RE: Bey100’s Series: Beyblade Burst Cyber Crush (Ongoing) - Bey100 - Mar. 12, 2023
Beyblade Burst Cyber Crush Episode 9:
Free Arrives! Illusion Fafnir!
We see Free walking down a street
Free smiles
We cut to the Beygym
Ron:Common!
Roc hits Aires knocking it out of the stadium
Ron: Yes!
Alex: Uh…
Alice: Just try again you’ll win! I think.
Alex: Yeah! I better!
???: Interesting…
The group turns around
Ron: Are you actually…
Ron faints
We see a shot of Free
Free: Yeah… it’s me.
Ron wakes up and gets back up
Free: I saw your battle with Ron Alex…
Alex: How?
Free: There’s literally a video all around the world.
Alex: You mean… I’m famous?
Free: Kinda…
Alex has a big grin on his face
Gale: Wait so what are you doing here?
Free chuckles a little
Free holds up his bey
Free: Meet Illusion Fafnir!
The group is in awe of the bey
Gale: That’s it! You are going to battle me!
Alice: Gale, chillax… Free just got here.
Free: Nah, I don’t mind.
We cut to Gale and Free at the stadium putting their beys on their launchers
Ron: Gale, You need to know that Fafnir has rubber so when Griffin hits it Fafnir will speed up and absorb the spin so be careful!
Gale: Shut up smart aleck! I know what I’m doing!
Ron makes a shocked face
Gale (thoughts): I’ll beat Free I know it!
Alex: Ready and Set!
3..2..1.. Let It Rip!
Griffin and Fafnir both go around the stadium
Gale clenches his fist
Gale: Bring it on! Calm boy!
Alice giggles
Alice: Calm boy?
Griffin hits Fafnir but Fafnir knocks Griffin back
Gale makes a shocked face
Fafnir takes the center
Free yawns
Free: This is pretty boring….
Gale: Grrr..
Griffin keeps hitting Fafnir but Fafnir absorbs all the impact
Gale: How!?
Free: Well you’re pretty weak.
Gale: Shut up!
Gale red aurora begins to glow
Gale: Now! Flame Griffin!
Griffin flares out and avatar appears
Free yellow aurora starts to glow
Free: I might as well end this… Illusion Fafnir!
Fafnir flares out and avatar appears
Free: Go! Bounce Counter!
Fafnir bounce driver slowly goes down
Gale: Huh?
Fafnir goes speeding around the stadium
Free: Illusion Claw!
Free does claw effect with his hand
Fafnir hits Griffin knocking Griffin in the air
Gale: No!!!
Griffin burst
Gale makes a shocked face
Alex: Illusion Fafnir with a burst finish! With a score of 2-0 Free De Lahoya is the winner!
Gale makes a frustrated face
Free yawns
Free: Boring.
Alex looks at Free
Alex: Oh man…
Free: Gale I expected better from you…
Gale: I tried okay!
Free: Nah.
Gale: Grrr…
Ron screams
Ron: Free you’re so cool! I want to battle you!
Free takes a good look at Ron
Free: Are you strong?
Ron: As a Blader?
Free: Yes.
Ron smiles
Ron: I am-
Gale: Weak!
Everyone looks at Gale
Gale: Sorry… he he.
Ron: I am a strong blader!
Free: Better not be lying…
Free yellow aurora glows
Ron makes a serious face
Ron: Oh don’t worry I’m not!
Free smiles
Free holds up Illusion Fafnir
Ron holds up Guardian Roc
Ron: Let’s do this!
Free smiles
To be continued…
Next Episode: Ron’s Challenge!
3..2..1.. Let It Rip!!!
RE: Bey100’s Series: Beyblade Burst Cyber Crush (Ongoing) - Bey100 - Mar. 13, 2023
Title For Next Series After Cyber Crush (if season 2 happens)
Beyblade Burst Cyber Battle
RE: Bey100’s Series: Beyblade Burst Cyber Crush (Ongoing) - Bey100 - Mar. 14, 2023
I want you guys to tell me your favorite Cyber Crush episode is so far, and why and please no "I like all the episodes" or "I don't have a favorite" as this is to help me create better episodes in the future so please actually tell me what your favorite episode of Cyber Crush is from Episodes 1-9. Thanks!
RE: Bey100’s Series: Beyblade Burst Cyber Crush (Ongoing) - The Goat0531 - Mar. 14, 2023
(Mar. 14, 2023 2:05 AM)Bey100 Wrote: I want you guys to tell me your favorite Cyber Crush episode is so far, and why and please no "I like all the episodes" or "I don't have a favorite" as this is to help me create better episodes in the future so please actually tell me what your favorite episode of Cyber Crush is from Episodes 1-9. Thanks!
Episode 9
RE: Bey100’s Series: Beyblade Burst Cyber Crush (Ongoing) - Bey100 - Mar. 14, 2023
(Mar. 14, 2023 4:16 AM)The Goat0531 Wrote: (Mar. 14, 2023 2:05 AM)Bey100 Wrote: I want you guys to tell me your favorite Cyber Crush episode is so far, and why and please no "I like all the episodes" or "I don't have a favorite" as this is to help me create better episodes in the future so please actually tell me what your favorite episode of Cyber Crush is from Episodes 1-9. Thanks!
Episode 9 Is there any specific reason why?And if not thanks.
Announcing The 2nd Beyblade Burst Cyber Crush Character Contest! This will be titled “The 2nd Round”!
This is how it goes:
Core:
Blade:
Disk:
Driver:
Superweight:
This 2nd Contest will begin today March 14 and will last until Friday, March 17 2023!
Whoever wins will have their character and bey appear in an episode so join the 2nd round today!!!!!!
3..2..1.. Let It Rip!
RE: Bey100’s Series: Beyblade Burst Cyber Crush (Ongoing) (2nd Character Contest Ongoing) - The Goat0531 - Mar. 14, 2023
(Mar. 14, 2023 1:37 PM)Bey100 Wrote: (Mar. 14, 2023 4:16 AM)The Goat0531 Wrote: Episode 9 Is there any specific reason why?And if not thanks.
Announcing The 2nd Beyblade Burst Cyber Crush Character Contest! This will be titled “The 2nd Round”!
This is how it goes:
Core:
Blade:
Disk:
Driver:
Superweight:
This 2nd Contest will begin today March 14 and will last until Friday, March 17 2023!
Whoever wins will have their character and bey appear in an episode so join the 2nd round today!!!!!!
3..2..1.. Let It Rip!
I know this might sound generic and sound like I'm capping but just, the writing gets better every episode imo. You're doing really good with this series which is why I keep reading it. Also I'll enter this contest, hope I win this time with the changes I made to my oc but hey if I lose it just tells me to tweak him even more to make him even better.
RE: Bey100’s Series: Beyblade Burst Cyber Crush (Ongoing) (2nd Character Contest Ongoing) - Bey100 - Mar. 14, 2023
(Mar. 14, 2023 10:38 PM)The Goat0531 Wrote: (Mar. 14, 2023 1:37 PM)Bey100 Wrote: Is there any specific reason why?And if not thanks.
Announcing The 2nd Beyblade Burst Cyber Crush Character Contest! This will be titled “The 2nd Round”!
This is how it goes:
Core:
Blade:
Disk:
Driver:
Superweight:
This 2nd Contest will begin today March 14 and will last until Friday, March 17 2023!
Whoever wins will have their character and bey appear in an episode so join the 2nd round today!!!!!!
3..2..1.. Let It Rip!
I know this might sound generic and sound like I'm capping but just, the writing gets better every episode imo. You're doing really good with this series which is why I keep reading it. Also I'll enter this contest, hope I win this time with the changes I made to my oc but hey if I lose it just tells me to tweak him even more to make him even better. Don’t feel bad if you lose because it’s okay! Also this contest is mostly for people who may have not enter the first or wants a second chance at winning.
