Beyblade Burst Zero - Sir Saitama - Apr. 22, 2019
(Apr. 22, 2019 11:59 AM)Fusion core Wrote: @[Sir Saitama] I must say that there is something about your stories that makes them so great . That only few others have here . Many others had made there own series . But I was seeing that only a handful survive till now . The best part of your stories are that you make the characters come alive .
Thank you so much. I really appreciate that you are a frequent reader of mine as well as a supporter. Your feedback and support means a lot, so thanks once again. :)
Chapter 16 - Finale! Revenge vs Daemon!
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Last time on Beyblade Burst Zero! Roan takes the lead after bursting Daemon, making the score 2-1!
Daniel’s hair was blinding, as if it were on fire.
“Better not stare at that too long,” Aiga said.
This time, no remarks came from Daniel.
“Ready, set!”
“Three!”
“Two!”
“One!” Both Daniel and Roan sprung into the air, almost reaching the ceiling.
“Let it rip!”
Smash Revenge and Havoc Daemon swirled around the outer ring of the stadium.
“Go! Burst him!” The two bladers cried in unison, as their beys accelerated forward.
The two attack type beys rushed each other, with sparks shooting out of the stadium.
Both Daemon and Revenge were knocked aside, as Daemon lowered into its driver, retracting its height.
“Here it comes,” Paris added.
Daniel’s hair lit up like it did prior to the battle. He looked like a living flame at this point.
“Say goodnight! You don’t deserve that place as Z5! Demolish Break!” Daniel thundered, as his eyes became miniature infernos.
Havoc Daemon raced along the stadium, heading toward Revenge.
“Two can play that game,” Roan said, “Smash Counter!”
Smash Revenge flowed through the arena, leaning on its driver as it surged forward. The two furious attack types met up in the middle of the stadium.
The final act of the battle was the same as the first, as both beys rolled back, diving in for an intense clash.
“Rebound Uppercut!” Daniel roared, as Havoc Daemon shot forward.
“Super Revenge Slash!” Roan countered, as Smash Revenge jolted toward Daemon.
The two attack types lit up as one of their sides became a beam of light.
Daemon and Revenge pressed their sabers into each other as wind and dust formed a mini-tornado.
Revenge and Daemon were launched into the air, as they slowly headed toward each other.
‘Clink!’ Havoc Daemon made the final hit, as Revenge was flung out of the stadium. The wind dissolved, as the dark dragon shot out of the stadium a few seconds later.
“One point to Havoc Daemon for an Over Finish! The score is now 2-2!” The referee announced.
The BeyClub all seemed tense. At this point anything could happen.
“Match point,” Ryota’s puppet said.
Roan picked up his bey and re-inserted it into the launcher. The Z5 member tightly gripped it, as he seemed confident this time.
“Resonance. He’s resonating with his bey,” Paris said.
“What’s resonance?” Toko asked.
Paris shot Aiga a look.
Aiga informed, “It’s when one truly bonds with their bey. It’s as if the blader becomes the bey.”
“Well I don’t wanna become a robot!” Charles joked.
“Fourth battle!” The referee called.
“Ready, set!”
“Three!”
“Two!”
“One!”
“Let it rip!”
Smash Revenge instantly shot Havoc Daemon into the air, as it flipped.
“That won’t stop me! Rebirth Dive!” Daniel howled.
Daemon regained its speed and pounced onto Smash Revenge, as it fired into the wall.
“Now! Upper Smash Break!” Roan called as Revenge zipped through the stadium and rushed through Daemon, however it wouldn’t budge.
“It’s not moving!” Taiki gasped.
“Oh, you want me to move? I will,” Daniel remarked as Havoc Daemon retracted into its driver.
“DEMOLISH BREAK!” He howled.
Havoc Daemon zoomed around the stadium.
“Not on my watch! Super Revenge Slash!” Roan shouted.
As Daemon made its way toward Revenge, the latter drove its blade into Havoc Daemon’s layer as the two beys came into contact.
“I’m not going to hold back! Demolish Break!” Daniel commanded once more.
Havoc Daemon pummeled Smash Revenge and flung it into the air.
“Heh! I said you don’t deserve to be in the Z5!” Daniel roared.
Just then, Smash Revenge lit up as Havoc Daemon took the center.
“Neither do you if you’re going to be this arrogant. Triple Smash Brave!”
“What?” Daniel gasped.
“How can Smash Revenge do Triple Smash Brave if it’s not underneath?” Toko asked.
“It’s a reverse Triple Smash Brave!”
Smash Revenge blasted through Havoc Daemon, piercing its layer as Daemon flung into the air.
“Burst him!” Roan cried, as just then, Daemon split into three.
“Two points to Smash Revenge for a Burst Finish! The score is now 4-2! Roan Jamieson is the winner!”
The crowd cheered, however Daniel pummeled his fist into the ground and roared in defeat.
“You!” he pointed to Roan. “I will destroy you! Whatever it takes!”
Daniel’s hair was blinding, as if it were on fire.
“Better not stare at that too long,” Aiga said.
This time, no remarks came from Daniel.
“Ready, set!”
“Three!”
“Two!”
“One!” Both Daniel and Roan sprung into the air, almost reaching the ceiling.
“Let it rip!”
Smash Revenge and Havoc Daemon swirled around the outer ring of the stadium.
“Go! Burst him!” The two bladers cried in unison, as their beys accelerated forward.
