RE: A story im working on - jass griper - Apr. 02, 2011
hey guys even i will compose a story but later
RE: A story im working on - Fang - Apr. 02, 2011
Good for you =D I call seeing it firsT!!!
RE: A story im working on - CM Punk - Apr. 02, 2011
Thanks dude
RE: A story im working on - Fang - Apr. 02, 2011
Thanks for what?
RE: A story im working on - CM Punk - Apr. 03, 2011
@XXXBeYsTeAleR Putting in my Idea(I Think)
RE: A story im working on - Fang - Apr. 03, 2011
Lol okay i will i guess =D
RE: A story im working on - BillyBlast - Apr. 03, 2011
thats twice now i look here and expected a new ep sob then i saw this and was sure a new ep and there wasnt NNNNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
and the world ShAtters except for beyblades
RE: A story im working on - Fang - Apr. 03, 2011
Lol hahha
RE: A story im working on - Rasta - Apr. 04, 2011
PERFECT!!!!! THANK YOU SO MUCH!!!!
RE: A story im working on - Fang - Apr. 05, 2011
Lol no problem next story will be tomorrow =D oh and USABlader kesha truly does d=suck
RE: A story im working on - Rasta - Apr. 05, 2011
thnx... now you FEEL MY PAIN also it's spelled $uck now... LOL
RE: A story im working on - xWolf - Apr. 06, 2011
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RE: A story im working on - Kujikato - Apr. 08, 2011
character request
Name: Izuma Inzori
BeyBlade: starts with: Silent Ninja MSBSCH85 RHF/RS, final form is: Silent Samurai MKSCH85 WRHF/RWD
BeyBlade description:
Face: A shuriken in the middle, between two kantanas and the writing SAMURAI for Silent Samurai and NINJA for Silent Ninja (color: all decals black on silver background)
Silent: think of Lightning with the multi hit mode (renamed Rapid Strike mode) as thick shurikens, and upper mode (renamed Slice mode) as a kantana (color: un-painted)
Samurai: think of Kerbecs + L-Drago I with the 'rings' as shurikens and the dragon heads as kantanas (color; silver)
Ninja: same as Samurai except that the dragon heads are shaped like kunai (color: silver)
MKSCH85: Metal Kantana Spring Change Height 8.5mm – 11.0mm, same as MSBSCH85 except that the Shuriken Blade is changed with 4 kantanas (color: translucent silver for the plastic, un-painted metal for the “bladesâ€)
MSBSCH85: Metal Shuriken Blade Spring Change Height 8.5mm-11mm, think of CH120 with an external shell resembling a shuriken made of metal, when lose, MSBSCH85 can bounce due to the spring within the core of MSBSCH85.
RHF/RS: Rubber Hole Flat / Rubber Sharp (can change during combat at Izuma’s command)
WRHF/RWD: Wide Rubber Hole Flat / Rubber Wide Defense (can change during combat at Izuma’s command (color: translucent silver for plastic, black for the rubber))
Super Attacks:
Level 1: “Silent death,†Silent Samurai disappears and hits opponent with a million kunai and shuriken and kantanas
Level 2: “100 Slices of The Samurais’’,†the Metal Shuriken shell on MSBSCH85 swells and smashes the opponent’s bey 100 times, on the 99th time, Silent Ninja halts and circles the stadium 10 times, cheating a black hurricane that flips the opposing bey out of the stadium with a insanely powerful smash from Silent Samurai.
Level 3: N/A
Level X: “Infinite Blade†Samurai appears and slices at the opponent’s bey with such speed and power that the opposing bey instantly stops and flies out of the stadium 10 meters away, breaking it in half. (Last resort, can only be used three times in a year!)
