RE: {STORY}Beyblade: Kazuki's Quest( Chapter 17 Is Up!) [ 3000+ Views] - rage sagittario - Jul. 23, 2013
Name: Hasashi Taka-Yuki
gender: male
age: 13
bio: after nemisis rampaged Hasashi saw how weak he was, he saw he needed to get stronger with his bey. So don left his destroyed town in America to serch for belin temple.Hasashi found belin temple and trained there for 3 years, after reaching team wang hu zongs skill level he left the temples he became a wondering blader who declined a top bey-bandit gang and has been ambushed. Hasashi is a stubborn person who strongly resembles tyson of the blade brackers. Hasashi usually wears a orange striped v-neck with a green jacket halfway zipped up. Hasashi aslo wears black skinny jeans. Hasashi is normally seen eating a double cheese burger.
bey description: Wyvern apocalypse w120 wrsf and is usually in attack mode. Hasashi only switches to defence mode if he has not witnessed your skills. Bey-Spirit shows a white Chinese dragon much like rock zurafa. Wyvern apocalypse spical move is six temple dragon pulse
RE: {STORY}Beyblade: Kazuki's Quest( Chapter 17 Is Up!) [ 3000+ Views] - akio314 - Jul. 23, 2013
(Jul. 23, 2013 12:27 AM)fury sagittero Wrote: Name: Hasashi Taka-Yuki
gender: male
age: 13
bio: after nemisis rampaged Hasashi saw how weak he was, he saw he needed to get stronger with his bey. So don left his destroyed town in America to serch for belin temple.Hasashi found belin temple and trained there for 3 years, after reaching team wang hu zongs skill level he left the temples he became a wondering blader who declined a top bey-bandit gang and has been ambushed. Hasashi is a stubborn person who strongly resembles tyson of the blade brackers. Hasashi usually wears a orange striped v-neck with a green jacket halfway zipped up. Hasashi aslo wears black skinny jeans. Hasashi is normally seen eating a double cheese burger.
bey description: Wyvern apocalypse w120 wrsf and is usually in attack mode. Hasashi only switches to defence mode if he has not witnessed your skills. Bey-Spirit shows a white Chinese dragon much like rock zurafa. Wyvern apocalypse spical move is six temple dragon pulse So I'm guessing Hasashi doesn't have a skill? There does need a team of people who don't have skills, yet they dominate the competion at Worlds. I do need quite a few teams for Part 2: The World Tournament Saga, since the top four bladers at each national tourney will go to worlds.
RE: {STORY}Beyblade: Kazuki's Quest( Chapter 17 Is Up!) [ 3000+ Views] - Themeeny7 - Jul. 24, 2013
Can we have a battle next chapter? Also her physic power is control people's minds to make them do stuff for her.
RE: {STORY}Beyblade: Kazuki's Quest( Chapter 17 Is Up!) [ 3000+ Views] - akio314 - Jul. 25, 2013
(Jul. 24, 2013 9:20 PM)Themeeny7 Wrote: Can we have a battle next chapter? Also her physic power is control people's minds to make them do stuff for her.
The battle will be after a bit, be patient. I'm planning for some epic scenes in the next chapter. It may or may not have some battles following one or more bladers untapped power. But probably not...