The two attack type beys rushed each other, with sparks shooting out of the stadium.
Both Daemon and Revenge were knocked aside, as Daemon lowered into its driver, retracting its height.
“Here it comes,” Paris added.
Daniel’s hair lit up like it did prior to the battle. He looked like a living flame at this point.
“Say goodnight! You don’t deserve that place as Z5! Demolish Break!” Daniel thundered, as his eyes became miniature infernos.
Havoc Daemon raced along the stadium, heading toward Revenge.
“Two can play that game,” Roan said, “Smash Counter!”
Smash Revenge flowed through the arena, leaning on its driver as it surged forward. The two furious attack types met up in the middle of the stadium.
The final act of the battle was the same as the first, as both beys rolled back, diving in for an intense clash.
“Rebound Uppercut!” Daniel roared, as Havoc Daemon shot forward.
“Super Revenge Slash!” Roan countered, as Smash Revenge jolted toward Daemon.
The two attack types lit up as one of their sides became a beam of light.
Daemon and Revenge pressed their sabers into each other as wind and dust formed a mini-tornado.
Revenge and Daemon were launched into the air, as they slowly headed toward each other.
‘Clink!’ Havoc Daemon made the final hit, as Revenge was flung out of the stadium. The wind dissolved, as the dark dragon shot out of the stadium a few seconds later.
“One point to Havoc Daemon for an Over Finish! The score is now 2-2!” The referee announced.
The BeyClub all seemed tense. At this point anything could happen.
“Match point,” Ryota’s puppet said.
Roan picked up his bey and re-inserted it into the launcher. The Z5 member tightly gripped it, as he seemed confident this time.
“Resonance. He’s resonating with his bey,” Paris said.
“What’s resonance?” Toko asked.
Paris shot Aiga a look.
Aiga informed, “It’s when one truly bonds with their bey. It’s as if the blader becomes the bey.”
“Well I don’t wanna become a robot!” Charles joked.
“Fourth battle!” The referee called.
“Ready, set!”
“Three!”
“Two!”
“One!”
“Let it rip!”
Smash Revenge instantly shot Havoc Daemon into the air, as it flipped.
“That won’t stop me! Rebirth Dive!” Daniel howled.
Daemon regained its speed and pounced onto Smash Revenge, as it fired into the wall.
“Now! Upper Smash Break!” Roan called as Revenge zipped through the stadium and rushed through Daemon, however it wouldn’t budge.
“It’s not moving!” Taiki gasped.
“Oh, you want me to move? I will,” Daniel remarked as Havoc Daemon retracted into its driver.
“DEMOLISH BREAK!” He howled.
Havoc Daemon zoomed around the stadium.
“Not on my watch! Super Revenge Slash!” Roan shouted.
As Daemon made its way toward Revenge, the latter drove its blade into Havoc Daemon’s layer as the two beys came into contact.
“I’m not going to hold back! Demolish Break!” Daniel commanded once more.
Havoc Daemon pummeled Smash Revenge and flung it into the air.
“Heh! I said you don’t deserve to be in the Z5!” Daniel roared.
Just then, Smash Revenge lit up as Havoc Daemon took the center.
“Neither do you if you’re going to be this arrogant. Triple Smash Brave!”
“What?” Daniel gasped.
“How can Smash Revenge do Triple Smash Brave if it’s not underneath?” Toko asked.
“It’s a reverse Triple Smash Brave!”
Smash Revenge blasted through Havoc Daemon, piercing its layer as Daemon flung into the air.
“Burst him!” Roan cried, as just then, Daemon split into three.
“Two points to Smash Revenge for a Burst Finish! The score is now 4-2! Roan Jamieson is the winner!”
The crowd cheered, however Daniel pummeled his fist into the ground and roared in defeat.
“You!” he pointed to Roan. “I will destroy you! Whatever it takes!”
RE: Beyblade Burst Zero - Sir Saitama - Apr. 28, 2019
Chapter 17 - The National Tournament! Ragnaruk vs Pegasus!
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Last time on Beyblade Burst Zero! Roan wipes out Daniel with the unexpected!
“Ready, Ryota?” Paris prepared for the battle.
“Mhm!” His puppets said eagerly.
“Ready, set!”
“Three!”
“Two!”
“One!”
“Let it rip!”
Torch Ragnaruk took the center and lit up like a flame.
“Now!” Ryota’s dog puppet, Ragna exclaimed. “Torch Hurricane!”
The middle of the arena became a swirling vortex of flames as Pegasus zipped around.
“Let’s do this! Supernova Shoot!”
Immortal Pegasus slammed into the wall and shot into the air, eventually returning to the surface.
Making its way to Ragnaruk, it struck once before climbing to the top. Pegasus surged back down, striking Ragnaruk again.
“With each hit, it’s gaining speed!” Aiga said.
Pegasus crashed into the wall as its wing lit up.
“Fire away! Immortal Slash!” Paris shouted.
The attack type sunk its blade into Ragnaruk as both beys were knocked back, gradually losing stamina.
Ryota’s other puppet, a cat, roared,
“It’s not over! True Ragnaruk Storm!”
Ragnaruk shifted over to the outer ring, catching up to Pegasus as the beys clashed.
Pegasus shot out of the air and headed for the doorway. It landed in someone’s black and blue gloves.
“Valt!” Aiga and Toko cried in unison as they ran over to the electric-blue haired boy standing at the door.