Team attack 1: “Hydro Kantana Blitzâ€: Team attack with Hydro Narwhale: Narwhale lifts Samurai, Samurai creates a kantana and Narwhale adds high pressure water jets to it, they attack together, while Samurai slices with the kantana, narwhale flips and uses water jets to grind the opponent’s clear wheel, and increase its spin velocity, causing the opponent’s bey to completely stop by Narwhale’s grind or get KOed by Samurai’s attack
Team attack 2: “Electric Kantana Diveâ€: Team attack with Electric Berserker: Berserker goes around Samurai as a shield while circling the stadium (like the moon is Berserker, earth is Samurai and the centre of the stadium id the sun) and then Samurai shoots up in the sky, descending with Samurai spinning a kantana charged with lightning and Berserker keeping the opponent bey in one spot by surrounding it with a electric fence
Team attack 3: “Magma Kantana Diveâ€: Team attack with Magma Saurian: Refer to “Electric Kantana Dive†team attack with Berserker’s parts replaced by Saurian
Team attack X: “Inzori Finaleâ€: Team attack involving all the Team members: first, Narwhale soaks all the opponent beys, next Berserker zaps all of them, while the opponents are distracted by Narwhale and Berserkers team attack, then Narwhale fills the stadium with water at the same time, Saurian releases a flow of lava, trapping the opponent beys in Rock, allowing the entire team the time to do “Infinite Magma Hydro Electric Kantana Attack†without any opposition
BeyBlade Type: Legendary
Spin Direction: Left
Character bio:
Gender: Male
Clothes: Black Kevlar T-shirt and jeans and silver Kevlar cloak with black flames. (cloak is based on Minato from NARUTO)
Black hair, Chinese origin, oldest of 4 children
Caries twin Kantanas everywhere.
Team rank: Leader
Attitude: helpful and cool, he has to keep a critical eye on his twin sister, Sonai so that she doesn’t go out of control with her short temper, his classmates (except for Sonai) are jealous of him. When he promises something, you can guarantee that he will keep his promise unless it has anything to do with murder or theft. Keeps his younger brothers in line every day so that they don’t drive Sonai crazy.
Age: 17 years as of February 27, 2011
Name: Sonai Inzori
BeyBlade: begins with: Pre-HWS Narwhale CH120 PD, and ends with: Hydro Narwhale XDFCH110 EPWD/PD
Type: Stamina
BeyBlade description:
Face: For both Narwhales, two narwhales next to each other with a wave and the writing Narwhale on the bottom. (Color: the narwhales: sliver, the wave: light blue, the writing: silver, the background: medium dark blue)
Hydro: imagine the Pre-HWS Virgo except the lobes are wave like. (Un-colored)
(Metal wheel) Narwhale: 4 Narwhales in a circle with a wave pattern on the bottom
(Clear wheel) Narwhale: two Narwhales in a circle. (Translucent blue)
XDFCH110: eXtreme Down Force Change Height 11.0mm- 13.5mm, basically a CH110 with the external shell as a super wide DF that works in both spin directions. (Translucent blue)
EPWD/PD: Eternal Polish Wide Defense/Polish Defense, PD with a voice controlled shaft aligned in PD’s notches, wielding a free spinning PWD (Translucent blue)
Super Attacks:
Level 1: “ Hydro Turbo Boostâ€: Narwhale creates a water typhoon complimenting its team members spin or itself spin, thus increasing the bey affected by the water typhoon spin velocity.
Level 2: “Hydro Cannonâ€: Narwhale creates a huge water typhoon in the playing area and sends it at the opponent’s bey, sending it flying repeatedly so that Narwhale’s extreme stamina can be used to outlast the opponent’s bey.
Level 3: “Flying Hydro Narwhale Cannonâ€: Hydro Narwhale hovers in the air because on XDFCH110 and creates a water Narwhale to ram the opponent’s bey.
Level X: “Hydro Hornâ€: Narwhale appears and creates a high pressure water jet in the shape of a Narwhale’s horn and Stabs the opponent’s bey breaking it in half, or KOing in instantly
Team Attacks:
Team attack 1: “Hydro Kantana Blitzâ€: Team attack with Silent Samurai: Hydro Narwhale lifts Silent Samurai, Samurai creates a Kantana and Narwhale adds high pressure water jets to it, and then they attack together, while Samurai slices with the kantana, narwhale flips and uses Hydro to grind the opponent’s clear wheel, causing the opponent’s bey to completely stop by Narwhale’s grind or get KOed by Samurai’s attack
Team attack 2: “Hydro Shockâ€: Team attack with Electric Berserker: Team attack with Hydro Narwhale: First, Narwhale soaks the opposing beys with water, then Berserker zaps them, after that, Narwhale creates a water typhoon that Berserker charges with electricity
Team attack 3: “Rock Strikeâ€: Team attack with Magma Saurian: Narwhale fills the stadium with at the same time, Saurian releases a flow of lava, trapping the opposing beys in rock, defenseless against a water/magma spear strike.
