RE: Beyblade Burst: Mystical - PikaBeyblade - Dec. 25, 2021
You’re welcome Scorponok
Oh I started a new page
RE: Beyblade Burst: Mystical - Carma___bigbang - Dec. 25, 2021
New oc no more beast
Name-Bryan de la Hoya
Parents- free and Kristina
Gender-male
Hair color-pink
Eye color- yellow
Skin color-peach
Marking- a goats horns on the sides of his four head colored blue
Hair style-his dads but shorter
Age-17
Side info-he drives everyone around when they need to get somewhere
Main info- takes after his dad and has a stanima type with rubber wears a black jacket with a goat symbol on the side and some times wears goat horns goes kawii sometimes and has a crush on Silas’s daughter rina and has blue jeans changes sides friends with kieth and van ships kieth and Irene to mess with them would be anyone’s friend and accepts any battle helps valt with his sadness about van
Bey name- criminal balphomet comet shootingstar
Ring -criminal a oval with two scythes like doomscyther but balanced out one metal one heavy rubber
Core-balphomet a circle with a extra hard tooth that come out when close to bursting
Disk-comet a circle with four balls on each side
Tip-shootingstar a tip like drift and nothing combined
Moves-criminal impact /criminal bullet /comet sting/criminal play out/criminal charge/shooting missile
Final move and what he says before it-level 10 barraging criminal hurricane /makes the bey creat a huge tornado 🌪 that sends any bey out of the stadium
Opponent in final round-War and beats him by two spins
How good of a fight he would put up against van at the end of the season -8 out of ten
Btw if you didn’t know balphomet is the goat demon one of the strongest demons
Can my oc be friends with Barry and Shane ? To
Shoot I forgot the armor-crisis/crisis is an armor that has little scythes made of metal
RE: Beyblade Burst: Mystical - PikaBeyblade - Dec. 25, 2021
Yes your Oc can be friends with Barry and shane
For Shane ask Scorponok
RE: Beyblade Burst: Mystical - beansworth - Dec. 25, 2021
Alright I wanted to post, that I'm working on Chapter 18, Byakuya(Beast), Shane, Barry and Vorukatai, are all appearing this Chapter! It'll be a long one
(Dec. 25, 2021 2:36 AM)beansworth Wrote: Alright I wanted to post, that I'm working on Chapter 18, Byakuya(Beast), Shane, Barry and Vorukatai, are all appearing this Chapter! It'll be a long one
Oop, I didn't even know that a fourth page was started!?! You guys are amazing, thanks for all the support!
RE: Beyblade Burst: Mystical - Carma___bigbang - Dec. 25, 2021
No more beast Bryan ok
RE: Beyblade Burst: Mystical - beansworth - Dec. 25, 2021
(Dec. 25, 2021 7:15 PM)Carma___bigbang Wrote: No more beast Bryan ok Sorry but, due to what I have so far Beast is in and Bryan can't be added due to Free not being with Kristina and Kristina already being with another guy and they already have a son. Sorry but I can't add Bryan due to how the story is set up.
RE: Beyblade Burst: Mystical - Carma___bigbang - Dec. 27, 2021
So beast but has the info from bryan
RE: Beyblade Burst: Mystical - Arsenal - Dec. 27, 2021
Name- Seth Krueger
Parents- unkown
Gender-male
Hair color-brown(but when his aura appears it turns crimson red)
Eye color- brown (but when his aura appears they glow pure red.)
Skin color-Caucasian
Age-14
Main info- He is a blade from unknown origins that crushes his opponents with his extreme power. Him and his bey has the power to destroy beys and stadiums with just a thought. His plan is to crush the Beyblade world and make it his own with his justification being it's his purpose.
Bey name- Infinity Arsenal Over Warp'
Ring -Infinity ( A silver metal ring with the ability to change its attack points to pure metal Valkyrie like attack points, to rubber like Fafnir points, to a secret mode which allows Arsenal to use all its power. Which this ring can do mid battle by the thought of Seth. This is also a dual spinning ring which it can also change on mid battle ads well.)
Core- Arsenal (The center has a some type of silver creature with 4 red slit eyes with 2 on each side and a yellow looking gem on top. On the creatures chest on the left side there's two gem looking things with on one on the nearest left being blue then next to it purple. Then on the other side on the nearest right there's a orange gem and next to it a red gem.
Then on the bottom of the chest there's a green gem. Each of the gem looking things on the bey control a ability the bey uses. With yellow allowing it to turn its ring into the fafnir rubber mode, the orange gem allowing the driver Warp' to go to its bearing stamina mode, the red allowing it to go to its zone + z balance mode, the purple allowing the ring to go to its metal Valkyrie attack point mode, the blue allowing the Warp' to go to its quick driver mode, and finally the green allows Warp' to go to its drift mode. When the bey changes modes the corresponding abilities gem will glow. And if needed Seth can use all the gems powers at the same time causing them all to glow and the 4 red eyes to glow causing Arsenal to use all its power for a giant explosion. If used with all of Seth's resonance it has enough destructive power to send the arena crumbling like L Drago. Also it has burst stoppers so its very difficult to burst.)
Disc- Over (a red over)
Driver- Warp' (As explained with the cores when either the orange, red, blue, or green gem glows the driver will go to its corresponding mode being either the Bearing, Zone + Z, Quick, or Drift driver mode. Though when all gems are used together the driver will go into a secret mode which allows Arsenal to use all its power for a giant explosion.)
Moves-
Infinity slash (Using the Quick driver and the metal Valkyrie contact points Arsenal can deliver a power attack which can cause most beys to burst.)
Infinity spin ( Using the Infinity ring on the fafnir rubber mode Arsenal with this move can steal spin and power better.)
Infinity defense (Using the drift mode on Warp' this move allows Arsenal to be better on defense and be a unmovable and unburstable object.)