“Hey!” He smiled cheerfully as he walked over to Paris. “Long time no see.”
“Yeah,” Paris nodded as Valt handed him Pegasus.
“Anyway, I was here to give some of you an invitation.”
“Invitation?” Ryota asked.
“Mhm,” Valt opened his backpack and pulled out a few letters.
He passed one to Ryota, then to Charles, then to Paris.
“Good luck guys,” Valt smiled warmly as he slung his backpack between his shoulders.
Before Valt left, Paris shouted,
“Wait!”
To be honest, Paris was dying for a rematch with Valt, despite him being the champion.
“How about a rematch?” Paris held out Pegasus.
Valt was shocked, but rummaged his pockets for Valkyrie.
“You bet!”
“Ready, set!”
“Three!”
“Two!”
“One!”
“Let it rip!”
Cho-Z Valkyrie’s Burst Stoppers immediately activated.
“Now Pegasus! Supernova Shoot!” Paris commanded as Pegasus’ avatar appeared, a white winged-horse shooting a beam from its horn.
Pegasus struck Valkyrie once, then again, until the champion’s bey rolled back.
“Show him everything we have! Super Rush Shoot!” Valt shouted.
Valkyrie and Pegasus rushed each other, firing a string of endless attacks as both beys lost a click.
“Let’s end this! Immortal Stormbringer!” Paris cried as Pegasus loomed around Valkyrie, orbiting it rapidly.
The winged-horse closed in.
“Now Valkyrie! Super Flash Shoot!”
Cho-Z Valkyrie spiralled around the center of the stadium, drilling into Pegasus as it flung into the air.
Pegasus immediately burst and landed at Paris’ feet.
“Two points to Cho-Z Valkyrie for a Burst Finish!” Aiga announced.
Paris smiled in approval. “That was amazing!”
Valt walked over to Paris’ side of the stadium and picked up Pegasus’ pieces.
Before he re-assembled the bey, Valt inserted a gold level chip.
“Here. You’re a lot stronger now, so this is all yours.”
Paris smiled. “Thanks.”
He glanced at Pegasus. “Let’s win the National Tournament.”
Valt waved goodbye. “Bye! I’m craving BeyBread.”
The electric-blue haired boy exited the building.
Paris opened the National Tournament Letter and read the details.
“Blah blah blah, winner becomes Japan’s best blader?”
“And it’s tomorrow!” Charles pointed out.
The following morning, Paris woke up to a blast. He quickly ran out the door and headed to the WBBA building, where the tournaments were usually held.
“Ladies and gentlemen!” Hanami announced excitedly. “Today is the day of the National Tournament! A week from now, we’ll decide who Japan’s best blader is!”
The large screen turned on and presented photos of all three dozen bladers.
“And they could be one of Japan’s top bladers! Paris, Charles, Ryota, Xhan, Aaron, Daniel, Roan and Nika!”
The screen randomly paired up two images.
“Our first battle is Paris vs Ryota!” Hanami announced, “Followed by Nika vs Charles!”
Ryota and Paris both appeared on stage, gripping onto their launchers.
“Ready, set!”
“Three!”
“Two!”
“One!”
“Let it rip!”
Ragnaruk took the center of the stadium, repeating the battle from yesterday.
Pegasus rushed down and attacked it, swarming it endlessly.
“Alright!” Paris cheered triumphantly.
Torch Ragnaruk got knocked back in the outer ring of the stadium as Pegasus chased after it.
The attack type dashed around the edge of the stadium and struck Ragnaruk, making its way around the stadium.
“Finish this! Supernova Shoot!” Paris exclaimed as Pegasus glowed, blasting through Ragnaruk as it flung out of the stadium.
The referee pointed to Paris.
“One point to Immortal Pegasus for an Over Finish! The score is now 1-0!”
The crowd cheered as the second battle commenced.
“Ready, set!”
“Three!”
“Two!”
“One!”
“Let it rip!”
Torch Ragnaruk took the center of the stadium as the vortex became a fiery hurricane.
“Now!” Ruk yelled. “Torch Hurricane!”
Pegasus darted down the stadium as Paris exclaimed, “Supernova Shoot!”
The attack type couldn’t get to Ragnaruk.
“What?” Paris gasped as Pegasus attempted to enter from all directions, however it was impossible.
Pegasus’ wing lit up.
“Let’s see if your wall can take this! Immortal Slash!”
The hurricane dissolved as Torch Ragnaruk glowed.
“Now’s our chance!” Ragna exclaimed. “True Ragnaruk Storm!”
The stamina type reformed its hurricane and drove it into Pegasus, flinging it into the air.
“No!” Paris gasped. “Hold on!”
Fortunately, Pegasus landed on the stadium’s surface, however it was soon depleted of stamina.
“One point to Torch Ragnaruk for a Spin Finish! The score is now 1-1!” The referee declared.
Ryota took Ruk off of his right hand.
“What’s he doing?” Taiki whispered to Aiga.
Then, he removed Ragna from his left hand.
“He’s proving that he’s more than just two puppets,” Aiga replied.
“Let’s win this Ragnaruk!” Ryota shouted.
“Third battle!”
“Ready, set!”
“Three!”
“Two!”
“One!”
“Let it rip!”
Pegasus zoomed around the outer rim of the stadium, however it was too late.
“Torch Hurricane!” Ryota commanded as Ragnaruk’s avatar appeared, a horned demon with golden armor.
