RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - reshiwum - May. 24, 2021
(May. 23, 2021 5:52 PM)Strikegamerv6 Wrote: (May. 23, 2021 12:37 PM)tenma Wrote: Name: Fiora De La Hoya
Gender: Female
Age: 13
Eye Color: Black (Gold during resonance)
Hair Color: Blonde with single red stripe
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Bey: Ethereal Freya Vanguard Dash 3B
Type: Balance
Key Colors: Gold, Platinum, White
Avatar Appearance: Freya is based off the Norse goddess of love and fertility. Freya has golden, long flowing hair with a pair of wing-like accessory adorned on her hair, one above her left ear and one above her right ear. She wears white long dress, and has a pair of platinum-colored wings.
Special Moves: Ethereal Premonition, Ethereal Bolt, Heaven's Glory.
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Appearance: Fiora is a fair-skinned girl of average height, having her short blonde hair tied to the side. She wears an unzipped yellow jacket with cobalt accents (Similar to Fafnir's palette) with a black undershirt, with the words "Hyper Muteki!" imprinted on top of the the chest area. She wears a white wing-shaped hairpin on her hair and her hair tie is adorned with the similar accessory. She wears knee-long denim baggy shorts and calf-height cotton white socks. She wears black-and-cobalt sneakers.
Personality: Unlike her older brother, Fiora is an energetic and optimistic girl. She is very supportive and always tries her best to motivate her friends whenever. There are sometimes, however, when she can get serious and much quieter. She is also a little quick-tempered at times.
Relationship(s)
Free De La Hoya - As a little sister, Fiora is pretty close to Free and they have a pretty healthy relationship, though they don't meet that often as Free is often traveling the world. Unlike Free, Fiora decided that she won't use Fafnir, but instead made her own Bey, Freya, and promised that it will surpass even Fafnir. When they meet, Fiora is often found playing with Free's hair, adorning it with her hairpins.
Valt Aoi - She looks up to Valt very much (a lot like Raika towards Sisco), and is a huge fan of the said latter. She goes ecstatic when she first met the said Valt, as she idolized the said latter a lot.
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Quotes
"I promise...That one day Freya will surpass Fafnir! I won't disappoint you, Free!"
"Why is your hair is very messy, Free? Well, that isn't a problem to me, though, sounds like a place to play instead!"
"How ya' like that!? This is the power of me and Freya! Together, we are an unbreakable bond of power!"
This looks really good but you need to own a bey from S1-S7 but you can use Fafnir if you want Oh, my apologies. But may I know if there is any specific reason why Beys that are self-made are not allowed?
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - UnseenBurst - May. 24, 2021
(May. 24, 2021 3:28 AM)tenma Wrote: (May. 23, 2021 5:52 PM)Strikegamerv6 Wrote: This looks really good but you need to own a bey from S1-S7 but you can use Fafnir if you want Oh, my apologies. But may I know if there is any specific reason why Beys that are self-made are not allowed?
Not really a specific reason I just thought it would be cool to have returning beys lol and no need to be sorry in my next fanfic I will allow self-made beys
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - UnseenBurst - May. 24, 2021
New chapter names/Summaries!!!
Chapter 4 Master of the winds Berserker Roktavor!!!! Adam and Vlad go over to a new kid in the neighborhood's house and it turns out he's a blader!!!! Chapter 5 King Of Scares Detonate Belarix!!!! Adam Vlad and Ryuji check out a creepy mansion in the neighborhood!!! Chapter 6 Sol Victories!!! Vlad tries starting a beyclub with his friends!!! Chapter 7 Sprit Of Blaze Barberic Spryzen!!! Vlad and the gang head over to America to visit someone special!!! Chapter 8 Don't Jynx The Star Jynx Jinnus!!!! Vlad and the gang go check out a movie that's currently being worked on!!!! Which Chapter are you most excited about?
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - LegendJustice - May. 24, 2021
(May. 24, 2021 7:02 PM)Strikegamerv6 Wrote: New chapter names/Summaries!!!
Chapter 4 Master of the winds Berserker Roktavor!!!! Adam and Vlad go over to a new kid in the neighborhood's house and it turns out he's a blader!!!! Chapter 5 King Of Scares Detonate Belarix!!!! Adam Vlad and Ryuji check out a creepy mansion in the neighborhood!!! Chapter 6 Sol Victories!!! Vlad tries starting a beyclub with his friends!!! Chapter 7 Sprit Of Blaze Barberic Spryzen!!! Vlad and the gang head over to America to visit someone special!!! Chapter 8 Which Chapter are you most excited about? Don't Jynx The Star Jynx Jinnus!!!! Vlad and the gang go check out a movie that's currently being worked on!!!! and Vlad has a gang woah he's like valt
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - PinkRose - May. 24, 2021
(May. 24, 2021 7:02 PM)Strikegamerv6 Wrote: New chapter names/Summaries!!!
Chapter 4 Master of the winds Berserker Roktavor!!!! Adam and Vlad go over to a new kid in the neighborhood's house and it turns out he's a blader!!!! Chapter 5 King Of Scares Detonate Belarix!!!! Adam Vlad and Ryuji check out a creepy mansion in the neighborhood!!! Chapter 6 Sol Victories!!! Vlad tries starting a beyclub with his friends!!! Chapter 7 Sprit Of Blaze Barberic Spryzen!!! Vlad and the gang head over to America to visit someone special!!! Chapter 8 Don't Jynx The Star Jynx Jinnus!!!! Vlad and the gang go check out a movie that's currently being worked on!!!! Which Chapter are you most excited about?
This is beside the point but, Belarix is actually a decent dub name for Belial.
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - UnseenBurst - May. 24, 2021
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RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - LegendJustice - May. 25, 2021
(May. 24, 2021 8:10 PM)Strikegamerv6 Wrote: Chapter 4 is out Beyblade Burst Dynachi
Chapter 4
Master Of Winds Berserker Roktavor!!!!
Me: Valt can Adam sleep over!?
Valt: Sure why not!!
Vira: Ugh more boys!!
Valt: Vira if you wanna sleepover at your friend’s too you can.
(Vira runs out the door with her packed bag)
Me: I’m getting the feeling she really needs some time out.
Valt: That’s literally why I let her leave. Anyways I heard there’s a new kid in the neighborhood!!! Why don’t you go say hi!!!
Me: Sure!!
(I run over to Adam’s house)
Adam: Did Valt say yes!?
Me: He sure did!! He also wanted us to say hi to the new kid in the Neighborhood!!!
Adam: Alright let’s go!!
(Me and Adam head over to the new kid’s house)
Me: We’re here!!
(Adam rings the doorbell)
Adam: Nobody’s coming.
(A whole stampede of people come out, Me and Adam jump into the lawn)
???: What are you two doing here!?
Me: Um we came to say hi!!
???: Oh so sorry for my fan’s rude behavior after you came all this way!!!
(??? helps me get up)
Adam: Thanks, Amigo!!
(??? pulls his hand away, Adam falls flat on his face)
Adam: Seriously.
???: Sorry, but I only help strong bladers with reputations!!! I would never forgive myself if I touched you!!!
Adam: Talk about stuck up!!
Ryuji: Sorry Vlad!! I forgot to introduce myself!!! My name is Ryuji Kiyama!!!
Vlad: Kiyama? Does that mean you related to Ransou Rantaro and Ranjiro!?
Ryuji: Sadly yes.
Adam: What do you mean by sadly?