RE: {STORY}Beyblade: Kazuki's Quest( Chapter 17 Is Up!) [ 3000+ Views] - akio314 - Jul. 28, 2013
Welcome one and all to one of the most epic beybattles in the story, Firecat Vs. Yuki! We’re finally here!†Trent Shouted. “We need a plan. Who goes first? Who’s the leader?†Alec spoke coolly. “Let us have a challenge.†Yuki began. “We’ll have a tournament ourselves, do any of you agree?†Trent got excited. “Yes!†Voices came from the left. “Hey you! Hands up!†A mouthy thug around the age of Firecat yelled. “Are you sure you can take us? We would not want to harm you.†The thug punched at Yuki. “What was that?†The thug exclaimed with laughter. Yuki giggled coldly. “You are pushing it. Imbecile.†Yuki spoke with a devious grin. She wanted this person to attack. “Quiet, kid!†He tried to punch but couldn’t move. “Well, well. Do you like that?†He began bashing himself “Ow, ow!†He didn’t know what this youth could do to him. He began to hear voices in his head. “You shouldn’t have ticked her off, dude. She’s tougher than you think.†He fell asleep. Yuki began to grip the air. “Wnaaah!†A groan-like scream came from the thug. “Yuki! No!†Firecat grabbed her wrist. “What, this idiot attempted to harm me, so I will harm him.†Yuki said with a shadowlike aura surrounding her. “Yuki, you may not drive this person to insanity. He was only trying to get our money.†Firecat held tight to her wrist, and then dropped it. “Oh, you want me to stop? Then feel my wrath!†She tore a Light Launcher 2 equipped with her bey, DarkKnightPerzeusB195RWD from her pocket. Perzeus was in Smash Mode, where the Chrome wheel faces down but is still on top of the combo. “Three! Two! One! Go Shoot!†Both bladers shouted in unison. Yuki’s Perzeus was on the offense, circling the stadium. Perzeus rushed at Brawler Chimera EBD145DWB, Chimera countered each and every one of the young girl’s attacks. “Why can’t I hit you?†Yuki interrogated. “Defense Wide Ball, it can counter moves with the ball tip, but can also be stable like D.†Fircat explained. Yuki pretended not to listen. “Percy! Mind Control Attack!†Firecat’s Chimera started rushing towards “Percyâ€. Firecat’s skill was that he had a Psychic bond with each of his cats, including Chimera. “Come on bud, you can do it. Chimera! Feline Rush!†Chimera gathered energy from all the cats Firecat owned. Chimera rammed into Yuki’s bey, stopping Perzeus’s path around the stadium. Then, the team leader was decided.
RE: {STORY}Beyblade: Kazuki's Quest( Chapter 17 Is Up!) [ 3000+ Views] - Themeeny7 - Aug. 06, 2013
(Jul. 28, 2013 5:18 PM)Akio314 Wrote: Welcome one and all to one of the most epic beybattles in the story, Firecat Vs. Yuki! We’re finally here!†Trent Shouted. “We need a plan. Who goes first? Who’s the leader?†Alec spoke coolly. “Let us have a challenge.†Yuki began. “We’ll have a tournament ourselves, do any of you agree?†Trent got excited. “Yes!†Voices came from the left. “Hey you! Hands up!†A mouthy thug around the age of Firecat yelled. “Are you sure you can take us? We would not want to harm you.†The thug punched at Yuki. “What was that?†The thug exclaimed with laughter. Yuki giggled coldly. “You are pushing it. Imbecile.†Yuki spoke with a devious grin. She wanted this person to attack. “Quiet, kid!†He tried to punch but couldn’t move. “Well, well. Do you like that?†He began bashing himself “Ow, ow!†He didn’t know what this youth could do to him. He began to hear voices in his head. “You shouldn’t have ticked her off, dude. She’s tougher than you think.†He fell asleep. Yuki began to grip the air. “Wnaaah!†A groan-like scream came from the thug. “Yuki! No!†Firecat grabbed her wrist. “What, this idiot attempted to harm me, so I will harm him.†Yuki said with a shadowlike aura surrounding her. “Yuki, you may not drive this person to insanity. He was only trying to get our money.†Firecat held tight to her wrist, and then dropped it. “Oh, you want me to stop? Then feel my wrath!†She tore a Light Launcher 2 equipped with her bey, DarkKnightPerzeusB195RWD from her pocket. Perzeus was in Smash Mode, where the Chrome wheel faces down but is still on top of the combo. “Three! Two! One! Go Shoot!†Both bladers shouted in unison. Yuki’s Perzeus was on the offense, circling the stadium. Perzeus rushed at Brawler Chimera EBD145DWB, Chimera countered each and every one of the young girl’s attacks. “Why can’t I hit you?†Yuki interrogated. “Defense Wide Ball, it can counter moves with the ball tip, but can also be stable like D.†Fircat explained. Yuki pretended not to listen. “Percy! Mind Control Attack!†Firecat’s Chimera started rushing towards “Percyâ€. Firecat’s skill was that he had a Psychic bond with each of his cats, including Chimera. “Come on bud, you can do it. Chimera! Feline Rush!†Chimera gathered energy from all the cats Firecat owned. Chimera rammed into Yuki’s bey, stopping Perzeus’s path around the stadium. Then, the team leader was decided.