RE: Bey100’s Series: Beyblade Burst Cyber Crush (Ongoing) (2nd Character Contest Ongoing) - The Goat0531 - Mar. 14, 2023
(Mar. 14, 2023 10:43 PM)Bey100 Wrote: (Mar. 14, 2023 10:38 PM)The Goat0531 Wrote: I know this might sound generic and sound like I'm capping but just, the writing gets better every episode imo. You're doing really good with this series which is why I keep reading it. Also I'll enter this contest, hope I win this time with the changes I made to my oc but hey if I lose it just tells me to tweak him even more to make him even better. Don’t feel bad if you lose because it’s okay! Also this contest is mostly for people who may have not enter the first or wants a second chance at winning.
I don't I just use character contest's like this to see what changes I should make to make it a even better one.
Alright here's my oc:
Name: Kai Ulrich
Age: 15
Birthday: October 10th
Height: 5'9" (180 cm)
Weight: 122 lbs (50.9 kg)
Appearance: Kai is a fast kid who is more on the skinnier side with spiked blond hair at the top that's short in the back as it only covers the back of his head and is short in the front as the spikes point downward to cover his forehead. He also has bright blue eyes and black tattooed whiskers on his face as a head nod to his bey. Kai's casual outfit consists of a dark green t-shirt with a red flame on the front, a necklace with a cyan crystal at the center, white shorts, and brown slippers. Kai's blading outfit though consists of a black and orange zipped up jacket with a grey long sleeve shirt under it, orange pants with a black bey holder tied to his left leg (like Valt did in S1 and S2 of Burst), and black boots.
Aura/Resonance: When Kai goes into his resonance state his eyes will change to orange and his pupils will turn into those of a fox and a yellow aura will glow yellow with some of it changing forms to a cape that goes around Kai and has nine tail like ligaments coming from the cloak as well as stripes going across the ligaments and on the cloak and Kai's whiskers becoming larger and black lines to go around Kai's eyes and go towards the sides of his head where the sides of his hair will stick up to make fox like ears. Though due to the immense power of Kai's aura his bey will glow yellow as well and gain unnatural amounts of strength and speed but its stamina will become a ticking time bomb where if Kai goes into his resonance state his bey's spin will go back to the max it had at the start of the battle but his bey will start losing more and more spin twice as fast as it would in its normal state. As well as the bey's defenses will go down and make it gain more damage from attacks and risk the chance of it breaking if it's hit with enough force. Which makes Kai's resonance state a last resort, unless Kai is able to learn to control his resonance and use this power affectively.
Personality/origins: Kai is a kind person who likes to have fun with his friends and has plans to become the strongest blader ever. He also enjoys to play pranks on people though they're not too crazy. Kai also likes to eat as well and will eat basically anything you put in front of him. Kai as a child lost his parents at a very young age which caused him to have to live on his own but it allowed him to become understanding with people and be able to form bonds with most people as he's able to connect with them. His ability to build connections with people would allow him to make many friends and eventually get into beyblade as that's what his friends enjoyed. This lit a spark in Kai to become the best as he's very competitive and likes to be the best at what he enjoys doing. Due to his love of beyblade he would create his school first beyblade team and make a line up consisting of his two closest friends. One of them being Sebastian who is his long time rival and neck to neck in power with him. The other is Sophia who isn't as powerful as Kai and Sebastian but makes up for it with her high intelligence and strategy. The team also has a coach as the school competes in the national beyblade 3 v 3 league and a coach is mandatory for the team, Their teacher is a veteran to Beyblade as he's 27 and competed in many tournaments. This teacher is named Kayden and in the power ranking of the group he's third with him being weaker then Sebastian and Kai but he still could win as his blading iq is unmatched causing him to battle with his brain more instead of his brawn. With this team Kai won many national championships and caused his school to be recognized all over the nation of Japan as a top tier school in blading. Though after those many wins Kai decided he has surpassed everyone in his nation and has put his eyes on to surpass everyone in the world.
Beyblade: Planet Kitsune Blitz Evolution- Who
Core: Kitsune is a black right spinning core with the avatar being a yellow fox with nine yellow tails and having black stripes all over its body.
Blade: Planet is a yellow right spinning ring with three main contact points shaped like blades with one on the top right, top left, and middle bottom (like valkyrie).
Disk: A black Blitz.
Driver: A pure yellow Evolution.
Super Weight: Who is a yellow super weight that is perfectly circular which gives the bey equal weight distribution.
Type: Right attack.
Special Moves:
Planet Dash: By angling his launcher to a 90 degree angle, Kai is able to preform a technique similar to the Rush Shoot but instead of moving in a flower pattern Kitsune dashes at the opponents bey which blitzes the opponent's bey.
Kitsune Boost: By tapping into a bit of his resonance, Kai is able to amp Kitsune's attack power and speed but not to a crazy amount as he would if he went full out into his resonance state. This causes Kai's pupils to change into that of a fox but that's it with no aura or eye color change.
Kitsune Unleash: This is when Kai goes into his full resonance state where Kitsune gains an unimaginable speed and strength increase but with the cons of heavy stamina and defense decreases.
Trajectory Blitz: When using Planet Dash, Kitsune is able to slam onto the stadium walls to change its trajectory to a normal flower pattern which causes Kitsune to use a weaker version of Planet Dash as Kitsune loses spin when slamming onto the stadium walls but its more controlled.
Final Clash: To use this move Kitsune must be in the resonance state as when this move is used Kitsune pours all of its power into one final attack which causes Kitsune to glow dark red with all of the power its charging up so when the enemy opponent attacks Kitsune, Kitsune will self destruct and hopefully destroy the opponents bey as well.
RE: Bey100’s Series: Beyblade Burst Cyber Crush (Ongoing) (2nd Character Contest Ongoing) - beansworth - Mar. 15, 2023
Guess I'll throw my hat into the ring.
Name: Takuya "Ghost" Takeba
Age: 16
Birthday: August 9th
Height: 5'8"
Weight: 132 Lbs
Appearance: Takuya is a quieter, calmer teenager who has went through trauma in his childhood, that he has left behind and let pile up within him. He has black hair that is stylized to be curtained, and parted to the left and right, he also dyed the left streak that begins the curtained hair, white. He has pierced both his ears, and wears black studs in both, and has a right nostril piercing. He wears lots of black clothes, and wears white and gray shirts. He has a black necklace, a red, black, purple and blue string bracelet from his girlfriend, on his right arm, right before the wrist, and a pentagram ring on his left ring finger.
Personality: Takuya is a quieter teen, who keeps to himself unless he can tell someone is a good person and won't hurt him more, he'll open up and act like his normal self. He began going by his alias "Ghost" after becoming nearly invisible at school, becoming a ghost basically. Since then he had met his new friend group, and they all have lots of fun times and go to karaoke on the weekends.
Backstory: Takuya refuses to go into his past, the only known things that happened were neglect, depression and abuse, he has since become happier, but still suffers from the trauma and depression if asked about his past, he gets a bit irritated.
Beyblade: Hero Theseus Absolute Torch'-SuperWeight7(Right Rotating Attack Type)
Core: Theseus is a vertical cyber core featuring the design of a Greek spartan helmet, with one red eye shown on the left eye. The helmet is colored black, and the rest of the core features flame-like designs, and is variations of red and orange. It features three hard, tall locks similar to that of ValkyrieII(DB)
Blade: Hero is a four sided attack type cyber blade, it features four swords, top right and bottom left ones, are a slight bit larger than the other blades. All four blades features rubber to create strong attack power. The rubber's hardness is similar to that of Brave(Superking) and Ultimate(DB). The sword's plastic part is colored black, and the rubber is red and orange to represent fire. The swords also slightly rise from the hilt to the tip of the blades, not by much though, the blades also has small plastic nubs to help recoil and bursting, this is similar to that of Lord(GT) and Burst(DB)
Disk: Absolute is a disk, that features heavy OWD, placing most of the weight to the outside perimeter.