Infinity counter (Using the zone + z driver on Warp' Arsenal is able to deliver a powerful counter attack.)
Infinity Destruction (Seth usually snaps his fingers with his right hand when he does this. Using all of Arsenals power the Infinity ring and Warp' driver change to a secret mode where it releases all of Arsenals energy causing anything in the stadium to shatter from its power even the stadium itself.)
Ultimate Infinity Destruction (Arsenal does the same thing with Infinity Destruction but with a power boost from Seth's resonance Arsenal can cause the entire arena to collapse from Arsenal and Seths pure power causing nothing to remain in the stadium its battling. The stadium and the opponents bey itself reduced to atoms.)
RE: Beyblade Burst: Mystical - UnseenBurst - Dec. 27, 2021
Hope you don't mind that I dropped an OC Right down here.
Name: Perseus Nakano (Goes by Percy)
Age: 16
Height 5'3
Gender: Male
Appearance: He has eyes that are Sea Green and a bandaid over his Nose. His hair is Blond and he has messy Hair like Percy Jackson. He wears a Short Sleeved Swim Shirt with arising from the water on it. He also has Ripped Jeans and a Blue Belt with Gold that he wears and he has Blue Sneakers with Sharks on them and he also wears Short-Sleeved Gloves that also have Sharks on them.
Nicknames: The Prince of the Endless Seas, The Heir to the Kiddie Pool (By his enemies), The Hydro King, The Dolt of the Community Pool. (By his friends playfully).
Personality: He kinda acts like Percy in the Percy Jackson Series. He's reckless and sometimes makes dumb decisions but he is very hilarious and he's always willing to help even if it's an enemy. He gets rilled up easily and is very energetic. Percy is very protective over his friends and just people in general if you mess with his friends you mess with him and he'll usually tries settling things nicely but when that doesn't work out he's got to be serious when Protecting his friends when they feel like they are in trouble. He's very strong and has defeated many Powerful Bladers and he's even defeated the World's Strongest Bladers but that doesn't make him cocky or arrogant. No matter the age or the Skill he always thinks of his opponent's like the same level as him and usually doesn't hold back.
Backstory: *Before Beyjitzu* Percy and his Mom were Best Friends and they always usually did everything together. His Mom named him Perseus because a couple of months before he was born she got into the Percy Jackson Series and loved it. She named him Perseus because she was sure that Percy would become someone Special one day and make a name for himself in the World. Her favorite Greek God was Poseidon and she would always tell Percy about Poseidon, The Greek god of all Water that's why Percy created Hydro Poseidon. But when he was around the age of 7 and a half his Mom went out somewhere in Downtown Japan and for some reason, she never returned. Percy's dad kept telling him that she'd return one day but after a Year passed and he was 8 he lost all hope and decided to shut friendship out of his life for good and just become a Strong Blader so he could make a name for himself like his Mom always said he would and created his Bey, Hydro Poseidon with the help of his Dad and became the Hydro King hoping one day that he'd make a name for himself in the Blading World. One day he got a challenger named Pam who'd change his life forever. After he defeated him new challengers started coming and then eventually Valt Aoi came to challenge him. Percy proceeded to challenge Legends all over the World and would win and lose some battles. He entered a Tournament and won but an Evil Blader destroyed his Bey. He rebuilt his Bey but the Corrupt Blader hurt his arm bad so he had to learn to Launch with his other hands so he can Launch with both hands. He entered a Tournament full of Legends and when he went to the finals he faced the Corrupt Blader one last time. He won because of the Power of Bond and went on to become one of the Strongest Bladers in the World.
Ring: Aqua, Aqua has 3 Blades that have Seahorse designs on them and the Blades are Huge and Sharp. They cut through the wind with ease and are large so they can deal massive damage against opposing Beys. It also has Rubber on the Side of the Blades (Like Belial with F Gear) that are Red and used for Stealing Spin and Attacking. The GX Blade is mainly Blue but has some Gold and Red on it.
Core: Poseidon, Poseidon has a slanted core (Like the Shape of Hyperion and Helios) with a Poseidon Motif and a Metal Trident that acts as a Crown. It has 2 Strong Locks and 2 Other Locks that are decent.
Disk: Whirlpool, Whirlpool is a Disk that is like Legacy, Nexus, and Karma all fused together. It has 6 Main Contact Points that have a bit of Rubber on them (Like Zenith) and creates an Updraft once the Bey is Spinning Fast Enough that cuts through the wind and increases Attack Power.
Driver: Liquid: Like the Venture Driver it has a Rubber Ring around a Stick pointing upwards but the Stick is made out of Pure Soft Rubber and the top part with the Rubber Ring and Stick can Free Spin in Battle so when it leans on its Driver it goes even Faster.
Special Moves:
Aqua Geyser: Kinda like Dynamite Bomber. With either a Powerful Slash or a Powerful Ram it clashes with the Opponent creating an Explosion as its Blades Glow. (Usually used as a Finisher Move)
Aqua Shoot: It leans on its Driver and accelerates as it hits the opposing Bey with a Powerful Barrage of attacks.
Aqua Swim: It catches onto the rim of the stadium with the Rubber on its driver and accelerates and rams straight into the opponent.
Aqua Drown: Basically Infinite Buster except with More Power. It uses its Large Blades to force its opponents down to the ground usually pinning them to the ground. Usually gets an Over Finish.
RE: Beyblade Burst: Mystical - SpeedySuomi - Dec. 27, 2021
Interesting, I'll try and take part as well.
" A~rriba! That's what I'm talkin' about!"