Good but wait one second. For one, it's Dark Perzeus 230 W4D. Not dark perzeus 195 w2d. W4D is meant to be a upgrade to W2D, except two times better. Yes it is made up but still. And her special move is not " mind controll attack. " This is her special move. -------> Special Move: Grand Escaliver: The whole stadium turns into a whirlpool, and percy smashes his sword through the middle, which can cut beys in half.
besides that can't wait for chapter 19.
ps: Make the battle longer so it can be more epic
RE: {STORY}Beyblade: Kazuki's Quest( Chapter 17 Is Up!) [ 3000+ Views] - akio314 - Aug. 06, 2013
(Aug. 06, 2013 8:09 PM)Themeeny7 Wrote: (Jul. 28, 2013 5:18 PM)Akio314 Wrote: Welcome one and all to one of the most epic beybattles in the story, Firecat Vs. Yuki! We’re finally here!†Trent Shouted. “We need a plan. Who goes first? Who’s the leader?†Alec spoke coolly. “Let us have a challenge.†Yuki began. “We’ll have a tournament ourselves, do any of you agree?†Trent got excited. “Yes!†Voices came from the left. “Hey you! Hands up!†A mouthy thug around the age of Firecat yelled. “Are you sure you can take us? We would not want to harm you.†The thug punched at Yuki. “What was that?†The thug exclaimed with laughter. Yuki giggled coldly. “You are pushing it. Imbecile.†Yuki spoke with a devious grin. She wanted this person to attack. “Quiet, kid!†He tried to punch but couldn’t move. “Well, well. Do you like that?†He began bashing himself “Ow, ow!†He didn’t know what this youth could do to him. He began to hear voices in his head. “You shouldn’t have ticked her off, dude. She’s tougher than you think.†He fell asleep. Yuki began to grip the air. “Wnaaah!†A groan-like scream came from the thug. “Yuki! No!†Firecat grabbed her wrist. “What, this idiot attempted to harm me, so I will harm him.†Yuki said with a shadowlike aura surrounding her. “Yuki, you may not drive this person to insanity. He was only trying to get our money.†Firecat held tight to her wrist, and then dropped it. “Oh, you want me to stop? Then feel my wrath!†She tore a Light Launcher 2 equipped with her bey, DarkKnightPerzeusB195RWD from her pocket. Perzeus was in Smash Mode, where the Chrome wheel faces down but is still on top of the combo. “Three! Two! One! Go Shoot!†Both bladers shouted in unison. Yuki’s Perzeus was on the offense, circling the stadium. Perzeus rushed at Brawler Chimera EBD145DWB, Chimera countered each and every one of the young girl’s attacks. “Why can’t I hit you?†Yuki interrogated. “Defense Wide Ball, it can counter moves with the ball tip, but can also be stable like D.†Fircat explained. Yuki pretended not to listen. “Percy! Mind Control Attack!†Firecat’s Chimera started rushing towards “Percyâ€. Firecat’s skill was that he had a Psychic bond with each of his cats, including Chimera. “Come on bud, you can do it. Chimera! Feline Rush!†Chimera gathered energy from all the cats Firecat owned. Chimera rammed into Yuki’s bey, stopping Perzeus’s path around the stadium. Then, the team leader was decided.
Good but wait one second. For one, it's Dark Perzeus 230 W4D. Not dark perzeus 195 w2d. W4D is meant to be a upgrade to W2D, except two times better. Yes it is made up but still. And her special move is not " mind controll attack. " This is her special move. -------> Special Move: Grand Escaliver: The whole stadium turns into a whirlpool, and percy smashes his sword through the middle, which can cut beys in half.
besides that can't wait for chapter 19. Have you seen any characters who have special moves? I just have the character use their skill for Beybattle use as a sort of "Special Move" type thing. And I wasn't near internet while I wrote the chapter, so I couldn't find the actual Beyblade. Sorry.