Driver: Torch' is an attack type driver features two gimmicks. The first gimmick is a soft rubber flat similar in size to Xtreme's rubber flat, but softer like the Xtreme' from RBV 22. The second gimmick, is that it features a height changing gimmick, that can be set before battle. It can go from the height of Low(GT) to Accel(Single) to Evolution(Cho-Z) also referred to as Low-Mid-High. Finally, it also features a gold spring and red cap as a Dash Driver.
Super Weight: SuperWeight7 features evenly placed weight points, 6 overall, around the bey similar to Sen(GT) and Goku(GT). It is very heavy weighing in with some of the heaviest SuperWeights.
Special Moves:
Olympic Run: Similar to Valt's Rush Shoot, Hero Theseus will rush around and hit the opposing bey multiple times.
Hero Slash: The rubber on the Hero Blade will "ignite" and Theseus will hit the opposing bey hard, most of the time scoring an Over Finish or sending the bey slamming into the far wall.
Hero Upper: Theseus travelling quicker will hit the opposing bey with the rubber and slightly elevated blades, sending the opposing either into the air or for an Over Finish.
Hero Sword: When both Takuya and Theseus are in resonance, Theseus will launch towards the opposing bey, and with full power, most of the time, burst the opposing bey.
RE: Bey100’s Series: Beyblade Burst Cyber Crush (Ongoing) (2nd Character Contest Ongoing) - Bey100 - Mar. 15, 2023
Beyblade Burst Cyber Crush Episode 10:
Ron's Challenge!
(If this was an actual anime episode this would have pretty strong animation)
We see both Ron and Free fiercely look at each other as the both stand on each end of the stadium with Beys and launchers in their hands.
Free smiles
Free: Show me your strength Ron...
Ron stares
Ron (thoughts): I was always a big fan of you...
*Flashback Begins*
We see a bunch of lunch tables filled with kids
We then see Ron sitting at a table all alone
We see Ron watching a Beyblade battle on his phone during launch at his school
Ron stares at his phone
On the phone we see a battle between Free and a random blader
Ron: Common Free...
Vanish Fafnir burst a random blue First Uranus
Ron jumps up in the air in the cafeteria
Ron: Yes! Free did it!
Then a kid gets up from a table and walk towards Ron
Ron (thoughts): Uh oh.
The kid stops as he looks at Ron
Ron: Uh... hey Devon.
Devon: You stupid loser! Have you ever wondered why you have no friends?
Ron just stares
Devon: 1: You don't play sports 2: You look stupid and 3: You like Beyblade.
Ron: Okay and so what is the problem with Beyblade?
Devon: Only little kids play the little spin top game.
All the kids in the cafeteria laugh
Ron: It's not just for little kids!
Devon mocks him
Devon: "It's not just for little kids"!
Devon takes a mashed potato from Ron's food tray and throws it at Ron's face
Ron face is covered in mash potato
Tears start to enter Ron's eyes
Devon and the rest of the kids in the cafeteria take their phones out taking pictures of him
Ron looks at a nearby teacher
Ron: Hey Mr. Bail do something!
Mr. Bail: Are you talking back to a teacher!? 5 hour detention!
Ron: What!?
We cut to Ron walking home and he enters his house
We see a shot of Ron's mom and dad standing in the living room angrily
Ron: Uh... h-
Ron's Dad: Why did you get detention!?
Ron: Sorry, but Devon bullied me in front of the whole school for liking Beyblade!
Ron's Dad: Shut up! I wanted you to be a great football player but instead all you care about is Beyblade! Grow up your not a little kid anymore! If you keep this up you will never become something great in life!
Ron makes a shocked face
Ron's Mom: I agree with your father on this one!
Ron face then turns red
Ron: I don't know why nobody in this universe understands me!
Ron runs out the house
Ron's Parents: Ron, Get back here!!!
We see Ron sitting on the sidewalk crying as a car pass by and drives over a water puddle causing the water to splash on Ron.
Ron: I hate my life.
???: Hey don't say that man!
Ron screams "GO AWAY"!!!
We see Alex standing there in shock
Alex: I just wanted to make sure you were okay...
Ron: Sorry about screaming and no I am NOT having a good day.
Alex: I saw what happened in the cafeteria.
Ron: Oh really? Great.
Alex: I know life sucks sometimes but we shouldn't let people pull us down.
Ron smiles
Ron: What's your name?
Alex smiles
Alex: My name is Alex Akane and yours?
Ron: Ron Kiowa.
And that's how Alex and Ron became friends
*Flashback Ends*
Ron (thoughts): I will win this!
Alex: Ready Set!
3..2..1..Let It Rip!
Ron and Free both do Cyber launches as their launchers glow
We see Fafnir go for the center
Ron: No you don't!
We see Roc clash with Fafnir in the center
Free: You know your giving me more power.
Ron smiles
The Bounce Driver goes down slowly
Free smiles
Free: You wanna see something cool? Illusion Break!
The bounce driver hits the stadium floor then we see Fafnir go speeding around the stadium
Free golden aurora appears
Free: Breakthrough! Illusion Fafnir!
Fafnir flares out and avatar appears
We see an effect where Ron is in a dark atmosphere
We hear a voice say "You are never gonna become something great in life!"
Ron then opens his eyes
Ron: Yes I Will!
We then see an effect where the dark atmosphere turns green
Ron: Rise! Guardian Roc!!!
Roc flares out and avatar appears
Ron smiles
Ron: Now let's end this....ONCE AND FOR ALL!!!
Roc glows green as it maintains the center
Free: Illusion Claw!
We see Free do the claw effect with his hands
Fafnir then charges towards Roc
We see amazing effect where we see Free's eyes reflect Ron
Ron: Now Guardian Shelid!
Fafnir clashes with Roc and then an explosion happens
Ron: Ahhh!
We see two beys go up in the air but one burst
Free:....
It is revealed that the bey that burst is Roc
Ron's eyes widen in shock
Fafnir falls back down to stadium only to then stop spinning
Free pants
Alex does swish effect as we see a smear frame when Alex swings his hand
Alex: Illusion Fafnir wins with a burst finish! With a score of 2-0 Free is the winner!
Ron falls down to the ground as we see tears come from his eyes
Ron: I failed... I am a weak blader.
Free: No. You are one of the most talented bladers I have ever seen. I am proud of you.
Ron wipes his tears and gets up
Ron: Really?
Free nods
Ron then smiles
Alex: That was awesome buddy!
Ron: Thanks bro...
Alice: You did a great job Ron.
Gale: Yeah you even impressed me a little.
Ron rolls his eyes smiling
Ron: Stop it.
Gale: Ay! Don't let it get to your big fat head!
Ron makes an annoyed face
We cut to Ron entering his house
We see both Ron's parents standing in the living room
Ron: Oh hi...
Ron is about to go to his room
Ron's Dad: Wait. We need to talk.
Ron: I promised I didn't get in any trouble!
Ron's Dad: It's not that I just wanted to say I am sorry for every single word I said about Beyblade and you! You clearly have a passion for this and I suppose you are never to old to do what you love.
Tears fill Ron's eyes
Ron runs up to his parents and gives them a big hug
Ron's Mom: We love you son.
Ron: Yeah me to.
To Be Continued...
Next Episode: A New Blader Arrives! Vie Zelus!
3..2..1.. Let It Rip!!!
(The Ending Is Really Heartwarming And Ron Gets Crazy Character Development In This One)
Rate The Episode And Tell Me What You Liked And Maybe Didn't!