Ryuji: Honestly they are so weak it makes me laugh!!
Me: Valt told me that Rantaro was his partner in the Ultimate Tag Series and they did great!!
Adam: Yeah Vlad does have a point!!
Ryuji: First of all kid on the grass you have nothing to say since your say weak!!
Adam: Why do you think I’m weak?
Ryuji: Because I watched your pathetic excuse for a battle!! Vlad was the real and only highlight of it!!
Adam: Grr!!
Ryuji: Back to what I was saying!! I respect Valt he was a strong blader, he would have done way better if Rantaro was not on his team!!
Ryuji’s phone: Adam Kusaba has requested to battle you. Do you wish to decline or accept it?
Me: Adam?
Ryuji: Give me one good reason why I should accept.
Adam: To prove that I’m not weak!!
Ryuji: Fine.
Ryuji’s Phone: Battle accepted. Please meet at this location.
(At the park)
Announcer: Ok everybody!!! We have another ranked battle and it is Adam Kusaba Vs Ryuji Kiyama let’s get right into this!!!
Ryuji: Meet Berserker Roktavor!!!
Adam/Me: *Gasps*
Adam: It’s a Dynachi Bey!?
Ryuji: I told you I was inspired by Vlad so I made a Dynachi bey before I left!!
Drone: Inspect your opponent’s bey!!
(Adam’s Thoughts): Berserker Roktavor a stamina type, it has 2 big wings and 2 smaller ones. The smaller wings are made of metal and it is super heavy it looks like it will be a long time before this thing stops spinning.
(Ryuji snatches Roktavor out of Adam’s hand)
Adam: Hey!!
Ryuji: Sorry can’t have a ruffian touching my bey for too long!!!
Drone: First battle!!! Ready set!!!
Adam/Ryuji: 3 2 1 Let it rip!!
Ryuji: Roktavor take the center!!!
Adam: Nope center’s mine!!
(Roktavor takes the center first)
Announcer: Roktavor quickly secures the center!!!
Adam: *Gasps*
Ryuji: Try your best hit!!
Adam: Oh I will!!
(Ashindra attacks, Ashindra gets sent flying out of the stadium)
Adam: What the!?
Drone: It’s Berserker Roktavor with a ring-out finish. Ryuji Kiyama claims 1 point!!
Announcer: I can’t believe it with one of its own hits Ashindra gets sen flying!!!
Ryuji: Too easy!!
Adam: How did you do that!?
Ryuji: I made Roktavor extra heavy and stable so it could withstand wimpy attacks!!!
Adam: Why you!!
(Adam puts Ashindra’s weight from the bottom to the top)
Ryuji: Oh looks like my bey has a secret!! Might as well try it out!!
(Ryuji puts Roktavor’s weight from the bottom to the top)
Adam: You can’t just do that you need tons of practice!!
Ryuji: I won’t need practice but you being an amateur blader you would need it!!!
Adam: You really get on my nerves!!!
(My thoughts): He’s playing Adam like a guitar!!!
Drone: Second battle!!! Ready set!!!
Adam/Ryuji: 3 2 1 Let it rip!!!
(Adam miss launches)
Adam: *Gasps*
Announcer: Adam’s launch could use some work but Ashindra is still spinning strong!!! But extra wobbly!!! While Ryuji nailed the launch!!!
(Roktavor takes the center)
Ryuji: Put it in it’s place!!!
(Ashindra attacks but gets sent flying)
Adam: I’m not losing yet!!!
(Ashindra hits the wall)
Announcer: Ashindra hangs in by the skin of its teeth!!!
Adam: Ashindra!!!!
(Adam’s Resonance aura flares up)
Adam: End this with Atomic Counter!!!
Ryuji: Time to end this!!! Roktavor!!!
(Ryuji’s Resonance aura flares up)
Ryuji: Berserker Wing Strom!!!!
(Huge explosion happens, Ashindra bursts)
Adam: How!?
Drone: It’s Berserker Roktavor with a burst finish!!! Ryuji Kiyama wins with a score of 3-0!!!
Announcer: Wow Ryjui’s performance in this battle was amazing he is sure ranking up!!!
Ryuji’s Phone: You have ranked up. You are now at rank 160.
Ryuji: As expected I won!!!
Adam: Grr!!!
Me: You were amazing in that battle!!!
Ryuji: Thanks but your applaud means nothing to me!!!
(Ryjui’s fans applaud and clap and whistle)
Adam: Grr!! Darkred's character was featured in this chapter
epic chapter
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - UnseenBurst - May. 25, 2021
Chapter 4 is out!!! Beyblade Burst Dynachi
Chapter 4
Master Of Winds Berserker Roktavor!!!!
Me: Valt can Adam sleep over!?
Valt: Sure why not!!
Vira: Ugh more boys!!
Valt: Vira if you wanna sleepover at your friend’s too you can.
(Vira runs out the door with her packed bag)
Me: I’m getting the feeling she really needs some time out.
Valt: That’s literally why I let her leave. Anyways I heard there’s a new kid in the neighborhood!!! Why don’t you go say hi!!!
Me: Sure!!
(I run over to Adam’s house)
Adam: Did Valt say yes!?
Me: He sure did!! He also wanted us to say hi to the new kid in the Neighborhood!!!
Adam: Alright let’s go!!
(Me and Adam head over to the new kid’s house)
Me: We’re here!!
(Adam rings the doorbell)
Adam: Nobody’s coming.
(A whole stampede of people come out, Me and Adam jump into the lawn)
???: What are you two doing here!?
Me: Um we came to say hi!!
???: Oh so sorry for my fan’s rude behavior after you came all this way!!!
(??? helps me get up)
Adam: Thanks, Amigo!!
(??? pulls his hand away, Adam falls flat on his face)
Adam: Seriously.
???: Sorry, but I only help strong bladers with reputations!!! I would never forgive myself if I touched you!!!
Adam: Talk about stuck up!!
Ryuji: Sorry Vlad!! I forgot to introduce myself!!! My name is Ryuji Kiyama!!!
Vlad: Kiyama? Does that mean you related to Ransou Rantaro and Ranjiro!?
Ryuji: Sadly yes.
Adam: What do you mean by sadly?
Ryuji: Honestly they are so weak it makes me laugh!!
Me: Valt told me that Rantaro was his partner in the Ultimate Tag Series and they did great!!
Adam: Yeah Vlad does have a point!!
Ryuji: First of all kid on the grass you have nothing to say since your say weak!!
Adam: Why do you think I’m weak?
Ryuji: Because I watched your pathetic excuse for a battle!! Vlad was the real and only highlight of it!!
Adam: Grr!!
Ryuji: Back to what I was saying!! I respect Valt he was a strong blader, he would have done way better if Rantaro was not on his team!!
Ryuji’s phone: Adam Kusaba has requested to battle you. Do you wish to decline or accept it?
Me: Adam?
Ryuji: Give me one good reason why I should accept.
Adam: To prove that I’m not weak!!
Ryuji: Fine.
Ryuji’s Phone: Battle accepted. Please meet at this location.
(At the park)
Announcer: Ok everybody!!! We have another ranked battle and it is Adam Kusaba Vs Ryuji Kiyama let’s get right into this!!!
Ryuji: Meet Berserker Roktavor!!!
Adam/Me: *Gasps*
Adam: It’s a Dynachi Bey!?
Ryuji: I told you I was inspired by Vlad so I made a Dynachi bey before I left!!
