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RE: (Beyblade Story) The Edge, Chapter 7 is up! - Ryukiba - Sep. 01, 2013
Awesome and thanks!
RE: (Beyblade Story) The Edge, Chapter 7 is up! - LimiTTrickster - Sep. 01, 2013
Oh yeah. Ryu will be doing a super cool thing in the tournament.
RE: (Beyblade Story) The Edge, Chapter 7 is up! - Ryukiba - Sep. 01, 2013
Awesome cant wait to read about it!
RE: (Beyblade Story) The Edge, Chapter 7 is up! - LimiTTrickster - Sep. 01, 2013
Sorry for all the delay. The last two days were really busy. I am working on the chapters so 8 should be up by tomorrow.
RE: (Beyblade Story) The Edge, Chapter 7 is up! - LimiTTrickster - Sep. 02, 2013
Update... Because of three long battle in stew chapter it should be up tomorrow.
RE: (Beyblade Story) The Edge, Chapter 7 is up! - ★WindStarElite★ - Sep. 02, 2013
(Sep. 02, 2013 10:06 PM)jacolal Wrote: Update... Because of three long battle in stew chapter it should be up tomorrow.
Great ok I can wait.
RE: (Beyblade Story) The Edge, Chapter 7 is up! - LimiTTrickster - Sep. 03, 2013
Well... I've posted chapter 8 and I have made it extra long, apparently more than 2 pages on word which is a good thing.
RE: (Beyblade Story) The Edge, Chapter 7 is up! - Rnold201 - Sep. 03, 2013
Longest chapter so far, I think, and THE BEST for me!
RE: (Beyblade Story) The Edge, Chapter 7 is up! - LimiTTrickster - Sep. 03, 2013
I'm working on chapter 9 right now, and thanks!
RE: (Beyblade Story) The Edge, Chapter 8 is up! The tournament chapters in progress - LimiTTrickster - Sep. 03, 2013
Not sure how long it is, but chapter nine is up.
RE: (Beyblade Story) The Edge, Chapter 8 is up! The tournament chapters in progress - Bularieleone - Sep. 04, 2013
Sorry for earlier I should have had more appreciation for your work.
RE: (Beyblade Story) The Edge, Chapter 9 is up! The tournament chapters in progress - LimiTTrickster - Sep. 04, 2013
No problem, I'm sure it was an accident, and if it wasn't, then it shows that I just need to improve.
RE: (Beyblade Story) The Edge, Chapter 10 is up! The tournament chapters in progress - Rnold201 - Sep. 04, 2013
Well... great work so far, by the time you read this, I'll have read chapter 10, IT IS AWESOME.
RE: (Beyblade Story) The Edge, Chapter 10 is up! The tournament chapters in progress - LimiTTrickster - Sep. 04, 2013
I know... I'm hoping it is good. And I am happy to say that I will continue this story as a series.
(Beyblade Series) The Edge, Chapter 10 is up! The tournament chapters in progress! - LimiTTrickster - Sep. 05, 2013
Sorry for double post, but chapter 11 is up. And credit to some of the story goes to Rnold201 and XkaidranzerX, for making this character (Ace).
RE: (Beyblade Series) The Edge, Chapter 11 is up - ★WindStarElite★ - Sep. 05, 2013
I've got one character I will give you them Friday night
(Beyblade Series) The Edge, Chapter 11 is up! The tournament chapters in progress! - LimiTTrickster - Sep. 05, 2013
Um... might need it before that. I only need one...
RE: (Beyblade Series) The Edge, Chapter 11 is up! ! - ★WindStarElite★ - Sep. 06, 2013
Spoiler (Click to View)
RE: (Beyblade Series) The Edge - Dual - Sep. 06, 2013
Just read some of it. There are a few grammar mistakes, such as using "are" instead of "our," and putting a space between a quotation mark and the first word.
Overall though, chapter length is pretty good, as is the writing. I'll vote once I'm done reading the whole thing.
: (Beyblade Series) The Edge, Chapter 11 is up! The tournament chapters in progress! - LimiTTrickster - Sep. 06, 2013
Thanks.. It's not letting me edit on my phone but I'll try tonight.
(Beyblade Series) The Edge, Chapter 11 is up! The tournament chapters in progress! - LimiTTrickster - Sep. 06, 2013
Sorry for double post, but chapter 12 is up in the OP. I hope you like it. Credit to the mysterious man/ Yumaro goes to Xkai_DranzerX
RE: Beyblade Series- The Edge, Chapter 12 is up! The tournament chapters in progress! - Rnold201 - Sep. 07, 2013
Awesome story so far! I can't wait for the next chapter.
RE: Beyblade Series- The Edge, Chapter 13 is up! The tournament chapters in progress! - LimiTTrickster - Sep. 07, 2013
Thanks, chapter fourteen should be up tomorrow.
RE: Beyblade Series- The Edge, Chapter 13 is up! The tournament chapters in progress! - Ryukiba - Sep. 08, 2013
I love the new chapter!
RE: Beyblade Series- The Edge, Chapter 13 is up!! - ★WindStarElite★ - Sep. 08, 2013
I'm starting to sound like the main character Im loving this and ryukiba pop me ip