Upcoming Titles:
11. A New Blader Arrives! Vie Zelus!
12. Aires Vs Zelus!
13. The Monster! Longinus!
Stay Tuned For More Episodes Soon!
RE: Bey100’s Series: Beyblade Burst Cyber Crush (Ongoing) (2nd Character Contest Ongoing) - The Goat0531 - Mar. 15, 2023
(Mar. 15, 2023 1:11 AM)Bey100 Wrote: Beyblade Burst Cyber Crush Episode 10:
Ron's Challenge!
(If this was an actual anime episode this would have pretty strong animation)
We see both Ron and Free fiercely look at each other as the both stand on each end of the stadium with Beys and launchers in their hands.
Free smiles
Free: Show me your strength Ron...
Ron stares
Ron (thoughts): I was always a big fan of you...
*Flashback Begins*
We see a bunch of lunch tables filled with kids
We then see Ron sitting at a table all alone
We see Ron watching a Beyblade battle on his phone during launch at his school
Ron stares at his phone
On the phone we see a battle between Free and a random blader
Ron: Common Free...
Vanish Fafnir burst a random blue First Uranus
Ron jumps up in the air in the cafeteria
Ron: Yes! Free did it!
Then a kid gets up from a table and walk towards Ron
Ron (thoughts): Uh oh.
The kid stops as he looks at Ron
Ron: Uh... hey Devon.
Devon: You stupid loser! Have you ever wondered why you have no friends?
Ron just stares
Devon: 1: You don't play sports 2: You look stupid and 3: You like Beyblade.
Ron: Okay and so what is the problem with Beyblade?
Devon: Only little kids play the little spin top game.
All the kids in the cafeteria laugh
Ron: It's not just for little kids!
Devon mocks him
Devon: "It's not just for little kids"!
Devon takes a mashed potato from Ron's food tray and throws it at Ron's face
Ron face is covered in mash potato
Tears start to enter Ron's eyes
Devon and the rest of the kids in the cafeteria take their phones out taking pictures of him
Ron looks at a nearby teacher
Ron: Hey Mr. Bail do something!
Mr. Bail: Are you talking back to a teacher!? 5 hour detention!
Ron: What!?
We cut to Ron walking home and he enters his house
We see a shot of Ron's mom and dad standing in the living room angrily
Ron: Uh... h-
Ron's Dad: Why did you get detention!?
Ron: Sorry, but Devon bullied me in front of the whole school for liking Beyblade!
Ron's Dad: Shut up! I wanted you to be a great football player but instead all you care about is Beyblade! Grow up your not a little kid anymore! If you keep this up you will never become something great in life!
Ron makes a shocked face
Ron's Mom: I agree with your father on this one!
Ron face then turns red
Ron: I don't know why nobody in this universe understands me!
Ron runs out the house
Ron's Parents: Ron, Get back here!!!
We see Ron sitting on the sidewalk crying as a car pass by and drives over a water puddle causing the water to splash on Ron.
Ron: I hate my life.
???: Hey don't say that man!
Ron screams "GO AWAY"!!!
We see Alex standing there in shock
Alex: I just wanted to make sure you were okay...
Ron: Sorry about screaming and no I am NOT having a good day.
Alex: I saw what happened in the cafeteria.
Ron: Oh really? Great.
Alex: I know life sucks sometimes but we shouldn't let people pull us down.
Ron smiles
Ron: What's your name?
Alex smiles
Alex: My name is Alex Akane and yours?
Ron: Ron Kiowa.
And that's how Alex and Ron became friends
*Flashback Ends*
Ron (thoughts): I will win this!
Alex: Ready Set!
3..2..1..Let It Rip!
Ron and Free both do Cyber launches as their launchers glow
We see Fafnir go for the center
Ron: No you don't!
We see Roc clash with Fafnir in the center
Free: You know your giving me more power.
Ron smiles
The Bounce Driver goes down slowly
Free smiles
Free: You wanna see something cool? Illusion Break!
The bounce driver hits the stadium floor then we see Fafnir go speeding around the stadium
Free golden aurora appears
Free: Breakthrough! Illusion Fafnir!
Fafnir flares out and avatar appears
We see an effect where Ron is in a dark atmosphere
We hear a voice say "You are never gonna become something great in life!"
Ron then opens his eyes
Ron: Yes I Will!
We then see an effect where the dark atmosphere turns green
Ron: Rise! Guardian Roc!!!
Roc flares out and avatar appears
Ron smiles
Ron: Now let's end this....ONCE AND FOR ALL!!!
Roc glows green as it maintains the center
Free: Illusion Claw!
We see Free do the claw effect with his hands
Fafnir then charges towards Roc
We see amazing effect where we see Free's eyes reflect Ron
Ron: Now Guardian Shelid!
Fafnir clashes with Roc and then an explosion happens
Ron: Ahhh!
We see two beys go up in the air but one burst
Free:....
It is revealed that the bey that burst is Roc
Ron's eyes widen in shock
Fafnir falls back down to stadium only to then stop spinning
Free pants
Alex does swish effect as we see a smear frame when Alex swings his hand
Alex: Illusion Fafnir wins with a burst finish! With a score of 2-0 Free is the winner!
Ron falls down to the ground as we see tears come from his eyes
Ron: I failed... I am a weak blader.
Free: No. You are one of the most talented bladers I have ever seen. I am proud of you.
Ron wipes his tears and gets up
Ron: Really?
Free nods
Ron then smiles
Alex: That was awesome buddy!
Ron: Thanks bro...
Alice: You did a great job Ron.
Gale: Yeah you even impressed me a little.
Ron rolls his eyes smiling
Ron: Stop it.
Gale: Ay! Don't let it get to your big fat head!
Ron makes an annoyed face
We cut to Ron entering his house
We see both Ron's parents standing in the living room
Ron: Oh hi...
Ron is about to go to his room
Ron's Dad: Wait. We need to talk.
Ron: I promised I didn't get in any trouble!
Ron's Dad: It's not that I just wanted to say I am sorry for every single word I said about Beyblade and you! You clearly have a passion for this and I suppose you are never to old to do what you love.
Tears fill Ron's eyes
Ron runs up to his parents and gives them a big hug
Ron's Mom: We love you son.
Ron: Yeah me to.
To Be Continued...
Next Episode: A New Blader Arrives! Vie Zelus!
3..2..1.. Let It Rip!!!
(The Ending Is Really Heartwarming And Ron Gets Crazy Character Development In This One)
Rate The Episode And Tell Me What You Liked And Maybe Didn't!
Upcoming Titles:
11. A New Blader Arrives! Vie Zelus!
12. Aires Vs Zelus!
13. The Monster! Longinus!
Stay Tuned For More Episodes Soon!
This chapter was definitely the best. The flash back and the ending gave me a hint of Naruto. There isn't really any complaints to give, the chapter did what it was supposed to do and did it well.
RE: Bey100’s Series: Beyblade Burst Cyber Crush (Ongoing) (2nd Character Contest Ongoing) - Bey100 - Mar. 15, 2023
(Mar. 15, 2023 1:49 AM)The Goat0531 Wrote: (Mar. 15, 2023 1:11 AM)Bey100 Wrote: Beyblade Burst Cyber Crush Episode 10:
Ron's Challenge!
(If this was an actual anime episode this would have pretty strong animation)
We see both Ron and Free fiercely look at each other as the both stand on each end of the stadium with Beys and launchers in their hands.
Free smiles
Free: Show me your strength Ron...
Ron stares
Ron (thoughts): I was always a big fan of you...
*Flashback Begins*
We see a bunch of lunch tables filled with kids
We then see Ron sitting at a table all alone
We see Ron watching a Beyblade battle on his phone during launch at his school
Ron stares at his phone
On the phone we see a battle between Free and a random blader
Ron: Common Free...