Drone: Inspect your opponent’s bey!!
(Adam’s Thoughts): Berserker Roktavor a stamina type, it has 2 big wings and 2 smaller ones. The smaller wings are made of metal and it is super heavy it looks like it will be a long time before this thing stops spinning.
(Ryuji snatches Roktavor out of Adam’s hand)
Adam: Hey!!
Ryuji: Sorry can’t have a ruffian touching my bey for too long!!!
Drone: First battle!!! Ready set!!!
Adam/Ryuji: 3 2 1 Let it rip!!
Ryuji: Roktavor take the center!!!
Adam: Nope center’s mine!!
(Roktavor takes the center first)
Announcer: Roktavor quickly secures the center!!!
Adam: *Gasps*
Ryuji: Try your best hit!!
Adam: Oh I will!!
(Ashindra attacks, Ashindra gets sent flying out of the stadium)
Adam: What the!?
Drone: It’s Berserker Roktavor with a ring-out finish. Ryuji Kiyama claims 1 point!!
Announcer: I can’t believe it with one of its own hits Ashindra gets sen flying!!!
Ryuji: Too easy!!
Adam: How did you do that!?
Ryuji: I made Roktavor extra heavy and stable so it could withstand wimpy attacks!!!
Adam: Why you!!
(Adam puts Ashindra’s weight from the bottom to the top)
Ryuji: Oh looks like my bey has a secret!! Might as well try it out!!
(Ryuji puts Roktavor’s weight from the bottom to the top)
Adam: You can’t just do that you need tons of practice!!
Ryuji: I won’t need practice but you being an amateur blader you would need it!!!
Adam: You really get on my nerves!!!
(My thoughts): He’s playing Adam like a guitar!!!
Drone: Second battle!!! Ready set!!!
Adam/Ryuji: 3 2 1 Let it rip!!!
(Adam miss launches)
Adam: *Gasps*
Announcer: Adam’s launch could use some work but Ashindra is still spinning strong!!! But extra wobbly!!! While Ryuji nailed the launch!!!
(Roktavor takes the center)
Ryuji: Put it in it’s place!!!
(Ashindra attacks but gets sent flying)
Adam: I’m not losing yet!!!
(Ashindra hits the wall)
Announcer: Ashindra hangs in by the skin of its teeth!!!
Adam: Ashindra!!!!
(Adam’s Resonance aura flares up)
Adam: End this with Atomic Counter!!!
Ryuji: Time to end this!!! Roktavor!!!
(Ryuji’s Resonance aura flares up)
Ryuji: Berserker Wing Strom!!!!
(Huge explosion happens, Ashindra bursts)
Adam: How!?
Drone: It’s Berserker Roktavor with a burst finish!!! Ryuji Kiyama wins with a score of 3-0!!!
Announcer: Wow Ryjui’s performance in this battle was amazing he is sure ranking up!!!
Ryuji’s Phone: You have ranked up. You are now at rank 160.
Ryuji: As expected I won!!!
Adam: Grr!!!
Me: You were amazing in that battle!!!
Ryuji: Thanks but your applause means nothing to me!!!
(Ryjui’s fans applaud and clap and whistle)
Adam: Grr!!
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - LegendJustice - May. 25, 2021
Strikegamerv6 why did you repost it
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - UnseenBurst - May. 25, 2021
(May. 25, 2021 2:41 AM)JJustice Wrote: Strikegamerv6 why did you repost it
I was having some diffculties
Chapter 5 is out!!! Beyblade Burst Dynachi
Chapter 5
Master Of Scares Detonate Belarix
Adam: One more time!!!
Ryuji: Sorry but your time in the limelight is over.
Me: Hey guys come on!!!
Ryuji: So Vlad wanna have a practice match before our ranked battle.
Me: You bet!!!
Adam: First battle. Ready set!!
Me/Ryuji: 3 2 1 Let it rip!!!
(Roktavor takes the center)
Me: Rush Launch!!!
(Valtrek tries to land powerful blows but gets blown back)
Ryuji: Go Roktavor!!!
(Roktavor speeds up and chases after Valtrek)
Me: *Gasps*
Ryuji: Berserker Wing Attack!!!!
Me: Valiant Spring Attack!!!
(Both beys get sent flying)
(Ryuji catches his bey but Valtrek flies through a window)
Me/Adam/Ryuji: *Gasps*
(I run off for Valtrek)
Adam: Vlad, wait!!!
(Adam stops me)
Me: Adam I got to find Valtrek!!!
Adam: It's in the Haunted Mansion!!! There’s no way you're getting it back!!!
Me: I’m not leaving it there!!
(I run inside)
Ryuji: Well, best be going!!
(Adam drags Ryuji into the Mansion)
Me: This place isn’t so creepy.
Ryuji: Don’t you see all those spiders and webs!!!
(A skeleton prop comes down from the ceiling)
Ryuji/Adam: *Screams*
Me: It’s just a prop!!
(I push it out of the way)
Adam: Might I ask how you’re not scared!!
Me: All I care about is getting Valtryek back!!!
Ryuji: Might I ask why you care about it so much!!!
(Adam nudges Ryuji in the arm)
Me: Valtryek’s my partner I can’t just leave it here and besides Valt trusted me!!!
(We fall down a hole)
Ryuji: That’s it I’m going!!
Adam: Good luck!!!
(A bat-like image flies around us)
???: Go away!!!
Me: Um sir my Beyblade crashes through your window and I apologize for that but I really want it back!!!
Adam: At least he has manors unlike someone in mind!!
Ryuji: Wonder who that could be?
???: Are you perchance Valt’s nephew?
Me: I’m Vlad Aoi I battled Adam on a live match!!!
???: You were the one who created the Dynachi system is this true?
Me: Yes!!
(??? throws me, my bey)
Ryuji: Finally, can we go now?
Me: Um would you like to battle me!!
???: Well I do need to get my ranking. Beating those kids did nothing for my ranking really.
My Phone: Brooklyn Daikokuten has challenged you to a battle do you wish to accept or deny?
Me: Daikokuten? Hey, that means your related to Bell Daikokuten!!!
Brooklyn: Let’s just battle.
(Brooklyn turns the light on)
My Phone: Challenge accepted. Please prepare for battle!!!
Me: Let’s have a fun time!!
(Drone comes in)
Ryuji: How did the drone even get in here!?
(Adam points up to the big hole in the roof)
Adam: Apparently that’s how.
Announcer: Alright alright alright everyone!!! Today we have a special match it is the Scare Queen Brooklyn Daikokuten!!!!
Announcer: And in the other corner we have our new Wonder Boy riding a rollercoaster up the ranks it’s Vlad Aoi!!!
Brooklyn: Prepare to meet your worst nightmare!!! Detonate Belarix!!!
(My Thoughts): Detonate Belarix!! An attack type with 3 blades that can dish out heavy attacks its driver has rubber on it. It will be able to dodge attacks quickly!!
Adam: Go show her what you all about!!!
Ryuji: Don’t lose too quickly!!!
Adam: What kind of moral support are you!!
Ryuji: The honest type!!
(Ryuji and Adam start bickering)
Brooklyn: They with you?
Me: Yup!!!
Drone: First battle!!! Ready set!!!
Me/Brooklyn: 3 2 1 Let it rip!!!
Me: Go!!!
(Valtryek starts scarping and losing control)
Brooklyn: Talk about a train wreck.
Me: Time to charge up!!!
(Valtryek hits the wall with force)
Me: Valiant Spring Winged Launch!!!!