Team attack X: “Inzori Finaleâ€: Team attack involving all the Team members: first, Narwhale soaks all the opponent beys, next Berserker zaps all of them, while the opponents are distracted by Narwhale and Berserkers team attack, then Narwhale fills the stadium with water at the same time, Saurian releases a flow of lava, trapping the opponent beys in Rock, allowing the entire team the time to do “Infinite Magma Hydro Electric Kantana Attack†without any opposition
Spin Direction: L/R
Character bio:
Gender: Female
Clothes: wears basically the same as all the Inzori except that her cloak is blue with silver flames.
Caries a special Touch Screen Repair Computer, TSRC, and tools for bey repairs
Rank in Team: repairer. (Technician)
Black hair, Chinese origin, and 2nd oldest of 4 children
Attitude: very reckless, and has a short temper, her twin brother, Izuma, does all that he can do to make sure she doesn’t go out of control with her rage and short temper doesn’t get the worst of her, her classmates (except for Izuma) are jealous of her. When she promises something, you can guarantee that she will keep her promise unless it has anything to do with murder or theft. She can get very angry with her 2 younger brothers, she respects Inzori as the greatest beyblader of all time
She is Izuma’s twin sister
Age: 17 as of February 27, 2011
Name: Hatachi Inzori
BeyBlade: begins with: Static Zerker LB135 ELRF final form: Electric Berserker BXBCH135 EMCLRF
Beyblade type: Attack
BeyBlade Discription:
Face: A sword with electricity coming out of it and the writing BERSERKER or ZERKER on the bottom. (Color: the sword: Silver, everything else: yellow on a black background)
Electric: Looks like a metal wheel with 4 lengthened protrusions in the shape of thunderbolts. (Slightly overhangs the track like Rock does (color: silver))
Static: same as Electric but it only has 3 protrusions
Berserker: 4 very large swords in a circle. (Color: translucent light yellow)
Zerker: 3 swords in a circle. (Color: translucent dark yellow)
BXBCH135: Bending eXtreme Blades Change Height 13.5mm – 16.0mm, basically a CH___ with 4 large Blades that can bend at Hatachi’s command during battle.
LB135: Lightning Blade 13.5mm, 3 lightning like blades facing outward.
ELRF: Eternal Left Rubber Flat, a free spinning RF.
EMCLRF: Eternal Metal Coated Left Rubber Flat, combine Metal Flat, Rubber Flat, and Eternal___ and CS, a free spinning LRF with a Metal Coat around it. (The metal coat is raised by 2mm from the Left Rubber Flat)
Super attacks:
Level 1: “Static Shieldâ€: a shield of electricity that causes the opponent’s bey to gain static electricity and stick to other unwanted friction causing things.
Level 2: “Lightning Horn Rampâ€: a Horn with a smooth slope made of electricity rams the opponent bey and “slopes†it out of the stadium if it hits.
Level 3: “Electric Blade Typhoonâ€: a electric typhoon with electric Berserker Blades popping out every where to hit the opposing bey.
Level X: “Electric Berserker Bladeâ€: Electric Berserker’s version of Samurai’s Infinite Blade except that the sword is made of electricity.
Team attacks:
Team attack 1: “Hydro Shockâ€: Team attack with Hydro Narwhale: First, Narwhale soaks the opposing beys with water, then Berserker zaps them, after that, Narwhale creates a water typhoon that Berserker charges with electricity.