Vanish Fafnir burst a random blue First Uranus
Ron jumps up in the air in the cafeteria
Ron: Yes! Free did it!
Then a kid gets up from a table and walk towards Ron
Ron (thoughts): Uh oh.
The kid stops as he looks at Ron
Ron: Uh... hey Devon.
Devon: You stupid loser! Have you ever wondered why you have no friends?
Ron just stares
Devon: 1: You don't play sports 2: You look stupid and 3: You like Beyblade.
Ron: Okay and so what is the problem with Beyblade?
Devon: Only little kids play the little spin top game.
All the kids in the cafeteria laugh
Ron: It's not just for little kids!
Devon mocks him
Devon: "It's not just for little kids"!
Devon takes a mashed potato from Ron's food tray and throws it at Ron's face
Ron face is covered in mash potato
Tears start to enter Ron's eyes
Devon and the rest of the kids in the cafeteria take their phones out taking pictures of him
Ron looks at a nearby teacher
Ron: Hey Mr. Bail do something!
Mr. Bail: Are you talking back to a teacher!? 5 hour detention!
Ron: What!?
We cut to Ron walking home and he enters his house
We see a shot of Ron's mom and dad standing in the living room angrily
Ron: Uh... h-
Ron's Dad: Why did you get detention!?
Ron: Sorry, but Devon bullied me in front of the whole school for liking Beyblade!
Ron's Dad: Shut up! I wanted you to be a great football player but instead all you care about is Beyblade! Grow up your not a little kid anymore! If you keep this up you will never become something great in life!
Ron makes a shocked face
Ron's Mom: I agree with your father on this one!
Ron face then turns red
Ron: I don't know why nobody in this universe understands me!
Ron runs out the house
Ron's Parents: Ron, Get back here!!!
We see Ron sitting on the sidewalk crying as a car pass by and drives over a water puddle causing the water to splash on Ron.
Ron: I hate my life.
???: Hey don't say that man!
Ron screams "GO AWAY"!!!
We see Alex standing there in shock
Alex: I just wanted to make sure you were okay...
Ron: Sorry about screaming and no I am NOT having a good day.
Alex: I saw what happened in the cafeteria.
Ron: Oh really? Great.
Alex: I know life sucks sometimes but we shouldn't let people pull us down.
Ron smiles
Ron: What's your name?
Alex smiles
Alex: My name is Alex Akane and yours?
Ron: Ron Kiowa.
And that's how Alex and Ron became friends
*Flashback Ends*
Ron (thoughts): I will win this!
Alex: Ready Set!
3..2..1..Let It Rip!
Ron and Free both do Cyber launches as their launchers glow
We see Fafnir go for the center
Ron: No you don't!
We see Roc clash with Fafnir in the center
Free: You know your giving me more power.
Ron smiles
The Bounce Driver goes down slowly
Free smiles
Free: You wanna see something cool? Illusion Break!
The bounce driver hits the stadium floor then we see Fafnir go speeding around the stadium
Free golden aurora appears
Free: Breakthrough! Illusion Fafnir!
Fafnir flares out and avatar appears
We see an effect where Ron is in a dark atmosphere
We hear a voice say "You are never gonna become something great in life!"
Ron then opens his eyes
Ron: Yes I Will!
We then see an effect where the dark atmosphere turns green
Ron: Rise! Guardian Roc!!!
Roc flares out and avatar appears
Ron smiles
Ron: Now let's end this....ONCE AND FOR ALL!!!
Roc glows green as it maintains the center
Free: Illusion Claw!
We see Free do the claw effect with his hands
Fafnir then charges towards Roc
We see amazing effect where we see Free's eyes reflect Ron
Ron: Now Guardian Shelid!
Fafnir clashes with Roc and then an explosion happens
Ron: Ahhh!
We see two beys go up in the air but one burst
Free:....
It is revealed that the bey that burst is Roc
Ron's eyes widen in shock
Fafnir falls back down to stadium only to then stop spinning
Free pants
Alex does swish effect as we see a smear frame when Alex swings his hand
Alex: Illusion Fafnir wins with a burst finish! With a score of 2-0 Free is the winner!
Ron falls down to the ground as we see tears come from his eyes
Ron: I failed... I am a weak blader.
Free: No. You are one of the most talented bladers I have ever seen. I am proud of you.
Ron wipes his tears and gets up
Ron: Really?
Free nods
Ron then smiles
Alex: That was awesome buddy!
Ron: Thanks bro...
Alice: You did a great job Ron.
Gale: Yeah you even impressed me a little.
Ron rolls his eyes smiling
Ron: Stop it.
Gale: Ay! Don't let it get to your big fat head!
Ron makes an annoyed face
We cut to Ron entering his house
We see both Ron's parents standing in the living room
Ron: Oh hi...
Ron is about to go to his room
Ron's Dad: Wait. We need to talk.
Ron: I promised I didn't get in any trouble!
Ron's Dad: It's not that I just wanted to say I am sorry for every single word I said about Beyblade and you! You clearly have a passion for this and I suppose you are never to old to do what you love.
Tears fill Ron's eyes
Ron runs up to his parents and gives them a big hug
Ron's Mom: We love you son.
Ron: Yeah me to.
To Be Continued...
Next Episode: A New Blader Arrives! Vie Zelus!
3..2..1.. Let It Rip!!!
(The Ending Is Really Heartwarming And Ron Gets Crazy Character Development In This One)
Rate The Episode And Tell Me What You Liked And Maybe Didn't!
Upcoming Titles:
11. A New Blader Arrives! Vie Zelus!
12. Aires Vs Zelus!
13. The Monster! Longinus!
Stay Tuned For More Episodes Soon!
This chapter was definitely the best. The flash back and the ending gave me a hint of Naruto. There isn't really any complaints to give, the chapter did what it was supposed to do and did it well. Naruto is pretty cool so I'm glad that this episode some what gave you vibes of that.
RE: Bey100’s Series: Beyblade Burst Cyber Crush/ Project RB - Turboblader - Mar. 15, 2023
(Mar. 14, 2023 1:37 PM)Bey100 Wrote: (Mar. 14, 2023 4:16 AM)The Goat0531 Wrote: Episode 9 Is there any specific reason why?And if not thanks.
Announcing The 2nd Beyblade Burst Cyber Crush Character Contest! This will be titled “The 2nd Round”!
This is how it goes:
Core:
Blade:
Disk:
Driver:
Superweight:
This 2nd Contest will begin today March 14 and will last until Friday, March 17 2023!
Whoever wins will have their character and bey appear in an episode so join the 2nd round today!!!!!!
3..2..1.. Let It Rip!
Character details:
Name: George Kaminari
Personality: a guy who plays fair but will use any trick he can to win
Appearance: white hair, green eyes, a skeleton shirt and mask, and pants with a bone design.
Core: Ghost (a core with a scary ghost design)
Blade: Ecto (a blade that switches from 2 bladed attack to 4 bladed defense) (attack mode specializes in upper attacks and defense mode uses downforce)
Disk: life (like ratchet but for right spin beyblades)
Driver: Spook (a balance tip with a wide base for life after death)
Superweight: Shock (a heavy superweight with a lightning bolt design)
George loves all things ghost and he loves to play beyblade, his beyblade Ecto Ghost is a balance type that specializes in life after death to trick his opponents into thinking they won, he may play fair but that doesn't stop him from playing tricks on people for a good laugh.
RE: Bey100’s Series: Beyblade Burst Cyber Crush (Ongoing) (2nd Character Contest Ongoing) - Hollowmind13 - Mar. 15, 2023
(Mar. 15, 2023 1:11 AM)Bey100 Wrote: Beyblade Burst Cyber Crush Episode 10:
Ron's Challenge!