RE: {STORY}Beyblade: Kazuki's Quest( Chapter 17 Is Up!) [ 3000+ Views] - Themeeny7 - Aug. 06, 2013
(Aug. 06, 2013 8:13 PM)Akio314 Wrote: (Aug. 06, 2013 8:09 PM)Themeeny7 Wrote: (Jul. 28, 2013 5:18 PM)Akio314 Wrote: Welcome one and all to one of the most epic beybattles in the story, Firecat Vs. Yuki! We’re finally here!†Trent Shouted. “We need a plan. Who goes first? Who’s the leader?†Alec spoke coolly. “Let us have a challenge.†Yuki began. “We’ll have a tournament ourselves, do any of you agree?†Trent got excited. “Yes!†Voices came from the left. “Hey you! Hands up!†A mouthy thug around the age of Firecat yelled. “Are you sure you can take us? We would not want to harm you.†The thug punched at Yuki. “What was that?†The thug exclaimed with laughter. Yuki giggled coldly. “You are pushing it. Imbecile.†Yuki spoke with a devious grin. She wanted this person to attack. “Quiet, kid!†He tried to punch but couldn’t move. “Well, well. Do you like that?†He began bashing himself “Ow, ow!†He didn’t know what this youth could do to him. He began to hear voices in his head. “You shouldn’t have ticked her off, dude. She’s tougher than you think.†He fell asleep. Yuki began to grip the air. “Wnaaah!†A groan-like scream came from the thug. “Yuki! No!†Firecat grabbed her wrist. “What, this idiot attempted to harm me, so I will harm him.†Yuki said with a shadowlike aura surrounding her. “Yuki, you may not drive this person to insanity. He was only trying to get our money.†Firecat held tight to her wrist, and then dropped it. “Oh, you want me to stop? Then feel my wrath!†She tore a Light Launcher 2 equipped with her bey, DarkKnightPerzeusB195RWD from her pocket. Perzeus was in Smash Mode, where the Chrome wheel faces down but is still on top of the combo. “Three! Two! One! Go Shoot!†Both bladers shouted in unison. Yuki’s Perzeus was on the offense, circling the stadium. Perzeus rushed at Brawler Chimera EBD145DWB, Chimera countered each and every one of the young girl’s attacks. “Why can’t I hit you?†Yuki interrogated. “Defense Wide Ball, it can counter moves with the ball tip, but can also be stable like D.†Fircat explained. Yuki pretended not to listen. “Percy! Mind Control Attack!†Firecat’s Chimera started rushing towards “Percyâ€. Firecat’s skill was that he had a Psychic bond with each of his cats, including Chimera. “Come on bud, you can do it. Chimera! Feline Rush!†Chimera gathered energy from all the cats Firecat owned. Chimera rammed into Yuki’s bey, stopping Perzeus’s path around the stadium. Then, the team leader was decided.
Good but wait one second. For one, it's Dark Perzeus 230 W4D. Not dark perzeus 195 w2d. W4D is meant to be a upgrade to W2D, except two times better. Yes it is made up but still. And her special move is not " mind controll attack. " This is her special move. -------> Special Move: Grand Escaliver: The whole stadium turns into a whirlpool, and percy smashes his sword through the middle, which can cut beys in half.
besides that can't wait for chapter 19. Have you seen any characters who have special moves? I just have the character use their skill for Beybattle use as a sort of "Special Move" type thing. And I wasn't near internet while I wrote the chapter, so I couldn't find the actual Beyblade. Sorry.
Oh okay. But can you at least change the name for a fan Plz xD
RE: {STORY}Beyblade: Kazuki's Quest( Chapter 18 Is Up!) [ 4000+ Views] - Sıon - Aug. 08, 2013
Also, change the bottom of duo serpent to D:D with D:D, serpent's special move is bite strike, D:D changes tip in reaction to counter the opponents movement . it fits his personality. and change alec's bey to spiral aries sw145 cs. Aries's special move is horn strike, the "arrow" shapes on aries change position from spiral's grooves.
RE: {STORY}Beyblade: Kazuki's Quest( Chapter 18 Is Up!) [ 4000+ Views] - ★WindStarElite★ - Aug. 08, 2013
Can I add a character bro.
RE: {STORY}Beyblade: Kazuki's Quest( Chapter 18 Is Up!) [ 4000+ Views] - akio314 - Aug. 08, 2013
(Aug. 08, 2013 2:32 AM)XKai_DranzerX Wrote: Can I add a character bro.
Yeah, why not?
RE: {STORY}Beyblade: Kazuki's Quest( Chapter 18 Is Up!) [ 4000+ Views] - ★WindStarElite★ - Aug. 08, 2013
Name:Ace yamakiro
gender:male
age:13
beyoaring phoenix
attribute:fire and wind
special moves:Wind crushing wing,Soaring combustion
Screcrt move:Blazing twin wing burage
bio: Ace is a average boy with a twist he loves to image daydream take walks but that changes at night he changes to an brave ace at blading that will burn his opponent if they mess with him or his friends
Bey design:
metal wheel first layer of 4d Wings on two sides
main metal:Red flames in coated on the metal
clear wheel red flame wings
spintrack:T125 but its red
Tip:CS blue
RE: {STORY}Beyblade: Kazuki's Quest( Chapter 18 Is Up!) [ 4000+ Views] - akio314 - Aug. 20, 2013
Hello folks, I was bored today so I sketched Kazuki.
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