Brooklyn: *Gasps* Knock it away Venture Launch!!!!
(Valtryek and Belarix get shot out of the stadium and hit the ground at the same time)
Drone: Simultaneous ring-out finish!!! No points would you like to call this a draw?
Announcer: Wow even after scraping Valtryek stays in the game!!! Are we going to see this match end in a draw!?
Me: Let’s keep going!!!
Brooklyn: I’m not done yet!!!
Drone: Second battle!!!! Ready set!!!
Me/Brooklyn: 3 2 1 Let it rip!!!
Announcer: Valtryek starts speeding around the stadium but Belarix is on the chase!!!!
(The reboot tip stick comes out)
Brooklyn: *Gasps*
Announcer: All of a sudden Valtryek’s going faster and in way more control!!!!
Me: Rush Launch!!!!
Brooklyn: Venture Launch!!!
(Belarix and Valtrek both hit each other with a flurry of hard attacks)
Announcer: They are neck and neck and not giving up an inch!!!!
Me: Valtryek!!!!
(My Resonance aura flares up)
Brooklyn Finally a worthy opponent!!!! Belarix!!!!
(Brooklyn’s Resonance Aura flares up)
Me: Valiant Spring Attack!!!!
Brooklyn: Detonate Bomber!!!!
(Huge explosion occurs, Valtryek and Belarix burst)
Drone: Simoultanus Burst finish no points!!!! Would you like to end this match in a draw?
Me/Brooklyn: Nope!!!
Announcer: It ends in another draw how long are we dragging this out!!!
(12 draw’s later)
Drone 13th battle!!! Ready set!!!
(Me and Brooklyn fall to the ground in exhaustion)
Drone: Would you like to call this match a draw!!!
Me/Brooklyn: Yes, please!!!
Drone: This ranked battle ends in a draw nobody ranks up!!!
(Announcer wakes up)
Announcer: Oh I feel asleep um that’s it everyone and have a beytastic day!!!!
Brooklyn: Gotta say you we’re half decent in that battle.
(Brooklyn fades away into the darkness)
(Valt comes in)
Valt: Hey!! I was told I would find you guys here!!
(Rubber snake pops up from the ground)
Valt: *Screams*
PinkRose character was featured.
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - LegendJustice - May. 25, 2021
(May. 25, 2021 3:12 AM)Strikegamerv6 Wrote: (May. 25, 2021 2:41 AM)JJustice Wrote: Strikegamerv6 why did you repost it
I was having some diffculties oh ok I made a team do you wanna join
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - UnseenBurst - May. 25, 2021
(May. 25, 2021 3:14 AM)JJustice Wrote: (May. 25, 2021 3:12 AM)Strikegamerv6 Wrote: I was having some diffculties oh ok I made a team do you wanna join
Maybe I'll think about it and get back to you later
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - LegendJustice - May. 25, 2021
(May. 25, 2021 3:18 PM)Strikegamerv6 Wrote: (May. 25, 2021 3:14 AM)JJustice Wrote: oh ok I made a team do you wanna join
Maybe I'll think about it and get back to you later ok I like the upcoming chapters
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - UnseenBurst - May. 25, 2021
After Chapter 9 (Which is still under a lot of thinking process heck I haven't even started chapter 6) Beyblade Burst Dynachi will go on a little break in till we can get more people in the story.
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - LegendJustice - May. 25, 2021
(May. 25, 2021 3:23 PM)Strikegamerv6 Wrote: After Chapter 9 (Which is still under a lot of thinking process heck I haven't even started chapter 6) Beyblade Burst Dynachi will go on a little break in till we can get more people in the story.
okay
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - PinkRose - May. 25, 2021
Okay so....the last couple chapter were alright (it still hurts my eyes to read all those exclamation marks but eh..). One thing I have to note tho: Her name's Brooke, not Brooklyn.
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - UnseenBurst - May. 25, 2021
(May. 25, 2021 4:57 PM)PinkRose Wrote: Okay so....the last couple chapter were alright (it still hurts my eyes to read all those exclamation marks but eh..). One thing I have to note tho: Her name's Brooke, not Brooklyn.
Ok I edited the chapter to change her name to Brooke and I'm also trying to lower down the exclamation marks
Chapter 6 is out!!!
Beyblade Burst Dynachi
Chapter 6
Sol Victories!!!
(I walk by Valt)
Me: Hey Valt. Whatcha watching?
Valt: Some of my old battles.
Me: Last night I found your World Championship match against Shu!!!
Valt: That battle was intense!!
Me: If I’m being honest I thought you were going to lose!!
(Me and Valt have a good laugh)
Valt: When your blading if you wanna become stronger you need to trust in your bey and your bey needs to trust in you. Also in that battle, the only thing on my mind was helping Shu then me and Valtryek were in synch!!!!
Me: Wow you were a seriously amazing blader!!!
Valt: I can’t take all the credit. The teams that I was on were so supportive!! I wouldn’t be here without them!!
Me: Can I make a team?
Valt: Sure! All you have to do is find people that would be interested in it!!
Me: I know exactly who is going to be on my team!!
Valt: Also if you know someone who wants to be on your team but doesn’t admit it here’s a tip!!
(Valt whispers something in my ear)
Me: Sounds effective.
(I run off)
Vira: Morning.
Valt: It’s 1 PM?
Vira: I knew Vlad would be awake so I slept in.
Valt: You and your brother are something.
(Valt resumes the match)
(I knock on Adam’s door)
Adam: Hey Vlad!!
Me: Hey Adam!!
Adam: I just had an idea. you will love it!!
Me: No way I had 1 too!!
Me/Adam: Let’s make a beyclub!!
Me: Great minds think alike!!
Adam: Let’s go get Ryuji!!
Me: Ryuji is going to be tough to get on the team so I have a plan.
(I run to my house then run to Ryuji’s house)
Ryuji: Why should I join your ragtag team?
Ryuji’s Fans: Yeah why should he!!
Me: I knew you would say that. So I brought someone over!!
Vira: Hey.
Ryuji: And how are you going to convince me to join.
Vira: I’m not.
Ryuji: Wait what?
Vira: Your choice. But what Adam told me is you’d be too stuck up to join the team I guess he was right.
Ryuji: Take that back I’m not stuck up!!!
Vira: From what I’m seeing your totally missing an opportunity to get stronger!!
Ryuji: Fine, I will join!!
Vira: Thank you.
Me: Awesome job Vira!!!
Vira: Now, my payment.
(I give Vira a 20 dollar bill)
Vira: Thanks, see ya!!
Adam: Bro you totally just got scammed!!
Me: You think!!
Ryuji: Anyways where are we going next?
Me: Brooke’s Mansion!!
Ryuji: Not that place again!!
Adam: Scardy cat!!
Ryuji: Excuse me?
Me: Come on guys!!
(We go to Brooke’s Mansion)
Adam: How are we going to get to the stadium area?
(I stomp on the ground)
Ryuji: Why did you--
(We fall through a hole)
Me: Ahhh!!!
(We all fall on each other)
Brooke: What are you guys doing here?
Me: We came to personally invite you to the club we’re starting!!
Brooke: No thanks.
Me: Valt told me someone might be like this!!
Brooke: So?
(I repeatedly start saying join the club)
Brooke: Go away stop it!!
(2 hours later)
Me: Join the Club Join the Club!!!!
Brooke: Fine.
Me: Yes!!
