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RE: BB-118 Phantom Orion B:D Draft - Kei's Approval NEEDED! - BeybladeStation - Oct. 10, 2011 1. What should I edit? 2. Are you proving yourself wrong? That Article contradicts what you said; it says "4D Metal Wheel" ![]() RE: BB-118 Phantom Orion B:D Draft - Kei's Approval NEEDED! - Shabalabadoo - Oct. 10, 2011 (Oct. 10, 2011 11:21 PM)BeybladeStation Wrote: 1. What should I edit?I just realized that Kai-V has been saying it the correct way to you the whole time, you just haven't listened: http://worldbeyblade.org/Thread-BB-118-Phantom-Orion-B-D-Draft-Kei-s-Approval-NEEDED?pid=802390#pid802390 http://worldbeyblade.org/Thread-BB-118-Phantom-Orion-B-D-Draft-Kei-s-Approval-NEEDED?pid=802460#pid802460 http://worldbeyblade.org/Thread-BB-118-Phantom-Orion-B-D-Draft-Kei-s-Approval-NEEDED?pid=802477#pid802477 http://worldbeyblade.org/Thread-BB-118-Phantom-Orion-B-D-Draft-Kei-s-Approval-NEEDED?pid=802483#pid802483 Four times. So I have no idea what the hell you're saying when you say she told you otherwise... Quote:2. Are you proving yourself wrong? That Article contradicts what you said; it says "4D Metal Wheel" are you honestly being serious here? RE: BB-118 Phantom Orion B:D Draft - Kei's Approval NEEDED! - Dan - Oct. 11, 2011 (Oct. 10, 2011 9:56 PM)BeybladeStation Wrote: I found Shabala's edits similar to yours with some improvements! Its okay! I looked at it, and yeah they are similar. (though first 2 sentences in MW is "it has no center. it is a circle, with no center" LOL) But neither of those edits were employed properly, meaning your article is still garbage. (I.E "It is an empty wheel, due to its circular form" no. that makes no sense.) RE: BB-118 Phantom Orion B:D Draft - Kei's Approval NEEDED! - BeybladeStation - Oct. 11, 2011 There is no middle? Garbage? That is insulting and I feel you should be reported for that. RE: BB-118 Phantom Orion B:D Draft - Kei's Approval NEEDED! - Dan - Oct. 11, 2011 It was a diagnosis, not an insult. I was just saying usually when someone gives you edits, you take it all. Usually helps to listen to Kai-V too. Here, I'll explain this far-out concept: 1. you make article, show case it to everyone 2. people give you feedback, and every once in a while a person even edits your article for you!! 3. You take those edits (if you like them and aren't bad), instead of including sprinkles of it and put it as the OP! It takes a whole lot less work and it isn't like someone completely changed the writing of the article, just improved parts of it to make it more coherent!!!!! In the end it only helps you, and your article will grow. RE: BB-118 Phantom Orion B:D Draft - Kei's Approval NEEDED! - BeybladeStation - Oct. 11, 2011 Oh. My. God. For the last and final time, I sent a PM to both kei and Kai-V to see what I should do, Kai-V said Kei was the director of BeyWiki and to bring my complaints or questions to him, and so I did. I ADDED ALL of Kai-V's edits, some of teh majpr ones she said [IE: Add Stam. Custom after Core] was authorized by Kei and he told me to put it under Phantom. I will adjust the "Metal Frame" and "metal Wheel" (Oct. 10, 2011 11:29 PM)Shabalabadoo Wrote: Four times. So I have no idea what the hell you're saying when you say she told you otherwise...I PM'ED HER FOR SAKE RE: BB-118 Phantom Orion B:D Draft - Kei's Approval NEEDED! - Dan - Oct. 11, 2011 Look at my edit, perhaps that will explain my severely rude, unadulterated insult. (diagnosis) Quote:I PM'ED HER FOR SAKEYEAH SSJ, WHAT DO WANT FOR SAKES!! ![]() RE: BB-118 Phantom Orion B:D Draft - Kei's Approval NEEDED! - BeybladeStation - Oct. 11, 2011 Okay then, I will look at it.. I think what you said was covered, any other edits? RE: BB-118 Phantom Orion B:D Draft - Kei's Approval NEEDED! - Dan - Oct. 11, 2011 word for word employment of SSJ's edits.. RE: BB-118 Phantom Orion B:D Draft - Kei's Approval NEEDED! - BeybladeStation - Oct. 11, 2011 I did add SSJ's edits... RE: BB-118 Phantom Orion B:D Draft - Kei's Approval NEEDED! - Dan - Oct. 11, 2011 Which is exactly why I still see " It is an empty wheel, due to its circular form." in the explanation of Phantom..? Perhaps it was too hard to understand: I'm advising you to take all of his edits, or people will keep editing your current OP which only has a fraction of the edits put in by others. RE: BB-118 Phantom Orion B:D