Pegasus rushed down swiftly, as Ragnaruk’s hurricane fired it into the air. Paris quickly filled with frustration.
Pegasus flew into the air and glimmered, sending a message to Paris.
“You’re right! Immortal Starblast Attack!” Paris exclaimed.
Immortal Pegasus aimed for Torch Ragnaruk, however it quickly pulled away.
“That’s not all! Supernova Shoot!” Paris commanded.
Pegasus drifted off and headed into the center of the stadium, however it still couldn’t reach Ragnaruk.
“Time to turn the tables! Immortal Stormbringer!” Paris shouted.
Ryota gasped.
Pegasus zoomed around Ragnaruk and closed in, giving the stamina type little to no room to escape.
“Finish him! Full power!” Pegasus exploded with energy.
Torch Ragnaruk flew into the air and burst.
“Two points to Immortal Pegasus for a Burst Finish! The score is now 3-1, making Paris Hagane the winner!”
Paris smiled. “All right! We did it!”
Ryota stood up. “That was a battle to remember. Thanks, Paris.”
Hanami spoke into his microphone. “Tomorrow we have two upcoming battles! Nika vs Charles and Aaron vs Paris! Stay tuned!”
“Ready, Ryota?” Paris prepared for the battle.
“Mhm!” His puppets said eagerly.
“Ready, set!”
“Three!”
“Two!”
“One!”
“Let it rip!”
Torch Ragnaruk took the center and lit up like a flame.
“Now!” Ryota’s dog puppet, Ragna exclaimed. “Torch Hurricane!”
The middle of the arena became a swirling vortex of flames as Pegasus zipped around.
“Let’s do this! Supernova Shoot!”
Immortal Pegasus slammed into the wall and shot into the air, eventually returning to the surface.
Making its way to Ragnaruk, it struck once before climbing to the top. Pegasus surged back down, striking Ragnaruk again.
“With each hit, it’s gaining speed!” Aiga said.
Pegasus crashed into the wall as its wing lit up.
“Fire away! Immortal Slash!” Paris shouted.
The attack type sunk its blade into Ragnaruk as both beys were knocked back, gradually losing stamina.
Ryota’s other puppet, a cat, roared,
“It’s not over! True Ragnaruk Storm!”
Ragnaruk shifted over to the outer ring, catching up to Pegasus as the beys clashed.
Pegasus shot out of the air and headed for the doorway. It landed in someone’s black and blue gloves.
“Valt!” Aiga and Toko cried in unison as they ran over to the electric-blue haired boy standing at the door.
“Hey!” He smiled cheerfully as he walked over to Paris. “Long time no see.”
“Yeah,” Paris nodded as Valt handed him Pegasus.
“Anyway, I was here to give some of you an invitation.”
“Invitation?” Ryota asked.
“Mhm,” Valt opened his backpack and pulled out a few letters.
He passed one to Ryota, then to Charles, then to Paris.
“Good luck guys,” Valt smiled warmly as he slung his backpack between his shoulders.
Before Valt left, Paris shouted,
“Wait!”
To be honest, Paris was dying for a rematch with Valt, despite him being the champion.
“How about a rematch?” Paris held out Pegasus.
Valt was shocked, but rummaged his pockets for Valkyrie.
“You bet!”
“Ready, set!”
“Three!”
“Two!”
“One!”
“Let it rip!”
Cho-Z Valkyrie’s Burst Stoppers immediately activated.
“Now Pegasus! Supernova Shoot!” Paris commanded as Pegasus’ avatar appeared, a white winged-horse shooting a beam from its horn.
Pegasus struck Valkyrie once, then again, until the champion’s bey rolled back.
“Show him everything we have! Super Rush Shoot!” Valt shouted.
Valkyrie and Pegasus rushed each other, firing a string of endless attacks as both beys lost a click.
“Let’s end this! Immortal Stormbringer!” Paris cried as Pegasus loomed around Valkyrie, orbiting it rapidly.
The winged-horse closed in.
“Now Valkyrie! Super Flash Shoot!”
Cho-Z Valkyrie spiralled around the center of the stadium, drilling into Pegasus as it flung into the air.
Pegasus immediately burst and landed at Paris’ feet.
“Two points to Cho-Z Valkyrie for a Burst Finish!” Aiga announced.
Paris smiled in approval. “That was amazing!”
Valt walked over to Paris’ side of the stadium and picked up Pegasus’ pieces.
Before he re-assembled the bey, Valt inserted a gold level chip.
“Here. You’re a lot stronger now, so this is all yours.”
Paris smiled. “Thanks.”
He glanced at Pegasus. “Let’s win the National Tournament.”
Valt waved goodbye. “Bye! I’m craving BeyBread.”
The electric-blue haired boy exited the building.
Paris opened the National Tournament Letter and read the details.
“Blah blah blah, winner becomes Japan’s best blader?”
“And it’s tomorrow!” Charles pointed out.
The following morning, Paris woke up to a blast. He quickly ran out the door and headed to the WBBA building, where the tournaments were usually held.
“Ladies and gentlemen!” Hanami announced excitedly. “Today is the day of the National Tournament! A week from now, we’ll decide who Japan’s best blader is!”
The large screen turned on and presented photos of all three dozen bladers.
“And they could be one of Japan’s top bladers! Paris, Charles, Ryota, Xhan, Aaron, Daniel, Roan and Nika!”
The screen randomly paired up two images.