(Ryuji and Adam wake up)
Ryuji/Adam: Did she say yes?
Me: Me yep!!
Adam: You win the most annoying person in the world award!!
Brooke: Tell me about it.
Me: I do what I can.
Ryuji: What is this club even going to be called?
Me: I was thinking!!! Sol Victories!!! @Jjustice your character is coming up soon just trust me.
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - LegendJustice - May. 25, 2021
(May. 25, 2021 5:06 PM)Strikegamerv6 Wrote: (May. 25, 2021 4:57 PM)PinkRose Wrote: Okay so....the last couple chapter were alright (it still hurts my eyes to read all those exclamation marks but eh..). One thing I have to note tho: Her name's Brooke, not Brooklyn.
Ok I edited the chapter to change her name to Brooke and I'm also trying to lower down the exclamation marks
Chapter 6 is out!!!
Beyblade Burst Dynachi
Chapter 6
Sol Victories!!!
(I walk by Valt)
Me: Hey Valt. Whatcha watching?
Valt: Some of my old battles.
Me: Last night I found your World Championship match against Shu!!!
Valt: That battle was intense!!
Me: If I’m being honest I thought you were going to lose!!
(Me and Valt have a good laugh)
Valt: When your blading if you wanna become stronger you need to trust in your bey and your bey needs to trust in you. Also in that battle, the only thing on my mind was helping Shu then me and Valtryek were in synch!!!!
Me: Wow you were a seriously amazing blader!!!
Valt: I can’t take all the credit. The teams that I was on were so supportive!! I wouldn’t be here without them!!
Me: Can I make a team?
Valt: Sure! All you have to do is find people that would be interested in it!!
Me: I know exactly who is going to be on my team!!
Valt: Also if you know someone who wants to be on your team but doesn’t admit it here’s a tip!!
(Valt whispers something in my ear)
Me: Sounds effective.
(I run off)
Vira: Morning.
Valt: It’s 1 PM?
Vira: I knew Vlad would be awake so I slept in.
Valt: You and your brother are something.
(Valt resumes the match)
(I knock on Adam’s door)
Adam: Hey Vlad!!
Me: Hey Adam!!
Adam: I just had an idea. you will love it!!
Me: No way I had 1 too!!
Me/Adam: Let’s make a beyclub!!
Me: Great minds think alike!!
Adam: Let’s go get Ryuji!!
Me: Ryuji is going to be tough to get on the team so I have a plan.
(I run to my house then run to Ryuji’s house)
Ryuji: Why should I join your ragtag team?
Ryuji’s Fans: Yeah why should he!!
Me: I knew you would say that. So I brought someone over!!
Vira: Hey.
Ryuji: And how are you going to convince me to join.
Vira: I’m not.
Ryuji: Wait what?
Vira: Your choice. But what Adam told me is you’d be too stuck up to join the team I guess he was right.
Ryuji: Take that back I’m not stuck up!!!
Vira: From what I’m seeing your totally missing an opportunity to get stronger!!
Ryuji: Fine, I will join!!
Vira: Thank you.
Me: Awesome job Vira!!!
Vira: Now, my payment.
(I give Vira a 20 dollar bill)
Vira: Thanks, see ya!!
Adam: Bro you totally just got scammed!!
Me: You think!!
Ryuji: Anyways where are we going next?
Me: Brooke’s Mansion!!
Ryuji: Not that place again!!
Adam: Scardy cat!!
Ryuji: Excuse me?
Me: Come on guys!!
(We go to Brooke’s Mansion)
Adam: How are we going to get to the stadium area?
(I stomp on the ground)
Ryuji: Why did you--
(We fall through a hole)
Me: Ahhh!!!
(We all fall on each other)
Brooke: What are you guys doing here?
Me: We came to personally invite you to the club we’re starting!!
Brooke: No thanks.
Me: Valt told me someone might be like this!!
Brooke: So?
(I repeatedly start saying join the club)
Brooke: Go away stop it!!
(2 hours later)
Me: Join the Club Join the Club!!!!
Brooke: Fine.
Me: Yes!!
(Ryuji and Adam wake up)
Ryuji/Adam: Did she say yes?
Me: Me yep!!
Adam: You win the most annoying person in the world award!!
Brooke: Tell me about it.
Me: I do what I can.
Ryuji: What is this club even going to be called?
Me: I was thinking!!! Sol Victories!!! @Jjustice your character is coming up soon just trust me.
good chspter strike
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - UnseenBurst - May. 25, 2021
Next chapter will be Dynamite promise
Chapter 7 coming your way!!!
Beyblade Burst Dynachi
Chapter 7
Sprit Of Blaze Barberic Spryzen!!!
Brooke: Venture Launch!!!!
Adam: Samurai Defense!!!
(Belarix dishes out a barrage of attacks but Ashindra blocks them all)
Adam: Looks like you not all that exciting hey?
Brooke: Belarix!!!!
(Brooke’s Resonance Aura flares up)
Brooke: Detonate Bomber!!!
(Ashindra bursts)
Adam: *Gasps*
Brooke: Big talker.
Adam: Grr!!
Ryuji: It takes talent to beat someone like Brooke something you don’t have!!
Adam: You try your luck!!!
Ryuji: I would but it would be a waste of time since I’m gonna win!!
Brooke: Excuse me?
(Everyone starts bickering)
(I facepalm)
Valt: Hey guys!!
Me: Hey Valt!!
Valt: We’re going to America!!!
Everyone: Awesome!!!
Ryuji: What type of plane are we taking?
Valt: An airplane!!
Ryuji: We can just take my private plane!!
Adam: Seriously?
Ryuji: Sure.
(In the Airplane)
Vira: This is so much comfier than a normal plane!!
Ryuji: This is my smallest plane!!
Me: Where are we going?
Valt: We’re going to visit Shu and Sebastion!!!
Me: Aw yeah!!!
Brooke: Who’s that?
Me: Sebastian is Shu’s son aka my best friend!!!
Adam: I’m going to pretend that you didn’t totally crush me.
Valt: We visit Shu once every 2 months!!!
Ryuji: That must get tiring!!
Vira: It’s worth it to see Sadie!!!
(2 hours later we land)
Me: Ah America!!!
Shu: Valt!!!
Valt: Shu!!!
(Valt and Shu give each other a solid fist bump)
Me: Sebastian!!!
Sebastian: Vlad!!!
Adam: Are we just going to stand here or?
Me: Sebastian these are my friends!! Adam, Ryuji, and Brooke!!!
Sebastian: Hey guys!!!
Shu: Hey Vlad!!! Long time no see!!
Me: It’s been 2 months!!
(Shu smiles)
Sebastian: Let’s go over to my place!!!
Vira: Where’s Sadie?
Sebastian: Sadie is at home working on a surprise for you.
(We all head over to Shu’s place)
Adam: Wow this is a huge Mansion!!!
Brooke: I live in a Mansion too.
Ryuji: My mom wanted to save money so we couldn’t have a Mansion!!
Adam: Yeah but this Mansion is huge!!
Me: Sebastian here has 4 rooms in his room!!
Sebastian: Do you wanna go to the battle room?
(In the battle room)
Everyone: Wow!!!
Sebastian: Yup we have a practice mode on the stadium so we can practice whenever we want!!!
Brooke: Mind if I try it out?
Sebastian: Sure thing!! Just say your name then it will find your blader data so it can unjust to your level.
Brooke: Turn this thing up to level 100.
Sebastian: Ok. But you’re going to regret it!!