Draft - Kei's Approval NEEDED! - BeybladeStation - Oct. 11, 2011 Edited it. RE: BB-118 Phantom Orion B:D Draft - Kei's Approval NEEDED! - Ray Joker - Oct. 11, 2011 Some errors: Quote:The Phantom Metal Frame also has four spaces within its inner lining which might be intended for air flow to create a better sense of Balance. Moreover, four blue stars are incorporated in the design of the Metal Frame at four equally separated corners of it to fit with the three blue shapes on the Face and, together, form the Orion constellation on the Beyblade when it is in Stamina Mode. Like i said, spheres are 3D. Quote:Phantom's Stamina Mode, along with its circular shape and smooth edges, Phantom is a good Stamina and Defense Wheel. With a Metal Face Heavy, and EDS, this Beyblade is effective in the combinations: MF/-H Phantom Orion BD145EDS and MF/-H Phantom Orion B Bolded sentence doesn't make sense. Other than all this, it looks good to me. RE: BB-118 Phantom Orion B:D Draft - Kei's Approval NEEDED! - BeybladeStation - Oct. 11, 2011 Great find! Edited! RE: BB-118 Phantom Orion B:D Draft - RustyXD - Oct. 11, 2011 You say one thing in your article and another out of it , so which is correct? (Oct. 10, 2011 1:08 PM)BeybladeStation Wrote: Orion is working better for most tests, but if you have tests proving against this, then sure I could add them. (Oct. 01, 2011 6:50 PM)BeybladeStation Wrote: While Orion may not have much use at all, RE: BB-118 Phantom Orion B:D Draft - Kei's Approval NEEDED! - BeybladeStation - Oct. 12, 2011 I mean as compared to Kerbecs/Bull/Aquario.. EDIT: I will try making the extra paragraph. RE: BB-118 Phantom Orion B:D Draft - Kei's Approval NEEDED! - BeybladeStation - Oct. 13, 2011 IT HAS NOW COME TO MY ATTENTION: That the 4D Metal Wheel is the same thing as the 4D Metal Frame... The box says that.. How would the Core and Metal Frame make a Metal Wheel? That is contradicting seeing a Metal Wheel should be made of metal.. That is the flaw.. If anyone has a counter argument and can somehow prove this fact wrong, please do because I am willing to write a paragraph but it is not appropriate to the above fact. RE: BB-118 Phantom Orion B:D Draft - Kei's Approval NEEDED! - Kai-V - Oct. 13, 2011 The Metal Frame is a Metal Wheel ... The 4D Metal Wheel consists of a Frame and a Core, even if either one of them is not totally made of metal. RE: BB-118 Phantom Orion B:D Draft - Kei's Approval NEEDED! - BeybladeStation - Oct. 13, 2011 So then the paragraph will be unveiled: 4D Metal Wheel: Phantom -Weight: 44.50 Grams Secluded from any other Metal Frame, Phantom contains no center unless it is combined with the Core to make the full Metal Whee. Phantom Orion is structured of both the Metal Frame and Core, these two combine to make one Metal Wheel. Unlike any other full Metal Wheel, the center of this Metal Wheel is polycarbonate, due to the Core acting as a Metal Wheel base. So in thought, Phantom takes the place of a Clear Wheel; while the Core takes the place of where a Metal Wheel would be located. Within the conjunction of the Metal Frame and Core, there are many positive effects. Phantom Orion can switch modes by either rotating the Core 180 Degrees; or visa-versa where the Metal Frame could be rotated. I feel now that the article is done. RE: BB-118 Phantom Orion B:D Draft - Kei's Approval NEEDED! - Shabalabadoo - Oct. 14, 2011 (Oct. 01, 2011 6:50 PM)BeybladeStation Wrote: Face: Orion Fixed it up grammaratically and rearranged a bit. RE: BB-118 Phantom Orion B:D Draft - Kei's Approval NEEDED! - Dan - Oct. 14, 2011 You should also not bring up the same combination twice.. (Phantom B:D is mentioned in both Phantom and B:D description. Only use it for B:D description.) I brought this up a while ago, BBS. Though you could have overlooked it. (It was in my edits after all) RE: BB-118 Phantom Orion B:D Draft - Kei's Approval NEEDED! - Shabalabadoo - Oct. 15, 2011 I took out the Phantom B:D in the phantom one just now. :) RE: BB-118 Phantom Orion B:D Draft - Kei's Approval NEEDED! - BeybladeStation - Oct. 15, 2011 Explain that ordering. RE: BB-118 Phantom Orion B:D Draft - Kei's Approval NEEDED! - Shabalabadoo - Oct. 15, 2011 What ordering? RE: BB-118 Phantom Orion B:D Draft - Kei's Approval NEEDED! - BeybladeStation - Oct. 15, 2011 Why is all the information originally placed in the 4D Metal Wheel section now taken away? |