“Our first battle is Paris vs Ryota!” Hanami announced, “Followed by Nika vs Charles!”
Ryota and Paris both appeared on stage, gripping onto their launchers.
“Ready, set!”
“Three!”
“Two!”
“One!”
“Let it rip!”
Ragnaruk took the center of the stadium, repeating the battle from yesterday.
Pegasus rushed down and attacked it, swarming it endlessly.
“Alright!” Paris cheered triumphantly.
Torch Ragnaruk got knocked back in the outer ring of the stadium as Pegasus chased after it.
The attack type dashed around the edge of the stadium and struck Ragnaruk, making its way around the stadium.
“Finish this! Supernova Shoot!” Paris exclaimed as Pegasus glowed, blasting through Ragnaruk as it flung out of the stadium.
The referee pointed to Paris.
“One point to Immortal Pegasus for an Over Finish! The score is now 1-0!”
The crowd cheered as the second battle commenced.
“Ready, set!”
“Three!”
“Two!”
“One!”
“Let it rip!”
Torch Ragnaruk took the center of the stadium as the vortex became a fiery hurricane.
“Now!” Ruk yelled. “Torch Hurricane!”
Pegasus darted down the stadium as Paris exclaimed, “Supernova Shoot!”
The attack type couldn’t get to Ragnaruk.
“What?” Paris gasped as Pegasus attempted to enter from all directions, however it was impossible.
Pegasus’ wing lit up.
“Let’s see if your wall can take this! Immortal Slash!”
The hurricane dissolved as Torch Ragnaruk glowed.
“Now’s our chance!” Ragna exclaimed. “True Ragnaruk Storm!”
The stamina type reformed its hurricane and drove it into Pegasus, flinging it into the air.
“No!” Paris gasped. “Hold on!”
Fortunately, Pegasus landed on the stadium’s surface, however it was soon depleted of stamina.
“One point to Torch Ragnaruk for a Spin Finish! The score is now 1-1!” The referee declared.
Ryota took Ruk off of his right hand.
“What’s he doing?” Taiki whispered to Aiga.
Then, he removed Ragna from his left hand.
“He’s proving that he’s more than just two puppets,” Aiga replied.
“Let’s win this Ragnaruk!” Ryota shouted.
“Third battle!”
“Ready, set!”
“Three!”
“Two!”
“One!”
“Let it rip!”
Pegasus zoomed around the outer rim of the stadium, however it was too late.
“Torch Hurricane!” Ryota commanded as Ragnaruk’s avatar appeared, a horned demon with golden armor.
Pegasus rushed down swiftly, as Ragnaruk’s hurricane fired it into the air. Paris quickly filled with frustration.
Pegasus flew into the air and glimmered, sending a message to Paris.
“You’re right! Immortal Starblast Attack!” Paris exclaimed.
Immortal Pegasus aimed for Torch Ragnaruk, however it quickly pulled away.
“That’s not all! Supernova Shoot!” Paris commanded.
Pegasus drifted off and headed into the center of the stadium, however it still couldn’t reach Ragnaruk.
“Time to turn the tables! Immortal Stormbringer!” Paris shouted.
Ryota gasped.
Pegasus zoomed around Ragnaruk and closed in, giving the stamina type little to no room to escape.
“Finish him! Full power!” Pegasus exploded with energy.
Torch Ragnaruk flew into the air and burst.
“Two points to Immortal Pegasus for a Burst Finish! The score is now 3-1, making Paris Hagane the winner!”
Paris smiled. “All right! We did it!”
Ryota stood up. “That was a battle to remember. Thanks, Paris.”
Hanami spoke into his microphone. “Tomorrow we have two upcoming battles! Nika vs Charles and Aaron vs Paris! Stay tuned!”
RE: Beyblade Burst Zero - Sir Saitama - May. 04, 2019
Chapter 18 - Fusion Whirlwind! Grand Nike!
Spoiler (Click to View)
Last time on Beyblade Burst Zero! After his first tournament, Paris joins the Nationals and competes against Ryota! Meanwhile, it’s Charles turn!
“Welcome everyone, to the second battle of the first stage! We hope you’re ready, because it’s about to get chaotic!” Hanami tapped into his microphone.
One person was missing from his reserved seat, next to Toko. It was Charles Schwab, as he was about to battle.
Charles, in the common room, gulped as Nika had already defeated three bladers in a row.
“We will.” He looked down at Centurion as his scared expression changed into a confident one.
“I think you forgot your launcher,” a laughing voice entered the room.
“Hm?” Charles turned around, only to see his older sister, Jamie.
His face became redder than a tomato.
“Win this one, okay?” Jamie exited the room on a high note, just as the screen displayed Grand Nike smashing through a bey.
Bladers were eliminated from the tournament at a fast rate.
“Any second now, and I’ll be next,” Charles thought to himself.
Secretly, he feared losing again. Centurion shook in his hand, angrily, as if scalding him for his negativity.
“R-right.” He responded. “Let’s give this crowd a show.”
Hanami smiled.
“You know what it’s time for! Charles Schwab against Nika Aoi!”
Just then, both bladers had emerged from a door, emitting smoke.
Taiki said jokingly, “So, Toko, who are you rooting for?”
“Both,” the blue haired boy replied.
“Both? Are you crazy?”
The referee called for the first battle.
“Ready, set!”
“Three!”
“Two!”
“One!”
“Let it rip!”
Ultra Centurion charged instantly at Grand Nike, who avoided the attack.