Name:
Neusa Senna
Gender:
Female
Age:
15 years old
Nationality:
Brazilian
Beyblade:
Mistral Notus Accessio Radiance
Appearance:
Neusa is a Brazilian girl of average height (standing at around 5'6ft.) with short light-pink hair (which is messy), green eyes, and tan skin. She wears gold earrings, circular eyeglasses, a black bralette shirt that connects to her neck, a yellow jacket with a black interior, pale blue jeans, and white running shoes.
Personality/Traits:
Neusa is a tomboyish girl who's very playful & cheerful and enjoys teasing people just for the fun of it. She's also quite friendly at times but will throw around some insults here and there, that doesn't really mean anything behind them. Despite her 'playfulness', she's quite modest and doesn't like show-offs - normally scoffing at people who show what mode their Bey is in since she doesn't know why they should 'give information to their enemy' (unless it's mandatory that they check their Beys first). Neusa isn't exactly the sharpest person in the room, but her physical ability more than compensates for it. That and she is able to adapt to her opponents and her surroundings easily, which allows her to push her Bey further.
Depending on her mood, she can sometimes feel a little somber or maybe talk about a heavy subject which sometimes shocks her friends as it's a big difference from the Neusa they normally see. She's surprisingly wise beyond her years as well, since she grew up quite disciplined. Neusa's main goal is to make her parents proud of her and repay what she feels is like a debt to them.
Background:
Neusa was born Brazilian but was raised in Spain for the rest of her childhood. She had to live with strict rules, she understood them though, as she knew what happens when you lack discipline. Her parents weren't exactly cruel or strict but were burdened with work all the time, which gave her the responsibility of being the eldest. When the time came, a BC Sol scouter took interest in her skill in Blading which was the beginning of her road to Beyblade.
BEYBLADE INFO
Mistral Notus Accessio Radiance
Mythical Blade - Mistral:
Mistral is a Mythical Blade that's somewhat elliptical, akin to Vise Leopard and has two spikes sticking out on each side. It has two layers, thus giving it the ability to change modes by pulling it upwards and twisting it just like Xtend+. If the layers are aligned and have an elliptical shape, it's in Counter Mode where it has gaps on the sides that trap opponents and as its name suggests, counter opposing attacks. If the upper layer is twisted sideward, the circular layer underneath is exposed, giving it defensive properties just like Flash Saggittario.
Mythical Core - Notus:
Notus is a Right-spinning Mythical Core with four teeth of average height, comparable to that of Z Achilles' teeth. It features a figure with a helm in the center representing its motif, Notus; the Greek god of the south wind. The frame surrounding the Core has a wind-like pattern, just like the Longinus Core's frame except with spiraling orbs on each end.
Mythical Armor - Radiance:
Radiance is a circular Armor shaped like 1S, which features two metal tabs (refer to the edges of the 11 Disc) that can be pushed out when spinning fastly, increasing OWD its OWD by a ton and depending on how it's placed, can also be pushed inwards when spinning fast to increase OWD.
Performance Tip - Accessio:
Accessio is a Defense-type Disc-Driver fusion with a large, low-angled base surrounding a free-spinning POM W2D tip akin to Drift, albeit with the tip of Mobius as well as an automatic mode change. The Disc it's fused with is similar to Over with a Driver applied onto it (refer to CrazyAries' Outstanding Driver from his Orichalcum Evo video), making it shorter than most Disc-Driver fusions. The sharp tip on the center can wear down into a Semi-Flat, making it more aggressive throughout. The way it's able to change modes is through a metal ring surrounding the screws, which when lowered, locks up the free-spinning ring.
Color Scheme:
It's primarily painted in magenta, with its secondary color being burgundy red, and gold. The disc surrounding Accessio is painted in gold and the driver is painted in magenta.
Full Appearance (credit to @AgC_AH):
![[Image: 41046_NvOr97lH.png]](https://share-cdn.picrew.me/shareImg/org/202112/41046_NvOr97lH.png)
I think I screwed this over by making it too complicated lo
RE: Beyblade Burst: Mystical - Scorponok - Dec. 27, 2021
Arsenal, you need to remember that this is the burst series, which even though it isn’t THAT realistic, things are a lot more realistic that in the metal saga, so there probably won’t be any disintegration into atoms. And all of are ocs our just supporting characters that allow beansworth to show his writing talent and to make his characters’ shine. I would recommend that you start writing your own fan fiction, where your character won’t up stage Van Aoi as an antagonist.
RE: Beyblade Burst: Mystical - PikaBeyblade - Dec. 28, 2021
(Dec. 27, 2021 10:09 AM)SpeedySuomi Wrote: Interesting, I'll try and take part as well.
" A~rriba! That's what I'm talkin' about!"
Name:
Neusa Senna
Gender:
Female
Age:
15 years old
Nationality:
Brazilian
Beyblade:
Mistral Notus Accessio Radiance
Appearance:
Neusa is a Brazilian girl of average height (standing at around 5'6ft.) with short light-pink hair (which is messy), green eyes, and tan skin. She wears gold earrings, circular eyeglasses, a black bralette shirt that connects to her neck, a yellow jacket with a black interior, pale blue jeans, and white running shoes.
Personality/Traits:
Neusa is a tomboyish girl who's very playful & cheerful and enjoys teasing people just for the fun of it. She's also quite friendly at times but will throw around some insults here and there, that doesn't really mean anything behind them. Despite her 'playfulness', she's quite modest and doesn't like show-offs - normally scoffing at people who show what mode their Bey is in since she doesn't know why they should 'give information to their enemy' (unless it's mandatory that they check their Beys first). Neusa isn't exactly the sharpest person in the room, but her physical ability more than compensates for it. That and she is able to adapt to her opponents and her surroundings easily, which allows her to push her Bey further.
Depending on her mood, she can sometimes feel a little somber or maybe talk about a heavy subject which sometimes shocks her friends as it's a big difference from the Neusa they normally see. She's surprisingly wise beyond her years as well, since she grew up quite disciplined. Neusa's main goal is to make her parents proud of her and repay what she feels is like a debt to them.