(If this was an actual anime episode this would have pretty strong animation)
We see both Ron and Free fiercely look at each other as the both stand on each end of the stadium with Beys and launchers in their hands.
Free smiles
Free: Show me your strength Ron...
Ron stares
Ron (thoughts): I was always a big fan of you...
*Flashback Begins*
We see a bunch of lunch tables filled with kids
We then see Ron sitting at a table all alone
We see Ron watching a Beyblade battle on his phone during launch at his school
Ron stares at his phone
On the phone we see a battle between Free and a random blader
Ron: Common Free...
Vanish Fafnir burst a random blue First Uranus
Ron jumps up in the air in the cafeteria
Ron: Yes! Free did it!
Then a kid gets up from a table and walk towards Ron
Ron (thoughts): Uh oh.
The kid stops as he looks at Ron
Ron: Uh... hey Devon.
Devon: You stupid loser! Have you ever wondered why you have no friends?
Ron just stares
Devon: 1: You don't play sports 2: You look stupid and 3: You like Beyblade.
Ron: Okay and so what is the problem with Beyblade?
Devon: Only little kids play the little spin top game.
All the kids in the cafeteria laugh
Ron: It's not just for little kids!
Devon mocks him
Devon: "It's not just for little kids"!
Devon takes a mashed potato from Ron's food tray and throws it at Ron's face
Ron face is covered in mash potato
Tears start to enter Ron's eyes
Devon and the rest of the kids in the cafeteria take their phones out taking pictures of him
Ron looks at a nearby teacher
Ron: Hey Mr. Bail do something!
Mr. Bail: Are you talking back to a teacher!? 5 hour detention!
Ron: What!?
We cut to Ron walking home and he enters his house
We see a shot of Ron's mom and dad standing in the living room angrily
Ron: Uh... h-
Ron's Dad: Why did you get detention!?
Ron: Sorry, but Devon bullied me in front of the whole school for liking Beyblade!
Ron's Dad: Shut up! I wanted you to be a great football player but instead all you care about is Beyblade! Grow up your not a little kid anymore! If you keep this up you will never become something great in life!
Ron makes a shocked face
Ron's Mom: I agree with your father on this one!
Ron face then turns red
Ron: I don't know why nobody in this universe understands me!
Ron runs out the house
Ron's Parents: Ron, Get back here!!!
We see Ron sitting on the sidewalk crying as a car pass by and drives over a water puddle causing the water to splash on Ron.
Ron: I hate my life.
???: Hey don't say that man!
Ron screams "GO AWAY"!!!
We see Alex standing there in shock
Alex: I just wanted to make sure you were okay...
Ron: Sorry about screaming and no I am NOT having a good day.
Alex: I saw what happened in the cafeteria.
Ron: Oh really? Great.
Alex: I know life sucks sometimes but we shouldn't let people pull us down.
Ron smiles
Ron: What's your name?
Alex smiles
Alex: My name is Alex Akane and yours?
Ron: Ron Kiowa.
And that's how Alex and Ron became friends
*Flashback Ends*
Ron (thoughts): I will win this!
Alex: Ready Set!
3..2..1..Let It Rip!
Ron and Free both do Cyber launches as their launchers glow
We see Fafnir go for the center
Ron: No you don't!
We see Roc clash with Fafnir in the center
Free: You know your giving me more power.
Ron smiles
The Bounce Driver goes down slowly
Free smiles
Free: You wanna see something cool? Illusion Break!
The bounce driver hits the stadium floor then we see Fafnir go speeding around the stadium
Free golden aurora appears
Free: Breakthrough! Illusion Fafnir!
Fafnir flares out and avatar appears
We see an effect where Ron is in a dark atmosphere
We hear a voice say "You are never gonna become something great in life!"
Ron then opens his eyes
Ron: Yes I Will!
We then see an effect where the dark atmosphere turns green
Ron: Rise! Guardian Roc!!!
Roc flares out and avatar appears
Ron smiles
Ron: Now let's end this....ONCE AND FOR ALL!!!
Roc glows green as it maintains the center
Free: Illusion Claw!
We see Free do the claw effect with his hands
Fafnir then charges towards Roc
We see amazing effect where we see Free's eyes reflect Ron
Ron: Now Guardian Shelid!
Fafnir clashes with Roc and then an explosion happens
Ron: Ahhh!
We see two beys go up in the air but one burst
Free:....
It is revealed that the bey that burst is Roc
Ron's eyes widen in shock
Fafnir falls back down to stadium only to then stop spinning
Free pants
Alex does swish effect as we see a smear frame when Alex swings his hand
Alex: Illusion Fafnir wins with a burst finish! With a score of 2-0 Free is the winner!
Ron falls down to the ground as we see tears come from his eyes
Ron: I failed... I am a weak blader.
Free: No. You are one of the most talented bladers I have ever seen. I am proud of you.
Ron wipes his tears and gets up
Ron: Really?
Free nods
Ron then smiles
Alex: That was awesome buddy!
Ron: Thanks bro...
Alice: You did a great job Ron.
Gale: Yeah you even impressed me a little.
Ron rolls his eyes smiling
Ron: Stop it.
Gale: Ay! Don't let it get to your big fat head!
Ron makes an annoyed face
We cut to Ron entering his house
We see both Ron's parents standing in the living room
Ron: Oh hi...
Ron is about to go to his room
Ron's Dad: Wait. We need to talk.
Ron: I promised I didn't get in any trouble!
Ron's Dad: It's not that I just wanted to say I am sorry for every single word I said about Beyblade and you! You clearly have a passion for this and I suppose you are never to old to do what you love.
Tears fill Ron's eyes
Ron runs up to his parents and gives them a big hug
Ron's Mom: We love you son.
Ron: Yeah me to.
To Be Continued...
Next Episode: A New Blader Arrives! Vie Zelus!
3..2..1.. Let It Rip!!!
(The Ending Is Really Heartwarming And Ron Gets Crazy Character Development In This One)
Rate The Episode And Tell Me What You Liked And Maybe Didn't!
Upcoming Titles:
11. A New Blader Arrives! Vie Zelus!
12. Aires Vs Zelus!
13. The Monster! Longinus!
Stay Tuned For More Episodes Soon! .
Your writing does improve from chapter to chapter.
.
Criticism:
The Teacher reacting like that would be unrealistic, seeing as he had mashed potatoes on his face and was reaching out to the teacher + that was probably not the first time he was bullied.
For him to get detention, he could have fought back and both of them would get in trouble. It's fine if his parents don't support him but that sounded too much, his father was a bit too into football, so I guess he is a player.
If his parents reacted the way they did in the flashback, then it's highly unlikely they would apologize, unless they're trying to change. Though to be fair idk how much time has passed, but Ron would not hug them pretty sure, considering the damage they could have done before even the "masted potatoes incident" and after.
Free battle was cool, though also a really short battle. Fafnir could have OS'd him for a longer battle and 2nd round have the burst finist with the "yes I will!" scene. Still cool tho.
I think Devon will turn out a blader, since you named him. I could be wrong tho, but he can still do stuff without being a blader.
Maybe I will do a character
RE: Bey100’s Series: Beyblade Burst Cyber Crush (ongoing) - Bey100 - Mar. 15, 2023
Beyblade Burst Cyber Crush Episode 11:
A New Blader Arrives! Vie Zelus!
We see Alex alone in the beygym thinking
Alex stares intensely
???: Hey!
Alex jumps in the air
Alex: Don't kill me!
???: Stop it. You're fine. Scaredy cat.
Alex turns around
We see a shot of a guy with spiky hair in an interesting costume
Alex: Did you just say scaredy cat?
???: Yes I did idiot.