Jamie’s message echoed in Charles’ head:
“Win this one, okay?”
“I made a promise,” Centurion lit up like a moving fireball. “And I’m keeping it.”
Nike swirled across the stadium cautiously.
“This one’s for you, Jamie! Ultra Revival!” Charles yelled.
The Revival driver retracted its prongs, clapping together as the bey jolted forward, slamming into Grand Nike.
Nike wobbled but proceeded forward.
“Let’s do this Nike! Grand Rush!” Nika exclaimed.
Grand Nike struck Centurion once, pushing it back, and again, repeating the attack several times.
“No Centurion!” Charles cried as Nike continually thrashed it. The two balance types clashed as Centurion was thrown into the wall.
As Grand Nike pinned Ultra Centurion, Charles had enough.
“Must-win—CENTURION!”
His dark hair rose, as Ultra Centurion pushed back. Nike seemed to have a hard time pulling through.
Suddenly, Charles’ bey escaped and regained its balance, riding the outer rim of the stadium.
“Not so fast!” Nika called. “Northern Cross Shoot!”
Opposite to Southern Cross Shoot, Grand Nike darted from the other direction.
“Finish him!” The pink-haired girl added as Centurion was lifted into the air, bursting at Charles’ face.
“Two points to Grand Nike for a Burst Finish! The score is now 2-0!” The referee declared.
Charles grumbled as Toko zoomed in to a rotating image of Nike.
“It’s all in the driver, Fuse,” he said.
Paris noticed something off about Charles. It was as if he couldn’t decide whether to be afraid or determined.
“Charles! Win this!” Paris shouted as he removed the frame from Pegasus, tossing it to Charles.
He seemed clueless. Paris raised Immortal Pegasus into the air and nodded, as a white beam transferred from Pegasus to Centurion.
Then, Toko, Aiga, Ryota and Taiki did the same, as Centurion had inherited the BeyClub’s power.
“Thanks,” he nodded calmly.
“Now let’s do this Centurion!”
“Welcome everyone, to the second battle of the first stage! We hope you’re ready, because it’s about to get chaotic!” Hanami tapped into his microphone.
One person was missing from his reserved seat, next to Toko. It was Charles Schwab, as he was about to battle.
Charles, in the common room, gulped as Nika had already defeated three bladers in a row.
“We will.” He looked down at Centurion as his scared expression changed into a confident one.
“I think you forgot your launcher,” a laughing voice entered the room.
“Hm?” Charles turned around, only to see his older sister, Jamie.
His face became redder than a tomato.
“Win this one, okay?” Jamie exited the room on a high note, just as the screen displayed Grand Nike smashing through a bey.
Bladers were eliminated from the tournament at a fast rate.
“Any second now, and I’ll be next,” Charles thought to himself.
Secretly, he feared losing again. Centurion shook in his hand, angrily, as if scalding him for his negativity.
“R-right.” He responded. “Let’s give this crowd a show.”
Hanami smiled.
“You know what it’s time for! Charles Schwab against Nika Aoi!”
Just then, both bladers had emerged from a door, emitting smoke.
Taiki said jokingly, “So, Toko, who are you rooting for?”
“Both,” the blue haired boy replied.
“Both? Are you crazy?”
The referee called for the first battle.
“Ready, set!”
“Three!”
“Two!”
“One!”
“Let it rip!”
Ultra Centurion charged instantly at Grand Nike, who avoided the attack.
Jamie’s message echoed in Charles’ head:
“Win this one, okay?”
“I made a promise,” Centurion lit up like a moving fireball. “And I’m keeping it.”
Nike swirled across the stadium cautiously.
“This one’s for you, Jamie! Ultra Revival!” Charles yelled.
The Revival driver retracted its prongs, clapping together as the bey jolted forward, slamming into Grand Nike.
Nike wobbled but proceeded forward.
“Let’s do this Nike! Grand Rush!” Nika exclaimed.
Grand Nike struck Centurion once, pushing it back, and again, repeating the attack several times.
“No Centurion!” Charles cried as Nike continually thrashed it. The two balance types clashed as Centurion was thrown into the wall.
As Grand Nike pinned Ultra Centurion, Charles had enough.
“Must-win—CENTURION!”
His dark hair rose, as Ultra Centurion pushed back. Nike seemed to have a hard time pulling through.
Suddenly, Charles’ bey escaped and regained its balance, riding the outer rim of the stadium.
“Not so fast!” Nika called. “Northern Cross Shoot!”
Opposite to Southern Cross Shoot, Grand Nike darted from the other direction.
“Finish him!” The pink-haired girl added as Centurion was lifted into the air, bursting at Charles’ face.
“Two points to Grand Nike for a Burst Finish! The score is now 2-0!” The referee declared.
Charles grumbled as Toko zoomed in to a rotating image of Nike.
“It’s all in the driver, Fuse,” he said.
Paris noticed something off about Charles. It was as if he couldn’t decide whether to be afraid or determined.
“Charles! Win this!” Paris shouted as he removed the frame from Pegasus, tossing it to Charles.
He seemed clueless. Paris raised Immortal Pegasus into the air and nodded, as a white beam transferred from Pegasus to Centurion.
Then, Toko, Aiga, Ryota and Taiki did the same, as Centurion had inherited the BeyClub’s power.
“Thanks,” he nodded calmly.
“Now let’s do this Centurion!”