Background:
Neusa was born Brazilian but was raised in Spain for the rest of her childhood. She had to live with strict rules, she understood them though, as she knew what happens when you lack discipline. Her parents weren't exactly cruel or strict but were burdened with work all the time, which gave her the responsibility of being the eldest. When the time came, a BC Sol scouter took interest in her skill in Blading which was the beginning of her road to Beyblade.
BEYBLADE INFO
Mistral Notus Accessio Radiance
Mythical Blade - Mistral:
Mistral is a Mythical Blade that's somewhat elliptical, akin to Vise Leopard and has two spikes sticking out on each side. It has two layers, thus giving it the ability to change modes by pulling it upwards and twisting it just like Xtend+. If the layers are aligned and have an elliptical shape, it's in Counter Mode where it has gaps on the sides that trap opponents and as its name suggests, counter opposing attacks. If the upper layer is twisted sideward, the circular layer underneath is exposed, giving it defensive properties just like Flash Saggittario.
Mythical Core - Notus:
Notus is a Right-spinning Mythical Core with four teeth of average height, comparable to that of Z Achilles' teeth. It features a figure with a helm in the center representing its motif, Notus; the Greek god of the south wind. The frame surrounding the Core has a wind-like pattern, just like the Longinus Core's frame except with spiraling orbs on each end.
Mythical Armor - Radiance:
Radiance is a circular Armor shaped like 1S, which features two metal tabs (refer to the edges of the 11 Disc) that can be pushed out when spinning fastly, increasing OWD its OWD by a ton and depending on how it's placed, can also be pushed inwards when spinning fast to increase OWD.
Performance Tip - Accessio:
Accessio is a Defense-type Disc-Driver fusion with a large, low-angled base surrounding a free-spinning POM W2D tip akin to Drift, albeit with the tip of Mobius as well as an automatic mode change. The Disc it's fused with is similar to Over with a Driver applied onto it (refer to CrazyAries' Outstanding Driver from his Orichalcum Evo video), making it shorter than most Disc-Driver fusions. The sharp tip on the center can wear down into a Semi-Flat, making it more aggressive throughout. The way it's able to change modes is through a metal ring surrounding the screws, which when lowered, locks up the free-spinning ring.
Color Scheme:
It's primarily painted in magenta, with its secondary color being burgundy red, and gold. The disc surrounding Accessio is painted in gold and the driver is painted in magenta.
Full Appearance (credit to @AgC_AH):
I think I screwed this over by making it too complicated lo
This character seems a like my character will probably get annoyed with but also be friends with because my character also doesn’t like arrogance or arrogant people
SpeedySuomi for an explanation go to page 3 to see my character
RE: Beyblade Burst: Mystical - beansworth - Dec. 29, 2021
Wow, I hadn't checked the WBO since three days ago. Thanks Speedy and Unseen for joining, all the characters on this page will be added, I'll begin working on them ASAP. Also Unseen thanks for reading, your YinYang Fanfic, inspired me to create Mystical! So thanks for taking the time to read mine, and thanks to everyone else for reading it and joining the OC "contest", really this is the best!! Thanks so much!
Also I saw Scorponok's post and actually alot of the OCs become big characters, I find it respectful to add them, and also all the OCs are really cool! But now I need to get to reading Speedy's and Unseen's to get them added.
Hey UnseenBurst, I just need to add a Mythical Armor to your OC's Bey.
Mythical Armor-Typhoon
It features two metal burst stoppers, that make contact with the disc, creating friction allows this bey to stay together longer. This armor features a decent amount of metal, which is similar to Equal or Sense in weight.
That's all I wanted to add
RE: Beyblade Burst: Mystical - Dame Dolla - Dec. 29, 2021
Sorry if I'm to late but here's my entry to the contest
Name- Damian Lillard
Parents- Houston Lillard (Single Father) Gina Johnson (Ex wife of Houston Lillard and mother of Damian)
Birthplace- Oakland California
Gender- male
Hair color- black
Eye color-Dark brown
Skin color- Black
Age-14
Main info- He was born in Oakland California where there was gang violence and activity with Damian almost getting mugged on his way back from his beyblade teams practice there. After making his left spinning attack type bey named Trailblazing Chronos. Though due to the divorce of his father and mother he started growing a attitude and a ego causing his beys avatar to be a golden version of himself that has a clock on its left shoulder. Eventually his dad was able to get enough money so Damian could get out of the hood and go somewhere where he could live happily so to get better and prove that in his self believe he's actually the best blader ever he decided to get a ticket to the home place of beyblade, Japan. There in Japan he starts his rapping career on the side of beyblade where he makes hip hop songs and becomes a popular rapper doing concerts and creating his own rapper name called Dame Dolla. With him creating the word Dolla which stands for Different on levels the lord allows (he's a religious kid wearing a golden cross chain on his neck.) So during his blading tournaments and battles he's Damian Lillard but when he's rapping he's Dame Dolla. Though what makes him special to his viewers when he battles is his reaction time and his beys speed. In his battles due to Damian's Xtreme' driver Chronos is so quick that some people say Chronos is faster then the speed of life. And since Damian is able to battle with Chronos together this good some people say he's in his own time and everyone else to him is slow (like the flash). Though due to this he's gained a phrase by his fans called Dame Time.