Team attack 2: “Lightning Kantana Diveâ€: Team attack with Silent Samurai: Berserker goes around Samurai as a shield while circling the stadium (like the moon is Berserker, earth is Samurai and the centre of the stadium id the sun) and then Samurai shoots up in the sky, descending with Samurai spinning a kantana charged with lightning and Berserker keeping the opponent bey in one spot by surrounding it with a electric fence.
Team attack 3: “Lava/Lightning Trap Grindâ€: Team attack with Magma Saurian: (possibly the silliest tag-team attack ever) Saurian makes a wall of lava in the shape of [and Berserker creates a wall that looks like], then they trap the opposing beys in between the two walls like this[], then make the wall look like ll, thus creating friction to halt the trapped beys to a complete stop
Team attack X: “Inzori Finaleâ€: Team attack involving all the Team members: first, Narwhale soaks all the opponent beys, next Berserker zaps all of them, while the opponents are distracted by Narwhale and Berserkers team attack, then Narwhale fills the stadium with water at the same time, Saurian releases a flow of lava, trapping the opponent beys in Rock, allowing the entire team the time to do “Infinite Magma Hydro Electric Kantana Attack†without any opposition
Spin direction: Left
Character bio:
Gender: male
Clothes: wears basically the same as all the Inzori except that his cloak is black with yellow thunderbolts, and wears repair goggles.
Black hair, Chinese origin, and 3rd of 4 children
Carries a special touch screen analyzer computer that can scan beys and create strategies according to the opponent’s bey parts and battle strategies for each of the team’s members
Team rank: Tactician
Attitude: a Bey strategist, caring and intelligent.
Age: 14 years old as of March 8, 2011 Name: Rez Inzori
Beyblade: first bey: Inferno Dino BD145 RS ___ final bey: Magma Saurian XGBCH160 RDS
BeyBlade Description:
Face: A T-Red head blowing Flame and the writing DINO on the bottom for Inferno Dino/A T-Rex head with Magma trickling down the side and the writing SAURIAN on the bottom for Magma Saurian. (Color: Brown T-Rex head, red flames/magma, & gold DINO/SAURIAN)
Blaze: A wider, thicker, more defensive version of Hell, it is just 10 mm wider (red and brown)
Magma: Metal version of Heat with rubber in the gaps. (Rubber: red, metal: un-colored)
Dino: a T-Rex in a circle (the T-Rex: brown, the background or other plastic: red)
Saurian: ripples of lava in a circle. (Color: translucent red)
MBD145: a metal version of Hell Kerbecs’ Track. (Translucent red)
XGBCH160: eXtreme Gravity Bowl Change Height 16.0mm – 18.5mm, cross of CH___ and GB145, 4 metal balls on the shell of CH___, the plastic is arranged in a 4 pronged star.
RS: Rubber Sharp. (Color: translucent red, rubber: red)
RDS: Rubber Defense Sharp, a DS made of rubber (Color: red rubber and translucent red for the plastic parts)
Super attacks:
Level 1: “Lava Shieldâ€: Saurian creates a wall of Lava around it to protect it from attacks.
Level 2: “Lava Wipeoutâ€: Saurian creates a wave of lava to cover its opponents.
Level X: “Volcano Graveâ€: Saurian suddenly starts circling the stadium and creates a miniature un-erupted volcano in the middle of the stadium, then when the opponent’s bey is in the volcano’s crater, the volcano explodes, sending the opponent’s bey flying.
Team attacks:
Team attack 1: Magma Kantana Strike: Team attack with Silent Samurai: Refer to “Electric Kantana Dive†team attack with Berserker’s parts replaced by Saurian
Team attack 2: “Lava/Lightning Trap Grind†(possibly the silliest tag-team attack ever) : Team attack with Electric Berserker: Saurian makes a wall of lava in the shape of [and Berserker creates a wall that looks like], then they trap the opposing beys in between the two walls like this[], then make the wall look like ll, thus creating friction to halt the trapped beys to a complete stop
Team attack 3: Rock Strike: Team attack with Hydro Narwhale: Narwhale fills the stadium with at the same time, Saurian releases a flow of lava, trapping the opposing beys in rock, defenseless against a water/magma spear strike.