RE: Beyblade Burst Zero - LeonidasKerbeus - May. 04, 2019
Would there be anyway i can get my own character into this series? I'm already hooked and its an amazing series. id love to be able to have my own character in.
RE: Beyblade Burst Zero - Sir Saitama - May. 04, 2019
(May. 04, 2019 5:19 AM)LeonidasKerbeus Wrote: Would there be anyway i can get my own character into this series? I'm already hooked and its an amazing series. id love to be able to have my own character in.
You definitely can! Thanks for reading my story. Just give me a brief overview of the character (personality, appearance) and the beyblade (parts, special moves, design).
RE: Beyblade Burst Zero - BurningSands - May. 04, 2019
(May. 04, 2019 5:02 AM)Sir Saitama Wrote: Chapter 18 - Fusion Whirlwind! Grand Nike!
Spoiler (Click to View)Last time on Beyblade Burst Zero! After his first tournament, Paris joins the Nationals and competes against Ryota! Meanwhile, it’s Charles turn!
“Welcome everyone, to the second battle of the first stage! We hope you’re ready, because it’s about to get chaotic!” Hanami tapped into his microphone.
One person was missing from his reserved seat, next to Toko. It was Charles Schwab, as he was about to battle.
Charles, in the common room, gulped as Nika had already defeated three bladers in a row.
“We will.” He looked down at Centurion as his scared expression changed into a confident one.
“I think you forgot your launcher,” a laughing voice entered the room.
“Hm?” Charles turned around, only to see his older sister, Jamie.
His face became redder than a tomato.
“Win this one, okay?” Jamie exited the room on a high note, just as the screen displayed Grand Nike smashing through a bey.
Bladers were eliminated from the tournament at a fast rate.
“Any second now, and I’ll be next,” Charles thought to himself.
Secretly, he feared losing again. Centurion shook in his hand, angrily, as if scalding him for his negativity.
“R-right.” He responded. “Let’s give this crowd a show.”
Hanami smiled.
“You know what it’s time for! Charles Schwab against Nika Aoi!”
Just then, both bladers had emerged from a door, emitting smoke.
Taiki said jokingly, “So, Toko, who are you rooting for?”
“Both,” the blue haired boy replied.
“Both? Are you crazy?”
The referee called for the first battle.
“Ready, set!”
“Three!”
“Two!”
“One!”
“Let it rip!”
Ultra Centurion charged instantly at Grand Nike, who avoided the attack.
Jamie’s message echoed in Charles’ head:
“Win this one, okay?”
“I made a promise,” Centurion lit up like a moving fireball. “And I’m keeping it.”
Nike swirled across the stadium cautiously.
“This one’s for you, Jamie! Ultra Revival!” Charles yelled.
The Revival driver retracted its prongs, clapping together as the bey jolted forward, slamming into Grand Nike.
Nike wobbled but proceeded forward.
“Let’s do this Nike! Grand Rush!” Nika exclaimed.
Grand Nike struck Centurion once, pushing it back, and again, repeating the attack several times.
“No Centurion!” Charles cried as Nike continually thrashed it. The two balance types clashed as Centurion was thrown into the wall.
As Grand Nike pinned Ultra Centurion, Charles had enough.
“Must-win—CENTURION!”
His dark hair rose, as Ultra Centurion pushed back. Nike seemed to have a hard time pulling through.
Suddenly, Charles’ bey escaped and regained its balance, riding the outer rim of the stadium.
“Not so fast!” Nika called. “Northern Cross Shoot!”
Opposite to Southern Cross Shoot, Grand Nike darted from the other direction.
“Finish him!” The pink-haired girl added as Centurion was lifted into the air, bursting at Charles’ face.
“Two points to Grand Nike for a Burst Finish! The score is now 2-0!” The referee declared.
Charles grumbled as Toko zoomed in to a rotating image of Nike.
“It’s all in the driver, Fuse,” he said.
Paris noticed something off about Charles. It was as if he couldn’t decide whether to be afraid or determined.
“Charles! Win this!” Paris shouted as he removed the frame from Pegasus, tossing it to Charles.
He seemed clueless. Paris raised Immortal Pegasus into the air and nodded, as a white beam transferred from Pegasus to Centurion.
Then, Toko, Aiga, Ryota and Taiki did the same, as Centurion had inherited the BeyClub’s power.
“Thanks,” he nodded calmly.
“Now let’s do this Centurion!”
Nice chapter, as always! Looking forward to see more from this tournament
RE: Beyblade Burst Zero - Dt20000 - May. 04, 2019
(May. 04, 2019 5:02 AM)Sir Saitama Wrote: Chapter 18 - Fusion Whirlwind! Grand Nike!
Spoiler (Click to View)Last time on Beyblade Burst Zero! After his first tournament, Paris joins the Nationals and competes against Ryota! Meanwhile, it’s Charles turn!
“Welcome everyone, to the second battle of the first stage! We hope you’re ready, because it’s about to get chaotic!” Hanami tapped into his microphone.
One person was missing from his reserved seat, next to Toko. It was Charles Schwab, as he was about to battle.
Charles, in the common room, gulped as Nika had already defeated three bladers in a row.
“We will.” He looked down at Centurion as his scared expression changed into a confident one.
“I think you forgot your launcher,” a laughing voice entered the room.
“Hm?” Charles turned around, only to see his older sister, Jamie.
His face became redder than a tomato.
“Win this one, okay?” Jamie exited the room on a high note, just as the screen displayed Grand Nike smashing through a bey.