Bey name- Trailblazing Chronos
Ring Trailblazing (A golden ring with two strong metal attack points that cause major damage like Rage. They also seem to have Chronos's fists on them to make it seem Chronos is literally punching the other bey.) (Left Spin)
Core- Chronos (A golden core with a golden version of Damian that looks to be a reference to a clock with its shoulder having a clock on its left shoulder and it looking like its made out of metal. Chronos also has Damian's black hair and black eye brows on it.) (Left Spin)
Disc- Dolla' (A purple disc that his designed to line up with with Trailblazing's attack points like 3A)
Driver- Xtreme' (A golden Xtreme' with purple rubber)
Moves-
Dame Time (Damian starts taping his wrist and with the power from his gold and purple aura and the boost from the energy of his fans it causes Chronos to somehow speed up.)
Logo Lillard (The Trailblazing rings attack point glow purple causing a boost in attack damage for Chronos but Chronos goes out of control causing it to slam into the stadium ground and stadium walls causing when the move finishes a picture of Damian's face is carved into the stadium.)
Trailblazing Slam (The Trailblazing rings attack points glow purple but instead of Chronos going out of control it just slams into its opponent with a strong impact.)
(If I win and you wanna make more moves for him you can I just came up with these off the top of my head.)
RE: Beyblade Burst: Mystical - Darkus/Flasher - Dec. 29, 2021
(Dec. 29, 2021 3:27 AM)Dame Dolla Wrote: Sorry if I'm to late but here's my entry to the contest
Name- Damian Lillard
Parents- Houston Lillard (Single Father) Gina Johnson (Ex wife of Houston Lillard and mother of Damian)
Birthplace- Oakland California
Gender- male
Hair color- black
Eye color-Dark brown
Skin color- Black
Age-14
Main info- He was born in Oakland California where there was gang violence and activity with Damian almost getting mugged on his way back from his beyblade teams practice there. After making his left spinning attack type bey named Trailblazing Chronos. Though due to the divorce of his father and mother he started growing a attitude and a ego causing his beys avatar to be a golden version of himself that has a clock on its left shoulder. Eventually his dad was able to get enough money so Damian could get out of the hood and go somewhere where he could live happily so to get better and prove that in his self believe he's actually the best blader ever he decided to get a ticket to the home place of beyblade, Japan. There in Japan he starts his rapping career on the side of beyblade where he makes hip hop songs and becomes a popular rapper doing concerts and creating his own rapper name called Dame Dolla. With him creating the word Dolla which stands for Different on levels the lord allows (he's a religious kid wearing a golden cross chain on his neck.) So during his blading tournaments and battles he's Damian Lillard but when he's rapping he's Dame Dolla. Though what makes him special to his viewers when he battles is his reaction time and his beys speed. In his battles due to Damian's Xtreme' driver Chronos is so quick that some people say Chronos is faster then the speed of life. And since Damian is able to battle with Chronos together this good some people say he's in his own time and everyone else to him is slow (like the flash). Though due to this he's gained a phrase by his fans called Dame Time.
Bey name- Trailblazing Chronos
Ring Trailblazing (A golden ring with two strong metal attack points that cause major damage like Rage. They also seem to have Chronos's fists on them to make it seem Chronos is literally punching the other bey.) (Left Spin)
Core- Chronos (A golden core with a golden version of Damian that looks to be a reference to a clock with its shoulder having a clock on its left shoulder and it looking like its made out of metal. Chronos also has Damian's black hair and black eye brows on it.) (Left Spin)
Disc- Dolla' (A purple disc that his designed to line up with with Trailblazing's attack points like 3A)
Driver- Xtreme' (A golden Xtreme' with purple rubber)
Moves-
Dame Time (Damian starts taping his wrist and with the power from his gold and purple aura and the boost from the energy of his fans it causes Chronos to somehow speed up.)
Logo Lillard (The Trailblazing rings attack point glow purple causing a boost in attack damage for Chronos but Chronos goes out of control causing it to slam into the stadium ground and stadium walls causing when the move finishes a picture of Damian's face is carved into the stadium.)
Trailblazing Slam (The Trailblazing rings attack points glow purple but instead of Chronos going out of control it just slams into its opponent with a strong impact.)
(If I win and you wanna make more moves for him you can I just came up with these off the top of my head.)
Bruh no. Not Damian. Lol
RE: Beyblade Burst: Mystical - Dame Dolla - Dec. 29, 2021
(Dec. 29, 2021 3:37 AM)Darkus/Flasher Wrote: (Dec. 29, 2021 3:27 AM)Dame Dolla Wrote: Sorry if I'm to late but here's my entry to the contest
Name- Damian Lillard
Parents- Houston Lillard (Single Father) Gina Johnson (Ex wife of Houston Lillard and mother of Damian)
Birthplace- Oakland California
Gender- male
Hair color- black
Eye color-Dark brown
Skin color- Black
Age-14
Main info- He was born in Oakland California where there was gang violence and activity with Damian almost getting mugged on his way back from his beyblade teams practice there. After making his left spinning attack type bey named Trailblazing Chronos. Though due to the divorce of his father and mother he started growing a attitude and a ego causing his beys avatar to be a golden version of himself that has a clock on its left shoulder. Eventually his dad was able to get enough money so Damian could get out of the hood and go somewhere where he could live happily so to get better and prove that in his self believe he's actually the best blader ever he decided to get a ticket to the home place of beyblade, Japan. There in Japan he starts his rapping career on the side of beyblade where he makes hip hop songs and becomes a popular rapper doing concerts and creating his own rapper name called Dame Dolla. With him creating the word Dolla which stands for Different on levels the lord allows (he's a religious kid wearing a golden cross chain on his neck.) So during his blading tournaments and battles he's Damian Lillard but when he's rapping he's Dame Dolla. Though what makes him special to his viewers when he battles is his reaction time and his beys speed. In his battles due to Damian's Xtreme' driver Chronos is so quick that some people say Chronos is faster then the speed of life. And since Damian is able to battle with Chronos together this good some people say he's in his own time and everyone else to him is slow (like the flash). Though due to this he's gained a phrase by his fans called Dame Time.