Alex: Hey watch your mouth! Who are you anyways?
Zeno: My name is Zeno Taki.
Alex: Wait... I know you! You are that guy at school who never talks!
Zeno holds up his bey
Alex: Woah! Buddy now...
Zeno: Meet Vie Zelus!
Alex: Why are you challenging me to a battle? You just got here!
Zeno: Because I believe your nothing but a newbie.
Alex eyes widen in shock
Alex: Excuse me?
Zeno: Let's be real... nobody actually thinks your a strong blader.... the only reason why people mention you is for being the one to create the Cyber Crush system.
Alex makes a frustrated face
Alex: You know that's not true! Take that back now!
Zeno: Oh really? Then why not battle me?
Alex makes an angry face
Alex holds up Cyber Aires
Alex: I'll beat you!
Zeno looks at the fierce look in Alex's eyes
Zeno: We'll see.
We cut to both Alex and Zeno at the stadium
Alex and Zeno put their beys on their launchers
Alex: Don't underestimate me!
Zeno: But I'm not...just testing you.
Alex: Oh why you little!?
Zeno: You talk a lot. Instead of doing more talking let's do more battling okay?
Alex: Grrrrr...
Alex: You'll pay.
Alex (thoughts): Vie Zelus is a right spinning attack type... seems like it has four attack blades and that disk Zero gives it more weight and the Superweight has 4 main points of weight interesting...
Alex/Zeno: Ready set!?
3..2..1.. Let It Rip!
Both Alex and Zeno do Cyber Launches
We see both Aires and Zelus go around the stadium
Alex: Go Cyber Launch!
Aires hits Zelus knocking Zelus into the stadium wall
Zeno: Pathetic.
Alex: What was that!?
Zeno: Vie Slash!
The 4 main points on Vie Zelus glows
Alex: What the!?
Zelus hits Aires knocking Aires into the air
Alex: No!
Aires comes back down hitting the stadium wall and landing back in the stadium
Alex makes a sigh of relief
Zeno: Don't get to happy...
Alex makes a shocked face
Zelus then hits Aires knocking it into the center of the stadium
Alex: Hold on partner!
We see Zelus give a barrage of attacks to Aires
Alex: Enough! Cyber Aires!
We see Aires flare out and then glow
We see Alex clench his fist then a red aurora begins to glow
Zeno stares intensely at Alex
Zeno's eye begins to glow
Zeno: Vie Zelus! Destroy them!
Zelus flares out and avatar appears
We see Zeno then have a yellow aurora start to glow
We then see both Aires and Zelus clash in the middle of the stadium
Alex/Zeno: Ahhh!
Then both beys get knocked back and go flying out of the stadium
Alex and Zeno both make a shocked face
Alex walks and goes picks his bey
Zeno walks and goes picks his bey
Alex and Zeno both turn around and stare intensely
Zeno (thoughts): Maybe he is stronger then I thought after all...
Alex smiles
Alex: Better watch out... because me and Aires will send you into space!
Zeno makes a Pikachu face
Alex: Okay bad line I know but still!?
Zeno then screams
Zeno:Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!
Alex makes a shocked face
Alex (thoughts): What's wrong with him?
But then Alex realizes that Zeno screamed because he is getting excited
Alex smiles
Alex then screams himself
Alex:Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!
Zeno covers his ears
Alex: Too loud?
Zeno nods
Alex: Well I'm getting pumped too!
Zeno smiles
Alex (thoughts): He just smiled...
Alex smiles
Alex red aurora begins to glow
Zeno's yellow aurora begins to glow
Zeno (thoughts): You are a very interesting blader Alex Akane!
Alex (thoughts): I'm winning this battle... no matter what!
We see an effect where Alex holds up Aires and we see Aires avatar behind him
Meanwhile...
We see Ron walking home and he runs into Devon
Ron: Oh my... what does he want now?
Ron stops walking
Ron: Listen Devon...
Devon: I'm sorry.
Ron swings his head left and right extremely fast
Ron: What!?
Devon: The truth is... I like Beyblade but the reason I never mention that is because I want to be popular and cool... so I did that cool kids stuff you know join the football team... bully others.. and dress hipster or whatever.
Ron sighs
Ron: Devon, being popular and cool doesn't matter just be the person you want to be.
Devon smiles
Devon: Thanks Ron.
Ron: No problem.
Devon: And I have one more thing to mention...
Ron: Yeah?
Devon: I have a Cyber bey.
Ron: What!?
Devon holds up his bey
Ron: Woah.
We see Devon's bey
Devon: Meet Doom Diomedes! A three bladed attack type bey which has a green and yellow color scheme and has a cool Superweight called well cool and basically this helps add extra weight to the bey!
Ron: Now that's awesome.
To be continued...
Next Episode: Aires Vs Zelus!
3..2..1.. Let It Rip!!!!
A new special bey is also revealed at the end of the episode...
RE: Bey100’s Series: Beyblade Burst Cyber Crush (ongoing) - Bey100 - Mar. 16, 2023
Beyblade Burst Cyber Crush Opening 2 (Visual Change)
The opening starts with us seeing Alex,Ron,Gale, and Alice jumping up in the air transition to Beyblade Burst Cyber Crush logo. Afterwards we see Alex standing on a mountain then it transitions to shots of Valt,Free,Shu,Lui, and Bell. We then see Alex launch Cyber Aires and we see the Aires avatar leading to a very quick shot of Zeno. Then the opening ends with Alex,Ron, and Gale launching their beys.
Opening 1 (Episode 1-10)
Opening 2 (Episode 11-??)
RE: Bey100’s Series: Beyblade Burst Cyber Crush (ongoing) - Bey100 - Mar. 16, 2023
A Few Updates:
•So tomorrow is the end of the 2nd character contest so I recommend that you guys if you want to hurry up and join.
•Episode 12 will come sometime next week so stay tuned for that.
•Devon will not actually battle in the series mostly due to their being way to many characters but that ending was mostly to give closure for him and his bey was just for fun.
•Lui will soon make an appearance in the series
•On March 21st we will be celebrating Beyblade Day so don’t really expect anything on that day mostly because Gen X will be revealed so I think that should be the main focus for that day.
That’s all the news folks!
RE: Bey100’s Series: Beyblade Burst Cyber Crush (ongoing) - Turboblader - Mar. 17, 2023
I wonder what Beyblade Gen X will be like.
RE: Bey100’s Series: Beyblade Burst Cyber Crush (ongoing) - Bey100 - Mar. 17, 2023
If there was a hasbro Beyblade Burst Cyber Crush:
Hasbro title of Beyblade Burst Cyber Crush would be Beyblade Burst Advance
Cyber Aires - Advance Aires
Guardian Roc - Defense Roc
Flame Griffin - Fire Griffin
Bright Athena- Bright Athena (no change)
Characters:
Alex Akane - Alex Akane (no change)
Ron Kiowa - Ron Kenderson
Gale Ten - Gale Ton
Alice Luna - Alice Luna (no change)
RE: Bey100’s Series: Beyblade Burst Cyber Crush (ongoing) - Turboblader - Mar. 17, 2023
Makes sense, Hasbro is creative with names.
RE: Bey100’s Series: Beyblade Burst Cyber Crush/Advance (Ongoing) - Bey100 - Mar. 17, 2023
The winner of the character contest is…
Congratulations! Your character and bey…
Kai Ulrich and Plant Kitsune.Blitz.Evolution-Who
Thanks to everyone who joined the contest!
I may do one more before the season ends but for now…
See ya! ✌️
RE: Bey100’s Series: Beyblade Burst Cyber Crush/Advance (Ongoing) - The Goat0531 - Mar. 17, 2023
Gg's to everyone who participated and thank you Bey100 for choosing me as the winner.
