(Jan. 09, 2011  11:10 PM)SupersonicLibra Wrote: 3 more!!! wow! maybe you should add that to your title.and is my character going to betray?!?!? hope not because i sent u a pm.

(Jan. 05, 2011  2:36 PM)darkangel629 Wrote: here is CHAPTER 2 PART 2

me:speaking of shooting star pegasis.I open my beydeck case and pull out shooting star pegasis.I show it to ethan.ethan:no way in the legends it says that only a choosen member of the hagata family can wield shooting star pegasis.me:plus they only found a body for my mom,dad, and brother.ethan:your right i belive that your kevin.me:well first i am going to tell you my story.I tell ethan the story of what happened and whathve i been doing the past 7 years.ethan: so you been training alot.me:yes i have.ethan:well kets battle right now!!!!!.me:alright.we go outside to a stadium ethan has in his back yard.we set up our beys.me and ethan:3....2...1 let it rip.both our beys go into the stadiumwith tremdous power.instanly i go on the attack.so does dranzer.when are beys finally collied me and ethan get knocked down by the power of the blow.then i send pegasis to attack again.so does ethan.we collide in the middle of the stadium it turns into a standstill.both are beys are grinding into each other in the middle of the stadium.none of are beys are bugding.ethan:well kevin you were not the only person training for the past 7 years.ethan:me,Samuel,deuce,and fish have been trining all these years to get revenge on the people who killed your family.me:you guys really did that for me.ethan:yes cause you were are best friend.ethan:now back to the battle.i told pegasis to push ethan back.ethan told his comet dranzer m145wd to hold it ground.me:we are getting anywhere with this battle so i will end it.before i could use my special move.dranzer throw pegasis upward.pegasis landed at the edge of the ring.i told pegasis to attack at full power.ethan said the same thing and we started clash violently in the stadium.we were both getting tried very quickly.and our beys didnt have much stamina left.so i said pegasis special move shooting star overdrive.pegais got covered in a black energy that had little specks or sliver in it the looked like stars in space.i hit him six times from all directionsand on the 6th hit i fipped him up into the sky.but before i could contiune.he said dranzer special move blazing comet rainstormhis emblem flashed in the sky and huge comets where raining down on the stadium arter 9 or 10 comets came down a master comet with dranzer in it came down and hit pegasis.i said nooooooo pegasis.after the smoke cleared i say the pegasis was spinning weakly.i said one more time pegasis special move shooting star overdrive.so pegasis got covered in the black energy and his track got covered in black fire i hit him six times and threw up in the air put before he could use his special move pegasis jumped up smashed him to the ground and crashed him to him.after the smoke cleared i saw that dranzer stoped spinning and pegsis was spininning weakly.i won i won.pegasis flew back into my hand and ethan picked dranzer

THE END OF CHAPTER 2
I WILL POST CHAPTER 3 LATER TODAY
COMMENT,RATE,AND VOTE.I AM TAKING CHARCTER REQUESTS ALSO.

(Jan. 10, 2011  2:10 AM)ShadowVampj Wrote: bad guy.

Name: sigma geidan

Bey: Dark Serpent CH120FS

Characteristics: loves battle, enjoys watching others suffer, has a pure hatred of azure( if someone wants to know why itll be in my story "azure the unknown blader" tht is if i get more ppls support)and has an intense red aura.

Special attacks: Serpents Nightmare, Fangs of armageddon, Medusa's grip.

Appearance: wears a pure black cloak, eyes are bright yellow, fangs, lines going dwn his eyes nd cheeks, silver hair, a serpents emblem on his back, and a hiss when he prounces his S. (example: I ssssssee ur all here to ussssselessss bladersss)

(Jan. 10, 2011  2:16 AM)ewboy1 Wrote: how about raiuga son traysa and his bey blaze mdrago the forbidden bey's son and heir

(Jan. 10, 2011  2:50 AM)SupersonicLibra Wrote: ur rating is 4 man