Bey name- Trailblazing Chronos
Ring Trailblazing (A golden ring with two strong metal attack points that cause major damage like Rage. They also seem to have Chronos's fists on them to make it seem Chronos is literally punching the other bey.) (Left Spin)
Core- Chronos (A golden core with a golden version of Damian that looks to be a reference to a clock with its shoulder having a clock on its left shoulder and it looking like its made out of metal. Chronos also has Damian's black hair and black eye brows on it.) (Left Spin)
Disc- Dolla' (A purple disc that his designed to line up with with Trailblazing's attack points like 3A)
Driver- Xtreme' (A golden Xtreme' with purple rubber)
Moves-
Dame Time (Damian starts taping his wrist and with the power from his gold and purple aura and the boost from the energy of his fans it causes Chronos to somehow speed up.)
Logo Lillard (The Trailblazing rings attack point glow purple causing a boost in attack damage for Chronos but Chronos goes out of control causing it to slam into the stadium ground and stadium walls causing when the move finishes a picture of Damian's face is carved into the stadium.)
Trailblazing Slam (The Trailblazing rings attack points glow purple but instead of Chronos going out of control it just slams into its opponent with a strong impact.)
(If I win and you wanna make more moves for him you can I just came up with these off the top of my head.)
Bruh no. Not Damian. Lol
Hey man what do you expect from someone with a NBA player pfp and name lol
RE: Beyblade Burst: Mystical - beansworth - Dec. 29, 2021
(Dec. 29, 2021 3:27 AM)Dame Dolla Wrote: Sorry if I'm to late but here's my entry to the contest
Name- Damian Lillard
Parents- Houston Lillard (Single Father) Gina Johnson (Ex wife of Houston Lillard and mother of Damian)
Birthplace- Oakland California
Gender- male
Hair color- black
Eye color-Dark brown
Skin color- Black
Age-14
Main info- He was born in Oakland California where there was gang violence and activity with Damian almost getting mugged on his way back from his beyblade teams practice there. After making his left spinning attack type bey named Trailblazing Chronos. Though due to the divorce of his father and mother he started growing a attitude and a ego causing his beys avatar to be a golden version of himself that has a clock on its left shoulder. Eventually his dad was able to get enough money so Damian could get out of the hood and go somewhere where he could live happily so to get better and prove that in his self believe he's actually the best blader ever he decided to get a ticket to the home place of beyblade, Japan. There in Japan he starts his rapping career on the side of beyblade where he makes hip hop songs and becomes a popular rapper doing concerts and creating his own rapper name called Dame Dolla. With him creating the word Dolla which stands for Different on levels the lord allows (he's a religious kid wearing a golden cross chain on his neck.) So during his blading tournaments and battles he's Damian Lillard but when he's rapping he's Dame Dolla. Though what makes him special to his viewers when he battles is his reaction time and his beys speed. In his battles due to Damian's Xtreme' driver Chronos is so quick that some people say Chronos is faster then the speed of life. And since Damian is able to battle with Chronos together this good some people say he's in his own time and everyone else to him is slow (like the flash). Though due to this he's gained a phrase by his fans called Dame Time.
Bey name- Trailblazing Chronos
Ring Trailblazing (A golden ring with two strong metal attack points that cause major damage like Rage. They also seem to have Chronos's fists on them to make it seem Chronos is literally punching the other bey.) (Left Spin)
Core- Chronos (A golden core with a golden version of Damian that looks to be a reference to a clock with its shoulder having a clock on its left shoulder and it looking like its made out of metal. Chronos also has Damian's black hair and black eye brows on it.) (Left Spin)
Disc- Dolla' (A purple disc that his designed to line up with with Trailblazing's attack points like 3A)
Driver- Xtreme' (A golden Xtreme' with purple rubber)
Moves-
Dame Time (Damian starts taping his wrist and with the power from his gold and purple aura and the boost from the energy of his fans it causes Chronos to somehow speed up.)
Logo Lillard (The Trailblazing rings attack point glow purple causing a boost in attack damage for Chronos but Chronos goes out of control causing it to slam into the stadium ground and stadium walls causing when the move finishes a picture of Damian's face is carved into the stadium.)
Trailblazing Slam (The Trailblazing rings attack points glow purple but instead of Chronos going out of control it just slams into its opponent with a strong impact.)
(If I win and you wanna make more moves for him you can I just came up with these off the top of my head.) I'll think about this one, also it's not really a contest-contest, it's more just say your OC and I look at it.
RE: Beyblade Burst: Mystical - Dame Dolla - Dec. 29, 2021
(Dec. 29, 2021 3:53 AM)beansworth Wrote: (Dec. 29, 2021 3:27 AM)Dame Dolla Wrote: Sorry if I'm to late but here's my entry to the contest
Name- Damian Lillard
Parents- Houston Lillard (Single Father) Gina Johnson (Ex wife of Houston Lillard and mother of Damian)
Birthplace- Oakland California
Gender- male
Hair color- black
Eye color-Dark brown
Skin color- Black
Age-14
Main info- He was born in Oakland California where there was gang violence and activity with Damian almost getting mugged on his way back from his beyblade teams practice there. After making his left spinning attack type bey named Trailblazing Chronos. Though due to the divorce of his father and mother he started growing a attitude and a ego causing his beys avatar to be a golden version of himself that has a clock on its left shoulder. Eventually his dad was able to get enough money so Damian could get out of the hood and go somewhere where he could live happily so to get better and prove that in his self believe he's actually the best blader ever he decided to get a ticket to the home place of beyblade, Japan. There in Japan he starts his rapping career on the side of beyblade where he makes hip hop songs and becomes a popular rapper doing concerts and creating his own rapper name called Dame Dolla. With him creating the word Dolla which stands for Different on levels the lord allows (he's a religious kid wearing a golden cross chain on his neck.) So during his blading tournaments and battles he's Damian Lillard but when he's rapping he's Dame Dolla. Though what makes him special to his viewers when he battles is his reaction time and his beys speed. In his battles due to Damian's Xtreme' driver Chronos is so quick that some people say Chronos is faster then the speed of life. And since Damian is able to battle with Chronos together this good some people say he's in his own time and everyone else to him is slow (like the flash). Though due to this he's gained a phrase by his fans called Dame Time.