(Brooke pulls out her bey)
Sebastian: *Gasps*
Everyone: 3 2 1 Let it rip!!!
Brooke: Belarix go!!!
(The bey in the middle starts spinning fast)
Brooke: Venture Launch!!!
(Belarix makes a strong hit but starts wobbling)
Brooke: Belarix!!!!
(Brooke’s Resonance Aura flares up)
(The Venture driver switches direction)
Brooke: Detonate Bomber!!!!!!!!
(Belarix makes a strong attack, Belarix gets shot out of the stadium)
Brooke: Grr!!
Sebastian: I’ve never seen a bey like yours!!
Brooke: Your friend developed the system.
Sebastian: You made a new Beyblade system!?
Me: It’s really nothing.
Sebastian: Can you help me evolve World Spyrzen into a new bey!!
Me: It’s called the Dynachi system!!
Sebastian: So you’re going to help?
Me: Of course!!
Adam: Don’t mind us we’ll be practicing down here!!
(2 hours later)
Sebastian: It’s finally finished!! Barbaric Spryzen!!!
Me: Why don’t we put it to the test!!
My Phone: Sebastian Kurenai has sent you a battle request. Would you like to accept or deny it?
Me: Accept it!!
(Drone comes flying through the door)
Announcer: We have a special match for all of you beyfans!!! It’s Shu’s predecessor Sebastian Kurenai!!! And on Valt Aoi’s side of the family is Vlad Aoi let’s get this battle started!!!!
(Brooke’s Thoughts): How far can your power go, Vlad Aoi.
Drone: Inspect your opponent’s bey!!
(My Thoughts): Barbaric Spryzen a dual spinning balance type. It can spin both ways Clockwise and Counterclockwise. It uses a rubber blade for attack and some rubber to absorb attacks. It also has burst small burst stoppers to make bursting this thing ever harder. This is going to be seriously fun!!!
(I put Valtryek’s weight from the bottom to the top)
(Sebastian puts Spryzen in left spin mode)
Drone: First battle!!! Ready set!!!
Everyone: 3 2 1 Let it rip!!!
(Valtryek zooms in for an attack)
Announcer: Valtryek charges but misses!!! Spryzen has safely secured the center and now is waiting for Valtryek’s next attack!!!
(The reboot tip stick comes out)
Me: Rush Launch!!!
Announcer: Valtryek keeps attacks and pushing back on Spryzen’s defenses!!!
Sebastian: Barbaric Spin!!!
Announcer: Wow!! Spryzen is taking Valtryek’s spin power as a way of defending!!!
Me: Valtryek!!!
(My Resonance Aura flares up)
Announcer: Vatryek keeps hitting Spryzen and it looks like it is going to send it flying out of the stadium!!!
Me: Flash Launch!!!
(Spryzen leans on the rubber part of its driver)
Sebastian: Counter Break!!!
Announcer: Spryzen gets outta there picking up serious speed!!!
Sebastian: Spryzen!!!
(Sebastian’s Resonance Aura flares up)
Me: Valiant Spring Attack!!!!
(Valtryek’s avatar slashes out its sword)
Shu: Barbaric Whip!!!
(Spryzen’s avatar slashes forward with its ax)
(Huge explosion occurs)
(Valtryek bursts then Spryzen bursts)
Drone: It’s Barberic Spryzen with a burst finish. Sebastian wins with a score of 2-0!!!
My Phone: You have been lowered down to rank #155
Me: Aw man!!
Sebastian: I will always be stronger!! Come on that’s a given!!
Announcer: Valtryek and Spryzen gave it their all but in the end!!!!
(Brooke’s Thoughts): Can’t wait to knock Sebastian a peg down!!!
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - UnseenBurst - May. 26, 2021
Frisk291 would you like a spot on this fanfic?
(May. 23, 2021 12:37 PM)tenma Wrote: Name: Fiora De La Hoya
Gender: Female
Age: 13
Eye Color: Black (Gold during resonance)
Hair Color: Blonde with single red stripe
~~
Bey: Ethereal Freya Vanguard Dash 3B
Type: Balance
Key Colors: Gold, Platinum, White
Avatar Appearance: Freya is based off the Norse goddess of love and fertility. Freya has golden, long flowing hair with a pair of wing-like accessory adorned on her hair, one above her left ear and one above her right ear. She wears white long dress, and has a pair of platinum-colored wings.
Special Moves: Ethereal Premonition, Ethereal Bolt, Heaven's Glory.
~~
Appearance: Fiora is a fair-skinned girl of average height, having her short blonde hair tied to the side. She wears an unzipped yellow jacket with cobalt accents (Similar to Fafnir's palette) with a black undershirt, with the words "Hyper Muteki!" imprinted on top of the the chest area. She wears a white wing-shaped hairpin on her hair and her hair tie is adorned with the similar accessory. She wears knee-long denim baggy shorts and calf-height cotton white socks. She wears black-and-cobalt sneakers.
Personality: Unlike her older brother, Fiora is an energetic and optimistic girl. She is very supportive and always tries her best to motivate her friends whenever. There are sometimes, however, when she can get serious and much quieter. She is also a little quick-tempered at times.
Relationship(s)
Free De La Hoya - As a little sister, Fiora is pretty close to Free and they have a pretty healthy relationship, though they don't meet that often as Free is often traveling the world. Unlike Free, Fiora decided that she won't use Fafnir, but instead made her own Bey, Freya, and promised that it will surpass even Fafnir. When they meet, Fiora is often found playing with Free's hair, adorning it with her hairpins.
Valt Aoi - She looks up to Valt very much (a lot like Raika towards Sisco), and is a huge fan of the said latter. She goes ecstatic when she first met the said Valt, as she idolized the said latter a lot.
~~
Quotes
"I promise...That one day Freya will surpass Fafnir! I won't disappoint you, Free!"
"Why is your hair is very messy, Free? Well, that isn't a problem to me, though, sounds like a place to play instead!"
"How ya' like that!? This is the power of me and Freya! Together, we are an unbreakable bond of power!"
(May. 24, 2021 3:28 AM)tenma Wrote: (May. 23, 2021 5:52 PM)Strikegamerv6 Wrote: This looks really good but you need to own a bey from S1-S7 but you can use Fafnir if you want Oh, my apologies. But may I know if there is any specific reason why Beys that are self-made are not allowed?
I was wondering since your gonna use Fafnir if the name could be Illusion Fafnir or something like that if you like the name just like the post
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - reshiwum - May. 26, 2021
(May. 26, 2021 4:29 PM)Strikegamerv6 Wrote: Frisk291 would you like a spot on this fanfic?
(May. 23, 2021 12:37 PM)tenma Wrote: Name: Fiora De La Hoya
Gender: Female
Age: 13
Eye Color: Black (Gold during resonance)
Hair Color: Blonde with single red stripe
~~
Bey: Ethereal Freya Vanguard Dash 3B
Type: Balance
Key Colors: Gold, Platinum, White
Avatar Appearance: Freya is based off the Norse goddess of love and fertility. Freya has golden, long flowing hair with a pair of wing-like accessory adorned on her hair, one above her left ear and one above her right ear. She wears white long dress, and has a pair of platinum-colored wings.
Special Moves: Ethereal Premonition, Ethereal Bolt, Heaven's Glory.