Team attack X: “Inzori Finaleâ€: Team attack involving all the Team members: first, Narwhale soaks all the opponent beys, next Berserker zaps all of them, while the opponents are distracted by Narwhale and Berserkers team attack, then Narwhale fills the stadium with water at the same time, Saurian releases a flow of lava, trapping the opponent beys in Rock, allowing the entire team the time to do “Infinite Magma Hydro Electric Kantana Attack†without any opposition
Character bio:
Gender: male
Clothes: wears basically the same as all the Inzori except that his cloak is silver with red flames.
Black hair, Chinese origin, and the youngest of 4 children
Team rank: Attack absorber (the shield)
Attitude: very humorous, liked by everyone.
RE: A story im working on - Fang - Apr. 18, 2011
I feel like a total criminal right now I AM SORRY but here is the new chapter and uh Draco I will use those later k?!
Chapter 13 Spirit is the way!
Dante sat on his bed. "I'm ruined!" He yelled. Dante kicked a can across the room. "I'll never beyblade again and Xhaust knows it too!" He yelled again. "I am a plain loser." He sobbed. "Or maybe your not" Said the sweet voice of Frost. "I made you this." She said holding out a twinkling bey. "What is it?" He asked picking up the bey. "It is a beyblade but it isn't strong like yours." Frost said. "Okay I am gonna go test it out." He said adding "Wanna come?" "Sure!" Frost said running to the training center. "I bet a foot rub I will beat you to the training center!" Frost said. "NEVER!" Dante yelled speeding off for Frost. They both made it in a tie. "Right there is a stadium." Frost said pointing. " Good eye." Dante said sweetly. "I wonder if she like me." Dante thought running to the stadium. "3...2...1... LET IT RIP!" Frost and Dante yelled. The beys were launched and in an instant they crashed. "Ah the sound of grinding metal." Dante said. For a second Dante was winning but then Frost used her Frost Drakkix to disappear. "Gah!" Dante said when his bey was smashed by something. "Whoa! your good" Dante said. "Thanks!" Frost said happily. "Hmm, I can't win because I don't have my special moves anymore. But Dante noticed the same spin track. C145. "SPECIAL MOVE FLAME THUNDER STRIKE!" Dante yelled. His bey grew an intense red. It smashed Frost Drakkix into the air. Then Dante's bey came down as bright as a lighting bolt and smashed Frost Drakkix into the ground. "Good job!" Dante said but realized his bey was different. Dante stared in a disbelieving look. "Burn Hawkheart C145WD!" Dante yelled in excitement. Something still wasn't right. When Dante flipped the bey over it had a completely different spin track. "Hmm, It just has longer claws its not that bad." Dante said. "B-b-but YOU GOT YOUR NEW BEY BACK!" Frost yelled popping Dante's ears. "I know." Dante said happily. ...BOOM! Crash bang plop! The noise sent the ground shacking. everyone was screaming. "RUN FOR YOUR LIIIVES!" Someone yelled. "ITS THE WORLD DOMINATOR!" Someone else yelled. The boy stepped out. He had a mask. With blue hair. "Freeze!"
Guys I am so sorry that I didn't get to you as soon as I wanted. So this will be the next one in awhile.
RE: A story im working on - Rasta - Apr. 21, 2011
EPICNESS
RE: A story im working on - Fang - Apr. 23, 2011
LOL haha thanks man I will hopefully do more (This message was within the 5 minz I had of computer time I forgot about the story D=)
RE: A story im working on - BillyBlast - Apr. 23, 2011
cool i was thinking about my bey to evole again permanet it will be awessome well
havent thought of a fusion wheel now but ________ Fico CHAD230 MFD (Metal Flat Defense) also like persues can spin left or right
ok i think i got it reallllllllly long ShootingInferno FiCo Change Armor Defense 230 Metal Flat Defense just call it the long name when i first show you then i will just call it Fico
RE: A story im working on - TenshouTsubasa - Apr. 23, 2011
This story is better than before. Good job.
However the words still sticks together.