Bey name- Trailblazing Chronos
Ring Trailblazing (A golden ring with two strong metal attack points that cause major damage like Rage. They also seem to have Chronos's fists on them to make it seem Chronos is literally punching the other bey.) (Left Spin)
Core- Chronos (A golden core with a golden version of Damian that looks to be a reference to a clock with its shoulder having a clock on its left shoulder and it looking like its made out of metal. Chronos also has Damian's black hair and black eye brows on it.) (Left Spin)
Disc- Dolla' (A purple disc that his designed to line up with with Trailblazing's attack points like 3A)
Driver- Xtreme' (A golden Xtreme' with purple rubber)
Moves-
Dame Time (Damian starts taping his wrist and with the power from his gold and purple aura and the boost from the energy of his fans it causes Chronos to somehow speed up.)
Logo Lillard (The Trailblazing rings attack point glow purple causing a boost in attack damage for Chronos but Chronos goes out of control causing it to slam into the stadium ground and stadium walls causing when the move finishes a picture of Damian's face is carved into the stadium.)
Trailblazing Slam (The Trailblazing rings attack points glow purple but instead of Chronos going out of control it just slams into its opponent with a strong impact.)
(If I win and you wanna make more moves for him you can I just came up with these off the top of my head.) I'll think about this one, also it's not really a contest-contest, it's more just say your OC and I look at it. Oh alright and thanks for reading mine
RE: Beyblade Burst: Mystical - beansworth - Dec. 29, 2021
Chapter 11, which doesn't have a lot of big battles but it has more plot development and intro of Shu and mysterious blader, Lucy
Chapter 11: Shu’s Training! Legendary Blader’s Training!
Everyone was in the blading room, celebrating everything they’d done, Irene had baked a cake for everyone.
Keith was getting to know Shu, and Lucy was sitting by herself.
Baki saw her and walked over.
Baki: “Hey, I noticed you were sitting alone and wanted to know if you wanted to talk?”
Lucy looked up, she had long brown hair, with some of it highlighted blonde.
Lucy: “That’s fine, I guess.”
Baki sat down and gave her a piece of cake.
Lucy took the plate and fork and began eating.
Baki: “So what’s your name? My name’s Baki Alcazaba.”
Lucy looked over and said.
Lucy: “My name is Lucy Kurenai.”
Baki: “Wow, so does that mean Shu’s your father?”
Lucy nodded, while taking a bite of her cake.
Baki: “Are you shy?”
Lucy: “No, I just don’t think anyone would like me.”
Baki: “Well I like you personally.”
Baki smiled while saying it, Lucy’s eyes sparkled.
She never met anyone who liked talking to her.
Baki jumped up and asked.
Baki: “Hey, let’s battle!”
Lucy grabbed her newly forged Mythical Bey and got up.
Her and Baki walked over to the stadium, they both put their beys onto their launchers.
Lucy: “It’s only fair if you take a look at my bey before the battle.”
Baki: “Oh, okay.”
The two gave each other their beys and checked them out.
Baki’s Mind: “This beys seems to have two blades of rubber for attack, and metal on the other two blades, its like Shu’s Spriggan. It’s disc has a smooth bottom, but a ridged side. And finally it’s driver has a metal tip surrounded in hard rubber, and it even has a support ring to help with LAD.”
Both: “3! 2! 1!”
Both: “Go Shoot!”
Bahamut went to the center, while Lucy’s bey circled the outer ridge, then Lucy called out.
Lucy: “Loki! Dominate Shoot!”
Loki began barraging Bahamut, then Baki called.
Baki: “Bahamut, our defense is unbreakable. Dynamic Roar!”
Bahamut then parried Loki, and it hit the stadium wall, once it landed it shot towards Bahamut again.
Lucy: “Loki, now. Disaster Spear!”
Loki hit Bahamut, and almost burst it.
Baki: “Bahamut, Dynamic Shield!”
Bahamut transformed, and began tanking all the hits from Loki.
Then Loki began scraping the stadium floor, and it stopped spinning.
Lucy grabbed Loki, and put it in her bag.
Baki walked over to her and put his hand out.
Baki: “Let’s be friends okay?”
Lucy smiled and shook his hand.
Then Shu, Valt and Free walked over to the young bladers.
Shu: “Alright it’s time to tell you guys about our newest plan.”
Everyone sat down.
Shu: “Each of us legendary bladers will be teaching two of you.”
Everyone then got up.
Keith, Baki, Irene, Samson, Lucy and Yuito got up and stood there.
Valt: “I’ll be teaching Samson and Yuito.”
Free: “I’m teaching Baki and Irene.”
Shu: “And that leaves me Keith and Lucy.”
Everyone then stood with their teachers.
Shu took Keith and Lucy and walked them to the port, and they saw a boat waiting there.
Keith: “Hey Shu, why is there a boat here?”
Shu: “For the next 3 weeks, we’ll be going to my private island for training.”
Keith: “You own a private island!?”
Lucy: “Yeah, we own one, it’s designed for pushing blader’s to their limits.”
Then Keith, Lucy and Shu entered the boat and they were taken to Shu’s Private Island.
Once they arrived, Keith saw a medium sized house, and a farm on the island.
Keith: “Who lives here, Shu?”
Shu: “No one, but someone is staying here currently.”