~~
Appearance: Fiora is a fair-skinned girl of average height, having her short blonde hair tied to the side. She wears an unzipped yellow jacket with cobalt accents (Similar to Fafnir's palette) with a black undershirt, with the words "Hyper Muteki!" imprinted on top of the the chest area. She wears a white wing-shaped hairpin on her hair and her hair tie is adorned with the similar accessory. She wears knee-long denim baggy shorts and calf-height cotton white socks. She wears black-and-cobalt sneakers.
Personality: Unlike her older brother, Fiora is an energetic and optimistic girl. She is very supportive and always tries her best to motivate her friends whenever. There are sometimes, however, when she can get serious and much quieter. She is also a little quick-tempered at times.
Relationship(s)
Free De La Hoya - As a little sister, Fiora is pretty close to Free and they have a pretty healthy relationship, though they don't meet that often as Free is often traveling the world. Unlike Free, Fiora decided that she won't use Fafnir, but instead made her own Bey, Freya, and promised that it will surpass even Fafnir. When they meet, Fiora is often found playing with Free's hair, adorning it with her hairpins.
Valt Aoi - She looks up to Valt very much (a lot like Raika towards Sisco), and is a huge fan of the said latter. She goes ecstatic when she first met the said Valt, as she idolized the said latter a lot.
~~
Quotes
"I promise...That one day Freya will surpass Fafnir! I won't disappoint you, Free!"
"Why is your hair is very messy, Free? Well, that isn't a problem to me, though, sounds like a place to play instead!"
"How ya' like that!? This is the power of me and Freya! Together, we are an unbreakable bond of power!"
(May. 24, 2021 3:28 AM)tenma Wrote: Oh, my apologies. But may I know if there is any specific reason why Beys that are self-made are not allowed?
I was wondering since your gonna use Fafnir if the name could be Illusion Fafnir or something like that if you like the name just like the post
I guess I'll just stick with Freya as Fiora's Bey. In this case, I'll just let go off my chance from being in this fic. Maybe next time :]
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - UnseenBurst - May. 26, 2021
(May. 26, 2021 4:47 PM)tenma Wrote: (May. 26, 2021 4:29 PM)Strikegamerv6 Wrote: Frisk291 would you like a spot on this fanfic?
I was wondering since your gonna use Fafnir if the name could be Illusion Fafnir or something like that if you like the name just like the post
I guess I'll just stick with Freya as Fiora's Bey. In this case, I'll just let go off my chance from being in this fic. Maybe next time :]
K thx for your feedback
Chapter 8 is out @Jjustice your character appeared
Beyblade Burst Dynachi
Chapter 8
Don’t Jynx The Star, Jynx Jinnus!!!
Sebastian: Wow!! Spryzen is super strong now!!!
Me: You got lucky!!
Sebastian: Wanna go again?
Shu: Guys someone’s here for you!!
???: Hello everyone!!!
Sebastian: Jay Burns!?
Me/Adam/Ryuji/Brooke: Jay Burns? Who’s that!!
Jay: I’m the hottest actor/blader in America!!! And I need your help to make my new movie!!! Called the Vampire Blader!!!
Brooke: Vampire Blader? I like it!!
Jay: Exactly!! That’s why Brooke will be the Vampire Blader!!!
Everyone: Wait what!!
Jay: I did some research and your quite a scary person so you’re going to be the Vampire Blader!!!
Brooke: Cool.
Sebastian: So what do you need the rest of us for!!
Jay: Well I need Vlad to help me build a Dynachi Bey!!
Me: You got it!!
Jay: I need Ryuji and Adam to be my gang!!
Ryuji/Adam: My time to shine!!
Sebastian: What am I going to do!!
Jay: You’re going to be the shadows that fly around!!!
Sebastian: Awesome!!
Jay: Now let’s get going!!
(At the studio)
Jay: Alright me and Vlade will go to the workshop and you guys talk to the director and he’ll get you situated!!
(At the Director’s office)
Director: So Jay chose you guys.
Brooke: Yeah I’m here to get dressed.
Director: Your script and your costume are over there change and memorize your script!!!
Brooke: Okay.
Director: Get in your costumes you too and master your scripts!!
Adam: I’m gonna be a star!!!
Ryuji: Only for a day.
Adam: Excuse me?
Ryuji: You heard me!!
(Adam and Ryuji start bickering)
Director: STOP FIGHTING AND GET IN SCRIPT!!!!!!!!!!
Adam/Ryuji: Yes sir!!
(Back at the workshop)
Jay: It’s done!! Jynx Jinnus!!!
Me: Awesome!!!
Jay: Let’s get this movie started!!
(At the studio)
Director: First scene!! Ready action!!
Jay: Let’s go find the Vampire Blader guys!!
(Adam trips)
Adam: Ouch!!
Director: Get up!!
(5 minutes later)
Director: Finally we finished scene 1!!
Ryuji: We would have been done earlier if it wasn’t for someone!!
Adam: Grr!!
Director: Scene 2 starting now!!!
(A shadow flies over Jay Ryuji and Adam)
Adam: What’s that!!
Ryuji: Oh no!! It’s the Vampire Blader!!!
Vampire Beyblade: Go away!!!
Jay: We aren’t leaving till your defeated!!!
Director: Cut! That was amazing. Sebastian, you did super well on doing the flyover!!
Assistant: Excuse me, sir. But the person who was running out of the room in scene 3 quit last minute!!
Director: Dang it!! Where are we going to find someone on such short notice?
Adam: Yo Vlad!! You want in on this!!
Me: Sure!!
Director: Adam Kusaba you’re a lifesaver!!
Adam: I do what I can!!
Ryuji: Grr!!
Director: Scene 3!! Ready go!
(I come barging out of the door)
Jay: What happened?
Me: I battled the Vampire Blader and he broke my bey!!
(I run off)
Jay: We have to stop him!!
Ryuji: Don’t worry we will stop him once and for all!!
Adam: This has to stop!! Come on, Jay!!
Director: And cut!! Amazing scene everyone, the next scene will be our last!!
Adam: That was awesome!!
Ryuji: I was the star!!
Adam: In your dreams!!
Jay: Fellas calm down. Eating this will cool you down!!
(Jay gives Ryuji and Adam ice cream sandwiches)
Adam: Yum!!
Ryuji: So good!!
Director: The last scene let’s get started!! Ready action!!
Jay: Show yourself!!
(Brooke turns around)
Brooke: You think you can take on my power?
Jay: I don’t think so!! I know so!!
Ref: First battle!! Ready set!!
Everyone: 3 2 1 Let it rip!!
Brooke: Go Belarix!!!
Announcer: Belarix makes a strong hit but Jinnus is uninfected!!
Brooke: Keep attacking!!
(Jinnus takes the center)
Announcer: Belarix keeps attacking and it’s not letting up!!
Brooke: Venture Launch!!!
Announcer: And Belarix attacks harder than it has ever attacked!!
(Jinnus starts clicking)
Jay: It’s the time!!
(Part of Jinnus’s layer lifts up)
Announcer: Wow!! Jinnus has just revealed a free-spinning part that was behind the layer!!!
Brooke: Belarix!!!
(Brooke’s Resonance Aura flares up)
Brooke: Detonate Bomber!!!!
Jay: Time to get serious, Jinnus!!!
(Jay’s Resonance Aura flares up)
Jay: Jynx Wall!!
(Jinnus redirects Belarix’s attack into the wall, Belarix bursts)
Brooke: *Gasps*
Ref: It’s Jynx Jinnus with a burst finish!! Jay Burns wins with a score of 2-1!!