RE: A story im working on - BillyBlast - Apr. 29, 2011
WHERES THE NEXT CAHPTER NOT again
RE: A story im working on - Fang - Apr. 29, 2011
Agh! BILLY! I may be grounded but I do get SOME time to right so here it is I guess O.o
Chapter 14 ITS THE FINAL COUNTDOWN!!!
"Freeze, I challenge you!" Dante snarled. "Why? I'll just freeze your bey again haha!" Freeze snickered. "Oh yeah!" "Then lets battle!" Dante said readying his bey. "Whatever" Freeze said. Dante and freeze stood up to the stadium. "Get ready for a blast from the past!" Freeze said. "Oh it's gonna be different, That I promise." "Ha! Don't make me laugh" Freeze said. "3...2...1... LET IT RIP!" Freeze and Dante yelled. "GO BURN HAWKHEART C145WD" The beys crashed hard. "Haha! Still weak like before!" Freeze said. "Oh you might find something different!" Dante said. "GO FROZEN SPERENT 85XMF" Freeze yelled. "No, NEVER! I realize now that the fire of my bey with LIGHT ME TO VICTORY!!!" Dante yelled. "Special HAWK SWOOPING BURN FLARE TORNADO!!!!" Dante yelled. His voice rang with confidence around the room. Burn Hawkheart C145WD jumped into the air, Then came down like a shooting star. The bey was coming down with intense speed and was becoming a fireball. It smashed into Frozen Serpent 85XMF and launched it into the air. Then Burn Hawkheart unleashed it's longer claws and jumped into the air. It left behind a fiery tornado. In the air it began to spin vertically. It smashed into Frozen Serpent 85XMF sending its firey tornado after it. "Noooooooo!" Freeze yelled. Freeze was pushed back and his mask slid off. His long hair covered his face. Before he could see who freeze was. He put on his mask and ran towards his bey. "No Frozen Serpent!" Freeze cried out pitifully. Freeze turned around and stared at Dante. Suddenly Freeze threw a smoke bomb on the ground and ran away. "Whew" Dante said whipping his fore head. "anyone here?!" A voice yelled. "Just me!" Dante called back. "Are you the amazing Dante?" He asked. "Yes" Dante said. "Oh cool! I am Izuma" Izuma said. "May I battle you?" Izuma asked. "Ugh" Dante groaned. "Tomorrow? Please I just had a rough battle" Dante said. "Okay" Izuma said. Izuma left the room. Dante tried to get to the Bey center to fix his bey but he collasped before he got there. Dante woke up to a prod in his rib cage. He looked up and saw a figure that didn't seem to happy for no reason.
You happy Billy any Draco? Please comment
RE: A story im working on - BillyBlast - Apr. 29, 2011
Good chapter sorry if you get grounded
RE: A story im working on - Fang - Apr. 29, 2011
LOL well atleast you got your wish =D
RE: A story im working on - Rasta - May. 01, 2011
perfect.... I think you would be a good author!
RE: A story im working on - TheBlayder - May. 01, 2011
Ok, heres my review! Good story so far, the actual storyline is good, but the story needs to have a few kicks in it to make it better, such as describing people and places a bit more. Apart from that it was pretty good, and i reccomend you read to widen your vocabulary and most of all keep writing this story!
EDIT- Oh, and if you get the time can you please review my story :3
http://worldbeyblade.org/Thread-Chapter-2-DONE-Beyblade-Dragulus-Need-2-Customs
RE: A story im working on - Fang - May. 02, 2011
Thanks sorry that i havent been able to write this story so heres what happened so you guys dont get mad. I got some bad grades in school so my mom took away beyblades and my pc. she gives me about an hour but in that time i keep forgeting. so I promise you guys next time I will write the story.
Previes guys cuz I love you that much i literaly asked for an extra 5 mins on pc time.
Dante was scared out of his mind. Dante began to run. The figure came after him. It was like a snake. Dante began sheriking when he felt something touching his feet. Dante crashed into a wall tripping. "Get out of here!" Dante yelled shuffling his feet. The figure stood there, Watching him enjoying his fear.
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