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RE: The Blader's spirit - Luck - Feb. 25, 2012

hm... we take over the world and pwn every1?

RE: The Blader's spirit - nationsbeyblade - Feb. 25, 2012

(Feb. 25, 2012  6:45 PM)Luck Wrote: hm... we take over the world and pwn every1?

hmmmmmm good idea but no

RE: The Blader's spirit - Luck - Feb. 25, 2012

awww... lol Grin

RE: The Blader's spirit - XXaron - Feb. 25, 2012

Idea:
Something something something... beybattles... uinexpeted twists... filler... something else.

RE: The Blader's spirit - Luck - Feb. 25, 2012

yeah, but then again, that's not really an idea, its just a base for the ideas, but yeah, that would be good Grin

RE: The Blader's spirit - nationsbeyblade - Feb. 25, 2012

BUMP

RE: The Blader's spirit - Luck - Feb. 25, 2012

BUMP

RE: The Blader's spirit - nationsbeyblade - Feb. 25, 2012

BUMP


RE: The Blader's spirit - Uwik - Feb. 25, 2012

Bumping is only allowed in the Marketplace Forum guys, even then, after 48 hours interval. Please stop.

RE: The Blader's spirit - nationsbeyblade - Feb. 25, 2012

oh sorry

RE: The Blader's spirit - nationsbeyblade - Feb. 26, 2012

heres the new chapter guys
for the character requet you hve to say wht cutry youre in

RE: The Blader's spirit - nationsbeyblade - Feb. 26, 2012

also does anyone have an idea for a new bey for this?

RE: The Blader's spirit - Samurai Changer - Feb. 26, 2012

Vulcan Anubis 85XF

RE: The Blader's spirit - nationsbeyblade - Feb. 26, 2012

thanks

RE: the bladers spirit - Dual - Feb. 27, 2012

(Feb. 17, 2012  2:25 PM)nationsbeyblade Wrote:
(Feb. 17, 2012  12:09 PM)天翔翼 TenshouYoku Wrote:
(Feb. 17, 2012  8:49 AM)Uwik Wrote: ~X~ : I'd advise you to be more tactful on your criticism. Positive criticisms work better most of the time.
Well, but he is correct. This story is really, really bad.

The lines stick together.
No real main plot.
Too short.
Wrong grammar usage.
That's deadly for a story.

thanks T_T
you know what i am going to ignore you people who say this is bad, try and make a story yourself!,I thout people here would be more friendly

I actually did make a story but...anyway, besides the grammar and punctuation, it's pretty good. And I want to be an author to! Good luck Smile


RE: The Blader's spirit - nationsbeyblade - Feb. 27, 2012

your story is awesome

RE: The Blader's spirit - Luck - Feb. 27, 2012

Im back online! (sorry that was irrelavent)
chapter 13 is awesome! Grin keep going!!

RE: The Blader's spirit - nationsbeyblade - Feb. 27, 2012

i will do chapter 14 when i think of it

RE: The Blader's spirit - Luck - Feb. 27, 2012

ok, i still think we should take over the world though :L (lol)

RE: The Blader's spirit - nationsbeyblade - Feb. 27, 2012

even though that is a great idea i is too predictable

RE: The Blader's spirit - Luck - Feb. 27, 2012

your right... it's toooo realistic Grin

RE: The Blader's spirit - nationsbeyblade - Feb. 27, 2012

i know Grin

RE: The Blader's spirit - Luck - Feb. 27, 2012

yep.... Grin we could pwn the world if we wanted to Tongue_out

RE: The Blader's spirit - nationsbeyblade - Feb. 27, 2012

TOTALLY XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD

RE: The Blader's spirit - Luck - Feb. 27, 2012

yeah, we could have kei on his knees if we wanted to
(proof that we're a delussional blading team... lol)