Announcer: Jinnus totally blocks Belarix’s attack and nails it with a burst finish!!!
(Brooke’s Thoughts): One day you're going to pay for defeating me!!
Director: And wrapped up!!
Adam: We did it!!
(Back at the mansion)
Valt: Time to go guys!!
Vira: I wanna stay with Sadie!!
Sadie: I want her to stay too!!
Sebastian: I wanna go with Valt Dad!!
Shu: What do you think Valt?
Valt: I can take care of Sebastian!!
Shu: I can do the same with Vira!!
Me: Yes!!
Sebastian: So can I join the team?
Me: Of course!!
Valt: Well let’s get going, everyone!!
(Plane takes off)
Me: BYE VIRA!!!!!!!
Everyone: Ouch my ears!!!!
Vira: See ya later bro.
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - LegendJustice - May. 26, 2021
(May. 26, 2021 5:29 PM)Strikegamerv6 Wrote: (May. 26, 2021 4:47 PM)tenma Wrote: I guess I'll just stick with Freya as Fiora's Bey. In this case, I'll just let go off my chance from being in this fic. Maybe next time :]
K thx for your feedback
Chapter 8 is out @Jjustice your character appeared
Beyblade Burst Dynachi
Chapter 8
Don’t Jynx The Star, Jynx Jinnus!!!
Sebastian: Wow!! Spryzen is super strong now!!!
Me: You got lucky!!
Sebastian: Wanna go again?
Shu: Guys someone’s here for you!!
???: Hello everyone!!!
Sebastian: Jay Burns!?
Me/Adam/Ryuji/Brooke: Jay Burns? Who’s that!!
Jay: I’m the hottest actor/blader in America!!! And I need your help to make my new movie!!! Called the Vampire Blader!!!
Brooke: Vampire Blader? I like it!!
Jay: Exactly!! That’s why Brooke will be the Vampire Blader!!!
Everyone: Wait what!!
Jay: I did some research and your quite a scary person so you’re going to be the Vampire Blader!!!
Brooke: Cool.
Sebastian: So what do you need the rest of us for!!
Jay: Well I need Vlad to help me build a Dynachi Bey!!
Me: You got it!!
Jay: I need Ryuji and Adam to be my gang!!
Ryuji/Adam: My time to shine!!
Sebastian: What am I going to do!!
Jay: You’re going to be the shadows that fly around!!!
Sebastian: Awesome!!
Jay: Now let’s get going!!
(At the studio)
Jay: Alright me and Vlade will go to the workshop and you guys talk to the director and he’ll get you situated!!
(At the Director’s office)
Director: So Jay chose you guys.
Brooke: Yeah I’m here to get dressed.
Director: Your script and your costume are over there change and memorize your script!!!
Brooke: Okay.
Director: Get in your costumes you too and master your scripts!!
Adam: I’m gonna be a star!!!
Ryuji: Only for a day.
Adam: Excuse me?
Ryuji: You heard me!!
(Adam and Ryuji start bickering)
Director: STOP FIGHTING AND GET IN SCRIPT!!!!!!!!!!
Adam/Ryuji: Yes sir!!
(Back at the workshop)
Jay: It’s done!! Jynx Jinnus!!!
Me: Awesome!!!
Jay: Let’s get this movie started!!
(At the studio)
Director: First scene!! Ready action!!
Jay: Let’s go find the Vampire Blader guys!!
(Adam trips)
Adam: Ouch!!
Director: Get up!!
(5 minutes later)
Director: Finally we finished scene 1!!
Ryuji: We would have been done earlier if it wasn’t for someone!!
Adam: Grr!!
Director: Scene 2 starting now!!!
(A shadow flies over Jay Ryuji and Adam)
Adam: What’s that!!
Ryuji: Oh no!! It’s the Vampire Blader!!!
Vampire Beyblade: Go away!!!
Jay: We aren’t leaving till your defeated!!!
Director: Cut! That was amazing. Sebastian, you did super well on doing the flyover!!
Assistant: Excuse me, sir. But the person who was running out of the room in scene 3 quit last minute!!
Director: Dang it!! Where are we going to find someone on such short notice?
Adam: Yo Vlad!! You want in on this!!
Me: Sure!!
Director: Adam Kusaba you’re a lifesaver!!
Adam: I do what I can!!
Ryuji: Grr!!
Director: Scene 3!! Ready go!
(I come barging out of the door)
Jay: What happened?
Me: I battled the Vampire Blader and he broke my bey!!
(I run off)
Jay: We have to stop him!!
Ryuji: Don’t worry we will stop him once and for all!!
Adam: This has to stop!! Come on, Jay!!
Director: And cut!! Amazing scene everyone, the next scene will be our last!!
Adam: That was awesome!!
Ryuji: I was the star!!
Adam: In your dreams!!
Jay: Fellas calm down. Eating this will cool you down!!
(Jay gives Ryuji and Adam ice cream sandwiches)
Adam: Yum!!
Ryuji: So good!!
Director: The last scene let’s get started!! Ready action!!
Jay: Show yourself!!
(Brooke turns around)
Brooke: You think you can take on my power?
Jay: I don’t think so!! I know so!!
Ref: First battle!! Ready set!!
Everyone: 3 2 1 Let it rip!!
Brooke: Go Belarix!!!
Announcer: Belarix makes a strong hit but Jinnus is uninfected!!
Brooke: Keep attacking!!
(Jinnus takes the center)
Announcer: Belarix keeps attacking and it’s not letting up!!
Brooke: Venture Launch!!!
Announcer: And Belarix attacks harder than it has ever attacked!!
(Jinnus starts clicking)
Jay: It’s the time!!
(Part of Jinnus’s layer lifts up)
Announcer: Wow!! Jinnus has just revealed a free-spinning part that was behind the layer!!!
Brooke: Belarix!!!
(Brooke’s Resonance Aura flares up)
Brooke: Detonate Bomber!!!!
Jay: Time to get serious, Jinnus!!!
(Jay’s Resonance Aura flares up)
Jay: Jynx Wall!!
(Jinnus redirects Belarix’s attack into the wall, Belarix bursts)
Brooke: *Gasps*
Ref: It’s Jynx Jinnus with a burst finish!! Jay Burns wins with a score of 2-1!!
Announcer: Jinnus totally blocks Belarix’s attack and nails it with a burst finish!!!
(Brooke’s Thoughts): One day you're going to pay for defeating me!!
Director: And wrapped up!!
Adam: We did it!!
(Back at the mansion)
Valt: Time to go guys!!
Vira: I wanna stay with Sadie!!
Sadie: I want her to stay too!!
Sebastian: I wanna go with Valt Dad!!
Shu: What do you think Valt?
Valt: I can take care of Sebastian!!
Shu: I can do the same with Vira!!
Me: Yes!!
Sebastian: So can I join the team?
Me: Of course!!
Valt: Well let’s get going, everyone!!
(Plane takes off)
Me: BYE VIRA!!!!!!!
Everyone: Ouch my ears!!!!
Vira: See ya later bro.
nice to see shu is a family guy now
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - UnseenBurst - May. 27, 2021
Chapter 9 Summary/Name
The BattleShip Cruise Rides Again!! Vlad and his gang go on a cruise to improve they're rankings
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - JCE_13 - May. 27, 2021
@Strikegamerv6, sorry man! I've been really busy trying to finish my classes for the year and I haven't had time to read your whole fanfic. I promise I'll read Bionic Battle and this one very soon.
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