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RE: L Drago Destroy - Kai-V - Oct. 13, 2011 (Oct. 13, 2011 3:34 PM)Shabalabadoo Wrote: 1) I have no idea about these possessive and not possessive stuff. I think that's small enough to leave for Kei to correct properly Kei always makes mistakes with those too though. RE: L Drago Destroy - Shabalabadoo - Oct. 13, 2011 Shhh, Kei makes no mistakes. I guess if he makes mistakes with those on existing articles, might as well just leave it I guess? But do you happen to know if the way JCx06 changed it is correct, or is "it's" correct? Not that it's a huge deal that would stall the article though. RE: L Drago Destroy - Nocto - Oct. 13, 2011 "It's" = "It is" just like "you're" = "you are" "Its" is possessive and works like "His". Ray Joker and JCx06 are correct. On the article itself: Shabalabadoo Wrote:…you can choose between "Attack Mode" and "Absorb Mode". Attack Mode is when plastic on the Core is visible amidst each Dragon head on the Metal Frame… Shabalabadoo Wrote:The Face on this Beyblade depicts a Dragon, Draco, one of the 88 constellations in space. This is the third version of the L Drago Face, characterized by a slightly more complex design than its predecessors.A personal preference. However this should be removed: Shabalabadoo Wrote:4D Bottoms are a Track and Bottom combined, and most have the gimmick of a dynamic Mode Change.Not entirely false, but not entirely true. Only half of them (2/4) have a dynamic mode change and we can't say for sure that more will be released with similar gimmick. There might be some slight adjustment I'd make on the F:S section, but all in all the article is good. RE: L Drago Destroy - Kai-V - Oct. 13, 2011 (Oct. 13, 2011 3:47 PM)Shabalabadoo Wrote: He makes them himself, but he asks others to correct the mistakes before the articles are published. As far as I know, no published article has those errors. RE: L Drago Destroy - Shabalabadoo - Oct. 13, 2011 (Oct. 13, 2011 4:09 PM)Nocto Wrote: "It's" = "It is" just like "you're" = "you are"hmm, for my whole life I thought the opposite, haha. I'll go through and change them. Quote:On the article itself:I'll change it. Quote:hmm, I'll go look through both and see which one.Shabalabadoo Wrote:The Face on this Beyblade depicts a Dragon, Draco, one of the 88 constellations in space. This is the third version of the L Drago Face, characterized by a slightly more complex design than its predecessors.A personal preference. Quote:However this should be removed:Hmm, I think this might be good: Quote:Being among the first few 4D Bottoms, F:S has the gimmick of a Dynamic Mode Change.yeah I like that. I'll make it fit. Thanks for all these, thanks JCx06 (I'll add about it being wider), and thanks Ray Joker. And thanks Kai-V! Haha, almost forgot to write it. Edit2: now all the changes are made. :) Check them over to see if I made mistakes when writing them. Thanks again. RE: L Drago Destroy - BeybladeStation - Oct. 15, 2011 Shabala, I saw the new rule. Good thing you moved your draft over, ask Kei to close it, I think he said that. We can work! I'll try "Combining" ours. |