Bladers were eliminated from the tournament at a fast rate.
“Any second now, and I’ll be next,” Charles thought to himself.
Secretly, he feared losing again. Centurion shook in his hand, angrily, as if scalding him for his negativity.
“R-right.” He responded. “Let’s give this crowd a show.”
Hanami smiled.
“You know what it’s time for! Charles Schwab against Nika Aoi!”
Just then, both bladers had emerged from a door, emitting smoke.
Taiki said jokingly, “So, Toko, who are you rooting for?”
“Both,” the blue haired boy replied.
“Both? Are you crazy?”
The referee called for the first battle.
“Ready, set!”
“Three!”
“Two!”
“One!”
“Let it rip!”
Ultra Centurion charged instantly at Grand Nike, who avoided the attack.
Jamie’s message echoed in Charles’ head:
“Win this one, okay?”
“I made a promise,” Centurion lit up like a moving fireball. “And I’m keeping it.”
Nike swirled across the stadium cautiously.
“This one’s for you, Jamie! Ultra Revival!” Charles yelled.
The Revival driver retracted its prongs, clapping together as the bey jolted forward, slamming into Grand Nike.
Nike wobbled but proceeded forward.
“Let’s do this Nike! Grand Rush!” Nika exclaimed.
Grand Nike struck Centurion once, pushing it back, and again, repeating the attack several times.
“No Centurion!” Charles cried as Nike continually thrashed it. The two balance types clashed as Centurion was thrown into the wall.
As Grand Nike pinned Ultra Centurion, Charles had enough.
“Must-win—CENTURION!”
His dark hair rose, as Ultra Centurion pushed back. Nike seemed to have a hard time pulling through.
Suddenly, Charles’ bey escaped and regained its balance, riding the outer rim of the stadium.
“Not so fast!” Nika called. “Northern Cross Shoot!”
Opposite to Southern Cross Shoot, Grand Nike darted from the other direction.
“Finish him!” The pink-haired girl added as Centurion was lifted into the air, bursting at Charles’ face.
“Two points to Grand Nike for a Burst Finish! The score is now 2-0!” The referee declared.
Charles grumbled as Toko zoomed in to a rotating image of Nike.
“It’s all in the driver, Fuse,” he said.
Paris noticed something off about Charles. It was as if he couldn’t decide whether to be afraid or determined.
“Charles! Win this!” Paris shouted as he removed the frame from Pegasus, tossing it to Charles.
He seemed clueless. Paris raised Immortal Pegasus into the air and nodded, as a white beam transferred from Pegasus to Centurion.
Then, Toko, Aiga, Ryota and Taiki did the same, as Centurion had inherited the BeyClub’s power.
“Thanks,” he nodded calmly.
“Now let’s do this Centurion!”
I call theft
Nice chapter
RE: Beyblade Burst Zero - LeonidasKerbeus - May. 05, 2019
Name: Cobalt Apatos
Gender: Male
Appearance: https://m.imgur.com/CuVP1YD
Personality: A light hearted witty guy who gets really serious when bladeing. He can be a bit hot headed, but also has a dark power inside which can release he gets really mad, which usually ends up with the opposing bey getting broken. No this isnt a edgy character, its more like suoh. but better.
Bey: Torrent Ourboros
Type: Attack/Stamina hybrid, heavily leaned towards attack.
Layer Appearance: https://m.imgur.com/h1jyOSI
Special Abilities: Dual Spin, The Trident is made of metal with rubber on the outside, protecting beys from getting broken, and the first fin from the Leviathans head is rubber.
Disc and Frame: 00E
00 Expand
Driver: Dive
Description: Nothings base with ultimate reboots rubber around it. the actual spring tip is evolutions tip, fully worn down (like variable). When the evolution-like spring tip is compressed, it sticks and becomes a final drive like tip.
Special Moves:
Absorbsion Wave: If Torrent Ourboros is spinning left, the rubber on the first fin and on the trident absorbs the opposing beys spin. If Ourboros is spinning right, the rubber acts as a shield, reducing the amount of damage that it takes, has a chance to burst the opponents bey if the opponents bey has speed and has almost fully bursted.
Counterpoint Lv. I: The rubber Spring gets compressed 25% of the way, makng it lower than the opposing bey, then it changes direction (not left/right, it goes clockwise instead of spinning counterclockwise while spinning right) and knocks the opposing beyblade with force.
Counterpoint Lv. V: The Rubber spring is compressed 50% of the way, then starts going counterclockwise if spinning left, or clockwise if spinning right. it then rebounds off of the stadium wall and knocks the opposing bey out of the stadium, or bursts it.
Counterpoint Lv. X: The rubber spring is compressed 100%, letting all of the rubber on the tip be exposed, making it bounce off of the walls and burst the opponent 25% of the time. Its very risky as the Expand frame can scrape against the floor and cause it to self-burst or just spin out.
Ourboros Break: The avatar of ourboros is released,(https://imgur.com/bBuT4kX) and the rubber spring is locked in 100% mode, and it does a move reminiscent of Rush Launch, but finishes off by going the opposite of either counter or clockwise and either bursts, breaks, or launches the opposing beyblade out of the stadium (which can cause a ring out burst.)
Hope you like him!
RE: Beyblade Burst Zero - LeonidasKerbeus - May. 06, 2019
dont really wanna double post (a dumb rule IMO)
but i finished him