RE: Bey100’s Series: Beyblade Burst Cyber Crush/Advance (Ongoing) - Bey100 - Mar. 17, 2023
Upcoming Episode Titles:
12. Aires Vs Zelus!
Plot: The battle between Alex and and Zeno continues!
13. A Fun Blader! Kai Ulrich!
Plot: A flash back episode going over Kai’s history!
14. Power! Planet Kitsune!
Kai and Kitsune arrives and challenges Alice!
15. The Scary Monster Longinus!
Lui arrives and he has a new Longinus!
Which episode are you most excited for!?
RE: Bey100’s Series: Beyblade Burst Cyber Crush/ Robot Bash (Ongoing) - Bey100 - Mar. 18, 2023
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RE: Bey100’s Series: Beyblade Burst Cyber Crush/ Robot Bash (Ongoing) - Turboblader - Mar. 18, 2023
(Mar. 18, 2023 4:26 AM)Bey100 Wrote: Robot Bash Full Info:
Important: This series isn’t Beyblade related.
Robot Bash New Characters And Robots:
Nick Phillips - Ricky 1.0
Garret Julian - Barrel 1.0
Den Zo - DarkMatter 1.0
Ronny Star - RockStar 1.0
Gol Gust - Ghost 1.0
Plot: In an advance world there is a tournament called The Robot Bash! This tournament has these robots (same size as humans) battle each other to see who’s the best! And a 15 year old teen named Nick Phillips dreams of becoming the best! This is why he creates Ricky (1.0 version) and him and Ricky both want to win the tournament! But there is an evil man named Den Zo and he wants to take control of the city using his robots! It up to Nick, Ricky and their friends ( Ronny and Gol) to all work together to stop the evil force! Will they succeed!?
Knock Out! Blow Out! And find out in Robot Bash!!!
Episode Titles:
1. The Beginning Of The Bash!
Plot: Nick creates Ricky and they begin to bond!
2. Barrel Attacks!
Plot: Nick and Ricky faces Garret and Barrel!
Products Listings (More Like Figures Kind Of)
Also to note all starters comes with attachment gears while boosters are just the figures alone and battle sets have these wrestling like stadium with slight recolors of the Bots.
March
RB1- Ricky 1.0 Starter (comes with special gear)
RB2- Barrel 1.0 Booster
RB3- DarkMatter 1.0 Booster
RB4- Robot Bash Battle Set (comes with slight recolors of Ricky and Barrel and a stadium (like wrestling)
April
RB5- RockStar 1.0 Starter (comes with guitar battle gear)
RB6- Ghost 1.0 Booster
May
RB7- End Of Season 1 Random Booster Vol 1 (filler)
System: Blow System
How this work is there are three parts to the robots:
Blow Head, Blow Body, and Blow Legs. Basically the idea is during battle the head of the other robot will become loose and if it becomes to lose the head and parts of the robot will fall apart. Also these figures would have a charger since these would be able to move and stuff so there would be a charger that comes with all the products. This won’t mater much series wise but if there were products it would be pretty important If I say so myself!
This will run alongside Cyber Crush…
So expect the first episode soon!
Robot Bash Episode 1:
The Beginning Of The Bash!
We see a teenage sitting on a chair thinking
*Flashback Starts*
We see a little boy playing with his brother
Nick: Don common!
Don: I’m gonna get you!
Ron chases Nick but Nick ends up turning when Don least expect causing him to run into the road
A car comes speeding
Nick: Don!
Don turns his head
The car hits Don
Nick: Don!!!!!!!
*Flashback Ends*
We see Nick get up and walk towards the window
Nick (thoughts): I can’t believe that was 10 years ago…
Nick looks out a window
Nick(thoughts):Me and my brother always dreamed of entering the Robot Bash a tournament where robots battle each other…
Nick: Am I am gonna make my brother proud! I’m gonna make my own robot!
Nick then turns around and makes a determined face
We then see a montage of Nick getting supplies he needs
We then see Nick start screwing something
We cut to night time
Nick: You’re finally complete!
We see a shot of Nick’s robot: Ricky!
Ricky has a blue and red design and a cat inspired head
Nick stares in awe
Ricky then opens his eyes
Ricky: Hello My name is Ricky.
Nick: My name is Nick Phillips! High five!
Ricky then smacks Nick
Nick: Ow! I said high five!
Ricky then smacks Nick again
Nick: Slap my hand!!!
Then Ricky takes Nick’s hand and begins crushing it
Nick: Ahhh! Never mind!
Ricky let’s Nick hand go
Nick looks at his hand in pain
Ricky: According to my calculations you seem to be in pain.
Nick: Yeah and according to my calculations you crushed my hand!!!
Ricky looks down
Ricky: Sorry I have gave you pain.
Nick smiles
Nick: Hey don’t feel bad I still trying to get use to you. Now bring it here!
Nick opens his arms going for a hug
Ricky then slightly turns his head
Ricky: I get it.
Ricky then kicks Nick in the nuts
Nick puts hand on his nuts and slowly goes down to the ground
Nick: Owww…
We then cut to it being midnight
Nick: Okay training time! So press the button on you left hand to shoot a laser!
Ricky press his left hand button
Ricky then accidentally shoots a prototype of himself
The prototype goes on fire
Nick: Ahhhhhh!
Nick runs and gets a fire extinguisher
Nick presses the button but nothing comes out
Nick turns the extinguisher
Nick: That weird why did-
Then he sprays the water all over himself
Ricky just stares
Nick then walks to Ricky all wet
Nick: Press the button on your right hand…
Ricky presses his right hand button and a cool glowing like sword comes from his wrist
Ricky: Ooo…
Ricky then spins around
A guy comes in
Random Guy: Hey! What are you do-
Nick: Ricky watch out!
Ricky then accidentally slashes the guy’s head off because when spinning around he didn’t look at where he was going
The guy’s head falls off his body (there’s no blood so don’t worry)
Nick looks in shock
Ricky just stares
Ricky: According to my calculations I just sliced a man head off.
Nick: We are not going to tell anybody about this….. agreed?
Ricky nods his head
Nick: Good.
Ricky turns off his blue sword
Ricky looks at a button on the left side of his chest
Ricky points at it
Ricky: What does this one do?
Nick: I recommend you don’t push that one yet as it’s not complete!
Ricky pushes the button
Nick: No!
The wings and two mini rocket booster comes from Ricky back and legs
Ricky then starts to rise up
Nick: Oh no you don’t!
Nick jumps on Ricky
Ricky then flies through the roof of the building and both Nick and Ricky are in the sky
Nick: Stop this now!
Ricky: Okay.
Rickys then presses the button causing him to go back to normal
Nick looks down
Nick: Uh oh.
Both Nick and Ricky fall from the sky
Ricky: According to my calculations we are falling from the sky.
Nick: And according to my calculations… we’re gonna die.
Nick: Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!
Both Nick and Ricky fall in a pool
Nick and Ricky then both swim to safety
Nick: Good thing your water proof.
Ricky looks down again
Ricky: I’m sorry for all the trouble I caused you today.
Nick: I mean you did blow up your prototype, accidentally kill a dude, and nearly got us both killed but I suppose I can forgive you.
Ricky holds his hand out
Ricky: High five?
Nick makes a shocked face then smiles
Nick slaps Ricky’s hand
Nick: High five!
We see Nick back at the workshop talking to his mother on his phone
Nick’s Mom: Sweetie I’m not sure if this is a good idea? I mean we lost your father and brother! I can’t lose my son to a robot!
Nick: You won’t mom I promise… anyways gotta go bye!
Nick’s Mom: Wai-
Nick cuts call
Ricky: Did you just cut a phone call on your mother?
Nick:Yes… yes I did.
To be continued…
Next Episode: Barrel Attacks!
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