Then everyone heard someone yelling.
???: “Shu! You still haven’t battled me! You’re only winning by 2 wins, come on!”
Lucy sighed, while she grabbed his phone.
Then the boy stopped in front of Keith.
Keith: “Aiga Akaba!”
Aiga: “Sure is!”
RE: Beyblade Burst: Mystical - Dame Dolla - Dec. 29, 2021
(Dec. 29, 2021 2:47 PM)beansworth Wrote: Chapter 11, which doesn't have a lot of big battles but it has more plot development and intro of Shu and mysterious blader, Lucy
Chapter 11: Shu’s Training! Legendary Blader’s Training!
Everyone was in the blading room, celebrating everything they’d done, Irene had baked a cake for everyone.
Keith was getting to know Shu, and Lucy was sitting by herself.
Baki saw her and walked over.
Baki: “Hey, I noticed you were sitting alone and wanted to know if you wanted to talk?”
Lucy looked up, she had long brown hair, with some of it highlighted blonde.
Lucy: “That’s fine, I guess.”
Baki sat down and gave her a piece of cake.
Lucy took the plate and fork and began eating.
Baki: “So what’s your name? My name’s Baki Alcazaba.”
Lucy looked over and said.
Lucy: “My name is Lucy Kurenai.”
Baki: “Wow, so does that mean Shu’s your father?”
Lucy nodded, while taking a bite of her cake.
Baki: “Are you shy?”
Lucy: “No, I just don’t think anyone would like me.”
Baki: “Well I like you personally.”
Baki smiled while saying it, Lucy’s eyes sparkled.
She never met anyone who liked talking to her.
Baki jumped up and asked.
Baki: “Hey, let’s battle!”
Lucy grabbed her newly forged Mythical Bey and got up.
Her and Baki walked over to the stadium, they both put their beys onto their launchers.
Lucy: “It’s only fair if you take a look at my bey before the battle.”
Baki: “Oh, okay.”
The two gave each other their beys and checked them out.
Baki’s Mind: “This beys seems to have two blades of rubber for attack, and metal on the other two blades, its like Shu’s Spriggan. It’s disc has a smooth bottom, but a ridged side. And finally it’s driver has a metal tip surrounded in hard rubber, and it even has a support ring to help with LAD.”
Both: “3! 2! 1!”
Both: “Go Shoot!”
Bahamut went to the center, while Lucy’s bey circled the outer ridge, then Lucy called out.
Lucy: “Loki! Dominate Shoot!”
Loki began barraging Bahamut, then Baki called.
Baki: “Bahamut, our defense is unbreakable. Dynamic Roar!”
Bahamut then parried Loki, and it hit the stadium wall, once it landed it shot towards Bahamut again.
Lucy: “Loki, now. Disaster Spear!”
Loki hit Bahamut, and almost burst it.
Baki: “Bahamut, Dynamic Shield!”
Bahamut transformed, and began tanking all the hits from Loki.
Then Loki began scraping the stadium floor, and it stopped spinning.
Lucy grabbed Loki, and put it in her bag.
Baki walked over to her and put his hand out.
Baki: “Let’s be friends okay?”
Lucy smiled and shook his hand.
Then Shu, Valt and Free walked over to the young bladers.
Shu: “Alright it’s time to tell you guys about our newest plan.”
Everyone sat down.
Shu: “Each of us legendary bladers will be teaching two of you.”
Everyone then got up.
Keith, Baki, Irene, Samson, Lucy and Yuito got up and stood there.
Valt: “I’ll be teaching Samson and Yuito.”
Free: “I’m teaching Baki and Irene.”
Shu: “And that leaves me Keith and Lucy.”
Everyone then stood with their teachers.
Shu took Keith and Lucy and walked them to the port, and they saw a boat waiting there.
Keith: “Hey Shu, why is there a boat here?”
Shu: “For the next 3 weeks, we’ll be going to my private island for training.”
Keith: “You own a private island!?”
Lucy: “Yeah, we own one, it’s designed for pushing blader’s to their limits.”
Then Keith, Lucy and Shu entered the boat and they were taken to Shu’s Private Island.
Once they arrived, Keith saw a medium sized house, and a farm on the island.
Keith: “Who lives here, Shu?”
Shu: “No one, but someone is staying here currently.”
Then everyone heard someone yelling.
???: “Shu! You still haven’t battled me! You’re only winning by 2 wins, come on!”
Lucy sighed, while she grabbed his phone.
Then the boy stopped in front of Keith.
Keith: “Aiga Akaba!”
Aiga: “Sure is!”
This is good its nice to have stories without battles to add more to the plot
RE: Beyblade Burst: Mystical - PikaBeyblade - Dec. 29, 2021
Noice Aiga’s here
I wonder what is Baki’s relation to Boa
RE: Beyblade Burst: Mystical - beansworth - Dec. 29, 2021
(Dec. 29, 2021 4:59 PM)PikaBeyblade Wrote: Noice Aiga’s here
I wonder what is Baki’s relation to Boa Shoot that's my fault, I don't think I ever said in the forum or in the fanfic(lol, forgetful) He's Boa's cousin.
RE: Beyblade Burst: Mystical - PikaBeyblade - Dec. 29, 2021
Ok and btw why did you say Aiga was a boy? since Aiga is 2 years younger then Valt, Free and the others
RE: Beyblade Burst: Mystical - beansworth - Dec. 29, 2021
(Dec. 29, 2021 11:24 PM)PikaBeyblade Wrote: Ok and btw why did you say Aiga was a boy? since Aiga is 2 years younger then Valt, Free and the others Oh I use boy more then man/men, but that's just how I write.
RE: Beyblade Burst: Mystical - PikaBeyblade - Dec. 29, 2021
Alright also when is chapter 12
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